Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Relative drifting (Shadowbones)
When I read this I picture an insect talking but I love how it is left...
October 10th, 2025 20:18 - Old Soul (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
A most interesting poem of age perception. They say your are only as old...
October 10th, 2025 18:22 - The Stranger I\'ve Known Forever (Aishu)
A romantic poem that speaks of an appealing image from a dream.
October 10th, 2025 18:19 - HELLROARING HANK (David Welch)
Another great narrative poem. It was engaging and well told.
October 10th, 2025 18:17 - Short Putt (Thomas W Case)
Gritty and with a bit of warmth. It is a stew in and of itself. Lovely...
October 10th, 2025 18:10 - Moonlight (Amethyste)
Visceral this poem leaving the feeling of being cleansed by the light of...
October 10th, 2025 18:07 - Wounded Boy (Aria Belguerra)
There is pain in this poem a sense of resentment and a need to nurture. It...
October 10th, 2025 17:26 - FLOWERS FOR THE DEAD (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Nicely done. A poem that involves several repeated lines. Taking one...
October 10th, 2025 15:54 - Haze (Nicole Pritchard)
A poem of perseverance and strength. Nicely done
October 10th, 2025 14:49 - Dream (Frรคnz Mรผller)
Most interesting images and wording in this poem loved it.
October 10th, 2025 14:19 - Tulsa (EllieOxford513)
A poem with multiple metaphors or allegories that speak in various ways to...
October 10th, 2025 14:17 - Pig of the Sadist (A Boy With Roses)
Sexual, sensual, passion driven write. Nicely done
October 10th, 2025 14:13 - THONG (Ms.divine)
Seductive, sensuous, erotic a poem that smoothly paints the night.
October 10th, 2025 14:11 - In The Mirror, She Smiles (Poetic_Princess)
The old saying fake it until you can make it. A sad poem of being someone...
October 10th, 2025 14:06 - Sagging (Maplespal)
Surreal in a way and a bit of a twisted read with strange images. Well
October 10th, 2025 13:08 - Love\'s Eternal Song (Jyoti Verma)
It is most interesting how festivals create moods and leave feelings...
October 10th, 2025 12:40 - Wasted witnessed time (Keeter C)
Ah I got it, it is my way of the high way. A good read
October 10th, 2025 12:38 - Prophecy of the times (Lorenz)
David wrestles the lion of Judah charmed by a lire and a liar discerned by...
October 10th, 2025 11:09 - Holding On (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Charming and so well worded. Our memories in a setting sun run before us...
October 10th, 2025 11:04 - Suddenly (Gray0328)
It is the last two lines of this poem that enchants me the most the image...
October 10th, 2025 11:00 - Now:The Garden of Delight (Jjudaharts)
October 10th, 2025 10:56 - Now:The Garden of Delight (Jjudaharts)
Indeed a poem of peace living in the moment and in fact that is all we...
October 10th, 2025 10:56 - My tools speak to me. (Friendship)
A lovely poem of what one loves to do and the treasure one creates from...
October 10th, 2025 10:55 - Unseen Tomorrow (Matthew R. Callies)
A ghost that has no voice and can not be seen. A spirit that goes...
October 10th, 2025 10:09 - I still Taste Your Lips (William Hromada)
Lovely allegories of memories of love in vivid nature images
October 10th, 2025 09:41 - Sheโs Not Just a Housewife (Deepak Vohra)
And so is that unsung role that has been swept under the rug that she had...
October 10th, 2025 09:40 - Torrential Memory (Iris Lynn)
A lovely poem of unrest and an internal storm in this poem of a...
October 10th, 2025 09:12 - Because I Love Her (Anthony Hanible)
A pledge of love where love is doing for another. Nicely penned
October 10th, 2025 09:10 - Blood and wine (RSM0812)
Blood and wine indeed it is symbol as old as wine itself nicely worded in...
October 10th, 2025 09:09 - why (Jim56)
A wonderful dream Jim and a question that many have. Nicely written
October 10th, 2025 05:48 - Power of nature (Devender Kumar)
There is nothing like nature that has the power to overcome all and return...
October 10th, 2025 05:47 - ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐ซ ๐ฑ๐ฅ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฆ๐ฐ ๐๐ซ๐ข ๐๐ฏ๐ฌ๐๐ฉ๐ข๐ช... ๐๐ฌ๐ด๐ข๐ฏ ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ๐๐ค๐ข (Keyara S Trotman)
Little things become big things when our routine is interrupted. A lovely...
October 10th, 2025 04:43 - Closer to you (Poetaldo)
A beautiful message and vision painted in this short poem. Well done
October 10th, 2025 04:22 - Lines of Hope (Awam)
This fun story told in a child like manner is a message in and of itself...
October 10th, 2025 04:21 - feedback reverb (Arqios)
So much said in silence not always in sound but silence of action as well...
October 10th, 2025 04:19 - THE OLD TREE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I loved the feel of this verse and the wording was perfect for the meter....
October 10th, 2025 04:13 - Things Will Get Worse (Profiled) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This poem a proclamation of doom and reports a sense that the end is near....
October 10th, 2025 04:11 - Two World In Silence (Cryselda Writes)
This poem feels like ripples in a pond spreading outward with time the...
October 10th, 2025 04:09 - Eight Years Later (Shri Qoin)
A poem of reflections over what were aspirations unfulfilled and...
October 10th, 2025 04:06 - How Much I Meant (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
Girls and boys expectations in relationships are far different as are...
October 10th, 2025 04:02 - Shiva (Frรคnz Mรผller)
Entrancing, mesmerizing and most beautiful it is mentally seductive and...
October 10th, 2025 04:01 - The Workshop (Writteninthestars)
A rather surreal, dreamlike, mechanistic vision of repair. Intriguing it...
October 10th, 2025 03:59 - Our Antiquity (Sami Mulaj)
A very poetic allegory in this poem\'s images. Short but so lovely a fave
October 10th, 2025 03:54 - Stolen identity (Bragee)
There is nothing like unrequited love for poetic inspiration. Nicely...
October 10th, 2025 03:52 - Better Day Today. (Goldfinch60)
A most positive thought as the heart of this poem to improve from where we...
October 10th, 2025 03:49 - Beauty As Blame (Poetic_Princess)
A poetic critique about falseness and phony displays. Nicely crafted
October 10th, 2025 03:48 - Sojourn through Tarotspace (Rajatbagchi)
Most interesting poem with inclusion of the Hindu pantheon which I was not...
October 10th, 2025 03:44 - I\'M A FREE MAN, OR I\'M NOTHING (David Welch)
Cleverly written with good message in good rhyme and flowing meter. Lovely...
October 9th, 2025 20:25 - Clarity Among the Stones (GeekSusie)
Nicely done with poetic metaphor it speak of tending the garden pruning...
October 9th, 2025 20:22 - The Quiet (Amirose2015)
Silence creates its own mood. Nicely done
October 9th, 2025 20:19 - Music byTamara Nesterovich (Ksey_Gan)
I find that music is a healer indeed. Nicely written
October 9th, 2025 20:18 - The world goes around (Hey!)
There is a feeling of helplessness in this poem. Clearly written
October 9th, 2025 20:16 - The house (Winona44)
Sounds very home like. A fun read of standard U.S. family life. Well done
October 9th, 2025 18:26 - The Priest (Spencer Wilhelm)
You are right in your author note it is a bit obscure
October 9th, 2025 18:17 - Spots (Maplespal)
It is funny that we do have some places where thinking is easier. A fun...
October 9th, 2025 18:12 - Flagging stamina leaves me starry eyed (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A fun read of bizarre, incongruous and satirical elements. Well done
October 9th, 2025 16:21 - Bleeding heartless (Pineapple_pizza018)
A poem of depression and giving up. Sad and dark it reads so well that the...
October 9th, 2025 16:16 - Free (Ms.divine)
A magnificent poem of cosmic proportions speaking of the stars and their...
October 9th, 2025 14:25 - In My Head (Insanely Hilarious)
Although social animals we also need our own space. A good write that...
October 9th, 2025 12:21 - A Nose for Fun (Matthew R. Callies)
A fun read and good for a laugh. I pick my friends but not noses.
October 9th, 2025 12:18 - Peace Promise (Orchidee)
Another great poem or should I say hymn. Feels like old times. Keep it...
October 9th, 2025 12:14 - A bed of pain (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
Another write of being dominated by a stronger force. Once again the...
October 9th, 2025 10:36 - A Hard Rain (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Good words about some good music both so closely related. Well done Kurt
October 9th, 2025 09:52 - Sweet Maria (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A poem of disappointment and inability to understand or accept other\'s...
October 9th, 2025 09:51 - FLOWERS / FLORES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A love song that uses the beauty of flowers to emphasize the beauty of...
October 9th, 2025 09:06 - Wheels in Heaven (A Homage to Neil Wainwright, Rest in Peace) (AuburnScribbler)
A wonderful tribute to a lost friend who is already missed. Nicely worded...
October 9th, 2025 09:01 - Bed of My Beloved (Tristan Robert Lange)
Tristan this could be called a murder love ballad it has a gothic flavor...
October 9th, 2025 08:18 - Your smile talks (William Hromada)
The human eye so attentive to the slightest nuance in the hundreds of...
October 9th, 2025 07:15 - Vows (RSM0812)
Symbols of love are all we have be they our actions or a pink rose. From...
October 9th, 2025 06:54 - ๐ฏ๐พ๐๐โฏ \"๐ฆ๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐๐ถ\" *โฑ๐โด๐ ๐ถ ๐ซ๐โฏ๐ โฌโดโด๐* (Keyara S Trotman)
I love the pairing of Krishna god of love with the second piece that talks...
October 9th, 2025 06:52 - The Day My Friend Helped Me (Bassie)
Friendships built on small acts. Genuine giving being part of friendship....
October 9th, 2025 06:48 - timeless timepiece (Arobot)
This poem has more than one level of interpretation but the first and...
October 9th, 2025 06:44 - the wonder of self-emptying (Arqios)
This is Buddhist roots in Taoism like. It speaks to the void and there is...
October 9th, 2025 06:41 - Bะฏฮฃฮฦฌฮ ฦฌฮKฮฃะฏ (MisKylie)
Not deserving is the term that comes to mind when reading this poem. It...
October 9th, 2025 04:25 - Echo Chamber (Gray0328)
So many symbols here there is a foreboding feel to this poem. Nicely...
October 9th, 2025 04:22 - NO FIXED ABODE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
We live in an individualistic world, economy, society with values weighed...
October 9th, 2025 04:18 - Journey with a Spouse (Rajatbagchi)
Not familiar with that style can not comment on it. The poem itself is a...
October 9th, 2025 04:15 - Beauty (Anthony Hanible)
Beauty seen through different eyes where we are often our harshest...
October 9th, 2025 04:13 - A Cosmic Gateway (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Questions that all those that believe in intelligent life on other planets...
October 9th, 2025 04:11 - Seminare (Charly Garcia) (Vogelfrei)
Burning love whether of this world or another. The format first chosen in...
October 9th, 2025 04:09 - Tis Vanity\'s (Spencer Wilhelm)
It is the beat of the meter in this poem that reproduces the pendulum and...
October 9th, 2025 04:04 - tired and troubled poetess met God (The breaktime monologue)
A poetic religious plea for people to set a new path. Well said
October 9th, 2025 04:03 - Flowing Forward (Fรญna Elara ๐ Petra Patrice)
Well put in good rhyme a message that is felt we do not like to focus on...
October 9th, 2025 03:58 - Lighter (NinjaGirl)
Here there is a metaphor that shines through. Some people are just too...
October 9th, 2025 03:55 - Sometimes She Just Cries (Neville)
Neville you have captured in verse a tempered spring where push and pull...
October 9th, 2025 03:52 - Blessed Life. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful image where reflected light still lights the way. Beautiful...
October 9th, 2025 03:44 - Eclipse (ThatsSoRaven)
Well worded this poem is sensuous, seductive and erotic nicely done
October 8th, 2025 21:20 - Rejection Reflection (NinjaGirl)
There are a few lines that I hate to hear,(we regret to inform you,...
October 8th, 2025 21:19 - Travels of the mind (Nicole Pritchard)
A poem that is very relatable. Dreams are even at their most extreme a...
October 8th, 2025 19:43 - scared (Lunarchloedip)
October 8th, 2025 16:59 - scared (Lunarchloedip)
Anything as powerful as love should be feared. A poem very well penned
October 8th, 2025 16:59 - Lost dreams (Noor fatima)
This is truly beautiful and so well worded. It reaches out beyond this...
October 8th, 2025 16:08 - Truth revealed (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
A poem of helplessness and hopelessness in a brutal situation. Hard to...
October 8th, 2025 16:03 - The Imposter (WinterBunny)
A poignant write of present day pressure to fit in and give up yourself...
October 8th, 2025 14:59 - Diagnosis: Doubt (Xalvazora)
A poem that begins with trust and belief and then doubt steps in and...
October 8th, 2025 14:55 - Narcissists Blues (Noel Selenio)
Forgiveness is a one way street from the forgiver expecting nothing in...
October 8th, 2025 14:52 - Fluffed thoughts (Maplespal)
This is a most wonderful poem of perspective and from my perspective I...
October 8th, 2025 14:50 - The Other One (M.E.M.)
A seductive poem that ends in discovery and destruction of relationships....
October 8th, 2025 14:46 - have you ever (MR.apocalypse)
Yes I have to be truthful and this poem is carefree view of this...
October 8th, 2025 14:44 - Divine messenger (Ms.divine)
Jung\'s anima and animus reflected in this poem where in biology we all...
October 8th, 2025 14:41
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