Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- 3 poems on time (Maplespal)
Time from different perspectives each well written
October 22nd, 2024 20:27 - World Piece (DLewis88)
A great write just before the US election. A message that goes unheeded. ...
October 22nd, 2024 20:23 - Dad and the creaky window. (David Wakeling)
A most interesting tribute so to speak. It has that tongue in cheek kind...
October 22nd, 2024 20:21 - Broken Glass (River123)
Some very interesting lines and concepts expressed here. Lovely
October 22nd, 2024 20:18 - Blue Life (Thomas W Case)
Modern art where ever you can find it. This poem reminds me of Picasso
October 22nd, 2024 20:15 - Hermanus (Jane Walker)
Across the pond I\'ve watched the same in South Brazil. A beautiful sight...
October 22nd, 2024 13:27 - Evening – (The Cancer Ballads IV) (Daniel McDonagh)
Such beautiful images set off against a sad and horrific ending. The...
October 22nd, 2024 13:24 - ~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days! (Thad Wilk)
A great write for Halloween and this time of the year.
October 22nd, 2024 11:54 - TRUE FRIEND (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Love yourself then you can love someone else. Know yourself then you can...
October 22nd, 2024 09:18 - The Maze (Tony36)
Life is such with the exit what we are not often looking for. Nice write...
October 22nd, 2024 08:46 - What Makes a Hero (Gray0328)
Unsung heros that do for others that which no others see. A most beautiful...
October 22nd, 2024 08:45 - The All-Inclusive Breakfast (Tom Dylan)
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style....
October 22nd, 2024 07:33 - in echoes wade (Arqios)
Beautiful words ripple in the well of memories. The soft peal of the bell...
October 22nd, 2024 06:06 - lifes school (Jim56)
Cleverly worded in the beginning of this poem language remniscent of a...
October 22nd, 2024 06:02 - My little polish café (Lorenz)
Memories and associations paired in how a place, foods, smells evoke the...
October 22nd, 2024 05:57 - Some Things Change Too Much (Neville)
Ahh the meaning here taken in so many ways. The mind wanders and ponders,...
October 22nd, 2024 05:55 - Will I Ever Awaken? (Teddy.15)
So many focus on the terrors of war on the battle field yet so little...
October 22nd, 2024 05:46 - Avoi-Dance (Mutley Ravishes)
Clever and relatable it screams of life\'s rush. Lovely
October 22nd, 2024 05:21 - We Have Arrived. (Goldfinch60)
So good to hear someone talk of their contentment. All the best my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 05:19 - Illogical Soup (Dan Williams)
I know Dave that poems can be taken many different ways by readers and so...
October 22nd, 2024 05:16 - Essay on Excuses (Dan Williams)
(First little moths of senility flit more regularly now,) a great line...
October 22nd, 2024 05:05 - Today\'s world (𓆩Mase𓆪)
Very original in its form and yet with rhyme it rings with defiance and...
October 22nd, 2024 04:57 - A sheltering shell (Maplespal)
A most enjoyable read this poem notes how we exploit the world around us...
October 21st, 2024 17:30 - So Red The Nose (ADarkerMind)
Well Melvin more conundrums to unravel. Nicely written and composed.
October 21st, 2024 13:24 - I never saw her again (Vishakha)
Carefully worded it remains open to interpretation but as I read it she...
October 21st, 2024 11:38 - S W A T (Gray0328)
A great Acostic nicely done
October 21st, 2024 10:23 - GUILTY AS SIN (Rebellion_in_sanity)
A new New Testament written on a dollar bill and prophesized by Jeff Bezos...
October 21st, 2024 10:21 - ~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch! (Thad Wilk)
Almost Shakepear Mcbeth a fun read and all in the season of darkness.
October 21st, 2024 10:16 - The Path (Tony36)
Is this a series? I\'ll be waiting to hear what lies ahead. Good seasonal...
October 21st, 2024 08:23 - Alone4 (John Prophet)
Point only one dimention, line two, figure three forever endless but what...
October 21st, 2024 08:20 - we dont die (Jim56)
An old gospel song (I\'ll fly away) Although not religious myself I always...
October 21st, 2024 06:31 - A Different Time, A Different Path (Teddy.15)
A taste of Frost on an autum morning. To learn form experience is the...
October 21st, 2024 06:26 - jester’s truth (Arqios)
As poetic as nature itself with hidden meaning as cryptic as the universe...
October 21st, 2024 06:21 - An ode to he who must not be named. (Kerry)
Though many would condem I do not. If one is aware of the consequences of...
October 21st, 2024 05:18 - Back To The Sea. (Goldfinch60)
Relaxing and care free with one that one loves nothing more beautiful
October 21st, 2024 05:15 - Beneath the Surgical Sky (Tristan Robert Lange)
As I read this I think of an onion the surface shell then another beneath...
October 21st, 2024 05:13 - The Truth (David Wakeling)
The first sentence is my favorite line. Powerful and unexpected but rings...
October 21st, 2024 05:08 - Deus ex machina (Lorenz)
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just...
October 21st, 2024 04:58 - The Hush Of Morning (Mark The Phenomenon)
A very patriotic poem that with the fervor and passion of powerful words...
October 21st, 2024 04:55 - In the Beginning of Our Forever (Neville)
I have been there. A great feeling, exhilarating. At such times I have...
October 21st, 2024 04:51 - The Reading (Tom Dylan)
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever...
October 21st, 2024 04:41 - Bumblebee (John Prophet)
Great contrast and comparison. Very nicely done John
October 20th, 2024 17:40 - The Hand. (David Wakeling)
Tribute to a part of us we often take for granted unil we loose it. Some...
October 20th, 2024 17:16 - Isn\'t Deja Vu, Like, Badly Overused?! (Cheeky Missy)
Three sonnets opening and ending a Sunday way with the middle memories of...
October 20th, 2024 12:40 - Tell me a story (Tony36)
Tony we all love a good story books, movies, theater, and poems I love...
October 20th, 2024 10:04 - Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk)
So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used...
October 20th, 2024 09:13 - The Company you Keep (Mlarouss)
Good advice that I always gave to my children although they did not always...
October 20th, 2024 06:35 - The Weight of Unforgiven Sins (Gray0328)
Guilt is a heavy burden and heavier still is self deception. We all carry...
October 20th, 2024 06:33 - Trapped in a lies noose (Maplespal)
Life is complicated and one has to ask if lies are better than truth some...
October 20th, 2024 06:31 - empty heart (Jim56)
Loneliness is an empty place and can only be filled by others, that is why...
October 20th, 2024 06:25 - Rough Justice (Neville)
Many walk back that dusty trail and reopen the door to a flood of more...
October 20th, 2024 06:22 - Ecce homo (Lorenz)
Powerfull words worded powerfully
October 20th, 2024 06:15 - \"Boo\" (Teddy.15)
It is that season and I tove the playfulness in this piece. If only all...
October 20th, 2024 06:12 - Lmrk2410aa (Arqios)
This takes my mind to many areas first numerology and the meaning of...
October 20th, 2024 06:02 - Dinner With Friends Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A gathering with friends is always great and food enhaces any social...
October 20th, 2024 05:45 - 3 parts of a man (NafisaSB)
A great insight into the nature of the human being who like some animals,...
October 20th, 2024 05:42 - Truth (Sunshine777)
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although...
October 20th, 2024 05:36 - TO RESCUE WITH VALOR (Bobby O)
Bobby I like this poem and its message. A good poem to me does one of two...
October 20th, 2024 05:28 - Ice Lions (Tristan Robert Lange)
A lovely picture crafted with care and consistent without. Open to...
October 20th, 2024 05:11 - In The Dim-Lit Room (Mark The Phenomenon)
Good advice for any passion. The heart often over rules that head.
October 19th, 2024 16:13 - for you (Buttercup)
A pledge of love and devotion it is simple and so should poetry be. They...
October 19th, 2024 13:14 - The day to come (Lorenz)
Repleat with great lines (I\'m just a rebel talking to angels, suck the...
October 19th, 2024 10:56 - The Last Voyage (Gray0328)
Now there is a story I\'ve never imagined. Heard of wolves breaking in to...
October 19th, 2024 10:50 - Scorned Woman (Sassy Lou)
Metaphor and literal in one with great images and well written lines....
October 19th, 2024 10:46 - Haiku 3 (Kerry)
Traveling Haiku artist. A wonderful waterfall of beauty
October 19th, 2024 10:42 - Caverns of the Heart (Tristan Robert Lange)
A beautiful write of all the facets of emotion good and bad. Very nicely...
October 19th, 2024 10:39 - Ethos Arbitrage (Kurt Philip Behm)
Ahh the root of all evil. Nicely done
October 19th, 2024 10:37 - ~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie! (Thad Wilk)
I\'ll bet he did. I\'ll have to think up one for my passing. A fun read
October 19th, 2024 10:36 - खामोशियों का साया (Dev Parth)
Sorry can\'t understand this one
October 19th, 2024 10:33 - Songbird (RSM0812)
Songs that lift the spirit so to speak. A lofty poem that has good flow...
October 19th, 2024 09:27 - Under a crying tree (Maplespal)
Metaphoric and melancholicly sad. A great use of metaphor here. Nicely
October 19th, 2024 07:42 - goodbye liam (Jim56)
A Eulogy well written and nicely done.
October 19th, 2024 07:39 - The Poet (Tony36)
This one reads at a gallop and like a rider on the horse one can feel each...
October 19th, 2024 07:37 - in whispers hush (Arqios)
A sonnet of love indeed that spells the intricate web of love and how once...
October 19th, 2024 07:04 - My Love (RSM0812)
Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman...
October 19th, 2024 06:33 - The Lion and The Lily. (David Wakeling)
This poem with a moral reads smooth as silk with its meter and rhyme....
October 19th, 2024 05:23 - Short Changed on A Long Greek Island (Neville)
At least no STD\'s or guilt, Loved the set up in the first stanza...
October 19th, 2024 05:20 - The third trench (2781)
What a metaphor here. Well set up and worked out it portrays the present...
October 19th, 2024 05:17 - Welcoming Light. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s kind of like putting the curve in the road sign after the curve...
October 19th, 2024 05:11 - Diplomacy (NafisaSB)
I agree diplomats are a part of government which I find a necessary evil...
October 19th, 2024 05:05 - Scales A-Glint (Mark The Phenomenon)
A most interesting pairing of the spiritual and the sea. It seems so calm...
October 18th, 2024 15:22 - Numero (Steve Goldenfort)
Numerology some say is a predictor, we all have a bit of superstition in...
October 18th, 2024 15:17 - Where Does The Love Go? (Teddy.15)
Darkness comes and memory fades but like an old tattoo still remains....
October 18th, 2024 15:15 - I Have Turned Around Now, Twice (ADarkerMind)
Another dark poem from the prince of darkness. One line after another of...
October 18th, 2024 15:09 - Worry (Thomas W Case)
A poem full of aggition, anxiety and powerlessness. When the idle is set...
October 18th, 2024 15:05 - Traces Of Then (Kurt Philip Behm)
Full of contradictions the shadow fades to darkness as the mind begs to...
October 18th, 2024 11:05 - ~> I Fucking Hate Loving You (Thad Wilk)
\"Where my girl are you sleeping tonight\" remnicent of an old Leadbelly...
October 18th, 2024 10:59 - Hide and Seek (Meera Mere)
Tragic, devastating, sad, haunting, yet all too common and it leaves...
October 18th, 2024 08:33 - in the shadows (Arqios)
Not only a song, poem but a hymn. A battle cry if you would. I hear it...
October 18th, 2024 07:01 - The darkness creeps (Maplespal)
Dark indeed this poem has a feel of being taken over in oblivion and a...
October 18th, 2024 06:59 - THE UMBRELLA (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Wise words cast in metaphoric images of understanding. Lovely
October 18th, 2024 05:25 - my best friend (Jim56)
The images you have created bring back memories I have of cats I have had...
October 18th, 2024 05:22 - Fortress (Lorenz)
Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if...
October 18th, 2024 05:21 - Deep Secrets (Neville)
Errotic and sensual with great lines \"More perfect than an orchid...
October 18th, 2024 05:18 - Knowingly Full Of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Appreciation for the small things and the moment itself fills your poetry...
October 18th, 2024 05:13 - Under the Hunter\'s Moon (Tristan Robert Lange)
It is that Halloween season and this one fits right in. Dark and...
October 18th, 2024 05:12 - The Heart. (David Wakeling)
\"Even a noble lighthouse can not shine upon itself\" great line as is...
October 18th, 2024 05:04 - The Love Note (David Wakeling)
A very complicated relationship here.Love/hate (disapointment)
October 17th, 2024 20:44 - She rests her wings (Maplespal)
A metaphor cast in realistic nature. It starts so soft and ends so...
October 17th, 2024 17:38 - The Powerful Expression (Mark The Phenomenon)
Deep thoughts provoking deep thinking well done
October 17th, 2024 15:54
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