Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• A Worthwhile Pursuit (Thomas W Case) Some great lines the whole second stanza is a great write of vivid images....
  November 13th, 2024 21:27
• The Business Propsal! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Always leave the reader wanting more when the tale ends for the day and...
  November 13th, 2024 21:00
• Sharlene\'s Weekend (David Wakeling) Sounds like someone I once knew. A fun read set in great dialect.
  November 13th, 2024 20:57
• Scraps (Sorenbarrett) Thank you Mutley
  November 13th, 2024 19:07
• Love Soul Deep (Tony36) A beautiful thought of unity nicely said
  November 13th, 2024 08:20
• snow fun (Jim56) Nostalgic and full of fun memories, a wonderful right Jim
  November 13th, 2024 08:19
• Albina (RSM0812) A statement of deep love and highest steam, as well as a pledge for the...
  November 13th, 2024 07:31
• Potato Time Travel (Arqios) A beautiful story Cryptic The reflects connection of people passed and...
  November 13th, 2024 05:23
• The Colour of Void (Cassie58) Some beautiful lines in this poem, Cassie” i’ve lost the base notes...
  November 13th, 2024 05:21
• Mystical fluids (Lorenz) This one folks strong images of the body dissolving into liquid. At first,...
  November 13th, 2024 05:19
• Superfluous Twists (Neville) Great wordplay in this poem Neville. The meaning may be multiple, but the...
  November 13th, 2024 05:16
• Trauma (Kerry) Trauma and violence both covered in this poem. What is to be done when the...
  November 13th, 2024 05:12
• The Way (John Prophet) Time itself is the rabbit hole once entered, cannot be returned and most...
  November 13th, 2024 05:09
• Three Wishes (Bobby O) Now that’s the stuff that comedy is made of. A very entertaining story...
  November 13th, 2024 05:08
• Messengers In Life. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful words that should reach the hearts of many people either through...
  November 13th, 2024 04:51
• Poor and Forgotten (RSM0812) The most powerful message sent with most powerful words the use of...
  November 13th, 2024 04:48
• Chains and Hunger (RSM0812) A beautiful poem covering meaningful metaphors. Very nicely written.
  November 13th, 2024 04:45
• A violent gun (RSM0812) Highly powerful with several great metaphors it shouts with defiance for...
  November 13th, 2024 04:41
• Hearts That Break (RSM0812) Plea of agony, pain, potential loss, love, and yearning so nicely written...
  November 13th, 2024 04:35
• SHOOTING STAR (Qurrathul Ain) It is so true. It is strong emotions that fuel poetry once in a great...
  November 12th, 2024 19:36
• Hot Off the Press (MendedFences27) Many valid concerns here some are very troubling. All put to rhyme and...
  November 12th, 2024 17:02
• I write: poems (Maplespal) I thank you for your writing and I thank you for your enlightening. They...
  November 12th, 2024 14:54
• The Agnostic (RL Randall) The most interesting poem that I identify with I feel that I have been in...
  November 12th, 2024 14:50
• The House of Tears. (David Wakeling) At first, I thought you were riding about an old folks home which might be...
  November 12th, 2024 14:44
• Dippy slip (2781) A poem asking for help from a higher power. The sense of needing greater...
  November 12th, 2024 14:41
• When he Cries (The Indignant Poetess) A comforting and reassuring poem, one of kindness and generosity nicely...
  November 12th, 2024 14:40
• Farewell Leaf (Gray0328) Great metaphor and a point well taken. This poem in its reading leaves a...
  November 12th, 2024 14:38
• shopping spree (Jim56) The blending of commercialism with the true meaning of Christmas, that of...
  November 12th, 2024 14:36
• Sleeping Willow (FrasMac) A poem that leaves us somewhat sad and nostalgic feeling. It flows well...
  November 12th, 2024 14:33
• I Am (Tony36) Very good Tony yes, we are all a product of those forces that have made...
  November 12th, 2024 14:29
• At Your Doorway (Mark The Phenomenon) A poem of petition, asking for the ability to be complete and not half...
  November 12th, 2024 10:54
• Friday Night Hockey (Tom Dylan) A vivid description of a hockey game full of bumps thumps, and violence,...
  November 12th, 2024 10:52
• ~^ No More L-S-D For Me! (Thad Wilk) Funny indeed and one I enjoyed reading. Keep it up
  November 12th, 2024 10:40
• not quite forgotten (Arqios) Beautiful and well written Crytic it speaks to those fallen in wars now...
  November 12th, 2024 10:38
• There\'s the one who stays (Lorenz) Well written Lorenz this has a bit of a haunting feel to it and a sense of...
  November 12th, 2024 10:35
• FEAR (Tristan Robert Lange) A great acrostic that warns us to not become what we fear then we would...
  November 12th, 2024 10:10
• Hooray, it\'s Ch......! (Orchidee) Orchi. Not funny!! lol I feel the same as Gold How dare they pervert the...
  November 12th, 2024 04:42
• Letting Go of Your Ghost (Neville) A poem felt from the heart were passed laceration so reopened by small...
  November 12th, 2024 04:38
• LEST WE FORGET (Doggerel Dave) Dave, you have captured well both the sides of this day the stupidity of...
  November 12th, 2024 04:35
• The Sun Shone On Us Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful recitation of a wonderful day set in the form of a sonnet....
  November 12th, 2024 04:33
• ~. Your Sweet Love _ Sonnet _ (Thad Wilk) I love sonnet that would capture the heart of most old women. Nicely...
  November 12th, 2024 04:30
• Scarlet Skirts (Cassie58) A touching poem in honor of those who gave the final major to what they...
  November 11th, 2024 08:32
• Admonitions for a young or emerging poet (Arqios) Good advice to all poets, young and old, experienced and Novice A...
  November 11th, 2024 07:31
• Rosy Lea (Teddy.15) And so we all should be. Consider it to others, but not changing for their...
  November 11th, 2024 04:48
• Hazy (2781) A most interesting riddle, indeed. Chickens roost early. They also fly the...
  November 11th, 2024 04:46
• Remembrances (Orchidee) A beautiful hymn in tribute of those lost to this life and offering their...
  November 11th, 2024 04:43
• Another November (Neville) Beautiful, a haunting tribute to those lost in war and now lay forgotten...
  November 11th, 2024 04:41
• Lying In The Dark. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful poem Andy, it begins with the feel of the narrator being a...
  November 11th, 2024 04:39
• Workout (Mutley Ravishes) Another good plea for people to join and enjoy the benefits
  November 11th, 2024 04:37
• Where No Light Breaks (ADarkerMind) Melvin this has the field of Bob Dylan on LSD. Most interesting...
  November 11th, 2024 04:35
• Sacred Pause (Thomas W Case) Good advice so well stated
  November 11th, 2024 01:13
• Medal of Honour (An Acrostic Poem at Remembrance) (AuburnScribbler) So many that have fallen deserve a metal and never got one who deserve...
  November 10th, 2024 12:14
• Hell\'s Bells (Tony36) Never thought of it that way Tony my mother always used to say hell bells,...
  November 10th, 2024 12:12
• ~> Before I Start - brevity- (Thad Wilk) That should be framed and put above your writing desk or in fact above all...
  November 10th, 2024 12:11
• Caged Dancers (Tristan Robert Lange) I’d rather dark poem with a utopian almost feel. Well written and...
  November 10th, 2024 12:10
• remember them (Jim56) The forgotten heroes of forgotten, wars, neglected, and left in the dust...
  November 10th, 2024 12:08
• Facing the dragon (Lorenz) A whimsical scent of distance well from the shores of any known place....
  November 10th, 2024 12:07
• my daily dose of humanity (Arqios) I feel the same way Cryptic Poems are therapy for me, as well as a social...
  November 10th, 2024 12:05
• Decided not to (Maplespal) Decisions are often difficult to make, and we vacillate from one to...
  November 10th, 2024 12:04
• The Harsh Light of Day. (David Wakeling) The most interesting poem and the point made is that it is better to fight...
  November 10th, 2024 12:02
• Briefly Mentioned in Dispatches (Neville) Neville I didn’t know that you were out that type but then again I guess...
  November 10th, 2024 11:56
• Dirt (Dan Williams) An intriguing point that leads one down the dirt road to the dirt fill. I...
  November 10th, 2024 11:53
• Fatal attraction (2781)
  November 10th, 2024 11:49
• Fatal attraction (2781) Temptation is a tough cookie to handle. Good for you.
  November 10th, 2024 11:49
• Work Out Better Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) The most positive outlook that I to share a wonderful thought Gold have a...
  November 10th, 2024 11:46
• Continual Agony (Kerry) That’s the spirit gather strength and grow each day. A great poem...
  November 9th, 2024 15:38
• Crying out load (David Wakeling) A dark right and commentary on the state of our society. Well expressed...
  November 9th, 2024 15:35
• Potential (Tony36) Nicely stated Tony motivational poem all can benefit from
  November 9th, 2024 15:34
• CHILDREN (Tristan Robert Lange) A frightening thought that’s all too true well written and nicely...
  November 9th, 2024 15:30
• The SLAYING. (David Wakeling) Sharp raw and savage it’s sparkles with darkness. My favorite part is...
  November 8th, 2024 17:49
• ~> Aliens Arrived Arrogantly Again! - part 2 - (Thad Wilk) Another fun read of fantasy and reality. Good going Thad.
  November 8th, 2024 16:13
• i could know all truth and still have no meaning (MR.apocalypse) There is a sadness in this porn and it touches the heart. Well done.
  November 8th, 2024 16:09
• Night Time Follies (Kerry) A yearning nostalgia to this poem it reads so smooth. It has an aching...
  November 8th, 2024 12:58
• Fire in the Shadows (Gray0328) This has a very dark tone to it yet it reads in an inspiring way. Very...
  November 8th, 2024 12:54
• Wilderness (Neville) Neville this reminds me of the story to build a fire. It has a cold feel...
  November 8th, 2024 12:52
• ANTICHRIST (Tristan Robert Lange) This has the most classical field to it. It seems to have come right out...
  November 8th, 2024 12:20
• Breathe in Breathe out (Tony36) Breath a key word. They believe that the word breath was the first word to...
  November 8th, 2024 10:03
• SHE WAS ALONE (Michael Edwards) A poem that reeks with lonelyness and is haunting
  November 8th, 2024 09:25
• blurry mist (NinjaGirl) The essence of a dream in this poem. Lovely
  November 8th, 2024 06:44
• i can never be alone (MR.apocalypse) Music the key to emotions and with it one is never alone
  November 8th, 2024 06:42
• Let Love Reign (Thomas W Case) A most beautiful poem of the power of love. Well done Thomas
  November 8th, 2024 06:41
• II. (Rin the Magnificent) Now here is a haiku that puzzles the mind. I can picture it well but that...
  November 8th, 2024 06:39
• Dead in Venice (Lorenz) A dark and angry tone to this well written piece. It speaks of foul deeds...
  November 8th, 2024 06:36
• The Beauty of a Kiss (Arqios) A beautiful moment expressed in a poem. So nicely worded loved it
  November 8th, 2024 06:16
• dreamer (Jim56) A peaceful feel to this poem with a sense of fantasy and safety. Most...
  November 8th, 2024 05:38
• Everything/nothing (2781) Well rhymed and with good flow this poem sets forth its message
  November 8th, 2024 05:36
• I Wonder? (Teddy.15) I too wonder about strange things. A fun read and I know what it is like...
  November 8th, 2024 05:35
• Life Prelude Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful message in a beautiful sonnet Andy very nice indeed
  November 8th, 2024 03:52
• High School (Dan Williams) A great poem of how people are treated for what people see on the outside....
  November 8th, 2024 03:48
• His last thoughts (Maplespal) Well sritten the symptoms of depression and despair and the accompaning...
  November 7th, 2024 17:05
• Visiting Bri!! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another continuing saga writen to have a come on for the next episode....
  November 7th, 2024 17:01
• ~> I\'M AN ANTEATER! (Thad Wilk) A fun read better an ant eater than an aunt eater.
  November 7th, 2024 11:51
• I. (Rin the Magnificent) A historical haiku applied to current events? Well written
  November 7th, 2024 11:49
• Yell into the wind (Tony36) Tony I have been accused of fighting the wind butI would never spit into...
  November 7th, 2024 11:47
• One Such Day (Arqios) A most beautiful sonnet cryptic and a beautiful thought
  November 7th, 2024 06:35
• The Strength of a Redwood Tree (Gray0328) Been there and seen their grandure, A lovely poem of nature
  November 7th, 2024 05:47
• Awoke (2781) Clever write with the point comming at the end literally. Nicely done
  November 7th, 2024 04:12
• Glimpsed (Neville) The pairing ot the lighting up of her eyes with the glints from the...
  November 7th, 2024 04:10
• Whenever (NafisaSB) Support is a most important element in life and this poem speaks well to...
  November 7th, 2024 04:01
• Step Counting (Goldfinch60) Step by step we grow one step closer. Just another step to our goal. So...
  November 7th, 2024 03:58