Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Stand Clear: Political Commentary. (Doggerel Dave) I\'m too close to see the eventual outcome of all this. I feel like I\'m...
  March 6th, 2025 03:19
• tarot literacy (Noah Malice) Where are the lovers in this poem? A great write that brings in the occult...
  March 6th, 2025 03:13
• who are you (Sheta) This becomes a life long search that from time to time we think we have...
  March 6th, 2025 03:09
• Dry logs redden and snap; (Amy Michelle Mosier) Picturesque this final image of sparks becoming stars. Very nice imagery...
  March 6th, 2025 03:07
• i cant look (Newt) And it is for this that we live in the present for it is only there that...
  March 5th, 2025 20:07
• One must possess the patience of Job, (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A common tread is woven through these seemingly unrelated issues that of...
  March 5th, 2025 20:06
• The Gas Station Guy (Bird In Red) Passion\'s intrigue and the mind\'s fantasy blend reality with what could...
  March 5th, 2025 16:15
• Don\'t Ask Me Now, I\'m Somewhere Else (Cheeky Missy) It seems that you have been holding back. Another fun read of daily...
  March 5th, 2025 16:12
• A lifetime of sorrow (Nicole Pritchard) Regret precedes guilt. This poem well written and rhymed flows smoothly....
  March 5th, 2025 15:05
• Two Spirits Merging (Gray0328) A poem of union and of love well written and in good form
  March 5th, 2025 13:46
• In a Flash (Thomas W Case) Like youth itself short and to the point. A lovely poem Thomas
  March 5th, 2025 13:44
• Spell after Evgeny Yevtushenko (Ksey_Gan) A poem asking for remembrance and thought. This could be a song with its...
  March 5th, 2025 13:43
• Easy Come Easy Go (Adventuressmalik) Luck is always a good friend. A fun poem with good flow
  March 5th, 2025 13:40
• Clandestinus (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Another poem filled with more depth than meats the eye and beauty in the...
  March 5th, 2025 13:38
• Dandelion Clocks (Cassie58) Very nice Cassie. Not only visually and verbally pleasing but a tickler...
  March 5th, 2025 13:36
• An Effigy Of Laughter (ADarkerMind) Interesting images that create possible metaphors. A nice flow in this
  March 5th, 2025 13:34
• The In-Between (NinjaGirl) A poem of a place I\'ve been often. Great descriptive words. Lovely
  March 5th, 2025 13:30
• The Lonely Rose (RSM0812) Wow!! Brilliant! Every once in a while on this site I read something that...
  March 5th, 2025 11:41
• You\'re not alone ! (Lorenz) The setting created for this poem is well thought out. The darkness...
  March 5th, 2025 11:34
• Corporal B and Me (Neville) A great story in poem format Neville. As a child from 6 to 12 was bullied...
  March 5th, 2025 11:28
• I may say I\'m ok (Tony36) Saying Ok may be from not believing that anyone cares or wants to know, or...
  March 5th, 2025 08:28
• Cómo Foi? (Poetaldo) A lesson from the sun arise over blue sea and then to bed. Boungiorno
  March 5th, 2025 07:48
• THE FATE OF MAN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Powerful and sobering it calls out from the grave.
  March 5th, 2025 07:09
• Words Speaks For Itself (Anthony Hanible) One must have a full mind to have an open one. Listen, learn refine...
  March 5th, 2025 06:31
• A Dream of Despair (Whats write for me) Some call it faith, others belief but what ever a mind set can make all...
  March 5th, 2025 06:29
• My Crazy Cat, Zackary (Ajon4wheels) I can feel the joy in this poem and the tenderness of a playful cat....
  March 5th, 2025 06:27
• Christ Consciousness And Manifestation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Polar thoughts that at the extreme are more alike than different like...
  March 5th, 2025 06:21
• Bread (Maplespal) There are all types of breads from sweet breads to sour dough. I love the...
  March 5th, 2025 06:19
• bluebird song (Jim56) Another of your charming nature poems that seems to predict the advent of...
  March 5th, 2025 06:17
• The sky holds up (Alan R) The sky will always be there. A deep message sent in this poem
  March 5th, 2025 06:15
• MISSION (Nephilim56) Maybe I have gone too far on this one but it seems a genesis, a beginning...
  March 5th, 2025 06:14
• Returning And Reviving (Orchidee) This Orchi is a beautiful hymn of devotion. Very nicely worded
  March 5th, 2025 06:04
• slipping away (Arqios) From one that frequently writes dark, no this is not too dark. It talks to...
  March 5th, 2025 06:02
• Love Is In The Air (Poetic Licence) Tobani don\'t shoot yourself in the foot before the race begins. This poem...
  March 5th, 2025 05:56
• And I will fight (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Whether mood, or concrete obstacles this poem speaks of determination and...
  March 5th, 2025 05:52
• Assumpchumps (Mutley Ravishes) Personification of concepts is great from the abstract to the concrete. A...
  March 5th, 2025 05:50
• “Insensitive Incentive” (Peanut) This poem is touching in that it exposes the personality of the victim who...
  March 5th, 2025 05:48
• Memories of a bully (EvenwheniLie) What some people do to get noticed. A fun read.
  March 5th, 2025 05:45
• Creative Expressions (DREEK0) The rhyme in this poem reinforced the beat of the meter. Nicely done
  March 5th, 2025 05:42
• A dance with the devil (Domilla) A plea of desperation for help. This poem cries out. Well written
  March 5th, 2025 05:40
• The Fierce Beauty (MDStone) A beautiful poem of nature and the human soul. Great images and the...
  March 5th, 2025 05:37
• More a Supper of Jam (Teddy.15) At first though you were speaking of a traffic jam, then how jammed up it...
  March 5th, 2025 05:12
• The Final Over. (Goldfinch60) What a beautiful memory Andy and well put to words. I understand little...
  March 5th, 2025 05:03
• Loneliness (Kevin Hulme) A compelling poem of loneliness with the good use of metaphor and how for...
  March 4th, 2025 20:36
• The Eternal Night (Ally) Emotional expressions well spoken in metaphor as well as images. A game of...
  March 4th, 2025 18:23
• Regret\'s dark embrace (Nicole Pritchard) Wonderful imagery paint this poem. Great metaphor as well. Very nice
  March 4th, 2025 17:47
• Normalyn (Lorenz) Mythical, sci-fi, magical, with great images and well written. Loved it.
  March 4th, 2025 17:44
• Scrolls (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Dead sea scrolls? Magic? mysterious and well done form as well as wording
  March 4th, 2025 17:41
• The ocean waves and the calm beach (Arial) This is a very good write with a weaving of words and rhyme as well as...
  March 4th, 2025 17:40
• 06.06.2024 2:38am (Kylie Haynes) I loved this one. It has all the elements of a great write. Great images...
  March 4th, 2025 17:38
• eyes (Newt) This was a great poem of settling for what one can get not what one wants....
  March 4th, 2025 17:30
• Founders Ink (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt your poems deserve more views. They are almost invariably superb and...
  March 4th, 2025 17:27
• Dear, Dear Hump Day, What Was That Again? (Cheeky Missy) Seasons and nature combine with food in this delectable treat of sonnets....
  March 4th, 2025 17:20
• the paid price (NinjaGirl) Now this is something different. So well worded and cleverly structured it...
  March 4th, 2025 17:14
• Purple (Caring dove) Ah to be something we are not and even more something we do not know. A...
  March 4th, 2025 11:34
• You, a Different Man! (Framed Mirror) Sensuous and erotic it evokes a sense of pleasure and anticipation....
  March 4th, 2025 11:31
• Stories in the Margins (Gray0328) A great analogy of each person a book. The metaphor works well in this...
  March 4th, 2025 11:29
• It is so hard to live without you My father (Poetaldo) Thankfulness one of the most neglected and most important elements of life...
  March 4th, 2025 11:27
• We Must Fight To Dream (Ajon4wheels) Warnings given in this poem and to be heeded. Wisdom imparted. Nicely...
  March 4th, 2025 11:25
• Bed Dread (Tristan Robert Lange) So true peace only comes when one is dead but remember there are many...
  March 4th, 2025 11:20
• My love, My Pulse (RSM0812) The unity of all is encompassed in this poem, interrelationships,...
  March 4th, 2025 09:25
• Modern Haiku (Naina Pandey) A most interesting personification of the sun and a fun metaphor at the...
  March 4th, 2025 09:22
• My notebook knows (Bird In Red) Existential and emotional this poem speaks to the reader and most of us at...
  March 4th, 2025 09:21
• Conscience (Tkatie118) A poem of recognition and promise it speaks out its message. Very nice
  March 4th, 2025 09:19
• Shoot The Messenger (Anthony Hanible) Wow! you have captured the moment in this poem that grabs you like a hand...
  March 4th, 2025 09:16
• Kite (Cassie58) A picture, snapshot, video of a beautiful creation of nature captured in...
  March 4th, 2025 09:15
• Artistic Imagination (Salvia.S) A very beautiful image you have given Salvia. Lovely
  March 4th, 2025 09:12
• Poetry is my way to express myself (Tony36) A wonderful way to reach out to others about how you feel. It is a way to...
  March 4th, 2025 09:11
• Trying To Stay Sane In An Insane World (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A strong message set in rhyme. Nicely done
  March 4th, 2025 08:16
• TMP-tober Poems(5 poems) (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) Here you have created a myth a legend in epic lyrical form. Very nice this...
  March 4th, 2025 08:14
• Contronym (Thoughtless) Irony at its best. A fun and informative read. A George would say what do...
  March 4th, 2025 06:54
• Watching a smirk (Maplespal) Sad nostalgia and well written in this poem of loss and having to be in...
  March 4th, 2025 06:52
• Goodbye Gene Hackman - Part 2 (Randyjohnson71) A wonderful tribute to a great actor and will be remembered. Very nicely...
  March 4th, 2025 06:49
•  The Problem Within (Hey!) A poem of remorse and pain for what is seen as unpardonable flaws and...
  March 4th, 2025 06:09
• Sunflower (Teddy.15) A great message Teddy. When we can not bear to see what is outside us of...
  March 4th, 2025 06:02
• Beauty of the Book (Whats write for me) The rainbow has two ends one the forgiveness of God of men for their deeds...
  March 4th, 2025 06:00
• spring flowers (Jim56) Rainbows of color in floral display. A lovely poem Jim. The title threw me...
  March 4th, 2025 05:57
• TOWN (Nephilim56) Literally a description of urban decay and metaphorically this might be a...
  March 4th, 2025 04:50
• Mid Point (Paul Gerard Reed) A poem about the midpoint so rare. This one so well balanced. Nicely done.
  March 4th, 2025 04:26
• ill fight (Sheta) Strong statements of determination and pride. Well said
  March 4th, 2025 04:24
• Reasons to leave Mexico (Poetic Licence) A powerful write in brutal clarity the point is made. Where there is...
  March 4th, 2025 04:23
• minuet of the reeds (Arqios) Botanical fireworks set to music in this poem in a metaphoric work of...
  March 4th, 2025 04:13
• “Fiction in Fantasy” (Peanut) When we feel particularly vulnerable and depressed we are subject to...
  March 4th, 2025 04:08
• Missing Person (MDStone) So well written. This poem takes a person on a walk through the disease....
  March 4th, 2025 04:04
• All Praise! (Orchidee) Praise him with the electric guitar and synthesizer? Why not! lol Another...
  March 4th, 2025 03:59
• The Rules Of Cricket. (Goldfinch60) If ever there were British instructions these are they lol Andy this one...
  March 4th, 2025 03:53
• Is this our plan of attack? (EvenwheniLie) A fun read with many rhymes inside this piece
  March 3rd, 2025 20:27
• this (Jon Nakapalau) Short and to the point. Very nice it seems you have it your way.
  March 3rd, 2025 18:30
• Updates (John Prophet) A very nice style for this type of message. Step wise it moves like an...
  March 3rd, 2025 18:29
• There is the rain in our city after E. Yevtushenko (Ksey_Gan) A very good description of one aspect of love. Nicely done
  March 3rd, 2025 18:27
• Keeping My Tip Up (ForeverJesus7) A call to others to persist and a motivational poem it is. Nice
  March 3rd, 2025 16:32
• Father will be there (Poetaldo) A poem of comfort and peace. Lovely
  March 3rd, 2025 16:31
• Grain of faith (Funmiwrites) The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely...
  March 3rd, 2025 16:29
•  A Heart Torn in Two (Hey!) Choices are what this life is made of and no matter which it is it is a...
  March 3rd, 2025 16:28
• Did They Call THIS Having Fun? (Cheeky Missy) Once again the seasons and birds come in to play a great poem for any day....
  March 3rd, 2025 16:24
• Time Passes (NinjaGirl) A poem that begins with despair shows hope then returns to darkness only...
  March 3rd, 2025 14:44
• eyes (Newt) Philosophical in nature this poem speaks of another means of perception
  March 3rd, 2025 11:22
• She\'s a wonderer (Hzugman) What an interesting description tied together with rhyme. Short but sweet.
  March 3rd, 2025 11:20
• 19 years (Pineapple_pizza018) Such timing and counting is almost obsessive. Obsessions and compulsions...
  March 3rd, 2025 11:19
• the moth I\'ll never become (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) We all are who we are some metamorphosize into one type of butterfly and...
  March 3rd, 2025 11:14