Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Red (The Indignant Poetess) Suicide is a most selfish act. It disregards the effect that it will have...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:55
• Trust (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) I like the jib of this poem, balance, rhyme, meter and all it tells its...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:51
• Notes in bottles (Coracaodacripta) This in many ways sounds classical in form and is somewhat of a soliloquy....
  March 2nd, 2025 04:49
• love (Sheta) A good write and yes love encompasses them all.
  March 2nd, 2025 04:45
• Resuscitate (Rebellion_in_sanity) This is a rather sad longing for a past life departed. A desire for its...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:43
• The River of Thought (Salvia.S) This seems simple at first glance but becomes deeper as one ponders. It...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:39
• Fun in (Sun)Day (Poetic Licence) Tobani these are actually all good advice. Another fun read on a Sunday....
  March 2nd, 2025 04:34
• No5 From MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards) Another great fanciful rhyme that keeps me thinking, imagining, and...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:32
• Eclipse (Arqios) Your voice is always welcome and your poetry enjoyed. Memories are never...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:25
• Time to Shine (Cellinic) A cryptic write to unravel lies in this poem. Thought provoking.
  March 2nd, 2025 04:22
• Why insult others ? (NafisaSB) A great message in this poem. Unfortunately until we feel true love for...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:18
• Same O\'l Song.. (Lyricalremedy) A modern day prophesy and just like the old ones few listen. The story has...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:14
• Prince of the Private School (Thomas W Case) The evolution and development of literary interest. A very open divulgence...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:11
• old dogs and older boots (Queer-with-a-pen) Reflections. Nicely written and well said. As we look back on our lives we...
  March 2nd, 2025 04:07
• the war within (Xiaohua) A short write that feels quite Biblical in nature. Very nice
  March 2nd, 2025 04:00
• Campfires Gone Bye (MDStone) A great metaphor of aging love is well portrayed in this poem with great...
  March 2nd, 2025 03:58
• Humility is Our Hope (James Michael) I find it most interesting that Human and Humility start the same as words...
  March 2nd, 2025 03:52
• People Praise (Orchidee) Another great hymn. Those added notes add flavor and yes there do seem to...
  March 2nd, 2025 03:44
• Love For Eternity And Beyond. (Goldfinch60) There is enough love for everyone. A most lovely thought
  March 2nd, 2025 03:34
• The cry of married man (Ksey_Gan) After years of being together things become like this. A write of an older...
  March 1st, 2025 16:19
• For You (Bird In Red) A beautiful poem and the last line is the most important and meaningful....
  March 1st, 2025 14:53
• Beauty (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Beauty should never define a person, there is so much more. Loved the poem...
  March 1st, 2025 14:52
• Where it comes from (Hzugman) A good message cleverly put. I sometimes choke on my words. I\'ve been...
  March 1st, 2025 14:51
• Faithful Eyes (Whats write for me) And so it is indeed each sunrise and sunset are markers of faith and...
  March 1st, 2025 14:48
• The Cage (Shahla Latifi) A sad poem of confinement whether real or metaphorical. Yet we are all in...
  March 1st, 2025 14:47
• punctual predator (Gray0328) Have had several through the years and each just as demanding as the last....
  March 1st, 2025 14:44
• hard to do (Demar Desu) May be a good place to be. Another short but provocative poem to make the...
  March 1st, 2025 14:42
• [Even Open Mic Wouldn\'t Cut It] (Cheeky Missy) And life goes on. Memories portrayed and delicacies devoured. Day to day...
  March 1st, 2025 14:39
• The dark dahlia (Lorenz) My father grew Dahlias and some were very dark. A rather serious poem that...
  March 1st, 2025 11:42
• Tools of the Trade (Eugene S.) Cynical and dark it is more true than not and strikes a chord Very nicely...
  March 1st, 2025 11:39
• Time consuming (Freddi) Great images and metaphor to describe the rush in our lives where we...
  March 1st, 2025 11:36
• Scam (RSM0812) Open to many interpretations this one I took as each or our own meat sacks...
  March 1st, 2025 11:33
• Lament for Life (Rebellion_in_sanity) A poem I can identify with and how true it is. Sad and regretful. A well...
  March 1st, 2025 11:29
• Intelligent Design (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Loved this write it speaks to all. Very nicely worded and composed.
  March 1st, 2025 09:21
• Give and Take (Tristan Robert Lange) And haven\'t we all? I have gone through phases of worshiping different...
  March 1st, 2025 09:19
• The Lone Cucumber (Tony36) Creative, fun. I loved it.
  March 1st, 2025 08:13
• animal cruelty (Jim56) Whether animals or people it\'s all the same hurting others sometimes in...
  March 1st, 2025 07:03
• Luminous Lunar (Salvia.S) So short yet so beautiful like a single star. Lovely
  March 1st, 2025 07:01
• Life (Kevin Michael Bloor) Ah but that\'s the key trying to make words that don\'t rhyme fit and...
  March 1st, 2025 07:00
• 2 Thoughts from a bird (Maplespal) Not only a great write from a birds perspective but as a metaphor. Loved...
  March 1st, 2025 05:34
• Adventures of Mary and Harry (2) (Poetic Licence) Words are like people they can be a lot of fun but difficult to work with....
  March 1st, 2025 05:31
• New month new hope (Funmiwrites) A wonderful wish for all revealed in this poem. Nicely done
  March 1st, 2025 05:29
• FREE (Nephilim56) Although in metaphor more, in the literal it reminded me of camping trips...
  March 1st, 2025 05:27
• “Liquid Love” (Peanut) This poem is well worded and metered reflecting deep emotion that is not...
  March 1st, 2025 05:25
• brother (Sheta) What brother and sister should be. United in family. A lovely short with...
  March 1st, 2025 05:23
• Planets On Parade (Reynaldo Casison) The stars and night sky has always been romantic in its mystery and far...
  March 1st, 2025 05:22
• Please Don\'t Enter (Anthony Hanible) Does OSHA know of this place? Just kidding. This sounds like someone that...
  March 1st, 2025 05:20
• Sinners And Babylon (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read that seems a warning to Hollywood. Nicely worded
  March 1st, 2025 05:10
• Castle Keep (Arqios) And such is childhood with its growing change simple, honest views of...
  March 1st, 2025 05:00
• Daffodils Of Yellow (Ajon4wheels) Close observation and respect for nature are evident in this poem....
  March 1st, 2025 04:48
• Gravity between us (Amy Michelle Mosier) Here metaphor meets love and one thinks of how spacy one feels when in...
  March 1st, 2025 04:45
• Scotch Tape Sweepstakes (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Never thought I would see a poem about a book cover just goes to show that...
  March 1st, 2025 04:42
• i/o (AnxiousMane) A clever write with great word usage and so much said in so few words....
  March 1st, 2025 04:37
• It Is Still Love (Teddy.15) A recognition of the good and sad in even love but all is resolved in the...
  March 1st, 2025 04:35
• Creation Praise (Orchidee) Another great hymn of praise. I always wondered Orchi why so much time was...
  March 1st, 2025 04:32
• That Place Called Home. (Goldfinch60) A warm place that leaves a warm feeling and whether there or not it always...
  March 1st, 2025 04:27
• My Dog\'s Revenge (Randyjohnson71) This one made me chuckle and that is worth a fave. A fun read
  February 28th, 2025 21:27
• Lines on a Railway Station (Kevin Hulme) A lovely write in rhyme and good meter I think it is the nostalgia of the...
  February 28th, 2025 21:25
• NBA 2k25 (Demar Desu) A fun Senryu. It seems that all games have deteriorated over the years to...
  February 28th, 2025 21:21
• Passionless (RefugeInRain) This poem leaves a feeling of being stuck somehow and the need for motion....
  February 28th, 2025 21:20
• You (Ofentsevictoriousthomas) I feel fond memories in this poem as if remembering a grandparent or maybe...
  February 28th, 2025 21:18
• Am I Enough (Dev Parth) A poem that speaks to being oneself. A lovely write about finding oneself...
  February 28th, 2025 19:08
• Dark writer??? (Pineapple_pizza018) Such a sense of loss. Feelings of being robbed of oneself. Drugged and...
  February 28th, 2025 19:05
• growing (Lunarchloedip) A poem of growth that at times is painful or difficult but blooms. A...
  February 28th, 2025 19:00
• “Impressionist” (Peanut) Beautiful! A lovely write of under estimating oneself and surprise when...
  February 28th, 2025 18:58
• Without dreams we have nothing (Poetaldo) Change and acceptance of it seems to be the theme of this poem. I get the...
  February 28th, 2025 18:55
• i care (Sheta) To love someone requires energy but it defies the laws of entropy by...
  February 28th, 2025 13:30
• These Eyes (Anthony Hanible) A powerful write of enough being enough. Well written
  February 28th, 2025 13:29
• A Poet\'s Heart (Newt) It is true that with our senses and brain we as poets paint the world in...
  February 28th, 2025 13:27
• ...Where Tomorrow Never Truly Comes (Cheeky Missy) Chic another two great poems this time with no food and I was prepared to...
  February 28th, 2025 13:06
• the lessons we swallow (Gray0328) There is a positive side to every coin and even the most difficult has...
  February 28th, 2025 11:19
• Death\'s Indenture (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This has wonderful lines that draw the reader along. Very nice
  February 28th, 2025 10:28
• The American Dream (Truskiad) The melding of fruit to love to religion. A wonderful write
  February 28th, 2025 10:24
• Plan Éternel (Whats write for me) Well written in form of faith. The Bible has its own poetry.
  February 28th, 2025 10:22
• Beyond The Veils (John Prophet) So true at least they say. A concept that holds true for physics, society...
  February 28th, 2025 08:37
• Race night (Tony36) Whether a metaphor for the race to the weekend or literal it is a great...
  February 28th, 2025 08:34
• Epilogue (Lorenz) Such a blend of metaphor and real in this poem loved it
  February 28th, 2025 08:32
• Lament of the Last Leaf (Salvia.S) This poem is tightly woven. Memories, echoes, time, beauty are all...
  February 28th, 2025 08:21
• Call This What You Will, I Call It Misogyny (Tristan Robert Lange) A noble poem for those that are least likely to read it, a message for...
  February 28th, 2025 08:11
• The last 3 of the River story (Maplespal) Each with its own form of sadness, forlorn they cast shadows and darken....
  February 28th, 2025 06:49
• This Is the Start (Paul Gerard Reed) Great metaphors contained in this piece. A lovely write of rejuvenation
  February 28th, 2025 06:42
• dog company (Jim56) A tribute to man\'s best friend and what more could one ask. Very nice Jim
  February 28th, 2025 05:56
• The Tree That Grieves (Ajon4wheels) The cycle of life presented here in metaphor children representing new...
  February 28th, 2025 04:32
• Only Rose (Reynaldo Casison) A romance with words, pouring images sensuous, over natures beauty. Very...
  February 28th, 2025 04:30
• To Be Alone (Poetic Licence) With so much struggle to be with others we all find in the end that we are...
  February 28th, 2025 04:28
• ANOTHER MILE (Nephilim56) Memory fades slowly and once imprinted carries its mark. A wistful and...
  February 28th, 2025 04:25
• Deep Water Harbor (Mutley Ravishes) Full of metaphor this one falls back on mythology to aid its course and so...
  February 28th, 2025 04:23
• The Flower and Me. (Junes) A beautiful write that touches the heart and for that I give it a fave....
  February 28th, 2025 04:21
• untitled 575 ( what lingers on ) (Arqios) Lovely poetic metaphors play in this poem of musical images a painting of...
  February 28th, 2025 04:18
• The Beauty Of The New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A most beautiful sonnet Andy. It lightens the heart and turns ones...
  February 28th, 2025 04:16
• poetry the gateway drug (MR.apocalypse) A fun read of rhyme the question is what the poet is moving on to.
  February 28th, 2025 04:06
• Rule morning (Funmiwrites) It is early morning here and the sun is just starting to brighten the...
  February 28th, 2025 04:04
• I, II, III (Beccadeepinside) This write was powerful and highly emotional pulling at the heart strings....
  February 28th, 2025 04:00
• Tremble (Beccadeepinside) You have a powerful piece here with a great theme and you have chosen a...
  February 28th, 2025 03:42
• Back Roads (MDStone) There is a lot to be said for back roads. I have taken many in my life....
  February 28th, 2025 03:34
• In ten years... (Weep little lion girl) Poetry can be therapy, it can give direction, it can be dreams. A lovely...
  February 28th, 2025 03:30
• Night And Day (Kurtis77) Teenage fun described in this poem. This takes me back creating a lot of...
  February 27th, 2025 19:41
• \" Love Without Stir \" (Shlok kumar author) A definite love poem as each line reinforces this. Nicely written in a...
  February 27th, 2025 19:38
• My Love My Love (Anthony Hanible) It is a difficult thing to loose something. This is well expressed in this...
  February 27th, 2025 19:32
• The Tide Pool (Thomas W Case) Such a recognition of our place in this universe. A most wonderful write...
  February 27th, 2025 14:49