Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• My Car, Ma (Mutley Ravishes) A fun read and brings back memories of some old cars I had. Loved it
  March 16th, 2025 20:44
• Grief (Sassy Lou) Grief comes to us all at one time or another. Pain is part of life and no...
  March 16th, 2025 18:47
• Pedestrian Brake Pads (Matthew R. Callies) The shoes we walk in take us through life and all the steps we take. A...
  March 16th, 2025 18:45
• Sleeping Through Alarms (Mya) A child know better how to handle life than when we grow up. Very nice
  March 16th, 2025 18:42
• Beware bloody hyperbolic contents incorporated to embody rage against the machine (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) From now till then this poem goes over events and everything from music to...
  March 16th, 2025 18:40
• The weight of an empty room (Jodie) A poem of leaving already decided. Powerful. Nicely done.
  March 16th, 2025 18:34
• Descending Unlocks (Kurt Philip Behm) Another poem of metaphor of ups and downs. Very nice.
  March 16th, 2025 18:31
• Balancing (Spilleronsheet) This may well be a metaphor for the artist. A wonderful write that...
  March 16th, 2025 13:07
• Misty forests (Alan R) A metaphor of inner self comes to mind and well imaged and stated in most...
  March 16th, 2025 12:59
• Finding (Spilleronsheet) This come and go in poetic form provokes a great deal of thought. A fight...
  March 16th, 2025 12:58
• The Love Choice (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) A poetic recognition that the choice is two fold and that one can put an...
  March 16th, 2025 12:56
• Forgiveness denied (Nicole Pritchard) A worthy write on a subject so misunderstood. Making good a part as is...
  March 16th, 2025 12:55
• Of Bar-B-Que, Pink, and Deja Vu.... (Cheeky Missy) Another day told and so may details that are painting this story. Lovely...
  March 16th, 2025 12:53
• Do I belong? (Pineapple_pizza018) Biblical in nature and archetypal it speaks of power, betrayal, the...
  March 16th, 2025 12:49
• The Weight of Truth ([email protected]) Journalist or metaphor this speaks of telling the truth and the bravery to...
  March 16th, 2025 12:44
• Night Shift (Gray0328) A plumbing metaphor here in a dream like state of self floating. Very well...
  March 16th, 2025 12:41
• The time (Lorenz) Here are thoughts of a beyond and paradox that makes life. Very nicely...
  March 16th, 2025 12:38
• Tears icicled (Tommy B Goode) I hear anger and pain in this poem. It is sad.
  March 16th, 2025 11:56
• She Became a Memory, I Became a Ghost (Dev Parth) A sad poem of loss that bleeds with sorrow. Missed encounters, lost...
  March 16th, 2025 10:00
• Flowers Make Terrible gods (Thomas W Case) A great metaphor here Thomas. Whether gods or lovers the same applies,...
  March 16th, 2025 08:34
• A Thankful Daughter (Kiamiz) This is a very touching poem and I feel that true poetry must touch the...
  March 16th, 2025 07:40
• Waters (2781) A poem of acknowledgement and praise. Very nice
  March 16th, 2025 07:38
• Deep breaths and pants (Maplespal) I our limited dictionary we have ruled out life for many things including...
  March 16th, 2025 07:37
• The Instagram Queen (Mottakeenur Rehman) A poem of love loss and dealing with it. Love can not be bought, or sold...
  March 16th, 2025 07:34
• The Price of Silence (Molly Delaney) Most wonderfully written from the perspective of a child. It is an...
  March 16th, 2025 07:30
• issues (Jim56) Yes Jim that is part of life we all have issues and this poem explains it...
  March 16th, 2025 07:23
• A deer (Ginny jayne) Cute and with a sense of innocence. it paints a beautiful picture. Nicely...
  March 16th, 2025 07:22
• The truth of freedom (Heledd) In one way or another we are all trapped in our own worlds. Some trapped...
  March 16th, 2025 07:20
• The Way of Truth (Whats write for me) Whether it is following their god or a president or their own family or...
  March 16th, 2025 07:17
• They Return (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It is at times hard to tell whether people are really people or not. A fun...
  March 16th, 2025 07:15
• 700000 Mexicans in solitary cinfinement (RSM0812) Strong words this poem is powerfully stated. It speaks to injustice and to...
  March 16th, 2025 07:13
• Skunk in the Backyard (Rabdikavi) The smell of a skunk can not be mistaken for anything else. I ought to...
  March 16th, 2025 07:08
• AN EMPTY SHELL (Nephilim56) A picture too often seen. A story too often told. A broken person than no...
  March 16th, 2025 07:07
• The Dream (Tony36) Here a turn of events makes the poem ironic where revenge begets revenge...
  March 16th, 2025 07:05
• Oh Dear Wales. (Goldfinch60) Some things are more important than other Andy and priorities always need...
  March 16th, 2025 07:01
• Euphrasia’s legacy (Domilla) Beautifully written this poem seems hauntingly mournful and yet familiar....
  March 16th, 2025 06:55
• When The Day Comes (Not_defined) A beautiful image implanted sun like this memory whether of person, love...
  March 16th, 2025 06:51
• Too Soon To Crawl (ADarkerMind) I don\'t pretend to be wise enough to understand all of this but like...
  March 16th, 2025 06:46
• Wise Man Says (6) Have Fun On a Sunny Sunday (Poetic Licence) Always enjoy your wise men say Sunday version it brightens the day and...
  March 16th, 2025 06:34
• Senryu (An Ode to Soulmates) (Teddy.15) A beautiful and encouraging senryu that each line reinforces the one...
  March 16th, 2025 06:17
• pulse (Arqios) This poem made me feel right at home. I live with all this a hundred and...
  March 16th, 2025 06:14
• I have a demon (Poetic_Carm) I would think that in metaphor we all have our demons that at times would...
  March 15th, 2025 19:46
• Oops, What Was That, m\'Dear? (Cheeky Missy) A full banquet mentioned in this poem. Day to day wished my table was as...
  March 15th, 2025 19:44
• fingers (Lunarchloedip) Human contact is important as is feeling loved and wanted. A very nice...
  March 15th, 2025 17:13
• Sometimes we miss people (Caring dove) It is most interesting how minds think alike. My poem today was almost the...
  March 15th, 2025 15:41
• Forever your home (Nicole Pritchard) Beautiful sentiment in this poem that offers love instead of physical...
  March 15th, 2025 15:38
• The Light (Kiamiz) Inspirational and motivating this was a beautiful poem of hope.
  March 15th, 2025 13:56
• The Wolf and the Fax after Sam Marshak (Ksey_Gan) This poem story reminded me of stories my father told us as kids. His...
  March 15th, 2025 13:54
• Bang Bang Boom (Anthony Hanible) Death and destruction in this poem. Quite to the point
  March 15th, 2025 11:42
• His Essence To Be (Kurt Philip Behm) A most philosophical view of God and limits. Lovely
  March 15th, 2025 10:50
• I\'m Already Dead (Molly Delaney) Here the cycle of abuse is put in metaphor and set to verse. A lovely...
  March 15th, 2025 10:48
• Nowruz (Shahla Latifi) A myth in poem is Homeric and it is beautiful to hear. Lovely and well...
  March 15th, 2025 10:45
• Spring Cleaning (Gray0328) What a great metaphor the piece of what could be described as myth like....
  March 15th, 2025 10:15
• Love for losers (2781) A most interesting poem and I love the last line. It is full of deeper...
  March 15th, 2025 10:12
• Gone (John Prophet) A poem of word associations, dark and with as sense of loss
  March 15th, 2025 08:26
• The other (Lorenz) Philosophical and existential this poem is filled with metaphor and vivid...
  March 15th, 2025 07:46
• Relationship (RSM0812) The good and the bad together make up life. If one can not accept it that...
  March 15th, 2025 07:43
• Play (Tony36) And so is fantasy in the mind a playground where reality does not rule....
  March 15th, 2025 07:42
• A Hot Day ([email protected]) This poem vivid in its imagery is taken literally but in metaphor it may...
  March 15th, 2025 07:40
• Coat of dust (Tommy B Goode) Metaphor upon metaphor in this short piece. The meaninglessness of life...
  March 15th, 2025 07:38
• Heart of Deception (Tristan Robert Lange) The first shape appeared the box the second the half eaten heart. The work...
  March 15th, 2025 07:35
• First dance (Maplespal)
  March 15th, 2025 07:23
• First dance (Maplespal) Many stories appear but the one I chose is of two young lovers who in the...
  March 15th, 2025 07:23
• The Outsider\'s Flame (Rebellion_in_sanity) The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are...
  March 15th, 2025 07:20
• It\'s The Way It Is (DesertWords) This is such a real feel in this poem. It is raw and speaks for the common...
  March 15th, 2025 06:09
• Think like a poet (Poetaldo) A prayer like poem acknowledging the frailties of man and asking for help...
  March 15th, 2025 06:05
• Bloom (Isa kemmy) The flight of the bee, and like a bee we all follow our senses that draw...
  March 15th, 2025 06:03
• robin verse (Jim56) Always each year had robins where I grew up they and sparrows made up the...
  March 15th, 2025 06:00
• His Sense Of Humour (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Love the topic of this poem. If there is a god he/she definitely has a...
  March 15th, 2025 05:54
• Fear (Chris M 352) Full of melancholy this poem and sadness where we must carry ourselves...
  March 15th, 2025 05:51
• Love and hate (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) The unity of love and hate a Janus face. There can not be one without the...
  March 15th, 2025 05:48
• The Eternal Breath (Mohammad Younus) Lovely! There is no absence for true love it knows no boundaries of space...
  March 15th, 2025 05:45
• AN ANGELS NOTE (Nephilim56) This one shows good rhyme and meter in its flow with short lines that make...
  March 15th, 2025 05:40
• Soul Tracker (Teddy.15) Teddy this one had such a nice appeal to it from the meter to the rhyme...
  March 15th, 2025 05:38
• Do Not Cut Corners (Poetic Licence) This is far deeper than the simple and fun verse that it appears to be....
  March 15th, 2025 05:34
• echoes of Babel (Arqios) Brilliant! I have heard this Bible (fable) used to explain many things...
  March 15th, 2025 05:27
• can\'t we be happy? (Sheta) Being happy is the only thing worth while in life yet to be happy means...
  March 15th, 2025 05:18
• Just a step away (EvenwheniLie) The death of someone only occurs when they are forgotten and all traces of...
  March 15th, 2025 05:16
• Drowning in the mist (Ally) I remember those days. There was never enough time to learn what one...
  March 15th, 2025 05:11
• A plea for forgiveness (Nicole Pritchard) A plea for forgiveness in this poem. Written with the recognition that...
  March 15th, 2025 05:08
• Life Is Ahead. (Goldfinch60) Good advice Gold for all to hear. Make the best of each day Carpe Diem...
  March 15th, 2025 05:02
• Time to Disappear (Haleyalexis) Nicely written.
  March 14th, 2025 19:02
• A Dead Rose (Anthony Hanible) A poem of feeling dead and destroyed. A most interesting write
  March 14th, 2025 19:00
• Lost libido as rez erected cockamamie Shtrungool haint no prickly fallacy (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Tricky Dicky was what we called Nixon. The president was a Dick. A...
  March 14th, 2025 18:58
• The breezy wind (Sweksha)
  March 14th, 2025 17:39
• The breezy wind (Sweksha) A beautiful write with great images. Lovely
  March 14th, 2025 17:39
• rage (Lunarchloedip) A truth that many don\'t realize. Good write
  March 14th, 2025 15:58
• Baby don\'t leave me (Poetaldo) Hopefully not at least not soon. A heartfelt write
  March 14th, 2025 13:39
• Looking, Shall We Say, Remarkably Innocent?! (Cheeky Missy) Ah for spring and its blue skies. Your poems blend wonderful nature images...
  March 14th, 2025 13:13
• Now lookie here, humans (Orchidee) Now Orchi we know that they are really Cavia porcellus and that Guinea pig...
  March 14th, 2025 13:10
• her (Newt) We call that infatuation. A lovely read with great lines of images. Well...
  March 14th, 2025 13:06
• Winter evening after Alexander Pushkin (Ksey_Gan) The mood is set with this poem and whether in metaphor or not it tells its...
  March 14th, 2025 13:04
• Sorry for the mess (CuriousWanderer) A poem of proposal whether metaphoric or literal it speaks of an...
  March 14th, 2025 12:59
• Secret desires (Melancholia) Erotic and sensuous this poem speaks of sexual desire. When the hormones...
  March 14th, 2025 12:56
• According To Wyatt (Kurt Philip Behm) Another short that tells more than the words or length.
  March 14th, 2025 12:45
• Life to Come (Kevin Michael Bloor) A sad poem that calls out for a father now gone. We all lose our fathers...
  March 14th, 2025 12:41
• I try (JuneM) A sad poem that tells the tale of physical attributes ruling over the...
  March 14th, 2025 12:38
• Morning’s Sorrows (Ajon4wheels) A horrible plight, pain is what I fear most either physical or emotional....
  March 14th, 2025 12:31
• Random thought (Jerry Reynolds) I\'ve been there when no matter how you adjust your coat you are still...
  March 14th, 2025 11:44
• Solitude my brother (Orions pen) I love the personification of feelings in this poem. It reads very well...
  March 14th, 2025 11:39