Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• another little girl (NinjaGirl) The world is sad sometimes and is full of pain for some. A dark poem about...
  January 23rd, 2025 12:28
• THE JOURNEY OF A THOUSAND MILES (Cerry) So true you only know if you try. A wonderful encouraging poem.
  January 23rd, 2025 11:34
• Sunny day (David A Liebermann) An expression of freedom and joy set in natural images. Well said
  January 23rd, 2025 11:32
• The Peel (Sebastian.) A sense of abuse calls out from this poem. It is vivid in its imagery and...
  January 23rd, 2025 11:29
• Kadoka (Kurt Philip Behm) If you don\'t know where you are going you\'ll end up where you don\'t...
  January 23rd, 2025 11:27
• Kadoka (Kurt Philip Behm) If you don\'t know where you are going you\'ll end up where you don\'t...
  January 23rd, 2025 11:27
• Satin Sheets (Tristan Robert Lange) What seems reality is a dream what seems the present only memories of the...
  January 23rd, 2025 10:51
• ~> I Was Born To Be Free! (Thad Wilk) Just as well. Cats are not known for their fidelity. Another fun read my...
  January 23rd, 2025 10:47
• Dart and Soul (Tom Dylan) Not only a good story with a moral that applies. Poets need a vast...
  January 23rd, 2025 08:25
• At The Coffee Shop (Tony36) Indeed tis so. The implication being there is no beyond if we will never...
  January 23rd, 2025 08:21
• Childhood\'s Corridor (Gray0328) The past a foundation set, yet the construction may be varied. A poem...
  January 23rd, 2025 07:24
• To Pam (RSM0812) A heartfelt write to an old lover that time has separated it flows with...
  January 23rd, 2025 07:21
• kindness (Jim56) More words of wisdom and peace come from this poem Jim. I find it...
  January 23rd, 2025 07:19
• intercourse isn’t everything (Demar Desu) And is that not sex? Foreplay maybe? But then there are the words that...
  January 23rd, 2025 06:09
• Heart\'s Halos (Salvia.S) How true that we control the universe, or at least how we see it with our...
  January 23rd, 2025 06:04
• Sensing (Cassie58) Haunting! This poem brings the reader in in the middle and leaves them...
  January 23rd, 2025 05:06
• Meek Musings (Orchidee) A great snippet from the sermon on the mount. To inherit the word would be...
  January 23rd, 2025 05:02
• Heaving Mountains on Still Days (Neville) Deeply philosophical and metaphoric this poem poses the question of...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:59
• On The Outside Looking In (Poetic Licence) I hear love in this poem not passion but love. When one loves someone it...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:51
• Life in a… (Doggerel Dave) I wonder it there is prejudice against blue cheese? Actually Dave I think...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:40
• Grasping (John Prophet) Man\'s search for answers to questions of meaning existential purpose....
  January 23rd, 2025 04:34
• not for lack of trying (Arqios) This poem speaks to me of the (what ifs) of life and those that might have...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:32
• Gustav Mahler Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Well done Gold this one is a wonderful tribute to that musical genius that...
  January 23rd, 2025 04:12
• B A T H (Gray0328) Rich with images it speaks in metaphor giving good advice. Very nice
  January 22nd, 2025 20:51
• Dear Fiendess (Mutley Ravishes) Now that\'s something tothink about. A metaphore indeed.
  January 22nd, 2025 20:49
• Young, but Once (Thomas W Case) A most beautiful image and thought
  January 22nd, 2025 17:24
• disappointment (NinjaGirl) Sad that past trauma can cause such damage. Good write
  January 22nd, 2025 14:29
• A Bit of Mischief for \"Flavour\"?! (Cheeky Missy) Once again the mention of food has raised my hunger. A fun read
  January 22nd, 2025 14:27
• A Cut (Tristan Robert Lange) I took this literally the first read then I wondered about metaphor. Many...
  January 22nd, 2025 14:18
• `~ Pugsley The Pug ~` - Shakespearean Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A fun dog tail. Gave me a smile
  January 22nd, 2025 14:10
• The Actress (Tony36) A deeper view of what is an artist. Lovely
  January 22nd, 2025 11:23
• Pronunciation (Demar Desu) A poem that makes one think and rethink. Nicely done
  January 22nd, 2025 09:13
• Value of Gifts (Poetic Licence) Nataiella a great message and also a good piece of advice set in poem....
  January 22nd, 2025 09:08
• cat love (Jim56) Love knows no time and animals are more sincere than people. Nicely done...
  January 22nd, 2025 07:31
• Keep Your Head Up (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A poem of reassurance and hope. Nicely stated
  January 22nd, 2025 07:29
• Soul (Teddy.15) Eerie and haunting this poem speaks with darkness and a sense of horror....
  January 22nd, 2025 05:09
• Pleasant Praise (Orchidee) Once again you have written a hymn of praise and acknowledgement of...
  January 22nd, 2025 04:30
• LIMERICKS 137, & 138 (Michael Edwards) Clever word usage in the first broke the ice and the careful use of a...
  January 22nd, 2025 04:28
• looking glass (Arqios) A splendid metaphor that has many levels the literal, the meta and the...
  January 22nd, 2025 04:19
• Bleeding Ink (NinjaGirl) Past trauma has sullied the page and turning it only finds it has blead...
  January 22nd, 2025 04:11
• My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60) Nature recaharges our batteries if we allow it to do so. A very peaceful...
  January 22nd, 2025 04:05
• Magical Melody, Melancholic Remedy (Salvia.S) A beautiful poem about the dream state absolutely wonderful encapsulating...
  January 21st, 2025 20:53
• The Age of the Blissfully Ignorant (Gray0328) Many great lines in this poem and unfortunatly all too true.
  January 21st, 2025 18:07
• The Pull of the Streets (Thomas W Case) A tale of the hard life and it setteling in. The imagery is very well dond...
  January 21st, 2025 14:37
• ~> The Mona Lisa CATastrophy! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A bit of catty humor hear or at least is seems so for the cat. Wrote a...
  January 21st, 2025 13:07
• Dust and Joy (Rebellion_in_sanity) A beautiful write and the message deserves the Fave
  January 21st, 2025 09:15
• Freezing (RSM0812) Frozen images play in this winter wonderland. Descriptive to say the least
  January 21st, 2025 08:42
• expectations causing depression (Demar Desu) A mind teaser this haiku or maybe senryu makes one think
  January 21st, 2025 08:41
• writing therapy (Jim56) This one struck close to the heart Jim a true and heart felt write
  January 21st, 2025 08:39
• Grief (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I loved this piece it echos with rhyme and near rhyme in a pros style that...
  January 21st, 2025 08:37
• Descent in D Minor (Tristan Robert Lange) You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The...
  January 21st, 2025 08:34
• The Old Neighborhood (Tony36) Perpetual change society\'s menace and though memories may distort they...
  January 21st, 2025 08:30
• ( T S A ) if pigs could fly (Arqios) Loved the pig\'s tail and the note which was very informative and fun. A...
  January 21st, 2025 08:01
• Wind Chime Tree (Cassie58) This poem carries with it the reader. Very well written it pulls the...
  January 21st, 2025 05:06
• An Ode to the Dreamer (Senryu) (Teddy.15) Another lovely senryu of a most positive nature to begin the day. Dream on...
  January 21st, 2025 04:14
• Medusa Rattle (Mutley Ravishes) You made me smile with this one and that deserves a Fave. Humor in poetry...
  January 21st, 2025 04:08
• From Mourning To Joy (Orchidee) This one sings with metaphor and a sense of future brightness lovely Orchi
  January 21st, 2025 04:02
• Live For Today. (Goldfinch60) A most interesting take on the past. Nicely written with a positive view...
  January 21st, 2025 03:58
• BLUE (Nephilim56) Separation and hope or reunion themes in this poem that is written in good...
  January 20th, 2025 17:01
• It is it (Maplespal) Destiny? Well could be then there are no guilty. Loved the poem a great...
  January 20th, 2025 13:04
• choice? (NinjaGirl) A matter of definitions, happieness may not be an immediate choice but as...
  January 20th, 2025 13:01
• I\'m sticking with you, poetry (Tom Dylan) Here here! I\'ll vote for that. I love the way that you have personalized...
  January 20th, 2025 10:35
• Just One Kiss ~* - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A pledge of devotion ignited from the spark of passion. Lovely
  January 20th, 2025 10:31
• Inauguration Day (Tristan Robert Lange) Several times in history such events have happened and with differing...
  January 20th, 2025 10:29
• Gypsy Fate (RSM0812) A fun and fanciful read. Very nicely done
  January 20th, 2025 08:58
• natures wonder (Jim56) Your poems of nature are always refreshing. Good write Jim
  January 20th, 2025 08:56
• The Visitor (Tony36) A fun read with the last line I thought that Jeff would say he had a...
  January 20th, 2025 08:55
• It\'s Called...Yes, What, Precisely? (Cheeky Missy) The beauty of the first a plea of the second resolved in the third a...
  January 20th, 2025 06:27
• Colourful Cloudy Reflections (Salvia.S) Creative in its use of color and emotion this poem reads smoothly and in...
  January 20th, 2025 06:11
• A Bartender\'s Gift (Gray0328) Many great lines and metaphors in this poem of spilt drunken swill a...
  January 20th, 2025 05:57
• Edgar Allan : Ravenous Poe, 216 years on (Arqios) Indeed he was apoet of darkness that left us an image who\'s shadow in the...
  January 20th, 2025 05:53
• Let’s run away (Liana🦋) This poem carries a carefree and wistful feel a desire to let the wind...
  January 20th, 2025 04:48
• EN PLEIN AIR (Michael Edwards) As per usual clever in concept and wording. Love your work Michael
  January 20th, 2025 04:44
• Wait a While (Orchidee) A comforting poem one of solace and belief. Lovely
  January 20th, 2025 04:41
• bad dreams (Demar Desu) I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something...
  January 20th, 2025 04:39
• My Very Own Nevada (Teddy.15) You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and...
  January 20th, 2025 04:33
• Appetite For Identification (Mutley Ravishes) Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions...
  January 20th, 2025 04:27
• Seventies Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Love on into the sunset a happy ending to an old western movie. A...
  January 20th, 2025 04:24
• Foolish Love (Dan Williams) Regrets echo in this poem time can not be reset and life goes on. There...
  January 20th, 2025 04:20
• Shortcut (NinjaGirl) If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind...
  January 19th, 2025 17:11
• Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case) A different Orpheus and in this metaphor one is drug to the underworld....
  January 19th, 2025 13:30
• Magical Melody, Melancholic Remedy (Salvia.S) Much joy is derived from our thoughts, wishes, fantasies and dreams. Very...
  January 19th, 2025 10:44
• Puerto Rico! (Demar Desu) This one requires a great deal of thought.
  January 19th, 2025 10:33
• My Inner Inhibitions (ADarkerMind) Metaphor upon metaphor in this poem with great images and lines \"as cold...
  January 19th, 2025 10:31
• ~> Your Local News Reporter! (Thad Wilk) I\'m so glad that no pigeons were harmed. A most fun read and I hate bird...
  January 19th, 2025 10:18
• The Battle (Tony36) Life is a battle and one we are forced to fight every day. It is hard to...
  January 19th, 2025 10:10
• unexpected snowfall (Tristan Robert Lange) Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing...
  January 19th, 2025 08:00
• Melting Snow (Cassie58) Cassie you have outdone yourself with this write. It beams with poetic...
  January 19th, 2025 07:56
• With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa.... (Cheeky Missy) I thought at first it was the topic and imagry but then realized that...
  January 19th, 2025 07:52
• twinkling stars (Jim56) A poem that takes me back to when we could see the stars. With pollution...
  January 19th, 2025 07:49
• Sunday School Afternoons (Neville) This poem captured the nostalgia of the past put in the perspective of the...
  January 19th, 2025 05:16
• An impossible Quest (Teddy.15) Live like love has many definitions. We can exist without love but is that...
  January 19th, 2025 05:12
• Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\" (Cheeky Missy) Years ago had a glass coke bottle thrown at and bounce off my windshild...
  January 19th, 2025 05:07
• The Calm (RSM0812) The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this...
  January 19th, 2025 05:00
• new day (Arqios) The duality involved in this haiku is amazing itself. So few words in a...
  January 19th, 2025 04:48
• Walking By My River Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Andy you have outdone yourself with this sonnet. It is one of my favorites...
  January 19th, 2025 04:26
• Buffering (Mutley Ravishes) Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
  January 18th, 2025 20:37
• Your pictured view (Maplespal) Reminders often bring sadness. Few greater reminders than a picture. A sad...
  January 18th, 2025 20:35
• f words (NinjaGirl) Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
  January 18th, 2025 15:26
• Wild Horses (Teddy.15) A beautiful thought written wonderfully with great verse.
  January 18th, 2025 14:10