Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Summer Equinox (Gray0328)
Very lovely lines and images fill this poem. A fave
September 22nd, 2025 11:19 - Majesty\'s Light (Kurt Philip Behm)
A poem the reads so smoothly from beginning to end. Very nice Kurt
September 22nd, 2025 11:16 - The making of a sociopath (EvenwheniLie)
The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.
September 22nd, 2025 11:13 - The scripture (Lorenz)
A poem that speaks as holy writ a proclamation and warning. It is a call...
September 22nd, 2025 10:34 - What would it be no siblings to talk too! (Friendship)
A poem of sad remorse and regret over loss and present isolation. This...
September 22nd, 2025 10:30 - Atheism (RSM0812)
I loved the meter and flow of this poem nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:25 - Mr. K (Louiray)
A poem of strong infatuation where everything is good. A lovely write
September 22nd, 2025 10:23 - Demon In The Bottle (Part.4) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A good write on the effects of too much drinking. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:51 - If I don’t see you again (Amandatoriii)
A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness...
September 22nd, 2025 09:49 - Random Word Challenge #2: Shakespearean Whims (Matthew R. Callies)
Quite the vocabulary used in this poem well worded, rhymed and arranged....
September 22nd, 2025 09:44 - I lay here wondering... (Natavia Hobert)
Thoughts in a continual chain come through in this poem where one thought...
September 22nd, 2025 08:25 - What To Do Now? (Emery Walker)
A poem of unrequited love that is more common than one would believe. Sad...
September 22nd, 2025 08:23 - For All who Are Lost (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
You continue to intersperse rhyme in your poetry even in free verse and I...
September 22nd, 2025 08:20 - Happy two thousand twenty fifth birthday Autumn - September twenty second (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I have always wondered why we don\'t have any other starting point for...
September 22nd, 2025 07:01 - I am thinking (Maplespal)
Wonderful rhyme in this poem carries the reader onward through line after...
September 22nd, 2025 06:57 - what i want (Carpe4diem)
A poem that leaves feelings of soft melancholy tenderly displaying so many...
September 22nd, 2025 06:54 - undertow (Arqios)
I\'m sorry Cryptic I can\'t help but project my past work into this poem....
September 22nd, 2025 06:51 - kindness (Jim56)
Another wonderful message set to rhyme. Loved it Jim
September 22nd, 2025 04:59 - Don’t let her leave (William Hromada)
This poem a prayer and plea to God to keep someone and allow them to ever...
September 22nd, 2025 04:58 - Burning (Ajax (he/xe))
This poem shows an ambivalence toward the fire with it giving a sense of...
September 22nd, 2025 04:56 - SECRET ROOMS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Arrogance well painted in this poem with great rhyme and flow it carries...
September 22nd, 2025 04:52 - Just Before the Light Turns Green (Arquious)
A great descriptive poem with wonderful imagery nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 04:51 - The Versions Of Me That Didn’t Make It (Meagan Adelle)
These reflections voiced in this write evidence a sense of growth and...
September 22nd, 2025 04:49 - Haiku #1 (MatPie)
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one...
September 22nd, 2025 04:46 - How do I know I’ve fallen (Violet_Writes)
A poem of questions with great analogies and similes. Very nicely written...
September 22nd, 2025 04:38 - Cartography of Confusion (Rawaneigh.99)
This poem has many wonderful lines and images as it wends its way through...
September 22nd, 2025 04:35 - You still Not Getting It? (Orchidee)
I wonder how many reviews that I have made that led people down the wrong...
September 22nd, 2025 04:14 - LIMERICKS 148, 149 &150 (Michael Edwards)
You have done it again Michael and entertained me for another morning...
September 22nd, 2025 03:56 - Autumn Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A very nice picture painted here Andy. I feel the warmth of the colors.
September 22nd, 2025 03:53 - self-loathing (Kayla Jackson)
Not being a woman I will take your word for it. This write is clear and...
September 21st, 2025 20:10 - Whispers in an Empty Room (Haleyalexis)
Love for person or animal is a strong force that can be felt without...
September 21st, 2025 19:17 - Cautionary Tale (Philip Daniel Cook)
We all have such a heel and the warning of what will happen. Mistakes...
September 21st, 2025 19:14 - Thirst (Morgue)
It gives the feel of a psychic vampire sucking your energy and...
September 21st, 2025 19:10 - Will I Ever Be Free? (C.M)
Torn in thoughts this poem projects this well. Nicely written
September 21st, 2025 17:05 - her hiccups sound like falling raindrops... (DeadRose)
Now that is an association that has never occurred to me. A most...
September 21st, 2025 17:04 - A little plant (Amethyste)
I can picture this so well. It is beautiful and something I see every time...
September 21st, 2025 15:02 - Smile (Anthony Hanible)
The very best method to get at someone that hates you is to let them see...
September 21st, 2025 14:38 - Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A poem of belief and faith and a declaration for others. Nicely done
September 21st, 2025 14:37 - THE CLICKER (David Welch)
I love this one. One only needs to know where the power lies be in...
September 21st, 2025 13:20 - HALO 92192 (S.O.S)
I love this a halo, a guiding light. Well done.
September 21st, 2025 13:13 - Poet (Teddy.15)
A most positive write with which I firmly believe. Lovely my friend
September 21st, 2025 13:03 - Yard work. (Friendship)
A well rhymed and metered poem about completing a task instead of...
September 21st, 2025 13:00 - Box of darkness.. (Natavia Hobert)
A sense of being trapped and a feeling of helplessness as to how to...
September 21st, 2025 11:06 - To Liam (Velvet.Riot)
A wonderful tribute to one that passed too soon. Nicely done
September 21st, 2025 11:05 - I gotta learn me about the IPad (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
We spend our time on the most frivolous of activities like gaming on the I...
September 21st, 2025 11:03 - Vagabond Kings (Kurt Philip Behm)
The reasoning in these two statements becomes circular if examined and...
September 21st, 2025 10:23 - The Belt of Truth (Gray0328)
A belief, a plea and a pledge in a poem. Nicely written Gray
September 21st, 2025 10:21 - I will be Okay (Meera Mere)
Indeed the perfunctory answer okay is expected and when not given others...
September 21st, 2025 10:19 - To be a Bird... (Aradhya)
A poem that focuses on the virtues of being a bird. It floats and is...
September 21st, 2025 10:17 - Music (Krissy.V)
This poem speaks of music being a stress reliever and comforter when there...
September 21st, 2025 10:15 - The Empty Armchair (Lore)
A poem that is sad and lonely but altogether too true and real. Nicely...
September 21st, 2025 10:13 - Don\'t give love a bad name (Anabasova)
Insecurities run rampant in a world where insincerity is the norm. Love is...
September 21st, 2025 10:10 - Blessings (Keeter C)
Free association leads this poem to a sociopolitical observation where all...
September 21st, 2025 10:07 - 𝒲𝒽𝒾𝓁ℯ ℴ𝓃 𝒶 𝒸𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 ℋ.ℰ.ℛ (Keyara S Trotman)
This seems in some way observational turned reflective. A most thought...
September 21st, 2025 10:05 - Dreaming Of You (Louiray)
There is a great deal of longing in this poem for closeness and loving....
September 21st, 2025 07:44 - i carried them in my pocket (Katie B.)
Difficult times portrayed in this poem. (I carried the days in my pocket)...
September 21st, 2025 07:42 - Waterfall (Alan R)
Whether light is knowledge or love the wishes are reflections of desire. A...
September 21st, 2025 07:39 - Breathless (Domilla)
Missing love is a most difficult thing and this seems worded in this poem....
September 21st, 2025 07:36 - Untitled (RSM0812)
An incantation with biblical implications very nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:34 - When I walk away (Maplespal)
A poem of recognition a poem well penned
September 21st, 2025 07:32 - Why I chose you,Ma? (Jyoti Verma)
Beautiful words of belonging in a poem transcending worlds. Nicely penned
September 21st, 2025 07:29 - I have Something to Tell You (William Hromada)
A poetic plea for continued union and love. Nicely written
September 21st, 2025 07:25 - The Emerald Dream (Aa Harvey)
Emerald city? A reference to the land of Oz. A good read.
September 21st, 2025 07:23 - Paywalled Proclamation (Tristan Robert Lange)
Clever wording in this poem. The word play is wonderful with (profit) as...
September 21st, 2025 07:21 - ibis (Devender Kumar)
A most beautiful haiku that paints its picture of nature and its majesty
September 21st, 2025 05:42 - love (Jim56)
Beautiful Jim love lasts forever if it is indeed love all else passes away
September 21st, 2025 05:19 - the saga in the hall (Arqios)
Here Cryptic I feel there is deeper meaning pressed into that floor. We...
September 21st, 2025 05:18 - A Rose for You (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice)
A fair warning and full disclosure given in a poem. Loved it
September 21st, 2025 05:12 - THE WARD (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A sad poem that paints a graphic picture of death\'s waiting room. Nicely...
September 21st, 2025 04:04 - The Life I\'m Living On (Sneha Sebastian)
Living for oneself and not for others is a key to happiness. If that...
September 21st, 2025 04:02 - this is my gift to you, who loves the ocean more than breath. (Carpe4diem)
A lovely metaphor that ties the theme of the poem to meaning and feeling....
September 21st, 2025 03:59 - my right to melancholy (White lily lament)
There is comfort for some in sadness just as there is in silence. This...
September 21st, 2025 03:56 - Try To.... (Orchidee)
I thought those 18+ poems were if the author was over 18. Don\'t tell me...
September 21st, 2025 03:52 - Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60)
Very nice God this poem has a most wistful feel to it and it glides as it...
September 21st, 2025 03:47 - The River That Remembers (Arquious)
Welcome to MPS a fave for your first write and I do not give them easily....
September 21st, 2025 03:45 - Sometimes, We Slip (Thomas W Case)
Sometimes karma takes a rapid role in life. A fun story well told Thomas
September 21st, 2025 03:40 - an imbrication of fallen leaves (Jon Nakapalau)
A beautiful image cast in this poem of fall and its beauty.
September 20th, 2025 20:21 - Acceptance (3) (Fred1794)
Three is a magic number, the number of the trinity, the triangle of...
September 20th, 2025 19:34 - The Grave of the Border (Sami Mulaj)
A poem of darkness, death, pain and violence. A sad commentary for...
September 20th, 2025 19:32 - At Eternity\'s Gate (Acheel)
A great short with a most interesting metaphor. I have always thought of...
September 20th, 2025 18:56 - Las Vegas & The Morning Blues (Teddy.15)
Been there done that but never spend enough to regret. Quite the place...
September 20th, 2025 18:52 - Bummer (Duran Mazzana)
Mind provoking. A good write
September 20th, 2025 17:44 - memory street (Gloria Denise)
Memory street is where one\'s home is built. A warm and nostalgic feel to...
September 20th, 2025 15:44 - I try to feel.. But I can\'t. (Natavia Hobert)
When all thought and feeling is gone one is gone. A sad and existentially...
September 20th, 2025 15:43 - Short Stories Rated 18 + (Keyara S Trotman)
Strong passion displayed in this poem that lead to a physical relationship...
September 20th, 2025 15:40 - IN ORDER TO BE SANE (David Welch)
A masterful work. Not sure but it seems that the word (heard instead of...
September 20th, 2025 15:36 - We are free to walk In this path (Poetaldo)
In this poem is concern for food that is found and provided by God. Nicely...
September 20th, 2025 14:39 - Behind Closed Doors (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice)
A fave for the meaning of this write. A poem of faith and belief that in...
September 20th, 2025 13:22 - Horses in the Ocean by Boris Slutski (Ksey_Gan)
A most sad write of a tragedy in terms of life and death. Well told
September 20th, 2025 13:19 - Riot (Shadowbones)
Hate spreads like a flood. Before long all may drown. Well written
September 20th, 2025 13:16 - Corruption (Scarlette Howard)
A write of purpose. It speaks of control and manipulation. War, disease,...
September 20th, 2025 13:14 - The quantum voyager (Lorenz)
Although surrealistic in nature I am reversing the metaphor and see this...
September 20th, 2025 11:10 - Jim Morrison (Eugene S.)
This has biblical symbology in the being thrust into a desert, the solemn...
September 20th, 2025 10:25 - One Step (Kurt Philip Behm)
I really liked this one Kurt I guess it must be my age. A fave
September 20th, 2025 10:19 - A knock on my door (Arial)
A poem most thought provoking that drops one into a situation and plucks...
September 20th, 2025 10:18 - Just being happy with age. (Friendship)
A wonderful message at the end and peppered with a self laughter at aging....
September 20th, 2025 09:09 - Jungle living & Worth it (Maplespal)
I detect struggle and strife in these poems where it is tough fighting...
September 20th, 2025 07:14 - Can’t move Forward (William Hromada)
A poem of strife and difficulties that like swimming against the current...
September 20th, 2025 07:11 - I kid you not dear reader... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I identify where after having money taken from a debit card I never use...
September 20th, 2025 07:09 - lonlieness (Jim56)
Now that is a sad poem. Unlike you Jim that is always so bright and...
September 20th, 2025 06:04
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