Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Weathering the storm (Nicole Pritchard)
Such a metaphoric ride over a wild part of the soul. Nicely written
October 1st, 2025 17:22 - Encryption of light (Amethyste)
Now this one make the mind sweat, and the brain burn until thoughts turn...
October 1st, 2025 16:21 - M (M.E.M.)
First of each line alliteration. Very nicely written
October 1st, 2025 15:25 - Butterfly (RSM0812)
The freedom of a butterfly in this poem. Well done
October 1st, 2025 15:23 - Mary Primrose (Katdream)
A poem in preparation for Halloween right in the the proper month. Nicely...
October 1st, 2025 15:21 - I don\'t want to go crazy by Alexandr Pushkin (Ksey_Gan)
One has to ask what is mental illness or madness and how is it different...
October 1st, 2025 11:59 - On My Tombstone (Kurt Philip Behm)
The facts of life running its course. Well written my friend
October 1st, 2025 11:56 - The Measure of Forgiveness (Gray0328)
Know that story but here told in rhyme it is nicely told. Well done Gray
October 1st, 2025 11:55 - National freedom: At 65 (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
A beautiful tribute to a country. Nicely written
October 1st, 2025 10:57 - suicide gate (Lorenz)
Dark and as a portent of coming death and destruction it has a cold feel...
October 1st, 2025 10:55 - Shadowland (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A sad poem of loss. There is a sense of nostalgia and feel of pain with...
October 1st, 2025 10:21 - Angelβs White Feather (Ajon4wheels)
There is anger and resentment in this write. It speaks of past pain...
October 1st, 2025 09:31 - Forgive me (2781)
I like the doubt shown in the beginning of this poem it reveals open...
October 1st, 2025 09:29 - Wet Paper (Anthony Hanible)
The best time to write is times of high emotion. Nicely written
October 1st, 2025 09:26 - Revelation (Siva Pranav)
A poem of a woman\'s strength and the power beneath. Lovely
October 1st, 2025 09:24 - Thankful (Godβs Will)
A great write of gratefulness and a recognition of sacrifice given. A...
October 1st, 2025 08:17 - Mother Nature tends to her own. (Friendship)
Yes my friend she does indeed. A most wonderful poem of nature taking care...
October 1st, 2025 08:15 - The last thirteen (Lore)
So many reasons of why and each with an answer to resolve it that remains...
October 1st, 2025 07:14 - Graveyard of Suns (Iris Lynn)
A feel of dimed darkness from the start this poem carries a sense of...
October 1st, 2025 07:09 - time and tide (Jim56)
Very nice Jim yes time never flows backward but goes onward like a river...
October 1st, 2025 07:06 - Strange Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange)
This seems appropriate for the season and sets the tone with darkness. A...
October 1st, 2025 07:04 - KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards)
A wonderful haiku that is so fitting for that art form. Thanks for sharing
October 1st, 2025 07:00 - A \"High\" moment #257 (Maplespal)
Was this really written during a high? A good poem that speaks of feelings...
October 1st, 2025 05:26 - sunflowers (Arqios)
I must say Cryptic your poems are deep waters with strong currents. Here...
October 1st, 2025 05:24 - I would do anything (William Hromada)
A declaration of love indeed in this poem. Well rhymed and nicely written.
October 1st, 2025 04:37 - \"Fore!\" (Aa Harvey)
A collage of pictures painted in words of past snapshots brought into the...
October 1st, 2025 04:36 - Tina Remember Me (Teacher Kevin)
A lovely poem of soft and vivid memories of a loving past. Very nicely...
October 1st, 2025 04:32 - Retirement Speech On Mr Ragavan By A Colleague (Soman Ragavan)
A tribute to years of service and a goodbye to a chapter in life. A moving...
October 1st, 2025 04:30 - Harroween (Aman 12)
I love the similes and allegories in this poem most original in its satire...
October 1st, 2025 04:27 - Hurricane Swell (Whats write for me)
I have been in mire and deep waters where the current pulls one off their...
October 1st, 2025 04:25 - I\'d give you a dozen fireflies (Amy Michelle Mosier)
It is the intention that counts and this poem says that. You can feel the...
October 1st, 2025 04:22 - BEFORE NEW DAWN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Love the personification in this poem where images take on human...
October 1st, 2025 04:21 - βπ¬πͺππ©π¦πͺπ’π«π±π° ππ©π© π£π¬π― ππ¬π±π₯π¦π«π€ ... π¦π±π° ππ¬π―π±π₯ (Keyara S Trotman)
An implanted acrostic message of love makes this poem one that a reader...
October 1st, 2025 04:19 - Dystopian Rap (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I remember reading Brave New World, 1984 and they at the time seemed so...
October 1st, 2025 04:13 - New Pages. (Goldfinch60)
A poem written of days in a life and chapters in a book both of which are...
October 1st, 2025 04:09 - Mountain Peak (RSM0812)
I love the imagery and rhyme in this poem it is wonderfully done
September 30th, 2025 21:05 - Cries of the World (Cedrick)
Powerful and condemning this poem calls one and all to not just pretend...
September 30th, 2025 21:03 - On the inside and out (Natavia Hobert)
The facade and the body underneath. The main structure and the finished...
September 30th, 2025 21:02 - WHAT WAS TAKEN (David Welch)
The bow of Aquiles seems to have found its way into this poem. A lovely...
September 30th, 2025 20:57 - instant society (Gray0328)
Gray this one hits point after point connecting thoughts. A wonderful...
September 30th, 2025 19:09 - Can my brother be my keeper (EvenwheniLie)
A wonderful set of rhyme in this poem intricate and flowing it makes...
September 30th, 2025 19:07 - Sunder (Duran Mazzana)
Disguised in words the meaning of past intentions. Nicely done.
September 30th, 2025 19:04 - A Borrowed Shadow (Haleyalexis)
A great metaphor used in this poem. Nicely written
September 30th, 2025 18:56 - Efforts (Morgue)
This gives the feel of a one sided relationship where resentment seeps in...
September 30th, 2025 16:08 - Your Lips (Amandatoriii)
An absence so obviously felt in this poem of missing someone. Nicely...
September 30th, 2025 16:03 - Love\'s Constant (Kaz)
The last line struck me hard as any truth does. Love knows no time, indeed...
September 30th, 2025 16:01 - Nothing To Fear (Teacher Kevin)
A poem of death the great equalizer and of resurrection a good write
September 30th, 2025 14:46 - Harmony (Violet_Writes)
A poem of missing a sister that was close long ago and drifted away. Well...
September 30th, 2025 14:43 - Field of Dreams (Poetaldo)
A good read and I knew of a church that sold such fields of dreams in...
September 30th, 2025 14:40 - They killed his voice (Lore)
A sad poem dark and with little hope. Bullying has been around as long as...
September 30th, 2025 14:38 - create (Lunarchloedip)
Writing an act of creation but for whom. Good to have a friend. With great...
September 30th, 2025 13:12 - Radio Static (Berniece)
A poem of free associations that roll off the page and flow like spilled...
September 30th, 2025 12:44 - Awake and be alert (Candlelight)
A most cryptic poem not knowing what Rosemary sang. Most interesting
September 30th, 2025 12:41 - The night angel (Lorenz)
This seems in spirit with the Little prince. A spiritual write. Nicely...
September 30th, 2025 10:54 - AD 1: The Year of Beginnings (Matthew R. Callies)
A poem of historical events that span the centuries. Well written and the...
September 30th, 2025 10:19 - La Verite Triomphe (Kurt Philip Behm)
Nice one Kurt another truth stated. Some things do seem to be true and...
September 30th, 2025 10:07 - 2 Corinthians 5:17 (Godβs Will)
A poetic challenge for the reader to give a new try. Nicely written a more...
September 30th, 2025 09:45 - Saint Sinner (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan what a wonderful acrostic hidden in this poem. What ever sin is we...
September 30th, 2025 09:06 - Ice and Snowflakes βοΈ (FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice)
How many of us dream of things beyond our grasp and then we must move on...
September 30th, 2025 09:02 - Stop saying the word I can\'t. (Friendship)
What an amazing poem, I think your best, not just in concept and theme...
September 30th, 2025 08:59 - My Little God (Cellinic)
A wonderful poem of how we all have our gods big or small in form or not...
September 30th, 2025 07:51 - A Lust Of Intimacy (Iris Lynn)
Wow! A poem contrary to modern thought where passion is all that\'s...
September 30th, 2025 07:42 - The Word Of The Day Pt3 (Anthony Hanible)
Not only good advice but an order that must be obeyed if we are to go on....
September 30th, 2025 07:40 - A Life & The tree (Maplespal)
It is for the first that fave is given although the second is wonderful as...
September 30th, 2025 07:39 - Life and Death: Nature\'s Control On Everything (HrishikeshManohar)
So true I have been through them both literal and metaphoric in emotion...
September 30th, 2025 06:42 - To be Brave (GenXer Shamrocker βοΈ)
You have a natural way of using rhyme and near rhyme to hold the interest...
September 30th, 2025 06:39 - guide dogs (Jim56)
A poem dedicated to the service dog a true friend and helper for the...
September 30th, 2025 06:34 - Why Your Beautiful (William Hromada)
Beauty comes in many forms and is seen through different eyes in a...
September 30th, 2025 05:25 - Vincent (Arqios)
Subtle yet the message caught like the accent of fine brush strokes and...
September 30th, 2025 05:24 - Paper Crowns (Corian Baek)
This poem strikes in two directions for me, one nostalgia for I remember...
September 30th, 2025 04:42 - Little me (Arcane-)
A poem of recognition in change. Nicely worded this is well done
September 30th, 2025 04:37 - I Became Quiet (Kaelyn Jade)
A very sad poem when you take away one\'s music you have killed their...
September 30th, 2025 04:36 - Mama (quick poems in a sketchbook, 1) (DeadRose)
A proclamation of importance made in this tribute of a poem to a mother....
September 30th, 2025 04:31 - My love, my love (RSM0812)
There is a poetic rhythm to this poem that in rhyme and meter that carries...
September 30th, 2025 04:29 - Time (SJSangeetha)
It is not just words that make a poem but a feeling. This message of...
September 30th, 2025 04:24 - Shattered silence (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
This is a tragic poem of abuse and sadness. The direct question of...
September 30th, 2025 04:21 - She Held On (Sassy Lou)
A poem of tenacity and grit like determination displayed in this poem that...
September 30th, 2025 04:17 - Sober Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
In transition from one stage of development to another I get these...
September 30th, 2025 04:10 - DERELICT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This poem paints beautifully a picture of what was once a house fallen...
September 30th, 2025 04:07 - πππ°π±π’π― ππ± ππ²π―π€π’π―πΆ (Keyara S Trotman)
I see in this poem a plea to other to surrender to something greater to be...
September 30th, 2025 04:02 - Point Taken (Tom Dylan)
Words and actions not always the same. A facade friend just for...
September 30th, 2025 03:59 - Tea And Coffee. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing better in a social situation than an expresso. But then I do like...
September 30th, 2025 03:56 - Juggernaut (FrΓ€nz MΓΌller)
A poetic call or challenge. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 20:25 - SLED DOG (David Welch)
A great story in poetic form. This narrative poem shows great rhyme and...
September 29th, 2025 20:24 - Crescent Moon (Dyslexic.gun)
Bait? A message given now the wait. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 18:52 - Forever our love (Shearonder1987)
A poem of devotion and commitment. Nicely written.
September 29th, 2025 17:47 - Heavyweight. (Natavia Hobert)
A burden to be lifted. Nicely written
September 29th, 2025 17:46 - Bad memories (Amethyste)
They can not be deleted only painted over. A thought provoking write well...
September 29th, 2025 17:45 - Darkest Nights (Ladywithaquill)
It is the last line that makes this poem so meaningful. Love doesn\'t die...
September 29th, 2025 17:43 - Beautifully Ugly (Violet_Writes)
I should agree that there is beauty in ugliness if one only looks closely....
September 29th, 2025 17:40 - Solace (TommyDingo)
Very nicely written with very nice lines. Loved the flow and feel. Well...
September 29th, 2025 17:37 - Silvermans Bank of Opertunity (Max Manley)
A fun read and a bit identifiable. Well done
September 29th, 2025 17:32 - Man not yet free (Georgia Watson)
Powerful and I have to agree I don\'t see that man should be free either....
September 29th, 2025 17:30 - GuardiΓ£o da educaΓ§Γ£o (Dayan puga)
Uma poema muito bonita. Com palavras e imagens resplendentes. Gostei
September 29th, 2025 17:27 - Opened mind. (Friendship)
A poem of opening the mind to differences that are not part of you. This...
September 29th, 2025 15:18 - You tell me that I still have time (Poetaldo)
Appreciating nature no higher worship for me. Nicely done
September 29th, 2025 14:42 - Textbook Seduction (Anas Merchant)
Halves in opposites in this poem. Well written in rhyme as well nicely
September 29th, 2025 14:40 - not to offend the imbeciles (Gray0328)
Thinly veiled this poem speaks to me against the political correctness...
September 29th, 2025 14:34 - Chains in the Cubicle (Jyoti Verma)
This poem has a good sense of rhythm and meter with its rhyme making it...
September 29th, 2025 14:31 - Soul Breaker (Aa Harvey)
A breach of trust and a broken relationship. Life is tough and loving...
September 29th, 2025 14:29
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