Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Can I (2781) A poem that sounds spiritual if not religious but is individually...
  March 27th, 2025 04:43
• IMBIBING THE SMILE (Pukur) A great fable with a moral and nicely told. A smile can make a day both...
  March 27th, 2025 04:41
• The Gun in Your Hands (Kheza) The metaphor in this poem powerfully evokes emotions that we all have felt...
  March 27th, 2025 04:37
• Reasons to love (Ezekiel Olayemi) A lovely rhyme that is a declaration of love. Nicely done
  March 27th, 2025 04:34
• Half my Heart (L.F.M) A very metaphoric write that is quite descriptive of the process of love...
  March 27th, 2025 04:30
• I see them. (Sihle Nkosi) A feeling of invisibility not to be noticed, ignored. One of the most...
  March 27th, 2025 04:26
• Sweet Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Sensuous and romantic this poem uses beautiful images to set the tone....
  March 27th, 2025 04:22
• SORDID (MDStone) I am usually quite picky about the reuse of words in a poem but this is an...
  March 27th, 2025 04:20
• forgive not forget (Arqios) The depths of this poem requires multiple readings and time to digest its...
  March 27th, 2025 04:13
• Devil By Your Side. (Poetic Licence) Great write! Revenge is one of those drugs that leaves you feeling...
  March 27th, 2025 04:07
• In Search of You (Rebellion_in_sanity) Trial and error in search of perfection is a long road with many bumps and...
  March 27th, 2025 04:01
• Love For Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Such a nice proclamation of love. Strongly stated and maintained it rings...
  March 27th, 2025 03:56
• New Leaf (DLewis88) Fresh and new the old saying turning over a new leaf. Nicely said
  March 27th, 2025 03:53
• Sheep (Amethyste) We all have seen things in the clouds a poem that is thought provoking.
  March 26th, 2025 17:56
• Confession (Ezekiel Olayemi) A proposal in poetic form. Nicely written in verse and rhyme. Well done
  March 26th, 2025 17:26
• Piano (JuneM) A write of young love and infatuation that goes unrequited. Sadness and...
  March 26th, 2025 16:51
• the small things (Xqw) A most interesting write that speaks what one things and feels. Brave.
  March 26th, 2025 16:46
• Take a breath (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) A good write where few understand that forgiveness is not for the forgiven...
  March 26th, 2025 15:01
• Stay (Molly Delaney) Left and the hurt that goes with it. Nicely written. This poem has a sense...
  March 26th, 2025 14:19
• The Spring  Melisma after Arcadi Raikin (Ksey_Gan) Spring evokes many emotions. Nice poem
  March 26th, 2025 14:17
• Fight (Damaso) Creation and violence part of this poem that is well worded. Very nice
  March 26th, 2025 12:01
• Ne\'er Y\'mind, I...Quite Forgot Was It? (Cheeky Missy) Chic I can always go to your poems for poetic everyday occurrences....
  March 26th, 2025 11:55
• Reflections in the Darkness ([email protected]) True beauty comes from within. A lovely write of wisdom put in fable and...
  March 26th, 2025 11:51
• The Coder and the Creator (Dev Parth) A personal message sent and a mark made. Very nicely worded and written....
  March 26th, 2025 11:49
• Hell in heaven (Kenny O\'Donnell) This has the potential for a song. Nicely written and with chorus as well.
  March 26th, 2025 11:47
• Moments (Garth Rakumakoe) Powerful in its nakedness. Very nicely written
  March 26th, 2025 11:44
• The Dust Bowl Lesson (Gray0328) What a great description done so poetically. A very nice piece Gray
  March 26th, 2025 11:40
• Prayer (RSM0812) This is truly poetic in its form and symbolism with good meter and...
  March 26th, 2025 08:50
• I REMEMBER (@merci) Hope is born each morning and always returns just as the sun. A bright and...
  March 26th, 2025 08:48
• The Law (Callista Howard) A faithful view expressed so poetically with rhyme and good flow. Nicely...
  March 26th, 2025 08:45
• Altered2 (John Prophet) And this they call progress. A fun read about a not so fun topic. Well
  March 26th, 2025 08:43
• Lost in Space (Thoughtless) In this short piece you have encapsulated the modern age. Lovely a fave
  March 26th, 2025 08:41
• The word system (Lorenz) Lorenz you captured me with this poem. The personification of words such a...
  March 26th, 2025 08:40
• I Dream (Tony36) Reminiscent of John Lennon\'s Imagine a song dear to my heart. Banned in...
  March 26th, 2025 08:36
• Killer Smile (Tristan Robert Lange) So clear a metaphor this of how society treats us. Told where to go and...
  March 26th, 2025 08:32
• loving dogs (Jim56) The loyalty of the hound and its love is unsurpassed. A lovely write
  March 26th, 2025 05:45
• It peers (Maplespal) Such a great metaphor and so well penned in this magnificent poem a fave
  March 26th, 2025 05:43
• Children (Emperor) I loved this poem and its focus on the genocide of childhood. Herod\'s...
  March 26th, 2025 05:41
• The Legend of Big George (Matthew R. Callies) A tribute to a great fighter and person that found success where others...
  March 26th, 2025 04:46
• Mother Nature is being a bitch (Poetaldo) A longing for spring being tired of winter comes through in this poem....
  March 26th, 2025 04:40
• THE ORNATE BOWL (Nephilim56) Missing someone is what comes through to me from this poem. Very well...
  March 26th, 2025 04:38
• Scam (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Hard to know what to believe anymore. A good poem about skepticism leading...
  March 26th, 2025 04:37
• My Bello (Mr.Toor) A cute romantic love poem simple and sweet.
  March 26th, 2025 04:34
• Impatient for the Night (Dyslexic.gun) Night calms seems to be the theme of this poem and so it does for me as...
  March 26th, 2025 04:33
• Not God (Bragee) A fun poem that expresses anger and revenge in a humorous manner. Love the...
  March 26th, 2025 04:27
• Feelings gone and numb (Again) (🅔🅜🅘🅛🅐🅨🅨) Emotions well written. The opinion of another given more value than what...
  March 26th, 2025 04:23
• What if? (Poet\'s Dream) Ah this is a wonderful poem so well set up with seemingly impossible tasks...
  March 26th, 2025 04:18
• what if i told you (Rainbow 1) A sense of bargaining in this poem that starts with one price and...
  March 26th, 2025 04:15
• Ghost Ship (MDStone) Now this was a fun poem with great images and rhyme but even more a novel...
  March 26th, 2025 04:14
• Plot For Redevelopment (Poetic Licence) A metaphor of the undeveloped. So it is with life. Many plots of our...
  March 26th, 2025 04:11
• To Forever. (Goldfinch60) Long ago past that half way mark. Good words of advice Andy well said
  March 26th, 2025 04:05
• nocturne (Arqios) The flow of the day melts through this poem running downward from morning...
  March 26th, 2025 03:56
• I hate having crushes (AnxiousMane) This poem sends a message of depression following despair over...
  March 25th, 2025 18:16
• Please Make It Stop (Anthony Hanible) Thoughts of the end passed on in poetic form. A dark read. Nicely done.
  March 25th, 2025 18:12
• The path less hurried ([email protected]) This poem\'s strength is its meter and rhythm. It\'s rhyme is good and its...
  March 25th, 2025 16:09
• The seamless skyy (Enigma747) Beautiful words carefully fit together in this poem of the passing day and...
  March 25th, 2025 16:05
• Waiting for my love (Neilton) Patience, tenacity, persistence and devotion are part of this poem of...
  March 25th, 2025 16:03
• Haunted by Regret (Nicole Pritchard) A love poem despite it being unfulfilled. Nicely written
  March 25th, 2025 13:21
• capacity (Lunarchloedip) It is the last three lines of this poem that caught my attention and...
  March 25th, 2025 13:18
• You Matter (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A motivational write that speaks of believing in yourself and relying on a...
  March 25th, 2025 13:16
• The Sacred Thread (Gray0328) Gray your poems ring with rhyme and such great meter your word choice is...
  March 25th, 2025 13:13
• It\'s cold outside! (Pineapple_pizza018) Now wouldn\'t that be the thing to be able to replay life. We think that...
  March 25th, 2025 10:54
• While I’m still alive (Guy Gael Ingabire) A poem of the hypocrisy of life and the living. Well said and honesty...
  March 25th, 2025 10:53
• Why Do We Question — Why Are We Here (Kurt Philip Behm) Age old questions that remain unanswered. Another good write Kurt
  March 25th, 2025 10:44
• Beethoven and the Cat (Thomas W Case) The poem speaks to creativity and the muse which now sounds like music....
  March 25th, 2025 10:39
• Notice from Orchi (Orchidee) Hope all turns out well Orchi my thoughts are with you.
  March 25th, 2025 10:35
• I will avoid the aggravation (Poetaldo) A poem of gratitude and sense of security that feels calming
  March 25th, 2025 10:34
• :\'( (Ke3v) A poem of sad deterioration that feels never ending and hopeless. There is...
  March 25th, 2025 10:29
• Supplanted Stuffing (Tristan Robert Lange) Teddy for me is a metaphor of my childhood that is put away and given away...
  March 25th, 2025 08:36
• Spring chanson after Apollon Maikoff (Ksey_Gan) Beautiful images are cast in wonderful poetic words leaving emotions one...
  March 25th, 2025 08:29
• We will never die (Kenny O\'Donnell) So metaphoric this poem strikes close to home I love the line (the lie...
  March 25th, 2025 08:27
• What Awaits (John Prophet) The process of creation, being. A creative process just as a poem is. Most...
  March 25th, 2025 08:22
• Cosmic trick (Lorenz) We are all aliens on a planet that does not deserve us. Not that we are...
  March 25th, 2025 08:19
• Little Bird (Damaso) A beautiful poem so well imaged and with great flow. The other day I had a...
  March 25th, 2025 08:14
• How\'d we do (2781) My poem and yours on the same wave length today call it coincidence or...
  March 25th, 2025 08:09
• Together (Tony36) A beautiful pledge and promise. Lovely Tony
  March 25th, 2025 07:27
• On a bright cold Sunday morning (Tom Dylan) A disaster breeds an opportunity and it is set in the concrete of the...
  March 25th, 2025 07:26
• The Fly Trap\'s Feast (Matthew R. Callies) A beautiful description of nature and its ways of survival. A metaphor...
  March 25th, 2025 07:24
• FIT FOR WORK (Nephilim56) We look for the easy way but find that it is not what we thought as it all...
  March 25th, 2025 05:37
• The label (Maplespal) A horrific image presented in how we look for the easy way out and find it...
  March 25th, 2025 05:34
• Is Insanity Now Normality. (Poetic Licence) Degree is the only difference in any. Fascism meets Communism at the...
  March 25th, 2025 04:27
• Tom Morello\'s Guitars (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Nothing like a good guitar rift unless it is a poetic metaphor well imaged...
  March 25th, 2025 04:22
• Darling Spring (Mr.Toor) Most people like spring and this poem and how it it written brings to mind...
  March 25th, 2025 04:20
• Fiery Hall (RSM0812) This has happened before and whether this poem is a tribute or a ,metaphor...
  March 25th, 2025 04:17
• Zara’s Choice (Arqios) A in vivo metaphor in this poem. This is the first time that I have heard...
  March 25th, 2025 04:08
• That inner voice (EvenwheniLie) Ah such a mind provoking write. Lies are no more than deluding oneself or...
  March 25th, 2025 04:04
• How one twenty first century married mortal male (me - Matthew Scott Harris)... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) This seemed another journey for Ulysses through time and space and somehow...
  March 25th, 2025 03:58
• Orange And Yellow (Goldfinch60) A painting like a poem speaks in metaphor and imagery. This is a deeply...
  March 25th, 2025 03:49
• Stars In The Sky (Not_defined) Romantic and with the idea that love goes beyond death. Very nicely done...
  March 24th, 2025 18:47
• Heaven must be a library – (Amy Michelle Mosier) A poem that combines loves, love for literature and a person. Very nice
  March 24th, 2025 18:22
• Waves Of Grain (MKS) The harsh reality of the times. Nature can be cruel and it happens to all...
  March 24th, 2025 17:46
• i could never be a parent (Xqw) Strong feelings expressed here. Nicely done
  March 24th, 2025 17:37
• Eye of the Storm (Dyslexic.gun) A most interesting read. Many different metaphors here
  March 24th, 2025 17:35
• A blessing in disguise (Nicole Pritchard) Acknowledgement and gratitude fill this poem with a sense of completion...
  March 24th, 2025 16:18
• It Was The Striving (Paul Gerard Reed) I heard the end of this poem before it arrived. To look up and say I made...
  March 24th, 2025 16:15
• The resonance of radiance ([email protected]) Beautiful, I loved the use of the prism to show diversity of views and...
  March 24th, 2025 16:13
• nobody (Juwaireeyah) Great questions that you have already answered. You don\'t have to be...
  March 24th, 2025 16:09
• Ìràpadà (Kingjamescory) A poem of recognition and resolution don\'t wait for the storm to be over,...
  March 24th, 2025 16:08
• I\'m 1 year out of high school (Pineapple_pizza018) A time of turmoil and decisions that one is not ready to make. An...
  March 24th, 2025 16:06
• apex predator (Bitter Nightshade) Frightening and all too true for many relationships built on control. A...
  March 24th, 2025 16:01