Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Fear Of Arrival (Mark The Phenomenon) Fear a powerful emotion. Yes it can be useful but is often paralyzing....
  September 22nd, 2024 05:41
• Love Must Ever Be Acrostic Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful in form and sentiment Andy. Nicely done
  September 22nd, 2024 04:08
• Same Old Way (Dan Williams) \"even for we dust motesto titans\" Great line Dan. Many deep...
  September 22nd, 2024 04:04
• Bicycles in Beijing (Cassie58) It is always interesting to see other cultures broadening the mind. A most...
  September 21st, 2024 19:41
• Where Pink Revamps Its Outlook, AND, I\'m Weary of Your Fantasies (Cheeky Missy) Each time I read your poetry I feel I am reading John Donne, Chaucer, or...
  September 21st, 2024 16:51
• \"Tennis With A Net\" (Kurt Philip Behm) I tend to agree there is something special about rhyme loved the poem
  September 21st, 2024 16:41
• The Door (Tony36) Is the secret door understanding and the secret room your mind? A most...
  September 21st, 2024 15:19
• base (Eugene S.) This poem had the roll of the sea with great rhythm and rhym too few...
  September 21st, 2024 05:32
• If You Were Me (Gray0328) More wisdom given in this poem replete with greatlines. Well done
  September 21st, 2024 05:30
• If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare (Neville) Almost got me Neville I think I have left visual field neglect. Almost...
  September 21st, 2024 05:27
• Believe in the Light (Orchidee) Good write Orchi one need not be Christian to have faith, hope, and love. ...
  September 21st, 2024 05:21
• Fading Echoes (Dev Parth) Very nicely worded this poem that carries with it a sense of darkness and...
  September 21st, 2024 05:14
• The Riven Soul (Gray0328) Not religious but that does not prevent the admiration of fine art. From...
  September 21st, 2024 05:11
• “Sommelier Full-Time Wanted” (Teddy.15) Sometimes honesty is not the best policy. I am not sure how I missed this...
  September 21st, 2024 05:00
• Old Codgers Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A touching and beautiful sentiment expressed in this poem of mature love....
  September 21st, 2024 04:50
• Hell Got Here First (Dan Williams) Loved it from the first stanza that opened with great poetic power and...
  September 21st, 2024 04:47
• SOLAR POWER (Bobby O) Sun worshiper Bobby? This was a fun read and as for me I love the sun...
  September 21st, 2024 04:40
• From Kingdom Come (ADarkerMind) In obscure lines I felt clarity, in confusion understanding. This poem...
  September 20th, 2024 18:25
• ~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic - (Thad Wilk) Very nicely done Thad with such good rhyme.
  September 20th, 2024 10:35
• Puppets on a string (Tony36) True it is whether taxes, military conscription, eminent domain or where...
  September 20th, 2024 08:46
• At Home On The Farm (ADarkerMind) And I have been accused of being cryptic. Like a modern art painting I...
  September 20th, 2024 05:50
• Notice (Orchidee) Best wishes during these difficult times. Be here when you return.
  September 20th, 2024 05:46
• A very Gracious Goodbye (Teddy.15) Teddy this sounds so Shakesperian and has a forboding forshadow to it that...
  September 20th, 2024 05:44
• The Art in Martial Arts (Tom Dylan) Lovely! Nicely set up this ending is the answer and question to several...
  September 20th, 2024 05:38
• They Lied About the Five Minute Warning (Neville) This reminds me of grammer school during the cold war when we had drills...
  September 20th, 2024 05:35
• Sonnet Tanka. (Goldfinch60) I am not sure where the words come from either Andy but the come and come...
  September 20th, 2024 05:28
• Love Vanishing (Dan Williams) The story leaves feelings of darkness, anger and estrangement. Very nicely...
  September 20th, 2024 05:19
• ~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse (Thad Wilk) I guess all people feel loss and heart break. Nicely done
  September 19th, 2024 13:51
• Priced Out (Kurt Philip Behm) Inflation not at expected levels they say but how do they figure it? The...
  September 19th, 2024 13:49
• Land beyond the rainbow (Tony36) Oh if it were such. A bright outlook. Fun read
  September 19th, 2024 13:45
• Pastures In The Sky (Cassie58) Nostalgic bitter sweet memories. Nicely written Cassie.
  September 19th, 2024 11:05
• Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game (Neville) I\'m sure glad you included that statement about the two being not related...
  September 19th, 2024 05:27
• Everyday Rarities (Tom Dylan) Remember those days. A poem of coziness that is nostalgic and somewhat...
  September 19th, 2024 05:22
• Meanwhile... (Orchidee) Are you trying to breakme out of the matrix I already took the red pill....
  September 19th, 2024 05:18
• A Pick Me Up (ADarkerMind) The imagery tells me it is a Salvador Dali and mustbe interpreted with...
  September 19th, 2024 05:09
• Soul-finder (Teddy.15) Teddy I have to periodically search for mine it tends to wander and like a...
  September 19th, 2024 05:01
• Love Into Light Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Maybe just maybe if we batter long enough against the stone walls of hate...
  September 19th, 2024 04:51
• Hard Winter (Dan Williams) This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The...
  September 19th, 2024 04:45
• The Final Retreat (Thomas W Case) A feeling that I can identify with Thomas. Whether taken literally or...
  September 19th, 2024 04:38
• Puerto Rico (Rrodriguez) A beautiful picture you pain and a love for the land that I can feel....
  September 19th, 2024 04:35
• DEMOCRAZY (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) This applies to many countries and in some way to all. Nicely said
  September 18th, 2024 05:16
• Not Always Winter (Orchidee) Nicely said Orchi and I\'m sure that your faith will carry you through....
  September 18th, 2024 05:14
• 100 Not Out (Tom Dylan) Congratulations Tom be careful about the anthropomorphism,...
  September 18th, 2024 05:10
• Now Out in The Open (Neville) Hiding out in the open. Yes indeed I took this for more than just a...
  September 18th, 2024 05:05
• Perfectly polished (Teddy.15) Great insight into a deep thought. We all judge others by ourselves when...
  September 18th, 2024 04:57
• Cyloned (Mutley Ravishes) A most fun idea and I\'ll bet that there would be a lot of money in it...
  September 18th, 2024 04:52
• All Hail to the Rest…. (Doggerel Dave) Cut me off eh? And after all these years. Its okay Dave as long as you...
  September 18th, 2024 04:49
• Give me a pencil (Sami mulaj) Very positive leaving a feeling of hope and gladness. Well done Sami
  September 18th, 2024 04:44
• Musical I.Q. (Kurt Philip Behm) Music the core of existence building block of the universe. Very nicely...
  September 18th, 2024 04:42
• Back To My Youth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Fond memories Gold and they brought back such in me as well.
  September 18th, 2024 04:33
• Nothing To Say? (Dan Williams) Beautifully composed Dan it flowed like honey. Loved the rhyme and meter.
  September 18th, 2024 04:30
• DICHOTOMY (Bobby O) The shadow of wisdom tied in the knot of words. I guess being tongue tied...
  September 18th, 2024 04:26
• Reflections From My Boyhood (Rrodriguez) I love the pairing of shiver with courage it is unexpected and usually...
  September 18th, 2024 04:16
• Saving Scenes (Orchidee) Yes indeed save me too from the snares and nets. A good write Orchi
  September 17th, 2024 13:54
• Dishcloth Wisdom (AuburnScribbler) Any time censorship is employed it overstepsthe bounds of not only freedom...
  September 17th, 2024 09:04
• Another One of The Lads (Tom Dylan) A portrait of a colorful man that life would be black and white without. I...
  September 17th, 2024 08:59
• Felt (Cassie58) Visions in our darkest hours are sometimes the most uplifting. The depths...
  September 17th, 2024 08:42
• Black Pearls (Neville) \"and asked, if I should like to watch her bleed black pearls, to hide...
  September 17th, 2024 04:39
• Our River Of Love. (Goldfinch60) Most romantic and those walks will keep you in tip top form ,
  September 17th, 2024 04:28
• Eight Thousand Sunrises (Dan Williams) Waiting for those golden years you haven\'t heard we are off the gold...
  September 17th, 2024 04:25
• Poet (Teddy.15) A most wonderful tribute to another great poet. Fun to read and a surprise...
  September 17th, 2024 04:17
• On war.. (NafisaSB) Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
  September 17th, 2024 03:08
• \'Eyes\' (NafisaSB) Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
  September 17th, 2024 03:05
• memories (Jim56) Wonderful nothing rejuvinates like the laugh and smile of a small child
  September 16th, 2024 09:05
• Through The Glass (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Applicable to all in society. A most poignant write that I feel each day
  September 16th, 2024 09:04
• Broken (Tristan Robert Lange) Broken does not necessarily mean not able to be repaired its just that the...
  September 16th, 2024 09:02
• One of those (2781) A fun read about a not very fun subject,
  September 16th, 2024 07:24
• If I Could I Would (Tom Dylan) My mind wanders and I read this poem two ways. The first is someone that...
  September 16th, 2024 07:13
• Faith In the Greater Design (Gray0328) Some would see this as applying to God I see it as applying to the force...
  September 16th, 2024 07:03
• Rise from the fire (Tony36) A call to action, motivating raising like the phoenix raising rom the...
  September 16th, 2024 07:00
• The Sweetest of Slumberbash (Teddy.15) So full of child imges that I was taken back to the days of my infant...
  September 16th, 2024 06:58
• Just Another Take On Life (Neville) You are right Neville there are several ways of looking at things and as I...
  September 16th, 2024 06:55
• A Winter Passing (Cassie58) Touching with appropriate delicate wording in beautiful rhym that falls...
  September 16th, 2024 06:48
• Comforting Certainties (Orchidee) A prayer of faith and love, lovely in itself. We all know you are good at...
  September 16th, 2024 06:43
• Smiling Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) The joy in this poem shines like a smile. And it is contagious I caught it...
  September 16th, 2024 06:36
• This God of A Thousand Mouths (ADarkerMind) Melvin I read this over several times and it is filled with metaphor...
  September 16th, 2024 06:30
• Already Spoken (Dan Williams) Misunderstanding the linchpin of many problems and sometimes it is by...
  September 16th, 2024 06:15
• Atlantic (Alan R) Dreams are what life is made of may all of yours be fulfiled.
  September 15th, 2024 12:57
• Devil Plays the Fiddle (Teddy.15) This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but...
  September 15th, 2024 12:53
• How Slow These Cradles Rock (ADarkerMind) Melvin my inadequate mind grappled with this beautifully written poetic...
  September 15th, 2024 12:32
• My Father’s Daughters (Cassie58) I loved the hidden metaphor of \"abundant white cowslip\" denoting age as...
  September 15th, 2024 12:11
• Now we are three.... (Orchidee) My condolences Orchi but a tribute well written my friend.
  September 15th, 2024 06:06
• Sonnet For Steven. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful a most lovely tribute so nicely done.
  September 15th, 2024 06:02
• Matrimonial Misfire (Dan Williams) I could see the battle rage before me enemy entrenched on high ground Sun...
  September 15th, 2024 05:56
• A Thousand Lanterns (Tony36) A beautiful sight as a beautiful tribute. Nicely worded
  September 14th, 2024 18:00
• A world of Deception (Saleh Ben Saleh) Loved your rhym scheme in this poem. It was a delight to read.
  September 14th, 2024 11:26
• Hold On Tight (Teddy.15) Very nice Teddy yes we have paid the price to ride so one might as well...
  September 14th, 2024 03:39
• Death And Life (Orchidee) A great story and the metaphor is one of the best in all Christianity in...
  September 14th, 2024 03:38
• Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60) Things that sound rediculous today become fact tomorrow. A scarry thought...
  September 14th, 2024 03:20
• Cleverer (Dan Williams) This is a very deep well you have dug. You have approached this from a...
  September 14th, 2024 03:17
• I can SEE it (Adnan it is) Youth brings impatience. We think that a nail should be sunk with the...
  September 14th, 2024 03:09
• War (Alan R) The other side of the coin. Love has its down sides.
  September 13th, 2024 09:06
• A feeling to write (Maplespal) I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean...
  September 13th, 2024 06:02
• autumn song (Jim56) A fun and lovely poem of nature.
  September 13th, 2024 06:00
• Are We Together? (Dev Parth) Very nicely worded a beautiful poem of love.
  September 13th, 2024 05:58
• Dedication Delights (Orchidee) Very nicely written Orchi. Beautiful words.
  September 13th, 2024 05:56
• Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere (Tom Dylan) You have so tastefully noted the issue of priorities where most people...
  September 13th, 2024 05:54
• () The first time I read this poem I found it sensuous as tied to the food...
  September 13th, 2024 05:48
• Patriotism (Doggerel Dave) Dave I think that patriotism should begin with oneself. \"To thine own...
  September 13th, 2024 05:38
• Almost Enough (Dan Williams) Beautifully written a statement of how things are seen as right or wrong...
  September 13th, 2024 05:34