Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• 16 mirrors (Krissy.V) This poem is most intriguing and I take it symbolic. I too each mirror as...
  July 30th, 2025 03:47
• Two Old Fogies Won. (Goldfinch60) Congratulations for the win and the poem that carried the reader through...
  July 30th, 2025 03:41
• epilogue: the seed beyond memory (Arqios) Hope in rebirth whether seed or mankind matters not. A lovely work I love...
  July 30th, 2025 03:39
• Marriage Lines (Kevin Hulme) Humor is best when it close to the truth. A fun read
  July 29th, 2025 18:39
• Wake Up (Shadowbones) A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this...
  July 29th, 2025 17:44
• A Bridge of Quiet Strength (John mckay) Loss of a cherished companion is a difficult thing and the poem conveys...
  July 29th, 2025 16:06
• break my heart (Tika Skindzier) When the first relationship is good it makes it very difficult to find...
  July 29th, 2025 16:03
• I Lied! (Across_world_with_u) A poem of recognition of a past that one thought was over. Very nicely...
  July 29th, 2025 15:58
• Where I wanna stay (Sree) A beautiful set of images that combine to set a mood. Nicely done
  July 29th, 2025 13:54
• A Message in a Bottle (SureshG) Nicely worded, God is in us and is us. We are our god and whether we wish...
  July 29th, 2025 13:51
• Well Inclined (Neville) Neville this poem is beautiful. It well can be an allegory for the world...
  July 29th, 2025 13:46
• art (Markashley1961) The thought gets the fave in this well written poem of art and its...
  July 29th, 2025 13:43
• Love is Madness (Xander_Kaine) A love poem and offering nicely worded and well done.
  July 29th, 2025 12:16
• Cognitive Orphans (Kurt Philip Behm) A saying so true words unsaid are words dead. Very nice Kurt
  July 29th, 2025 12:15
• Nocturne, a Lullaby (Muse of Calliope) This seems like a beautiful song. Nicely worded and metered. Well done
  July 29th, 2025 12:12
• Another thing I can\'t find! (Orchidee) Bly me, jolly good old man. Always loved those British sayings. Good write...
  July 29th, 2025 12:10
• Sylvia (Ellen Marsell) A calming read of reassurance and sense of support. Nicely written
  July 29th, 2025 12:07
• Don\'t get me started on termites. (Simple Tendencies) A fun metaphor and a fun read well laced with a bit of humor. Nice
  July 29th, 2025 12:06
• Legendary Love.. (David Prestigiacomo) Loneliness sparked by passion can build quite a fire. Good write
  July 29th, 2025 12:04
• Past My Last Dying Breath (ForeverJesus7) Resolution to do what one believes to be right is a peace of mind. Nicely...
  July 29th, 2025 12:03
• Time (Keeter C) Time they say is relative and depends upon gravity as well as speed. A...
  July 29th, 2025 12:01
• Hobson\'s choice (Lorenz) Flying by instruments can be a test of faith and only works as long as the...
  July 29th, 2025 11:59
• Nothing Cuter (Cheeky Missy) As I said in yesterday\'s poem I have had cats but I have never seen one...
  July 29th, 2025 10:56
• Balance (Damaso) Three a magical number a number of stability, the trinity in christianity,...
  July 29th, 2025 10:54
• Hey Brother Can You Spare a Dime (Tony Grannell) Hard times, broken, used and thrown away, that\'s the way it works now...
  July 29th, 2025 10:51
• I found it anyway. (Wildecho14) A heart warming write of a search that found what it was looking for and...
  July 29th, 2025 08:22
• Weather Report (Jerry Reynolds) This one gives the picture clear and the sound is in the ear. So well...
  July 29th, 2025 08:19
• Invisible Woe-Man (Tristan Robert Lange) Creative and most enlightening to the mind of one that wishes to see....
  July 29th, 2025 08:17
• Rise up (Tony36) Motivational and inspiring this poem cries out for people to act and not...
  July 29th, 2025 07:02
• feelings (Jim56)
  July 29th, 2025 06:58
• feelings (Jim56) A wonderful write Jim simple yet so true. Feelings are powerful but...
  July 29th, 2025 06:58
• The Illusion Of Cool (Cassiopeiaxneptune) A vision of hypocrisy that hides behind a professed belief but cowers to...
  July 29th, 2025 06:56
• Love and Pain (RSM0812) The first two lines, to me reflect aging and the passage of time. So well...
  July 29th, 2025 06:51
• Where But in a Garden (Lorna) And so the metaphor of the original garden of Eden and its trees of life...
  July 29th, 2025 06:41
• I watched (Maplespal) A sad poem of loss and regret. Well done
  July 29th, 2025 05:31
• “The Curve of a Question” (Samuel) The need to feel desired runs through this poem being well expressed in...
  July 29th, 2025 04:54
• Pretty Please (Anthony Hanible) A poem that on the surface sounds masochistic but one must ask is that the...
  July 29th, 2025 04:51
• So Naked Gun Is The Only Hope For Comedy? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This echoes my sentiments where comidy can no longer exist because no one...
  July 29th, 2025 04:49
• The Silence in the Nothing (Malcolm Gladwin) Here reflected in poetic form are the thoughts that all have, and if they...
  July 29th, 2025 04:45
• Lauds (Spencer Wilhelm) I love the way the repetition at the end of each line reinforces the...
  July 29th, 2025 04:40
• GODS ONCE WALKED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A rocking rhythm flows through this poem with a flow felt as it is read....
  July 29th, 2025 04:38
• Cry (Krissy.V) The feel of sexual focus is highlighted here and runs through this poem....
  July 29th, 2025 04:32
• Malevolent Forms Of Warning (ElizabethMoroz) Many symbols in this poem each of which could well be expanded upon. I...
  July 29th, 2025 04:30
• Little Man in the City (Dasim) This poem hauntingly casts its spell of setting a mood and telling a story...
  July 29th, 2025 04:25
• small acts (Luke Bensing) Wisdom in a poem, short and to the point is speaks for itself. Nicely done
  July 29th, 2025 04:20
• Muted (Vanna) Well imaged and good allegory employed to set the rather melancholic mood...
  July 29th, 2025 04:19
• right here, right now (Arqios) This is one of those rare poems that can be read in any order or its lines...
  July 29th, 2025 04:11
• The Sixties, Was I There. (Goldfinch60) Being about the same age this is very identifiable and I was there too....
  July 29th, 2025 04:06
• like a breath of fresh air... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Humor in life. Good write
  July 28th, 2025 20:24
• The Hardness Of Life (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla)
  July 28th, 2025 19:02
• The Hardness Of Life (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) Contrast is necessary to appreciate either one or the other. A person that...
  July 28th, 2025 19:02
• If I were a Man (Ladywithaquill) Everything has its advantages and disadvantages. Here the poet points out...
  July 28th, 2025 18:58
• You Can’t Metamorphose a Narcissist (Pete the poet) Narcissism a sad disorder. We all have some but those that have a...
  July 28th, 2025 16:50
• Rumination (Fränz Müller) Insomnia in its helplessness leaves the victim distraught and depressed. A...
  July 28th, 2025 16:45
• Signs (Keeter C) Morals and values are taught not inherited. A sad commentary on present...
  July 28th, 2025 16:43
• Love Or Life.. (David Prestigiacomo) A poem that identifies a loved as fantasy like and transported to...
  July 28th, 2025 16:40
• To pen the silence (Amethyste) Well written what is not written is lost and even that that is written is...
  July 28th, 2025 16:37
• Living By Pocket Change (Kenny O\'Donnell) Suffering the key to good poetry. A poem that senses this and speaks to...
  July 28th, 2025 16:36
• A Welcoming Stillness (Kurt Philip Behm) Lovely. A write of death itself and its peace in stillness. Very nice Kurt
  July 28th, 2025 16:34
• The Small Window (Shahla Latifi) This poem speaks dream like where a mother\'s voice is heard. Advice given...
  July 28th, 2025 16:33
• In A Box (Anthony Hanible) Well set this poem with metaphor tells of being imprisoned waiting for...
  July 28th, 2025 16:22
• Whispering Storm (Violet_Writes) With good rhyme and most careful wording this poem carries the reader...
  July 28th, 2025 16:20
• Patchwork People (Molly Delaney) A most interesting way of seeing who we become. Pieces we keep and patch...
  July 28th, 2025 16:17
• The Weepin\' Willers (Tony Grannell) Maybe it\'s the Irish in my ancestry but this one seemed a bit close to...
  July 28th, 2025 15:39
• Benidorm (Satire) (Teddy.15) Now that one hit hard both with laughter and after on second thought under...
  July 28th, 2025 15:32
• hope is the thing (Gray0328) Hope the last thing to die. A lovely poem so nicely worded it cries out to...
  July 28th, 2025 15:29
• Of Looking Innocent Versus Death Warmed Over (Cheeky Missy) Why do people try to look innocent? Either you are or you are not. We all...
  July 28th, 2025 15:27
• At the Very End of It All (Neville) I have long thought that death is not something to be feared but rather...
  July 28th, 2025 15:23
• Imago Dei (Tristan Robert Lange) Again Tristan I am intrigued with the word shape in your poem. It seems a...
  July 28th, 2025 15:16
• He (Tony36) Sad and tragic this poem speaks for the many homeless, the discarded, the...
  July 28th, 2025 15:13
• Jump into the afterdeath (Lorenz) Dark and noir it plays like a black and white movie. A death ritual maybe....
  July 28th, 2025 15:10
• Empty Words (RSM0812) Listening for a loved ones words sets the tone in this poem and the...
  July 28th, 2025 15:07
• Mosquitoes! (Friendship) The heat can be draining and the imprisonment in one\'s own house a...
  July 28th, 2025 15:04
• The Lake (Jerry Reynolds) The picture is as clear as the water. If there is a metaphor here my mind...
  July 28th, 2025 14:23
• doggie friend (Jim56) Another great poem of canine devotion. Nicely said Jim
  July 28th, 2025 05:42
• Irony (Lorna) Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of relativity in regard to knowledge...
  July 28th, 2025 05:41
• Not everyone (Maplespal) A poem of parting and it leaves a general feel of sadness some of which...
  July 28th, 2025 05:10
• First Rays of Dawn (Parsa) Beautiful imagery fill this love poem. Very nicely written
  July 28th, 2025 05:03
• A Head Full Of Dreams (Cassiopeiaxneptune) The line between dreams and reality and how to transform one into the...
  July 28th, 2025 05:01
• Chakam! (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A most interesting read. Memories frozen in time. Nicely done
  July 28th, 2025 05:00
• Level 115 (Samuel) A curious, interesting and surreal dream that leaves one asking does it...
  July 28th, 2025 04:59
• AS DAYLIGHT FADES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final...
  July 28th, 2025 04:51
• AS DAYLIGHT FADES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem speaks of remorse at the end of one\'s days and the coming final...
  July 28th, 2025 04:51
• Endure (Xander_Kaine) A short but wise statement nicely said
  July 28th, 2025 04:49
• Flatline (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This poem has a sense of finality about it and it feels a bit satirical in...
  July 28th, 2025 04:49
• Smile (Boot) A fun read by itself and although it may not be intended it can be a...
  July 28th, 2025 04:47
• The Sacred Now (DesertWords) This poem takes a most interesting shape and speaks of the present. Nicely...
  July 28th, 2025 04:45
• The old tree speaks (Malcolm Gladwin) Nature, man, philosophy all packed into the symbol of a tree. Well done
  July 28th, 2025 04:42
• Understanding and Compassion (Evelynn) A poem of faith and recognition of a higher power. Nicely written
  July 28th, 2025 04:37
• Coupled (Spencer Wilhelm) This poem carries an intriguing short and regular meter on alternating...
  July 28th, 2025 04:36
• My name by NEPIEGE (NEPIEGE) A love pledge of wish comes through in this poem. Nicely written
  July 28th, 2025 04:30
• if (Jon Nakapalau) This is a gem! A fave
  July 28th, 2025 04:28
• 6 Fir\'s Last Watch (Arqios) This poem has a very haunting quality to it. It has a sense of finality as...
  July 28th, 2025 04:20
• Old Fashioned Respect. (Goldfinch60) Much lacking not just for funerals but in life in general but as they say,...
  July 28th, 2025 04:15
• Stage (Weep little lion girl) This one gave me pause and led to a great deal of thought. That is a good...
  July 28th, 2025 04:11
• Misanthropic Melodies (ElizabethMoroz) This poem appears as a collage of societal, intelectual, emotional snap...
  July 28th, 2025 04:05
• The Bottom Of A Bottle (Anthony Hanible) A poem of drinking to the end of the bottle A most interesting read.
  July 27th, 2025 19:57
• See In Me What I Can’t (Emery Walker) A poem of self condemnation and critique. It is hard on the person\'s...
  July 27th, 2025 19:51
• Juliettau and Romeu by Margarita Aliger (Ksey_Gan) A most interesting poem nicely done
  July 27th, 2025 19:48
• Our Infinite Between (Gaias Soothing Haven) Sensual, errotic, sexual as is nature itself. Nicely done
  July 27th, 2025 18:39