Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• natures wonder (Jim56) And so be it Jim. Nature goes on in whtever way it can while we stumble...
  February 10th, 2025 05:57
• Inside My Dreams (Sebastian) Heavy words for a desire that none can fulfill. We wish the love of others...
  February 10th, 2025 05:53
• My Bed For The Night (Poetic Licence) A poem from the heart written in the first person. The plight of the...
  February 10th, 2025 05:48
• Spring Horizons (Reynaldo Casison) Lines tied with one theme a warming from the cold. Nicely said.
  February 10th, 2025 04:19
• Sin (2781) Well worded this poem spins its tale in style. Nicely done
  February 10th, 2025 04:15
• WASTEGROUND (Nephilim56) Whether place or in metaphor a person this write paints a picture of...
  February 10th, 2025 04:13
• cowardly survivor (Arqios) Here lies one of two possible choices. In this life we have the choice of...
  February 10th, 2025 04:10
• Gene Pool (John Prophet) I liked the construction of this poem the single of few word lines pulled...
  February 10th, 2025 03:53
• cyclones spirals whirlpools (Demar Desu) This may apply to many things and is thought provoking.
  February 10th, 2025 03:50
• Worship Wholeness (Orchidee) Orchi this has a whole different meaning in the United States it is only...
  February 10th, 2025 03:41
• Worship Wholeness (Orchidee) Orchi this has a whole different meaning in the United States it is only...
  February 10th, 2025 03:41
• The Game Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A most interesting analogy Andy. I have played cards of many types and...
  February 10th, 2025 03:34
• Cutting Corners (Mutley Ravishes) Necter of immortality may be thought sweet indeed by some as for me it...
  February 9th, 2025 21:04
• The Plan Coming To Action (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) The story seems to have found its tracks and is running smoothly on a...
  February 9th, 2025 19:07
• A spiritual poem (NinjaGirl) A beautiful thought that gives strength and belief necessary for hope
  February 9th, 2025 17:27
• The War (Distant View) I have known so many that have and stil suffer from PTSD. They have served...
  February 9th, 2025 17:23
• The War (Distant View) I have known so many that have and stil suffer from PTSD. They have served...
  February 9th, 2025 17:23
• The War (Distant View) I have known so many that have and stil suffer from PTSD. They have served...
  February 9th, 2025 17:22
• Salt (Gray0328) Ye are the salt of the earth. Necessary for life and the functioning of...
  February 9th, 2025 14:19
• From The Underside of Our Great Love (Teddy.15) Dramatic love is the best. Rich and ripe this poem like a fruit on a tree...
  February 9th, 2025 14:15
• Leavened Redemption (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again a most beautiful economy of wording to tell a story and send a...
  February 9th, 2025 12:36
• Charred (Maplespal) Touching and sad this poem reaches through time to those lost in the past....
  February 9th, 2025 12:35
• Symbiosis (Lorenz) So well put together this poem speaks of relationships and the need for...
  February 9th, 2025 12:31
• As Time Goes By (ADarkerMind) Here I get the sense of good and evil in that apocalyptical battle where...
  February 9th, 2025 12:29
• Follow the rainbow (Tony36) Loved the choice of the rainbow as a symbol of diversity and the idea that...
  February 9th, 2025 12:25
• pet company (Jim56) A great presentation of bonding with a pet. Nicely said Jim
  February 9th, 2025 09:01
• Inprismed (Neville) We are imprisoned by our memories that fade and distort with time....
  February 9th, 2025 08:59
• What KIND of Cookie, Eh? (Cheeky Missy) Another fun read well expressed in poetic form
  February 9th, 2025 08:51
• Comes and goes (2781) Most interesting how it does in fact come and go. Went to the store to get...
  February 9th, 2025 04:52
• I Vacationed in Heaven (RSM0812) This seems a continuation of The Divine Comedy and the upward climb into...
  February 9th, 2025 04:49
• RAINDROP (Nephilim56) Some beautiful imagery here nicely worded and lands upon the reader\'s ear...
  February 9th, 2025 04:44
• Morning Prayer (Orchidee) We tend to pray most when we need something. Why is it that kids only call...
  February 9th, 2025 04:42
• piecemeal (Arqios) Wonderfully worded the means by which we gain knowledge, learn and know...
  February 9th, 2025 04:38
• Free Words (Kurt Philip Behm) This is a poem that I can identify with for I have done the same. As...
  February 9th, 2025 04:36
• The Battle Of Twickenham. (Goldfinch60) Now that\'s a battle that counts. A most fun read and well set up too....
  February 9th, 2025 04:28
• Snip (Gray0328) Such disturbing sounds join others like barking dogs, crowing roosters and...
  February 8th, 2025 20:11
• Smiling Doll (Simurgh) From a country where Gandhi symbolized nonviolence such sad atrocities...
  February 8th, 2025 20:08
• Who are you? (Anonymous_1226) Trust is such a difficult thing to build and so easy to break. A heartfelt...
  February 8th, 2025 20:01
• my home (NinjaGirl) A wonderful poem of decision and determination. Our body is our shell and...
  February 8th, 2025 14:38
• I\'ve Called Myself a Weed,...How Could I--?! (Cheeky Missy) A fun read full of gusto. Lovely
  February 8th, 2025 12:48
• When i vacationed in Hell (RSM0812) The darkest hell is the one in our mind and from that one we don\'t come...
  February 8th, 2025 10:01
• War drums (Tony36) A powerful statement of peace over war and if it means one\'s death...
  February 8th, 2025 09:04
• Behind the blink (Maplespal)
  February 8th, 2025 08:04
• Behind the blink (Maplespal) A great write of thoughts and time and the distortion as well as missing...
  February 8th, 2025 08:03
• Marys Pussy Cat (Poetic Licence) Cute and furry but if taken the wrong way could be an over 18 rating. A...
  February 8th, 2025 08:00
• Gaze WithIn Gaze (Reynaldo Casison) A delicate and soothing song of love and beauty. Couched in nature beauty...
  February 8th, 2025 06:17
• dog love (Jim56) So true a dog\'s loyalty is not to be questioned although abused and used...
  February 8th, 2025 06:13
• Seven Blades Of Grass (ADarkerMind) Melvin your poems require a different type of reading one must let go of...
  February 8th, 2025 06:11
• they shall weep no more (Arqios) In the literal sense it makes no sense so I go to the metaphorical. Here I...
  February 8th, 2025 06:06
• THE SKY (Nephilim56) Soft pretty words fill this poem and they echo in the mind long afterward
  February 8th, 2025 04:27
• Scifaiku, current affairs (Thoughtless) Yes I believe we would be undesirables. Not too smart, bad habits,...
  February 8th, 2025 04:25
• falling in love again (Demar Desu) Cycle of the moon, change in hormones, something you ate, poems you\'ve...
  February 8th, 2025 04:18
• Mourning Misery (Orchidee) Gee Orchi that we should both write of child death is a bit heavy and dark...
  February 8th, 2025 04:15
• Wizardry (Mutley Ravishes) Indeed they do and indeed it does. As a man thinketh so is he. At least...
  February 8th, 2025 04:08
• A Smile In My Heart. (Goldfinch60) Nothing like instrumental music accompanied by song to make the heart sing...
  February 8th, 2025 04:01
• Faded Glory (Dan Williams) Interesting how we see outselves and how that may or may not change over...
  February 8th, 2025 03:55
• Love (Job Welime) I was struck by the authenticity of the poem and it has a really great...
  February 7th, 2025 16:16
• Riosin and Riordan (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) In this piece the story takes precedence over the wording and one is...
  February 7th, 2025 16:13
• The Tall and Skinny Brooding Man (NinjaGirl) Love poems from other languages they carry their own flavor and have...
  February 7th, 2025 13:00
• Pausing the string (Maplespal) Very identifiable the images in this poem so well written in verse it...
  February 7th, 2025 11:44
• Dark Sustenance (Kurt Philip Behm) We were close in theme today and this one struck me hard. You might want...
  February 7th, 2025 11:42
• Tiny Echoes (Gray0328) A beautiful message set in a jeweled frame of golden poem. Lovely
  February 7th, 2025 11:39
• Looks Rather Silly.... (Cheeky Missy) The first sonnet was my favorite of the two A lovely display of spring
  February 7th, 2025 10:20
• The Fight (Tony36) A poem of determination and grit. Nicely written
  February 7th, 2025 10:14
• A Solitude So Grand (ADarkerMind) Strangely this one made sense to me. A kaleidoscope of metaphors that if...
  February 7th, 2025 10:13
• poetspeak (Arqios) A poem with sparkeling words that shine in every line. Eloquently spoken.
  February 7th, 2025 10:07
• Moonlit Revelation (Salvia.S) A shining thought in a cloudy sky. Beautiful image and message here.
  February 7th, 2025 10:05
• kindness everyday (Jim56) What a wonerful world it would be.Good write Jim
  February 7th, 2025 05:54
• Wise Man Speak (Poetic Licence) A fun and thought provoking read. And to the question I would say yes it...
  February 7th, 2025 04:44
• Poet\'s Can Dream Too (Teddy.15) Admirable values that are well spelled out and assurtively put. Well...
  February 7th, 2025 04:40
• Freedom Flight (Orchidee) Another hymn of acknowledgement of gratitude to God for his preserving...
  February 7th, 2025 04:37
• MORTAL (Nephilim56) Lovely your word choice has eliminate all superfluous words rapidly...
  February 7th, 2025 04:35
• Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda (NinjaGirl) Three words that are best not to use in real life or in a poem either. The...
  February 7th, 2025 04:25
• Jimmy Come Home (Simurgh) A mother\'s love is a special love no other can have. Being a son not a...
  February 7th, 2025 04:23
• Cosmic Onion (John Prophet) A great litteral and metaphoric write and so it is in most all of our...
  February 7th, 2025 04:21
• Galactic Quacks (Mutley Ravishes) Tis all true each and every word at least in metaphor. A fun read Mutley...
  February 7th, 2025 04:17
• On My Road Of Time. (Goldfinch60) a beautiful story with a happy ending what more could anyone wish for....
  February 7th, 2025 04:12
• Riordan and Riosin (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another chapter done both for the reader and the characters. This story...
  February 6th, 2025 14:43
• Shadows and rays (Maplespal) Such a beautiful set of images you cast and it feels so light. Lovely and...
  February 6th, 2025 13:55
• First Steps (RSM0812) Nothing like a baby or child to brighten the day and lift spirits. There...
  February 6th, 2025 13:52
• Ode to Apollo ---- The Sun God (Simurgh) Classical in form and topic it shines like Apollo himself. A most lovely...
  February 6th, 2025 13:48
• When Truth Becomes A Lie (ADarkerMind) Loved the first line particularly because truth does become a lie at times...
  February 6th, 2025 13:45
• ...How About, Yes? (Cheeky Missy) Beautiful words in all fine images and my favorite is the last. Wonderful
  February 6th, 2025 13:40
• The Horses Need Hay (Thomas W Case) Implication is the key to this poem\'s meaning. It is powerful and strong...
  February 6th, 2025 10:42
• Will I have time ? (Lorenz) This poem is filled with so many metaphors and solar images that...
  February 6th, 2025 10:39
• When The Sky Falls Down (Teddy.15) How much we sould shelter and how much let our child learn for themself is...
  February 6th, 2025 10:36
• Farmer (Tony36) I feel your pain. I\'ve been there and done that and bear the scars from...
  February 6th, 2025 08:53
• Gold On Grey (Cassie58) A very picturesque poem that paints with such artistic wonder. My favorite...
  February 6th, 2025 08:51
• I love you John (Hey!) Some memories never die they just grow in size or remain burried to raise...
  February 6th, 2025 07:39
• We meet ourselves coming back (Emile Dubois) A interesting concept that deserves some contemplation. This may be true...
  February 6th, 2025 07:37
• lifes rules (Jim56) Accepting life as it is is a key to happiness. Nicely written with good...
  February 6th, 2025 07:33
• Mindless Mindfulness (Demar Desu) A fun read
  February 6th, 2025 05:51
• LIMERICKS 139, & 140  (Michael Edwards) A great way to start the day with a limerick. Loved them especially the...
  February 6th, 2025 05:50
• Sun is Breaking Through (Poetic Licence) A beautiful tribute to gratitude and love nicely written with good rhyme...
  February 6th, 2025 04:03
• The Eternal Pessimist (Orchidee) To each positive there is a negative. You and Gold make a great pair the...
  February 6th, 2025 04:00
• CLWYDIAN HILLS (Nephilim56) A beautiful portrayal of how each step is the begining of a new journey...
  February 6th, 2025 03:53
• along legacy way (Arqios) Many reflections here cast in splendid images and great metaphor. Very...
  February 6th, 2025 03:43
• Moon And Stars Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Most lovely the general theme and images presented are most romantic. A...
  February 6th, 2025 03:38
• A scifaiku (Thoughtless) Just the burger please. A fun read
  February 5th, 2025 19:00
• Spidersman (Mutley Ravishes) Tied to the Greek godess Athena who was beat in a weaving contest by...
  February 5th, 2025 18:59