Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Between Flame And Smoke (Salvia.S)
So short and so poetic it is true that less is more
February 5th, 2025 10:26 - spring verse (Jim56)
Another beautiful pictuer painted by your words Jim
February 5th, 2025 10:26 - Behold a Rose (RSM0812)
Beautifully worded with a timeless metaphor. Your word choice made all the...
February 5th, 2025 10:24 - My true colors bleed differently than yours (Mysty Monroe)
Wow! A poem that could be a song so well written I feel each throb a...
February 5th, 2025 10:19 - point of contact (Arqios)
A beautiful this reaches deep inside both emotion and the visual image....
February 5th, 2025 10:12 - The Waterfall (MDStone)
I have stood at many and they all charm me. There is something special...
February 5th, 2025 10:05 - Voice of darkness (Poetic Licence)
This poem hit me and meets all the requirements that I hold in my mind for...
February 5th, 2025 10:01 - Marina Musings (Cassie58)
The magnificent imagery that melts into marvelous metaphor fill this...
February 5th, 2025 05:02 - Hasten to Humility (Orchidee)
I like the message in this one Orchi. A lovely hymn with a great meassage...
February 5th, 2025 04:59 - Implications of Doing Nothing (Neville)
It seems clear on the surface that documentaries do little but...
February 5th, 2025 04:57 - BEACH (Nephilim56)
And so we all drift from fantasy or dreams where we escape the reality and...
February 5th, 2025 04:48 - Peace Off (Tom Dylan)
The duality displayed in hypocracy driven by narcissism. Well written with...
February 5th, 2025 04:45 - Together In Wondrous Love. (Goldfinch60)
A proclamation of love that was ordained and predestined continues as...
February 5th, 2025 04:43 - The next day (Demar Desu)
Another filled with hidden meaning. Nicely worded.
February 5th, 2025 04:35 - On the other Foot (Thoughtless)
Here the sexual is tied to errotic fantasy that is tied to relationship...
February 5th, 2025 04:33 - Home (Teddy.15)
In the seasons of life we are all annuals. Lovely wording in this poem...
February 5th, 2025 04:28 - Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God (Simurgh)
A beautiful tribute to the source of life and energy on earth. These words...
February 5th, 2025 04:22 - Rejectshun (Mutley Ravishes)
A greatmetaphor of considerable weight itself.
February 4th, 2025 20:53 - IN THE BEGINNING GOD (Siphesihle Mavuso)
Powerfully said with conviction.
February 4th, 2025 18:41 - New Chapter. (Ginny jayne)
Very nicely said a person should live their own life and be themself.
February 4th, 2025 18:38 - It\'s okay to color outside the lines but reading between them is a mixed bag (Hzugman)
A piece of advice to the wise who know when to use it. Nicely said
February 4th, 2025 18:37 - Message 2 (Maplespal)
A most beautiful message. Very nicely said
February 4th, 2025 18:35 - Mushrooms (Thomas W Case)
A great write that acknoleges the good in all things. In its dark humor...
February 4th, 2025 14:57 - As Quiet As A Tree (ADarkerMind)
Darker I think I\'m going to dub you the Salvador dali of poets. Enjoyed...
February 4th, 2025 13:11 - The Last Ride (Beck)
A great metaphor and very nice rhyme in this poem. It reads smoothly and...
February 4th, 2025 13:09 - Moments (Gray0328)
Tis so true and a great line (memories, glittering constellations in the...
February 4th, 2025 13:06 - Reason for Being (Matthew R. Callies)
A great message for anyone let alone an eleven year old.
February 4th, 2025 13:04 - Depressed writer (Pineapple_pizza018)
Abuse is the most frequent occurance in a relationship. Sad but what one...
February 4th, 2025 13:00 - Everything in Between (RSM0812)
What can you believe and what can\'t you believe? Hard to say. A good...
February 4th, 2025 12:56 - Living Dead (Tony36)
Another spooky write with creepy images. Nicely written
February 4th, 2025 10:22 - Bamboo Forest (Agantuk)
A most beautiful image you paint in words. Lovely it brings on a haunting...
February 4th, 2025 10:21 - Wonder (Amara Carys)
Heavy questions that have different answers depending who you ask. Well...
February 4th, 2025 08:48 - Heil trump (Boot)
Powerful and it speaks of danger of those that do not know history being...
February 4th, 2025 08:44 - Program (John Prophet)
This thought provoking piece was a great read mking one think as its...
February 4th, 2025 08:42 - Shayna Punim - You came a long way baby! (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
The life of parenthood in this poem. I have done it already and it is...
February 4th, 2025 08:41 - He is moving! (Hey!)
Sad in its separation and hard to accept. They say that distance makes the...
February 4th, 2025 08:28 - Why Me? (Prayed The Attacks Away) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A poem of pain and despair with breaking clouds that offer some hope....
February 4th, 2025 08:24 - -$120.74 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
Been there and feel that. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 08:22 - Back Story on Linens and Things (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A hopeful sense to this piece of the story. Nicely laid out in your style
February 4th, 2025 08:21 - sorrow (Jim56)
A lovely and hopeful message here.
February 4th, 2025 08:18 - Green, Limerick (Pacifique Niyitanga)
Love limericks and this one sounds like it is a grazing animal maybe a
February 4th, 2025 05:03 - The wax (Gewar)
This poem holds the power of unfulfilled wishes in the winds of adversity....
February 4th, 2025 05:01 - While Candles Sigh (Reynaldo Casison)
Vivid imagry fills this poem setting the mood for romance and sensuality....
February 4th, 2025 05:00 - Open again (Shadowbones)
The use of metaphor in this poem enhances its meaning. A great message
February 4th, 2025 04:58 - Eachos of us (Natalie Heisey)
Although hurt won\'t give up and will fight on is the theme of this poem....
February 4th, 2025 04:57 - Silent Opinions (Poetic Licence)
In thought this poem is meta in that it voices its own opinion within a...
February 4th, 2025 04:54 - Art (The Indignant Poetess)
In haunting metaphor you have painted images that puzzle the mind and...
February 4th, 2025 04:51 - DARKNESS AND FIRE (SJSangeetha)
Using the metaphor of light and fire love is portrayed. Very nice
February 4th, 2025 04:49 - Night lies (Bootswiththefur)
So short it seems a single tear, so powerful it seems a river. Well done
February 4th, 2025 04:47 - Gentle But A Strong Touch (Ajon4wheels)
How an obcession and fantasy lost can provoke the mind and haunt the soul....
February 4th, 2025 04:45 - In The Garden Of Understanding (Mohammad younus koul)
Faved for its not only beautiful but urgently important message set in a...
February 4th, 2025 04:42 - Tyler Brown (Kevin Hulme)
Loved the poetic inventiveness and playfulness with the language in this...
February 4th, 2025 04:38 - The Cricket’s Tale (MDStone)
A fun read that has great rhyme and meter that carries the poem onward...
February 4th, 2025 04:34 - The love we’ve yet to give (Meagan Adelle)
Unanswered questions from a different point of view fill this piece and...
February 4th, 2025 04:31 - They got the whole world in their hands (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Probably true but what to do with a populace as stupid and unmotivated as...
February 4th, 2025 04:28 - Tèmítọ̀pe (Kingjamescory)
Beautiful images cast in this poem with a positive message to look for the...
February 4th, 2025 04:21 - they reside within (Aziza S)
A great message sent in a great poem. Most lovely
February 4th, 2025 04:20 - Rain (Hey!)
A poem emphasizes the temporal nature of the bad and focus on good. Nicely...
February 4th, 2025 04:18 - hollow (NinjaGirl)
The transformation of changing from what one is to what one thinks that...
February 4th, 2025 04:14 - Best Poem #3 (DaBestPoemer)
Wise advice in cute words. What is that old saying that out of the mouths...
February 4th, 2025 04:12 - WHERE AM I? (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
A mysterious feeling prevades this poem and goes unanswered. Nicely done
February 4th, 2025 04:08 - TEMPLE (Nephilim56)
I found this poem particularly beautiful in its comparison of the emotion...
February 4th, 2025 04:05 - Poetry Shouldn\'t (Tom Dylan)
A great and too often neglected message in this poem. I agree whole...
February 4th, 2025 04:03 - untitled 575 (feathered frolick) (Arqios)
Don\'t know if its the feathers, song or spring weather but this one was...
February 4th, 2025 03:59 - Living in the Light (Orchidee)
A great hymn of praise. This one seems bright and uplifting free from...
February 4th, 2025 03:49 - At One With Nature\'s Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
I too feel this unity with nature, It is musical, artistic, poetic and...
February 4th, 2025 03:44 - Consumption (Mutley Ravishes)
If that is insanity then count me in. A great write
February 3rd, 2025 19:56 - Wet eyes (Maplespal)
The pain of loss is great when it is someone you love. A sad poem
February 3rd, 2025 15:40 - Repression and The Senegambia Highway Man (Neville)
True or not it\'s a great metaphor just the same. Repression, denial,...
February 3rd, 2025 15:35 - broken promises (Thoughtless)
Loved this senryu truth in a few words
February 3rd, 2025 12:52 - It\'s the Hunger that Drives You (Thomas W Case)
Know those times when words fall in rhymes. Then they go dry for a while....
February 3rd, 2025 12:51 - Wastelands (Kurt Philip Behm)
Deep in its message and eloquently stated. Very nicely written
February 3rd, 2025 09:34 - Unknowingly Blessed (Salvia.S)
The vagueness in this poem is its charm leaving the reader wondering who...
February 3rd, 2025 09:32 - Tha Church Clown (Tony36)
Arn\'t we all clowns in some way. A wonderful poem and metaphor as well
February 3rd, 2025 09:31 - Riordan’s First Day 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Upon reading your story poems in the beginning in my blindness I did not...
February 3rd, 2025 09:29 - Finds (Gray0328)
Beautiful words building wonderful images with great metaphors. Lovely
February 3rd, 2025 07:15 - lonely dog (Jim56)
Too many homeless dogs on the streets. I know people that give them homes...
February 3rd, 2025 07:11 - I love you (RSM0812)
I xould feel this one the words were magical and that is enough for me to...
February 3rd, 2025 07:07 - A New Sol Hereafter... (Framed Mirror)
Beautiful and full of feeling the duality shifting from I to you is a...
February 3rd, 2025 05:32 - UPON THE STREET (Nephilim56)
Take me home is what I get from the last line. Beautifully worded in verse...
February 3rd, 2025 05:29 - I SEE YOU FALLING (Mysty Monroe)
Poetic this poem leads one on a journey with another only to find that the...
February 3rd, 2025 05:21 - The Trap (Poetic Licence)
Choices we make take us to where we are today and this may not be where we...
February 3rd, 2025 04:14 - Grim Tidings part two (Dan Williams)
Still dark this poem\'s shadow falls hard. Metaphor after metaphor it...
February 3rd, 2025 04:07 - sound of a day, precluded (Arqios)
Everything felt on hold in this poem, frozen in time on the brink of but...
February 3rd, 2025 04:03 - Midwinter Vacation (Tristan Robert Lange)
Now days children get out of school for snow days. We never had that when...
February 3rd, 2025 04:00 - Whispers Of The Heart Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
This one is very nice it speaks with peace, love and a sensuousness with a...
February 3rd, 2025 03:58 - Protection Pleas (Orchidee)
Good hymn Orchi there must have been a lot of enemies in those days since...
February 3rd, 2025 03:56 - Unjust (Teddy.15)
Sad and touching all that we are is our memories and to loose them is to...
February 3rd, 2025 03:54 - Rock Bottom (Mutley Ravishes)
A thought for the reincarnationists and one that I have had before put...
February 2nd, 2025 18:56 - Adeus (Poetaldo)
sorry for the snow. I grew tired of it years ago and moved farther south....
February 2nd, 2025 16:43 - world is not perfect (Demar Desu)
Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A...
February 2nd, 2025 14:16 - world is not perfect (Demar Desu)
Indeed there are and don\'t forget the patrons who paid to get in. A...
February 2nd, 2025 14:16 - Of Mary Jane and Space Brownies...Later, Maybe (Cheeky Missy)
I have to say Chic you outdid yourself this time. My favorites are the...
February 2nd, 2025 14:14 - I Say Your Name (Cassie58)
Celebrating all that is of worth. A most lovely write
February 2nd, 2025 12:51 - The cabin. (Ginny jayne)
Beauty is a wonderful place to be. Nice images here
February 2nd, 2025 12:46 - Civil War (RSM0812)
Sad enough to shead a tear. Moving and powerful
February 2nd, 2025 08:54 - My Journey (Tony36)
A most positive message sent ot trust, belief and taking advantage of the...
February 2nd, 2025 08:53 - A familiar Yard (Thoughtless)
A great poem with that superb twist at the end that gives new meaning. Its...
February 2nd, 2025 07:54 - I\'ll Remember It (Gray0328)
Familiar to most of us. Just last week I went to the store to get one item...
February 2nd, 2025 07:51 - we all age (Jim56)
A statement of truth and so poetically said. Very nice Jim
February 2nd, 2025 07:49
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