Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• If Looks Could Kill (Neville) Ah Neville you have left me with no clue as to who was found and who was...
  August 19th, 2024 16:47
• I am drowning, my dear, in seas of fire.... (Katdream) There is no fire as hot as that of emotion and no executioner as skilled...
  August 19th, 2024 15:38
• Time (NinjaGirl) Now there is something to puzzle about and waste 10 minutes of the half of...
  August 19th, 2024 14:44
• Lael (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A continuing saga of life and love. Nicely worded
  August 19th, 2024 14:43
• Black Void (DLewis88) So nicely worded this poem of metaphor takes one into the depths of life...
  August 19th, 2024 14:41
• Steadfast Into Another World (ADarkerMind) Marked with symbolism this poem is a deeper read. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2024 14:39
• Learn (Bella Shepard) Words of wisdom fill this poem. In its brevity it encompasses all past...
  August 19th, 2024 14:38
• Oh, Pony, Oh, Pony, Down Millgate (AuburnScribbler) A beautiful write about being who you are and enjoying it. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2024 14:36
• Pilot of my dreams (Domilla) A romance with a dream. Very nice
  August 19th, 2024 14:34
• The Joy of Losing Me (Gray0328) Lovely nature we are a part of and need to loose our self in to...
  August 19th, 2024 14:32
• Echo (Arial) A great poem of a search for someone with a common interest.
  August 19th, 2024 11:01
• Dapple and Down (Thomas W Case) Great word choice in this poem loved it.
  August 19th, 2024 11:00
• Extra Strength (Beatrixx89) So well said to be kind to oneself we all deserve it. Lovely
  August 19th, 2024 10:13
• Him (Blossompayal) A nice pledge of love.
  August 19th, 2024 10:11
• She Waits (Kurt Philip Behm) Both lovely cleverly poetic in image and rhyme. A sense of darkness with...
  August 19th, 2024 10:09
• Motherly love❤ (Lakshya) A beautiful picture and loving thought. Lovely
  August 19th, 2024 10:06
• ~. The Old Timer .~ (Thad Wilk) Love story poems, especially when they are humorous or impart a message....
  August 19th, 2024 08:44
• Work of art (Bird In Red) This is a lovely poem so creatively using elements of art and nature to...
  August 19th, 2024 08:08
• DIFFERENT (Nephilim56) Very nice lines in this beautiful and thought provoking poem. Lovely
  August 19th, 2024 08:06
• Traveller (Alan R) Easily forgotten is not what one wants in a relationship. Feeling homeless...
  August 19th, 2024 08:05
• Conning the Bafflements: a Triple Triolet (Paul W Conway) Disorientation and confusion upon awakening. Expressed over and over a...
  August 19th, 2024 08:03
• 1990 ford laser (Carpe4diem) Sad and one might say tragic. The venting may help some but won\'t bring...
  August 19th, 2024 08:00
• Lost (Tony36) We all got to do what we have to do. There are feelings of abuse and...
  August 19th, 2024 07:55
• The Scalpel Saga... (Kwrites) Ah the labor to pay one\'s dues and enter the trade. It is not always what...
  August 19th, 2024 07:53
• Early Morning Again (Thoughtless) A fitting tribute to the necessaries of a common day. Nicely written with...
  August 19th, 2024 07:51
• Berry love (Rust) Romantic, sweet and cute. It smells of berries
  August 19th, 2024 07:49
• Go For It (13LaurenD) perseverance, confidence and effort. a beautiful and inspiriting write.
  August 19th, 2024 07:48
• Poet (Kevin Michael Bloor) Well said for all poets. Loved this piece.
  August 19th, 2024 06:01
• The Unfinished House of Stone (Maplespal) A fun read and different indeed. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2024 05:59
• when love is real (Jim56) So true the difference between a passion and a love is that the latter...
  August 19th, 2024 05:57
• PENTECOST SUNDAY IN OWO [5/6/2022] (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Beautiful words in commemoration of a heinous act.
  August 19th, 2024 05:56
• What to do? (2781) Such a nice parallel you draw here. Saying one is a Christian and being...
  August 19th, 2024 05:54
• Brown Leather Jacket (Cocamedo) Nostalgic, sadly sweet, very nicely written.
  August 19th, 2024 05:51
• Abraham’s Dream: Our Future (Framed Mirror) Reassuring words nicely written from one of faith. Lovely
  August 19th, 2024 05:49
• No One Knows (Kman Pumpkin King28) Hidden pain that one chooses not to air. Held inside as a destructive...
  August 19th, 2024 05:48
• GATHERING WONDER (Bobby O) Oh Bobby you have hit upon a neglected topic. Wonder is what lies beneath...
  August 19th, 2024 05:43
• Travelling Tales (Orchidee) A departure from the classical approach to the more popular. A nice and...
  August 19th, 2024 05:39
• On Wednesdays Wear Pink with Chagrin (Cheeky Missy) Wow! So classical and the meter that runs through this piece that deserves...
  August 19th, 2024 05:37
• friends (Sheta) A lovely tribute it is wonderful to have a friend that has your back. Some...
  August 19th, 2024 05:34
• A Man Made Prison (J.Edse) Feelings that many share this poem drips with s sense of purposelessness,...
  August 19th, 2024 05:28
• Infinity (Sunshine777) A statement of love and pledge of friendship. Lovely
  August 19th, 2024 05:25
• ink stains hurt brains (MR.apocalypse) A thought provoking write. Philosophical and close to the heart. Loved it.
  August 19th, 2024 05:24
• Heal The Broken (Annemarie) A plea for opening up so well rhymed and metered. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2024 05:19
• Trumpeting future mercurial villain of history (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Full of historical allegory this piece outlines a figure loved by some and...
  August 19th, 2024 05:18
• Three Things. (Goldfinch60) A person with those three things shines like the sun raining joy and...
  August 19th, 2024 05:08
• Yet Another What If (Dan Williams) Questions of a lost? past relationship. Maybe not lost in that so much...
  August 19th, 2024 05:05
• Falkirk Street (Mark The Phenomenon) Nostalgia and the past a bit of darkness in this poem. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2024 17:44
• strange world that waits and watches (Serialseductress) Time measured by a burnt cigarette a great line. The poem carries a heavy...
  August 18th, 2024 17:42
• Europe Makes Me Nostalgic (A Boy With Roses) Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the...
  August 18th, 2024 17:38
• Convenience (Sassy Lou) Standing up for yourself the first step in self esteem well expressed
  August 18th, 2024 16:05
• Are poets mad ? (Sami mulaj) Nicely worded and too close to true to admit. Loved it
  August 18th, 2024 15:58
• Flames (Beatrixx89) Satanically seductive and alluring nicely written
  August 18th, 2024 15:57
• Aubade (Rrodriguez) Amazingly done with beauty and great imagery
  August 18th, 2024 15:56
• contemplation of a broken heart (Anna_x_life) Angst, existential crisis, confusion and just plain being a teen. Nice
  August 18th, 2024 13:02
• Grant Me Death, O Tyrant (Prasun Goswami) Quite the speech in classical form. It seems something to shouted at the...
  August 18th, 2024 12:59
• The Folklores of Her Beauty (Petrichor of Love) Many beautiful lines in this poem as well as great allegories.
  August 18th, 2024 12:57
• Pass to Learn (MattColombo) A good message to send and sent in poetic form Very nice
  August 18th, 2024 12:55
• 10 Rupees (Gaurav Gurung) Innocence spawns false expectations and distorted values not only in money...
  August 18th, 2024 12:53
• countdown (Fire_fly) Clever and numerological to say the least. A most fun read
  August 18th, 2024 12:50
• Beyond Sleep (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) So much lurks in the shadows of this monument to Morpheus and possibly...
  August 18th, 2024 12:46
• The universal (Lorenz) A write that gives pause and requires more than one reading and even then...
  August 18th, 2024 12:40
• Snake vs man (Lakshya) The title tells it all. And so the metaphor applies to all of us. Nice
  August 18th, 2024 12:38
• It all depends on your point of view (Hzugman) A fun read that gave me a smile and chuckle. Lovely
  August 18th, 2024 12:37
• A mighty ship, Titanic (Saleh Ben Saleh) Not sure if I should call this a tribute but at least a memory now buried...
  August 18th, 2024 12:36
• Again? (13LaurenD) Empowerment expressed in this nicely written poem.
  August 18th, 2024 12:32
• Early Morning Thoughts (Thoughtless) Fears, admonitions, hope all contained in this piece nicely written
  August 18th, 2024 12:30
• I miss you (SonamThago) Sad and melancholic it rings with a longing for the past. Lovely
  August 18th, 2024 12:28
• a short poem (Xqw) Short and sweet it runs in rhythm and rhyme
  August 18th, 2024 12:16
• Musical Chase (Tony36) Deeper notes than music fill this sheet and it may apply to life itself....
  August 18th, 2024 07:08
• Those Cyclists on the Road (AuburnScribbler) When younger I used to cycle a great deal and enjoyed it. As to this poem...
  August 18th, 2024 07:06
• Curse of the runaways (Domilla) Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the...
  August 18th, 2024 07:04
• The Role of Ethics (Gray0328) A most beautiful message stated eloquently and in good poetic verse
  August 18th, 2024 07:00
• Cushion, The Wait, & The Tea (Maplespal) I have know such people that continue to set the table for two after one...
  August 18th, 2024 06:59
• my wish (Jim56) A beautiful wish, hope, desire. Nicely said in rhyme.
  August 18th, 2024 06:56
• my poem (Justina) Each of us are our own poem in vivo. Nicely stated in this piece.
  August 18th, 2024 06:52
• K.Y.L.A.T.E.K. (Dr.:Kyla~Tek) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) The last word caught me by surprise sending a message. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2024 06:50
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) A painting in words beautiful and set with a dusty feeling of having been...
  August 18th, 2024 06:49
• The department of youth (2781) Prophesy of doom on a Sunday no less. Hope next week brings a brighter...
  August 18th, 2024 06:47
• The Great Debate (Cocamedo) A clever and fun read well written.
  August 18th, 2024 06:45
• PAINFUL TRANSITION I (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Sad and dark this tribute reflects concerns about such actions.
  August 18th, 2024 06:43
• i will dance.. (NafisaSB) A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
  August 18th, 2024 06:41
• My Dearest Sisters (Dev Parth) A tribute to a sister and all that she means present and past nicely...
  August 18th, 2024 06:39
• I saw her (Bonnie) A poem of sadness and loss well written
  August 18th, 2024 06:38
• ode to death (Thomas3535) A most beautiful description in vivid images of death at her finest. Great...
  August 18th, 2024 06:35
• You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville) A border terrorist, is that like a border collie? You always get me...
  August 18th, 2024 06:33
• Honesty In A World Full Of Lies (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) So true modern technology has a trade off convenience for disease, shorter...
  August 18th, 2024 06:28
• to suffer just to suffer (MR.apocalypse) Cleverly worded this is so true and speaks to the hypocrisy of those that...
  August 18th, 2024 06:25
• The Serpent’s Retainer (Mutley Ravishes) Wise, metaphoric, entertaining and what else could you want.
  August 18th, 2024 06:22
• Invisible (Juliette72) This is tragic and like a punch to the gut knocks the wind out of any...
  August 18th, 2024 06:21
• () Courage to say what is inside is the key to communication and...
  August 18th, 2024 06:17
• Life (Rhmn_7) A great message to this poem that carries through to the end. Nicely...
  August 18th, 2024 06:15
• An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15) Sunday, not so much lazy day but rather choice day. A feeling of freedom...
  August 18th, 2024 06:11
• Time flies forward (Vsevolod Fomin) A beautiful song here. It takes me through the phases of the day to the...
  August 18th, 2024 05:31
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) This sounds a lot like my old Sunday school songs of years gone by. I know...
  August 18th, 2024 05:21
• Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60) True Gold that many do not enunciate and some with poor diction leave only...
  August 18th, 2024 05:18
• knight (Sheta) There is more meaning behind these words. Set in fantasy is seems to apply...
  August 18th, 2024 05:08
• Would Be Wordsmith (Dan Williams) Very nicely written the thoughts of a poet who is writing to convey a...
  August 18th, 2024 04:59
• Summer of 24 (Jasmine Swift) Romantic and happy is the mood. Nicely written.
  August 17th, 2024 19:35
• The Joy of Simply Being (Gray0328) A most interesting read bringing memories of playing with toy trains and...
  August 17th, 2024 18:08
• Rage reclaimed (Natalie Heisey) Very nicely written with excellent rhyme and meter
  August 17th, 2024 18:06