Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- It\'s spiritual (2781)
A greater power than we surely there must be.
March 15th, 2023 06:20 - The Antipodean Adventures of Jack the Lad. (Doggerel Dave)
This was a great read. It read like a book, was short as an article,...
March 15th, 2023 06:16 - The Burden of Poets (Ok Waleed)
The only shame is if one is trying to keep these things a secret.
March 15th, 2023 05:56 - Free Exchange (Doggerel Dave)
There is no truth it changes each day
If only people would this...
March 13th, 2023 11:02 - The Rhyme of Time (Thinkerbell)
A great thought with clever use of images and a different way to look at...
March 11th, 2023 06:23 - Flows. (Doggerel Dave)
If not the government, the church, private entrepreneurs (present day...
March 11th, 2023 06:20 - The spot on the wall (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Dave the thought had passed my mind. Rented a room to a church once...
March 11th, 2023 06:12 - Odrorir and the 18th charm (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much Bella for the read and wonderful comments. Yes we all...
March 9th, 2023 17:02 - A Necessary Evil (Bella Shepard)
How relatable is that. And at the same time how metaphorical. How much...
March 9th, 2023 10:04 - Today (2781)
That was a good comic relief and well done too.
March 9th, 2023 09:59 - Odrorir and the 18th charm (Sorenbarrett)
So true L.B. this is why I always look forward to your remarks. You have...
March 8th, 2023 05:53 - Helpful Hope (Orchidee)
Orchidee your second and fourth stanzas really hit me. This was a...
March 5th, 2023 07:38 - Inscription Plus... (Doggerel Dave)
This was a gem that I was not aware of. So true, we did not ask to come...
March 5th, 2023 07:31 - Reflections (Sorenbarrett)
Only pieces and not the best ones either. Thanks for the read orchidee.
March 3rd, 2023 10:54 - no longer mine (Arqios)
So true by the time we think of it, it is already in the past. A Haiku?
March 3rd, 2023 08:39 - Gutted Like A Fish (Christina8)
Such a plea of pain and anguish. Gutted is vivid and brutal. We all are...
March 3rd, 2023 08:32 - Not another one….. (Doggerel Dave)
Passion is the driving force not love and the need to feel loved and...
March 3rd, 2023 07:09 - Dancing With Joy. (Goldfinch60)
All of life is a dance. Those that don\'t dance can not find the joy....
March 3rd, 2023 07:04 - Indifferent Nature (Fay Slimm.)
Reflections of the meaning of life and its cycle. Our vision is too short...
March 3rd, 2023 06:28 - Lasting Love (Orchidee)
He certainly must have a great deal of patience (except for some like...
March 3rd, 2023 06:22 - Almost Without Purpose (Neville)
So much philosophy in this write. Yes, almost is the key word. It is from...
March 3rd, 2023 06:18 - My Daily Torment (Christina8)
Such a perfect metaphor, having lived in the ice and cold I can feel it. I...
March 1st, 2023 07:36 - Respect Deserved. (Goldfinch60)
Here here, such a great message. Maybe that is why it has shrunk. Looking...
March 1st, 2023 07:31 - Troll. (Doggerel Dave)
Trolls they seem like they have multiplied these days. I\'m glad that I\'m...
March 1st, 2023 07:27 - Daniel (2781)
Very biblical, hopeful and bright. What you believe becomes true.
March 1st, 2023 07:21 - Old Joe Finds His Place. (Doggerel Dave)
One should always know when to hole their tongue. Sometimes we learn the...
February 27th, 2023 05:42 - The Lost Idea. (Goldfinch60)
This has happened so many times, even when I write down the idea...
February 26th, 2023 05:04 - Icy Tundra (Christina8)
I grew up in the ice and snow and could feel it in the poem. I didn\'t...
February 25th, 2023 10:29 - The Kimono (Madam Butterfly not here). (Doggerel Dave)
Dave this one led me in several directions. I guess in all the smoke I...
February 25th, 2023 06:04 - When Jannis sang the blues (Sorenbarrett)
Good thing you weren\'t that is a club you wouldn\'t want to join. Thanks...
February 25th, 2023 05:45 - Circle Of Life (Bella Shepard)
Bella this is a fav The idea is so similar to what I feel. Infinite...
February 23rd, 2023 13:28 - CRISIS AT THE ‘CROSS (Doggerel Dave)
I liked this one Dave. I didn\'t see it comming. Clever though. I guess it...
February 22nd, 2023 17:56 - Cloudy Coffee Day. (Goldfinch60)
At first read this one was puzzling, however, on second read it was...
February 22nd, 2023 05:28 - Blow Wind (Bella Shepard)
Bella this is beautiful and strikes deep in the soul for the inner voice...
February 19th, 2023 15:59 - A word (2781)
One word can make all the difference. Funny how a single word can lead to...
February 19th, 2023 09:09 - Use Love to Muse, Hearts be Tied by Love-Tide (Mvvenkataraman)
Beautiful goals and admonishments to a world that has more often neglected...
February 19th, 2023 09:06 - Simple Equation…. (Doggerel Dave)
Dave the rich would say it\'s merely natural selection or survival of the...
February 19th, 2023 08:58 - Good Cop Bad Cop (2781)
Hard to know what to believe these days, whether it comes from one side or...
February 17th, 2023 09:34 - Love: Connate (L. B. Mek)
L.B. A very classical touch to this poem on such a widely spoken topic....
February 17th, 2023 06:08 - Love so Lovely (Fay Slimm.)
I loved the format of this poem and how the modification of the adjective...
February 17th, 2023 06:02 - The Library of Time (Bella Shepard)
What a unique and wonderful way of putting this. Life is on borrowed time...
February 16th, 2023 17:19 - Oldest And Youngest. (Goldfinch60)
Andy this was a very nice pairing of the two most stated things about age,...
February 15th, 2023 05:56 - A Relationship (Doggerel Dave)
Presumptive, cats are presumptive as well as arrogant. I have had several...
February 14th, 2023 23:38 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (3) About Midnight. (Doggerel Dave)
An interesting experience and one to file away in memories library. They...
February 13th, 2023 21:28 - Belief (Bella Shepard)
This one haiku strikes at the heart of western science. We can only...
February 12th, 2023 15:40 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (2) Around Midnight. (Doggerel Dave)
This was a great tale. In all my adventures in life I can\'t say I have...
February 12th, 2023 08:24 - Unity in Diversity (Mello)
A beatiful message highlited with vivid imagry and a great metaphor....
February 12th, 2023 08:16 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (1) Almost Midnight (Doggerel Dave)
In my youth I worked laying track in a mine and have ridden steam...
February 10th, 2023 21:52 - No offense (Ok Waleed)
Dreams are more easily lived out than life itself. And yes there is little...
February 10th, 2023 17:16 - Individual Journeys. (Goldfinch60)
So true, so many paths that cross and intertwine. As we cross it is nice...
February 9th, 2023 06:05 - Peter’s Complaint (Doggerel Dave)
A gritty piece of work that took me to the scene. Nicely written with the...
February 9th, 2023 06:01 - Words (2781)
So true. Short and to the point.
February 9th, 2023 05:40 - The Small Space (Jarcher54)
I loved the pairings. Subtle yet to the point. A bit melancholic but also...
February 9th, 2023 05:07 - Peace Plea (Orchidee)
Orchidee this is a beautiful thought and prayer that we are still a long...
February 7th, 2023 05:45 - Dancing To Infinity. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, life is a dance. Hopefully we love our partner and don\'t step on too...
February 7th, 2023 05:37 - “Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani?” (Ok Waleed)
Doubt, lack of trust are the seeds from which paranoia and hate grow. I...
February 7th, 2023 05:32 - Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave)
Not been there but similar and your words framed the images well. Very...
February 6th, 2023 21:59 - River And Time. (Goldfinch60)
Rivers meander and they rush, they flood and they dribble by. Time too...
February 6th, 2023 04:53 - of Geometrical Substance or Mode (L. B. Mek)
Wise words L.B. wisdom poors from your mouth like it did from his but so...
February 3rd, 2023 05:48 - The Chick Cycle (Thinkerbell)
A nice poem with a sad ending. Yes we all imprint whether biologically of...
February 1st, 2023 09:35 - Statues - a Rhymeless Rant (Doggerel Dave)
What I was taught i school I have found to be mythical, and one sided....
February 1st, 2023 07:45 - flowershop blather (Arqios)
Emeralds caught my eye in that it is my birthstone. The idea that it...
February 1st, 2023 07:37 - Cat as trophy (Sorenbarrett)
Bella so glad you enjoyed it. It was more fun to write about years later...
January 31st, 2023 17:07 - Circular journey (Sorenbarrett)
Dear Bella you humble me with your more than gracious comments. My mind...
January 31st, 2023 15:57 - Possibilities. (Goldfinch60)
Yes, words as true as Gold.
January 31st, 2023 04:14 - The Night Male (Doggerel Dave)
This was truly an enjoyable read so well constructed that it flowed like...
January 30th, 2023 10:11 - what if i (Amepiesces)
This is so raw, so loaded with emotion, it drips pain. It oozes the human...
January 30th, 2023 06:09 - not to be messed with (Arqios)
This is thought provoking and maybe shouldn\'t be. The chesire cat and I...
January 30th, 2023 05:28 - Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities (L. B. Mek)
L.B. or should I now call you Isaiah? Yes I have seen it too Ted Kaczynski...
January 30th, 2023 04:42 - ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54)
This haunting tale evokes many memories and the experiences that have gone...
January 29th, 2023 05:50 - Sad Little Puppy (Bella Shepard)
Bella, this took me back to my childhood and I felt like my mother was...
January 28th, 2023 13:01 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Well Dave I have to agree. I have no proof otherwise. Belief, yea we all...
January 28th, 2023 07:44 - What a Way to Go…. (Doggerel Dave)
I came a little late to this party but have been a student of the Darwin...
January 26th, 2023 20:56 - Laughter Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy. The old adage that laughter is good medicine is true. What...
January 25th, 2023 10:45 - Queen Victoria Sits Again. (Doggerel Dave)
Sounds like a white elephant gift to me. So sad when your not wanted. Nice...
January 24th, 2023 20:46 - Prams. (Doggerel Dave)
Have to admit I had to look up what a pram is. Then it all made sense and...
January 23rd, 2023 05:45 - I can’t trust my wife (Ok Waleed)
I\'m white so don\'t trust me, I\'m a man so maybe you can, Satan was an...
January 22nd, 2023 13:51 - Earth, Air, Fire (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks for the review and comment
January 22nd, 2023 13:48 - No Shave, Thanks - Just a Haircut! (Doggerel Dave)
I started shearing my own hair long before the Covid thing so it didn\'t...
January 19th, 2023 09:08 - Acromegaly. (Goldfinch60)
\"I wonder if\" such a great entry to this piece. It paints a vivid...
January 18th, 2023 14:20 - Balance. (Doggerel Dave)
When ever there are more than one person there will be politics and a...
January 13th, 2023 05:14 - Mozart\'s Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Love Mozart but then I love most music. Nice piece Andy.
January 12th, 2023 06:29 - The scent of a dream (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you Andy, your comment is appreciated.
January 12th, 2023 06:25 - My Biggest Fear (Rhmn_7)
A precursor to the existential question. Shakespear said \"To thine own...
January 10th, 2023 11:50 - The Violin Wept (Bella Shepard)
I used to play the violin and I love the minor key but maybe this is...
January 10th, 2023 11:39 - Believe In Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
It is the last line that made me reflect. Yes I believe you are right,...
January 7th, 2023 06:06 - Epiphany Expectations (Orchidee)
So many times from childhood I have heard this story but you have told it...
January 6th, 2023 11:18 - on the banks of the Oise (Arqios)
This write holds a feel of mystery and a sense of foreboding. The ending...
January 6th, 2023 06:50 - Beautiful Destinations. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy I have walked them all I believe, and yet each day I find a...
January 6th, 2023 06:08 - Boston Lay Beneath Our Pity (Charles69)
This was a touching piece that goes deeper than the surface. In a sense we...
January 4th, 2023 11:39 - Death In The Night. (Goldfinch60)
Dark is the word. Nature has a way of working things out but wow. A very...
January 3rd, 2023 05:41 - a vantaged perch (Arqios)
A most beautiful vision. I am sitting in a country house far from people...
January 2nd, 2023 10:15 - Distractions (Bella Shepard)
A good point and although it may be true for many, for me I prefer the...
January 1st, 2023 15:59 - Raining In My Heart To Sunshine. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for sharing. It is a bittersweet poem of loss and gain.
December 30th, 2022 06:56 - grand coterie (Arqios)
This one leads me down different paths simultaneously. I read the...
December 29th, 2022 20:51 - Burning Souls (Rhmn_7)
This started with such an obvious but neglected view \"do we live in the...
December 23rd, 2022 16:00 - Prince Of Cool. (Goldfinch60)
So true. I love music of all types but particularly blues and jazz. Chet...
December 23rd, 2022 15:43 - Mr. Bean (Bella Shepard)
Bella I look forward to your poems and how they share the common beauty in...
December 23rd, 2022 15:36 - Liebestraum. (Goldfinch60)
I too love music that has the power to make or change a mood. Although we...
December 22nd, 2022 06:51 - retitled and reposted of chemotherapy (Dusk arising)
Such a mature and wise view of life. It is not only the bitter medicine...
December 21st, 2022 19:40
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