Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Past Love (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) A question of relationship or lack thereof. Some relations are based on...
  August 8th, 2025 14:32
• Wha ja say yer name wuz? (Hzugman) A most interesting poem. Labels we all have em but they mean nothing nor...
  August 8th, 2025 14:26
• Anthem for the Apocalypse (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A good write about doing the right thing. Nicely said
  August 8th, 2025 12:14
• Just a ghost (Wildecho14) So hard to not be noticed or cared about. A poem of being just in the...
  August 8th, 2025 12:11
• Destructive Taste (Series on Liberals #3) (Gray0328) This poem begs for interpretation in its obscurity it speaks of...
  August 8th, 2025 12:06
• Light up (Amethyste) Sensuous and seductive it could be passionate. A wonderful write
  August 8th, 2025 12:03
• A Daughter-In-Law\'s Discrimination (Randyjohnson71) Well written with rhyme this poem exposes a sad reality that those with...
  August 8th, 2025 12:02
• Waiting for Godfrey (Kevin Hulme) Well written with a great story and rhyme. Loved it and a fave
  August 8th, 2025 12:00
• The Gates Are Shut For Gazans Still (Mohammad younus koul) Tragic and sad but no new news here. A poem of lack of acceptance. Well...
  August 8th, 2025 11:57
• Old Russian Scholar Song (Ksey_Gan) This poem turned unexpected and the surprise made it a great write
  August 8th, 2025 11:53
• IS IT DIFFICULT (Saswati das) In a line of two there is depth. Well done.
  August 8th, 2025 11:49
• The Fall of the Raj (Tony Grannell) The buildup was perfect and the timing well done. It was indeed a fun read...
  August 8th, 2025 11:45
• Trophy in a Case (Violet_Writes) Feelings of confinement and control with a sense of resentment. Nicely...
  August 8th, 2025 11:30
• Where Did I Leave Myself? (Cheeky Missy) I too never trade in my phone. A fun read Chic
  August 8th, 2025 11:26
• Beatify (Kurt Philip Behm) I loved this brief poem
  August 8th, 2025 11:16
• Making Life More Difficult (Orchidee) Orchi I was having such a great time with this poem until you started to...
  August 8th, 2025 11:15
• the aroma (Thoughtless) Beautiful smells makes me hungry whether food or love
  August 8th, 2025 11:05
• Echoes of the elder forest (Lorenz) The setting is one of depth and feeling. Despite the location I sense...
  August 8th, 2025 10:06
• Picnic at the Paradox (Aman 12) I remember well the three stooges as a child and it seems that they are...
  August 8th, 2025 10:01
• Ode to My Poetic Side (Matthew R. Callies) Very nicely crafted this ode to the site that is one of the most friendly...
  August 8th, 2025 09:57
• the place I keep your hands (Corian Baek) Much metaphor in this write that speaks of a relationship that is...
  August 8th, 2025 09:11
• Dead Feelings.. (David Prestigiacomo) A sense of helplessness and hopelessness comes through in this write. It...
  August 8th, 2025 08:18
• alive again (Demar Desu) Specialist in haikus you have written another marvelous senryu my friend
  August 8th, 2025 08:15
• The Breath of Morning (Rrodriguez) I feel it, smell it, see it and hear it. What else could be asked? A...
  August 8th, 2025 08:13
• Wishes (Lorna) Nature in its softness and harshness is our home and we have to choose...
  August 8th, 2025 07:05
• A brain dump: Yours to kill (Maplespal) Self sacrifice the ultimate redemption for the giver and the other. Set in...
  August 8th, 2025 07:03
• Poem-Come in urgently, Flakker-35...! (1) (Soman Ragavan) A play like commentary through metaphor on not only current events but...
  August 8th, 2025 05:16
• Mirror on the wall (NAZIA ZAHRA) A poem of existential questions that are the answers to the questions...
  August 8th, 2025 05:11
• Verily! (Srini) Clearly fun and well worded this poem made me smile and despite its...
  August 8th, 2025 05:07
• Hollow King (Midnight Lasagna) This poem has good meter and rhyme but to this is added a somewhat cryptic...
  August 8th, 2025 05:06
• remembrance (Phragmidium) A longing sense of romance in this poem that is put on hold. Nicely
  August 8th, 2025 05:04
• Phantom Ring (Samuel) The rawness of this poem is its strength it doesn\'t cry it sobs quietly...
  August 8th, 2025 05:01
• Should Be Illegal (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Everything artificial, taste enhancing, colored brightly, anything that...
  August 8th, 2025 04:58
• It’s Always My Fault (Meagan Adelle) Brilliant! I loved the twist at the end turning self deprecation into...
  August 8th, 2025 04:55
• All because of him (V1RU$) Deception becomes a deception upon recognition and some animals look...
  August 8th, 2025 04:51
• TIME WARP (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A most interesting perspective looking back or forward through time in a...
  August 8th, 2025 04:47
• Her Path, Our Path (KnightOfCups) Noble and caring where helping is sharing. A good read that offers a...
  August 8th, 2025 04:45
• Growing Up Broke More Than Toys (Wildecho14) A broken toy a disappointment a lost opportunity but another gained....
  August 8th, 2025 04:39
• Wandering Forest (Shahla Latifi) Feigned love is sometimes used as an excuse for the enactment of passion....
  August 8th, 2025 04:35
• caterpillar munch (Jim56) I value all life and especially the beautiful butterflies that come from...
  August 8th, 2025 04:32
• Murder (Peto) A controlled but angry, threatening poem of vengeance and reprisal. It...
  August 8th, 2025 04:29
• \"where we come from\" (Arqios) Several readings and several takes. Layered metaphor where an innocent...
  August 8th, 2025 04:25
• Remarking on A Flight of Fancy (Neville) Those flight of fancy wings can get too close to the sun and wax does not...
  August 8th, 2025 04:06
• The Heart\'s Promise. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful pledge for one loved. Nicely written in most poetic form
  August 8th, 2025 04:01
• A kiss in the rain (Doc X) A recounting of a first encounter and romantic adventure. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2025 18:33
• You\'re Hurting Me (Anthony Hanible) A poem of pain and a challenge to one that says they love when they...
  August 7th, 2025 18:32
• you give it a title (Luke Bensing) Waves of emotion in this poem that speaks of ebbs and flows. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2025 18:31
• People plea (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A dystopic world painted in this poem. Tragic and sad. Nicely written
  August 7th, 2025 18:28
• The Flickering Light (Series on Liberals #2) (Gray0328) Beautiful Gray full of wonderful lines and with deep meaning
  August 7th, 2025 13:57
• 7.19 (Fränz Müller) Short and nicely written a melancholic write
  August 7th, 2025 13:55
• SONNET ON CUPID ([email protected]) A great write with mythic introductions. Very nice
  August 7th, 2025 13:54
• Just me again (Shadowbones) Clean up after a party is hell. A most interesting poem
  August 7th, 2025 13:04
• Submission (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This one starts in one direction and takes a bend but that is okay by me I...
  August 7th, 2025 13:02
• Writing this in an office building at 7:32 AM on a Thursday (Simple Tendencies) Metaphor fills this poem nicely written
  August 7th, 2025 13:01
• Crush (Damaso) This poem like a jigsaw puzzle requires assembly and patience starting...
  August 7th, 2025 12:59
• Let Us (Ksey_Gan) Clever wording makes for the charm of this poem. Most lovely
  August 7th, 2025 12:57
• The Secret Weapon (Aiswarya Girish) A fanciful metaphor that works well with some great lines. Stitching a...
  August 7th, 2025 12:56
• What Kind Of Heart Celebrates Destruction (Mohammad younus koul) A fave for the message sent here
  August 7th, 2025 12:52
• Letter to the lost poet (Lorenz) Like drifting though a snowstorm and trying to grab individual flakes to...
  August 7th, 2025 12:50
• Starstruck, Still (Alex PB) Quite the write. Beyond infatuation, beyond passion, more than love it is...
  August 7th, 2025 12:46
• Well, Whadya Know, Eh? (Cheeky Missy) I have learned my lesson and eaten lunch just before reading your sonnets....
  August 7th, 2025 12:42
• Steel and Heart (Matthew R. Callies) A beautiful poem filled with great images nicely done
  August 7th, 2025 09:27
• Cape Cod Mornings (Kurt Philip Behm) A lovely poem of differences and yet sameness. Deep as the sea a fave
  August 7th, 2025 09:26
• Rain (Keeter C) Loved this poem for the meaning may be far deeper than the surface would...
  August 7th, 2025 09:24
• Ode to the Nature Lover (Jainesh.D) Well said in this poem of nature and its appreciation that we all should...
  August 7th, 2025 07:29
• Bounce Fast (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Ah that early morning run to get the blood flowing and the day going. A...
  August 7th, 2025 07:25
• My Poem (Tony36) Nicely said Tony. We are all our own poem in flesh and spirit. Well done
  August 7th, 2025 07:05
• Our Final Will And Testimony (Abdullah123) This poem speaks from the dust. It echoes the past one filled with blood...
  August 7th, 2025 07:04
• autumn beauty (Jim56) Another poem that focuses on nature\'s beauty and what we should all be...
  August 7th, 2025 06:59
• NU (2781) This sounds pretty much like the modern world or maybe the world as it has...
  August 7th, 2025 06:57
• The Storm of the Rose (Santajah Douglass) A wonderful poem of being who one is despite its weaknesses and defenses,...
  August 7th, 2025 06:04
• Hold Her (Tkatie118) Here so many mixed messages lead to lack of trust and fear. A lovely write
  August 7th, 2025 05:21
• His Perfect Timing. (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Here faith in a higher power is aided by patience and trust in timing. A...
  August 7th, 2025 05:18
• Artists 🎨 (Starlight) Art and money mixed in this poem of high aspirations and colored display....
  August 7th, 2025 05:15
• Love Poem (RSM0812) Romantic in its pledges this poem speaks to commitment in love and its...
  August 7th, 2025 05:14
• The survivor (Maplespal) A poem that can be taken more than one way. in its clearest form it seems...
  August 7th, 2025 05:12
• 55 INCH SCREEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A nice flow to this poem that includes a nice pick for the song as sleep...
  August 7th, 2025 05:09
• a type of mental inclination (Wordsinclined) Clever I see this as a plea before the judge for mental competency and the...
  August 7th, 2025 05:07
• The Playlist Knows (Samuel) Memories of past union and bonds continue onward. A lovely write
  August 7th, 2025 05:05
• Elbow Grease (Berniece) It used to be that people did their own repairs but the car in the digital...
  August 7th, 2025 05:03
• Roses are red (Krissy.V) A fun take on an old trite poem that now is pushed in a whole different...
  August 7th, 2025 05:00
• Until We Awaken (Malcolm Gladwin) Here i hear the rush of the modern world and the message is to unleash the...
  August 7th, 2025 04:59
• Who? (GBear90) There is the feel of a rushed modern world in this poem, where one thing...
  August 7th, 2025 04:56
• They Do Not not Renounce Loving    by Veronika Tushnova (Ksey_Gan) I must ask what is thyou or thyour? A poem that feels in some ways to...
  August 7th, 2025 04:54
• Safe Haven (Nicole Pritchard) A poem of one finding their nest and preferring the safety of it over...
  August 7th, 2025 04:48
• oh the places you\'ll go (Luke Bensing) A most interesting analogy that I hadn\'t thought of before. Having moved...
  August 7th, 2025 04:46
• Searching (Peto) A lovely flow and rhyme scheme to this poem that takes one on a journey...
  August 7th, 2025 04:42
• spoons (Corian Baek) A fave for a poem that made me think. Upon first reading this poem seems...
  August 7th, 2025 04:38
• Storm Over Gaza (Tony Grannell) A powerful message Tony set in marvelous rhyme and meter. A heartbeat yet...
  August 7th, 2025 04:29
• \"before the next breath\" (Arqios) It is always difficult to choose in such situations because I am...
  August 7th, 2025 04:21
• Elder Respect. (Goldfinch60) A fun read Cold and I too am finding it harder and harder to find any,...
  August 7th, 2025 04:07
• Vienna (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Clever and well worded it made me smile. A fun read.
  August 6th, 2025 17:40
• Life (Keeter C) Nature at its best and we all unaware of the beauty in us and around us....
  August 6th, 2025 15:05
• Follow The Clock (Anthony Hanible) The hands on a clock clap 24 times in a day and so I feel reassured....
  August 6th, 2025 15:03
• Beautiful boys (Amethyste) Pasion takes many forms. A beautiful poem of love.
  August 6th, 2025 15:01
• Umeed aur Dua (Lheom) Truth and hope in one stanza. Lovely
  August 6th, 2025 15:00
• Breath of Heaven (Rrodriguez) So beautiful, wo identifiable, I look out my mountain cabin window to see...
  August 6th, 2025 14:59
• Love like Vandalism (Berniece) A poem of hurt and anger that darkens with each passage. Well written
  August 6th, 2025 14:56
• Listen to the voice of the poet (Albix) A call to the powerful that are deaf to the words of prophets and poets,...
  August 6th, 2025 14:54
• Cheap Rooms and Love (Thomas W Case) Grit and shadows of the past in this poem Thomas. Well written in raw and...
  August 6th, 2025 14:52