Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Yes I\'m So Depressed (Anthony Hanible) A poem of isolation whether self imposed or by rejection there is a...
  February 12th, 2025 07:40
• A reflection from behind (EvenwheniLie) This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely
  February 12th, 2025 07:38
• Caressing Roses (Reynaldo Casison) Soft and smooth like silk it flows from the tongue leaving a sweet taste...
  February 12th, 2025 07:32
• Just Shit (Teardrop) Good advice to the writter and well spoken in flowing poetic words. Nicely...
  February 12th, 2025 07:29
• The Living Quran (Mohammad younus koul) From a nonbeliever I see the beauty and the wisdom in these verses. One...
  February 12th, 2025 07:16
• Echoes Of The Ashes (Mohammad younus koul) Another wonderfully crafted poem with deep meaning that goes beyond...
  February 12th, 2025 07:13
• The Garden Of Different Suns (Mohammad younus koul) Masterful!! I simply love your poems. Not religious they almost make me...
  February 12th, 2025 07:09
• Gone (Paul Gerard Reed) A most lovely poem of the passing of time and its cycle. Great metaphor...
  February 12th, 2025 07:03
• Watching the drops (Maplespal) A beautiful natural picture painted in this poem but deeper lies a...
  February 12th, 2025 07:02
• Let’s Trade Passports For Memories (Bella Joy) Moved to Florida from Montana years ago and never looked back. A beautiful...
  February 12th, 2025 06:59
• lifes jigsaw (Jim56) Gratifying in many ways to assemble the pieces and see the picture grow....
  February 12th, 2025 06:57
• As Famous As Can Be (Teddy.15)
  February 12th, 2025 06:48
• As Famous As Can Be (Teddy.15) Nor would you want to be dead, briliance bled, unwritten poems that would...
  February 12th, 2025 06:48
• Random Ramblings (Orchidee) I think that this could be an alternative hymn to be sung on special...
  February 12th, 2025 04:44
• forever we shall be (Arqios) A poem of the unity of nature and ourselves. What could be more true in...
  February 12th, 2025 04:40
• SNIPPET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal...
  February 12th, 2025 04:37
• Another Good Day. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold that one day runs into the next in a never ending cycle until...
  February 12th, 2025 04:33
• Precipice (E.J. Waling) Flashes of words tell the story. The whole process is speeded up. Very
  February 12th, 2025 04:25
• I got (Poetaldo) We all have needs and in this poem I hear a lot of them. Nicely done
  February 12th, 2025 04:23
• The Lion Of Babylon (Kurt Philip Behm) There is enough truth in it tomake it plausable enough cynacism to make it...
  February 12th, 2025 04:21
• Hurt the ones I love (Trix) A great thought that should be explored with the one you love. Very well...
  February 11th, 2025 19:23
• When Words Mean Nothing (Cassie58) Words fail us all when the emotion is strong enough. So well said Cassie a...
  February 11th, 2025 17:38
• Doesn\'t Really Matter, Does It? (Cheeky Missy) Yes I do love mushrooms, especially sauted in butter. A fun read Chic
  February 11th, 2025 17:34
• young lives (Newt) We are creatures easily molded by those we live with. Like sheep we follow...
  February 11th, 2025 09:37
• The Ghost of Valarie Karen (Whats write for me) Masterfully written with verse and great meter it is haunting and sad and...
  February 11th, 2025 09:35
• Turbulence (Tristan Robert Lange) What a great metaphor. Our mind flies from place to place often through...
  February 11th, 2025 09:33
• What is love? (CuriousWanderer) So true love is not a possession numbers change in each equasion when...
  February 11th, 2025 08:53
• NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but...
  February 11th, 2025 08:49
• The Distance Duel (Matthew R. Callies) And so are many challenges in this life. A great metaphor well written...
  February 11th, 2025 08:47
• Before the cry (Maplespal) Sadness and lonliness pervade this poem. Well written
  February 11th, 2025 08:40
• FIRST LOVE POEM AND LAST ONES. (Swarovski20) There is a sense of isolation and lonliness in this poem that mingles with...
  February 11th, 2025 08:38
• NOT YET READY (@merci) The coldness of lonliness is emphasized in feel that there should be more...
  February 11th, 2025 08:26
• We Talked Sweetly In The Slumber Of September (Bella Joy) I love the use of seasons as the markers of time and development of a...
  February 11th, 2025 08:23
• All Ends Well (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) And why not? This story seems to have ended or rather continued happily....
  February 11th, 2025 08:19
• Little by little (Tony36) Tony you and I are on the same page today a wonderful thought and well
  February 11th, 2025 08:17
• Dead Kings (RSM0812) A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the...
  February 11th, 2025 08:14
• hedgehog verse (Jim56) Have to say I\'m not sure I have ever seen one. A fun poem of nature
  February 11th, 2025 08:12
• Join In Joyfulness (Orchidee) Fair play is all we can ask of any god or person. A great hymn about fair...
  February 11th, 2025 04:47
• companionable travelling (Arqios) This one is a journey in and of itself from beginning to end it carries me...
  February 11th, 2025 04:44
• In the Desert 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Indeed if it is all part of a divine plan then Judas was either...
  February 11th, 2025 04:34
• In the Desert (Mutley Ravishes) I love poems that are filled with double entendre\'s and this one is full...
  February 11th, 2025 04:30
• The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case) So tempting to interpret in metaphor but best left open. The poem like a...
  February 11th, 2025 04:27
• A Very Special Hummingbird (Teddy.15) A wonderful tribute to another poet so well worded made me wonder her...
  February 11th, 2025 04:23
• Night Time Worries. (Goldfinch60) Worry is the weight on the other side of the ballance that gives meaning...
  February 11th, 2025 04:12
• Ticking time bomb (Jennybee89) Sounds like revenge. Although it may be a dish best served cold it is also...
  February 11th, 2025 04:07
• Managing stress (Jennybee89) Communication as an aid to stress is good advice. A nice plan.
  February 11th, 2025 04:05
• Beach time. (Ginny jayne) Very nice with rhyme and an ending metaphor
  February 10th, 2025 17:29
• Naive, A Sijo (Pacifique Niyitanga) There are poems that every once in a while jump out and grab you this is...
  February 10th, 2025 17:28
• State of mind (Newt) There is depth in this poem. Depth in the search for empathy and...
  February 10th, 2025 17:23
• Poverty is expensive (Amy Michelle Mosier) A great message and well said
  February 10th, 2025 17:21
• surrender (NinjaGirl) This was a realy good write. There are great lines but the best part is...
  February 10th, 2025 17:20
• To our Love (Shetonya Latryce) A memory that is also a living pledge. Short and to the point it is nicely...
  February 10th, 2025 17:16
• Double Checking Our Favourite Positions (Neville) I think we have totally missed the point here. If we have gone through the...
  February 10th, 2025 15:28
• I Know, I Know, Just Don\'t Tell Me (Cheeky Missy) Now you have gone and made me hungery. Nicely done Chic
  February 10th, 2025 15:23
• For I am loyal (Trix) Time is a heavy opponent. I can hear the pain of loss in this poem a sense...
  February 10th, 2025 15:18
• Talkin\' \'bout my girl (Hzugman) Humor in poetry is like finding a hundred dollar bill in the street, too...
  February 10th, 2025 11:50
• The Train to North Durham (RSM0812) There are certain faces, bodies, people that strike us with bolt of...
  February 10th, 2025 11:46
• Chair Repair (Doggerel Dave) A most interesting experiment gives a certain appeal to the appearance of...
  February 10th, 2025 07:35
• Tuned time (Maplespal) Indeed music is closely tied to the emotions and soul. A most melodic
  February 10th, 2025 06:18
• A (starry eyed) burst of creativity... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Idiomatic expressions, mixed with cultural references, pop culture,...
  February 10th, 2025 06:16
• Melted (Alison)
  February 10th, 2025 06:05
• Melted (Alison) The negative and positive of a relationship where one looses the old and...
  February 10th, 2025 06:05
• Worship Wholeness (Orchidee) Another wonderful poem from Psalms. Well done Orchi
  February 10th, 2025 06:01
• Lies Of A Fallen Beast (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) There is more than what meets the eye in this world of illusions. Some...
  February 10th, 2025 05:59
• natures wonder (Jim56) And so be it Jim. Nature goes on in whtever way it can while we stumble...
  February 10th, 2025 05:57
• Inside My Dreams (Sebastian) Heavy words for a desire that none can fulfill. We wish the love of others...
  February 10th, 2025 05:53
• Spring Horizons (Reynaldo Casison) Lines tied with one theme a warming from the cold. Nicely said.
  February 10th, 2025 04:19
• Sin (2781) Well worded this poem spins its tale in style. Nicely done
  February 10th, 2025 04:15
• WASTEGROUND (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Whether place or in metaphor a person this write paints a picture of...
  February 10th, 2025 04:13
• cowardly survivor (Arqios) Here lies one of two possible choices. In this life we have the choice of...
  February 10th, 2025 04:10
• Gene Pool (E.J. Waling) I liked the construction of this poem the single of few word lines pulled...
  February 10th, 2025 03:53
• cyclones spirals whirlpools (Demar Desu) This may apply to many things and is thought provoking.
  February 10th, 2025 03:50
• Worship Wholeness (Orchidee) Orchi this has a whole different meaning in the United States it is only...
  February 10th, 2025 03:41
• Worship Wholeness (Orchidee) Orchi this has a whole different meaning in the United States it is only...
  February 10th, 2025 03:41
• The Game Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A most interesting analogy Andy. I have played cards of many types and...
  February 10th, 2025 03:34
• Cutting Corners (Mutley Ravishes) Necter of immortality may be thought sweet indeed by some as for me it...
  February 9th, 2025 21:04
• The Plan Coming To Action (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) The story seems to have found its tracks and is running smoothly on a...
  February 9th, 2025 19:07
• A spiritual poem (NinjaGirl) A beautiful thought that gives strength and belief necessary for hope
  February 9th, 2025 17:27
• The War (Distant View) I have known so many that have and stil suffer from PTSD. They have served...
  February 9th, 2025 17:23
• The War (Distant View) I have known so many that have and stil suffer from PTSD. They have served...
  February 9th, 2025 17:23
• The War (Distant View) I have known so many that have and stil suffer from PTSD. They have served...
  February 9th, 2025 17:22
• Salt (Gray0328) Ye are the salt of the earth. Necessary for life and the functioning of...
  February 9th, 2025 14:19
• From The Underside of Our Great Love (Teddy.15) Dramatic love is the best. Rich and ripe this poem like a fruit on a tree...
  February 9th, 2025 14:15
• Leavened Redemption (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again a most beautiful economy of wording to tell a story and send a...
  February 9th, 2025 12:36
• Charred (Maplespal) Touching and sad this poem reaches through time to those lost in the past....
  February 9th, 2025 12:35
• Symbiosis (Lorenz) So well put together this poem speaks of relationships and the need for...
  February 9th, 2025 12:31
• As Time Goes By (ADarkerMind) Here I get the sense of good and evil in that apocalyptical battle where...
  February 9th, 2025 12:29
• Follow the rainbow (Tony36) Loved the choice of the rainbow as a symbol of diversity and the idea that...
  February 9th, 2025 12:25
• pet company (Jim56) A great presentation of bonding with a pet. Nicely said Jim
  February 9th, 2025 09:01
• Inprismed (Neville) We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time....
  February 9th, 2025 08:59
• What KIND of Cookie, Eh? (Cheeky Missy) Another fun read well expressed in poetic form
  February 9th, 2025 08:51
• Comes and goes (2781) Most interesting how it does in fact come and go. Went to the store to get...
  February 9th, 2025 04:52
• I Vacationed in Heaven (RSM0812) This seems a continuation of The Divine Comedy and the upward climb into...
  February 9th, 2025 04:49
• RAINDROP (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Some beautiful imagery here nicely worded and lands upon the reader\'s ear...
  February 9th, 2025 04:44
• Morning Prayer (Orchidee) We tend to pray most when we need something. Why is it that kids only call...
  February 9th, 2025 04:42
• piecemeal (Arqios) Wonderfully worded the means by which we gain knowledge, learn and know...
  February 9th, 2025 04:38
• Free Words (Kurt Philip Behm) This is a poem that I can identify with for I have done the same. As...
  February 9th, 2025 04:36
• The Battle Of Twickenham. (Goldfinch60) Now that\'s a battle that counts. A most fun read and well set up too....
  February 9th, 2025 04:28
• Snip (Gray0328) Such disturbing sounds join others like barking dogs, crowing roosters and...
  February 8th, 2025 20:11
• Smiling Doll (Simurgh) From a country where Gandhi symbolized nonviolence such sad atrocities...
  February 8th, 2025 20:08