Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Old flame (Alan R) A most sensuous poem that grows stronger with each line. This passion...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:42
• All Mine (DREEK0) Here is the puzzle in this poem to identify the narrator. Memory, desire,...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:40
• The Life Of A Little Dog (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) You have incorporated several facts, word plays, and an amazing animal...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:37
• Rise For Gaza (Mohammad younus koul) Once again powerful words for a just cause
  March 22nd, 2025 05:34
• Fleeting Horizons (Serra) The pain is felt but the loss of one may result in greater love for...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:33
• The Great Boston Mooninite Panic (Matthew R. Callies) A fun, historical, hysterical, write well done in great rhyme and good...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:30
• Silent Footsteps (MKS) Only four lines to convey the falseness of social conventions and how...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:26
• Decaf (Gray0328) I get the sense of aging disillusion and crumbling youthful idealism in...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:23
• You Seen That U? (Orchidee) You sure it wasn\'t ewe fleas not yew trees. What of the grey or the gray...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:19
• Writers Doubt (Poetic Licence) What a splendid poem that rings with truth in every line. How many times I...
  March 22nd, 2025 05:13
• “the internet does not lie” (Arqios) It matters not whether the data entry of faulty material is intentional or...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:59
• The Uncharted Self. (__INTROVERTME__) A motivational write that calls for independence and self reliance. Nicely...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:51
• Unobtrusive Unity (Philip Daniel Cook) We have lost touch with humanity it is all now automated socially...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:41
• Only Drive When Necessary (Goddess of the Mist) In this existential mist of change and development there are some...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:38
• Fifty Years Ago, Blimey. Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I can identify with this poem Andy. It rings true and seems that it all...
  March 22nd, 2025 04:32
• Deeper in the Abyss (Emperor) So much said in so few words. Nicely compacted in poetic form. Lovely
  March 21st, 2025 19:00
• The Lion (MKS) I have heard of a wolf in sheep\'s clothing but a sheep in lion\'s...
  March 21st, 2025 16:47
• Be the one (Juwaireeyah) Brilliant! We are all responsible for ourselves and we can\'t love others...
  March 21st, 2025 16:39
• Plague (Damaso) The literal take on this poem is tragic and sad, a child in poverty and...
  March 21st, 2025 15:07
• The Decision of Judas Iscariot. (Jan bach) A take on the Gospel of Judas. Nicely written from the other point of...
  March 21st, 2025 15:02
• The thought of you (Peculiarly Lauren) Cute, innocent, romantic, lovely and most intriguing poem well done
  March 21st, 2025 14:49
• Lost at Tesco (Tkatie118) I\'ve had that feeling when I\'ve been shopping in large malls and worse...
  March 21st, 2025 14:46
• When it Hurts (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another good write Shamrocker. It reads well with internal rhyme and yet...
  March 21st, 2025 14:01
• Brother if I lose you some day (Poetaldo) A touching poem of fraternity between brothers and although separated by...
  March 21st, 2025 13:53
• God is Love (Gray0328) A beautiful poem Gray bright with an offering of hope to all. It speaks of...
  March 21st, 2025 13:50
• Sink Our Ship (Quemis) Dark and without the sense of hope this poem speaks of life as a sinking...
  March 21st, 2025 13:47
• Engine Dolmatovski The sing of spring (Ksey_Gan) Dualities expressed in this poem but it is the end that ties it together...
  March 21st, 2025 12:50
• The Fragile rivers of peace ([email protected]) A beautiful thought that does not happen enough in this world. War pays...
  March 21st, 2025 10:50
• Little League Swing (Matthew R. Callies) With the chorus it could be a song. It brings the excitement and comradery...
  March 21st, 2025 09:32
• VHS tapes (Pineapple_pizza018) How many of us wished we could return and relive time. A very nice poem...
  March 21st, 2025 09:04
• Thundering Cloud (Kurt Philip Behm) Most deaf to the coming of danger do not heed its signs. A wonderful write...
  March 21st, 2025 09:02
• Leave Little Room (Tristan Robert Lange) We look at others with no vision and shake our heads in disbelief and I...
  March 21st, 2025 07:43
• Poetry together (Tony36) A poem dedicated to poetry and poets where ever they may be. Nicely said...
  March 21st, 2025 07:40
• My Rose (RSM0812) This poem speaks of one enamored and of passion that lies in new love. A...
  March 21st, 2025 06:44
• Positive > Negative (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A wonderful poem of question and one that I have asked many times why does...
  March 21st, 2025 06:41
• I want to... (Real Rhyme) There is a longing in this poem a feel for the more simple life. I live...
  March 21st, 2025 06:39
• Focusing out of distraught (Maplespal) This poem gives a hint in the first line that the snow being mentioned is...
  March 21st, 2025 06:37
• holy kestrel (Jim56) A fun poem with a twist at the end. But then are we not all birds of prey...
  March 21st, 2025 06:34
• Us (Asiabtheeedon) An acknowledgement of a higher power to help us through tough times and...
  March 21st, 2025 05:01
• Permanently vacant (Poetic Dan) A sense of powerlessness encompasses this poem there is an apology and a...
  March 21st, 2025 04:25
• The Dog Ate My Poem (An Ode to World Poetry Day) (Tom Dylan) Tom the feel of this is so down to earth and common day. Although about a...
  March 21st, 2025 04:21
• Make a Change (Acricketschorus) The poem starts out with numerous questions that feel dark in nature but...
  March 21st, 2025 04:17
• Nib out (David A Liebermann) A poem that speaks in gratitude and appreciation for the gifts of nature...
  March 21st, 2025 04:15
• Something Only We Can feel (Reynaldo Casison) This poetic verse has the makings of a song. With a repeated chorus it...
  March 21st, 2025 04:12
• BIRTHDAY CARD (Nephilim56) A poem of loss and a sad one at that. Symbols well used of a dried rose....
  March 21st, 2025 04:10
• Lie In a Truth. (Poetic Licence) In truth it may have never been born. A great play on words and woven...
  March 21st, 2025 04:08
• cure-alls (Arqios) In comfort our choice of entertainment is far different than when under...
  March 21st, 2025 04:06
• JUDGEMENT (Cerry) A poem in soliloquy form that speaks to the reader to exercise compassion...
  March 21st, 2025 03:43
• Kindness In Your Heart. (Goldfinch60) A write of gold Andy this one should be taught at home, in the schools,...
  March 21st, 2025 03:36
• My conscious is clean (Poetaldo) Simple and short but clearly stated.
  March 20th, 2025 19:01
• Ugly Joint (Damaso) A most interesting write. Well done.
  March 20th, 2025 19:01
• Profusions of Your Love (Reynaldo Casison) A love poem full of imagery nicely done
  March 20th, 2025 18:55
• Me (Tkatie118) Speaking for those that can\'t speak for themselves this poem talks of...
  March 20th, 2025 17:09
• I\'m Dead (Anthony Hanible) Graphic and dark this poem speaks as if the dead can reflect upon their...
  March 20th, 2025 17:03
• Bath night. (Jan bach) This poem describes a ritual no longer practiced but in the mind and...
  March 20th, 2025 16:19
• Consequences of a dirty hit (Nicole Pritchard) I hear the message in this poem loud and clear. Controversial as in other...
  March 20th, 2025 16:15
• I am (Xqw) Discontent and pain run through this poem seeing the past generations and...
  March 20th, 2025 16:07
• Daft Obsession (Orchidee) It\'s all a trick for AI to recognize its own kind and has nothing to do...
  March 20th, 2025 13:57
• Guiltless Death (MKS) Intriguing comparisons and thought provoking ideas in this poem. Lovely
  March 20th, 2025 13:01
• give & take (Gray0328) A clever write with a message wonderfully delivered in question form...
  March 20th, 2025 12:59
• Pretty Colours (A piece of luggage) Loss in this poem leaves feeling hopeless and dark. Sad
  March 20th, 2025 12:57
• Irreverent (Coracaodacripta) Lack of trust does interfere with deep relationships in present day...
  March 20th, 2025 12:54
• Circling The Square (Kurt Philip Behm) As the song of Me and Bobbie McGee says I would trade all of my tomorrows...
  March 20th, 2025 12:52
• COMFORT ZONE (ChrisLyn🕊) Balance is always the key. A great poem about finding it. Nicely done
  March 20th, 2025 12:49
• Dear Fathers, (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
  March 20th, 2025 12:07
• Dear Fathers, (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Wow! such great advice to fathers. Being a father I can see the need for...
  March 20th, 2025 12:07
• The Ghost in the Dog Tag (Rebellion_in_sanity) Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried...
  March 20th, 2025 12:03
• Fanny (Lorenz) Subliminal references to many classic\'s books and music. Nice work.
  March 20th, 2025 09:39
• Moments of Tranquility (Elias H.F.) A great twist on the idea that adversity breeds creativity here...
  March 20th, 2025 09:35
• Speechless (Pineapple_pizza018) Speaking up rather than staking speechless. A great message sent.
  March 20th, 2025 09:33
• Sculptor, I\'m not your sculpture (Juwaireeyah) A desire to be oneself and run one\'s own life. A realization that others...
  March 20th, 2025 09:28
• In the Box (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a thought that many have shared but now put to words and questioned...
  March 20th, 2025 08:17
• On The Cusp Of Pure Darkness (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A great poem of existential value maybe it is not the home but the company...
  March 20th, 2025 08:14
• my little friend (Jim56) A Jim I can only imagine what is this little friend. Knowing your love of...
  March 20th, 2025 06:42
• The Collective (Tony36) Ah the dilemma individualism and collectivism. A great poem pulling for...
  March 20th, 2025 06:38
• What path (Maplespal) A wonderful write of beauty overlooked by many, stories told, a world to...
  March 20th, 2025 05:54
• Sometimes I wish to be (Adiii) A poem a child would love with all the animal names and rhyme. A fun read.
  March 20th, 2025 04:32
• Speeches Freedoms (RSM0812) Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the...
  March 20th, 2025 04:29
• déjà brew (Arqios) This is not referring to Kopi luwak coffee is it? lol This write requires...
  March 20th, 2025 04:26
• Bacterial Warfare (Mutley Ravishes) I heard that it is now a war crime and outlawed by the Geneva convention....
  March 20th, 2025 04:21
• I Wait (E Naughton) Word play in this poem where stillness reigns a thought provoking write.
  March 20th, 2025 04:18
• Spring (also known as vernal) equinox arrives March 20th, 2025 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Lunar it is. They say shoot for the moon and indeed this one does. A...
  March 20th, 2025 04:17
• Last Spin\'s Echo (TRIGGER WARNING: Self-inflicted death) (Matthew R. Callies) The short and choppy breaks enhanced the racing thoughts and progression...
  March 20th, 2025 04:12
• Be careful (Poetic Dan) Expectations are seldom met. Voiced in this poem now a new expectation...
  March 20th, 2025 04:09
• Fall Of Tyrants (Mohammad Younus) The poem of a liberator nicely worded
  March 20th, 2025 04:06
• UPON THE SHORE (Nephilim56) A metaphor for life sailing the seas and fate is in our the captain\'s...
  March 20th, 2025 04:03
• Am I Alone. (Poetic Licence) A point made that each term is by itself emphasizes the aloneness of it....
  March 20th, 2025 04:00
• The First Day Of Spring. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet to spring Andy. The wording and images created evoke...
  March 20th, 2025 03:47
• Black Rose (Alex PB) A poem of proposal and love. Nicely stated
  March 19th, 2025 20:03
• Capitalism in Crisis (Demar Desu) A good question that remains to be answered. Well said
  March 19th, 2025 20:01
• The Mirror in the Mist (TheInnerLens) A poem full of beautiful images and a play on words used at the end to...
  March 19th, 2025 20:00
• Pawing At Nightfall (A Boy With Roses) A feeling of loss and desperation. Well written
  March 19th, 2025 18:00
• Come Back Mojo (Thomas W Case) A great write that pulls at the brain caught in the metaphor unraveling...
  March 19th, 2025 17:58
• Ancient Thought (John Prophet) We are our past just as one ring in a tree forms around another. Much of...
  March 19th, 2025 16:09
• Reborn (Juwaireeyah) Rebirth is just that letting go of the past and starting new. A lovely
  March 19th, 2025 16:06
• A shield of silence (Anabasova) Water and fire quite the combination only lack earth and air to be...
  March 19th, 2025 16:04
• Wot You Doin\' On \'Ere? (Orchidee) I\'m 60% water Orchi. Hey you started posting latter in the day thought I...
  March 19th, 2025 16:02
• The mystery box (Nicole Pritchard) Very nice this poem holds secrets hidden and to be solved. Very nicely
  March 19th, 2025 15:59
• My eternal bundles of joy (Neilton) A poem dedicated to cats that before I got to the end seemed for children...
  March 19th, 2025 15:57
• The lament of The Russian Inmate after Arkadi Severni (Ksey_Gan) This poem carries the feel of Russian writing, I\'ve read Tolstoy,...
  March 19th, 2025 14:59