Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- separation song (Devender Kumar)
A sad senryu that is most interesting because of the juxtaposition of the...
November 26th, 2025 04:25 - Six O\'clock Each Morning. (Goldfinch60)
A good read my friend that sounds fresh and bright. A lovely way to start...
November 26th, 2025 04:23 - Indigo Days (Ssandell)
We never know what we have until we loose it. Nicely written this poem...
November 25th, 2025 19:51 - THE MEMORY OF GLENORE (David Welch)
Another good old west tale told in poetic narrative style. Filled with...
November 25th, 2025 19:49 - Reasoning (Ja'Quan Shepard)
A poem with a rap meter to the rhyme. Nicely done
November 25th, 2025 19:44 - In Anguished Adoration (Spencer Wilhelm)
Although this may be taken as a son talking to their literal father it...
November 25th, 2025 17:09 - Think In Shapes (Pete the poet)
Geometry in poetry Euclid would be proud. A most unique poem that combines...
November 25th, 2025 17:07 - A Magnificent Day (Teddy.15)
Teddy I love this one. It is not only descriptive and full of nature but...
November 25th, 2025 17:04 - The Well (John Lee)
Such a great metaphor here and followed through so poetically it rings...
November 25th, 2025 17:01 - Words undone (Jaryyn)
What an existential poem of a journey taken. A lovely write
November 25th, 2025 15:47 - Such with curriculum (Shenielyn pacaldo)
An ode to teaching and education in general. Well written
November 25th, 2025 15:42 - The madman\'s journey (Lorenz)
Well said Lorenz. Madness is denoted by those that call themselves sane...
November 25th, 2025 14:50 - Mac n cheese sounds (Ms.divine)
A most sexual, sensual, erotic poem
November 25th, 2025 14:38 - Happy Birthday, Melissa (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
A beautiful birthday wish in verse and rhyme nicely done
November 25th, 2025 13:21 - Sweet cherry (Funmiwrites)
Passion in a seductive, sensual, erotic, sexual set of verse.
November 25th, 2025 13:20 - Memory (Markashley1961)
memories bring nostalgia and different memories bring pain better not to...
November 25th, 2025 13:18 - Make A Choice (Tkatie118)
A journey through space and time a life lived and a dream dreamed. Well...
November 25th, 2025 13:16 - the last lines of life (Devender Kumar)
A great senryu here Kumar well done
November 25th, 2025 13:11 - The Milkman\'s Passing (Gray0328)
Very poetic the lines of this poem Gray. Your writing has definitely grown...
November 25th, 2025 13:10 - Pass The Turkey You S.O.B. (Kurt Philip Behm)
Time have gotten rougher and people more ugly in their responses. Another...
November 25th, 2025 11:36 - Amply funneling kickstarting politesse undergirds zyzygy (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
This poem takes one through many thoughts and it starts off with being...
November 25th, 2025 11:35 - Untitled {20} (Niko Papadatos)
There is a feel of being so small in this write with the fronds being...
November 25th, 2025 11:33 - Sometimes by Tamara Nesterovich (Ksey_Gan)
A wait can turn the grey to bright and beautiful. Nicely written
November 25th, 2025 11:31 - ππ¦π―π’ π±π¬ ππ’π’ ππ₯ππ± ππ₯π¦π° π¦π° ππ²π°π± ππΆ ππ¦π£π’ (Keyara S Trotman)
here I hear a poem of demur, caution, fear of discovery and the hiding of...
November 25th, 2025 11:30 - LOST (Freedom4)
The introjection of her being me in the past raises questions of who is...
November 25th, 2025 11:25 - Villanelle for a Plastic Oracle (Matthew R. Callies)
I remember as a child having one and it seemed that the answers were never...
November 25th, 2025 10:22 - some certain uncertainty (Corian Baek)
A great poem of sensitivity and trying to grow stronger. The way I know to...
November 25th, 2025 10:18 - Young love is silly (π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½)
The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected...
November 25th, 2025 09:00 - Saint Expertise (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan this poem seems to have been written with ease like a gentle...
November 25th, 2025 08:56 - i heard a robin sing (Jim56)
Another lovely poem of nature Jim. Nicely written
November 25th, 2025 08:52 - SIGNALS / SeΓ±ales (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carlos this is a great poem describing that feeling of sliding away that...
November 25th, 2025 08:50 - Watching stupidity (Maplespal)
The message is clear in this poem of changes that have taken place and how...
November 25th, 2025 08:48 - Your Reflection (Jjudaharts)
Indeed a truth set forth in two lines. Well said
November 25th, 2025 08:44 - If I Were a Book (William Hromada)
This poem reads more refined that its predecessor with greater smoothness...
November 25th, 2025 08:44 - riverβs ardent flame (Arqios)
November 25th, 2025 08:42 - riverβs ardent flame (Arqios)
A beautiful picture my friend with deep and running meaning of memories...
November 25th, 2025 08:42 - IT MAKES NO DIFFERENCE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Oh those nights of regret. Who has not had one or more. Well expressed in...
November 25th, 2025 04:24 - Echoes of Almost (Eira_)
I love the use of another language\'s word for one not available it the...
November 25th, 2025 04:22 - a new Earth (Vipassana)
Yes a world of contradictions and impossibilities where incompatibility is...
November 25th, 2025 04:19 - Elder (The Velvet)
Many are despised by their own people for various reasons. Some because of...
November 25th, 2025 04:17 - Home (\"Carter Wills\")
Nostalgic this poem is inviting and warm. There is a feeling of...
November 25th, 2025 04:12 - Gods great work! (Andrew Deaton)
There is a clear pledge of love in this poem and a declaration of...
November 25th, 2025 04:10 - The Temporary And The Eternal (Orchidee)
I like this one Orchi it has a ring to it declaring freedom for a people....
November 25th, 2025 04:05 - True Civilisation (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Ah we hide behind definitions but our morals are self evident. The life we...
November 25th, 2025 04:02 - My Faithful Life. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely poem Andy of a life lucky enough to had three goes at it and to...
November 25th, 2025 04:00 - Get off the Bus (Thomas W Case)
To go there directly seems to be to choose death as a shortcut. Hopefully...
November 25th, 2025 03:55 - TURNING TRICKS (David Welch)
Dark and bleak is reality hid behind a cloud of fantasy. We all live in an...
November 24th, 2025 20:05 - Suicide Note (Coracaodacripta)
A good read with the logic that if someone does think about it long enough...
November 24th, 2025 20:00 - MUNDOS SECRETOS / SECRET WORDS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Another beautiful poem Poetic secrets in words that fade with time. Nicely...
November 24th, 2025 17:49 - Cling to Faith (π©Maseπͺ)
A poem of faith words of belief, a poetic advice given. Well done
November 24th, 2025 17:45 - Ultimate Crossover of Cosmic Horror and Villainy (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
A fantasy tail in surreal terms. Well done
November 24th, 2025 16:21 - You got mail π¬ (Ms.divine)
Funny how we only act certain ways at certain times of the year and even...
November 24th, 2025 16:19 - Petrarch Sonnet 90 (Ksey_Gan)
Nicely worded and set in symbol this poem seems classic in form and well...
November 24th, 2025 16:17 - Tears (Lyra Silvertongue)
There is a fallacy in the belief that strong people never cry this could...
November 24th, 2025 16:16 - you already have everything (Gray0328)
So many look for happiness outside themselves and seldom find it. It lies...
November 24th, 2025 16:12 - Death came down (Jaryyn)
A great acrostic nicely done
November 24th, 2025 16:09 - Her Innocence (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
A poem of guilt and shame. It seems a sad poem to me. Well written leaving...
November 24th, 2025 16:08 - The Rest of the Story (Matthew R. Callies)
I remember his broadcasts well when I was younger and used to like to...
November 24th, 2025 16:06 - PenΓ©lope (The Velvet)
Sometimes we wish dreams to be true. Such a disappointment when we find...
November 24th, 2025 16:03 - Lucifer Resents Love (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I could guess who the three are but no spoilers here. Good write
November 24th, 2025 16:01 - Poetic Timeshare (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Yes seems so true that so few write and the seeing of things differently....
November 24th, 2025 16:00 - Untitled {19} (Niko Papadatos)
A poem hard to argue against. It seems true and that is what people are...
November 24th, 2025 15:57 - Your Window (ΰ¦Έΰ§ΰ¦¬ΰ¦Ύΰ¦§ΰ§ΰ¦¨)
Stuck in time, random thoughts pass, distracted by a vision. Lovely
November 24th, 2025 15:56 - Eurydice (Lorenz)
The classic Greek story of rescuing from the underworld and what a great...
November 24th, 2025 15:54 - If I Were a Book (William Hromada)
A great analogy with so many points made. We all are our own book a diary...
November 24th, 2025 15:48 - Urania (GenXer Sharon ππ)
A good start to a new novela. We will wait and see.
November 24th, 2025 15:45 - ππΉππΎπβ― πβ― π©β΄π (Keyara S Trotman)
We are many and all are one. A good thought and wonderful poem
November 24th, 2025 15:43 - WHISPERS / SUSURROS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A sweet and tender love poem, whether in English of Spanish it remains the...
November 24th, 2025 15:41 - The Burning Lye (Tristan Robert Lange)
Whether lye or lie this works out the same. We used to use lye soap and it...
November 24th, 2025 15:38 - The Storm (Katie B.)
A most beautiful picture painted in poetic words. Nature in its majesty...
November 24th, 2025 07:52 - country living (Jim56)
Very nicely done Jim. I love the country and nature as well and I can see...
November 24th, 2025 07:49 - The reason I am here is because of you (Poetaldo)
A conversation with one\'s creator in poetic form as a prayer. Lovely
November 24th, 2025 07:11 - Stalker Story: Verdict Unsafe (Tkatie118)
Dramatic and traumatic this poem is gritty and dark. Well told.
November 24th, 2025 06:24 - Double, Double please (Maplespal)
A fun short where bitter meets sweet whether in a pastry bite or sugar in...
November 24th, 2025 06:16 - Brenda (Paul Bell)
Quite a tale of a tail. Someone I knew died that way a shemale with a tail...
November 24th, 2025 05:53 - self-deprecation (Arqios)
Wow!!! The butcher\'s knife plunges deep in this poetic metaphor. A poetic...
November 24th, 2025 05:20 - LOOKING FOR A ROOM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I love dark humor and being blind he must have seen nothing but black, so...
November 24th, 2025 04:25 - Poseidon (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
A great name for the poem and wonderful depiction of the oceans rage. The...
November 24th, 2025 04:22 - Story of the self. (Vipassana)
From dog to cat to rat being all things a mind provoking poem that poses...
November 24th, 2025 04:18 - Of equal minds (EvenwheniLie)
Loved this write with its cleverly woven meaning in metaphor. The conflict...
November 24th, 2025 04:16 - We come (Ja'Quan Shepard)
This seems a rap in that it has a great beat to it. Not sure about...
November 24th, 2025 04:13 - Ancient cloth (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
Now I\'m not sure whether this qualifies as a haiku or senryu whether...
November 24th, 2025 04:11 - Tailor (Awam)
There are a few characteristics that human\'s possess and those are lust...
November 24th, 2025 04:06 - Seek And Find (Orchidee)
Another great hymn Orchi this one in timely fashion speaks of Thanks...
November 24th, 2025 04:01 - Everly Brothers And Friends. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a real good time Andy with music from my time of childhood and...
November 24th, 2025 03:55 - LIMERICK 146Β (Michael Edwards)
I\'ll bet that stung a bit. They used to call that castration making a...
November 24th, 2025 03:51 - Quietude (Jjudaharts)
Some forget or overlook the importance of quietude here in this short...
November 24th, 2025 03:48 - An unforgettable taste (Kayla Jackson)
A wonderful write where the taste of the past is like savoring wine, the...
November 24th, 2025 03:47 - does love exist (Applecherry)
A most quizzical poem. Love does not leave passion does. Love is one sided...
November 23rd, 2025 20:42 - Lines (Angelo)
The process of learning when young and how it is seen. Nicely done
November 23rd, 2025 20:39 - WITH YOU OR AWAY (Drniran)
A difficult situation either way best to stay away. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 20:37 - funny little thing (NinjaGirl)
A poem of desires unmet and love not felt. Questions that go unanswered...
November 23rd, 2025 19:01 - Bad Guy (Hadley)
When the desire of one is not that of the other it is sad and unrequited....
November 23rd, 2025 18:58 - Promise me you\'d rather kill me (Yassin Tamam)
Here there is an asking for middle ground, not a lover a companion, not to...
November 23rd, 2025 18:57 - SHOWDOWN AT HELLER RANCH (David Welch)
Another fun read from the old west. Set in good rhyme and solid flow it...
November 23rd, 2025 18:22 - The Wanderer (Hacklec)
Poetic a wanderer of memories. How well worded. Nicely done
November 23rd, 2025 16:23 - Youz a ganxsta (Ms.divine)
Short with reflected meaning. Well done
November 23rd, 2025 15:04 - The Saga of Silfrinlogi (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
Great admiration for anyone courageous enough to take on an epic poem....
November 23rd, 2025 13:49 - Fall skies (William Hromada)
Beautiful and romantic the same in this poem. Most lovely
November 23rd, 2025 13:43 - Deceptive (Lyricalremedy)
Actions speak louder than words but still said in different words. Lovely
November 23rd, 2025 13:41
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