Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Too Young II (Continued) (Tkatie118)
So well written in old style this poem speaks poorly of public opinion....
October 15th, 2025 10:22 - Sunrise (Natalie Heisey)
Bright and positive this poem extols the virtues of love, not just...
October 15th, 2025 10:13 - The Garden (RSM0812)
A favorite retreat in the mind ideal in every way, beautiful and peaceful...
October 15th, 2025 10:10 - Maleware stikes Matthew... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Quite the story. Forgiveness is a favorite topic and one for my next poem....
October 15th, 2025 10:08 - Polterzeitgeists (Tristan Robert Lange)
There are those that look for the defect and then those that look for the...
October 15th, 2025 10:03 - Pursued By A Poem (DesertWords)
Indeed tis so true. A warry and timid beast that hides in the shadows is...
October 15th, 2025 07:03 - The Fierce Decree (Friendship)
A poem of resolution and strength vowing to rely on one\'s own intuition...
October 15th, 2025 06:58 - kindness (Jim56)
Nicely written with a wonderful message Jim. Yes kindness costs nothing...
October 15th, 2025 06:54 - The Music of Our Love (Malcolm Gladwin)
Romantic and with inspired awe and reverence. Nicely written
October 15th, 2025 06:51 - Home In Heaven (Ajon4wheels)
A poetic write to one missed and gone. It idolizes the departed with...
October 15th, 2025 06:47 - Title (Keyara S Trotman)
Anger noted, there is a carefree attitude to this and a matter of fact...
October 15th, 2025 06:44 - You Calm Me (William Hromada)
A proclamation of worth and value placed in another. It may be called a...
October 15th, 2025 06:42 - but words keep rising... (Arqios)
Can a word be taken back once uttered, a thought retracted from the mind...
October 15th, 2025 06:39 - Dusk until dawn (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
Depression a terrible foe it commits war crimes. A wonderful write that...
October 15th, 2025 05:18 - The secret of life (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Such an important message sent in a lovely way. It speaks the truth....
October 15th, 2025 04:05 - UPON THE MORN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Romantic with warm images and images of one loved. Nicely done
October 15th, 2025 04:03 - A mad interlude (Orchidee)
The saga is a cliff hanger and ya got me on the edge of my seat don\'t...
October 15th, 2025 04:00 - Much Faster (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I remember that story as a child when I had the book and my mother used to...
October 15th, 2025 03:58 - Difficult (Meagan Adelle)
A clever approach to wording makes this poem fun to read as it has a...
October 15th, 2025 03:55 - That Four Letter Word. (Goldfinch60)
A fun read Gold yet there are many that never get to retire we just move...
October 15th, 2025 03:52 - It\'s your Birthday! (Rajatbagchi)
Cute and encouraging of one to take a day off and treat themselves well on...
October 15th, 2025 03:47 - The Dandelion (Kayla Jackson)
A poem that makes one think. Nicely penned
October 15th, 2025 03:44 - Stuck (Emery Walker)
Lake like a mirror shows our reflection and here the message is should we...
October 14th, 2025 19:44 - Servitude (Doggerel Dave)
Dave I can\'t disagree that there are many poor folks working for wages...
October 14th, 2025 19:41 - Arnold Miller (MKS)
Reminds me of the song (He stopped loving her today) by George Jones. A...
October 14th, 2025 18:26 - Fame (DLewis88)
Everything has its ups and downs money and fame are no different and what...
October 14th, 2025 18:22 - What I Know Now... (Fob.lina)
A great message in this poem. I am working on one with the same theme but...
October 14th, 2025 18:19 - Perhaps (Kaz)
This brings to mind whether the finding is physical or emotional or even...
October 14th, 2025 18:17 - No Matter What (GenXer Sharon ππ)
Judgmental is what people are, some more than others. Not the right...
October 14th, 2025 16:56 - Infernal Devotion (Iris Lynn)
Darkly romantic in a most sensual manner. Nicely worded and rhymed.
October 14th, 2025 16:11 - Bugaboo hashtagged, tricked and treated me (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Love Cat Stevens and a good write it was indeed. Well penned
October 14th, 2025 14:41 - Purpose? (Delphxia)
Funny how poems change with our mood. A sense of anger in this poem but...
October 14th, 2025 13:50 - A Higher Note (Kurt Philip Behm)
Irony and I love it. Tribute of what worth is it ever when the person...
October 14th, 2025 13:49 - No Name #1 (MatPie)
So many feelings of discomfort to remind one that they are alive. Very...
October 14th, 2025 13:46 - Human (Arial)
A prayer to self and God as one reflects. Well written
October 14th, 2025 13:44 - Release (Jimmy Daun)
Evidence in, decision made. It seems final based on experience tested over...
October 14th, 2025 13:43 - Glaze on Cracked Pottery (Gray0328)
Slick deception painted over lies whether a car sail of a marriage vow all...
October 14th, 2025 13:41 - An Officer (Devender Kumar)
Many a case perpetrated by officials be they police of politicians. People...
October 14th, 2025 13:38 - lemon loaf cake (Lunarchloedip)
Food is always sensuous and seductive and it is used in this poem as such....
October 14th, 2025 13:32 - At the Water\'s Surface (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A sad poem of loss and the past where things were happier. Well written it...
October 14th, 2025 13:30 - ...On The Otherside (Not_defined)
Dark is right and it feels like one is falling off the edge with no...
October 14th, 2025 13:28 - Cricket - The \"GENTLEMAN\'s\" sport (DeadRose)
They call that playing out of your league. Unless a superstar most people...
October 14th, 2025 13:26 - Manhattan solo (Lorenz)
A conversation with oneself and the forth wall where the plaster is coming...
October 14th, 2025 12:07 - Cruel To Her Body (A.N.)
A dark and sad poem of self punishment not just physically but emotionally...
October 14th, 2025 09:41 - Human vs. Zombie (Matthew R. Callies)
Interesting how we evolve as we grow older from hide and seek to zombie...
October 14th, 2025 09:36 - me and the rain (NinjaGirl)
Always easier to give up but not always better. A heartfelt poem of...
October 14th, 2025 09:33 - The word. (Andrew Deaton)
Clever wording in this poem of rhyme. We do happen through thought in our...
October 14th, 2025 08:57 - _ underscore _ (Arqios)
To me when I see an underscore it jumps out screaming \"read me\" it glows...
October 14th, 2025 08:50 - Pantoum of Doom (Tristan Robert Lange)
Not to worry my friend there will be the next bus. There is a feeling of...
October 14th, 2025 08:39 - Among Olives and Riverlight (Malcolm Gladwin)
Most romantic this poem speak so memories as if dreams and carries the...
October 14th, 2025 07:31 - Critical thinking (2781)
They call it critical thinking but to me it is just one more way to look...
October 14th, 2025 07:26 - love comes to everyone (Jim56)
Most positive and bright this poem encourages and brightens the day. Very...
October 14th, 2025 07:23 - I Sat on a Rose (RSM0812)
A magical metaphor that caught my heart. Couldn\'t help my thoughts racing...
October 14th, 2025 07:20 - Cherished memories (Maplespal)
A poem of pleasures whether tactile, olfactory, gustatory, visual or...
October 14th, 2025 07:12 - Missing you (William Hromada)
What is love but a dependence an addiction that one feels the withdrawal...
October 14th, 2025 07:10 - Goodbye (Paul Bell)
A most interesting combination of sex with death, memories with the...
October 14th, 2025 07:08 - Views of Tianjin Station (HarrisHan2k)
Metaphor sensual, possibly erotic and maybe sexual but definitely...
October 14th, 2025 04:13 - I Am and So Are You (Jjudaharts)
We are all one and the same only feeling our individuality as the finger...
October 14th, 2025 04:11 - A REQUIEM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A character marked in memory by their individuality. A poem nicely worded...
October 14th, 2025 04:08 - Real real (Boot)
A most interesting rhyme scheme in this poem it is subtle and intriguing...
October 14th, 2025 04:06 - She is the Foundation (Jyoti Verma)
A lovely poem incorporating so many elements of Hinduism and its gods....
October 14th, 2025 04:02 - AUTUMN RETURN (Michael Edwards)
This poem casts a shadow of another time in another clime reading as...
October 14th, 2025 03:59 - Goldie And Orchi At Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
I know you guys go back a long ways and I think that that goes for this...
October 14th, 2025 03:55 - ππ―π¦π±π±π’π« (Keyara S Trotman)
Thought provoking this piece makes me wonder about meaning and I feel in...
October 14th, 2025 03:49 - Escape (NinjaGirl)
A poetic question that asks one to step outside themselves and judge...
October 14th, 2025 03:44 - Duality! (Andrew Deaton)
Deeply philosophical, cleverly worded and rhymed it simply is poetic. A...
October 14th, 2025 03:41 - I see you - or do I? (Hzugman)
Short but very clever wording and thought in this gem that now is a fave
October 14th, 2025 03:37 - GLAD RAGS (Joan Reese)
A case of spring cleaning here. Intriguing words in this poem. Nicely done
October 13th, 2025 19:51 - Cradle (Shadowbones)
A most interesting read with feelings of mans arrogance nicely said
October 13th, 2025 18:45 - Too Young (Tkatie118)
Children wed. A great debate of whether it is better to follow one\'s...
October 13th, 2025 16:41 - Encountering a poem (Amethyste)
Quite the thought. Nicely written
October 13th, 2025 16:16 - \"Leaping Leiper!\" Original blueprints of \"Glen Elm\" - eyes sip prose (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Here we go word play in story form another read of humor and woe. Well
October 13th, 2025 16:16 - πͺπΎ Divine Masculinity πͺπΎ (Ms.divine)
A great poem of development and change. Very nicely done
October 13th, 2025 15:34 - The Ghost I Once Loved (Xalvazora)
Youth impairs vision not the heart. A read of love lost but fortunately...
October 13th, 2025 14:53 - AIR IN BLOOM (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Why do I want to say that I already commented on this set of poems today....
October 13th, 2025 13:39 - The Towel (Shellsea)
Short, cute and loving but setting limits and expectations. This poem is...
October 13th, 2025 13:37 - The sun is low (Gewar)
Although with the insertion of arms it seems a person it could well be...
October 13th, 2025 13:34 - A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions (Neville)
This poem has a certain charm that speaks to the realities of life and how...
October 13th, 2025 13:30 - Mas que nada (Poetaldo)
One should do what makes them happy if it harms no one else. A lovely
October 13th, 2025 11:57 - MigrΓ€ne (Isa kemmy)
A wild beast that attacks when least expected a preditor of ambush. Well...
October 13th, 2025 11:56 - Elegy for Diane Keaton (1946-2025) (Matthew R. Callies)
A beautiful tribute to a star of the screen. Nicely worded in most poetic...
October 13th, 2025 11:54 - The Question That Stayed (Mirrorball)
Thoughts that pass through many of our minds. We all wish to climb the...
October 13th, 2025 11:52 - The point of no return (Lorenz)
Free will tied up could not attend, Hope and Patience were late to arrive...
October 13th, 2025 11:49 - El Gran Canon (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
I love your title on this one in that for white culture it was the Spanish...
October 13th, 2025 11:42 - The Pale Guest (Iris Lynn)
A lovely write that feels like something I would strive to write. It felt...
October 13th, 2025 11:36 - I Felt It (Jjudaharts)
I feel it and am in it at the moment. This poem caught me in that moment...
October 13th, 2025 11:31 - Cock Soft Days (Thomas W Case)
Poetic words and images fill this poem with feelings of mold and ash on a...
October 13th, 2025 11:28 - Devilishly Dreadful: The Flames of Betrayal (Tristan Robert Lange)
An old story of betrayal of the most sacred, Love. An allegory as well of...
October 13th, 2025 11:23 - Unsaid (Amandatoriii)
The desire to give provoked by looks from another nicely expressed in this...
October 13th, 2025 08:10 - She Has Me Flustered (Anthony Hanible)
Memories crowd this poem that has a sad and wistful feeling to it
October 13th, 2025 08:07 - Lessons learned in Grief (GenXer Sharon ππ)
A most interesting set of lessons shared in this poetic write. Well done
October 13th, 2025 08:06 - love each other (Jim56)
Very nice Jim another lovely verse about love and its effects.
October 13th, 2025 08:02 - Walled (Maplespal)
Clever, logical and practical but with deeper meaning. Lovely
October 13th, 2025 07:25 - gather your fragments (Arqios)
Matthew 10:29-31, which states: \"Are not two sparrows sold for a penny?...
October 13th, 2025 07:23 - On the level (2781)
Poems of flowers metaphors of nature. Loved the Spanish and English...
October 13th, 2025 06:28 - Eleven roses (Winona44)
I love this snap shot in time where neither the beginning or the end are...
October 13th, 2025 06:25 - Good friends (William Hromada)
A short but touching homage to friendship
October 13th, 2025 05:25 - The unwritten pages (Noor fatima)
A beautiful write this is a fave
October 13th, 2025 05:24 - Flesh of Self (RSM0812)
Most beautiful this poem speaks to a deeper level and thrills the heart
October 13th, 2025 05:22 - The Switch (Gray0328)
A great metaphor here Gray. The connection made by the action of closing...
October 13th, 2025 04:13
« Return to the profile of sorenbarrett
