Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- A Selfish Man. (Poetic Licence)
Nataiella a beautiful work with great imagery and a sad but true message....
February 26th, 2025 06:24 - ( weighing in ) (Arqios)
True eloquence and truth. A beautiful statement and so well said.
February 26th, 2025 06:13 - The Information Building. (Goldfinch60)
With the internet, that public institution once hallowed, is now becoming...
February 26th, 2025 04:30 - commodifying myself (Demar Desu)
Thought provoking this one had to be thought about for a while. So much...
February 26th, 2025 04:22 - Where to go (Shellsea)
A most interesting approach. Ending on a question leaves the feeling of it...
February 25th, 2025 21:35 - goodbye (NinjaGirl)
A poem of goodbyes. Nicely said.
February 25th, 2025 20:14 - No matter (Hey!)
Sometimes trying is not the way. You need to accept yourself and be who...
February 25th, 2025 20:10 - When the Skies were blue (Kevin Hulme)
A poem of metaphor and full of great images. Wonderful
February 25th, 2025 19:43 - when you\'re nobody (Sheta)
A poem of encouragement. Nicely done
February 25th, 2025 19:41 - Eye See You (Steve Goldenfort)
A poem of political intent. A poem of good rhyme and flow
February 25th, 2025 19:39 - The birth of hope. (Debbie)
Where there is life there is hope and so reads this poem. Motivational and...
February 25th, 2025 17:22 - Gucci Bag (Pocev_Gjoshe)
That gives a whole new meaning to he\'s with the old bag. A sensual read...
February 25th, 2025 17:19 - Jazz in Hell (Thomas W Case)
I thought it was the blues but if they play jazz sign me up. A really...
February 25th, 2025 17:18 - HaHa, It Won\'t Be Long Now (Cheeky Missy)
How the season doesn\'t really matter. It\'s the weather. Then here you go...
February 25th, 2025 14:38 - The Mind’s Harvest: What You Choose to Reap in Meditation and Mindfulness (Whats write for me)
One should know how to use a tool before it is put into their hands. Very...
February 25th, 2025 14:03 - Fog (Murphyh72096)
A sense of hopelessness and darkness in this poem. It casts shadows....
February 25th, 2025 13:59 - Detained (Hanible)
This write is dark from the start and grows darker. It feels confined and...
February 25th, 2025 13:57 - If ye benevolent reader count yourself as a wise married man such as me... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A good piece of advice to any that swim those waters as for me I don\'t...
February 25th, 2025 13:55 - A Bird in Central Park (MarcWalk)
A poem that shouts out to the listener to make a decision and act. A very...
February 25th, 2025 13:50 - Acceptance (Lorenz)
Heroic, epic are the terms that come to mind about this poem. Very well...
February 25th, 2025 13:48 - The Scent of Who You Are (Gray0328)
A sense too little used in life. Used in poetry in regard to flowers but...
February 25th, 2025 10:48 - Whetting The Stone (Kurt Philip Behm)
I\'m sure that you used this process in writing this poem. Very nice
February 25th, 2025 10:36 - Pointless (DLewis88)
A jaded look at life is presented in this poem. Some say life is a cosmic...
February 25th, 2025 10:35 - Please tell me (Poetaldo)
A sincere plea heard in this poem. If one truly believes in a loving God...
February 25th, 2025 10:32 - Failures (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Persistence is the key to this poem. A great attitude and good message....
February 25th, 2025 10:30 - the host (Ink.weaver)
A beautiful write and a warning. Live the day and give praise for what is...
February 25th, 2025 08:56 - Dark Age Descended (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan quite a write this was and a journey too. The shape of the poem...
February 25th, 2025 08:53 - Taco Tuesday (Tony36)
Love tacos and I like mine hot with lots of cheese and meat lettuce...
February 25th, 2025 08:42 - Unknown cause & Sorry for the nights (Maplespal)
Both poems so well written. You have come a long way in your writing. The...
February 25th, 2025 06:16 - The Lies (Poetic Licence)
So much said in so few lines and more with such pleasing rhyme. This one...
February 25th, 2025 06:10 - Some Kind of Curious Something (Neville)
What appears simple in this poem is far deeper hidden under sheets and...
February 25th, 2025 06:08 - thank mum (Jim56)
A lovely tribute to the giver of life and unconditional love. Beautiful my...
February 25th, 2025 06:06 - Who Knows Where The Time Goes (Paul Gerard Reed)
A marvelous metaphor encased in this poem. Time like a breeze is here and...
February 25th, 2025 06:04 - THREAT OF SNOW (Nephilim56)
Children do not heed threats. A lovely write and full of metaphor as well....
February 25th, 2025 05:58 - Nyuk Nyuk Nyuk (EvenwheniLie)
Ah Curly my favorite of the three. A bit smarter than the present...
February 25th, 2025 04:10 - Abby Wallace (Tkatie118)
A good write that makes a point in a form that keeps the reader involved...
February 25th, 2025 04:06 - Melanie Loveblind\'s Diary for the first year of Marriage. (David Wakeling)
I guess there are limits to everything, somewhere, I think, well there...
February 25th, 2025 04:01 - Life 2 (Mik)
I liked the formation of this poem that emulated its message in its...
February 25th, 2025 03:58 - Oh virgin dew (Funmiwrites)
A most interesting concept that had not occurred to me before. Well put...
February 25th, 2025 03:57 - Forgiveness Found (Orchidee)
Ah Orchi you have outdone yourself on this one. If I were to write a hymn...
February 25th, 2025 03:54 - Blossoming (2017) (Arqios)
A glow of culture, and respect fill this poem. It is distinguished in...
February 25th, 2025 03:51 - No3 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
Your poems put a smile on my day and that always deserves a fave
February 25th, 2025 03:48 - Natures Symphony Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
As the sun creeps over the horizon I can hear it now the dying of the...
February 25th, 2025 03:46 - The Giant they kept small (Eliaskayne)
I have worked with bonsai tree and all the time that I read this I could...
February 25th, 2025 03:42 - So In Love I Fell (Hanible)
This poem leaves me with a feeling of a history, a sense of past...
February 25th, 2025 03:39 - Trains (MDStone)
A lovely description well set up and introduced. If it were not for the...
February 25th, 2025 03:36 - Our Song (RSM0812)
Masterfully written this poem has a wonderful flow and rhyme to it and the...
February 25th, 2025 03:32 - The light in the dark (Poems_From_Emotions)
A poem of happiness cast in rhyme that flows well.
February 24th, 2025 22:14 - Stars in a Tear Drop (Salvia.S)
Another short that is powerful and with its strength carries the heart...
February 24th, 2025 22:13 - Ode to the Weekend (Kevin Hulme)
This reads so well with such good meter and rhyme it feels classical in...
February 24th, 2025 22:12 - Candles In The Moon (Reynaldo Casison)
This poem has an eastern feel to it and reads like a classic Indian ...
February 24th, 2025 22:07 - directions to love (NinjaGirl)
In some ways this metaphor can be taken several ways and although love is...
February 24th, 2025 22:05 - Waste (John Prophet)
A call to arms and a motivational poem at that.
February 24th, 2025 22:02 - Bad choice (Nicole Pritchard)
Time can not be reversed and all choices are permanent but new choices can...
February 24th, 2025 22:01 - Flammable (Mutley Ravishes)
I have heard both and this poem although short is a fun and thought...
February 24th, 2025 21:59 - Spend a Night in the Gathering of Humans—Just Once (Mohammad younus koul)
Very spiritual this poem
February 24th, 2025 21:58 - Where the children go to play (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Ah but to see the world through a child\'s eyes again. A lovely poem about...
February 24th, 2025 21:56 - Okay, Okay, Just Pat My Silly Head (Cheeky Missy)
A great line \"Frightened Monday\" and a fun read of the persistence of...
February 24th, 2025 21:53 - all too overwhelming (Oh kay)
A most interesting take off Descartes original saying and although not as...
February 24th, 2025 21:47 - VooDoo\'s Grasp (Lil_Bit0912)
Good rhyme in this poem. It flows well and many people are creeped out by...
February 24th, 2025 15:59 - Distance (Steve Goldenfort)
Learning to let go is one of the hardest but greatest lessons to be...
February 24th, 2025 13:52 - Awakened by His Call (Whats write for me)
A deep statement of faith and belief. Firmly stated well said.
February 24th, 2025 12:05 - Pondering over troubles (Arshia)
The question of how to find peace. A existential question. Lovely
February 24th, 2025 12:04 - \"Love kills. I am love.\" (Bird In Red)
Brutal and sad with a clever use of language to make its point. Nicely...
February 24th, 2025 12:02 - Cursed To Repeat (Kurt Philip Behm)
A social commentary of our present day. Sadly it is true. What more can I...
February 24th, 2025 12:00 - Gina Calfman (Tkatie118)
This write seems a critique and is well composed in that light. Very nice
February 24th, 2025 11:57 - The Poetry Slams (Thomas W Case)
As Paul Simon said the words of the prophets are written on the subway...
February 24th, 2025 11:55 - poetry (Newt)
The use of language in a true emotional manner. Very well written
February 24th, 2025 11:52 - Territory (MarcWalk)
This is the first poem about salesmen that I have read, definitely an...
February 24th, 2025 11:46 - Individual (Tony36)
A poem of being oneself and an individual so hard to do and fit in. A...
February 24th, 2025 11:43 - The Battle (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A poem of reliance and belief. Very nicely written
February 24th, 2025 11:41 - If a cat could talk (Kaelyn Jade)
A quizzical poem that many can relate to in that so many have pet cats....
February 24th, 2025 11:37 - Seal fin de siècle with unheard celebration (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Unwarranted and ridiculous punishments in a ridiculous society. A poem of...
February 24th, 2025 11:32 - In The End It’s You I Hold Dear (Bloomingdale)
This poem says that we don\'t have to be alike or opposites to love and so...
February 24th, 2025 11:25 - butterflies (Jim56)
A beautiful picture you paint in words Jim. Very nicely done
February 24th, 2025 11:21 - Please tell me (Poetaldo)
A poem with most interesting wording. There is doubt in trust and here is...
February 24th, 2025 11:20 - A typical 24 (Maplespal)
Between day and night feels rough. Fights all day and no sleep at night. A...
February 24th, 2025 11:17 - BETWEEN (Nephilim56)
Oh this is lovely, it is haunting and nostalgic. It has such a feel to it...
February 24th, 2025 11:13 - Spring Awaits (Xiaohua)
A poem about the uncertainty of the weather. Spring always looked forward...
February 24th, 2025 11:08 - Pontiac (Tristan Robert Lange)
As creative as the name, whether car or man. Now you have got me going on...
February 24th, 2025 11:06 - I Swear It (PART 2) (Abdullah123)
A sad truth that emotions like shadows come and go and we can not bring...
February 24th, 2025 04:28 - Moonlight Over the Bayou (Gray0328)
With the scene set so carefully it seems a trap to the reader waiting for...
February 24th, 2025 04:23 - Weight of Depression (Melancholic~Onion)
This brings to mind the song by Radiohead Creep. Depression is a terrible...
February 24th, 2025 04:20 - Figment of Your Imagination (Poetic Licence)
Indeed tis so. And my imagination is a figment itself. A truth well
February 24th, 2025 04:15 - Glimpse of yesterday (Funmiwrites)
Indeed if I knew what I knew now when I was a young child how would things...
February 24th, 2025 04:14 - Morning Walk (Orchidee)
Then there are those that mark all their poems +18 and I read and read and...
February 24th, 2025 04:05 - Mrs Cohen comes to America (David Wakeling)
Where the mind goes and how it works or not when it has suffered too much....
February 24th, 2025 02:56 - Keys In A Mansion. (Goldfinch60)
A very apt metaphor Gold. Music is a many roomed mansion, each room with...
February 24th, 2025 02:51 - Thoughts that keep me stuck (Poems_From_Emotions)
I feel a sense of urgency and uncertainty in this poem. It leaves a sense...
February 24th, 2025 02:47 - first love (Sheta)
There is much truth in this poem. If I might add First love is just an...
February 24th, 2025 02:45 - Stay humble (NafisaSB)
Good advice given in this poem of good rhyme as well. Nicely done
February 24th, 2025 02:42 - Dreaming (Shandi)
I sense sadness, anger and resentment in this poem. Written as...
February 24th, 2025 02:40 - The Cracked Lens (Steve Goldenfort)
Generally one\'s most severe critique is oneself. It is good to be honest...
February 24th, 2025 02:37 - Cindy Beale (Tkatie118)
I hear don\'t judge until you have walked in the other person\'s shoes....
February 24th, 2025 02:34 - Volcanoes (MDStone)
A great metaphor for human emotion. Followed through from beginning to end...
February 24th, 2025 02:31 - Bleak House: The Fog (Arqios)
What a wonderful metaphor you have painted in this metropolis. Yes like...
February 24th, 2025 02:29 - Moral Decay (Mr. Not)
A poem that catches the ear. Nice to hear, nicely written.
February 23rd, 2025 19:15 - My Dante Lives (ADarkerMind)
Have read Dante and it fits. Nicely done and written
February 23rd, 2025 16:51 - I hate words (Xqw)
Vivid images presented in a most unique third person manner. Very nicely...
February 23rd, 2025 16:46 - I Said A Prayer For You (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A kind gesture in a poem. Nicely stated compassion for another stated....
February 23rd, 2025 16:43
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