Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- The Late Loni Anderson (Randyjohnson71)
One of those screen crushes as a teen. A lovely write
August 4th, 2025 15:13 - Mother\'s Wrath (senryu) (Teddy.15)
I have been to that play several times and have to say that I loved it...
August 4th, 2025 15:09 - Grief Made a Mirror (Malo J)
Feelings that look for acknowledgement and recognition in this poem that...
August 4th, 2025 12:15 - Perfect atrocity (Amethyste)
A buoyant and upbeat poem of joy and immortality. Very nice
August 4th, 2025 12:12 - Sober Sun (A Town Shanty) (AuburnScribbler)
Two sides to our nature as a species we choose which we wish to embrace....
August 4th, 2025 12:10 - Sugar-Coated Thorns (Aiswarya Girish)
Feelings of betrayal, rejection and loss turned to anger and regret. A...
August 4th, 2025 12:05 - Oh Distant Star (Baker)
Beautiful! A wonderful poem of a wish nicely voiced in verse
August 4th, 2025 12:02 - The Deepest American Belief (Demar Desu)
A poem that plays off associations and assumptions well done Demar
August 4th, 2025 11:55 - Left Ear, Right Ear, Broken Heart (Matthew R. Callies)
So much feeling in this poem. The lines and meter set the tone. A truly...
August 4th, 2025 11:54 - Immutable Feast (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Using opposites to define what is the best so that the worst possible...
August 4th, 2025 10:20 - Tree fruit confusion (Hzugman)
A great metaphor for people nicely said
August 4th, 2025 10:16 - Why I Cry; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ)
A sad poem that calls out of the darkness of night. Very emotive
August 4th, 2025 10:15 - The Angel of Oblivion (Ellen Marsell)
A most interesting title that inspires a great deal of thought. Beyond the...
August 4th, 2025 10:09 - FIGHTING MY MIND (Infinite)
A poem with elements of recognition and aspirations. Nicely done.
August 4th, 2025 10:03 - Me, Me, Me...and Girl Time???! (Cheeky Missy)
Busy and tired a nap would be helpful. Don\'t forget the nourishment. Well...
August 4th, 2025 09:12 - Dew-Tears (Violet_Writes)
A beautiful thought expressed in verse. Nicely worded a poem of gratitude...
August 4th, 2025 08:20 - Natures Mirror (RSM0812)
Magical words woven into rhyme paint a dramatic picture in black a fave
August 4th, 2025 08:16 - True Love.. (David Prestigiacomo)
Infatuation is evident in this piece there is a freshness to this love and...
August 4th, 2025 08:14 - Waitress Godess (Tony36)
Poem of grace in simple cloths, of beauty as a commoner, goddess in...
August 4th, 2025 08:10 - Lucid vertigo (Lorenz)
Here I hear doubts and ponderings over a future not certain leaving a...
August 4th, 2025 06:49 - Storm (Jerry Reynolds)
Beauty is best shown before tempest. A short but lovely and meaningful...
August 4th, 2025 06:46 - This Morning (Lorna)
An observation turned metaphor that applies to all of us in our busy day...
August 4th, 2025 06:24 - memory search (Jim56)
Memories such a beautiful place of retreat. A lovely poem Jim
August 4th, 2025 06:21 - Are you okay? (Sneha Sebastian)
A most comforting poem from one that seems to see beyond the words to...
August 4th, 2025 06:20 - Whispering Thoughts (Maplespal)
This poem speaks softly and in its quiet and reverence wisdom distills.
August 4th, 2025 06:16 - He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have. (Friendship)
A beautiful poem of gratitude so well set in verse and meter. It speaks in...
August 4th, 2025 06:13 - The Choice ! (Jan bach)
Whether real or not a metaphor for choices in life that we will never know...
August 4th, 2025 05:52 - Numb (Peto)
I love the meter and rhyme structure of this poem that sounds like a...
August 4th, 2025 05:05 - A Heart Part 2 The Entanglement (Anthony Hanible)
Each emotion has its other side and down side. A lovely write with an...
August 4th, 2025 05:03 - The Last Farewell (Tony Grannell)
This poem has the all the feel of a greek mythological tragedy. I see...
August 4th, 2025 05:01 - Begam 🌹 (Starlight)
Here the reader feels prisoner of a traveler asking questions of a greater...
August 4th, 2025 04:53 - Jaws\'s Girlfriend In Moonraker Had No Braces? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Clever use of monorhyme in this short piece that offers insight through...
August 4th, 2025 04:50 - Please Get Rid of Me (Samuel)
A sad and tragic take to this poem on obsessive love. Nicely written and...
August 4th, 2025 04:49 - Heart (Krissy.V)
A most interesting mix of vision and feeling and how this brings up...
August 4th, 2025 04:46 - Distance (Meagan Adelle)
I love the last line ( we may not be talking but I still speak to you) a...
August 4th, 2025 04:44 - Void (Alan R)
Insightful and cleverly worded this poem makes rhyme work for it. Nicely...
August 4th, 2025 04:41 - We Keep On Going Anyway (Malcolm Gladwin)
Life\'s journey through lands of illusions and reality is with us all the...
August 4th, 2025 04:40 - I forgot to breathe (Baker)
Sometimes life passes so quickly that we don\'t even notice breathing. A...
August 4th, 2025 04:35 - Lunacy (Fränz Müller)
Light hearted and fun in its wording it carries some wisdom with it just...
August 4th, 2025 04:33 - Sol (Not_defined)
A beautiful poem that shows fleeting moments of brightness worth pursuing....
August 4th, 2025 04:31 - Secondhand (Berniece)
I love the last stanza that is so profound in its wisdom. A great metaphor...
August 4th, 2025 04:29 - Intuitive Clones of Progress and Dying (ElizabethMoroz)
Cascading images of a world we live in where things are not always what...
August 4th, 2025 04:27 - After the Storm (Gray0328)
This poem a series of wonderful lines linked. I think my favorite is the...
August 4th, 2025 04:19 - reader, read her (Arqios)
A mysterious and quiet opening to this poem. Set in the early hours past...
August 4th, 2025 04:17 - Dangerous (Orchidee)
In that survival is often dependent upon instinct and reflex I would have...
August 4th, 2025 04:07 - Is Life Dangerous? (Goldfinch60)
A fine write Andy with most encouraging words. I see life as an adventure...
August 4th, 2025 04:00 - Portrait of An Old Jug and Bowl (Neville)
Some works of art are fortunate enough to be appreciated by their owners...
August 4th, 2025 03:54 - Road (Brimelow)
I hear the urgency in this write and the metaphor makes it uncertain. The...
August 3rd, 2025 18:48 - dance (Lunarchloedip)
A fun rhyme shows the passion in this youthful poem of young love.
August 3rd, 2025 18:46 - Did I mention the mosquitoes? (Eugene S.)
I remember those days, no more racoons just an occasional possum and...
August 3rd, 2025 18:45 - The Truth of Loss (Mminarik00)
Clever, logical, and that is hard to mesh with the emotional. Nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 18:40 - Back when I was a Kid (Thomas W Case)
Well said Thomas a fun fead
August 3rd, 2025 18:34 - Love\'s Worth (Teddy.15)
Clever Teddy. A very nicely worded write over an emotion that we all have...
August 3rd, 2025 18:30 - SEASONED NIGHT (Acheel)
Love and spice a good combination a most artistic write.
August 3rd, 2025 18:27 - Don’t Force It (Meagan Adelle)
A sad poem of allowing others to use and mold you so that you will fit...
August 3rd, 2025 15:27 - Refuge (Will Kevin)
Great imagery for a love that continues to burn bright. Lovely
August 3rd, 2025 15:24 - Energy (Amethyste)
Funny how we sometimes notice things that others do not. A good write
August 3rd, 2025 15:23 - A Heart Part 1 The Damaged One (Anthony Hanible)
Interesting images that make for a mechanical life. Today\'s world does...
August 3rd, 2025 15:22 - Your own truth (Byyvette)
A poem that tickles the mind with thoughts of the ethereal. Well written
August 3rd, 2025 15:04 - Ashes Don’t Echo (Samuel)
A poem of anguish and pain for a relationship that is lost. Well written
August 3rd, 2025 13:21 - Just Stand (Kayla Jackson)
The bigger the obstacle overcome the greater the feeling of empowerment...
August 3rd, 2025 13:18 - At the Black See (Ksey_Gan)
This poem has an exotic feel to it as it floats through the lines
August 3rd, 2025 13:17 - Our Guiding Light (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A poem of faith and looking for guidance. Religious in nature it looks...
August 3rd, 2025 13:15 - O Cruel Sky (Villanelle) (Abdullah123)
Nicely done. The form is a difficult one for me as well. This poem has an...
August 3rd, 2025 13:13 - The Cowslip’s Lesson (GeekSusie)
A beautiful and tender poem that touches the heart
August 3rd, 2025 13:10 - Caught In The Glow (Kurt Philip Behm)
I get the sense with this one Kurt that we all put on a mask or some would...
August 3rd, 2025 13:07 - Change is the only constant (Hzugman)
A true statement about life. The ups and downs and all we can do is...
August 3rd, 2025 13:03 - Thought (Bella Shepard)
So true in so few words. Well said Bella.
August 3rd, 2025 13:01 - Untitled #2 (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
Rich with metaphor this poem is thought provoking. Nicely said
August 3rd, 2025 09:48 - Battery life (Jeremy Leach)
A true and fun read all wrapped into one. If deprived of their phone most...
August 3rd, 2025 09:45 - Is it Better? (Vicecream)
A beautiful poem full of imagery choices are often difficult but the...
August 3rd, 2025 09:43 - Mystical (Kaz)
A spectacular haiku visually marvelous and pleasing. Loved it a fave
August 3rd, 2025 09:39 - Fighting Your Own Enemy (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla)
It is evident that it is about war and your note makes sense as to the...
August 3rd, 2025 07:43 - Never play games with a woman who isn’t afraid to be alone. (Friendship)
A powerful poem of resilience and determination. A statement of strength....
August 3rd, 2025 07:40 - NO (Tony36)
Yes Tony poetry is all about feeling and telling it as it is. If you want...
August 3rd, 2025 07:28 - Twice the Woman (Samuel)
A poem that sends the message loud and clear and quite a dig it is. Well...
August 3rd, 2025 07:26 - Poor Credit (Demar Desu)
I have been there and if I had the courage to check my accounts I am...
August 3rd, 2025 07:22 - Where Love and Wisdom Meet (Jainesh.D)
For the message alone a fave and if I had more to give for the words of...
August 3rd, 2025 07:20 - bluebird sky (Jim56)
Touching, soft and tender in its innocence with childhood memories it...
August 3rd, 2025 07:11 - Cutting (Maplespal)
Clever and deep in meaning. The repetition makes its point and the final...
August 3rd, 2025 07:08 - Taste of Summer (Jerry Reynolds)
A lovely senryu Jerry one that all can identify with. Memories how...
August 3rd, 2025 07:06 - \"sunlit newsflash\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios)
As I read this the first thought was the contrast between government...
August 3rd, 2025 07:04 - Princess (Peto)
With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave....
August 3rd, 2025 04:48 - WorkedBloodBeatingWin (Last Shadow)
A write about the path that is sometimes dictated by life itself. Nicely...
August 3rd, 2025 04:46 - Quiet Repose (RSM0812)
Nice meter and flow in this love poem well written.
August 3rd, 2025 04:44 - Fire (Laguna)
Powerful and brutal in an eye for an eye poem of anger and vengeance....
August 3rd, 2025 04:43 - The tree (Chai Tanner)
A great metaphor and so is life in general. Evolution in a bottle so to...
August 3rd, 2025 04:39 - Brain (Krissy.V)
This poem presents that dichotomy of the world that some see. A simple...
August 3rd, 2025 04:37 - The Mark Of The Beast (Part 2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Dark and it began long before 1984, before Brave New World its roots go...
August 3rd, 2025 04:35 - HAUNTED LIGHTHOUSE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A great ghost tale in verse and rhyme. Very nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 04:32 - Thread by Thread (Malcolm Gladwin)
Very nice meter in this poem that carries the reader on like a marching...
August 3rd, 2025 04:30 - The One Who Still Holds the Key (KnightOfCups)
A most interesting and compelling write that uses cards some tarot some...
August 3rd, 2025 04:26 - Waiting for Godot (Deepak Vohra)
Nicely written a deep poem about man\'s waiting for ideals that do not...
August 3rd, 2025 04:21 - Remember those feeling (David A Liebermann)
I sense a renaissance here a rebirth, a resurrection of a type into a new...
August 3rd, 2025 04:14 - We Kept Our Mouths Shut (Tony Grannell)
They have a saying in Brazil that translated is (a mouth full of ants)...
August 3rd, 2025 04:11 - Love Blooms Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write that is most reassuring with a strong feeling of...
August 3rd, 2025 04:02 - Requiem for a Second Rate (Kevin Hulme)
A fun read. Were the visitors\' dressed in off color?
August 2nd, 2025 21:06 - PAST (Keeter C)
Clever writing here. The wording makes it. Loved it
August 2nd, 2025 17:03 - The Passing Bell (Kurt Philip Behm)
I have seen too much of this and too many bells. Well done Kurt
August 2nd, 2025 16:58 - Cardboard (Aneenaelzabinod)
A most wonderful metaphor that works so well. A fave
August 2nd, 2025 15:59
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