Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- beneath the nightingale’s call (Arqios)
The story of her in Ovid a sad one and ironically it is only the male...
February 21st, 2025 05:25 - I Can`t Hide It (Poetic Licence)
I love the way you have left the reveal until the very end it provokes...
February 21st, 2025 05:01 - Black and White (MDStone)
What a beautifully worded poem and such a great metaphor of loss of...
February 21st, 2025 04:59 - There’s a House across the way (Kevin Hulme)
Well written with rhyme and good flow and meter it reads easily flowing...
February 21st, 2025 04:56 - No Pages to See (Teddy.15)
What a dream. When the muse not only is dead but if the book is blank then...
February 21st, 2025 04:51 - The Breath Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
When I listen to music I breath it in as well Andy. Nicely said
February 21st, 2025 04:42 - Maxim (James Michael)
Less is more they say. This short statement encompasses that well. Nicely...
February 20th, 2025 19:21 - Searching for some magical feeling (Emile Dubois)
A fun play on words that flows from beginning to end.
February 20th, 2025 18:25 - She Smiles… (Doggerel Dave)
Dave this one is marvelous especially with the final twist. Written well...
February 20th, 2025 18:21 - The Reflection Stops (Hey!)
The first stanzas of rhyme are very well done with wonderful meter...
February 20th, 2025 17:17 - Goodnight My Dearest! (Ladywithaquill)
Distance make the heart grow fonder. A great poem of separation
February 20th, 2025 14:29 - There is Dust on my Mind and on the Wall (Thomas W Case)
I know that same entity a hell of a friend that would rather drink and...
February 20th, 2025 14:26 - We Were Always About to Arrive (A B)
A clear tribute to a city and its markers. Lovely well worded with great...
February 20th, 2025 14:10 - Burying love alive (Melancholia)
A questioning of past values and actions so well worded and spoken.
February 20th, 2025 14:07 - Unending Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A poem of parenthood and what it entails. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 14:04 - I\'m tired (NinjaGirl)
The future always looks better. The only problem is the future never...
February 20th, 2025 14:02 - Fated Road (Gray0328)
The idea of fate or destiny is still up for debate and in todays society...
February 20th, 2025 13:05 - ITESIWAJU (Kingjamescory)
Keep it going. Good read
February 20th, 2025 13:03 - A tree falls quantumly (Hzugman)
Am I even here? A fun read. Keep it up.
February 20th, 2025 13:02 - No Tick. No Tock. (ADarkerMind)
Well Melvin this one did take me down the rabbit hole uninvited and so I...
February 20th, 2025 11:57 - I Am the Lover of Meadows, Woods, and Streams (Mohammad younus koul)
I hear a closeness to nature in this poem a call to the natural and...
February 20th, 2025 11:35 - Narcissist (Moco)
A narcissist is a blind person that does not see the pain of others only...
February 20th, 2025 11:31 - Mother knows best (Pineapple_pizza018)
It takes a long time to realize that mother has more wisdom than we...
February 20th, 2025 11:25 - Baker (Freddi)
A great metaphor and was well stated in poetic form
February 20th, 2025 11:21 - Breakfast Reflection (Cassie58)
Very nice a poem of missing and absence. Well done
February 20th, 2025 11:19 - Breathless (Kurt Philip Behm)
Indeed it does and here is the pyramid and in it the mystery of truth....
February 20th, 2025 10:44 - Positive Fear (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great message to never give up and think positive. Very nice
February 20th, 2025 10:42 - Little Grove (Paul Gerard Reed)
There are more similarities between us than differences and yet we focus...
February 20th, 2025 10:41 - Poison & Ink (Abdullah123)
The pen is mightier that the sword. A metaphoric write and most lovely
February 20th, 2025 10:38 - I Wonder, Will I Ever Know? (Cheeky Missy)
Ah nothing like fresh ground coffee. The bean is most important and how it...
February 20th, 2025 09:54 - Playing Cards (Tony36)
Indeed it is not the game but how and with whom it is played. It is the...
February 20th, 2025 09:51 - two hearts (Newt)
Synchrony such a lovely concept that plays the music of the universe....
February 20th, 2025 09:50 - See you later (Bishop M.)
Always better to have loved and lost than to have never loved. If I can...
February 20th, 2025 09:44 - Total Dark (Tristan Robert Lange)
A beautiful write that at first sight offers a conundrum as to how...
February 20th, 2025 09:41 - Tears Stories (Hanible)
Powerful words a decision as to whether we push out the sad or the happy...
February 20th, 2025 08:36 - Ma prière (Poetaldo)
We all have the things that we depend upon. Such nice words well said
February 20th, 2025 08:33 - The Embrace of the Bugs (Rosiii ;))
We all have such thoughts that like flies won\'t leave us alone and worse...
February 20th, 2025 06:57 - What Are Memories? (Salvia.S)
There is truth beneath this pyramid of words, a poem that deserves...
February 20th, 2025 06:52 - 1st & last Note (Maplespal)
Fear a terrible thing it stops what could have been leaving us feeling we...
February 20th, 2025 06:31 - Beyong the Page (Whats write for me)
In this lies the heart of each writer and a caution to all of us readers...
February 20th, 2025 06:24 - i love spring (Jim56)
A lovely portrayal of the budding of spring and all its beauty. Very nice...
February 20th, 2025 06:16 - Once I Felt Like a Sky Hungry Kite (Neville)
Child\'s toy or bird was the first question. You are playing with my mind...
February 20th, 2025 05:15 - \"Bebo:- My Heart\'s Desire\" (Shlok kumar author)
Whether physical or emotional separation it is painful and in this poem...
February 20th, 2025 04:59 - Where are my emotions (Funmiwrites)
Emotions have no time and are not planned they just happen nicely written
February 20th, 2025 04:55 - TRAIN STATION (Nephilim56)
A timeless poem casting a distant image set in a distant time so as not to...
February 20th, 2025 04:54 - When You Light Your Candles (Reynaldo Casison)
A most romantic poem filled with sensuous images. Very nicely written
February 20th, 2025 04:51 - The Love of Lichen (Demar Desu)
Another great Haiku with meaning that is layered. Nice and multifaceted.
February 20th, 2025 04:48 - The Same Picture Frame (Poetic Licence)
Change the only constant. A most beautiful poem of how it happens not just...
February 20th, 2025 04:46 - The Moon Appears and She is Blue (Teddy.15)
The poem sounds so romantic and wistful and the last line gives a feel of...
February 20th, 2025 04:42 - The Glorious Joy of Death. (David Wakeling)
A tragedy to one a blessing to another, what one sees as devastating today...
February 20th, 2025 04:31 - Three dots dancing (Arqios)
A technological marvel becomes a poetic display of mastery. This poem a...
February 20th, 2025 04:23 - It’s Dark (AaliyahC.)
I can hear the plea in this poem and it gives a sense of desperation....
February 20th, 2025 04:19 - dont cry (Sheta)
Beautiful and brilliant! So short with so much meaning of a most positive...
February 20th, 2025 04:17 - Beating Heart (John Prophet)
A most interesting meaning to this poem. If one takes it to be the last...
February 20th, 2025 04:15 - My Sweet, Darling You (Ajon4wheels)
Sadness pervades this poem of longing and loss. Nicely done
February 20th, 2025 04:12 - oh, my love (Oh kay)
Longingly, romantic, with a sense of drama being classical in nature it...
February 20th, 2025 04:09 - Fine Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful image cast Gold. It falls like sunbeams through a picket...
February 20th, 2025 04:00 - all women want (Rainbow 1)
Is that a good place to find one? A thought provoking read.
February 19th, 2025 19:40 - Excerpt from a poem Books after Valentin Gaft (Ksey_Gan)
No one reads anymore. I love reading but even I read less than in the...
February 19th, 2025 18:40 - Rejected (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
It is all a state of mind. It is what you think that makes the difference....
February 19th, 2025 16:31 - Nothing to See Here, Folks. (Cheeky Missy)
Snow still makes one anxious for spring. A fun read
February 19th, 2025 16:30 - I thought (Byyvette)
Expectations don\'t always work out. A poem of loss within a loss. Nicely...
February 19th, 2025 15:27 - The womb of all (DREEK0)
Intriguing metaphors here that lead to an untangling of meaning. Nicely...
February 19th, 2025 15:25 - Unseen Blessing (Gray0328)
Very nice flow to this poem with a message and good rhyme Gray
February 19th, 2025 15:23 - Definition of a Poet (M.E.M.)
So true that our thoughts and expectations shape our writing and one can...
February 19th, 2025 13:46 - Empty Thoughts (Cassie58)
Indeed I too become restless during the nonhunting season when one must...
February 19th, 2025 13:43 - Tinkering with Control (RSM0812)
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and...
February 19th, 2025 11:30 - Moi, je me perds (NinjaGirl)
Magnifique!
February 19th, 2025 11:28 - I can\'t feel it (Poetaldo)
Take your time and we will wait for you and your poetry too
February 19th, 2025 11:27 - Waiting For Supper (Kurt Philip Behm)
Philosophy put into reality, poetry put into metaphor, esoteric into...
February 19th, 2025 11:26 - The Self in all living Beings (Skally)
Great concept to which I adhere and matter nothing more than energy all...
February 19th, 2025 11:20 - Satan\'s Short Season (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I think G stands for goat head of the beast, greatest of all time, God...
February 19th, 2025 11:17 - The Tyrant\'s Creed (Mohammad younus koul)
Nicely stated
February 19th, 2025 11:15 - Mary Bess Brenner: A Poetic Tribute (Whats write for me)
A most lovely tribute and heart felt
February 19th, 2025 11:08 - Limerick 3 (Abdullah123)
And so it is in reality and in metaphor as well. Nicely said
February 19th, 2025 09:39 - Imperfection (Paul Gerard Reed)
A great message and well stated as well. For the message there is a fave
February 19th, 2025 08:51 - My Heart (Tony36)
A lovely read. Very nice
February 19th, 2025 08:49 - My Mighty 13 (Hanible)
Whether neologisms , skating or rap it all comes to the same fun and...
February 19th, 2025 08:49 - Brevity\'s Paradox (Salvia.S)
Very nice. The comment will be longer than the poem and that is how it...
February 19th, 2025 08:47 - i would wish for this (Jim56)
A beautiful wish for all. A poem that leaves a calm feeling
February 19th, 2025 08:45 - If love meant surrender. (Job Welime)
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept,...
February 19th, 2025 07:05 - The Year Galileo Dropped the Sky (H.J. Rivers)
Tying physics with poetry is sublime and satisfying in that all of nature...
February 19th, 2025 07:02 - Sleepless (Maplespal)
I loved the idea of noisy shadows sliding and creeping around just too...
February 19th, 2025 05:27 - In The End (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Very meaningful. Tis poem reaches deep into what one should strive for and...
February 19th, 2025 05:24 - Kaizen (Demar Desu)
There is greater depth to this Haiku than at first glance. Loved it
February 19th, 2025 05:18 - Where can I fill my pen (Funmiwrites)
Poets have feelings, poets cry and miss loved ones. Poets write about it....
February 19th, 2025 05:16 - Who (2781)
Troubled times are predicted by this poem. The view of the common man now...
February 19th, 2025 05:14 - Heart of Wonder (Emile Dubois)
Beautiful images cast in wonderous words. A magnificent picture painted in...
February 19th, 2025 05:07 - JAGGED (Nephilim56)
February 19th, 2025 05:04 - JAGGED (Nephilim56)
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely...
February 19th, 2025 05:04 - Not Just Lightning (Teddy.15)
Celestial fireworks. I love the introduction of words like diamond a...
February 19th, 2025 05:02 - To Be My Fathers Son (Poetic Licence)
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader...
February 19th, 2025 04:54 - No2 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
Don\'t get me started on spelling and word play a favorite topic. Loved...
February 19th, 2025 04:50 - Pathogena the Temptress. (David Wakeling)
Like the spider spinning its web you spin your tail, as each web is...
February 19th, 2025 04:47 - untitled (bemused rumination) (Arqios)
Love this poem\'s innovation. I have thought of trying something similar...
February 19th, 2025 04:38 - Almost (Junes)
The combination of rhyme, rhythm, word choice and timing in the build made...
February 19th, 2025 04:34 - love (Sheta)
A short poem that begins with a cutting edge but ends on a more positive...
February 19th, 2025 04:29 - how to love (Lunarchloedip)
Beautiful! Well written in good verse it shines as a tribute to the memory...
February 19th, 2025 04:26 - What I Call Shopping. (Goldfinch60)
Customer service becoming a thing of the past. The old saying that the...
February 19th, 2025 04:21 - Just leave me alone (Hey!)
We all need personal space from time to time. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 18:28
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