Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Strategically Lost (Neville)
Paradoxes of truth blend with familiar idioms into a coherent view of life...
December 10th, 2024 04:43 - There is a man (Rin)
I love poems that use the absurd to make a point and this one does it...
December 10th, 2024 04:38 - Come On, Then! Do You Want Some? (Mutley Ravishes)
Like all good poems they may be taken different ways and so is this one....
December 10th, 2024 04:33 - Reflections Of Pissmas (Teddy.15)
Humor in a message all too true. We all long for closeness, but too much...
December 10th, 2024 04:16 - Love is Pain (RSM0812)
Your words tell me that your thoughts pursue poetic and philisophical...
December 10th, 2024 04:11 - The Lonely Rose (RSM0812)
A wonderful metaphor with so many good lines. You have a natural poetic...
December 10th, 2024 04:07 - Ella Fitzgerald Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
She was an amazing singer and I remember enjoying several of her songs. A...
December 10th, 2024 03:58 - The Last (Thomas W Case)
A question we all ask at one point or another. Yes the answer is the right...
December 9th, 2024 15:36 - Driving Ambition (Cassie58)
I\'ve watched parkour before and this brought that to mind. Moving on to...
December 9th, 2024 15:32 - ~> Ralphie Gets Even! ( Monorhyme ) (Thad Wilk)
The picture and the poem are integral and make for a better picture. Made...
December 9th, 2024 15:29 - My Heart (Tony36)
You have identified a basic human element in relationships that does not...
December 9th, 2024 15:27 - Sweet Ending! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Another chapter completed in nicely written form. I\'ll wait for the next...
December 9th, 2024 15:25 - Immaculate Grace (Gray0328)
Mary symbol of purity, love, strength is represented in other religions as...
December 9th, 2024 15:23 - The rat\'s diagonal (Lorenz)
You have found so many poetic lines to tell the tale and make your point....
December 9th, 2024 15:17 - The Endless Spectator (Tristan Robert Lange)
A deep issue with thoughts to mull over. My favorite lines were
To cease...
December 9th, 2024 15:11 - Quick-Sand (Jerry Reynolds)
Ahh such use of images in poetic metaphor. Most beautiful
December 9th, 2024 08:29 - Vessel2 (John Prophet)
What is god? What is life? Does technology, Ai qualify? Why not?...
December 9th, 2024 08:28 - christmas song (Jim56)
Thank you for sharing your Christmas spirit. Another wonderful seasonal...
December 9th, 2024 07:41 - Granny (2781)
Youth is no match for the treachery of old age. Loved the poem a most fun...
December 9th, 2024 06:53 - where is home? (Arqios)
Been there my friend and it is not where one wants to be. So nicely put in...
December 9th, 2024 06:14 - Temple Message (Orchidee)
The story is well known and is in this hymn retold in good verse. Lovely...
December 9th, 2024 06:13 - Rest in pieces (David Wakeling)
A tough story of a life from the perspective of a son. So poetic in its...
December 9th, 2024 06:10 - The catcher of light (Lorenz)
Poetic in every way a tribute to a poetic and musical genious.
December 9th, 2024 06:03 - Extraordinary Unearth (Teddy.15)
Clever and wise in one short piece Brilliant! And even better you are...
December 9th, 2024 04:41 - Embracing me (Domilla)
I hear pain calling out from a soul that feels abandoned, hurt and...
December 9th, 2024 04:38 - Sailing To Peace Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A truely lovely sonnet Andy. It set the mood this morning as I believe it...
December 9th, 2024 04:31 - revenge (NinjaGirl)
A poem of self redemption and grace through letting go. Lovely and well...
December 8th, 2024 19:08 - If I Knew THAT, I Wouldn\'t Be Here (Cheeky Missy)
Giving a most intriguing interest to your poems is the combination of...
December 8th, 2024 18:50 - An Old Saw: (Doggerel Dave)
I see the saw and saw the sea but never sawed the sea. Never saw would...
December 8th, 2024 16:32 - Egypt and Sumer were babies (EvenwheniLie)
I loved the flow of this poem as well as the direction it took. On the...
December 8th, 2024 15:48 - Advent (Gray0328)
So appropriate for the season. Nicely written
December 8th, 2024 15:08 - Hot and amazing (Maplespal)
All the views now represented. It is always important to see things from...
December 8th, 2024 15:06 - ~> Me And My Shadow (Thad Wilk)
A most moving poem sad and heartfelt. Well written Thad the end of a...
December 8th, 2024 11:54 - Cure For Hiccups (Jerry Reynolds)
True and also could be a metaphor for the hiccups of life
December 8th, 2024 09:12 - Sister (Tony36)
A beautiful poem of tribute and love. Bravo Tony
December 8th, 2024 09:11 - Make Light Of What You Will (ADarkerMind)
I particularly love the last lines
the burning wood of heritage
will...
December 8th, 2024 09:10 - Though married yours truly (me)... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A wonderful tribute to a great songwriter. Many great geniuses of the past...
December 8th, 2024 07:40 - santa paws (Jim56)
A clever play in the language Jim. This was a very fun read and once...
December 8th, 2024 07:32 - Shoosh (2781)
Unique and intriguing. This poem set up. It’s interest in the first line...
December 8th, 2024 07:30 - Where Shadows Dance: The Tale of the Abatiwa (Matthew R. Callies)
A beautiful poem, full of myth and yet truth. These small people may be...
December 8th, 2024 07:27 - Trinity (Rin)
Ahh I love poems like this. In its ambiguity, it leaves much room for...
December 8th, 2024 07:21 - Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville)
Neville. The first poem so identifiable. I think we all have felt this. So...
December 8th, 2024 07:17 - The branches are bare. (David Wakeling)
Despair at what might have been. I hear it echoing in this poem. A sense...
December 8th, 2024 07:09 - life\'s no faerie tale (Arqios)
I love the archaic language Used in this poem. It adds a sense of age and...
December 8th, 2024 05:50 - Bouquet of Lessons (Salvia.S)
A type of ten commandments to live by. So perfectly stated in poetic form....
December 8th, 2024 05:44 - LATEST COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Now there are some points of wisdom that make me smile. Very fun couplets...
December 8th, 2024 05:39 - Hong Kong Singalong (Mutley Ravishes)
OK, as I read this, I wondered what was in the flagon . The most fun read...
December 8th, 2024 05:33 - Tornado of Light (Teddy.15)
There is deep wisdom in this poem. Sometimes we grow so used to grief...
December 8th, 2024 05:28 - In Amongst The Blackbirds. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, this poem to me is very metaphoric. It is clearly literal, but...
December 8th, 2024 05:22 - Nightstorm (Dan Williams)
Ingenious the wording in this poem, not just of images which were...
December 8th, 2024 05:15 - villain (NinjaGirl)
It is the message in this poem that stands out. Yet for it to stand out it...
December 8th, 2024 05:03 - Purposeful denial is a science (EvenwheniLie)
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time imparting...
December 7th, 2024 14:11 - Purposeful denial is a science (EvenwheniLie)
This poem was clever and its rhyme scheme while at the same time in...
December 7th, 2024 14:10 - Fragments of me (Nikola)
A poem of anguish, but one that many can identify with. Be at an...
December 7th, 2024 14:08 - a makar’s legacy (Arqios)
A poem of a bard. It speaks of his role and importance in the telling of...
December 7th, 2024 14:04 - The magic box (Lorenz)
A poem that I took as a Christmas story of the disadvantage and poor the...
December 7th, 2024 14:01 - ~> Our Garden Of Love (Thad Wilk)
A poem of love unrequited too common in this world. Sad but something that...
December 7th, 2024 13:56 - Above the hate (Tony36)
A poem of very good advice and wisdom to carry one through a dark world....
December 7th, 2024 13:54 - santa robin (Jim56)
A lovely poem for the season. Once again, I enjoyed this vision of aviary...
December 7th, 2024 13:53 - She Owns You (Teardrop)
A wonderful poem of our own internal panic and anxiety. When we stop and...
December 7th, 2024 13:47 - Maria\'s Last Dance (Tristan Robert Lange)
As human beings, we all share, and experiences, though they have their...
December 7th, 2024 13:42 - Reaching (Cassie58)
Cassie, what a beautiful portrayal of the rural life. I have lived some...
December 7th, 2024 13:37 - Victory Venture (Orchidee)
Once again another banger. You certainly have a knack for writing these...
December 7th, 2024 04:38 - Something Only Part Remembered (Neville)
Memories so well set in this poem. It is the mixture of nostalgic and at...
December 7th, 2024 04:35 - UNLESS CONFIDENTIAL (Michael Edwards)
Got ya. I too have to edit regularly. A clever poem with great rhyme
December 7th, 2024 04:31 - Man With The Big Set of Keys (Poetic Licence)
Abuse of children is sad and deplorable but more common than anyone would...
December 7th, 2024 04:30 - Maysie Hayseed (including Part 3) (David Wakeling)
A sense of closure in this third piece and a story well told.
December 7th, 2024 04:25 - Music With Dad. (Goldfinch60)
wonderful Andy. This reminded me of my father who used to listen to music...
December 7th, 2024 04:21 - Not Escaping (Dan Williams)
The metaphors are good in this poem and convey the meaning well. Blocked...
December 7th, 2024 04:18 - New God (John Prophet)
One word lines that send their message all the way to the end.
December 6th, 2024 21:22 - To you, my friend (Alan R)
So very good in its message and wording. A marvelous poem
December 6th, 2024 20:58 - Silver and Gold (Thomas W Case)
A most beautiful message in poetic form. Absolutely beautiful
December 6th, 2024 20:13 - What is the point (DLewis88)
A sad poem of the loss of hope. It is well written with a dark tone and...
December 6th, 2024 19:31 - Analgesia (Kurt Philip Behm)
We all neglect what we have. Wonderful write
December 6th, 2024 13:45 - Lamentation of the Devil (Rebellion_in_sanity)
There is always a bright side. A fun story, always felt sorry for the...
December 6th, 2024 13:43 - Dinner With Mellan (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Your placing rhyme in paragraph format is certainly unique and Ilike it....
December 6th, 2024 13:40 - Sunset and Wind Farms (Cassie58)
Such vivid imagery in this poem.
\"as though a surgeon’s knife
sliced...
December 6th, 2024 12:41 - ~> My Mem\'ries Of A Tibetan Monastery (Thad Wilk)
What a great story. Unique and fun as a punishment for a minor crime that...
December 6th, 2024 12:38 - King of the Road (Mutley Ravishes)
Mojo jest what a most unique manner of saying it. A most fun read.
December 6th, 2024 12:35 - What’s Shaken? (Jerry Reynolds)
Such a great metaphor for the common practice of taking what one...
December 6th, 2024 09:20 - The Quiet Conqueror (Arqios)
Beautiful!! Such a great metaphor and as you put it symbol of...
December 6th, 2024 09:18 - Set you free (Tony36)
Sounds like a good trip and thanks for the invite. A very upbeat poem of...
December 6th, 2024 09:15 - A Tale of Two Journeys (Tristan Robert Lange)
We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well...
December 6th, 2024 09:13 - Silly (2781)
A great use of words in this write. Clever and well done.
December 6th, 2024 07:54 - caring dove (Jim56)
If only people were the same. A beautiful poem of giving and love. Nicely...
December 6th, 2024 06:13 - Shadows In The Dark (Teardrop)
A beautiful metaphor with great imagery. Many of us hide in the shadows...
December 6th, 2024 06:10 - I escaped (Maplespal)
This writing has a most familiar sound to it from your last. Again,...
December 6th, 2024 05:30 - Day Dawning (Orchidee)
Another great write . A worthy hymn. It’s funny.Orchi How these ratings...
December 6th, 2024 05:28 - Hidden in Sight (Neville)
Absolutely beautiful!! A lovely short that has more impact on the reader...
December 6th, 2024 05:26 - Lady of The Night (Out of Need) (Poetic Licence)
How easily we look down upon others. We forget that we are all human...
December 6th, 2024 05:24 - Maysie Hayseed. (David Wakeling)
A dark story from the past very well written. It evoke strong emotions in...
December 6th, 2024 05:13 - I Am A Monster Born Of Woe (Rho1975)
A poem with power and deep emotion. It evokes a sense of outrage as well...
December 6th, 2024 04:17 - The Edge of Everything (Rho1975)
Very nicely written this poem tightly describes the difficulty in letting...
December 6th, 2024 04:14 - Natural Art. (Goldfinch60)
Lines of a master. Gold this poem presents wonderful lines of free verse...
December 6th, 2024 04:07 - The Gardner Walks Off Slowly (Dan Williams)
This poem as a metaphor contains very deep meaning. It is inspiring...
December 6th, 2024 04:02 - Table Manners (Mutley Ravishes)
When you lose your head, it’s hard to mind your manners. A fun read they...
December 6th, 2024 03:54 - That hot day (Maplespal)
A wonderful beginning and entry into this poem. The drop of sweat was...
December 5th, 2024 13:23 - I Dreamed in Green (Thomas W Case)
Lovely! Thomas this was wonderful full of familiar images that took me...
December 5th, 2024 13:20 - ~> Grim Reaper\'s Not Lonely Anymore! (Thad Wilk)
Here is a fun read that tickles the fancy to the bone. Loved it
December 5th, 2024 13:19 - There Is No Place To Return To (ADarkerMind)
I feel drunk after reading this poem. That is not a bad thing but one of...
December 5th, 2024 13:16
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