Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Weight of Being the Son (Dhiman Shah) A brilliant poem that not only is good in rhyme and meter but tells its...
  December 18th, 2025 09:47
• I climbed (Maplespal) Definitely metaphoric this poem presents the change with age and the...
  December 18th, 2025 09:43
• Glimps (Jerry Reynolds) A wonderful image, if tipped the right way a muslim crescent strange this...
  December 18th, 2025 09:41
• Teddy (Paul Bell) Some things and some people don\'t seem to do as you please, or if they do...
  December 18th, 2025 09:39
• That One Last Cry (Anthony Hanible) A poem of finalization. Emotional and directly stated. Well done
  December 18th, 2025 08:13
• The Glow Of Angel’s Magic (Ajon4wheels)
  December 18th, 2025 08:09
• The Glow Of Angel’s Magic (Ajon4wheels) A poem of hope and faith that in this season angels will receive our...
  December 18th, 2025 08:09
• The Same Year, Again (Rawaneigh.99) There is not just sadness in this poem but deep despair at lack of comfort...
  December 18th, 2025 08:08
• 𝒟𝒾𝒹 𝒴ℴ𝓊 (Keyara S Trotman) True love as opposed to the love of only self and hypocrisy of the term...
  December 18th, 2025 08:04
• forever friend (Jim56) Another poetic tribute to man\'s best friend. Well done Jim
  December 18th, 2025 08:01
• Dawn (Katie B.) Blessed hours before the dawn, hours of peace and calm. A lovely poem
  December 18th, 2025 08:00
• Orgasm (Friendship) A universal explosion of energy unveiled and with it life and growth. Well...
  December 18th, 2025 07:46
• Never Rushes On (Gewar) Uncertainty in this poem builds through the poem. It is the angst of not...
  December 18th, 2025 06:05
• before the day stirs (Arqios) Beautiful! A peaceful feeling my friend
  December 18th, 2025 05:28
• WD-40 (Gray0328) Well Gray I have to say I have used it before many times. I wish that they...
  December 18th, 2025 04:45
• Bom dia (Poetaldo) There is a joyousness in this poem and energy to start the day. Well done
  December 18th, 2025 04:13
• GOTHIC STAINED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem...
  December 18th, 2025 04:12
• IF THE WORLD TURN US DOWN (Fikrioshin) The analogy or metaphor if you wish works well in that the loneliness can...
  December 18th, 2025 04:08
• Shepherd and Sheep - OT/NT Series 16 (Orchidee) Cleverly written this recounting of the prophesy of Christs betrayal and...
  December 18th, 2025 04:05
• A Perfect Christmas Wish (Teddy.15) A beautiful symbolic wish it is and may it return to you as well Teddy....
  December 18th, 2025 04:03
• But Is It Poetry? (Goldfinch60) Art is such an individual thing, it is a form of beauty and is in the eye...
  December 18th, 2025 04:01
• Up in Flames (NinjaGirl) I hear the theme of damaged goods in this poem. Even if sold at a...
  December 18th, 2025 03:58
• the ghost’s story (Vipassana) Daydreamed inventions reflected in a coffee cup. Well written
  December 18th, 2025 03:56
• 7777 (Andrew Deaton) This poem works of the numerological sense of special magic properties of...
  December 18th, 2025 03:54
• When the night whispers your name (Poet\'s Dream) What seems to be an obsession in the beginning of the poem may be and...
  December 18th, 2025 03:51
• my imaginary kafka quotes #28 (Jon Nakapalau) That is the foundation of capitalism and a free market society. Well...
  December 18th, 2025 03:48
• Cause (NinjaGirl) There is a thin line between self punishment and perseverance in learning...
  December 18th, 2025 03:47
• a nobody (DeadRose) Looking in a mirror inspires either vanity or disgust I hear that in this...
  December 17th, 2025 20:54
• Mama mia (Poetaldo) The repeated phrase Mama mia is both comforting and frightening and is a...
  December 17th, 2025 19:01
• After the Rain (Hacklec) Torrential rain leaves a mess and I am not sure whether the las image is a...
  December 17th, 2025 18:58
• Yearn (Amethyste) Sexual, sensual, erotic and well done
  December 17th, 2025 17:44
• We Wish You a Merry Christmas (International Version) (Cody Ellis) Christmas an international affair now days. A lovely write
  December 17th, 2025 16:28
• coming in from the cold (Jjudaharts) We all began small as a twinkle in our parents eye. A fun read
  December 17th, 2025 16:25
• Preparation H - For hair washing saga (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Naked in the shower, naked the Greek gods and goddesses this sounds very...
  December 17th, 2025 16:24
• My one moment (Sail) The feeling of being small is sad. One should feel equal a lovely poem
  December 17th, 2025 16:17
• I\'ve grown (Maplespal) We all have to grow as we live and it seems that we never stop growing....
  December 17th, 2025 14:55
• Calmness of Nature (Igor Marynowski) Very nicely stated in most poetic form. Lovely
  December 17th, 2025 14:24
• Wisdom Over Beauty (Kainat Noor) A beautiful poem that has a wonderful message as well. Nicely said
  December 17th, 2025 13:51
• The Year Santa Wore Mr. Bruno\'s Boots (Gray0328) When a child and taken to sit on Santa\'s lap at the store I would ask why...
  December 17th, 2025 12:15
• 𝒢𝒾ℊ𝒶𝓃𝓉𝒾𝒸 ℛℴ𝓂𝒶𝓃𝒸ℯ (Keyara S Trotman) There it goes as it is and it is what it is. Well said Keyara
  December 17th, 2025 12:12
• Just one look (Lorenz) This poem fits the man and the little prince would be proud. The mask of...
  December 17th, 2025 12:10
• Death of a Star 🌑 (Atlas) Beautiful in its imagery this poem shines with a glow and reaches out to...
  December 17th, 2025 11:25
• When Winter Let Us Fly (Matthew R. Callies) Tracks erased but memories remain in this poetic metaphor of life itself....
  December 17th, 2025 10:56
• Why Can’t You See (Notapoet) There is a feel of poor self regard in this poem and a feeling one seeing...
  December 17th, 2025 10:04
• ASSisted Living (Kurt Philip Behm) A sad write that bites to the bone. Very nicely done Kurt
  December 17th, 2025 10:02
• Anxiety (Cam) Here in this poem lies a secret about to be unveiled and whether it is...
  December 17th, 2025 10:01
• The Kittitas Symphony: A Master Epic of the Gale (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) This poem brought some nostalgia having lived in Ellensburg in 1978 and...
  December 17th, 2025 09:59
• All is Love (RSM0812) A very nicely worded work filled with rhyme and good flow. Nicely done
  December 17th, 2025 09:53
• MARCHING DOWN THE TOWN SQUARE (Fikrioshin) poem of doing not trying of being oneself and not afraid to do so. Well...
  December 17th, 2025 09:11
• Neon Lights (Kering.karim) Infatuated, entranced and captured this poem speaks of that sense and the...
  December 17th, 2025 08:50
• Please Don\'t (Anthony Hanible) A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see...
  December 17th, 2025 08:48
• Happy Birthday To My Big Sister (Ajon4wheels) A very nice birthday greeting and wish in poetic form
  December 17th, 2025 08:47
• friendship (Applecherry)
  December 17th, 2025 08:46
• friendship (Applecherry) The pluses and minuses of friends and of being outgoing or introverted. A...
  December 17th, 2025 08:46
• i like it in the spring (Jim56) A lovely poem of spring well before its time. Nicely done Jim is it...
  December 17th, 2025 08:41
• Way of life (Moco) There is a feeling in this poem of being carried on the currents of life...
  December 17th, 2025 08:40
• Autumns chill (William Hromada) A few lines of the season that touch the heart and warm the soul with the...
  December 17th, 2025 06:43
• call it truth (Arqios) The mark of the owner. What sets it aside from the sterile, the plastic...
  December 17th, 2025 05:48
• MOMENT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and...
  December 17th, 2025 04:02
• Temple Sounds (Mutley Ravishes) In many ways this seems true. Its vibrations can be seen in its owner\'s...
  December 17th, 2025 03:57
• December Moon (Debadrita Sarkar) Most interesting word placement of a most unexpected type is mind...
  December 17th, 2025 03:56
• My Aba (Yahweh,God) (Chanel T.) A proclamation of a religious belief a faith and gratitude and a call for...
  December 17th, 2025 03:53
• Archangels kingdom (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) A most interesting set of images in this write. Mind provoking
  December 17th, 2025 03:51
• THE MAN AT THE TRAIN STATION (Fikrioshin) It is the starkness combined with the short staccato meter that gives this...
  December 17th, 2025 03:50
• An Evergreen (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This is a most beautiful Haiku and a fave
  December 17th, 2025 03:47
• The Hearth of Darkened Thirst (Prasun Goswami) This is a very passionate poem and the metaphors are seductive and in my...
  December 17th, 2025 03:46
• Untitled {25} (Niko Papadatos) A poem that one must imagine as well as hear. It calls out for that leap....
  December 17th, 2025 03:39
• The Rubbish Heap. (Goldfinch60) Thinly vailed this poem reveals in its satire a would be monarch that...
  December 17th, 2025 03:37
• Depression is a Family Illness (Katie B.) Sad, dark, with a sense of hopelessness is the disease and so the poem as...
  December 17th, 2025 03:32
• A Life of Resilience\" (Friendship) The human will knows no limits and desire may often overcome deficits....
  December 17th, 2025 03:29
• SOCIALISM KILLS (David Welch) A very strong political point made in this poem. Quite powerful
  December 16th, 2025 19:33
• Pale Moon (Megan Blaney) We often take no response as not being heard when in fact it is a...
  December 16th, 2025 19:23
• Trying for Trust (NinjaGirl) A great metaphor in this poem and it has a double meaning as well. Loved...
  December 16th, 2025 19:21
• Witches (Amethyste) We all have rituals and love is just one. As for witches they are often...
  December 16th, 2025 19:20
• Solstices on the Meadow of Time (Jerry Reynolds) Clever Jerry I love the merging of the seasons and what a way to present...
  December 16th, 2025 19:19
• Witness of the Wind (Soheil khodaparasti) This poem has seductive wisdom that requires thought and time. Lovely
  December 16th, 2025 15:44
• As I Sat (David Eugene Stewart) A love poem with rhyme nicely done
  December 16th, 2025 15:26
• The Wall Calleth (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark) Suicide a selfish act seldom considers the other that it will affect. A...
  December 16th, 2025 14:15
• A Picture (Vanessa morrison) A sad and dark write that bleeds its message
  December 16th, 2025 14:11
• silent meditation (Jjudaharts) Well stated. Liked it
  December 16th, 2025 14:10
• Another Form of Abuse (Gray0328) Pity is a terrible monster hidden in disguise. A good write
  December 16th, 2025 12:55
• Killing Time (Notapoet) Clever and well written a fave
  December 16th, 2025 12:44
• Christmas love (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Christmas the season for family and togetherness. Well done
  December 16th, 2025 12:43
• The Purpose Of Christmas -By Isaiah Ogedegbe (Isaiah Ogedegbe) A write of faith and belief at a special time of year and a call for...
  December 16th, 2025 11:20
• They’re Here (E.J. Waling) This seems to me a poetic criticism of technology gone array. Well done in...
  December 16th, 2025 11:19
• SONNET ON ALLURING LOVE ([email protected]) This to me seems a love poem and a proposal of love. Nicely done
  December 16th, 2025 11:17
• December’s Lament (Cam) A wonderful Christmas message that needs to be heard. True in what it says...
  December 16th, 2025 11:15
• Distant Door (StarLoom) Keep believing. A poem that lays it out there raw and open. A lovely write
  December 16th, 2025 11:13
• Elegy for Rob and Michele Reiner (Matthew R. Callies) Unaware of the loss this seems a tribute to persons departed that left us...
  December 16th, 2025 11:05
• Each Time — The First Time (Kurt Philip Behm) Such nice metaphor here Kurt and cast in seasonal terms as well. The...
  December 16th, 2025 11:01
• Fresh start. (Andrew Deaton) The comparison to a game is nicely taken and the battle is on. Well worded...
  December 16th, 2025 09:19
• The First time you smiled!! (Aaron Roberson) A lovely heart warming poetic expression. Nicely worded with good rhyme...
  December 16th, 2025 09:17
• Wrath of God (RSM0812) Beautiful words of a beautiful vision. So nicely set in a poetic style.
  December 16th, 2025 09:15
• The Artist\'s Muse— (Meera Mere) Sometimes the muse leaves abruptly not saying when they will return. Well...
  December 16th, 2025 09:13
• garden beauty (Jim56) A bright and beautiful write Jim it blooms on the page
  December 16th, 2025 07:14
• 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔇𝔬𝔫\'𝔱 ℑ𝔱\'𝔰 𝔏𝔬𝔞𝔡𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) Very nice Keyara a thing to think about
  December 16th, 2025 06:20
• Russian Blues (Victor Bolshov) There is something wild and free in this poem yet it falls like the tree...
  December 16th, 2025 05:56
• The Light (Katie B.) So few words so much said, wisdom in the saying. A wonderful poem Katie a...
  December 16th, 2025 05:51
• essence in Surikov (Arqios) Interesting the choice of red ink just like blood. The use of the...
  December 16th, 2025 05:50
• Man At Peace (Paul Bell) A special time in more ways than one. A time of peace. It leaves mixed...
  December 16th, 2025 05:31