Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• I wish I was into you (Sneha Sebastian) I understand the need for action, the need for thrill, why a person would...
  August 6th, 2025 10:44
• Of Mice and Fish and Boring Menus (Cheeky Missy) Another fun read Chic nicely done
  August 6th, 2025 10:32
• The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1) (Gray0328) Fairy tales are for children, dreams are for sleepers, wishes are for...
  August 6th, 2025 10:20
• The Star-Strangled Banner (Abdullah123) A fun parody that strikes a blow at the arrogance of a nation that says it...
  August 6th, 2025 10:10
• Yet you are here (Gewar) A nice read of a relationship that worked out. Nicely done
  August 6th, 2025 10:06
• Dry Heavin\' (Matthew R. Callies) Made me laugh and that was good enough for a fave add to that good rhyme...
  August 6th, 2025 10:05
• Fakeness (Sassy Lou) A poem that many can identify with. Not so sure it is only today, I...
  August 6th, 2025 08:53
• Front To Back (Kurt Philip Behm) Language a sharp tool one can inadvertently do damage to self and others....
  August 6th, 2025 07:38
• I have to be in El Paso Yesterday (Victor Bolshov) I can hear the song in this poem, it begs to be let out. Nicely done
  August 6th, 2025 07:36
• Go on a adventure (Tony36) Encouraging and inspiring this poem urges the reader to take a chance and...
  August 6th, 2025 06:49
• Life is a Gift (RSM0812) Carpe diem they say. Enjoy the day. In metaphor the same cycles of life...
  August 6th, 2025 06:48
• Tariffs and Tantrums (Narayan Gadagkar) A powerful write of the insanity reflected by one who can against those...
  August 6th, 2025 06:44
• Without You (Lorna) I can feel this in the literal and the metaphorical it speaks of how thin...
  August 6th, 2025 06:42
• a folklore story (Jim56) This a well known tale that has been transformed into different cultures...
  August 6th, 2025 05:24
• You\'re like them (Maplespal) A powerful poem of relationships. There is not going back to the...
  August 6th, 2025 05:21
• America (Pete the poet) A fave for the anthem at the end. I have driven those roads and felt those...
  August 6th, 2025 05:19
• Filling Gaps (Neville) A beautiful play on words and concepts. The hole left is in some ways like...
  August 6th, 2025 05:14
• I Didn’t Say a Word (Samuel) A most interesting view on love and relationships and what they mean and...
  August 6th, 2025 05:09
• Modern Day Macbeth (Aman 12) A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on...
  August 6th, 2025 05:07
• Happy Birthday Meghan, Duchess of Sussex (Azeezah Awal) A beautiful and glowing tribute to a woman on her birthday. All...
  August 6th, 2025 05:00
• ASYLUM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) God help any life form that extends a hand to the human species. Like a...
  August 6th, 2025 04:56
• Don\'t Let Them Drain Your Energy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read and a common theme from conspiracy theory to AI and...
  August 6th, 2025 04:53
• Are they listening? (2781) Poetry can have power as is raised in this work. It does depend on who...
  August 6th, 2025 04:50
• Gasp for Air (Alison) A poem that expresses feeling of overwhelming pressure wearing one down. A...
  August 6th, 2025 04:48
• Have You Ever? (GBear90) There is a good deal of frustration expressed in this poem there is a...
  August 6th, 2025 04:46
• Friend (Krissy.V) Loved the playfulness in the word itself. There is an end in friend and...
  August 6th, 2025 04:42
• The Wall I Never Painted (Malcolm Gladwin) Many well written lines in this poem that maintains good form, flow and...
  August 6th, 2025 04:40
• Trust? (🌻) Trust an item of gradations, I believe there is no total trust, only trust...
  August 6th, 2025 04:35
• Hiroshima – eighty years since August 6th, 1945 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Boggles the mind that technology has advanced to the point that a few can...
  August 6th, 2025 04:32
• The Plight Of A Sage (ElizabethMoroz) The juxtaposition in each line of related terms requires close analysis...
  August 6th, 2025 04:30
• but how could i? (Wildecho14) A heartfelt poem that in its rawness sends the message that one person can...
  August 6th, 2025 04:23
• Barbed (Peto) Very clever wording and a lovely meter with rhyme scheme that intrigues...
  August 6th, 2025 04:20
• “spark of now” (Arqios) Is this a reference to love at first sight? A write in the now.that is...
  August 6th, 2025 04:15
• Naughty! (Orchidee) A fun read but you gave it away by making 18+ Orchi. Actually there are...
  August 6th, 2025 04:11
• The Keys In A Mansion. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful analogy Gold in our world of half steps twentyfour keys in the...
  August 6th, 2025 04:05
• The Legend of Marco by Maxim Gorky (Ksey_Gan) A most interesting read of a fantasy nature that has an uncertain ending...
  August 5th, 2025 20:17
• Married (Spencer Wilhelm) A wish to be as someone else but not sure that that will ever happen. A...
  August 5th, 2025 20:13
• Just Enough Time (Violet_Writes) This poem holds its cynicism well. A poem of feeling alone. Nicely written
  August 5th, 2025 20:07
• Conundrum (Kevin Hulme) A great poem about not such a great institution. A fun read
  August 5th, 2025 18:42
• i am declaring WAR on ANYTHING HAPPY (not clickbait) (Highlighter) A nightmare of a vision. Well written
  August 5th, 2025 17:57
• Blue Antelope (Pete the poet) A surreal poem cast in real setting and with a supernatural type of feel....
  August 5th, 2025 17:55
• The Fire Beneath My Skin (GeekSusie) Learning to control fire without getting burned is a bit of a trick....
  August 5th, 2025 17:50
• Lalalala (Arial) A call for accounting, a lineup, a revelee and none appear a haunting...
  August 5th, 2025 16:46
• Premature (Berniece) This one speaks loud in a whisper. It shins bright with its darkness. A...
  August 5th, 2025 16:16
• Sanctuary (Fränz Müller) This one is hard hitting. Short and so is life. It is cold and graphic,....
  August 5th, 2025 16:14
• Lost Fairy-Tales.. (David Prestigiacomo) Loneliness such a difficult weight to carry and the hope of someone being...
  August 5th, 2025 16:12
• Spring (Luke Bensing) A beautiful metaphor of life in its cycles. Nicely done
  August 5th, 2025 16:09
• Clubs, Hearts, Diamonds, & Spades (Xalvazora) Clever write so identifiable. What card would be best to play? Mind...
  August 5th, 2025 14:05
• World (Keeter C) A question that seems answered in our actions on this planet. War,...
  August 5th, 2025 14:01
• The moon without stars (Aiswarya Girish) We all need something or someone and rejection can be hard to accept. A...
  August 5th, 2025 13:56
• Without You (Joseph M Marion) A poem of missing someone that is a part of life. A lovely write of need...
  August 5th, 2025 13:53
• Let it end (BlessedbyGod) This poem sound much like what might have been offered in the garden of...
  August 5th, 2025 13:20
• I Don\'t Sleep Anymore (Simple Tendencies) The passing of a life in this poem. Nicely detailed in just a few lines....
  August 5th, 2025 13:17
• Parts of Me (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A poem of surprise. As I reached the end I felt drained. Nicely written
  August 5th, 2025 12:39
• struggles (NAZIA ZAHRA) Changes through life called growing up but merely evolving, maturing,...
  August 5th, 2025 12:37
• You told me to grow up, so I did! (Sree) Behind the assertion I hear defiance and a touch of anger. Well voiced and...
  August 5th, 2025 12:33
• Cuts (Krissy.V) Haunting yet valid in a mind that sees reality as running blood. Hard to...
  August 5th, 2025 10:06
• What Time Can\'t Buy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This poem has a haunted feeling as if disconnected in space by a...
  August 5th, 2025 10:03
• What was it? (Damaso) In its hidden metaphors and symbols hides a feeling in this poem. Well...
  August 5th, 2025 09:59
• The unkown letter. (Friendship) A poem of a loss felt set so well in poetic rhyme and meter. A travail of...
  August 5th, 2025 09:56
• Don\'t waste it (2781) Modernization, technology, progress they call it but with each step...
  August 5th, 2025 09:51
• The Six Sacred Food Groups (Matthew R. Callies) Here I have to add only fruits and maybe a few vegetables to complete the...
  August 5th, 2025 09:47
• Um, Yeah, I Learned from Mary Poppins (Cheeky Missy) A pot pourie of sugar and cats in a collage mural of words. nicely woven
  August 5th, 2025 09:42
• Magic spell of rain (Devender Kumar) A most wonderful haiku that flows and floats
  August 5th, 2025 09:39
• heal (Lunarchloedip) So nice to be accepted for who one is. It is healing. Usually gained when...
  August 5th, 2025 08:38
• From The Heart (Anthony Hanible) The right moment where timing is everything. A poem that may have diverse...
  August 5th, 2025 08:35
• My Love (RSM0812) A poem of love veiled in metaphor of the thickest weave, no lace here....
  August 5th, 2025 08:16
• Digital nightmare (Lorenz) Images of the past float and filter through this poem of nostalgia burning...
  August 5th, 2025 08:14
•  A DIRGE TO PAPA SUNDAY (Mercy Robert) There is a sense of anguish in this loss and a feeling of uncertainty....
  August 5th, 2025 08:09
• Zeitgeist Z (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A dark message and foreboding prediction rolls forth in this poem. Well...
  August 5th, 2025 08:05
• No More to Sea or Sail Am I (Tony Grannell) Always loved tails of the sea, my favorite book Moby Dick to which this...
  August 5th, 2025 07:59
• Living Water Poured Down (Rrodriguez) A most beautiful account in poetic form of that life giving and taking...
  August 5th, 2025 07:54
• Be yourself (Tony36) The voice of individualism cries from this poem. A nicely voiced call for...
  August 5th, 2025 07:51
• Every Time You Smile (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) A seasoning to the food, love enhances all the flavors of the world, its...
  August 5th, 2025 06:36
• special way (Jim56) Lovely Jim flowers one of nature\'s perfections thrill us with visual...
  August 5th, 2025 05:35
• Shine On (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A beautiful write of being better, working harder to help others and be...
  August 5th, 2025 05:33
• Movement, send (Maplespal) This seems to speak to fear, panic and nightmares and facing them as a way...
  August 5th, 2025 05:31
• A Prayer (Azeezah Khadeejah AbdulAwal) It seems that I have responded to this one earlier. It is a nice tribute...
  August 5th, 2025 05:28
• What Healing Doesn’t Look Like (Samuel) Cleverly metaphored in terms of fashion its message is easily understood....
  August 5th, 2025 05:27
• Broken Promises (Sassy Lou) Disappointment comes through in this poem of broken promises. Intentions...
  August 5th, 2025 05:24
• A Prayer (Azeezah Awal) Beautiful wishes to a previous leader with nicely written meaning...
  August 5th, 2025 05:20
• The Lost Scripture of Thought and Fire (Malcolm Gladwin) A writing that very nicely incorporates Babylonian, Greek and other...
  August 5th, 2025 05:18
• A PRAYER (Azeezah Khadeejah Awal) A series of hopeful thoughts and quotes that brighten the day and pay...
  August 5th, 2025 05:12
• LAST SHADOW (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I loved the gentle weaving of metaphor into subtle foreshadowing in this...
  August 5th, 2025 05:07
• Confession (Dan Williams) Loaded with great metaphors and allegory this poem speaks of regrets and...
  August 5th, 2025 05:04
• To Helen (Parsa) Such a lovely flattering description of one loved. Well worded and upbeat...
  August 5th, 2025 04:59
• I Shall Not Be Moved (ForeverJesus7) This poem reminds me of the song by John Hurt (I shall not be moved) A...
  August 5th, 2025 04:55
• A Little More Kindness (John mckay) A most lovely message in this poem that reaches out to the reader and...
  August 5th, 2025 04:46
• 6th aug 1945 (Peto) In these tercets with a caping rhyme to form a quatrain you tell the story...
  August 5th, 2025 04:42
• unsending love (Arqios) A dark and sad poem but maybe not for if love can be unsent then never...
  August 5th, 2025 04:35
• Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant (Neville) So often the title is requisite in understanding the poem. Here with the...
  August 5th, 2025 04:27
• Bebop. (Goldfinch60) Andy an instructive poem on music history how nice. Well written and most...
  August 5th, 2025 04:17
• At a loss (BlessedbyGod) Seeing oneself as desperately cornered and that no one knows what you have...
  August 4th, 2025 19:18
• Communion At Water\'s Edge (Gaias Soothing Haven) Mystical and sensuous a wonderful sonnet. Lovely
  August 4th, 2025 17:33
• I feel it (Isa kemmy) Concerns written. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2025 16:49
• Why (Mik this is mik) Going back to old style where the two main combatants settle the dispute...
  August 4th, 2025 16:47
• Becalmed (Kenny O\'Donnell) Very well imaged and worded. This poem is a fave
  August 4th, 2025 16:07
• Saga About Great Poet and Movie Star by Andrey Voznesenski (Ksey_Gan) A poem of conflict and memories possibly regret. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2025 16:05
• Once You Hit A certain Age (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) War and violence sadly addressed in this poem. Nicely written
  August 4th, 2025 15:22
• I don\'t see the depth (Vishakha) Very clever wording leads to an opening of thoughts. Well done
  August 4th, 2025 15:18