Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- The Heart\'s Dilemma (Hey!)
Almost classically written in style and wording. Very nice it pushes...
February 22nd, 2025 15:55 - The Empty Hourglass (Kurt Philip Behm)
Once again masterfully crafted the blend of imagery and metaphor in such...
February 22nd, 2025 13:43 - BLACK IS THE COLOR (Arcane-)
Black has always been associated with death, sorrow, depression, anger,...
February 22nd, 2025 13:38 - Medicine Medicine Medicine (Anthony Hanible)
A great poem bringing attention to how pharmaceutically oriented our...
February 22nd, 2025 13:33 - Tick Tock (RSM0812)
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage...
February 22nd, 2025 13:30 - Leaving Me Behind (Emperor)
A statement that is true for all of us as time runs on ahead we are left...
February 22nd, 2025 13:25 - Depression\'s lullaby (Melancholia)
To each sad element there is a positive. Balance is a rule of the...
February 22nd, 2025 13:23 - Darkened dreams & Viewing spot (Maplespal)
Shadows are a favorite image of mine so easily used as a metaphor for many...
February 22nd, 2025 13:20 - Past Tells No Lies (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Such great metaphor in this poem it fits so well the rhyme and images....
February 22nd, 2025 13:16 - Deep Freeze Daze (Tristan Robert Lange)
I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all...
February 22nd, 2025 11:53 - Why so sad? (Pineapple_pizza018)
That reminds me of the joker in the dark knight, \"Why so sad?\" Lies lead...
February 22nd, 2025 11:47 - Peace (Tony36)
A most beautiful thought and goal to shoot for. Who knows that one day we...
February 22nd, 2025 08:19 - Everlasting Balm (Whats write for me)
No longer religious I still appreciate the poetry in this your rhyme was...
February 22nd, 2025 07:23 - Becoming (Gray0328)
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic...
February 22nd, 2025 06:28 - Gypsy Tart (Mutley Ravishes)
A poem of fantasy that may well be a metaphor and in its humor and...
February 22nd, 2025 06:24 - THE OLD NOTE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I feel sadness and loss in this poem that has a haunting quality. It reads...
February 22nd, 2025 05:19 - broken heart (Jim56)
Time heals all they say. A wonderful poem of letting things heal.
February 22nd, 2025 05:17 - Here comes my old memories (Funmiwrites)
A haunting poem that feels familiar but they show no sign of recognizing...
February 22nd, 2025 05:16 - Introduction - Who Am I? (Melancholic~Onion)
\"Blessed are the meek for they shall inherit the earth\" or so it is...
February 22nd, 2025 05:12 - Sanctuary Of Our Love (Reynaldo Casison)
A beautiful and romantic poem of priorities and what one should value....
February 22nd, 2025 05:07 - The Women\'s Movement (Teddy.15)
A statement from the heart. That we are still talking about equality and...
February 22nd, 2025 05:03 - The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1) (Poetic Licence)
Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry...
February 22nd, 2025 04:55 - Why So Horrid? (Orchidee)
Another interesting episode in the chapter of Orchi. Hope that you don\'t...
February 22nd, 2025 03:16 - Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Muse of music a lovely write Andy beautifully written. May your day be...
February 22nd, 2025 03:13 - Tho I\'m lost I shall grow. (Poems_From_Emotions)
Taking bad experiences and gaining inspiration from them learning from the...
February 22nd, 2025 03:10 - Melbourne mosaic (Arqios)
A beautiful write of wonderful images woven into a description of a place...
February 22nd, 2025 03:03 - there is still (Sheta)
A wonderful write where is acknowledged that love is not rational or...
February 22nd, 2025 02:58 - Salty Tears (Chanel T.)
Memories don\'t die they just fade with time. Parting can be so painful...
February 22nd, 2025 02:52 - Confusion (2781)
A confession and declaration both rolled into one. Very nicely done
February 22nd, 2025 02:49 - Renaming (Thoughtless)
I like that. A little humor that strikes close to the bone. A fun read
February 22nd, 2025 02:47 - Let Them (E Naughton)
As people we need an explanation but nature needs none it just happens....
February 21st, 2025 20:24 - You (Hey!)
Emotional control a type of abuse that is difficult to measure but...
February 21st, 2025 17:27 - Pine Trees Haiku (Reynaldo Casison)
Most interesting combinations in this piece.
February 21st, 2025 15:10 - Till The Day He Is Dead (Tommytoons)
Great religious metaphor in this poem. A sense of reliance and need for...
February 21st, 2025 15:07 - Petals Of Creation\'s Ecstasy (Nelzach94)
A lovely metaphor where the plant world that we normally disregard is...
February 21st, 2025 14:12 - Telling Truth (Gray0328)
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09 - The prodigal son after Boris Slutski (Ksey_Gan)
Ingratitude the disease that eats one from the inside out. Story of the...
February 21st, 2025 14:07 - No One Can See (Rosiii ;))
A ghostly type of feel sad and haunting
February 21st, 2025 13:36 - Thrown! (Framed Mirror)
This one requires time to contemplate.
February 21st, 2025 13:33 - Grey Day Whispers (Cassie58)
Such great wordsmithing here. The use of meter and rhyme combined in...
February 21st, 2025 13:31 - desperation (NinjaGirl)
In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done...
February 21st, 2025 13:24 - To David (Kurt Philip Behm)
A most beautiful tribute. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 11:42 - Between Silence and Stars (Ciara Stanbury)
A beautiful sonnet that speaks at the division between heart and head and...
February 21st, 2025 11:41 - The Parting Hour (Abdullah123)
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one...
February 21st, 2025 11:35 - My Sister\'s Shadow (Whats write for me)
A most wonderful tribute to a person with whom you share blood, history,...
February 21st, 2025 10:01 - body (Newt)
A thought provoking write about a feeling that many have. To be a stranger...
February 21st, 2025 09:58 - Where Do I Go? (DLewis88)
All the makings of an existential crisis in this poem. Well expressed it...
February 21st, 2025 09:00 - How To Catch A Suicider (Anthony Hanible)
Empathy requires experience and I hear this in this poem. A deep write of...
February 21st, 2025 08:58 - I am coming back to reality (Poetaldo)
This is a deep poem that in not asking asks the reader to put themselves...
February 21st, 2025 08:56 - The Cult (Tristan Robert Lange)
There are many gods past and present and even more demigods to take up the...
February 21st, 2025 08:51 - Believe in yourself (Tony36)
A great motivational write. Desire and belief can overcome all. Very nice...
February 21st, 2025 08:48 - This Is Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Brilliant! Good advice in poetry can never go wrong. Seeing from both...
February 21st, 2025 08:47 - Lights into nights & Kissing death (Maplespal)
In the first there is strong reverberations of the past and it seems that...
February 21st, 2025 08:43 - Smoked (Mutley Ravishes)
Ah the metaphor in this one goes deeper than the kidneys. Yes indeed who...
February 21st, 2025 08:30 - keep going (Sheta)
Never give up comes through in this poem of encouragement. Nicely said
February 21st, 2025 05:56 - Runaway engine (Cedrick)
A great metaphor in this poem that acknowledges that life runs until it is...
February 21st, 2025 05:55 - Mockingbird (Arcane-)
A poem of metaphor and with good imagery that paints the picture well....
February 21st, 2025 05:53 - pets are for life (Jim56)
A poem of compassion for those of another species and the understanding...
February 21st, 2025 05:51 - My lips are tied (Funmiwrites)
What a great image is painted in this line. Very nicely done
February 21st, 2025 05:46 - Safe And Sound (Paul Gerard Reed)
Enjoy the pause before the next storm. A quiet and peaceful feeling to...
February 21st, 2025 05:45 - Please Notice Me (Junes)
Aspiration ring out in this poem, hope lingers but despite it all a...
February 21st, 2025 05:44 - Fire (Onurb Azile)
Loved the format and rhyme scheme in a poem of sensuality, eroticisms and...
February 21st, 2025 05:42 - Kindergarten (Faie)
What a wonderful portrayal of young children. Masterfully painted this...
February 21st, 2025 05:40 - UNKNOWN HERO (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The wounds of war after triumph still bleed. A wonderful write of metaphor...
February 21st, 2025 05:36 - Do you want to? (Thoughtless)
Surprise is always a tasty treat. This poem the same. A lovely taste is...
February 21st, 2025 05:34 - Equations of Love (Salvia.S)
Clever the use of numbers in place of words to pull together the...
February 21st, 2025 05:31 - Coming Up With A Plan (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Short and desperate this poem evokes feeling of panic. What is more...
February 21st, 2025 05:28 - beneath the nightingale’s call (Arqios)
The story of her in Ovid a sad one and ironically it is only the male...
February 21st, 2025 05:25 - I Can`t Hide It (Poetic Licence)
I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes...
February 21st, 2025 05:01 - Black and White (MDStone)
What a beautifully worded poem and such a great metaphor of loss of...
February 21st, 2025 04:59 - There’s a House across the way (Kevin Hulme)
Well written with rhyme and good flow and meter it reads easily flowing...
February 21st, 2025 04:56 - No Pages to See (Teddy.15)
What a dream. When the muse not only is dead but if the book is blank then...
February 21st, 2025 04:51 - The Breath Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
When I listen to music I breath it in as well Andy. Nicely said
February 21st, 2025 04:42 - Searching for some magical feeling (Emile Dubois)
A fun play on words that flows from beginning to end.
February 20th, 2025 18:25 - She Smiles… (Doggerel Dave)
Dave this one is marvelous especially with the final twist. Written well...
February 20th, 2025 18:21 - The Reflection Stops (Hey!)
The first stanzas of rhyme are very well done with wonderful meter...
February 20th, 2025 17:17 - Goodnight My Dearest! (Ladywithaquill)
Distance make the heart grow fonder. A great poem of separation
February 20th, 2025 14:29 - There is Dust on my Mind and on the Wall (Thomas W Case)
I know that same entity a hell of a friend that would rather drink and...
February 20th, 2025 14:26 - We Were Always About to Arrive (A B)
A clear tribute to a city and its markers. Lovely well worded with great...
February 20th, 2025 14:10 - Burying love alive (Melancholia)
A questioning of past values and actions so well worded and spoken.
February 20th, 2025 14:07 - Unending Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A poem of parenthood and what it entails. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 14:04 - I\'m tired (NinjaGirl)
The future always looks better. The only problem is the future never...
February 20th, 2025 14:02 - Fated Road (Gray0328)
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society...
February 20th, 2025 13:05 - ITESIWAJU (Kingjamescory)
Keep it going. Good read
February 20th, 2025 13:03 - A tree falls quantumly (Hzugman)
Am I even here? A fun read. Keep it up.
February 20th, 2025 13:02 - No Tick. No Tock. (ADarkerMind)
Well Melvin this one did take me down the rabbit hole uninvited and so I...
February 20th, 2025 11:57 - I Am the Lover of Meadows, Woods, and Streams (Mohammad younus koul)
I hear a closeness to nature in this poem a call to the natural and...
February 20th, 2025 11:35 - Narcissist (Moco)
A narcissist is a blind person that does not see the pain of others only...
February 20th, 2025 11:31 - Mother knows best (Pineapple_pizza018)
It takes a long time to realize that mother has more wisdom than we...
February 20th, 2025 11:25 - Baker (Freddi)
A great metaphor and was well stated in poetic form
February 20th, 2025 11:21 - Breakfast Reflection (Cassie58)
Very nice a poem of missing and absence. Well done
February 20th, 2025 11:19 - Breathless (Kurt Philip Behm)
Indeed it does and here is the pyramid and in it the mystery of truth....
February 20th, 2025 10:44 - Positive Fear (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great message to never give up and think positive. Very nice
February 20th, 2025 10:42 - Little Grove (Paul Gerard Reed)
There are more similarities between us than differences and yet we focus...
February 20th, 2025 10:41 - Poison & Ink (Abdullah123)
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38 - I Wonder, Will I Ever Know? (Cheeky Missy)
Ah nothing like fresh ground coffee. The bean is most important and how it...
February 20th, 2025 09:54 - Playing Cards (Tony36)
Indeed it is not the game but how and with whom it is played. It is the...
February 20th, 2025 09:51 - two hearts (Newt)
Synchrony such a lovely concept that plays the music of the universe....
February 20th, 2025 09:50 - See you later (Bishop M.)
Always better to have loved and lost than to have never loved. If I can...
February 20th, 2025 09:44 - Total Dark (Tristan Robert Lange)
A beautiful write that at first sight offers a conundrum as to how...
February 20th, 2025 09:41
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