Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Children Of Tomorrow (Abdullah123) Beautiful words mark a sad and tragic cycle. So nicely worded a fave
  September 27th, 2025 06:08
• ℌ𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔬𝔫𝔦𝔠 (Keyara S Trotman) I do believe and have experienced that laughter is good medicine for...
  September 27th, 2025 05:30
• residue map (Arqios) Here in metaphor or allegory a great lesson. Markers need to be left. So...
  September 27th, 2025 05:27
• Flashback (Doc X) Attraction and enchantment found in this poem. Nice use of imagery and...
  September 27th, 2025 04:53
• Burnt Pancakes (N. Christine) So accustomed to life in an age of technology our thoughts of the past...
  September 27th, 2025 04:51
• FIRST STEPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Advice from age and words in one\'s passing to guide the young. Very...
  September 27th, 2025 04:48
• A New Discovery (Anas Merchant) A poem of attraction it has some very good lines (There is a gathering of...
  September 27th, 2025 04:46
• Mayflies (Thoughtless) This write starts on erotic and quickly erupts into sexual. Its sensual...
  September 27th, 2025 04:42
• Vintrice Johnson Biography (2025 Update) (Vintrice C. Johnson) A homage to one admired. Nicely written
  September 27th, 2025 04:39
• The Mask (RaysThroughDarkness) A great poem of contentment showing that one is happy the way that they...
  September 27th, 2025 04:31
• The Pretty Pea (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) And so it is with words as well. Some of the sweet poetry I heard as a...
  September 27th, 2025 04:20
• Alchemy of writing (Poetic Dan) Nicely written Dan, I too have felt this and live it as well.
  September 27th, 2025 04:17
• STABLE BOY (David Welch) A good old western like I used to watch on TV as a kid. It has the plot,...
  September 27th, 2025 04:14
• I Need To Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Congratulations on your most prolific work. Keep up the writing.
  September 27th, 2025 04:10
• Kathleen (Goldfinch60) A beautiful tribute to a beautiful voice. Nicely done Andy
  September 27th, 2025 04:08
• Worth (Keeter C) My thoughts exactly and a frightening one as well. Very nicely written
  September 26th, 2025 19:08
• Manifesto Of A Poet (Anas Merchant) A proclamation indeed what each poet would wish to be able to do. Nicely...
  September 26th, 2025 18:19
• Precious (BoxMyHeart) Moments are precious and they don\'t return. Nicely written
  September 26th, 2025 18:17
• I am nothing but a lumped knapsack of hopes (Yassin Tamam) A poem that realizes the effects of medication and the bad part too....
  September 26th, 2025 18:16
• Lonely (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Poetry is good therapy. A good write.
  September 26th, 2025 18:12
• 11/22/63 (Corian Baek) There are many good lines here and the metaphors are very good Lovely
  September 26th, 2025 14:54
• What more do they want? (Natavia Hobert) A poem of regrets well written. It comes through sad.
  September 26th, 2025 14:52
• Stache (A Boy With Roses) Metaphoric and mind provoking this write seems sensual. Nice
  September 26th, 2025 14:50
• The Room (Lore) The tragedy of the loss of a child is heard in this poem. No parent should...
  September 26th, 2025 12:56
• We Are Meant Two Be (William Hromada) Clever play on Two in the title. A poem of togetherness and bond. Nicely...
  September 26th, 2025 12:54
• People-Pleasing (Xalvazora) A tale of life and how it works or rather doesn\'t work. Well written
  September 26th, 2025 12:52
• Rampant diabolical skulduggery... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Another ramble through the halls of the cosmos and into the depths of the...
  September 26th, 2025 12:50
• My Mind\'s Been Hijacked! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A hijacking of the mind usually is a high jacking of the mind with some...
  September 26th, 2025 10:43
• \"It\'s not a bad life, just a bad day.” (Violet_Writes) This poem speaks of internal pain that can only be expressed through self...
  September 26th, 2025 10:41
• The winds of Neptune (Lorenz) This sounds very cosmic to me and if it were anyone else I would guess...
  September 26th, 2025 10:39
• The Wait (Kurt Philip Behm) Ha! Kurt you have hit it with this one. A pet peeve of mine works that go...
  September 26th, 2025 10:36
• Orbiting Solitude (Matthew R. Callies) Cosmic in nature this poem speaks of us. Well written
  September 26th, 2025 10:34
• Well (Not) A most interesting metaphor often used for writing and I wonder if this is...
  September 26th, 2025 10:32
• The path untraveled (God’s Will) It makes sense that if we want to be in a different place that we are...
  September 26th, 2025 10:29
• AnalysisByChatGPT-volume 143 -ColCrimes-An overview--10Aug2025 (Soman Ragavan) This appears another set of analysis of poems regarding historical...
  September 26th, 2025 10:28
• Shadows Walk Again (Tristan Robert Lange) I remain amazed by your diversity in writing, poetry and songs. This song...
  September 26th, 2025 08:37
• What are we waiting for? (Håkan Renström) A existential write in a world that pushes so hard for material success we...
  September 26th, 2025 08:34
• I don’t miss you (N. Christine) This set of poems play out like snap shots that reflect yesterdays....
  September 26th, 2025 08:32
• Rediscovering the Merciless World in Times of Sickness (Samer Amin) Quite the story of society in its crowded rat race where each person is...
  September 26th, 2025 08:30
• The Vultures Dance (Paul Bell) The horrors of war, a savage act by a savage race. Nicely depicted in all...
  September 26th, 2025 08:12
• Bad Week Breakdown (Tom Dylan) We all have a child in us even when we have grown up. Nothing wrong with a...
  September 26th, 2025 08:08
• P.E.A.C.E (Keyara S Trotman) Good advice to all and the world would be a better place if people...
  September 26th, 2025 08:05
• LIMERICKS 151, 152 & 153 (Michael Edwards) Again you have made my day with three good ones that each are tied...
  September 26th, 2025 05:37
• no rules (Jim56) Life is like a box of chocolates you never know what you will get. Go with...
  September 26th, 2025 05:34
• I\'ll sing (Maplespal) A potential terror that may not be but none the less exists in the mind....
  September 26th, 2025 05:32
• the crooked compass (Arqios) A poem of perceptions where time bends, and colors fade but all must be...
  September 26th, 2025 05:27
• Death (RSM0812) Death or sleep in this poem. A write of doom or nightmare. Written in...
  September 26th, 2025 04:56
• The Deed (Aman 12) Unconventional, most interesting juxtapositions, graphic and symbolic it...
  September 26th, 2025 03:49
• Wounds (Anthony Hanible) The opposite of what one would think one would be grateful for but true...
  September 26th, 2025 03:47
• CREADON LOW COTTAGE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) There are strong feelings of anxiety and fear in this poem that hauntingly...
  September 26th, 2025 03:45
• I don’t want you (Primrose) Strong words in this write. I is filled with anger and fear speaking...
  September 26th, 2025 03:40
• A TALE OF BEAUTY AND HER BEAST (REBELLIOUS SOUL) Drama in poetic style. A mutual meeting of needs in free verse. Well done
  September 26th, 2025 03:36
• Coincidence. (Goldfinch60) Some call it coincidence I call it synchronicity either way it feels...
  September 26th, 2025 03:34
• from afar (Poet\'s Dream) A poem of being impassioned and the feelings that go with it. It runs like...
  September 26th, 2025 03:31
• Great Benin:Ancient Benin (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A poetic statement of one\'s culture most nicely done
  September 25th, 2025 19:23
• 60th Anniversary (Randyjohnson71) A wonderful tribute to your parents nicely written
  September 25th, 2025 18:21
• ONE STEP BEHIND (David Welch) This is a marvelous poem so well crafted in form, rhyme and meter....
  September 25th, 2025 18:19
• letters to be sent (Arquious) Very nice the bridge half built seems like the other half must be built by...
  September 25th, 2025 18:17
• I\'m just \"One girl\".. (Natavia Hobert) A poem feeling so solitary and alone but still with desire and wishes well...
  September 25th, 2025 16:05
• Glitch (Amethyste) A poem with a question that seems a common one that many people ask. My...
  September 25th, 2025 16:03
• Blue Sky Thoughts (Aa Harvey) A bright and happy poem of romance that is hopeful. So nice to hear and...
  September 25th, 2025 14:04
• With Love (Anthony Hanible) Passing it forward so to speak. Passing on love begets happiness such a...
  September 25th, 2025 14:01
• On the level (2781) This poem seems to be a plea for one to choose their side and recognize...
  September 25th, 2025 13:59
• Clay Sculptures (Bragee) I loved this poem it has such good rhyme and flow it speaks of fear and of...
  September 25th, 2025 13:54
• Echoes and Empty Spaces (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A lovely write where life is not to be understood but lived. It is enough...
  September 25th, 2025 13:50
• Nature and her contrast (REBELLIOUS SOUL) The two faces of Janus displayed in this poem. Beauty can not exist...
  September 25th, 2025 12:37
• The Poet and the Poem (Deepak Vohra) Beautiful words that resound and ring out. Very nicely written and a fave
  September 25th, 2025 12:15
• Flags Fold Silence (Prasun Goswami) A powerful poem whether you believe it or not it rings out. Some great...
  September 25th, 2025 12:10
• Dandelion Hymn (Matthew R. Callies) I love this poem a fave for me. The metaphor rings through to those who...
  September 25th, 2025 09:22
• Heading Home (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Beautiful Kurt another nicely written poem
  September 25th, 2025 09:20
• The Madness of Civil Tongues (Gray0328) A fave for the message and thee are great line here as well. (Violence is...
  September 25th, 2025 08:42
• My Shadow (RSM0812) Well put and nicely written this poem tells its story well. Nicely penned
  September 25th, 2025 08:38
• Solitude (Navjot Singh Nagra) Very nice rhyme and meter carry this poem to its end. The message too is...
  September 25th, 2025 08:37
• The Toys (Lore) Touching and tragic a poem that pulls at the heart as all good poems...
  September 25th, 2025 08:35
• What Is Grieving? (Cloie) Grief has many stages some labeled by Kubla Ross but I believe many more...
  September 25th, 2025 08:32
• The Sky (Tristan Robert Lange) Well now that took a turn from bright and sunny, colorful and light to...
  September 25th, 2025 08:30
• To: Rainer Dweck, MS from Matthew Scott Harris (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Tangential poetry at its best a ramble of free verse that evokes gasps in...
  September 25th, 2025 07:23
• A Bear and a Bunny (Adventuressmalik) A cute romantic rhyme or perhaps a mating call. A fun write.
  September 25th, 2025 07:19
• the fountain (Arqios) Deeply philosophical as well as poetic this poem focuses on circles. A...
  September 25th, 2025 07:16
• prairie moon (Jim56) This one is most beautiful Jim. It casts a mood of wistfulness reminding...
  September 25th, 2025 06:02
• Come stare (Maplespal) A poem, a threat, a warning it speaks with strong words with a powerful...
  September 25th, 2025 05:59
• Therapy Helps Me Breathe (William Hromada) A very nice write about the help of therapy. For one who wants help and...
  September 25th, 2025 05:58
• 𝒟ℯ𝓋ℴ𝓉𝒾ℴ𝓃𝒶𝓁𝓈 (Keyara S Trotman) A beautiful wish and belief voiced in this poem. Nicely done
  September 25th, 2025 03:59
• DESTRUCTION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem has some association with my tomorrow\'s post. It seems so true...
  September 25th, 2025 03:57
• Episodes (Santajah Douglass) Very nicely composed with rhyme and good meter and flow in the self...
  September 25th, 2025 03:54
• Where Did The Time Go? (Goldfinch60) Time such a relative thing can pass so quickly when one is enjoying...
  September 25th, 2025 03:50
• MY FAST FRIEND (David Hopkins) This seems a warning to a friend that is traveling too fast in the fast...
  September 25th, 2025 03:49
• MACK THE KILLER (David Welch) The rolling rhythm and rhyme of this short saga is engaging while the...
  September 25th, 2025 03:46
• Cold and Raw (Thomas W Case) I think that this is one of my favorites of yours Thomas. It has such a...
  September 25th, 2025 03:43
• Balance (N. Christine) Clever a poem with a meaning that love and falling is a choice. Nicely...
  September 24th, 2025 20:02
• Matter (Keeter C) A wonderful poem that speaks to me. As for the Y\'s they ask the same...
  September 24th, 2025 19:34
• Missing Poetry (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Glad to hear from you again. Nicely written a love for poetry.
  September 24th, 2025 17:14
• Thrive For You (𓆩Mase𓆪) A poetic declaration to God nicely written in what seems a rap type...
  September 24th, 2025 17:12
• Scars (Amethyste) Abuse accustomed to in this poem. Nicely written
  September 24th, 2025 16:27
• Cactus (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) What I see within the plant is a metaphor for infatuation where walking...
  September 24th, 2025 16:26
• Green mamba (Kaz) A beautiful description in so few words.
  September 24th, 2025 14:06
• Why? (Natavia Hobert) So many feelings of isolation and rejection in this poem. Sad and most...
  September 24th, 2025 13:54
• To the Bride Who Was Once Mine (Teacher Kevin) There is a sense of sadness, loss and resentment in this poem that speaks...
  September 24th, 2025 13:52
• A grandma\'s love (Nicole Pritchard) A lovely poem about a most important figure. Nicely done
  September 24th, 2025 13:47
• Oh Crooked Song (Malcolm Gladwin) Incongruous combinations in this poem are most mind provoking. Allegories...
  September 24th, 2025 13:46