Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• How (Tony36) Such a poignant question. Each will have to answer on their own. As for me...
  July 21st, 2025 09:11
• Whispers in the Stars\' dream (Violet_Writes) A questioning poem of a relationship once ablaze now in question as to...
  July 21st, 2025 09:09
• Untitled (RSM0812) Wonderful rhyming in this short piece it speaks to the reader of the...
  July 21st, 2025 09:06
• It’s All in Him (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) This poem is a proclamation of faith and belief strong and powerful yelled...
  July 21st, 2025 09:03
• Baphomet Rising (Tristan Robert Lange) I love the creative word play in this poem where the first letter in the...
  July 21st, 2025 09:01
• The art of traping (Devender Kumar) It is thus that contracts are made and signed. Just as the American...
  July 21st, 2025 07:06
• The century (Lorenz) There are cultures where one hundred means a lot or many. Nicely written...
  July 21st, 2025 07:04
• Destiny of a Fool (Fränz Müller) Good rhyme paired with flowing meter and a haunting tale what more can I...
  July 21st, 2025 06:42
• The Empirical Veneers of Decency and Acceptance (ElizabethMoroz) A wonderful rhyme scheme and one that I have experimented with on...
  July 21st, 2025 06:34
• 4 Trofimov, The Eternal Student (Arqios) Beautiful so loaded and layered with social, political and economic...
  July 21st, 2025 06:21
• new day (Jim56) Very nice Jim every day is a new start.
  July 21st, 2025 05:47
• The path of no return (Albix) And so many may wonder. Time will tell and we will see. A well written...
  July 21st, 2025 05:06
• DADDYS GIRL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A lovely poem of paternal tie to a daughter. It is soft and tender and...
  July 21st, 2025 04:07
• Impact (NafisaSB) Well written reflection upon the impact that one life may have in the...
  July 21st, 2025 04:01
• My Dream Dress (Priya Tomar) Very clever use of metaphor throughout with details worked in. Loved it a...
  July 21st, 2025 03:55
• Shower Meditation. (Goldfinch60) A shower much more efficient Gold. A lovely and refreshing poem of new...
  July 21st, 2025 03:53
• All on Me (Bame Bame) A poem that poses the question of how much can a parent do with genetics...
  July 21st, 2025 03:45
• Amanda Taylor (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This poem could be taken several ways. Reading the author\'s note I take...
  July 21st, 2025 03:40
• Jester (Hoolihooli) A poem of love gone sour turned to cheese and milk not knowing. A metaphor...
  July 20th, 2025 20:19
• It doesn\'t Make Sense (Thomas W Case) Gritty, full of raw life that most pay to avoid. Well written Thomas
  July 20th, 2025 20:15
• The stories we tell ourselves (Hzugman) Mind provoking and if we are lucky we will understand. Nice work
  July 20th, 2025 20:11
• 52: Monologue (Alex PB) A different concept of love than what most hold but still true and deeper...
  July 20th, 2025 20:10
• No Pain No Gain (Jordan) A bit of confusion and deterioration. What matters is the determination...
  July 20th, 2025 17:03
• You (Amethyste) A poem of offering nice
  July 20th, 2025 17:01
• Few cast the die (Muse of Calliope) Lovely! a fave
  July 20th, 2025 17:00
• A fable (Mourgana of the Fey) Perhaps it does indeed. In this world of humans happiness seems but an...
  July 20th, 2025 15:25
• Lost (Bella Shepard) Would, could, should, might, wished, wanted words that never were...
  July 20th, 2025 15:20
• Lost.. (David Prestigiacomo) A poem of love and passion as well as wishes. Nicely done
  July 20th, 2025 15:15
• Scars you chose not to see (Molly Delaney) Anger runs through this poem. Anger toward others and self. Feelings of...
  July 20th, 2025 13:20
• Don\'t fly (Sharvi) As a desire so common to children and adults this poem seems a metaphor as...
  July 20th, 2025 13:17
• The grief I could not set down (Samuel) A tragedy carried onward as a weight in life. Sad this poem is a journey...
  July 20th, 2025 13:15
• Twilight without end... (Sree) The vacillation between sight and blindness between dark and light make...
  July 20th, 2025 13:12
• Blessings Unused (Kurt Philip Behm) The untaken road the choice not made the action never acted on time past...
  July 20th, 2025 13:06
• Things I Had to Give Up to Survive (Malo J) A tragic poem of sadness and hurt. It leaves a feeling of pain that needs...
  July 20th, 2025 13:05
• The Fake Meeting (Ksey_Gan) A poem of waiting for the other to react. Nicely done
  July 20th, 2025 13:01
• Ghost (MatPie) This poem sends feelings of pain and unanswered questions of loss and...
  July 20th, 2025 12:59
• Baby Bird (Shahla Latifi) Sadness and loss in this reflective poem. I sometimes wonder if we can...
  July 20th, 2025 12:57
• Open Hands, Full Heart (GeekSusie) A most beautiful message sent in such tender and light words where a gift...
  July 20th, 2025 12:54
• Trepidation (Keeter C) Well expressed the fear of falling basophobia akin to acrophobia many...
  July 20th, 2025 12:52
• The woman of my dreams (Musdeenthoughts) We all have images of what our love should be, look like, act like and yes...
  July 20th, 2025 12:48
• And So It Goes (Eugene S.) I hear not just passing memories and thoughts but also a train leading to...
  July 20th, 2025 12:45
• Liberation (Fränz Müller) A most interesting poem that speaks in reality but also in metaphor. What...
  July 20th, 2025 12:42
• Untitled (REBELLIOUS SOUL) A poem of feeling not understood and worse that others think that they...
  July 20th, 2025 12:39
• Natures Crime (RSM0812) Cryptic, a puzzle well written with a most interesting rhyme scheme it...
  July 20th, 2025 12:35
• Generation X: Life As I Know It (2025) (Aurora Mizutani) Clever, nicely written with good pacing and continuity it sends a positive...
  July 20th, 2025 12:33
• TH CURSE (Saswati das) There is no scarier demond that the one inside. I too take comfort in...
  July 20th, 2025 12:31
• when autumn comes around (Jim56) A beautiful picture painted here Jim. Very nicely done in good rhyme
  July 20th, 2025 12:28
• Talking to them (Maplespal) Loss can drive one to madness and although I talk to myself and nature it...
  July 20th, 2025 12:27
• Tango in Durango (Tony Grannell) Easily a song and I can hear the melody a happy and raucous one at that...
  July 20th, 2025 12:14
• Go (Tony36) I can feel this one from my past and its desire still calls to me. Very...
  July 20th, 2025 12:09
• Epiclesis (Tristan Robert Lange) To blend old form and format with new thought and images well done my...
  July 20th, 2025 12:08
• weekend unleashed (Arqios) (Dusk spills its pink confetti across corrugated tin, ) a great line...
  July 20th, 2025 12:06
• Dispensations of Grace (ElizabethMoroz) A modern poetic book of Revelations? Scepticism, Irony and disenchantment...
  July 20th, 2025 12:00
• Clever Guest (Priya Tomar) Magnificently worded, fine rhyme, good meter, nice flow. A brain teaser....
  July 20th, 2025 11:55
• A Factotum\'s Call (Gray0328) Intricate word weaving in this poem rhyme and meter melt into a blended...
  July 20th, 2025 04:19
• UNSEEN TEARS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Sad, tragic, loss, pain, regret all these come to mind with this poem. A...
  July 20th, 2025 04:17
• Broken Since Beginning (Shivansh) Poetically beautiful, realistically tragic, emotionally painful. Very...
  July 20th, 2025 04:14
• Motionless voyager (Lorenz) (On the pier a white shadow will wait ... Marriage of sun and silence...
  July 20th, 2025 04:11
• Unwept Goodbye (Haleyalexis) Normally such topics I ignore but there are exceptions to every rule and...
  July 20th, 2025 04:07
• Why should I read their books, (Devender Kumar) A reality and a metaphor as well. Nicely stated the issue of...
  July 20th, 2025 04:01
• The Reset (Sunflowersinrain) A most interesting set of analogies in this poem. Nicely written
  July 20th, 2025 03:59
• Ghost and Puppy (Vanna) Now this one in metaphor has to be thought about to be understood and even...
  July 20th, 2025 03:57
• The Echo Chamber (Samuel) This poem is well written in narrative form. It tells the story clearly in...
  July 20th, 2025 03:53
• Rather than talking to walls - (Amy Michelle Mosier) This poem speaks to me with great word selection in a topic dear to my...
  July 20th, 2025 03:49
• Is it funny? (Orchidee) What is worse Orchi is when the people you thought were laughing at your...
  July 20th, 2025 03:43
• Live For Today 2. (Goldfinch60) A truism Andy nicely said and good advice as well
  July 20th, 2025 03:38
• For Poetrys not enough (Kevin Hulme) Doing is understanding. To know something you must live it. Well said
  July 19th, 2025 18:41
• HER (Musdeenthoughts) A pledge in a poem of love. Nicely written
  July 19th, 2025 18:40
• 51: Monologue (Alex PB) A poem about the beginning, ending and inbetween of relationships. It...
  July 19th, 2025 18:39
• Decide (Sassy Lou) Words in this poem, tell of a person where talk is cheap. It is hard to...
  July 19th, 2025 18:35
• Distance (MatPie) Astral projection comes to mind where the astral body travels through...
  July 19th, 2025 16:11
• Night Haunting. (Baker) A ghost story in a poem. Nicely written with dark shadows
  July 19th, 2025 14:32
• To be Dylan\'s Voice / A Generation\'s Voice (Gaurav Gurung) Indeed the voice of the century. Nobel winner in poetry it is his verse...
  July 19th, 2025 13:20
• Rebirthed In Light (Kurt Philip Behm) The message well sent with the mirror turned to the wall. Nicely done
  July 19th, 2025 13:17
• Beginnings (Keeter C) Sad but no one reads anymore, no one can spell, grammar is poor, why...
  July 19th, 2025 13:15
• Lemme Get This Straight: I Hafta Live WHERE? (Cheeky Missy) Wow! what a coincidence I was just watching a Katherine Hepburn film and...
  July 19th, 2025 13:13
• Understood (Amethyste) Ah such pleasure there is in that. Seldom experienced unfortunately. Well...
  July 19th, 2025 11:52
• The Song of Russianт Ace-Pilots. after Alex Fatianoff (Ksey_Gan) A whimsical and fun read that puts romance on the burner. Love is free and...
  July 19th, 2025 11:04
• Use that brain cell or three (Orchidee) Orchi a great write we have all suffered the plight. A poem too cryptic to...
  July 19th, 2025 11:00
• I DON\'T WANT TO SAY GOODBYE (REBELLIOUS SOUL) A poem of all the yesterdays. Nicely done as a tribute to the past. A...
  July 19th, 2025 10:52
• I Got my Childhood Back (Malo J) A poem of recognition that one can not return to the past nor can it be...
  July 19th, 2025 09:21
• Abandoned Love.. (David Prestigiacomo) A write of a wish that takes flesh and an illusion that becomes one\'s...
  July 19th, 2025 09:18
• The House Nobody visits (Shivansh) One must ask why. A poem that leaves the reader with as many questions as...
  July 19th, 2025 09:15
• Smile (RSM0812) A smile will carry you farther than a frown. A lovely write
  July 19th, 2025 08:28
• Life has been a slow crucifixion (EvenwheniLie) Rap like this poem rocks but with a dark and bumpy road. Well done
  July 19th, 2025 08:25
• The void (Tony36) A poem of the unknown, that vast and mysterious place where fear reigns...
  July 19th, 2025 07:17
• Code (Fränz Müller) Strong words in a powerful poem of past insult and pain. Well written
  July 19th, 2025 07:15
• 3 Lopakhin\'s Reflection (Arqios) Nostalgic and tender this poem speaks to the soul of the past and what it...
  July 19th, 2025 06:45
• Guiding Light of Affection (Jainesh.D) A most beautiful poem about different aspects of love and its giving...
  July 19th, 2025 05:48
• robin in my garden (Jim56) It is funny how over time animals mayu grow accustomed to our behaviors...
  July 19th, 2025 05:46
• 3 texts (Maplespal) The first one touched me particularly with a sense of tender longing. Most...
  July 19th, 2025 05:44
• Pain Reliever (Anthony Hanible) This poem in cryptic verse wends a winding road as is the road of love...
  July 19th, 2025 05:42
• When Souls Forgot How Love Used To Breathe and Feel.... (Cirawrites01) This poem addresses questions but leaves as many as it asks. Nicely
  July 19th, 2025 05:40
• FOUNTAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Is anything real indeed. Great metaphor in this piece that speaks to the...
  July 19th, 2025 05:35
• Man on a Barstool (Tony Grannell) Tony this poem has a rambling feel as if it were a the life of one making...
  July 19th, 2025 05:32
• I Miss The Grass (Brooke Snyder) A most beautiful metaphor that carries throughout the poem. Well written...
  July 19th, 2025 05:24
• Tears In The Crowds (ElizabethMoroz) A poem of protest and the absurdities of the population. Too many people I...
  July 19th, 2025 05:20
• The Bloom Spring Forgot (Priya Tomar) Continued reassurances from nature over being what one is. A wonderful...
  July 19th, 2025 05:14
• The Multitudes Necessary (Steve Goldenfort) Cleverly worded in rather cryptic symbolism it weaves its message. Nicely...
  July 19th, 2025 05:11
• AnalysisByQwen2.5Plus AI-Volume 3-BananaTrees-2Feb2025 (Soman Ragavan) Very informative in that I live around bananas and have just planted...
  July 19th, 2025 05:09