Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Culled (Neville) A piercing, haunting haiku. It shakes one soul and muddies one’s...
  November 19th, 2024 04:03
• Oh No, Not This Again? (Mutley Ravishes) That pretty well sums up the state of the world and the actions of most...
  November 19th, 2024 03:56
• Live Well (Thomas W Case) I remember those days as a child. Children are cruel makes slaves of...
  November 18th, 2024 16:10
• Jokers, Clowns, and Santa (Orchidee) Yeah, I’m on your side. Ronald McDonald makes me cringe. Tries to poison...
  November 18th, 2024 12:13
• LOVE (Tristan Robert Lange) Very nicely stated in acrostic form. Love is a difficult thing to define...
  November 18th, 2024 12:08
• a true marriage of minds (Arqios) Unification consciousness head and heart As well as all else. I like the...
  November 18th, 2024 07:41
• Addictsongs 2&3 (Mutley Ravishes) Most unique way of presenting an addict’s view Very poetic indeed
  November 18th, 2024 07:37
• Double Minded (Sunshine777) A hard truth in many relationships where words do not fit with actions. It...
  November 18th, 2024 05:50
• Stigma (RSM0812) Brilliantly written in paradox this poem calls out for understanding. It...
  November 18th, 2024 05:48
• The kindness of the lady. (David Wakeling) Such beautiful words in a haunting poem, the warns of the pain life gives...
  November 18th, 2024 05:46
• See (2781) Church not the evening not judged. A good message sent her and agreed to.
  November 18th, 2024 05:43
• I always (Maplespal) I can hear the overflow of words from a spirit that feels compressed....
  November 18th, 2024 05:42
• Yukiko Snow Child (Neville) Neville the artistry of leaving this almost haiku. One syllable short is a...
  November 18th, 2024 05:39
• Just Imagine This world. (Goldfinch60) A lovely song that I have listened to many many times and each time I hear...
  November 18th, 2024 05:36
• Hesitantly Blue (Dan Williams) A poem of great complexity it calls out for friendship and deeper...
  November 18th, 2024 05:34
• if i had a heart (MR.apocalypse) A line from the Wizard of Oz that has as much meaning today as it did...
  November 17th, 2024 19:33
• time is silent (NinjaGirl) “Ticking time thick as wine” A great line it not only has rhyme but...
  November 17th, 2024 19:31
• This Sunday Night (Tristan Robert Lange) The poem speaks to exhaustion not of the physical type, but of the...
  November 17th, 2024 19:29
• Void (John Prophet) Descriptors that paint the picture well
  November 17th, 2024 16:27
• The city (Lorenz) Great descriptors of a city marked in metaphor and painted in symbols....
  November 17th, 2024 16:25
• Aha! Methinks I Spy A Chicken Clearly WITHOUT Its Head (Cheeky Missy) I have felt the first one regarding work before and it is a gray day...
  November 17th, 2024 16:22
• Birthday Card to Myself (Written on My Birthday) (AuburnScribbler) And why not wish oneself a happy birthday?
  November 17th, 2024 14:37
• ~> Never Hurts To Wear The Right Shirts! (Thad Wilk) Humor is the best medicine and sex sells better than anything else put the...
  November 17th, 2024 14:34
• Miss Mary, Ticket Taker (Gray0328) A most well described period piece that sets the scene well. Very nicely...
  November 17th, 2024 14:31
• When Words Bleed (Cassie58) Beautiful words \"a poem penetrated tissue of restraint pain\" a great
  November 17th, 2024 14:29
• Divulgence (Neilton) Fear underlies many disorders both psychological and physical
  November 17th, 2024 08:04
• Addictsong (Mutley Ravishes) Depending on the pause in punctuation it holds different meanings and...
  November 17th, 2024 06:42
• inner peace (Jim56) A most wonderful thought and belief put into poetic form. Lovely
  November 17th, 2024 06:40
• The worst part & The waters\' view (Maplespal) Great poems that leave me feeling like I\'m being taken on a journey.
  November 17th, 2024 06:39
• Seven (2781) Seven days in a week, seven always a lucky number. A most fun read
  November 17th, 2024 06:32
• Pirates’ Cove (Arqios) Have lived on the Treasure Coast of Florida for many years and not only...
  November 17th, 2024 06:26
• Meanwhile.... (Orchidee) If the humor is too dark then it can\'t be seen with no light.
  November 17th, 2024 05:42
• A Few Things Wrong With the World Today (Neville) The feeling of entitlement and that the world owes them something bred by...
  November 17th, 2024 05:39
• We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home. (David Wakeling) A type of short saga that speaks to the heart of anyone that has had...
  November 17th, 2024 05:34
• Failing Hearts (RSM0812) A most clever usage of internal rhyme to enhance the feeling that this...
  November 17th, 2024 05:29
• My Wish For You. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful wishes that return upon the one who wishes showering them with...
  November 17th, 2024 05:24
• Failing Hearts (RSM0812) I’m most interesting poem with interesting wording nicely done
  November 16th, 2024 19:59
• Long Ago (John Prophet) This reads as though it were a personal history of my own even the age is...
  November 16th, 2024 19:56
• The Little Girl who learned to love Lightening. (David Wakeling) Always loved the lightning, the closer the better. A fun story about...
  November 16th, 2024 15:25
• One Final Stop In Springfield (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another episode in the continuing saga. This reads like an old radio...
  November 16th, 2024 13:37
• Our Universe (MendedFences27) Size is such an interesting aspect of our universe both small and large it...
  November 16th, 2024 13:34
• ~> My Dawg Clyde! (Thad Wilk) Gives me memories of my old dog he used to pull me on my bike all around...
  November 16th, 2024 13:30
• The Scarecrow and the Raven (Tony36) A most interesting image you paint. Is its message that the real master is...
  November 16th, 2024 13:27
• The Poet\'s Cafe (Gray0328) If you listen you will hear them whispering. I loved the last stanza
  November 16th, 2024 13:25
• My shaveling boy (Neilton) Reading the authors note, it makes a great deal of sense before I read it....
  November 16th, 2024 11:41
• Power (2781) In the beginning was the word and the word was God. The word has more...
  November 16th, 2024 08:52
• Selene of All Skies (Neville) Isis always was my favorite goddess. Just like a woman on a 28 day cycle...
  November 16th, 2024 08:50
• Aging (Lorenz) Love the anthropomorphic approach to this poem. A most fun read
  November 16th, 2024 08:48
• Bicycles For Power and Freedom... (Doggerel Dave) Gives a whole new meaning to burning up the roads. Good write Dave
  November 16th, 2024 08:46
• A word from Fido to me about Ch.... (Orchidee) Thank you for not mentioning the word. I suffer from PTSD from that event....
  November 16th, 2024 08:44
• 2 more poems, um don\'t enjoy (Maplespal) At first I thought that the second poem was what had happened to the...
  November 16th, 2024 08:39
• Robbie and the Baroque Fiddle (Arqios) All the arts and sciences are connected. A lovely write and a tribute to a...
  November 16th, 2024 08:34
• Satanic Panic (Tristan Robert Lange) A commentary on the political times? Nicely disguised and imaged it spews...
  November 16th, 2024 08:30
• Croquet Supper. (Goldfinch60) Such a pleasent time which is what life is all about. Most lovely
  November 16th, 2024 06:44
• Yggdrasil (Bigguy) Full of vivid and unique images this poem conveys a sense of tension that...
  November 16th, 2024 06:41
• Mrs Karminski’s Ornaments. (David Wakeling) Interesting method of tying together of several unrelated events through...
  November 15th, 2024 21:46
• Meara’s First Stop (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I keep comming back for chapter after chapter do you write seasons for...
  November 15th, 2024 16:02
• Paralytic (Teddy.15) Teddy such a poem of the end of times and fulfilling that last item on the...
  November 15th, 2024 15:58
• No One / The Law (MendedFences27) This poem seems applicable given the last election. Never the less we must...
  November 15th, 2024 15:51
• Vlad, the Impaler (Gray0328) Dark and haunted in a sense. Some great lines in this poem. \"The earth...
  November 15th, 2024 15:47
• ~> Today Was Ma Lucky Day! (Thad Wilk) Loved the dialect a little word play as well with horse shit and dun. Very...
  November 15th, 2024 10:08
• RESIST (Tristan Robert Lange) A great acrostic Tristan
  November 15th, 2024 10:05
• Fido speaks again (Orchidee) Fido is on the watch and don\'t mess with Fido. Very Nice Orchi
  November 15th, 2024 10:03
• Silence (Lorenz) A powerful statement, this poem speaks of strong feelings. Very strongly...
  November 15th, 2024 09:13
• Live free (Tony36) Akita happiness is contained in this poem. It is wonderfully written and...
  November 15th, 2024 09:10
• Things I love (NafisaSB) Quite a list of items on both the positive and negative side and most...
  November 15th, 2024 09:09
• christmas verse (Jim56)
  November 15th, 2024 09:08
• christmas verse (Jim56) A joyful Christmas poem coined out of many almost familiar lines that have...
  November 15th, 2024 09:08
• When pets make your day (Arqios)
  November 15th, 2024 09:07
• When pets make your day (Arqios) Creatures can give a great deal of comfort simply by their presence. There...
  November 15th, 2024 09:07
• 2 at once, enjoy (Maplespal) Deep thoughts lay frozen in this latter poem and its all too human...
  November 15th, 2024 05:53
• The Look (Neville) A new watch or clock that may be more accurate than those now available on...
  November 15th, 2024 05:49
• FOXES IN THE TREES (Bobby O) All depends on what you want. proxcimity and misery distance and lonely...
  November 15th, 2024 05:47
• Journey of Dreams (Dev Parth) Dreams are the fuel that propells us on our journey. A most important
  November 15th, 2024 05:41
• Treat me like a human (MR.apocalypse) Boundaries blurr and need to be reinforced to keep life in perspective....
  November 15th, 2024 05:38
• Gravedigging (Mutley Ravishes) A collage of human feelings that comprise the reality of human...
  November 15th, 2024 05:35
• Deirdre (David Wakeling) Touching and written with such soft reverence. It rings with humanity and...
  November 15th, 2024 05:33
• To Cradle Pain (Gray0328) A magnificent sonnet of a most atypical type. Brilliant!! What more is to...
  November 15th, 2024 05:31
• This Is Me Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A brilliant philosophy employed by too few that think that they must show...
  November 15th, 2024 05:26
• ~`> If I Were Only One Inch Tall -form Monotetra- (Thad Wilk) To be less in any way is always an obstacle to overcome. I like the ending...
  November 14th, 2024 17:35
• Keep A Lid On It (Cassie58) Vivid and its imagery, I felt as though I was there sorting through the...
  November 14th, 2024 14:38
• Parallels (Kerry) Relationships are difficult break ups are even more difficult and seeing...
  November 14th, 2024 14:36
• Somewhere along my way (Lorenz) In reading this, I feel like I have just come out of a purple haze of the...
  November 14th, 2024 14:34
• Living Zombies (Tony36) The most interesting writing that I also wrote about today. Many of us...
  November 14th, 2024 14:31
• HATE (Tristan Robert Lange) He is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. Period. Anger likewise can...
  November 14th, 2024 14:30
• all the lonely people (Jim56) Alienation is a problem for many. This poem tells well the sense of...
  November 14th, 2024 14:28
• A restricted life (Maplespal) It all seems overwhelming. I hear the frustration and anguish in the poem,...
  November 14th, 2024 14:27
• A Flash of Gordon (Arqios) A beautiful tribute and beautiful verse for a poet of the past nicely done...
  November 14th, 2024 05:18
• Essence (Neville) Are Neville this poem carries so many senses and leaves a feeling...
  November 14th, 2024 05:15
• A Transcendent Classic (Bobby O) A beautiful poetic response to an artistic act. Nicely said Bobby.
  November 14th, 2024 05:13
• The Legend of Mother Hubbard: A Journey Beyond Hunger (Matthew R. Callies) A beautiful story in quite a saga of a poem. In this metaphor, there are...
  November 14th, 2024 05:11
• Pipe organs of Destiny (Dan Williams) A very powerful poem with a wonderful ending line. “ She hangs on me...
  November 14th, 2024 04:51
• If Only (MendedFences27) Beautiful message with great power, but grave consequences. Beautifully...
  November 14th, 2024 04:48
• Ode To Profiteroles. (Goldfinch60) You are so right Andy art extend across many fields and cooking certainly...
  November 14th, 2024 04:39
• Through a Window Darkly (Tristan Robert Lange) Depression rides a gray horse. This poem speaks darkly and in somber
  November 13th, 2024 21:42
• ~> Have No Fear, Santa Will Be Here! (Thad Wilk) A fun read my dad said that he was going to take us kids to see where...
  November 13th, 2024 21:38
• The Mingle Classes (Tom Dylan) I\'ve been to that club and didn\'t like it that much. Everything was...
  November 13th, 2024 21:36
• I told ya it\'s Ch....... (Orchidee) I knew it was all a plot by the establishment to keep us all confused and...
  November 13th, 2024 21:33
• Peanut, the Chicken (Gray0328) I liked the drift of this piece. It settled right in and took me for a...
  November 13th, 2024 21:30
• A Worthwhile Pursuit (Thomas W Case) Some great lines the whole second stanza is a great write of vivid images....
  November 13th, 2024 21:27