Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Love (Hanible) A very nice poem of unity in soul and love. Very nice
  February 17th, 2025 13:49
• Hope (13LaurenD) A poem of encouragement that speaks with power about the ability of the...
  February 17th, 2025 13:45
• Confused and dying (EvenwheniLie) Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
  February 17th, 2025 13:42
• Distance (Mik) Yes I feel the noise and the beat of the words and internal rhyme make...
  February 17th, 2025 13:40
• My Forlorn Mind (Arshia) Most interestingly worded to cause doubt and uncertainty it reads well and...
  February 17th, 2025 13:34
• (Don\'t) Leave me! (Melancholia) A feel of loss in this poem and a reaching out. Very nicely expressed in...
  February 17th, 2025 13:28
• With A Gentle Dust Of Cinnamon (ADarkerMind) Of your poems this is one of my favorites, it is dark as usual but carries...
  February 17th, 2025 13:26
• My dreams (RSM0812) Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
  February 17th, 2025 11:14
• Love me Father (Poetaldo) Service to others a work of love. Nicely written
  February 17th, 2025 11:13
• Tyrant\'s Creed (Mohammad younus koul) Another great write and the last line is a fave. Brilliant!
  February 17th, 2025 11:09
• Mom (Serra) There is nothing more secure than a mother\'s love. Short and very nice...
  February 17th, 2025 10:10
• If in fact. (Davidbrailsford) Such a common view that so many have yet so narcissistic in view. If we...
  February 17th, 2025 09:23
• Within The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm) Much longer than most of your works this one has such depth and...
  February 17th, 2025 09:21
• If I was a tree (CuriousWanderer) Great reflections and aspirations. Such nice desires and contemplation of...
  February 17th, 2025 09:18
• Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times) (Neville) Isn\'t that what poetry is know for? Creating new words, how many did...
  February 17th, 2025 09:15
• Nobody Knows (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A great message to send to people that stay unknown to others. Very nice
  February 17th, 2025 09:09
• BBQ (Tony36) You are making me hungry a fun read Tony
  February 17th, 2025 09:07
• Sixes (Tristan Robert Lange) What a strong poem that speaks with biblical power but in contradiction...
  February 17th, 2025 09:03
• A season of change (Funmiwrites) Quite the love letter this poem reads hard and has power. Loved it
  February 17th, 2025 08:19
• Watching leaves fall (Maplespal) From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for...
  February 17th, 2025 08:15
• Trump the devil (2781) All good stories require a villain, for God there must be a devil and so...
  February 17th, 2025 08:09
• Shadow (Cassie58) Here in a personal story one feels the curiosity, shock at discovery and...
  February 17th, 2025 08:05
• Data Plots (Whats write for me) Indeed too bad that we don\'t have them for our every day activities and...
  February 17th, 2025 08:00
• Sloth Superpower (Gray0328) Interesting animals and a possible metaphor. Nicely done Gray
  February 17th, 2025 06:00
• hedgehog buddy (Jim56) Cute and so much a part of nature this poem could well be in a children\'s...
  February 17th, 2025 05:59
• Eternal Secret (Haleyalexis) Pain and anguish so aptly expressed where the past is an anchor that pulls...
  February 17th, 2025 05:34
• GRAPE (Laddukavi) This poem and its worded meter give the sense of munching. Nice
  February 17th, 2025 05:32
• MidNight Haikus (Reynaldo Casison) Very nicely written these three Haiku. They give a splendid pictures to...
  February 17th, 2025 05:31
• One for the Ladies (Mutley Ravishes) A frightening thought for those who have undergone menses and now like...
  February 17th, 2025 05:29
• A silent conversation (Vishakha) This poem grows more cryptic the more it is read and after three readings...
  February 17th, 2025 05:19
• The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence) Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait...
  February 17th, 2025 05:10
• Winter Soldiers And NPCs (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I echo the last line of this poem. When we are too connected we are forced...
  February 17th, 2025 05:00
• Madness (Tkatie118) The pacing and beat to this poem as well as other things remind me of Ren...
  February 17th, 2025 04:57
• BOXING BOOTH (Nephilim56) In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical...
  February 17th, 2025 04:50
• Poor and Needy (Orchidee) Love this one Orchi. In each of our minds aren\'t we all needy? I know I...
  February 17th, 2025 04:46
• ‘til all my breath is You (Arqios) Funny how we like our poisons. Be it drugs, cholesterol, sugar,...
  February 17th, 2025 04:41
• No1 from MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards) There may be nothing for dinner but there is plenty in this short helping...
  February 17th, 2025 04:36
• Tarred and Feathered. (David Wakeling) There is not much difference between extremes a communist, a fascist,...
  February 17th, 2025 04:33
• Beautiful Morning (Doggerel Dave) Lived in Oklahoma once for a few years and you haven\'t missed much. As...
  February 17th, 2025 04:25
• Walking In The Store. (Goldfinch60) Ah Gold I found that my vision was fading some time back and it can lead...
  February 17th, 2025 04:17
• Love Confessional (Parisab) To love something you must know it and to know it is to live it. A poem of...
  February 17th, 2025 04:13
• Who is more civilized (EvenwheniLie) With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so...
  February 16th, 2025 19:00
• the clover (Sheta) A poem of love lost and a broken heart. Nicely written
  February 16th, 2025 18:58
• The Love I wasn\'t looking for (Ugly) Caught by the heart and then the loss that has transformed happiness into...
  February 16th, 2025 18:56
• In the midst of death Montmartre lament (Emile Dubois) So true that we hold onto past garbage that would be better ejected but...
  February 16th, 2025 17:37
• Tears (CuriousWanderer) A poem that shows that emoting is not a bad thing. Nicely worded with a...
  February 16th, 2025 17:34
• The Sledgehammer - in Trumps own words (Raidoc) A political poem on a hotly contested topic. Interesting and brave to say...
  February 16th, 2025 17:32
• Ruined mind (Shadowbones) I hear the pain in this poem that seems tragic and dark. Nice wording
  February 16th, 2025 17:30
• Aging (MendedFences27) I remember my grandfather stopped reading the obituaries and when I asked...
  February 16th, 2025 17:29
• Love poems. (Hey!) I can hear the anguish in this poem and the pain of separated lovers. Well...
  February 16th, 2025 17:27
• Don’t cry for me Africa (Poetaldo) A heart felt poem for people on the African continent. Nicely done
  February 16th, 2025 17:24
• Do or Dare (RSM0812) A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare?...
  February 16th, 2025 14:22
• I never meant to (Nikola) Gratitude expressed and in any relationship both carry the burden. A very...
  February 16th, 2025 14:21
• A nice prescription of sleep (Amy Michelle Mosier) Wounds anesthetized whether by drug or anything else seldom heal as well....
  February 16th, 2025 14:19
• Deep In The Heart (Hanible) Although metaphor many are dependent enough on love to do these things and...
  February 16th, 2025 14:17
• Last Moment (A.H. Browning) A great write about loss. Poignant and heart felt. Yes I agree the...
  February 16th, 2025 14:15
• Losers (Kevin Michael Bloor) Great word usage in this poem a bit of humor that unfortunately is...
  February 16th, 2025 14:11
• Imagining the Impossible (Teddy.15) To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book...
  February 16th, 2025 14:08
• To Fight Another Day ... (Kurt Philip Behm) A tribute to those who have fought and died. Lovely
  February 16th, 2025 14:06
• Micro poem (Thoughtless) This has a George Carlin type of word play to it. Loved it
  February 16th, 2025 14:05
• The Road (MendedFences27) This is a fine poem but may not have gotten all the attention it should...
  February 16th, 2025 14:04
• The Caterpillar (R. Gordon Zyne) Once again your metaphor is delightfully pictured in images each of which...
  February 16th, 2025 09:10
• My Apologies, It IS Only...Nevermind (Cheeky Missy) You remind me of the cold and how it increases the hunger. Once again I...
  February 16th, 2025 09:07
• Diary Of My Heart (Ajon4wheels) A heartfelt read of life and its injustice and brutality but love...
  February 16th, 2025 09:04
• Snail in love with mushroom (Pineapple_pizza018) Strange love but who\'s to say to each their own. Such a metaphor for...
  February 16th, 2025 09:00
• Ode to Cheeseburger Casserole (Whats write for me) Remember the days that the meal was the same every day and how hunger...
  February 16th, 2025 08:55
• Truck Driving Man (Tony36) I hear a song here. Good write Tony
  February 16th, 2025 08:52
• Thick Fog (John Prophet) Beautiful images each word defining a picture Lovely write
  February 16th, 2025 08:51
• Rose Candle Haiku (Reynaldo Casison) A beautiful image
  February 16th, 2025 08:48
• One Sixty One Sixty... (Shantha Teldeniya) Nicely said with poetic form
  February 16th, 2025 08:42
• Fishbowl Fatigue (Tristan Robert Lange) It is a hardwired fact that humans are cruel as well as kind. Cowardly as...
  February 16th, 2025 08:38
• Anniversary Bouquet (Cassie58) A beautiful write lustrous in its imagery and full of emotion. Lovely...
  February 16th, 2025 06:31
• Fury (Paul Gerard Reed) This poem full of wonderful metaphor and great lines was a welcome read
  February 16th, 2025 06:29
• my friend robin (Jim56) There are many in this life that sing us songs of beauty and then leave. A...
  February 16th, 2025 06:27
• ON A SAINT FAUSTINO’ S DAY IN 2025 (Swarovski20) That is what I love about these readings, I learn something new. Never too...
  February 16th, 2025 06:25
• The Quiet Sanctum (Gray0328) I have felt it and still feel it. A wonderful write of what is needed
  February 16th, 2025 06:20
• Message 3 (Maplespal) A wonderful message that should resonate in all of us
  February 16th, 2025 06:18
• A Solitary Path (Sehrab Sathoo) Beautifully written in heroic form with great imagery this poem retells...
  February 16th, 2025 05:18
• Buttercup (Caring dove) There are limitations to all things and by knowing our boundaries we can...
  February 16th, 2025 05:16
• Manager Or Slave Master? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A most interesting read where a real majic in practice and theory shows...
  February 16th, 2025 05:14
• Some Things She Once Said (Neville) Neville forgive me but this took me as personification of Id meets Ego....
  February 16th, 2025 05:10
• maybe (Thoughtless) Clever and creative. Irma is also the word for sister in Portuguese and...
  February 16th, 2025 04:58
• Kintsugi (Putu.voyager) This poem a very good example of kintsugi is pieced together in a most...
  February 16th, 2025 04:56
• The Beauty of Nature (Shahla Latifi) When one\'s inner nature is accepted and connects with outer nature then...
  February 16th, 2025 04:50
• Orange Man (James Michael) Orange one of the hardest words to rhyme a wonderful fruit and the fruit...
  February 16th, 2025 04:47
• Forgive Your Past Self (Abraham Konchellah) This from the fount to the wording is a haunting write that gives advice...
  February 16th, 2025 04:45
• Dear Winstun (Mutley Ravishes) In my dullness this one seemed a bit cryptic but I loved the feel of the...
  February 16th, 2025 04:42
• Star shine brightly (Laddukavi) And why not? Stars being suns of their own most larger than ours why not...
  February 16th, 2025 04:39
• The Ephemeral Mind (Matthew J. Bays) Like many great works they have many meanings to different people and so...
  February 16th, 2025 04:38
• One To The Power Of X (RickthePoetWarrior) Stump the chump dump the Trump I say. A fun read
  February 16th, 2025 04:34
• Dear Loss by Alexander Vertinsky (Ksey_Gan) So well written in metaphor this process of loss and moving on that clings...
  February 16th, 2025 04:30
• Broken (MendedFences27) A poem of hope that spins gold out of straw. A lovely work
  February 16th, 2025 04:27
• The World is Broken (R. Gordon Zyne) A most moving write, moving because it\'s right. To gain a fave from me...
  February 16th, 2025 04:24
• OLD SOLDIER (Nephilim56) This poem makes clear the devastation of war and the question that occurs...
  February 16th, 2025 04:20
• Windfall (2781) How times have changed. The bank used to give you coin rolls and you would...
  February 16th, 2025 04:18
• Graces Given (Orchidee) This hymn seems to represent a good deal of chorus and should be fun to...
  February 16th, 2025 04:12
• Just a Bit Of Fun (Poetic Licence) Now one of the qualifications of a fave is something that moves me. The...
  February 16th, 2025 04:09
• An apology to the one. (Hey!) Heartfelt powerful, emotive this reads of turmoil and despair. Emotion so...
  February 16th, 2025 04:05
• Knowledge No more (David Wakeling) The dichotomy of thought and emotion displayed here in a soliloquy that is...
  February 16th, 2025 03:58
• poetry in time (Demar Desu) It appears that you have captured more than a couple. Your writes are...
  February 16th, 2025 03:51