Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Hidden in the water (Ethan Mikel StAmour) This reminds me of the Man of War, a floating demon floating on the waves...
  November 12th, 2025 04:34
• What Hurts The Most (Ajon4wheels) Death highlights virtues and places in shadows faults. A lovely write of a...
  November 12th, 2025 04:32
• Change of Heart (Sassy Lou) Beauty and its alure can cause a change of heart in anyone no matter how...
  November 12th, 2025 04:29
• Release (Applecherry) Time wears away things we thought were permanent. A write about such...
  November 12th, 2025 04:26
• PROBLEM SOLVED (Michael Edwards) A fun fanciful story about a serious social problem. Immigration with all...
  November 12th, 2025 04:24
• Message Received (Tom Dylan) Each of us in our own way are weird some more than others and I guess in...
  November 12th, 2025 04:19
• Diamonds Delights (Orchidee) Another fine hymn Orchi. This is the first time I heard of diamonds in a...
  November 12th, 2025 04:16
• And It Rained. (Goldfinch60) It didn\'t even rain that hard for Noah. A wonderful thought Andy and...
  November 12th, 2025 04:12
• Unending (Boot) Oppression when does the hand become too heavy so as to lift ones arms in...
  November 12th, 2025 04:08
• Soft Rain (Kaz) A beautiful picture cast in these three lines. Nicely done
  November 12th, 2025 04:04
• Moon (M.E.M.) A lovely write of the moon. It is brought into focus and expanded in...
  November 11th, 2025 19:30
• Strong flame (Maplespal) A challenge and a dare in a poem that is opposed to its opposite in love....
  November 11th, 2025 19:28
• THE GOOD HORSE FRED (David Welch) Another wonderful narrative poem that tells its story well. A fave
  November 11th, 2025 19:18
• A Question for You (Jjudaharts) Such an important question posed in this brief write. Mining the soul,...
  November 11th, 2025 16:50
• Someone like my Father (Poetaldo) Another good write poetaldo. Well done
  November 11th, 2025 15:32
• Alarm clock (Tallisman) This is a great use of a symbol that works all the way through the poem...
  November 11th, 2025 15:30
• A TRIBUTE TO MY DAD (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A poetic tribute to a lost father. Sad but well done
  November 11th, 2025 15:28
• Trust (Malo J) Cycles repeat themselves and people find it hard to change. A real life...
  November 11th, 2025 15:27
• It\'s My Move (Anthony Hanible) Choices and decisions. A poem of the evolution of such choices. Nicely...
  November 11th, 2025 15:25
• PRETTIEST POETRY. (Starfire) A wonderful poem with great running rhyme holding it together. A fun read...
  November 11th, 2025 15:24
• FOOTPRINTS OF TOMORROW (Poems by Kutlo) Deep thoughts of past genealogy and choices that were made long ago. Very...
  November 11th, 2025 15:20
• Pushover (Paul Gerard Reed) A poem of defiance and in powerful form indeed. A fun read well worded.
  November 11th, 2025 15:19
• The Feast That Waited in Shadows (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) I am not one for holidays either but the joy and warmth of the holidays...
  November 11th, 2025 15:17
• One Very Big, Bad Wolf (Luke Bensing) Anxiety is a wolf and sometimes in sheep\'s clothing. He huffs and he...
  November 11th, 2025 15:13
• A Poetic Legacy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely Kurt I feel the same way. So nicely expressed in couplets indeed.
  November 11th, 2025 15:10
• if forever comes, is it waiting? (Applecherry) This poem is so nicely upbeat but uses contradictions such as \"my body is...
  November 11th, 2025 15:09
• Reap (RSM0812) Time indeed does beckon from above they are the only ones that know where...
  November 11th, 2025 15:05
• Pilgrims of Mercy (Gray0328) Deep in metaphor this poem speaks of pain and damage being overridden with...
  November 11th, 2025 15:04
• I make you happy (William Hromada) Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
  November 11th, 2025 15:01
• The Invader of my Cave (NinjaGirl) Ah deep and metaphorical a double difficulty. It speaks of gradual but...
  November 11th, 2025 15:00
• @.Organ (Lorenz) Ah the organ, penis or pianist I take it a god at any rate and leader of...
  November 11th, 2025 14:55
• Whispers (Teddy.15) The first thing that comes to my mind are the voices of guilt that we all...
  November 11th, 2025 14:49
• No Sure Thing (Thomas W Case) In this life nothing is sure not even this statement. A good read Thomas...
  November 11th, 2025 10:46
• Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight (Neville) Neville this poem reads to all us old pots as the shards that we will...
  November 11th, 2025 10:22
• We All Lose (GeekSusie) Well written it is easy for those that don\'t suffer to hold the line. All...
  November 11th, 2025 10:05
• Remember (Emptypot) A famous quote with addition giving it more power still. Nicely done. I...
  November 11th, 2025 10:01
• Quiet Colours (Kora) Romantic and filled with great imagery as well as rhyme and flow it was a...
  November 11th, 2025 09:15
• Untitled {11} (Niko Papadatos) A deep philosophical question in this write. As for me I believe nothing...
  November 11th, 2025 09:13
• The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or (Tristan Robert Lange) A philosophical gordian knot. The picture you posted looked like two eggs....
  November 11th, 2025 09:10
• Truth? (Jerry Reynolds) A truth itself that speaks softly but clearly
  November 11th, 2025 08:21
• a walk in the park (Jim56) A fun and fanciful write Jim loved it
  November 11th, 2025 08:19
• Anger (MatPie) A wonderful poem of recognition. It is ironical that we use the word human...
  November 11th, 2025 07:37
• Chilled Champagne (Awam) Veiled in metaphor this poem holds deep criticism of man\'s iron irony. I...
  November 11th, 2025 07:28
• The Bloom of Absurdism (The Velvet) In a day that nothing can be believed or taken seriously this poem strikes...
  November 11th, 2025 05:52
• Chad on his soapbox (Arqios) There are those that only have critical words to say, nothing good they...
  November 11th, 2025 05:48
• Behind The Wire (Paul Bell) This poem is a bucket of emotion full of leaks draining its contents in...
  November 11th, 2025 04:34
• FORBIDDEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A significant amount of metaphor in this poem. Nicely done
  November 11th, 2025 04:30
• You Disappear (Ajon4wheels) A poem of lost love separated by a mortal veil there is sadness in this...
  November 11th, 2025 04:29
• Again (Sree) This seems the type of relationship that has grown more common in recent...
  November 11th, 2025 04:24
• Ghosts of Yakuza (Ethan Mikel StAmour) This senryu is graphic in implied imagery and powerful in its meaning....
  November 11th, 2025 04:23
• The Quiet Intervals (OA Poetry) A new perspective presented in poetic form. Nicely written
  November 11th, 2025 04:21
• THE SOLDIER\'S REQUEST (David Welch) A wonderful poem that has a bit of biting irony written into it and can be...
  November 11th, 2025 04:20
• Muscle (Ja'Quan Shepard) This has a hip hop beat to it and reads like a battle rap. Well done
  November 11th, 2025 04:10
• High Tide (Kayla Jackson) When someone incompatible becomes incorporated into you there is this...
  November 11th, 2025 04:09
• I am- Conscience (The breaktime monologue) Quite the list here in this poetic monologue nicely enumerated. Well done
  November 11th, 2025 04:07
• 𝒥ℴ𝓊𝓇𝓃𝒶𝓁𝒾𝓃ℊ (Keyara S Trotman) The free flow of thought in this write takes me from journaling to baby...
  November 11th, 2025 04:02
• Remembrance At Eleven (Orchidee) I like this one Orchi it varies from the traditional hymn and seems...
  November 11th, 2025 04:00
• What Happened To Truth! (Goldfinch60) If one wanted to spread confusion and destruction of society what better...
  November 11th, 2025 03:55
• Infinity in its infancy (EvenwheniLie) A great write of a view from our limited perspective where there are only...
  November 10th, 2025 21:13
• King of Glass Land (Joan Reese) Quite the story told in this piece. A lovely write of myth or folk tale as...
  November 10th, 2025 21:11
• Time to pass away (Joseph M Marion) It reels like time is shortening and time has recently changed, it grows...
  November 10th, 2025 18:31
• Boredom (Amethyste) Gasoline and a light what a way to go. A good read
  November 10th, 2025 18:29
• I am With You (William Hromada) A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely...
  November 10th, 2025 18:28
• Child\'s Play (Xalvazora) A fun fantasy in this poem nicely written from a child\'s eyes
  November 10th, 2025 16:12
• HEART OF FIRE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) This poem is a bit dark and speaks of the demonic. It talks of fire and is...
  November 10th, 2025 15:03
• RP Amazing Poetry Book (Rafika Pahud) Loves in this poem and I have to say some parts made me hungry. Well done
  November 10th, 2025 15:00
• When I need a quick pick me up... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A poem of tolerance not just of alcohol but drugs in general. A good write...
  November 10th, 2025 14:58
• Seasoned summer (RSM0812) A beautiful work with wonderful rhyme and meaning. Very nicely done
  November 10th, 2025 14:55
• Speaking to God (Kenneth “KenGin” Reeves) A most religious write of seeking one\'s God and dedicating one\'s self to...
  November 10th, 2025 14:39
• Nature Has Way (Jjudaharts) Mind provoking this poem is a delight to meditate on
  November 10th, 2025 14:37
• Just no Justice (NinjaGirl) The yin and yang of reality. A lovely writing of dilema and the human...
  November 10th, 2025 14:36
• Schadenfreude (Gray0328) Wow! So nicely said the desire to see others fall that we might feel...
  November 10th, 2025 11:58
• The black sun of melancholy (Lorenz) It is amazing how this poem begins with a sense of metaphorical reality...
  November 10th, 2025 11:56
• you always say the right thing (Applecherry) Ah the conflict between emotions and mind between the female and male. A...
  November 10th, 2025 11:50
• In Shadow: By J. Alfred ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Been there as one so I know how it feels and even in poetry the fruit dies...
  November 10th, 2025 11:44
• Chasing the Shadow That Never Turns (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Quite the epic journey of life and death in this poem nicely rhymed and in...
  November 10th, 2025 10:58
• Definance in the Bottle (Gray0328) Quite the epic journey in this poem of life and death. Nicely done in...
  November 10th, 2025 10:57
• A Few Days (Keyara S Trotman) A most interesting flavor.
  November 10th, 2025 10:53
• That Moment (Lea Gagliardo) Very religious in nature this poem is a prayer. Nicely done
  November 10th, 2025 10:15
• Reaching into the dusk (Luke Bensing) It seems that this poem ends mid thought where it ought. Nicely done
  November 10th, 2025 10:14
• Embracing the End (Nayak) Reflective indeed this poem is a bit dark but meaningful. Nicely done
  November 10th, 2025 10:13
• The Blessing Burns (Tristan Robert Lange) Clever wording and the partial use of a well known phrase makes this a...
  November 10th, 2025 10:11
• End of Day One (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Another chapter completed in the caregiving saga. Nicely done it feels...
  November 10th, 2025 10:09
• Untitled {10} (Niko Papadatos) Clever and it leaves a question unanswered so poetic. Well done
  November 10th, 2025 08:36
• SOUL DEPARTED (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A lovely homage to a lost loved one. It is softly dark and sad but holds...
  November 10th, 2025 08:35
• They hurt me, so I wrote! (Sree) How nicely said that silence is golden and that words unsaid sometimes are...
  November 10th, 2025 08:21
• star-kissed scars (Lunarchloedip) A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not...
  November 10th, 2025 08:18
• Between (Devender Kumar) This is a poem that is deeper than the surface of it seems. It needs to be...
  November 10th, 2025 08:16
• shrinking (Mumiza) Running in second place is not an easy position but it can be a good...
  November 10th, 2025 08:15
• Wings like the abyss (Kenny O\'Donnell) Just as I imagine her seductive, sensuous and quietly peaceful. A very...
  November 10th, 2025 08:13
• Coffee Makes Me Poop (Matthew R. Callies) Now that is more information than I needed to know all seems in poetic...
  November 10th, 2025 08:11
• I tried to understand (Maplespal) A confusing place that I have been before. Lovely lines grace this poem...
  November 10th, 2025 08:05
• Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds) I love your last lines “The shape of could have been— is stronger...
  November 10th, 2025 08:03
• we all need someone (Jim56) An upbeat poem to lift one through the day. I can always rely on you Jim...
  November 10th, 2025 08:01
• I, Your Pole Star (Lyra Silvertongue) A wonderful metaphor that carries the message that it is not the brightest...
  November 10th, 2025 07:44
• eleventh hour remembrance (Arqios) Beautiful a reverent tribute to past wars of senseless slaughter of blood...
  November 10th, 2025 06:18
• STREET CORNER POET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This one has a vivid image and one all too real. I have wondered how a...
  November 10th, 2025 04:33
• A Sober Life Is A Peaceful Life (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Always found it interesting how drink makes some violent, others foolish...
  November 10th, 2025 04:29
• Love is strong (Ethan Mikel StAmour) A very nice senryu painted here
  November 10th, 2025 04:27
• No Name #2 (MatPie) This monologue in poetic form seems a soliloquy as it speaks of life and...
  November 10th, 2025 04:26