Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Life & Death (Saleh Ben Saleh) A careful construction and organization of rhyme in this beautiful piece....
  August 30th, 2024 08:20
• What\'s In A Name (Tom Dylan) A play on names loved it. In one form or another we have done something...
  August 30th, 2024 06:46
• Leading Light (Orchidee) Another wonderful hymn my friend
  August 30th, 2024 06:43
• When The Shadows Come Calling (Teddy.15) I see them as nothing more than two sides to the same coin, Life and...
  August 30th, 2024 06:41
• Sonnet For Autumn. (Goldfinch60) I could hear this one sing Andy. Nicely done my friend
  August 30th, 2024 05:02
• The Former U.S.A. (Dan Williams) Political discontent has grown so high that I have not even written about...
  August 30th, 2024 04:59
• What If ... (Kurt Philip Behm) A very good question that follows the if there was no one to hear would...
  August 29th, 2024 13:18
• The sniffer (Sami mulaj) A fun read. I can always use a smile
  August 29th, 2024 11:09
• The Pedagogues of Iron Will (Gray0328) A noble job that is not recognized as much as it should be.
  August 29th, 2024 11:02
• So blue (Maplespal) Sad and melancholy this write.
  August 29th, 2024 10:57
• Alone (Tony36) Hope not. Sounds bad. A dark write.
  August 29th, 2024 10:55
• Little 🐜 ants (Lakshya) Good motivational write
  August 29th, 2024 10:54
• `~> Cheech AND Chong [ Limericks] (Thad Wilk) Used to watch their movies and got a lot of laughs. Fun write
  August 29th, 2024 10:53
• dogs are amazing (Jim56) Dogs are incredibly loyal and truly man\'s best friend
  August 29th, 2024 10:51
• Queen of the Night (CarnationsCaretaker) Fanciful, short and nicely done
  August 29th, 2024 05:52
• Brick By Brick (Cocamedo) Gentle and slow nicely done
  August 29th, 2024 05:51
• Home (ThoughtsFromB4) True it is and well penned. Hope we all find it.
  August 29th, 2024 05:46
• Sandbags (Chris Duffy) Very nicely penned with a powerful message. Most lovely
  August 29th, 2024 05:43
• SOULFUL LONGING (Amogelang Mooketsi) A beautiful poem of idyllic love. When a person loves themselves in the...
  August 29th, 2024 05:40
• How will we sleep tonight?! (Sami mulaj) A joke that is no joke too close to reality. Made me smile.
  August 29th, 2024 05:38
• Like you used to (Vishakha) Nostalgic and filled with lingering yearnings. Lovely
  August 29th, 2024 05:34
• Two Now... (Orchidee) Best wishes Orchi. hope all turns out all right. Thanks for sharing.
  August 29th, 2024 05:31
• When Motown Meets The Blues (Teddy.15) Loved this one Teddy and the last line is what pulled it all together....
  August 29th, 2024 05:27
• All Was Well Forever. (Goldfinch60) Love the blues and it takes me too. Very nice Andy hope the music of your...
  August 29th, 2024 05:23
• Aging Captain\'s Lament (Dan Williams) The metaphor is a good one and the details fill in. Beautiful images and...
  August 29th, 2024 05:17
• I am in Love (Rrodriguez) I see you love blue and so do I. Since you were playing with colors humor...
  August 29th, 2024 05:12
• Co-dependency (Thoughtless) Beautiful images painted on this canvas and like a flash from a film...
  August 29th, 2024 05:06
• \'Made In Heaven\' (Kurt Philip Behm) A true story well put in such delightful poetic words
  August 28th, 2024 16:49
• ~> Chick Norris! [ Limericks ] (Thad Wilk) Sounds like a threat. Nicely said
  August 28th, 2024 16:48
• Lonely Like the Leaves (Thomas W Case) Beautiful images Thomas
  August 28th, 2024 16:45
• Changing (2781) A most interesting view and with mass support. Nice
  August 28th, 2024 16:42
• Route 66 (Tony36) That is the slow way but very interesting with a sense of nostalgia...
  August 28th, 2024 06:59
• Dee Bestie (Angela) The value of a good friend is hard to estimate but you put it well in
  August 28th, 2024 06:58
• TEARS AT NIGHT (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Life can be a heavy burden but it goes on
  August 28th, 2024 06:57
• Giggling (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Giggling is good. Nice
  August 28th, 2024 06:55
• its never easy (Jim56) Good advice to those who have lost. Nicely versed
  August 28th, 2024 06:55
• Austria Social Media Freedom (Amogelang Marope) Any and all means are on the table. Nicely written
  August 28th, 2024 06:53
• Empty Skies (CarnationsCaretaker) Images pregnant with meaning that bleeds through walls of words
  August 28th, 2024 06:52
• Just one more (Maplespal) One is never enough. Always the need for one more
  August 28th, 2024 06:51
• The Dropped Smartwatch (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Been there done that so it has a familiar feel to it as well as a fun
  August 28th, 2024 06:46
• Jack in a box (EvenwheniLie) I could hear the rap in this one that had some bars. Very nice
  August 28th, 2024 06:44
• OOPS (Michael Edwards) Short but cautionary and fun to read.
  August 28th, 2024 06:43
• Meanwhile, In the Third Age.... (Mutley Ravishes) A metaphor within a fiction becomes well encased and gives one pause in...
  August 28th, 2024 06:41
• A Promise Is A Promise (Cocamedo) A statement of the other\'s value in rhyme. The value of another can not...
  August 28th, 2024 06:40
• The Abyss of Nothingness (Dev Parth) It is from pain that joy springs in the appreciation of experience and...
  August 28th, 2024 06:38
• Now I Disappear (Hanible) Sad, disturbing and provokes thoughts of all the lost children
  August 28th, 2024 06:35
• Humanity’s Gods (John Prophet) What did man do before the gods were created would be Nietzsche\'s answer...
  August 28th, 2024 06:34
• Where does one end and another begin? (Sorenbarrett) Thank you Teddy for the read and interpretation. This one is a floor...
  August 28th, 2024 06:28
• I Don\'t Know Why (Sunshine777) Good wishes and prayers nicely stated.
  August 28th, 2024 06:26
• Water of Life (Orchidee) A great metaphor this is and you handled is so well with your wording...
  August 28th, 2024 05:47
• Swans Of Peace. (Goldfinch60) Peace is inside us Gold it is the point of our focus it is the swans....
  August 28th, 2024 05:45
• All About Hats (Teddy.15) I too have several hats on the wall from fedora to Stetsons of a cowboy...
  August 28th, 2024 05:42
• Uncertainty (Dan Williams) Sounds like some of the poems I have written and read. An apt description...
  August 28th, 2024 05:38
• Us minus Life (Goli.Standbypoet) Philosophical and worth pondering the issue of free will vs determinism
  August 27th, 2024 13:20
• D.E.S.C.E.N.T. (Mistress:Descent) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) The word entropy is the trigger in this write
  August 27th, 2024 13:18
• [THIS MESSAGE WILL SELF DESTRUCT IN 5 SECONDS] (DeadRose) Makes me think of the secret life of Walter Mitty
  August 27th, 2024 13:17
• Creation 2 (Carter M. Flynn) Murder always makes me cringe and leaves a dark feeling. A feeling of...
  August 27th, 2024 13:16
• Event Horizon (Gray0328) A beautiful view of time and space and love as well.
  August 27th, 2024 12:56
• Happiness (JefferyO) A great Haiku well written
  August 27th, 2024 12:55
• Raw Emotion (Garth Rakumakoe) Indeed it is all these things and much more. Lovely
  August 27th, 2024 12:54
• Perfectly white (Anabasova) Associations form strong bonds. Lovely
  August 27th, 2024 12:53
• PINK (Qurrathul Ain) Love of a color or person becomes associated with the feeling and is a...
  August 27th, 2024 12:52
• Give me a pencil (Sami mulaj) And indeed it will. Nicely set this poem of nature\'s beauty and its laws...
  August 27th, 2024 12:50
• in places of darkness the fern is quiet like an old man in places of darkness... (Sviatoslav Zhabotynskyi) A metaphor indeed. From birth to death we need to listen. Nicely done
  August 27th, 2024 12:48
• well? (NinjaGirl) Anger pervades this poem and so it should with so many complaining of what...
  August 27th, 2024 12:46
• A Mystery? (Thoughtless) A very nice write. Poetic and as all great stories based in truth
  August 27th, 2024 12:44
• Whispering Winds (Kurt Philip Behm) Very nicely said it rings true
  August 27th, 2024 12:42
• ~> Jake And Lill, The Hanging Tree (Thad Wilk) A great ballad poem loved it
  August 27th, 2024 12:41
• World without war (Lakshya) War a human thing from beginning to end unfortunately
  August 27th, 2024 12:40
• ONWU ELEBE IKE GI DI (DEATH WHERE IS THY STRENGTH) (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Nicely said
  August 27th, 2024 12:38
• Ten Very Small Poems (MendedFences27) Great sayings my friend enjoyed them all.
  August 27th, 2024 12:36
• Heart x Head (Miranda) Beautifully stated and could be between the compassionate and the...
  August 27th, 2024 08:35
• Grief (The Indignant Poetess) Beautiful and sad at the same time well stated leaving feelings of sorrow
  August 27th, 2024 08:31
• Who am i to ask for more? (Mya) So beautifully said in such gentle words. Poetic is all I can say
  August 27th, 2024 08:29
• War (Rrodriguez) Cataclysmic and with no one really noticing how there needs to be no...
  August 27th, 2024 08:27
• Society (Tony36) How true Tony a good write and one that goes ignored too often
  August 27th, 2024 08:22
• Definitely, maybe not (Tom Dylan) The bands I have seen are best in their prime with few exceptions that...
  August 27th, 2024 08:21
• passing time (Jim56) It is a way to kill time but also to work through emotions and to...
  August 27th, 2024 06:38
• quiet company (NinjaGirl) Sometimes just company is enough and anything more is upsetting. Well...
  August 27th, 2024 05:50
• Bello Casentino (Teddy.15) What an image you paint in poetic ink. It is not just black and white but...
  August 27th, 2024 05:48
• Proverb Pieces 7 (Orchidee) Good advice given here although old language and just plain cryptic verse...
  August 27th, 2024 05:44
• Ends of My Arms (Dan Williams) A most interesting rhyme scheme Dan that pulls this poem along on waves....
  August 27th, 2024 05:42
• I want one (Maplespal) Ah a last dance that is what life is about singing and dancing and a last...
  August 27th, 2024 05:38
• Holes in the ground (Sorenbarrett) Thanks so much for the read and the comment. The tears dry and the ink and...
  August 27th, 2024 05:36
• The Ferris Wheel. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful and so descriptive bringing back memories of going to the fair...
  August 27th, 2024 05:32
• The Picture (Thomas W Case) A tender write that fills in the surprise that it was done after her death...
  August 27th, 2024 05:27
• SET IT FREE (Mompu) A true statement. Set it free and if it returns then it is meant to be....
  August 26th, 2024 17:49
• the essence of imagination (DeadRose) In that case the answer is infinite.
  August 26th, 2024 17:47
• Burning Out (Cocamedo) Nicely written and soul searching
  August 26th, 2024 16:14
• Dumb star (Miranda) Clever and a fun read
  August 26th, 2024 16:12
• No One Left (M.E.M.) Raw and well done
  August 26th, 2024 16:11
• UNAFFECTED (Nephilim56) A most interesting read
  August 26th, 2024 16:10
• up and down (Sheta) Live for the good times they do come. Nice write
  August 26th, 2024 16:08
• Friendship (Sami mulaj) A great read that has a good message. Nicely done
  August 26th, 2024 16:07
• Ed Poe in Yellowknife (Paul W Conway) I heard that you have to split their tongue first. It\'s a tongue twister...
  August 26th, 2024 16:03
• The Endless Muse (Tristan Robert Lange) Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
  August 26th, 2024 15:59
• The Ninth Chorus (Gray0328) This makes me think of when baseball started.
  August 26th, 2024 15:57
• Worst Nightmare (Akhilausman) In the past I took to pulling my own it was more under my control
  August 26th, 2024 15:55
• Letting a piece of you go (Epulafiq) Letting go is always hard. Memories linger Nicely written
  August 26th, 2024 15:53
• Hunger (Anabella151) Hunger sometimes persists beyond its time or usefulness and leads to...
  August 26th, 2024 09:42