Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Another Moment Lost (Neville) Carpe diem, those that hesitate are lost. Some opportunities come only...
  October 28th, 2024 09:39
• Nothing (Tristan Robert Lange) So true at face vallue and underneath lies a deeper meaning. It may be...
  October 28th, 2024 08:42
• Oktoberfest (Arqios) Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and...
  October 28th, 2024 08:33
• Just One Day. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy one step at a time is the only way to reach the goal very...
  October 28th, 2024 05:05
• Unrepentant Ventriloquist (Dan Williams) A story all too familiar, upon hearing it I always check my own shadow to...
  October 28th, 2024 04:45
• Whispers To The Ocean (Young Fella) Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the...
  October 27th, 2024 16:43
• ~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry ) (Thad Wilk) Thieves they are. Had them try to pilfer from me too. When was younger...
  October 27th, 2024 15:07
• Try \"What Was I Thinking\" Eh? (Cheeky Missy) Too much work makes Cheeky tired and sad. Thanks for sharing the everyday...
  October 27th, 2024 15:04
• The Mask of Deception (Ezekiel Olayemi) Nicely written this poem is applicable to everything from society, to...
  October 27th, 2024 08:48
• TALKING ENVELOPE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A wake up call to action. Beautifully written.
  October 27th, 2024 08:45
• ying and yang (Devil_dear) A very thoughtful piece that provokes the reader to think deeper than the...
  October 27th, 2024 08:43
• SINKING SHIP (Ezekiel Olayemi) A great metaphor that is applicable in each stanza and line it applies to...
  October 27th, 2024 08:41
• Be the light (Tony36) A great message Tony
  October 27th, 2024 08:20
• My Father, Scholar of the Unwritten Halls (Gray0328) Ivory walls are not needed for knowledge they are just a right of passage...
  October 27th, 2024 06:10
• That day\'s call (Maplespal) A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our...
  October 27th, 2024 06:07
• Vincent (Lorenz) You know Vincent well he would have liked this poem. It\'s words in swirls...
  October 27th, 2024 06:05
• I have seen, I have heard and I believe. (David Wakeling) The last four lines in this poem were my favorite. This poem weeps with...
  October 27th, 2024 05:58
• winters night (Jim56) In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts...
  October 27th, 2024 05:54
• together with heavy hearts (Arqios) This hits close to home and so is read with a bias. It captures the heart...
  October 27th, 2024 05:52
• Blinking Being Partially Deaf (Kerry) Any deficit becomes an obstacle, remember we all have them they are just...
  October 27th, 2024 05:49
• THE SNAKES INTERWINE (Rebellion_in_sanity) I love this topic so phiosophical it is ripe for poetic expression and...
  October 27th, 2024 05:41
• Medlar to Blet (Neville) There is an unexplicable element about this poem that feels like it has...
  October 27th, 2024 05:31
• Home Full Of Cheer. (Goldfinch60) Contentment comes from completion and so it seems that your day was full...
  October 27th, 2024 05:19
• Voices from my Ashes (Parizaad Hafi) The insanity of war no matter what side you are on there are no winners...
  October 26th, 2024 17:54
• Osseous Oubliette (Tristan Robert Lange) A most interesting inside view. Meditation from the inside out. Lovely
  October 26th, 2024 17:49
• Assets of the Soul (Gray0328) Beautiful words that tell of the human spirit in its daily journey Loved
  October 26th, 2024 14:23
• Lose-Lose, Old News, New War (Parisab) War devours its worshipers as well as the innocent. I think of Israel and...
  October 26th, 2024 14:04
• ~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You! (Thad Wilk) Many of us have love affairs with things that hurt us. We often take abuse...
  October 26th, 2024 11:58
• Let It Be What It Be, Howsoever, I-- (Cheeky Missy) Your manner of writing is most entertaining. A fun read
  October 26th, 2024 11:55
• XENOPHOBIC PATRIOT (Rebellion_in_sanity) Glad to see this Rebellion it takes courage to post controversial writes...
  October 26th, 2024 09:22
• My eyes are crying for me (Dev Parth) A sad write of pain and loss. Nicely composed and with some good lines it...
  October 26th, 2024 09:15
• Dear mother (Lorenz) So full of metaphor and great lines (I was born in the desire of a false...
  October 26th, 2024 09:12
• Books (Tony36) Agreed Tony they are amazing things. Writting, one of the greatest...
  October 26th, 2024 09:02
• Halfway to Hanoi (Neville) Once again you provoke the thoughts of the reader, or maybe I am just...
  October 26th, 2024 09:00
• in the light (Arqios) Cryptic this write speaks of how a lie continued out of fear can dispell...
  October 26th, 2024 08:35
• angel love (Jim56) Romance in a poem full of fanciful flight to the heights of love
  October 26th, 2024 08:19
• Trust (2781) A poem of faith upon which religious belief is built. Nicely written
  October 26th, 2024 04:50
• Sixty Minute Slumberbash (Teddy.15) Ah yes such a nice dream because once the bank did deposit a good sum in...
  October 26th, 2024 04:47
• The Miracle. (David Wakeling) An enchantingly beautiful poem. This floats on the breeze of poetry.
  October 26th, 2024 04:43
• Slightly Different Views (Dan Williams) I liked this approach. It is full of mind provoking thoughts and pushes...
  October 26th, 2024 04:38
• The Sibilance Of Showers. (Goldfinch60) Ahh Gold I have been there so many times and your words took me back to...
  October 26th, 2024 04:01
• Giving up the fight (David Wakeling) You have hit upon an often neglected issue recognizing our past mistakes....
  October 25th, 2024 18:22
• Color Captivation (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a great start to the revelation of the autum tree. A lovely colorfull...
  October 25th, 2024 14:06
• The Consolation of Boethius (Gray0328) A beautiful poem of the persistance of the human spirit. Wonderfully...
  October 25th, 2024 12:26
• My Dragon (RSM0812) A fun and at the same time engaging very nice
  October 25th, 2024 10:55
• This Time Last Year (Tom Dylan) Sad and somewhat haunting and so well done.
  October 25th, 2024 10:22
• ~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody- (Thad Wilk) Bravo! A great Halloween poem it reminds me a little of the movie Secret...
  October 25th, 2024 10:21
• I think I\'m too loud (Dev Parth) Have been there and felt that. It yells in its silence but remains unheard...
  October 25th, 2024 09:13
• Haiku 2 (Kerry) A series of Haikus each with its own appeal. Nicely done
  October 25th, 2024 09:08
• The Child (Tony36) Sad story too often true. Life by hard knocks and pulling oneself up by...
  October 25th, 2024 08:12
• in the mirror (Arqios) Beautifully writen this poem gives beauty to what many try to hide. What...
  October 25th, 2024 08:11
• Darkness\'s trap & Endless Night (Maplespal) Some similarity to Dylan Thomas here. having had general anesthesia before...
  October 25th, 2024 05:14
• good days bad days (Jim56) Some times not knowing is the best, like a wrapped present it is a...
  October 25th, 2024 05:07
• Spread Too Thin (Tom Dylan) The set up was perfect for the fin.... Distractions occur when too many...
  October 25th, 2024 05:05
• Who am I ? (Lorenz) All things to all people. I liked the feel of this one as it seemed to...
  October 25th, 2024 05:00
• Turning to Song? (Orchidee) Wishing you well and hoping for a speedy return to your writing
  October 25th, 2024 04:57
• Inaudible Sounds (Neville) This is one I had not thought of before. Silence or the absense of sound...
  October 25th, 2024 04:54
• Fake ID (Teddy.15) Makes me nervous I got a Ph.D. but seldom wear a suit these days. Don\'t...
  October 25th, 2024 04:45
• Home We Will Come Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Reminiscing of such things seems rejuvinating and envigorating. Peaceful...
  October 25th, 2024 04:22
• amore tardius occidit (Thomas W Case) Great metaphor Thomas with some vivid images that paint the picture
  October 24th, 2024 15:08
• innocence (NinjaGirl) Dark and sad but with hope. Very nicely said
  October 24th, 2024 13:40
• avalanche (Tristan Robert Lange) A most interesting read and yes the mind holds broken shards that it tries...
  October 24th, 2024 13:38
• Silent Screams of the Butterfly (Tristan Robert Lange) A most poignant poem written in great metaphor. As a psychologist I...
  October 24th, 2024 13:01
• I\'m Deeply Introvert (Dev Parth) A dark write about a dark feeling. I love the night and the shade so...
  October 24th, 2024 12:19
• ~> When An Old Man Dies (Thad Wilk) Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well...
  October 24th, 2024 12:16
• Betrayal through Tarot (Kerry) Painful and sad betrayal is a gut punch, a sucker punch that effects...
  October 24th, 2024 11:38
• Walking (RSM0812) Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of...
  October 24th, 2024 10:08
• in poetry’s parish (Arqios) Ahh Criptic a wonderful comparison and beautiful write in verse no less....
  October 24th, 2024 08:29
• Dark Angel (Tony36) Although a dark poem that is sensual and even romatic it is great for the...
  October 24th, 2024 07:40
• Till death do us part (Neilton) Best wishes on your recovery from this terrible plight. The poem I did not...
  October 24th, 2024 07:39
• Forms3 (John Prophet) Applicable in the now and present as well as a view of what\'s to come in...
  October 24th, 2024 07:32
• a guide dogs story (Jim56) A great story of man\'s best friend. Loved the rhyme and some internal...
  October 24th, 2024 07:30
• The New Hip-Hop Hooray (Gray0328) A very encouraging write where the spirit never ages only the body. Nicely...
  October 24th, 2024 05:57
• Apocalypse slow (Lorenz) A modern book of Revelations? Sounds like Time Square at rush hour to me....
  October 24th, 2024 05:55
• The Tide has gone out. (David Wakeling) That was good stuff. Both the poem and what ever you smoked before you...
  October 24th, 2024 05:53
• Bemused to Death (Neville) Neville loved the sly useof wording here in the winter of a relationship...
  October 24th, 2024 05:50
• I, I Guess I\'ll Hafta Look VERY Sheepish (Cheeky Missy) Love cream and anything that it is in. Caught my attention right away and...
  October 24th, 2024 05:43
• Sixty Poems (Tom Dylan) Good questions posed in this write. Why are certain numbers more...
  October 24th, 2024 05:37
• Ice-Slide (Teddy.15) Made me giggle myself. I have never seen a penguin giggle but can imagin...
  October 24th, 2024 05:29
• Trovatori Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Loved this one Gold sofull of imagery even the addition of the acrostic...
  October 24th, 2024 05:26
• What is love (NafisaSB) Many of loves qualities listed in this poem and they bring to mind many...
  October 24th, 2024 05:21
• Pathetic (𓆩Mase𓆪) I liked the theme and the manner of presentation. A type of soliloquy it...
  October 24th, 2024 05:17
• The leaves (NafisaSB) So well written this poem introduces a metaphor or girls and leaves as...
  October 24th, 2024 05:12
• Until (Sunshine777) Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
  October 23rd, 2024 18:49
• Fallujah Iraq April 2007 (David Wakeling) Vivid, haunting, sad this poem as a letter to mother is heart rending.
  October 23rd, 2024 18:12
• 2 poems, 2 views (Maplespal) Deep philosophically with a great message set poetically with some great...
  October 23rd, 2024 18:06
• Housecleaning Mediation (Gray0328) Not only a ritual but a metaphor well written in verse
  October 23rd, 2024 12:53
• Spooky Tales (Tony36) Horror seems to be a fetish of our society with slasher films, Halloween,...
  October 23rd, 2024 12:51
• ~> Oh, I need you so much! (Thad Wilk) Yea I guessed it might have been tomato but this death apple was thought...
  October 23rd, 2024 12:48
• EMPTY RHYTHM (Rebellion_in_sanity) Don\'t know whether to take this as a comment on the media or religion....
  October 23rd, 2024 12:45
• By Night\'s Secluded Light (ADarkerMind) A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in...
  October 23rd, 2024 12:43
• Loss (Kerry) Loss of anyone held dear is an obstacle that seems insurmountable whether...
  October 23rd, 2024 07:07
• back in my memories (Jim56) A most beautiful thought that lifts the day. So nicely stated in poetic...
  October 23rd, 2024 07:01
• in vino veritas (Arqios) So nicely put and with such a great metaphor. They excite the appetite and...
  October 23rd, 2024 06:40
• Coward (Neilton) Since Hamlet I have always loved soliloquies and this is no less. I love...
  October 23rd, 2024 05:22
• Sunbeams and Trinkets (Tristan Robert Lange) The group togeather makes for more of an atmosphere good choice
  October 23rd, 2024 05:14
• Poet (Teddy.15) You have outdone yourself on this one my friend. Written so neatly these...
  October 23rd, 2024 05:08
• Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do (Neville) You are more persistent than I, I surrendered years ago and find that...
  October 23rd, 2024 05:01
• Small Ghosts (Dan Williams) This reminded me of a philosophy class I had many many years ago. Very...
  October 23rd, 2024 04:54
• Canvas In Our Imagination. (Goldfinch60) Have long thought of poetry as a solo performance while a song takes the...
  October 23rd, 2024 04:45