Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• a place in my dreams (Jim56) A fun read Jim we all have a place of fantasy where we retreat from time...
  July 15th, 2025 06:18
• an orchard’s lament (Arqios) Hauntingly beautiful to say more would be to ruin it.
  July 15th, 2025 05:14
• (Re)lapse (DontSleepOnTheBoy) Vices are those things that we have difficulty escaping and that are...
  July 15th, 2025 05:12
• Help Me Find Myself (Kiprotich Langat) A poem to oneself to buck up and do what is needed despite it all. Nicely...
  July 15th, 2025 05:09
• I FORGOT TO HATE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I truly love this poem. It is brilliant! It uses very short lines in a...
  July 15th, 2025 05:03
• Nothing Will Ever Change (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Powerful stuff, explosive material. Pent up anger at a system that does...
  July 15th, 2025 04:54
• CHOKE ! (Chris Duffy) A poem that speaks venom from being stepped on. Clearly worded it speaks...
  July 15th, 2025 04:51
• Alien Visitations (Mutley Ravishes) Love this one it is a great play on words and a mind twister.
  July 15th, 2025 04:46
• Love Can Be Rotten (Emery Walker) Sadly relatable to many this cycle speaks to communication problems,...
  July 15th, 2025 04:45
• If you say (Juwaireeyah) Actions speak louder than words. This poem a plea for action. Nicely said
  July 15th, 2025 04:39
• Time Doesn’t Heal (Vanna) A strong a powerful write that oozes pain. There needs to be a coagulant...
  July 15th, 2025 04:35
• Second Comings (Fränz Müller) I hear the anger in this poem it comes through like a draft under a door....
  July 15th, 2025 04:31
• The War That Defies Justification (ElizabethMoroz) Very well worked this poem uses great internal rhyming to reinforce its...
  July 15th, 2025 04:22
• Nothing.... (Orchidee) Orchi I took all those to be swear words and wondered why this was not...
  July 15th, 2025 04:09
• Being Happy. (Goldfinch60) Great wisdom here Andy and the key to happiness for rich or poor....
  July 15th, 2025 04:07
• Tired (Mik this is mik) So short yet so poetic and well done loved it and a fave
  July 14th, 2025 18:41
• The Love Of The Devil (Sad girl) Clever and reality made from a metaphor. Here everything is in reverse....
  July 14th, 2025 18:10
• My last line (Last Shadow) A very nice write of the need for another. Well done
  July 14th, 2025 16:56
• There stood God (Amethyste) Well said and nicely written.
  July 14th, 2025 15:52
• Put on your happy face (Georgia Watson) Being fragile in one aspect does not mean one has to be fragile in all. A...
  July 14th, 2025 14:50
• Colors (Baker) A poem of showing one\'s true colors and having the confidence to do so....
  July 14th, 2025 14:47
• Clipped Wings (Violet_Writes) Sad and tragic a poetic expression of pain and hurt. Well written
  July 14th, 2025 14:45
• Unicorn (Arial) A poetic plea for one more visit that is longing in its asking. Nicely...
  July 14th, 2025 14:43
• Broken beyond repair. (Debbie) A sad poem of loss and injury of pain that continues. Well written
  July 14th, 2025 14:40
• Pretense, Eh? Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) Cats never gave me much comfort when ill but the dog was quite empathetic....
  July 14th, 2025 14:37
• demonic pleasure  (Devender Kumar) Dark and sad but so because it is often true. Short and to the point
  July 14th, 2025 12:27
• LYRICA (Magzzbaby) Sad and mournful yet wistful and haunting a poem of past love. Lovely
  July 14th, 2025 11:17
• Based on Anton Chekhov\'s The House with the Mezzanine (Ksey_Gan) The mystery of loss and the empty feeling of dread as to what has...
  July 14th, 2025 11:14
• Akasha (Ellen Marsell) Our grasp on time so small we have no view. We look at a molecule in the...
  July 14th, 2025 11:12
• Fortunate Isles (Gray0328) Very poetically worded Gray a romantic and sensual poem a fave
  July 14th, 2025 10:05
• Bound Beyond Time (Jainesh.D) Lovely! Brilliantly worded. It captures the moment.
  July 14th, 2025 10:03
• The Other Woman (Kurt Philip Behm) This to me Kurt represents our journey on this earth. We all trying to...
  July 14th, 2025 10:00
• Over What Hill? (Tristan Robert Lange) Peter Pan a favorite as a child I guess it was because he demonstrated a...
  July 14th, 2025 09:57
• AnalysisByBlackboxAI-Volume 19--Poem-GiorgiaMeloni-30Jan2025 (Soman Ragavan) Another most complete analysis of this poem. Very nice
  July 14th, 2025 08:41
• Can we talk (Tony36) In this hurried world where no one really cares a valid write and one that...
  July 14th, 2025 08:39
• Both, and Neither (Mottakeenur Rehman) Beautiful a metaphor for us as humans pawns in nature\'s game of chess. So...
  July 14th, 2025 08:35
• I Met a Man Whose Eyes Were Like the Sea (Samuel Maximilian) I am experiencing deja vu with this poem. It feels as if I had read it...
  July 14th, 2025 08:31
• Waiting in Love (RSM0812) A love poem without doubt. It speaks in poetic terms of a deep love....
  July 14th, 2025 08:07
• Words of Encouragement! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A lovely belief that gives strength to the believer. Well written with...
  July 14th, 2025 08:05
• Our Terrorist Departed (Tony Grannell) Once again you have done it a poem for all of us. Deeply personal it...
  July 14th, 2025 07:08
• “flight from self” (Arqios) I suppose that this too may be taken many ways but my read is in this...
  July 14th, 2025 05:29
• sun fun (Jim56) A joyous poem of summer and those things associated with it. Nicely done...
  July 14th, 2025 05:24
• One thought stirs (Maplespal) Wow! this one moves from gentle to explosive. A poem of loss and...
  July 14th, 2025 05:23
• The Age of Lies (ElizabethMoroz) You can\'t believe what you see, hear, smell, taste, or touch a read of...
  July 14th, 2025 05:09
• NOT YOUR CINDERELLA (REBELLIOUS SOUL) Here here. As a male I believe in women and men, each with equal rights...
  July 14th, 2025 05:06
• Pure Poison (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Each alternative worse than the last. Natural food so much better, not to...
  July 14th, 2025 04:59
• Let Me Live in my World (Priya Tomar) A poem so easy to identify with and my favorite line is the last (Let me...
  July 14th, 2025 04:55
• SNIPER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I love this one it takes me in several directions all held together by a...
  July 14th, 2025 04:53
• Handing Over the Reins (Mutley Ravishes) Amazing the power of imagination and how thought can move bulk. Well...
  July 14th, 2025 04:49
• Long gone miners (Jeremy Leach) Although the poem on the surface is sufficiently well constructed it...
  July 14th, 2025 04:48
• Threads (Leny) This metaphor has so many loose ends to follow. Too short a thread does...
  July 14th, 2025 04:43
• Papa Francesco, addio a te! (Azeezah Khadeejah AbdulAwal) Quite the homage to a great man done so well. I was quite surprised how...
  July 14th, 2025 04:39
• The Last Slice (Aman 12) This poem applies well on different levels to humanity as a whole and to...
  July 14th, 2025 04:33
• Once More With Feeling… (Doggerel Dave) Dave you and I are fighting a tidal wave of technology and are about to be...
  July 14th, 2025 04:29
• Favourites? (Orchidee) Favorite them? Don\'t even like them. Sometimes wonder if I even read...
  July 14th, 2025 04:23
• Happy Birthday Dave. (Goldfinch60) A nice remembrance paired with one of my favorite Monty Python songs. Well...
  July 14th, 2025 04:18
• you asked for beauty and i rage (Yael Olalde-Garcia) Gritty, grimy, dark a poem of use, abuse that conveys feelings of...
  July 14th, 2025 04:08
• FIGHTING AN INVISIBLE BATTLE- INTERSTITAL CYSTITIS (PassionatePoetess) A diagnosis of any type does not define the person. A most personal write....
  July 13th, 2025 19:30
• MAYBE IF MY VOICE A LITTLE BIT LOUDER, THEY\'LL HEAR ME (Fikrioshin) Who is out there? What is out there? Do they hear? Is there another sense...
  July 13th, 2025 19:25
• Where The Birches Meet (Gaias Soothing Haven) Nature sensuous, sexual, errotic it breaths and lives. A creative and...
  July 13th, 2025 16:59
• Prick the Blood Feather (Fränz Müller) Quite descriptive and vivid in imagery it tells its story. Nicely done
  July 13th, 2025 16:35
• Cash strapped despondent citizen banker (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Smiles indeed as I read. Nicely done
  July 13th, 2025 16:34
• Drowning (Mminarik00) A senryu that makes sense and is quite clever and a fave
  July 13th, 2025 16:33
• Flailing neurotransmitters (Zephyrschild) That is quite the contest and winner takes all? A verse of rhyme that fits...
  July 13th, 2025 16:32
• The Quill of the Greats (Thomas W Case) Well done Thomas I too have my place although ideas ariase in other
  July 13th, 2025 16:29
• Waiting for Nora (Tony Grannell) Tony quite the tale that would make any novel proud as a beginning. Nicely...
  July 13th, 2025 16:27
• A Game of Chess (Samuel Maximilian) Brilliant! Well done in rhyme, message and metaphor each woven into this...
  July 13th, 2025 14:44
• I told you (Sree) A poetic list of commandments said firmly and as a warning. Nicely written...
  July 13th, 2025 13:51
• Until I Found You (13LaurenD) A poem of love found that is more than a one way street. Nicely rhymed and...
  July 13th, 2025 13:49
• The Moth and The Warmth (Gaurav Gurung) The allegory is very nice. It speaks to the heart and soul. To give back...
  July 13th, 2025 13:46
• Hades Train (Kurt Philip Behm) Good lord nothing left to rhyme that would be hell indeed. Another good...
  July 13th, 2025 13:42
• Wassat? (Orchidee) Point made Orchi f the poems I\'ve written stacked on top of each other...
  July 13th, 2025 13:41
• In shade (Kaz) What a marvelous senryu that speaks in metaphor of a deeper truth. A fave
  July 13th, 2025 13:38
• The Sad Thoughts (Ksey_Gan) When the time is come little else matters after. A rather solemn poem that...
  July 13th, 2025 13:37
• Haha, The Old Disappearing Trick (Cheeky Missy) Days ritual full of food and fun nicely done Four sonnets with loss of...
  July 13th, 2025 13:35
• Glass Race (Dyslexic.gun) A poem of trauma in a way a shock that disrupted the day. Keep going is...
  July 13th, 2025 13:33
• Creatures of habit (2781) A habit may be good to keep a ritual but gives little room for reflection....
  July 13th, 2025 13:30
• Vibrations in Equations: Where Science Meets Soul (Salvia.S) Salvia many years ago I too thought of psychological elements as formulas...
  July 13th, 2025 12:42
• \"The tale of moon and star\"🌙⭐ (Antra.sharma_) Such a wonderful metaphor that fits so well in various aspects and well...
  July 13th, 2025 09:39
• Line up the constellations (Georgia Watson) Diametrically opposed put together in completion using wonderful poetic...
  July 13th, 2025 09:34
• The hustle (RSM0812) Great confidence in this poem that speaks with power. Nicely done
  July 13th, 2025 09:31
• Free me (Chitrangada) Feelings that I can identify with in many ways. Nicely written it speaks...
  July 13th, 2025 09:30
• The 12th Anniversary Of Dad\'s Death (Randyjohnson71) A poem of loss and in its sadness positives found in memories. Well done...
  July 13th, 2025 09:25
• Put It Away (Bella Shepard) Ah Bella good advice given in a poetic form that all can understand....
  July 13th, 2025 09:23
• I Left the Door Open for You (Vanna) Night keeps its secrets. A raw write of needing a mask under light. Well...
  July 13th, 2025 07:47
• Clean (Tristan Robert Lange) Many interpretations here don\'t know which one to start with. As a race...
  July 13th, 2025 07:45
• Pirates (Tony36) Pirates always a a romantic crew of ruffians and scallywags on the ocean...
  July 13th, 2025 06:26
• Memories of childhood. (Friendship) Memories well written of a past enchanted, a storybook of comfort and...
  July 13th, 2025 05:35
• Processing loss (Jeremy Leach) A vivid image and great metaphor in this poem that teaches its lesson in...
  July 13th, 2025 05:29
• firefly forest (Jim56) I too love the fireflies and their floating lights over meadow and through...
  July 13th, 2025 05:26
• Who is His Beloved (Priya Tomar) A story in itself this could also be a metaphor for the loss of innocence....
  July 13th, 2025 05:17
• what I couldn\'t finish (Leny) Well built up the poem works for the last line. Nicely done
  July 13th, 2025 05:15
• the dungeon within (Gray0328) Compartmentalization to hide from oneself what is not acceptable. A deep...
  July 13th, 2025 05:13
• THE FARTER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A fun read reminding me of the show (Blazing Saddles) of childhood fart...
  July 13th, 2025 05:11
• A rising star (EvenwheniLie) Cleverly worded and mystical this poem works its miracle revealing its...
  July 13th, 2025 05:09
• None Left (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Poem in commentary worked well in this case. Nicely spoken
  July 13th, 2025 05:06
• Imperfect Heaven (Parsa) A prayer and poem spoken for one desired. Nicely written
  July 13th, 2025 05:03
• It\'s Happening Again (Writteninthestars) A dark write of death and what it has to offer as opposed to life. Nicely...
  July 13th, 2025 05:01
• The storm (NafisaSB) Well written it took me by storm. I have been in such storms and it took...
  July 13th, 2025 04:57
• The old man waits (Maplespal) I love this poem that is so soothing in its rhythmic rhyme and seems to...
  July 13th, 2025 04:53