Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Boy and Bonnet (Arqios)
That’s very heartwarming and I’m sure all mothers feel the same. A...
November 30th, 2024 10:12 - Footy (Doggerel Dave)
Haven’t seen that game lately, Dave I guess I’m getting too old. The...
November 30th, 2024 10:09 - But I Absolutely Love Lemoncello Cheesecake (Teddy.15)
It sounds delicious and you are raising my appetite at this early hour of...
November 30th, 2024 04:13 - Amiable Andrew (Orchidee)
Orchi I feel back in Sunday school again. Nice to hear you’re back to...
November 30th, 2024 04:09 - Sunlit Waltz (Gray0328)
November 29th, 2024 16:21 - Sunlit Waltz (Gray0328)
Beauty is there for those that wish to see it. In this poem it is...
November 29th, 2024 16:21 - ~> Disinterred - free verse - (Thad Wilk)
I think you just did. I hear the spirit speak and see the writing on the...
November 29th, 2024 16:19 - Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange)
Christmas was to celebrate peace, closeness to others, charity and instead...
November 29th, 2024 16:17 - What’s in the box; torture (EvenwheniLie)
A dark poem with beautiful internal rhymes. This poem screams out for...
November 29th, 2024 12:12 - Flashback (Maplespal)
Post traumatic stress disorder is a terrible thing. It takes one out of...
November 29th, 2024 12:09 - Red and dreams girl (Lorenz)
Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of...
November 29th, 2024 12:07 - I want to dance with you (Tony36)
A beautiful love poem that expresses a desire for closeness and touch as...
November 29th, 2024 10:58 - Angel (senryu) (Teddy.15)
May those wings carry you wherever your heart desires. A beautiful poem...
November 29th, 2024 10:56 - winter’s embrace (Arqios)
I can feel it Cryptic I can see it and that’s all that’s needed for it...
November 29th, 2024 06:03 - Bake Day Beth (Cassie58)
I have often wondered about the kitchen chaos and why every pan bowl needs...
November 29th, 2024 06:02 - weathers getting colder (Jim56)
I have seen the homeless I have talked to them. I feel for them and often...
November 29th, 2024 06:01 - And So It Was In Early May (Kevin Hulme)
This poem takes a classical form and reads well into a relationship that...
November 29th, 2024 04:57 - morning mourning dove (Mya)
Beautiful, mournful and full of the wistfulness very nicely written
November 29th, 2024 04:54 - A Mother\'s Betrayal (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Most interesting analogies that makes sense and call out for peace not war...
November 29th, 2024 04:52 - Hanging On by My Fingertips. (Poetic Licence)
When relationships fade away, it is disturbing. This poem speaks to this,...
November 29th, 2024 04:49 - Here (Doggerel Dave)
Dave, you hit upon a sore spot. I don’t believe there is any certainty...
November 29th, 2024 04:46 - Your Most Un-Favourite Saying (Orchidee)
This is an interesting subject, indeed. My least favorite saying is when...
November 29th, 2024 04:44 - Solitude (Ishwar Chandra)
The title of this poem caught my attention. I too enjoy solitude live much...
November 29th, 2024 04:41 - Tale of the Heike parody (Rin)
As I read this poem, I thought I understood it until I got to the last...
November 29th, 2024 04:35 - My way (2781)
Indeed, so true many state that he is unjust unfair but we don’t...
November 29th, 2024 04:33 - Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville)
Oh Neville how many discarded love poems I have written. This speaks right...
November 29th, 2024 04:32 - Buddha Says (Goldfinch60)
A most lovely poem from a beloved leader. Nevertheless, my wife says that...
November 29th, 2024 04:30 - Gossip (NafisaSB)
Very good advice to all. Once you open your mouth, you open it to all the...
November 29th, 2024 04:28 - God Pty Ltd (David Wakeling)
In its darkness, this poem shines. It has many great lines too many to...
November 29th, 2024 04:26 - A Crow Recollects (Mutley Ravishes)
Morbidly, funny darkly, tasteful, pun intended. A great right short to the...
November 29th, 2024 04:18 - PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O)
Bobby, this is a beautiful poem of gratitude and is Confucius said...
November 29th, 2024 04:16 - Because I Love you (Mark The Phenomenon)
A pledge of love Embossed in violence. Anger to defend love nicely
November 28th, 2024 16:57 - My sister (Rin)
We all have our own ways of showing our love, and sometimes others do not...
November 28th, 2024 16:55 - Ayahuasca spirit (Lorenz)
Mystical magical And wondrous
November 28th, 2024 16:54 - Confused hands (Maplespal)
I have been there. As I have been reading your poems I have noticed their...
November 28th, 2024 16:50 - christmas robin (Jim56)
Jim, I love your nature poems, especially about the birds. I too love...
November 28th, 2024 16:48 - Barefoot in the Snow (Rho1975)
Haunting and cold this is a dark poem that conveys its message through...
November 28th, 2024 16:43 - A Thanksgiving Poem (Tristan Robert Lange)
Yes, Cristiano, you and I are on the same page today and I echo your...
November 28th, 2024 16:41 - mateship’s duty of care (Arqios)
A poem of kinship and closeness very nicely worded, convey the feeling of...
November 28th, 2024 06:54 - Best Dream Ever (senryu) (Teddy.15)
It doesn’t get any better than that. Have a wonderful day.
November 28th, 2024 05:19 - We Are Piggies..... (Orchidee)
Very nice whatever they are. I’m sure they’ll have a good day. Hope...
November 28th, 2024 05:17 - Mrs Bonnie Mae Clutter. (David Wakeling)
A very dark story with a very dark ending. Clover wording and rhyme make...
November 28th, 2024 03:19 - Jazzy Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A glorious evening out where music plays and all cares are left at the...
November 28th, 2024 01:52 - Quick Response (Gray0328)
This poem has a creepy, kind of surreal feel of a dystopia where barcodes...
November 27th, 2024 17:01 - My Friend (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
I hear a deep longing in this poem a sense of loss very well written
November 27th, 2024 15:20 - Seen With Sadness (Cassie58)
Sad, premature death., The years do not dim the sorrow. You can hear it in...
November 27th, 2024 15:18 - ~> A Voodoo Christmas (Thad Wilk)
Dark very dark and somewhat spooky with a creepy feeling to it too close...
November 27th, 2024 15:16 - Rinascimento (Lorenz)
A blend of the classical with modern the renaissance with the Z...
November 27th, 2024 10:45 - Idol (Kerry)
Adapting into a new lifestyle takes time and is difficult. Good poem,...
November 27th, 2024 10:41 - Silent Poem (Orchidee)
I think I’m losing my mind. This is the second poem. I’ve read today...
November 27th, 2024 10:39 - Hmm (2781)
The most interesting poem that is black and white, just like the print on...
November 27th, 2024 08:11 - will the war be over (Jim56)
A poem for peace, a noble cause nicely written Jim
November 27th, 2024 07:40 - Parting of the Ways (Thoughtless)
And so it is with love. Or at least what we call love which is really...
November 27th, 2024 06:30 - UNKNOWN FACTS (Michael Edwards)
Those I didn’t know. But then there are so many that I don’t know. In...
November 27th, 2024 06:24 - The transparent wall (Rin)
Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels....
November 27th, 2024 06:22 - Kill it next life (Maplespal)
An interesting in logical poem. Logic and belief have always been at odds....
November 27th, 2024 06:20 - when the downpour ends (Arqios)
Soft, tender, a rebirth. A poem of growth from sadness. Solace from the...
November 27th, 2024 06:17 - Unreasonable Logic (Neville)
Brilliant!!! An unconventional view of convention. Masculinity in its...
November 27th, 2024 06:11 - Farewell to Strangling (Rebellion_in_sanity)
One must do what one fines fulfilling. To be simply a cog in the machine...
November 27th, 2024 06:09 - Saccharine Succor (Tristan Robert Lange)
The authors note aids in deciphering this poem. Nevertheless, as brilliant...
November 27th, 2024 04:39 - An Unreal Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Indeed, they are Andy a necessary evil they say. Well, written and well...
November 27th, 2024 04:33 - Writer\'s Cramp (Dan Williams)
The continuous thoughts of a poet. These and others circulate through the...
November 27th, 2024 04:30 - ADULT FUN (Bobby O)
Made me smile Bobby that’s worth a lot. Have a wonderful day.
November 27th, 2024 04:25 - Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps. (ADarkerMind)
Fun read, full of twisted metaphors a maze like poem of symbolic, blind...
November 26th, 2024 20:15 - Brahmachariot (Mutley Ravishes)
Sounds like something Solomon would say after all, he had a lot of...
November 26th, 2024 19:22 - Coal Black Night (Gray0328)
A beautiful poem about the mystery and darkness of night both in the...
November 26th, 2024 18:28 - Thousands (Tony36)
Yes, so many cry for peace and so many cry for freedom, but few do...
November 26th, 2024 12:07 - Labeled (Tristan Robert Lange)
I hate labels. I think they do a great disservice to anything that they...
November 26th, 2024 12:04 - Stuck in a noose & Inaccessible (Maplespal)
Two points about two different points. Nevertheless, I have seen many use...
November 26th, 2024 06:38 - ode to the broken dream (Arqios)
Buried in this beautiful complex rhyme scheme lies the metaphor of life...
November 26th, 2024 06:35 - life (Jim56)
The duality of life it has its good and it’s bad points just as a whole...
November 26th, 2024 06:31 - Dame Ruth (David Wakeling)
A wonderful tribute to an artist. Well constructed and in poetic style....
November 26th, 2024 06:29 - Lying & Truly (Neville)
Neville this poem speaks to the heart. I have felt these feelings before...
November 26th, 2024 06:24 - Upon Visiting the Dead (Thomas W Case)
I’d rather go fishing too. A great poem Thomas filled with wonderful...
November 26th, 2024 06:21 - ~> Even Death Can Be Replaced! - A Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
I like this porn it speaks to women’s rights I suppose. At some things,...
November 26th, 2024 06:20 - Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, this is a deep drop of wisdom put into a short poem. And you were...
November 26th, 2024 06:15 - Sunrise in an Empty Field (RSM0812)
Most beautiful images in this poem, and the metaphors are well placed, and...
November 26th, 2024 06:13 - consuming (NinjaGirl)
It is exactly as this that one drowns nicely written and good word choice....
November 25th, 2024 21:04 - Silent Pictures (River123)
Hi Lisa, symbolic and metaphoric. It takes a bit of thought to unravel the...
November 25th, 2024 20:27 - Summer of dead leaves (Lorenz)
An erotic and sensual poem that sounds almost surreal. Nicely worded
November 25th, 2024 15:55 - Pulling strings (2781)
This sounds reminiscent of a second coming. It has religious overtones and...
November 25th, 2024 15:53 - My Bike (Tony36)
Open Road ahead. This poem sounds carefree. Nicely done, Tony.
November 25th, 2024 15:52 - ding a ling (Jim56)
This one reminded me of the song by Chuck Berry, my Dingaling, but then...
November 25th, 2024 15:51 - Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it? (Doggerel Dave)
Yes, Dave I knew that one. I guess that I’ve been told it too many times...
November 25th, 2024 13:02 - Echoes (Tristan Robert Lange)
Familiar words maybe it was an echo I heard before or maybe just déjà vu...
November 25th, 2024 12:59 - KP Nuts (Orchidee)
Fido is right it is a +18. Oh well nice write Orchi
November 25th, 2024 12:56 - Returned If Defective (Gray0328)
There are layers of meaning to this poem, and they extend to all types of...
November 25th, 2024 05:43 - The last part of that day (Maplespal)
Your poem again of loss past memories that provoked continued mourning
November 25th, 2024 05:40 - near or far of love (Arqios)
What are those relationships that are so merged that one cannot tell where...
November 25th, 2024 05:39 - Cricket and Grasshopper (Rin)
A fable well written and with deep meaning. Reminiscent of Aesop fables.
November 25th, 2024 05:36 - my brazil, my brother (Paperjam)
I know that song well and spent much of my time in Brazil so I feel it as...
November 25th, 2024 05:34 - Habitgruel (Mutley Ravishes)
Metaphoric indeed. I like to have stolen my share from the dragons layer,...
November 25th, 2024 05:33 - OMMMMM! The primordial sound of Creation, that permeates the Universe (SureshG)
Wonderful words of advice, full of wisdom nicely stated
November 25th, 2024 05:29 - Time\'s Game (Teddy.15)
I hear you there are times where you wish that it would freeze and not...
November 25th, 2024 05:25 - LOSSES SWIFTLY CUT (Bobby O)
Emotions come and go in sometime like having swept the pile of dust up on...
November 25th, 2024 05:22 - Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60)
Joy, serenity and positivity seem to surround you, and and they are...
November 25th, 2024 05:19 - Eagle Goes Kiwi (Mutley Ravishes)
Many thoughts to ponder, wisdom buried beneath words nicely stated
November 25th, 2024 05:15 - Grey (Alan R)
Emotions are complex and the mixture of them like mixing of colors often...
November 25th, 2024 05:12 - All Things Considered (Cassie58)
The most peaceful poem about a call, sound nicely worded with beautiful...
November 25th, 2024 05:10 - Enough (Tristan Robert Lange)
Buildup and negative feelings expressed in the first part of the poem or...
November 25th, 2024 05:06
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