Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Hard And Bitter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Loved this one, loved its flow, its rhyme, and a good message as well....
  September 15th, 2025 04:50
• Lost Young (Ria_1005) I love the use of a mirror as a gentle dreamland. This poem in its...
  September 15th, 2025 04:48
• Hi & Bye (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A beautiful reflection upon achievement and how it can be deferred, ...
  September 15th, 2025 04:42
• Augury (Teddy.15) Signs that we fail to recognize can in hindsight become regret but then...
  September 15th, 2025 04:37
• Do not give advice.. (NafisaSB) Good advice about not giving advice Nafisa the irony in this is...
  September 15th, 2025 04:35
• Brunch of Beasts (Aman 12) Sounds like a politicians brunch to me. Really great images with what...
  September 15th, 2025 04:27
• Sand Castles (David Hopkins) Metaphoric memories. I remember doing that with my children taking a...
  September 15th, 2025 04:24
• ochre ledge against folding sky (Arqios) A majestic poem worthy of display in any text of poetry. This poem does...
  September 15th, 2025 04:11
• This\'ll Cheer Ya Up - Not! (Orchidee) Keep it coming Orchi whether hymns or nutty, either work. Fun always...
  September 15th, 2025 03:54
• Home Again. (Goldfinch60) A good trip, time enjoyed and time passes. What matters most is happiness.
  September 15th, 2025 03:50
• What did I do to deserve such caution? (Violet_Writes) A poetic question that has no legitimate answer. A plea that goes...
  September 14th, 2025 20:46
• WHISPER (TO HEAR) (Michaelm) A most interesting poem of daybreak at the song of birds and its passing....
  September 14th, 2025 20:41
• music (Lunarchloedip) A most interesting rhyme to this poem that spins its way through a chore...
  September 14th, 2025 19:29
• The fifth season (Sami Mulaj) A nicely painted picture of the scene, well detailed and imaged
  September 14th, 2025 19:26
• Painting the Perfect Picture (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A poetic description of the process itself. Nicely done
  September 14th, 2025 19:24
• the ember (Jasper) A most interesting cube of words each line equal in words and meters. Well...
  September 14th, 2025 19:22
• Is It Too Soon To Love You? (William Hromada) A good question that only the author can answer. Never too soon to love...
  September 14th, 2025 17:10
• Sol (Dara Ó Rinn) The sun raises and falls regularly irrespective of what happens below it...
  September 14th, 2025 17:08
• SINK YOUR TEETH IN (BoxMyHeart) A poem bitter to the taste it speaks to me of humanity\'s savagery and...
  September 14th, 2025 17:03
• God help Us (DLewis88) A supplicatory poem that ends as a prayer. Nicely worded it speaks of...
  September 14th, 2025 17:00
• Tom Riddles Grave (Fred1794) A fun read that is set up as a haunting experience. Nicely done with good...
  September 14th, 2025 16:58
• Humble (Amethyste) Humility a virtue but when it becomes overwhelming it can be debilitating....
  September 14th, 2025 14:00
• I Have To Know That. (Teacher Kevin) A beautiful story in a poem. Well written and inspirational. The format...
  September 14th, 2025 13:14
• The encouragement from true friend. (Friendship) A powerful message set in good poetic rhyme and verse nicely said and a...
  September 14th, 2025 13:09
• i carried them in my pocket (Katie B.) A good line and a good poem nicely written and imaged. A fave
  September 14th, 2025 13:06
• Kibrothhattaavah (Fränz Müller) What a splendid senryu this is. A fave
  September 14th, 2025 12:06
• Pulse (Soheil khodaparasti) So short but says so much. Very nicely worded
  September 14th, 2025 11:52
• Haikus (Priya Tomar) Two nicely done Haiku\'s that present lovely images
  September 14th, 2025 11:29
• FACADE (Lily May Emerald) A tough balance to tread between societies demands and one\'s personal...
  September 14th, 2025 11:27
• The Girl of Silences (Lore) The helplessness of a child and their vulnerability makes them a good...
  September 14th, 2025 10:21
• Give Pause to Reflect (Bella Shepard) Ah Dear Bella The passage of time and its transformations that can never...
  September 14th, 2025 10:01
• The Düsseldorf Fiend (Matthew R. Callies) A story well told in verse and rhyme. A great ballad well written. Well...
  September 14th, 2025 08:24
• The pot (Bashirah Asuku) What a metaphor! In simplicity there is complexity, in the pure there is...
  September 14th, 2025 08:17
• Connection Lost (Gray0328) Gray I had to pause and think about this one. The image is clear and I...
  September 14th, 2025 08:12
• Becoming What Is (Kurt Philip Behm) This is mystical, the forming of mental myths, wistful and ethereal in...
  September 14th, 2025 07:36
• Frozen Lake (RSM0812) Sad yet beautiful it is a great metaphor with deep meaning couched in...
  September 14th, 2025 07:33
• I wish & Reward (Maplespal) It is with the first that I identify most. It speaks to me of how no one...
  September 14th, 2025 07:32
• punctuate. (Gia) What a masterful poetic expression of the reception of sharp words spoken....
  September 14th, 2025 07:28
• it follows (Cody James) Had that feeling. A magnificent poem that images in a kaleidoscope of...
  September 14th, 2025 07:26
• Big ol\' Big Mac (Aa Harvey) I hear not only exhaustion in this poem but loss of ambition. A general...
  September 14th, 2025 05:42
• \"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios) This one brought to mind a scrapbook of newspaper clippings flipped...
  September 14th, 2025 05:40
• Naked (MatPie) Indeed it is it is only a matter of looking for it. A lovely write about...
  September 14th, 2025 05:32
• autumn day (Jim56) Love your putting a positive twist on autumn, one of my least favorite...
  September 14th, 2025 05:02
• Overlooked Because Of My Opinions (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) To all but the lucky there is a price paid for fame and recognition. A...
  September 14th, 2025 05:00
• POWER SCREAMING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A most thought provoking poem about the nature of man. Man a social animal...
  September 14th, 2025 04:58
• 𝔚𝔬𝔲𝔩𝔡 𝔶𝔬𝔲 𝔏𝔦𝔨𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔎𝔫𝔬𝔴? (Keyara S Trotman) Clever grading system. I have seen other grading systems each with their...
  September 14th, 2025 04:54
• AnalysisByPerplexityAI-Volume 43-HotHarvest--30Aug2025-Part 2 (Soman Ragavan) Another interesting analysis of a poem protesting unethical behavior of...
  September 14th, 2025 04:50
• underground railroad (Bigguy) Paper a white flag of truce, a cowards retreat. Wow! nothing like calling...
  September 14th, 2025 04:48
• To the wait of the darkness (Alejandra Pizarnik) (Vogelfrei) The fave goes for the Spanish version this time. I really love that you...
  September 14th, 2025 04:42
• My kind of Philosophy (Teddy.15) This sounds so Buddhist. In so few words so much wisdom. Far deeper than...
  September 14th, 2025 04:31
• The Language Of Emotion Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I love your love for music Andy. I share that with you. It spans gender,...
  September 14th, 2025 04:29
• Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange) In these few words lies volumes of deeper understanding. I am glad for the...
  September 14th, 2025 04:26
• The Fear of Invisibility. (G.Cabús) Words that feel so true and with that truth the control needed to attain...
  September 14th, 2025 04:19
• Bye-Bye Time (Thomas W Case) Gems of truth here Thomas. As time passes comes the recognition that...
  September 14th, 2025 04:15
• A Lighthouse (Emery Walker) The personification in this allegory makes it a parable. We all choose who...
  September 14th, 2025 04:12
• cicadas (Cody James) Beautiful and most poetic the metaphor works so well and the imagery is...
  September 13th, 2025 20:02
• I Think You\'re Sore, I Think I\'m Done (Cdsplayer) A poem that to me speaks of emotion over riding common sense. Here obvious...
  September 13th, 2025 19:12
• Scorched Bloom (FallingAwake2) A most wonderful metaphor very graphic in imagery and a story well woven
  September 13th, 2025 19:07
• June Snow (Berniece) Dark and horrific the consequences of a natural disaster. Although a real...
  September 13th, 2025 18:18
• Faces (Thoughtless) This one was very well written Thoughtless so true it is and a fave
  September 13th, 2025 17:12
• That (Keeter C) Age takes us all beauty, health and all. Nicely done
  September 13th, 2025 16:08
• heart shaped metal (Luke Bensing) The world is full of contradictions and paradoxes here they are voiced....
  September 13th, 2025 16:06
• Flame (Amethyste) Indeed there is no handle, corners or shape to a flame. Nicely doen
  September 13th, 2025 16:05
• I Partake in Joy (Katie B.) Joy the ultimate high. A wonderful write nicely done
  September 13th, 2025 16:03
• The Word The Freedom by Vladimir Visotski (Ksey_Gan) So much philosophy in this poem it burst with meaning. We do not value...
  September 13th, 2025 14:50
• The Time Travellers Tragedy (TommyDingo) So well put in sci-fi lingo. We are all time travelers that can only go...
  September 13th, 2025 14:42
• Gone too soon (BlessedbyGod) A beautiful tribute and call to others to care enough to listen. Well...
  September 13th, 2025 14:37
• Remembrance of Iryna Zarutska, who lost her life on the way home from work. (Friendship) A man with mental illness not treated for his past violence. Courts,...
  September 13th, 2025 14:34
• LOVED YET ALONE (Eira Solen) The vagueness in this poem allows the reader to read into it their own...
  September 13th, 2025 14:26
• Doe-eyed Dolly (EllieOxford513) Such a good write of double values and unreasonable expectations that...
  September 13th, 2025 14:25
• Olegario Sepúlveda [Shoemaker Talcahuano] (Pablo Neruda) (Vogelfrei) Strangely the English version felt more real. Usually this is not so. The...
  September 13th, 2025 14:21
• Empty Elevator (Lore) Powerful and as you said raw it speak of words not spoken, trips not taken...
  September 13th, 2025 14:14
• Howdy India (Ray Moonee) Politicians here today gone tomorrow and treaties the same. A treaty only...
  September 13th, 2025 14:03
• I Believe In God (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A poem of belief and faith and a proclamation to others. Nicely written
  September 13th, 2025 11:56
• To Charlie (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt this one is deeper than it appears (License for others that hide from...
  September 13th, 2025 11:55
• Haikus (Priya Tomar) Beautiful and so nature like. A lovely pair of haikus
  September 13th, 2025 11:51
• Earth Song (Jyoti Verma) Very nicely written a lovely thought oh that it were true and that people...
  September 13th, 2025 11:50
• And now a joke - argh! (Orchidee) Wisdom hidden behind humor as a shield. Nicely done Orchi
  September 13th, 2025 11:47
• Inferno manifesto (Lorenz) Nicely written Lorenz this surrealistic vision is portrayed in various...
  September 13th, 2025 10:37
• To the Light (Igor Vykhovanets) Another good set of poems many political that tell us what we know in a...
  September 13th, 2025 10:31
• The Pause (Gray0328) Gray these are beautiful poetic lines that speak prophetically of our...
  September 13th, 2025 10:28
• Villains (Fränz Müller) Paradoxical by conventional thought reality is a hard task master. A poem...
  September 13th, 2025 10:24
• \"I Let It Go\" \"छोड़ दी मैंने\" (Navjot Singh Nagra) The Buddha said that the key to nirvana is letting go of all desire....
  September 13th, 2025 08:59
• Floatin Clouds (RSM0812) Clouds hold dreams and every once in a while they rain on us. A most...
  September 13th, 2025 08:55
• Plenty of fish in the sea. (Sophia Garcia) I\'m a picky fish eater myself and I know all fish eat. It\'s what they...
  September 13th, 2025 08:53
• AnalysisByPerplexityAI-Volume 43-HotHarvest--30Aug2025-Part 1 (Soman Ragavan) Another great review of a poem of political importance over domination....
  September 13th, 2025 07:57
• Exsanguination Nation (Tristan Robert Lange) This poem brings to mind several images. The snake on the banner (Don\'t...
  September 13th, 2025 07:14
• Prey (Maplespal) Poem of power. A declaration of victory. Powerfully worded it sends the...
  September 13th, 2025 07:03
• Surging forward (Doc X) A poem full of motivation and encouragement. Nicely worded with rhyme it...
  September 13th, 2025 07:00
• Little Prince (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Childlike in its innocence it does convince with simple rhyme a feeling...
  September 13th, 2025 06:59
• Particularly Any in Particular (Keyara S Trotman) Love some say distorts the view others say it clarifies vision I say enjoy...
  September 13th, 2025 06:54
• \"Brother Fred\" (Fred1794) I hear the questioning of one\'s image and even gender in this poem the...
  September 13th, 2025 06:46
• memories (Jim56) Pictures and memories fade and discolor but remain in drawers and mind. A...
  September 13th, 2025 06:38
• FAR AWAY (Saswati das) The poem begins in darkness turned by others persuasion it looks to...
  September 13th, 2025 06:36
• of resonances (Arqios) Thunderstruck, tongue stuck words caught in the throat, such beautiful...
  September 13th, 2025 06:31
• Break-Fast (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A poem that deserves more thought than initial review. Breakfast is best...
  September 13th, 2025 04:28
• STREETLIGHTS FLICKER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Late night writing in a poem that rocks with rhythm in ABAB rhyme. Nicely...
  September 13th, 2025 04:22
• The Cow That Stood Too Firm (Matthew R. Callies) We often put on ourselves the strangest challenges overestimating our own...
  September 13th, 2025 04:19
• Condition (Bashirah Asuku) A poem that to me shows inner turmoil that is not understood. A poem with...
  September 13th, 2025 04:16
• Cycle (MatPie) This poem gives a feel of day by day taking things as they come and going...
  September 13th, 2025 04:12