Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Fine Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful image cast Gold. It falls like sunbeams through a picket...
February 20th, 2025 04:00 - all women want (Rainbow 1)
Is that a good place to find one? A thought provoking read.
February 19th, 2025 19:40 - Excerpt from a poem Books after Valentin Gaft (Ksey_Gan)
No one reads anymore. I love reading but even I read less than in the...
February 19th, 2025 18:40 - Rejected (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
It is all a state of mind. It is what you think that makes the difference....
February 19th, 2025 16:31 - Nothing to See Here, Folks. (Cheeky Missy)
Snow still makes one anxious for spring. A fun read
February 19th, 2025 16:30 - I thought (Byyvette)
Expectations don\'t always work out. A poem of loss within a loss. Nicely...
February 19th, 2025 15:27 - The womb of all (DREEK0)
Intriguing metaphors here that lead to an untangling of meaning. Nicely...
February 19th, 2025 15:25 - Unseen Blessing (Gray0328)
Very nice flow to this poem with a message and good rhyme Gray
February 19th, 2025 15:23 - Definition of a Poet (M.E.M.)
So true that our thoughts and expectations shape our writing and one can...
February 19th, 2025 13:46 - Empty Thoughts (Cassie58)
Indeed I too become restless during the nonhunting season when one must...
February 19th, 2025 13:43 - Tinkering with Control (RSM0812)
Greed one of the primary hard wired human traits that makes society and...
February 19th, 2025 11:30 - Moi, je me perds (NinjaGirl)
Magnifique!
February 19th, 2025 11:28 - I can\'t feel it (Poetaldo)
Take your time and we will wait for you and your poetry too
February 19th, 2025 11:27 - Waiting For Supper (Kurt Philip Behm)
Philosophy put into reality, poetry put into metaphor, esoteric into...
February 19th, 2025 11:26 - The Self in all living Beings (Skally)
Great concept to which I adhere and matter nothing more than energy all...
February 19th, 2025 11:20 - Satan\'s Short Season (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I think G stands for goat head of the beast, greatest of all time, God...
February 19th, 2025 11:17 - The Tyrant\'s Creed (Mohammad younus koul)
Nicely stated
February 19th, 2025 11:15 - Mary Bess Brenner: A Poetic Tribute (Whats write for me)
A most lovely tribute and heart felt
February 19th, 2025 11:08 - Limerick 3 (Abdullah123)
And so it is in reality and in metaphor as well. Nicely said
February 19th, 2025 09:39 - Imperfection (Paul Gerard Reed)
A great message and well stated as well. For the message there is a fave
February 19th, 2025 08:51 - My Heart (Tony36)
A lovely read. Very nice
February 19th, 2025 08:49 - My Mighty 13 (Hanible)
Whether neologisms , skating or rap it all comes to the same fun and...
February 19th, 2025 08:49 - Brevity\'s Paradox (Salvia.S)
Very nice. The comment will be longer than the poem and that is how it...
February 19th, 2025 08:47 - i would wish for this (Jim56)
A beautiful wish for all. A poem that leaves a calm feeling
February 19th, 2025 08:45 - If love meant surrender. (Job Welime)
Very well written it carries the reader away in surrender to the concept,...
February 19th, 2025 07:05 - The Year Galileo Dropped the Sky (H.J. Rivers)
Tying physics with poetry is sublime and satisfying in that all of nature...
February 19th, 2025 07:02 - Sleepless (Maplespal)
I loved the idea of noisy shadows sliding and creeping around just too...
February 19th, 2025 05:27 - In The End (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Very meaningful. Tis poem reaches deep into what one should strive for and...
February 19th, 2025 05:24 - Kaizen (Demar Desu)
There is greater depth to this Haiku than at first glance. Loved it
February 19th, 2025 05:18 - Where can I fill my pen (Funmiwrites)
Poets have feelings, poets cry and miss loved ones. Poets write about it....
February 19th, 2025 05:16 - Who (2781)
Troubled times are predicted by this poem. The view of the common man now...
February 19th, 2025 05:14 - Heart of Wonder (Emile Dubois)
Beautiful images cast in wonderous words. A magnificent picture painted in...
February 19th, 2025 05:07 - JAGGED (Nephilim56)
February 19th, 2025 05:04 - JAGGED (Nephilim56)
It is the flow and rhyme of this poem that I loved the most. Very nicely...
February 19th, 2025 05:04 - Not Just Lightning (Teddy.15)
Celestial fireworks. I love the introduction of words like diamond a...
February 19th, 2025 05:02 - To Be My Fathers Son (Poetic Licence)
Life of hard knocks. A great prodigal son type story that keeps the reader...
February 19th, 2025 04:54 - No2 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
Don\'t get me started on spelling and word play a favorite topic. Loved...
February 19th, 2025 04:50 - Pathogena the Temptress. (David Wakeling)
Like the spider spinning its web you spin your tail, as each web is...
February 19th, 2025 04:47 - untitled (bemused rumination) (Arqios)
Love this poem\'s innovation. I have thought of trying something similar...
February 19th, 2025 04:38 - Almost (Junes)
The combination of rhyme, rhythm, word choice and timing in the build made...
February 19th, 2025 04:34 - love (Sheta)
A short poem that begins with a cutting edge but ends on a more positive...
February 19th, 2025 04:29 - how to love (Lunarchloedip)
Beautiful! Well written in good verse it shines as a tribute to the memory...
February 19th, 2025 04:26 - What I Call Shopping. (Goldfinch60)
Customer service becoming a thing of the past. The old saying that the...
February 19th, 2025 04:21 - Just leave me alone (Hey!)
We all need personal space from time to time. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 18:28 - Dreams do come true. (Brookestiehl)
A write of horror welcome to MPS
February 18th, 2025 18:21 - Quiet Embrace (Gray0328)
Sensuous, sexual, erotic and with very poetic wording
February 18th, 2025 14:29 - I miss you (Maplespal)
It is not just the person we miss but all the memories and the parts of...
February 18th, 2025 14:26 - I can\'t survive (Poetaldo)
Gratitude for nature and all around us so well expressed.
February 18th, 2025 14:24 - Toungue twister (RSM0812)
Great internal rhyme in this piece that helps in the flow. Very nice.
February 18th, 2025 14:23 - Listen With Your Heart (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
More lies beneath the surface and there is a history to consider as well....
February 18th, 2025 14:19 - Un Jour (NinjaGirl)
Not for like of desire but for lack of French I can only make out bits and...
February 18th, 2025 14:16 - Don\'t Force It (Thomas W Case)
Although on the surface this appears a simple description of a sequence of...
February 18th, 2025 14:14 - Not Since Those Dear Departed (ADarkerMind)
Carried by illusions I throw myself into the read. Although distracted by...
February 18th, 2025 14:11 - Yes, Kick Me. (Cheeky Missy)
More food at meal time you raise my hunger each time. I particularly liked...
February 18th, 2025 11:56 - Wings (Bren Wrights)
Independence is one of the most important stages in our society and may be...
February 18th, 2025 10:36 - I\'m a girl (Pineapple_pizza018)
A great write that talks of inequities that are so true. Women of the past...
February 18th, 2025 10:33 - Fatuous Clay (Abdullah123)
Very nice wording here that is powerful and strong. Loved it
February 18th, 2025 10:28 - Point Blank (Kurt Philip Behm)
Wonderful! Blinded by the light so to speak
February 18th, 2025 10:26 - The War must end - Ukraine & Russia (Raidoc)
A poem of war protest that rings out for all to hear. Very nice
February 18th, 2025 09:49 - Trust your Gut (Salvia.S)
This one catches the reader by surprise and is concise and to the point
February 18th, 2025 08:38 - Purely by chance (CuriousWanderer)
Makes one wonder. If not the the chance that your mother met your father...
February 18th, 2025 08:35 - Stand Up (Tony36)
A wonderful call to people to open their hearts and live a different life
February 18th, 2025 08:32 - Those That Sleep (Whats write for me)
A nice flow to this carries the reader on to the end. A beautiful write it...
February 18th, 2025 08:29 - QUEEN OF HER DYNASTY (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A most beautiful write of aspirations and dreams
February 18th, 2025 07:19 - New Age Deception (Doomsday) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It doesn\'t take an inverted card to tell that or the cast of a chicken...
February 18th, 2025 07:18 - LA NOCHE ES MIA (Falcon_mn)
Simlimente bonita y mas genio. Excuse my Spanish it is a humble third...
February 18th, 2025 07:14 - I Have Never Been to New York, But I Remember It Anyway (A B)
Genius writing in this piece that pulls at the heart strings of any true...
February 18th, 2025 07:10 - In my dreams I’m a master (EvenwheniLie)
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely...
February 18th, 2025 06:59 - Empty Heart (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
A plea for kindness and peace for understanding and love. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 06:57 - Gotcha! Once respectable haute cuisine thief Sue She..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Life as it is today. Poem of metaphor and reality and who can tell the...
February 18th, 2025 06:21 - It\'s getting clearer and I don\'t care if it goes all away (Yassin Tamam)
Pondering and the mind wandering are part of processing and understanding...
February 18th, 2025 06:16 - Cosmic mate (Serra)
A nice metaphor between love and the cosmos and how stars in their...
February 18th, 2025 06:10 - Nation’s Truth (AaliyahC.)
A dark view of the present but then how can one not see the night after...
February 18th, 2025 06:03 - A poem of solitude ([email protected])
We are all alone in fact and so it is in this isolation that we can find...
February 18th, 2025 06:00 - How Sweet She Sways (Reynaldo Casison)
Very poetic in its lines and sweet in nature. It paints love in the pink...
February 18th, 2025 05:58 - Staying Alone (Hanible)
There is a feel of the ghostly here and the last line is haunting. Nicely...
February 18th, 2025 05:50 - Let the mind feel at ease (Funmiwrites)
It is a proven fact that breaks make for a productive effort the question...
February 18th, 2025 05:48 - ROMANTIC WARRIOR (Nephilim56)
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in...
February 18th, 2025 05:45 - Hate Breeds Hate (Mohammad younus koul)
Another beautiful write about something that despite how old it is has not...
February 18th, 2025 05:42 - childhood days (Jim56)
Fond past memories spawned by reminders. Lovely Jim
February 18th, 2025 05:37 - I May Bloom Again (Paul Gerard Reed)
The promise is enhanced in a wistful way with the repeated verse. A most...
February 18th, 2025 05:36 - The Essence Of You (Bloomingdale)
Beauty in words is poetry and here it flows. Very nice
February 18th, 2025 05:33 - Electric Shock (Mutley Ravishes)
The cure for stagnation is entropy. A downhill slope with nothing at the...
February 18th, 2025 05:31 - Playing With Words (Neville)
How titillating, word play, like foreplay excites with expectations,...
February 18th, 2025 05:24 - I Am Metaphor (Teddy.15)
Metaphor but also true we are all things some closer in space than others...
February 18th, 2025 05:16 - 22 Today! (Orchidee)
And here I thought that the big bang was a party popper at your first...
February 18th, 2025 05:11 - Two People In One (Poetic Licence)
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder,...
February 18th, 2025 05:09 - Fear (Framed Mirror)
Sometimes it is the simple that is difficult and the clear that can not be...
February 18th, 2025 05:03 - The Sydney Opera House. (David Wakeling)
It is only recent history that tells us of genocide and its cold cruelty...
February 18th, 2025 05:01 - sheen of young love (Arqios)
Privacy a word of the past. Whether lovers of others or freedom lovers we...
February 18th, 2025 04:56 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
Full of metaphor layer upon layer. I chose it because of the similarity it...
February 18th, 2025 04:46 - Be the pilot of your own schemes (Emile Dubois)
A powerful call to arms. A battle cry against dependency in following the...
February 18th, 2025 04:38 - Sun On Our Lives Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Gold you know how to turn a grey day into a sunny one. Once again you have...
February 18th, 2025 04:26 - A Poem about a Beloved Friend after Eduard Uspensky (Ksey_Gan)
Friend or foe is often hard to discern. Most interesting.
February 17th, 2025 19:57 - Echoes of Eden (Emile Dubois)
Bread crumbs seldom are sufficient to sustain a hungry soul. A most...
February 17th, 2025 19:54 - The questions (Sheta)
Comfort with oneself is the cornerstone of one\'s personal foundation. It...
February 17th, 2025 19:50 - Feminism, but can I keep my bra? (NinjaGirl)
Love the metaphor here that there are differences and that they are to be...
February 17th, 2025 19:44 - Such A Beautiful Place (Teddy.15)
Vision and hearing our two primary senses equate well. I know people who...
February 17th, 2025 16:39 - My Revenge (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
Sad, double sad. One hurt on top of another and then the pain from...
February 17th, 2025 15:08 - So, Yeah, I Think Who Covered That (Cheeky Missy)
Beautiful! Simply beautiful Chic
February 17th, 2025 15:05
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