Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Nostalgia (Kaelyn Jade)
Nostalgia is such a common thing and seems to grow stronger as we grow...
February 23rd, 2025 16:36 - Money lender......beware! (Davidbrailsford)
A fun read about a not so fun topic. Never borrow is the rule of thumb if...
February 23rd, 2025 16:32 - Color my small world - (Amy Michelle Mosier)
A most colorful and beautiful write with great metaphor.
February 23rd, 2025 16:28 - Read this right now (Hzugman)
Short and concise and with the greatest of rhyme.
February 23rd, 2025 16:24 - Running Dry (Hanible)
A symptom too often seen. When love dries up it is hard to bring it back....
February 23rd, 2025 16:22 - The Mother\'s Curse (Meagan Adelle)
I have told my children the same. And they did. But as a grandparent it...
February 23rd, 2025 16:20 - It\'s Just a Hop, Skip. and a Jump to the Madhouse (Thomas W Case)
Almost anything these days will set off the nitroglycerin of daily living....
February 23rd, 2025 16:12 - distort (NinjaGirl)
Wondering if this is connected with the last. It describes well the state...
February 23rd, 2025 16:09 - No More Mr. Blue Skies (Neville)
Now that casts a rather dark pall over this poem. \"Pray\" indeed...
February 23rd, 2025 16:07 - The Smile Room (Gray0328)
Gray your poems are consistently good. They deserve more views. This is...
February 23rd, 2025 12:57 - Oh Tender Tongue (RSM0812)
Well written with good rhyme and underlying meaning. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 11:42 - The Echos of the past (Hey!)
Here is a cycle presented and this may also be a metaphor for life itself....
February 23rd, 2025 11:30 - Being Myself (Shahla Latifi)
A self statement that shows strength and power to be oneself. Nicely...
February 23rd, 2025 11:27 - Orphaned Moments (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another well written poem that rolls off the tongue
February 23rd, 2025 11:22 - Wear your wig bleach your skin (EvenwheniLie)
Words that I can feel although I am not black. This poem is powerful,...
February 23rd, 2025 11:20 - Sole Man (DLewis88)
And I ask you is it weirder to fixate on a person\'s foot than a breast,...
February 23rd, 2025 09:27 - Pooled string, Current location, & It blinks (Maplespal)
Pensive meditation in isolation is the feeling I get from these three. Yet...
February 23rd, 2025 08:24 - Share with me (Tony36)
A great message to others to be brave. To share oneself is the bravest...
February 23rd, 2025 08:20 - Set me free (Joseph M Marion)
A poem of faith and desire to be free, Lovely
February 23rd, 2025 08:18 - I Swear It (PART 1) (Abdullah123)
Such a poetic expression of words unspoken that lead to a relationship...
February 23rd, 2025 08:16 - Antlers (Melancholic~Onion)
So many metaphors could be drawn from such a picture of an antler. Won\'t...
February 23rd, 2025 08:13 - Dunk Tank (Tristan Robert Lange)
A wonderful write. I wonder how much money could be made with this? Maybe...
February 23rd, 2025 08:11 - starling song (Jim56)
Such a nice flow to this poem and a picture with which I am very familiar....
February 23rd, 2025 06:28 - Smile (Whats write for me)
Such artistic flare here, to use nature to describe a smile. Using the sun...
February 23rd, 2025 05:57 - Someone like me (Poetaldo)
There are always those that would impose their values and desires upon...
February 23rd, 2025 05:55 - Your Presence (Ajon4wheels)
A sensual poem of attraction, seduction, siren like in some ways it calls...
February 23rd, 2025 05:53 - anger transfers (Demar Desu)
A most interesting approach and thought provoking poem. Nicely done
February 23rd, 2025 05:50 - EMMA ( 1986 ) (Nephilim56)
Tender is the word that comes to mind, sweet too, Memories of my daughters...
February 23rd, 2025 05:48 - Lazy Sunday Bit of Fun (Poetic Licence)
Wisdom found here. It is in the trash that we find it and in sadness...
February 23rd, 2025 05:44 - Word Wholeness (Orchidee)
Lovely Orchi another wonderful hymn and after reading it I feel that my...
February 23rd, 2025 05:36 - So Sweet So Fair (Reynaldo Casison)
This poem has such a comforting feel to it. It is familiar like a...
February 23rd, 2025 05:34 - No More Mr. Blue Skies (Neville)
And those are the good guys. A powerful poem, a critique on human nature...
February 23rd, 2025 05:27 - God talks to Adrian in a Dream. (David Wakeling)
Ah yes there was that tower of Babel thing wasn\'t there. I guess that...
February 23rd, 2025 05:21 - On An Open Top Bus is Were I Shall Be (Teddy.15)
How memories of places we have lived can bring back emotions. Yet I found...
February 23rd, 2025 05:16 - Music Is A River. Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Another beautiful sonnet to music Andy lovely I enjoyed it.
February 23rd, 2025 05:10 - … how to get to there (Arqios)
Ah the trap was set and I fell right in. A most joyful trap, that of...
February 23rd, 2025 05:08 - Why (Mik)
The curiosity of the human mind always inquiring and never finding. A...
February 23rd, 2025 05:03 - O Man, The Crown Of Creation (Mohammad younus koul)
A most beautiful poem scripture like in form and so poetic. Lovely
February 23rd, 2025 05:00 - Pour une fois dans ma vie (Poetaldo)
This poem has an unexpected ending that gives it all new meaning. A lovely...
February 22nd, 2025 20:07 - assaulted (NinjaGirl)
Horrific! No no one can ever know what another person has been through...
February 22nd, 2025 20:06 - She’s More (BlessedbyGod)
A poem of faith and belief. Nicely worded in good rhyme and well thought...
February 22nd, 2025 19:22 - being poor (Demar Desu)
As Dolly says in her song \"you are only poor if you choose to be\" It is...
February 22nd, 2025 19:20 - Pain is beauty (Jodie)
A most painful poem of trying to please, please others, society, and...
February 22nd, 2025 19:17 - I paid no heed to the call of the siren(s) (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
So many references to past cliches and to famous bits of the past. A...
February 22nd, 2025 16:03 - Heat and Sweat Add a Dash of Lust (Hollow Enigma)
Infatuation and passion so aptly described. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 15:58 - The Heart\'s Dilemma (Hey!)
Almost classically written in style and wording. Very nice it pushes...
February 22nd, 2025 15:55 - The Empty Hourglass (Kurt Philip Behm)
Once again masterfully crafted the blend of imagery and metaphor in such...
February 22nd, 2025 13:43 - BLACK IS THE COLOR (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
Black has always been associated with death, sorrow, depression, anger,...
February 22nd, 2025 13:38 - Medicine Medicine Medicine (Hanible)
A great poem bringing attention to how pharmaceutically oriented our...
February 22nd, 2025 13:33 - Tick Tock (RSM0812)
Apocalyptic in nature is the feel that I get from this poem. The passage...
February 22nd, 2025 13:30 - Leaving Me Behind (Emperor)
A statement that is true for all of us as time runs on ahead we are left...
February 22nd, 2025 13:25 - Depression\'s lullaby (Melancholia)
To each sad element there is a positive. Balance is a rule of the...
February 22nd, 2025 13:23 - Darkened dreams & Viewing spot (Maplespal)
Shadows are a favorite image of mine so easily used as a metaphor for many...
February 22nd, 2025 13:20 - Past Tells No Lies (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Such great metaphor in this poem it fits so well the rhyme and images....
February 22nd, 2025 13:16 - Deep Freeze Daze (Tristan Robert Lange)
I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all...
February 22nd, 2025 11:53 - Why so sad? (Pineapple_pizza018)
That reminds me of the joker in the dark knight, \"Why so sad?\" Lies lead...
February 22nd, 2025 11:47 - Peace (Tony36)
A most beautiful thought and goal to shoot for. Who knows that one day we...
February 22nd, 2025 08:19 - Everlasting Balm (Whats write for me)
No longer religious I still appreciate the poetry in this your rhyme was...
February 22nd, 2025 07:23 - Becoming (Gray0328)
Powerful magnificent words and images painted so well. Metaphor in poetic...
February 22nd, 2025 06:28 - Gypsy Tart (Mutley Ravishes)
A poem of fantasy that may well be a metaphor and in its humor and...
February 22nd, 2025 06:24 - THE OLD NOTE (Nephilim56)
I feel sadness and loss in this poem that has a haunting quality. It reads...
February 22nd, 2025 05:19 - broken heart (Jim56)
Time heals all they say. A wonderful poem of letting things heal.
February 22nd, 2025 05:17 - Here comes my old memories (Funmiwrites)
A haunting poem that feels familiar but they show no sign of recognizing...
February 22nd, 2025 05:16 - Introduction - Who Am I? (Melancholic~Onion)
\"Blessed are the meek for they shall inherit the earth\" or so it is...
February 22nd, 2025 05:12 - Sanctuary Of Our Love (Reynaldo Casison)
A beautiful and romantic poem of priorities and what one should value....
February 22nd, 2025 05:07 - The Women\'s Movement (Teddy.15)
A statement from the heart. That we are still talking about equality and...
February 22nd, 2025 05:03 - The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1) (Poetic Licence)
Poor Harry \'twas not merry because of hairy Mary. Hairy wished to tarry...
February 22nd, 2025 04:55 - Why So Horrid? (Orchidee)
Another interesting episode in the chapter of Orchi. Hope that you don\'t...
February 22nd, 2025 03:16 - Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Muse of music a lovely write Andy beautifully written. May your day be...
February 22nd, 2025 03:13 - Tho I\'m lost I shall grow. (Poems_From_Emotions)
Taking bad experiences and gaining inspiration from them learning from the...
February 22nd, 2025 03:10 - Melbourne mosaic (Arqios)
A beautiful write of wonderful images woven into a description of a place...
February 22nd, 2025 03:03 - there is still (Sheta)
A wonderful write where is acknowledged that love is not rational or...
February 22nd, 2025 02:58 - Amelia (David Wakeling)
I loved the flow and rhyme of this poem that seems in some ways folk...
February 22nd, 2025 02:55 - Salty Tears (Chanel T.)
Memories don\'t die they just fade with time. Parting can be so painful...
February 22nd, 2025 02:52 - Confusion (2781)
A confession and declaration both rolled into one. Very nicely done
February 22nd, 2025 02:49 - Renaming (Thoughtless)
I like that. A little humor that strikes close to the bone. A fun read
February 22nd, 2025 02:47 - Let Them (E Naughton)
As people we need an explanation but nature needs none it just happens....
February 21st, 2025 20:24 - You (Hey!)
Emotional control a type of abuse that is difficult to measure but...
February 21st, 2025 17:27 - Pine Trees Haiku (Reynaldo Casison)
Most interesting combinations in this piece.
February 21st, 2025 15:10 - Till The Day He Is Dead (Tommytoons)
Great religious metaphor in this poem. A sense of reliance and need for...
February 21st, 2025 15:07 - Petals Of Creation\'s Ecstasy (Nelzach94)
A lovely metaphor where the plant world that we normally disregard is...
February 21st, 2025 14:12 - Telling Truth (Gray0328)
I hear a meeting being held at the top of twelve steps. A lovely write.
February 21st, 2025 14:09 - The prodigal son after Boris Slutski (Ksey_Gan)
Ingratitude the disease that eats one from the inside out. Story of the...
February 21st, 2025 14:07 - No One Can See (Rosiii ;))
A ghostly type of feel sad and haunting
February 21st, 2025 13:36 - Thrown! (Framed Mirror)
This one requires time to contemplate.
February 21st, 2025 13:33 - Grey Day Whispers (Cassie58)
Such great wordsmithing here. The use of meter and rhyme combined in...
February 21st, 2025 13:31 - desperation (NinjaGirl)
In this there are two forms of desperate the good and the bad. Nicely done...
February 21st, 2025 13:24 - To David (Kurt Philip Behm)
A most beautiful tribute. Lovely
February 21st, 2025 11:42 - Between Silence and Stars (Ciara Stanbury)
A beautiful sonnet that speaks at the division between heart and head and...
February 21st, 2025 11:41 - The Parting Hour (Abdullah123)
A most interesting write with the use of language that would make one...
February 21st, 2025 11:35 - My Sister\'s Shadow (Whats write for me)
A most wonderful tribute to a person with whom you share blood, history,...
February 21st, 2025 10:01 - body (Newt)
A thought provoking write about a feeling that many have. To be a stranger...
February 21st, 2025 09:58 - Where Do I Go? (DLewis88)
All the makings of an existential crisis in this poem. Well expressed it...
February 21st, 2025 09:00 - How To Catch A Suicider (Hanible)
Empathy requires experience and I hear this in this poem. A deep write of...
February 21st, 2025 08:58 - I am coming back to reality (Poetaldo)
This is a deep poem that in not asking asks the reader to put themselves...
February 21st, 2025 08:56 - Trapped (Caring dove)
Nice and the implication is that metamorphosis will come. A heartfelt...
February 21st, 2025 08:53 - The Cult (Tristan Robert Lange)
There are many gods past and present and even more demigods to take up the...
February 21st, 2025 08:51 - Believe in yourself (Tony36)
A great motivational write. Desire and belief can overcome all. Very nice...
February 21st, 2025 08:48 - This Is Love (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Brilliant! Good advice in poetry can never go wrong. Seeing from both...
February 21st, 2025 08:47 - Lights into nights & Kissing death (Maplespal)
In the first there is strong reverberations of the past and it seems that...
February 21st, 2025 08:43
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