Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• I\'m Torn Betwixt What, Eh? (Cheeky Missy) Beautiful loved the included dialect and accent. Very nicely done.
  August 17th, 2024 17:26
• Do it yourself Reparations (EvenwheniLie) Nicely written. An emphasis on what we lack.
  August 17th, 2024 16:15
• Statuesque Statuette Statue (Beatrix M) Beautifully written with great word choice. Loved it
  August 17th, 2024 16:14
• Wanderers (Sami mulaj) I love how you have left the identity of these invaders vague and unknown....
  August 17th, 2024 16:12
• Every Glide (Mark The Phenomenon) Nicely written a tribute to this noble bird.
  August 17th, 2024 16:09
• Saudi Arabia (Thepoetman1234) Quite a well painted description of the place. Nice word choice
  August 17th, 2024 16:07
• Independence (Shanzah) Mixed feeling come through in this poem of past loss and nostalgia.
  August 17th, 2024 13:48
• Moon (John Prophet) The moon is vital to what we know as earth. Nicely written
  August 17th, 2024 13:47
• I leave buying food at the market to the spouse... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) An interesting gathering of history in this piece of poetry
  August 17th, 2024 13:45
• CAMPUS COLOURS AT SJ✨ (ChrisLyn🕊) A most interesting use of colors to express the intent of the poem.
  August 17th, 2024 13:42
• Cosplay hiring (Arial) A most interesting view of things. Nicely done
  August 17th, 2024 13:39
• Absence (Blossompayal) The other side of love and one might say its shadow are the darkness left...
  August 17th, 2024 13:38
• Waist or Waste? (AuburnScribbler) So true a second is harder than first. A play on words and a question,...
  August 17th, 2024 13:35
• The soul that exists (Justina) Enigmatic words and phrases make this poem worth pondering. Nicely said.
  August 17th, 2024 12:54
• of love (Fire_fly) Loved your first line \"Mind of a poet heart of stone\" Very nice
  August 17th, 2024 12:52
• Goner (Zhangyuyouyu) Like anyone that receives not reward for what they have done the response...
  August 17th, 2024 12:49
• The Circle Game (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Three messages are they linked? Hypocrisy in a form or at least actions...
  August 17th, 2024 12:46
• Go Figure, Eight (MendedFences27) Taoist in nature this looks at both sides. Nicely stated.
  August 17th, 2024 12:31
• I\'m Dehydrated (Hanible) A great metaphor and nicely done
  August 17th, 2024 09:28
• ~> Once Upon A Dream (Thad Wilk) A plea for love to be returned powerfully stated.
  August 17th, 2024 09:26
• Rain flickers outside the window (Vsevolod Fomin) Loved the line that sun changes places with the moon as it literally does...
  August 17th, 2024 09:15
• Mask (Thoughtless) Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a...
  August 17th, 2024 09:11
• Nobody\'s Perfect (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Somewhat cryptic and enigmatic making for a deep read. Nice
  August 17th, 2024 09:09
• Alone (Tony36) Sad but can be looked at as a new start. Looking back leads one to trip....
  August 17th, 2024 09:08
• Totem (Lorenz) A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style....
  August 17th, 2024 09:06
• Puppy - Part 2 (Randyjohnson71) Man\'s best friend dogs are special and have amazing qualities. Loved it.
  August 17th, 2024 09:04
• The Beat & Saint-Tropez (Maplespal) Beautiful images and memories of beautiful places. Lovely
  August 17th, 2024 09:02
• BUILDING THE NATION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Nicely written and worded.
  August 17th, 2024 09:00
• wonderful nature (Jim56) Loved the colors and images of nature in this poem. Lovely
  August 17th, 2024 08:58
• The Last Goodbye (Teddy.15) And so it is after such moments we have to pick up and carry on. I...
  August 17th, 2024 08:57
• Blessing of Peace (Orchidee) Thanks for the blessing Orchi Loved this piece (peace)
  August 17th, 2024 07:21
• Making Green & Reflex (Neville) Well Neville creative, imaginative loved the blend of colors and the...
  August 17th, 2024 07:19
• Toast (Mutley Ravishes) Lovely metaphor set in such poetic lines. Very creative and well enjoyed...
  August 17th, 2024 07:16
• The Unseen Ladder (Fanita530) Unfortunately nepotism is the rule in most all societies. That is why...
  August 17th, 2024 07:15
• Iconic Love Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful message and emotion expressed here Bold simply lovely
  August 17th, 2024 07:12
• When A Man Cries (Garth Rakumakoe) Full of emotion this poem breaths the norms of society on its expression....
  August 17th, 2024 07:11
• At the Bottom, In the Pit (Dan Williams) Gluttony, greed a human quality no other animals kill more than they need...
  August 17th, 2024 07:08
• Infinite Light (RefugeInRain) Motivating, interesting, inspirational.
  August 16th, 2024 20:54
• E.L.V.I.R.A. (Elvira Sith) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Interesting makes one think
  August 16th, 2024 20:52
• A gentle presence (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ) Macenz a beautiful picture you paint in poetic words. Peaceful and calm a...
  August 16th, 2024 19:14
• Before off you go flying (Emperor) Fear of loss pervades many relationships. Say the words.
  August 16th, 2024 18:29
• Won\'t call it love (Alan R) A beautiful take on love to not call it such and I agree.
  August 16th, 2024 18:28
• Redmarsh (Kenny O\'Donnell) A sense of sadness and resignation fills this poem. Lovely wording.
  August 16th, 2024 18:26
• If I were a Tree; Beyoncé re-write (Brimelow) Beautiful wishes and desires become the tree.
  August 16th, 2024 18:25
• the curse of aphrodite (Wyster) A poem of emotion but one to ponder as well. Nicely said
  August 16th, 2024 18:23
• summer (Jon Nakapalau) A thought beautifully stated. Loved it.
  August 16th, 2024 18:21
• World Of The Wicked (Mark The Phenomenon) Bad turned good and a happy ending. Nicely penned
  August 16th, 2024 18:20
• I carry my tear everywhere (Sami mulaj) Beautiful and so poetically stated. Loved it.
  August 16th, 2024 18:18
• Firth of the Clyde (Gray0328) Stunning images painted so poetically. A vision in this poem. Very nicely...
  August 16th, 2024 18:17
• Joy (Annonymouswonder) Faith is a powerful thing. Sounds like a prayer. Nicely said
  August 16th, 2024 18:15
• Loch Lomond (Xiaobai Yulan) A body of water can be beautiful, soft, giving, and very feminine. Loved...
  August 16th, 2024 18:13
• You Want To Talk Ok Let\'s Talk (Hanible) Very conversational and personal. Nicely done.
  August 16th, 2024 18:10
• Until Saved (Kurt Philip Behm) This seems quite biblical based. The Word seems reference to God as \"in...
  August 16th, 2024 18:09
• Poets & Words (Saleh Ben Saleh) Loved the line \"And no drought is harsh enough, to dry a poets well.\"...
  August 16th, 2024 18:05
• When The Moon Glistened in Blood (Petrichor of Love) Violently malevolent with wicked images and spectral visions. Most...
  August 16th, 2024 18:03
• Light (MendedFences27) Indeed we are the sun shines on all. Impartiality in the highest sense. A...
  August 16th, 2024 09:00
• Rose of Reminiscence (Bliss) So wonderfully worded and metaphoric it pulls at the heart. Very nice
  August 16th, 2024 08:48
• ~> On This Moonlit Beach, (Thad Wilk) Sweet and romantic. Nicely penned.
  August 16th, 2024 08:30
• Towards a happy world 🙂✌ (Lakshya) A most beautiful sentiment so well expressed in metaphor.
  August 16th, 2024 08:00
• Closed and Clothed (Mya) Eyes closed keep all that we don\'t want to see seem not real of there. I...
  August 16th, 2024 07:59
• When Evil Knocks (Anti-establishment) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I hear the anger and resentment in this poem that cries out against the...
  August 16th, 2024 07:57
• I love the way she sleeps (Vsevolod Fomin) It does ring with music and I can hear the voice singing the sad refrain....
  August 16th, 2024 07:43
• Sitting in the dock (Tony36) A most beautiful vision of places I\'ve been nostalgia and feelings of...
  August 16th, 2024 07:41
• A series in order: Extended Family, By the Old Ones, Succubus, and finally a short story, Threesome. (Thoughtless) Sexual, sensual, vivid this write is an expression of sex from different...
  August 16th, 2024 06:38
• TV Judge (AuburnScribbler) The power of News and TV a one way conversation that molds public opinion...
  August 16th, 2024 06:35
• Pinocchio, deep in thought (Teddy.15) That might have made me a little more than what could be taken in. A fun...
  August 16th, 2024 05:28
• Water, then Fire (Mutley Ravishes) That sword of wisdom is not seen often these days. Very nicely written I...
  August 16th, 2024 05:23
• Why Women Weren’t Safe (Dev Parth) A wonderful write in more than one way. The message itself is great but...
  August 16th, 2024 05:20
• plants need water (Jim56) Yes indeed they do. A fun read that speaks the truth. Well written in good...
  August 16th, 2024 05:17
• Lowered (Maplespal) Sad and even heart rending this poem shows devotion and love of one lost....
  August 16th, 2024 05:16
• On Losing Weight (Amogelang Marope) Well written and I take it a face value but there could be a metaphor here...
  August 16th, 2024 05:14
• Pit (2781) I hear the warning and it seems that it is loud and ferocious. Great...
  August 16th, 2024 05:12
• No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves (Neville) Soft words for a soft topic and beautiful as down feathers they fall upon...
  August 16th, 2024 05:10
• IBERIBE ON THE STREETS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Not gay myself I appreciate your views as I do all.
  August 16th, 2024 05:06
• Childlike Character (Orchidee) A message that this time period needs to hear. Well written Orchi.
  August 16th, 2024 05:05
• The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60) I remember those days too and they were so much quieter, more neighborly,...
  August 16th, 2024 05:03
• Tigers Tearing (Dan Williams) Dan this reads clearly and is full of vivid images. As you asked I will...
  August 16th, 2024 04:59
• This land is my land (EvenwheniLie) An old topic put in a most innovative and new form. Loved the rhyming with...
  August 16th, 2024 04:53
• Goodbye, Pops (Cocamedo) A great first person form in this moving write. Fear of loss of someone...
  August 16th, 2024 04:51
• Un-certainty (Rust) Uncertainty breeds fear and certainty breeds courage. Unfortunately...
  August 16th, 2024 04:49
• Old Men of Steel (Parisab) A strong message sent to which I agree. \"Junk of trash which one to...
  August 16th, 2024 04:12
• Hello? (Beatrixx89) A well written apology but it appears to no avail. Nicely written
  August 15th, 2024 19:55
• An Ode to Heartache (Tristan Robert Lange) Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire...
  August 15th, 2024 19:53
• Dot dot dot, and in other news devil\'s advocate claims Teflon Trump (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I\'ll take this to mean that your not voting for Trump. Interesting read....
  August 15th, 2024 15:47
• O Love (Hanible) A marriage proposal? Cute and nice.
  August 15th, 2024 15:43
• My Best Dude!!! (O.G. Tone) A sad poem of having nothing but become hopeful. Nicely done.
  August 15th, 2024 15:09
• Hypervigilance (FallingAwake2) Paranoia follows suspicion and how can one not be suspicious? A raw and...
  August 15th, 2024 12:56
• The Beach (Thepoetman1234) A fun read full of great images
  August 15th, 2024 12:31
• Lexer (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Interesting a novel in rhyme. Liked it
  August 15th, 2024 12:30
• Programmed (CST) We are all programed in how we see things, buy things, believe in things,...
  August 15th, 2024 12:29
• Journey (MattColombo) Company is an important item to humans as social animals. Nice write
  August 15th, 2024 12:27
• Letsile Tebogo – Pride of Botswana (Amogelang Marope) A beautiful tribute.
  August 15th, 2024 10:28
• Overr1de (AuburnScribbler) A short poem that speaks to reactions to the odd. Well done
  August 15th, 2024 10:18
• ~> A Picnic To Remember (Thad Wilk) Sweet and cute. Very nice
  August 15th, 2024 10:16
• The Flames of Love (MendedFences27) Passions fires often burn hot and fast burning out in a hurry. Nicely...
  August 15th, 2024 10:14
• Night sky 🌃☁ (Lakshya) Lovely! A most vivid description with such nice images.
  August 15th, 2024 10:12
• Locked In (Kurt Philip Behm) we often make ourselves prisoners by our own actions. Nicely written is...
  August 15th, 2024 10:11
• Deep Affection (Mark The Phenomenon) A love poem nicely written
  August 15th, 2024 10:07
• Faded Moon (EmotionsOnwhitepaper) Memories can be painful and sad. Nicely written
  August 15th, 2024 10:06
• The Anonymous Daughter (Serene) Never one\'s fault for being who you are. Vivid and graphic powerfully...
  August 15th, 2024 10:04