Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Untitled {15} (Niko Papadatos) There is a circularity and feeling of security and peace that goes with...
  November 19th, 2025 08:20
• robin in my garden (Jim56) Another wonderful nature poem Jim very nice.
  November 19th, 2025 08:17
• Butter storms (Awam) Such a good write. A easily identifiable life that serves as a metaphor...
  November 19th, 2025 08:16
• Death callouses aimless tries (Cirawrites01) Death but the lack of breath, a heart stopped, a body swapped, too much...
  November 19th, 2025 08:13
• To the core. (Andrew Deaton) A wonderful poem. How strong is a rock? Does it strike back? It without...
  November 19th, 2025 08:05
• the road ahead (Arqios) I have someone I know that always says never go backward only forward. He...
  November 19th, 2025 08:02
• THE WIDOWER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) How difficult to adapt to someone missed, how to fill the hours of the...
  November 19th, 2025 05:04
• We are the innovator\'s (Aa Harvey) A poem of alliteration galore, enough to fill the belly of any desiring...
  November 19th, 2025 05:02
• Encouraging Exhortation (Orchidee) Some of these old testament ones are head scratchers for me since I must...
  November 19th, 2025 04:58
• it didn\'t take long (Carpe4diem) A tender love poem that comes as a revelation of inner disrobing of...
  November 19th, 2025 03:41
• Gimmick (Ja'Quan Shepard) Colloquial in nature it reveals the author in street poetry. A budding...
  November 19th, 2025 03:36
• The world a distant hum (Kayla Jackson) This poem calls to the reader from the shadows. It speaks softly and...
  November 19th, 2025 03:34
• Excerpts from \"The Coffee Machine\" (DeadRose) Loosing one\'s focus from the beauty around us leaves us in a routine and...
  November 19th, 2025 03:32
• 𝒲𝒶𝓉𝒸𝒽 𝓉𝒽𝒾𝓈... (Keyara S Trotman) A power outage now days is a disaster but one could make it into a...
  November 19th, 2025 03:28
• Sonnet On The Choral. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful sonnet that speaks to the power of music and how it can heal....
  November 19th, 2025 03:25
• C\'est la vie (Poetaldo) A poem of trying to do things right and giving credit to God. Nicely...
  November 18th, 2025 19:49
• Desolate Echoes (El Gato) A poem that identifies with rear and yet anxiety is a great motivator and...
  November 18th, 2025 19:47
• ONLY RACISTS DRINK HERE (David Welch) Moral of the story never judge a book by its cover and there are more than...
  November 18th, 2025 19:45
• Chef-Shocked (Mutley Ravishes) One never knows what to believe now days and this poem seems to reinforce...
  November 18th, 2025 19:41
• Sacrificing warmth (Maplespal) This poem speaks with nostalgia of the past and well said as well. It...
  November 18th, 2025 19:40
• Headache (A.N.)
  November 18th, 2025 19:39
• Headache (A.N.) A most interesting poem of faults and pains suffered. I have to ask myself...
  November 18th, 2025 19:39
• Forever Yours (Neil Higgins) Most poetic this declaration of love and accompanying natural beauty. Well...
  November 18th, 2025 19:36
• a cruel love (Applecherry) This poem expresses a strong feeling of attachment and no desire for...
  November 18th, 2025 19:34
• Dawning of the Day (Pete the poet) Quite the nocturnal journey in this poem. A dream of symbols and images....
  November 18th, 2025 16:56
• Restitution and reinstatement of EBT funds a dogsend (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) What a wonderful world it is indeed. A poem that leads to this conclusion....
  November 18th, 2025 15:09
• Two shaggers (Velvet.Riot) A poetic plea for love and an offer. Nicely made
  November 18th, 2025 14:27
• Whilst We Are Living (Paul Gerard Reed) Such a true statement that we are only afraid while we are living. Nicely...
  November 18th, 2025 14:24
• Toxic Persistence (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Most all things start small and here in this treaties of poetic line it...
  November 18th, 2025 13:16
• Untitled {14} (Niko Papadatos) The puppeteer does not need to leave his place he has strings to do his...
  November 18th, 2025 13:09
• The man (Ja'Quan Shepard) A poem of relationship not working and the fallout from it. Well said
  November 18th, 2025 13:08
• My Wings of Affection (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) Full of metaphor this poem speaks to a love that can\'t be. Nicely done
  November 18th, 2025 12:06
• Symbiotic Fratricide (Kurt Philip Behm) Now Kurt this one was so clever I had to give it a fave. Well done
  November 18th, 2025 12:05
• I Started Talking to God (Aziza S) A very personal poem of belief and love. Nicely done.
  November 18th, 2025 11:25
• Brain Farts and Other Commonalities (Matthew R. Callies) Wonderfully written this poem hits the fun points and amusing...
  November 18th, 2025 11:23
• glory of morning (Devender Kumar) A great short that displays nature in her glory
  November 18th, 2025 11:12
• My Angel (RSM0812) An angelic poem of angels. Nicely written
  November 18th, 2025 11:11
• This is a Mess (Thomas W Case) A most interesting poem with a series of vivid images well done Thomas
  November 18th, 2025 11:05
• Elegy of the self (Nayak) Dark and sad it offers redemption at the end but with no trace. A most...
  November 18th, 2025 09:42
• dreamer (Jim56) Dreams we all have and need. A lovely poem that reflects what many wish...
  November 18th, 2025 07:35
• The Odds (Katie B.) A lovely message so well said. Everything is relative and often the dream...
  November 18th, 2025 07:34
• Prophet\'s Prayer (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan again the visual drop of precipice and the falling feeling of...
  November 18th, 2025 07:30
• Growing Pains (Sebastian.) Emotions and principally love and hate come in waves and tides the cycle...
  November 18th, 2025 05:52
• Kybalion (Andrew Deaton) A good deal of thought went into this poem. It holds and broadcasts a...
  November 18th, 2025 05:44
• WORLD WAR ONE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Strong images evoke a visceral feel to this poem. Nicely written
  November 18th, 2025 04:49
• Mitchell: Man, Lover (Edited version) (Tkatie118) The introduction of wordplay in this poem was most creative the...
  November 18th, 2025 04:47
• You Got To Believe (Jjudaharts) A haunting poem that is brief but powerful and speaks to what hope is all...
  November 18th, 2025 03:45
• Learning To Set Me Free (Kman Pumpkin King28) This poem speaks of shutting off the pain of emotions and the return of...
  November 18th, 2025 03:44
• Crimson desert (Ethan Mikel StAmour) You produce haiku after haiku a specialist and good for you. This one is...
  November 18th, 2025 03:38
• Victory Invitations: Your Go-To Place for Stunning Wedding Invitation Cards (Victory Invitations) Adds on a poetry site, what next? I guess everybody needs to make a buck
  November 18th, 2025 03:36
• The Book Of Shaun Matthew (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We all have strong feelings about things that others disregard. Diversity...
  November 18th, 2025 03:33
• The Fog and the Fever (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Feelings at times so contrary to reality and possibility yet resilient to...
  November 18th, 2025 03:30
• A Walk On The Moors (Goldfinch60) Such a walk can free the thoughts and emotions, nature is a wonderful...
  November 18th, 2025 03:28
• Maybe you also got a check, yes mate? (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A taste of the old scam sandwich. Take a bite and taste the bitterness. A...
  November 17th, 2025 20:58
• For a song (Ja'Quan Shepard) Got the rhyme and the beat but my ignorance took away the meat. I got the...
  November 17th, 2025 20:55
• Born Helper or hinderer (EvenwheniLie) The awesome spectacle of being human and mere existence. The very being of...
  November 17th, 2025 20:53
• UNCLE TOM (David Welch) A great social commentary in the story of a man. Nicely written in a...
  November 17th, 2025 20:50
• A Rose (RSM0812) A beautiful picture painted in this poem with great metaphor as well....
  November 17th, 2025 20:47
• That moment we dread (Maplespal) A poem that seems a premonition. The question is who is being referred to....
  November 17th, 2025 18:07
• That\'s not me. (ViolenceEndeavour) A poem stating not only that the author is different that others but that...
  November 17th, 2025 16:05
• Presence (FrasMac) Such a great image the frost. The continuation of this image through that...
  November 17th, 2025 15:29
• Quiet Ache (Rosey) Distraction is often the best way to keep negative thoughts out of mind. A...
  November 17th, 2025 14:13
• Kingmaker (Ladywithaquill) Whether relating to a marital relationship or a country with people it...
  November 17th, 2025 14:10
• Washed Ashore (Gewar) A poem that tells us that despite as bad as it gets things can get better....
  November 17th, 2025 14:07
• Elixir (Carter M. Flynn) New experiences have to be lived not thought. Well done
  November 17th, 2025 13:01
• \'Seasons Go Round ...\' (Kurt Philip Behm) A so it would be with Buddha observe, do not judge just watch.
  November 17th, 2025 12:59
• A Unclear Life (Kainat Noor) Cryptically written it walks through social facades and gives the reader...
  November 17th, 2025 12:58
• The running girl (Lorenz) Fantasies fly reality crawls on the ground and buries itself in the sand....
  November 17th, 2025 12:53
• when all else fails, try following directions (Gray0328) Under the facade of a short story lies deep meaning in this poem. So often...
  November 17th, 2025 11:39
• Four Score and Seven Years Ago (Matthew R. Callies) Patriotic and bold it speaks with power. Nicely done
  November 17th, 2025 11:37
• The Gravity of Unconcern: A Whimsical Trilogy (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) The flirt game in print. I particularly loved the first part of this poem...
  November 17th, 2025 11:35
• wounds of the zephyr (Devender Kumar) This senryu has a wonderful last line that makes it a fave
  November 17th, 2025 11:28
• Shame (Sebastian.) What a marvelous blend of rhyme schemes near rhyme and meter. In many ways...
  November 17th, 2025 11:27
• Untitled {13} (Niko Papadatos) A great thought the scales of love. If there were such scales they would...
  November 17th, 2025 11:24
• just let me write poetry (DeadRose) Clever blending of numbers and the poem. A good write of expectations of...
  November 17th, 2025 11:22
• moonlight walk (Jim56) Such a beautiful scene you created Jim. I have been there and feel it....
  November 17th, 2025 11:19
• Jingle Bells (Awam) Funny how tradition melts into plastic and candles become LED lights....
  November 17th, 2025 11:18
• Thorns (Meera Mere) Truth in this short piece and a prickly truth at that. Well written it...
  November 17th, 2025 11:14
• Grace Still Remains (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan this sounds like the passage from an old spell book, or maybe a...
  November 17th, 2025 11:12
• Patience (William Hromada) \"I listen to the small chaos of her morning and feel the minute hand...
  November 17th, 2025 11:09
• BETWEEN CORDS / ENTRE CORDELES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Bustillos I prefer that first English translation in that it has more raw...
  November 17th, 2025 11:02
• Thankful Thoughts (Orchidee) And so Solomon did build it only to have it destroyed and have to be...
  November 17th, 2025 10:56
• hello poetry (Arqios) Poetic thoughts put to ink. I find may a poem breaks in through a closed...
  November 17th, 2025 10:53
• Heart Felt (Brian Taylor) This poem is a terrifying image of coming close to death and feeling it as...
  November 17th, 2025 04:52
• Fire among the water (Ethan Mikel StAmour) A beautiful haiku of sunset or sunrise on the water. Nicely done
  November 17th, 2025 03:43
• LITTLE BOY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Whether by death or abandonment the loss of a father figure is sad for the...
  November 17th, 2025 03:42
• 🚨Shedding light on light (Ms.divine) A message directly sent in few words. In metaphor a clear understanding....
  November 17th, 2025 03:40
• Faith and Hope (James Michael) A poem of belief and of faith from which grows a sense of religiosity....
  November 17th, 2025 03:36
• The Merger (E.J. Waling) The process of amalgamation, the mixing and merging of all things to unify...
  November 17th, 2025 03:35
• A Renewed Prescence (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read with a blend of religion, sci-fi and the use of metaphor in...
  November 17th, 2025 03:31
• ODD AND ODDER (5) (Michael Edwards) Now there is a rhyme that made me feel young again. Such words told by the...
  November 17th, 2025 03:28
• Happy Birthday Dad. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful tribute Andy. Mine too passed many years ago and would have...
  November 17th, 2025 03:26
• 𝔄𝔫𝔡 𝔗𝔥𝔞𝔱\'𝔰 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔄𝔟𝔬𝔲𝔱 ℑ𝔱 (Keyara S Trotman) Thoughts caught between what we think and what we say. Often it is not...
  November 17th, 2025 03:22
• A Light has Travelled (Kevin Hulme) A poem of memories cast in light and distance. Reflections of past...
  November 17th, 2025 03:19
• To Marlene Dietrich by Alexander Vertinsky (Ksey_Gan) A poem of parting and leaving. In its sadness there is little sadness....
  November 16th, 2025 20:20
• Sheherazade (Eugene S.) A poem that at first glance seems surreal and with most interesting...
  November 16th, 2025 20:17
• My fault, all of it (Hadley) The reiteration of my fault reinforces the feeling in this poem. It is an...
  November 16th, 2025 20:14
• Heart Felt (Brian Taylor) Welcome to MPS a poem with such vivid imagery and with a continuing flow...
  November 16th, 2025 20:11
• I COULD\'VE SWORN.. ONLY I (Michaelm) The line the midnight hourglass was always empty is a good one provoking...
  November 16th, 2025 20:08
• Feelings. (ViolenceEndeavour) Welcome to MPS a most interesting poem of expectations and experiences and...
  November 16th, 2025 20:06