Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Tomorrow is my birthday (Demar Desu) This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on...
  May 6th, 2025 06:07
• a rose can say so much (Jim56) Ah now there\'s a love seldom mentioned even in poetry. So near sighted we...
  May 6th, 2025 06:05
• THEY HAD JUST BEGUN (Ferjohn Timung) A most sad write of what could have been and never was to be. Tragic and...
  May 6th, 2025 04:55
• the thread between us (Arqios) Deep thought here Cryptic although many meanings are possible it seems to...
  May 6th, 2025 04:53
• 3 for your sight (Maplespal) Three the still center on the object, the author in the first a fading...
  May 6th, 2025 04:47
• The Greenhouse Effect (JH The Muse) What I felt I did not like. The feeling of control, the artificial...
  May 6th, 2025 04:42
• The River of Dreams (Mottakeenur Rehman) It is so difficult to find original metaphors. Although storms and rivers...
  May 6th, 2025 04:36
• Tick, Tock, Time Is Up (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A clever wording of modern paranoia in a world where paranoia is warranted...
  May 6th, 2025 04:33
• LOVE (Nephilim56) It is the combination of the meter, flow and rhyme together with the...
  May 6th, 2025 04:27
• Haltia, spirit (Mourgana of the Fey) I can hear and see the nature in this poem. It talks to me and seductively...
  May 6th, 2025 04:25
• You and me (Victor Bolshov) I loved the song the verse is hypnotic as is the beat of the music. It is...
  May 6th, 2025 04:16
• One Day It Will Happen. (Goldfinch60) So true and be thankful for each and every day that you have had every...
  May 6th, 2025 04:08
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 22a-Poem-IndiaMaldivesBitingHand-20April2025 (Soman Ragavan) A most thorough and comprehensive analysis that leaves little else to be...
  May 6th, 2025 04:04
• Drinks & Drugs (Pineapple_pizza018) A most sad poem of addiction that becomes the choice over love and how...
  May 5th, 2025 20:40
• A mirror’s memory (Thoughter) How much more important it is when young to feel pretty. Still important...
  May 5th, 2025 20:37
• I Am the One (Rrodriguez) Romantic and sweet. This poem speaks of the gratitude felt in love. Very...
  May 5th, 2025 20:34
• Untitled (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Raw, sad and difficult to believe. That a person feels unlovable is...
  May 5th, 2025 20:32
• my imaginary twilight zone introductions #1 (Jon Nakapalau) Love this poem well written and surreal it sets its mood.
  May 5th, 2025 18:46
• The door (Boot) Cryptic but not too much so, just enough to be poetic. Lovely and well...
  May 5th, 2025 18:44
• in the dark (Gloria Denise) A great message poetically said. Well done
  May 5th, 2025 18:41
• Some Things I Do Not Need (Maydanae) Never felt better than when I got rid of all I didn\'t need. Everything...
  May 5th, 2025 18:38
• Dump Nymphs (Tony Grannell) I must say that I look forward to your poems so as to glean a bit of...
  May 5th, 2025 18:03
• Those Amphibious Beings (EvenwheniLie) Interesting poem of ancient technology, myths are great in poetry. Most...
  May 5th, 2025 17:52
• her death (NinjaGirl) Hard, powerful. Very nicely written. Well done. Very nice imagery in this...
  May 5th, 2025 16:36
• Hope of the Day (Tayama) Positive, inspiring, bright and hopeful. Very nicely written and well...
  May 5th, 2025 16:34
• You (Amethyste) As short as the time that it took to miss the one you love. Well written.
  May 5th, 2025 16:32
• Skele-tongue (Canticle) A fun read and I have never thought of a skeleton with a tongue.
  May 5th, 2025 15:07
• I wish (MinaH) A most interesting write. Death doesn\'t bother me pain does. A read that...
  May 5th, 2025 15:05
• The other Side of Pain (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Great advice and well written in such poetic form. A lovely write.
  May 5th, 2025 13:37
• Well Versed in Delerium (Thomas W Case) I love this one Thomas it is quite gritty and raw and like a piece of food...
  May 5th, 2025 13:35
• The Truth That Is (Lewisgale mental hospital) This is a very strong poem and the use of repetition is a good tool used...
  May 5th, 2025 13:30
• Erase (Libellule) Again a wonderful write. How many times I have pruned from my poems lines...
  May 5th, 2025 13:22
• I Will Have To Ask My Mother First (ADarkerMind) I am most sorry that I missed this one but very glad that I have now found...
  May 5th, 2025 13:18
• Caterpillar\'s Journey to Freedom (Moumita) I love how you have incorporated mythology in this poem and have...
  May 5th, 2025 11:51
• requiem. (Vic.) So sad, change is a constant and sometimes it does not happen...
  May 5th, 2025 10:28
• God But A Handmaiden (Kurt Philip Behm) A strong poem and well thought through. Yes according to believers of...
  May 5th, 2025 10:27
• My Dearest Love, My Flower of Eternity💕 (Petrichor of Love) Words of loneliness expressed and a need for presence. Pledges given hopes...
  May 5th, 2025 10:24
• locked away in my mind (Newt) Locked in one\'s mind paranoia invades and trust goes home. A poignant...
  May 5th, 2025 10:21
• Sun (Ajon4wheels) Themes of the past and the expected flow through this poem of pain that is...
  May 5th, 2025 10:20
• Save us from Devils (Devender Kumar) A poem for all innocents be they human, animal, or plant or even the...
  May 5th, 2025 10:18
• Orion (Lorenz) A cosmic trip through the universe of the emotional realm. Very nice
  May 5th, 2025 10:16
• So Many Skies (Akshadha_Joshi1310) Now that\'s the attitude. What an inspiration of things yet to do and...
  May 5th, 2025 10:14
• What If? (Tristan Robert Lange) Another banger. So philosophical yet practical and yes it matters not we...
  May 5th, 2025 10:12
• Shakespearean / Poet (Muse of Calliope) A poem of pledge and one of excuse for being. These travel deeper than the...
  May 5th, 2025 10:10
• I\'ll Take Three of Those, Please (Cheeky Missy) We have all had days of confusion when we don\'t even know what day it is...
  May 5th, 2025 10:08
• I may be a Christian (Tony36) A poem of acceptance and hope. Nicely worded
  May 5th, 2025 10:01
• WILDFLOWER (Qurrathul Ain) Here two meanings are approached simultaneously with so few words. I\'d...
  May 5th, 2025 09:35
• I See You as an Art (Framed Mirror) A wonderful piece of praise that in words poetic speaks a truth to all. A...
  May 5th, 2025 07:09
• Sunday Sunrise (RSM0812) Beautiful words woven here in metaphor and with deep meaning. So well...
  May 5th, 2025 06:45
• My Wave (Mutley Ravishes) A metaphor and poem based strongly on belief that is somehow logical about...
  May 5th, 2025 06:43
• Grateful: For You (Alex PB) A poem full of pain and anguish. It bleeds raw and open. Sad
  May 5th, 2025 06:41
• When Falling isn\'t Final (Salvia.S) A gain a metaphor so short with so much meaning. So well said and a fave
  May 5th, 2025 06:39
• Unique (Maplespal) Although we are all the same we are all different. We each are unique and...
  May 5th, 2025 05:40
• The darkest moment (Hey!) There is anger and rage in this poem that speaks out. Nicely done
  May 5th, 2025 05:38
• Still Here (Neckymonky) A poem of love that recognizes that space is needed and that too much wood...
  May 5th, 2025 05:35
• cruelty should never be (Jim56) Cruelty to human or animal is the same it is cruelty. A good message Jim
  May 5th, 2025 05:33
• there is no lack in you (Arqios) Such good advice but like a novice guitar player listening to a Stevie Ray...
  May 5th, 2025 05:31
• Blocking Out The Sun (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Ah yes the absurdity of government decisions and public support an attempt...
  May 5th, 2025 04:31
• FORGOTTEN (Nephilim56) Sad and tragic a loss before the loss a death before the death. So nicely...
  May 5th, 2025 04:29
• Poet’s Introduction (Mottakeenur Rehman) I can feel this, I can identify with this and yes it is a pendulum of pain...
  May 5th, 2025 04:26
• Jazz Song for Norah (Reynaldo Casison) A fantasy fantasia in this poem that drifts and floats to new heights with...
  May 5th, 2025 04:22
• A THREAD TO LIFE (Ferjohn Timung) Good message, for every action there is a reaction and this applies to our...
  May 5th, 2025 04:19
• Flags Are Always in Demand (Gray0328) Some great lines here Gray. The flag a symbol now used as a secondary...
  May 5th, 2025 04:16
• Monster In My Chest (Salian) Well worded and rhymed this poem makes good use of the metaphor of a...
  May 5th, 2025 04:11
• Memory of her (James Warren) A very nice metaphor and clever use of a mixture of literal and emotional...
  May 5th, 2025 04:06
• My Lazy Shadow (Ferjohn Timung) A good message sent with a wonderful metaphor. Very nice rhyme paired with...
  May 5th, 2025 04:04
• Loveless (Noellenoir) A poem of sad regret and moving on. Nicely composed and well done
  May 5th, 2025 04:01
• From Grain To Glass (ADarkerMind) Madness is happiness and is outlawed by all federal agencies as well as...
  May 5th, 2025 03:58
• Two Immates, Two Friends by Vlad Visotskiy (Ksey_Gan) Loved the last line that tied it all together in a double entendre. Nicely...
  May 5th, 2025 03:49
• Love People Tanka. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful message that would make the world a much better place
  May 5th, 2025 03:42
• Satisfied (MDStone) Quite creative MD I assume it is intended due to the separation in the...
  May 4th, 2025 19:28
• Branched allure (Arial) With another verse of two it could well be a song. Very nicely done
  May 4th, 2025 19:23
• Genesis 3:15 (Rrodriguez) A great poetic version of a biblical story. Just as poetry some read it as...
  May 4th, 2025 19:22
• A Revelation of Self (Alex TheHueman) Short and philosophical any answer could be debated. I guess if it...
  May 4th, 2025 17:57
• Night (Amethyste) Ah to catch such a thing and bottle it, can it tie it down. A fun read
  May 4th, 2025 16:20
• Lying About Your Thoughts (Anthony Hanible) An interesting poem of mental state. Most unusual and gives the feel of...
  May 4th, 2025 14:38
• No matter I got prescribed Glycopyrrolate 2 mg tablets taken four times a day..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Terrifying, sad, tragic, plight of an author plagued with a nonterminal...
  May 4th, 2025 14:09
• Return (Ellen Marsell) A promise made in this poem poetically set and well done
  May 4th, 2025 12:14
• Torture Me (Alex PB) It is the weak that we torture because the strong are too powerful, It is...
  May 4th, 2025 12:12
• Dances with Pain (Analogaddict) It is the last stanza that conveys the message best and is the most...
  May 4th, 2025 12:10
• As Petals Fall (RSM0812)
  May 4th, 2025 10:47
• As Petals Fall (RSM0812) Full of metaphor this poem gives one pause and provokes thoughts. Very
  May 4th, 2025 10:47
• Hues of Hope (Salvia.S) Another great short that equates fading with the passage of time and how...
  May 4th, 2025 09:37
• I Fear (Damaso) So short but a question that many ask of why our partners are with us....
  May 4th, 2025 08:47
• NOT ALONE (Kingjamescory) Nature and its creations are a gift indeed. A lovely short that says so...
  May 4th, 2025 08:45
• Neither Fresh Applesauce nor Races (Cheeky Missy) Very nice Chic I have thought about what it would be like to go back and...
  May 4th, 2025 08:44
• Lost but never gone (Neilton) Well worded Neilton this challenge from the grave and beyond a metaphor I...
  May 4th, 2025 07:42
• Here we go again (Tony36) Hope this is just poetic my friend. What a shocking dive into the...
  May 4th, 2025 07:35
• In a state of heaven or not (EvenwheniLie) What a nice and tender poem hidden in what appears prose to emerge in...
  May 4th, 2025 07:33
• The Luminous One (Reynaldo Casison) It is the vibrant imagery and resplendent colors and smells that get the...
  May 4th, 2025 07:31
• Sleepy Hollow (Tristan Robert Lange) The cycle of life seen through other glasses. Futility, why just keep...
  May 4th, 2025 07:28
• On colored nights (Maplespal) A most beautiful use of colors and nature to depict human and animal...
  May 4th, 2025 06:05
• $2.37 in my bank account (Demar Desu) So many illiterate with money, you would think that they would teach that...
  May 4th, 2025 05:05
• Penance for Imaginary (Rebellion_in_sanity) Misunderstanding and blame powerful tools to wrack havoc in any...
  May 4th, 2025 05:04
• IT IS NOT BEAUTIFUL WHAT IS BEAUTIFUL BUT IT IS BEAUTIFUL WHAT YOU LIKE: NOT FOR ME! (Swarovski20) Beauty is in the eye of the beholder but then why is there so much...
  May 4th, 2025 05:00
• Double Exposure (Gray0328) A most interesting poem Gray with great metaphor of the mirror and...
  May 4th, 2025 04:57
• mischief friend (Jim56) There are special bonds that cross species. A lovely write Jim
  May 4th, 2025 04:54
• DEVILS PACT (Nephilim56) This one smacks of Robert Johnson the devil the crossroads and the guitar....
  May 4th, 2025 04:52
• Just Another Man (Mottakeenur Rehman) This is a powerful poem that speaks with thunder and seems to echo down...
  May 4th, 2025 04:50
• \"Destiny Plot Twist\" (Cirawrites01) Each has their own view on poetry but to me it comes from the heart and...
  May 4th, 2025 04:47