Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• \'tude (Hzugman) Good advice in a fun rhyme. I am grateful for my cynicism and cynical...
  February 13th, 2025 04:35
• alluring and abiding (Oh kay) Appreciate the author\'s note to clarify but without the clarification it...
  February 13th, 2025 04:31
• Live All The Way Until You Die (MDStone) A lovely message sent in this poem. Carpe diem there is nothing to loose....
  February 13th, 2025 04:28
• Zero Sum (Tommytoons) A poem about what we are and leave behind. In the end as time passes we...
  February 13th, 2025 04:26
• goodbye. (Lunarchloedip) A most sorrowful poem but the sorrow of growing up and the loss of...
  February 13th, 2025 04:22
• My Babygirl (Deejax757) Cute and light hearted it lifts the soul and dances. A poem most bright...
  February 13th, 2025 04:17
• Blue grass is here to stay (Poetaldo) Blue grass is authentic and hard for industry to fake. Loved the topic and...
  February 13th, 2025 04:15
• A Likely Story (Kevin Hulme) Great advise it has been said that if your want to be a happy man marry an...
  February 13th, 2025 04:13
• The Noble Souls Are Those (Mohammad younus koul) Such a beautiful message you send. It is for this message that this poem...
  February 13th, 2025 04:04
• Gaza Will Be Mother Of Wars (Mohammad younus koul) Wisdom in words a warning in poetry most lovely
  February 13th, 2025 04:01
• Endless Nights (Aurora1) Lonliness of separation such a great muse for a lovely poem. Very nicely...
  February 13th, 2025 03:59
• Zeal For Zion (Orchidee) I can almost hear this hymn being sung it is so clear. Nicely done Orchi
  February 13th, 2025 03:57
• HUMBLE (Nephilim56) Beautifully written this poem flowes off the tongue easily. Very nice
  February 13th, 2025 03:54
• Four Thousandth Poem Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Quite an accomplishment that few can ever come close too. Congratulations...
  February 13th, 2025 03:52
• all thinkers great and small (Arqios) Cryptic I have to say you have written a few really wonderful poems but...
  February 13th, 2025 03:42
• Confused, but scared. (Hey!) Such beautiful words reflecting so much thought and emotion. Highly...
  February 12th, 2025 20:01
• Verne Burps (Mutley Ravishes) A twist of humor always makes the day better. Fun read
  February 12th, 2025 19:36
• Seasonings (Thoughtless) memories of the past are seasoning to life a great metaphor. Very nice...
  February 12th, 2025 17:50
• *Sigh* I\'m Either Impossibly Stubborn, Or....? (Cheeky Missy) Spring always unpredictable.A timely write of the seasons and the wish for...
  February 12th, 2025 16:36
• Sometimes (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Company and companionship in difficult situations makes all the...
  February 12th, 2025 14:03
• connected (Gray0328) A sense of anomie and seperation in this poem haunting! Too real
  February 12th, 2025 12:24
• Some Jarring Desires (Arshia) The incorporation of opposits to communicate a image is well used. Lovely
  February 12th, 2025 11:56
• Internet Capes (Demar Desu) I wish it were so. Very nice and hopeful
  February 12th, 2025 11:54
• Celebration Day (ADarkerMind) I get a dark feel with a sense of pushing the limits and focus on the...
  February 12th, 2025 11:53
• Angst (Melancholic~Onion) A most interesting poem and words withing a poem where the hightlighted...
  February 12th, 2025 11:01
• Yes I\'m So Depressed Chapter 2 I\'m Done (Anthony Hanible) Sometimes things don\'t go as planned and one has to face the music. A...
  February 12th, 2025 10:01
• The moth prince, a poetic epica(unfinished) (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) An epic poem that tells its story in verse. It seems that it is not...
  February 12th, 2025 10:00
• Love\'s Iliad (H.J. Rivers) Greek myths like Melvil\'s Moby Dick are metaphors that reach the...
  February 12th, 2025 09:48
• The Window Between (Tristan Robert Lange) Exclusion like banishment more sever than a death sentece has been used...
  February 12th, 2025 09:42
• She did not break she bloomed (Kutlo Moletsane) A sad read that is powerful and screams out to be heard. It is not just...
  February 12th, 2025 09:39
• Kashmir’s Cry (Sehrab Sathoo) Beautiful, haunting, sad, tragic but with a sense of hope that takes one...
  February 12th, 2025 09:36
• Ode To Bobby D\' (Kurt Philip Behm) A beautiful ode to a wonderful man and I will miss him.
  February 12th, 2025 09:33
• thought (Newt) A present day fear due to the political climate. Well written
  February 12th, 2025 09:31
• Once again, yours truly takes poetic license. (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Ah for the good old days. A fun and informative write. Very nicely done...
  February 12th, 2025 09:27
• The Great Cafeteria Clash (Matthew R. Callies) Ah this was such a fun read. It was not just the theme but the verse was a...
  February 12th, 2025 09:22
• Any Man (RSM0812) A sense of anomie and isolation pervade this poem. It carries the reader...
  February 12th, 2025 09:13
• The Parade (Tony36) A most lovley description of the day of a parade and all the things that...
  February 12th, 2025 09:07
• Blind (Dyslexic.gun) A haunting but very different take on obcessive passion and its effects....
  February 12th, 2025 07:43
• Yes I\'m So Depressed (Anthony Hanible) A poem of isolation whether self imposed or by rejection there is a...
  February 12th, 2025 07:40
• A reflection from behind (EvenwheniLie) This poem\'s cadence struck me as a rap and rap it did. Very nicely
  February 12th, 2025 07:38
• Caressing Roses (Reynaldo Casison) Soft and smooth like silk it flows from the tongue leaving a sweet taste...
  February 12th, 2025 07:32
• Just Shit (Teardrop) Good advice to the writter and well spoken in flowing poetic words. Nicely...
  February 12th, 2025 07:29
• Search For The Truth (Poetic Licence) Strong words and a powerful message sent to those with an inflexible view...
  February 12th, 2025 07:24
• The Living Quran (Mohammad younus koul) From a nonbeliever I see the beauty and the wisdom in these verses. One...
  February 12th, 2025 07:16
• Echoes Of The Ashes (Mohammad younus koul) Another wonderfully crafted poem with deep meaning that goes beyond...
  February 12th, 2025 07:13
• The Garden Of Different Suns (Mohammad younus koul) Masterful!! I simply love your poems. Not religious they almost make me...
  February 12th, 2025 07:09
• Gone (Paul Gerard Reed) A most lovely poem of the passing of time and its cycle. Great metaphor...
  February 12th, 2025 07:03
• Watching the drops (Maplespal) A beautiful natural picture painted in this poem but deeper lies a...
  February 12th, 2025 07:02
• Let’s Trade Passports For Memories (Bella Joy) Moved to Florida from Montana years ago and never looked back. A beautiful...
  February 12th, 2025 06:59
• lifes jigsaw (Jim56) Gratifying in many ways to assemble the pieces and see the picture grow....
  February 12th, 2025 06:57
• As Famous As Can Be (Teddy.15)
  February 12th, 2025 06:48
• As Famous As Can Be (Teddy.15) Nor would you want to be dead, briliance bled, unwritten poems that would...
  February 12th, 2025 06:48
• Random Ramblings (Orchidee) I think that this could be an alternative hymn to be sung on special...
  February 12th, 2025 04:44
• forever we shall be (Arqios) A poem of the unity of nature and ourselves. What could be more true in...
  February 12th, 2025 04:40
• SNIPPET (Nephilim56) Such a great metaphor the paper with the notice used to wrap up a meal...
  February 12th, 2025 04:37
• Another Good Day. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold that one day runs into the next in a never ending cycle until...
  February 12th, 2025 04:33
• Precipice (John Prophet) Flashes of words tell the story. The whole process is speeded up. Very
  February 12th, 2025 04:25
• I got (Poetaldo) We all have needs and in this poem I hear a lot of them. Nicely done
  February 12th, 2025 04:23
• The Lion Of Babylon (Kurt Philip Behm) There is enough truth in it tomake it plausable enough cynacism to make it...
  February 12th, 2025 04:21
• Hurt the ones I love (Hey!) A great thought that should be explored with the one you love. Very well...
  February 11th, 2025 19:23
• When Words Mean Nothing (Cassie58) Words fail us all when the emotion is strong enough. So well said Cassie a...
  February 11th, 2025 17:38
• Doesn\'t Really Matter, Does It? (Cheeky Missy) Yes I do love mushrooms, especially sauted in butter. A fun read Chic
  February 11th, 2025 17:34
• young lives (Newt) We are creatures easily molded by those we live with. Like sheep we follow...
  February 11th, 2025 09:37
• The Ghost of Valarie Karen (Whats write for me) Masterfully written with verse and great meter it is haunting and sad and...
  February 11th, 2025 09:35
• Turbulence (Tristan Robert Lange) What a great metaphor. Our mind flies from place to place often through...
  February 11th, 2025 09:33
• What is love? (CuriousWanderer) So true love is not a possession numbers change in each equasion when...
  February 11th, 2025 08:53
• NECESSARY FOR ECONOMIC GROWTH (Nephilim56) Tis true that eliminating the weak, old and disabled is a cost savings but...
  February 11th, 2025 08:49
• The Distance Duel (Matthew R. Callies) And so are many challenges in this life. A great metaphor well written...
  February 11th, 2025 08:47
• The Hand of Evil (We Have All Week) (Poetic Licence) Terrifying! There is no fear worse than impending certainty and time is...
  February 11th, 2025 08:45
• Before the cry (Maplespal) Sadness and lonliness pervade this poem. Well written
  February 11th, 2025 08:40
• FIRST LOVE POEM AND LAST ONES. (Swarovski20) There is a sense of isolation and lonliness in this poem that mingles with...
  February 11th, 2025 08:38
• NOT YET READY (@merci) The coldness of lonliness is emphasized in feel that there should be more...
  February 11th, 2025 08:26
• We Talked Sweetly In The Slumber Of September (Bella Joy) I love the use of seasons as the markers of time and development of a...
  February 11th, 2025 08:23
• All Ends Well (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) And why not? This story seems to have ended or rather continued happily....
  February 11th, 2025 08:19
• Little by little (Tony36) Tony you and I are on the same page today a wonderful thought and well
  February 11th, 2025 08:17
• Dead Kings (RSM0812) A message here for people of today. Kings or presidents all one and the...
  February 11th, 2025 08:14
• hedgehog verse (Jim56) Have to say I\'m not sure I have ever seen one. A fun poem of nature
  February 11th, 2025 08:12
• Join In Joyfulness (Orchidee) Fair play is all we can ask of any god or person. A great hymn about fair...
  February 11th, 2025 04:47
• companionable travelling (Arqios) This one is a journey in and of itself from beginning to end it carries me...
  February 11th, 2025 04:44
• In the Desert 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Indeed if it is all part of a divine plan then Judas was either...
  February 11th, 2025 04:34
• In the Desert (Mutley Ravishes) I love poems that are filled with double entendre\'s and this one is full...
  February 11th, 2025 04:30
• The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case) So tempting to interpret in metaphor but best left open. The poem like a...
  February 11th, 2025 04:27
• A Very Special Hummingbird (Teddy.15) A wonderful tribute to another poet so well worded made me wonder her...
  February 11th, 2025 04:23
• Night Time Worries. (Goldfinch60) Worry is the weight on the other side of the ballance that gives meaning...
  February 11th, 2025 04:12
• Ticking time bomb (Jennybee89) Sounds like revenge. Although it may be a dish best served cold it is also...
  February 11th, 2025 04:07
• Managing stress (Jennybee89) Communication as an aid to stress is good advice. A nice plan.
  February 11th, 2025 04:05
• Beach time. (Ginny jayne) Very nice with rhyme and an ending metaphor
  February 10th, 2025 17:29
• Naive, A Sijo (Pacifique Niyitanga) There are poems that every once in a while jump out and grab you this is...
  February 10th, 2025 17:28
• State of mind (Newt) There is depth in this poem. Depth in the search for empathy and...
  February 10th, 2025 17:23
• Poverty is expensive (Amy Michelle Mosier) A great message and well said
  February 10th, 2025 17:21
• surrender (NinjaGirl) This was a realy good write. There are great lines but the best part is...
  February 10th, 2025 17:20
• To our Love (Shetonya Latryce) A memory that is also a living pledge. Short and to the point it is nicely...
  February 10th, 2025 17:16
• Double Checking Our Favourite Positions (Neville) I think we have totally missed the point here. If we have gone through the...
  February 10th, 2025 15:28
• I Know, I Know, Just Don\'t Tell Me (Cheeky Missy) Now you have gone and made me hungery. Nicely done Chic
  February 10th, 2025 15:23
• For I am loyal (Hey!) Time is a heavy opponent. I can hear the pain of loss in this poem a sense...
  February 10th, 2025 15:18
• Talkin\' \'bout my girl (Hzugman) Humor in poetry is like finding a hundred dollar bill in the street, too...
  February 10th, 2025 11:50
• The Train to North Durham (RSM0812) There are certain faces, bodies, people that strike us with bolt of...
  February 10th, 2025 11:46
• Chair Repair (Doggerel Dave) A most interesting experiment gives a certain appeal to the appearance of...
  February 10th, 2025 07:35
• Tuned time (Maplespal) Indeed music is closely tied to the emotions and soul. A most melodic
  February 10th, 2025 06:18
• A (starry eyed) burst of creativity... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Idiomatic expressions, mixed with cultural references, pop culture,...
  February 10th, 2025 06:16