Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• \"He Was My Love\" (Friendship) A poem of sorrow at a great loss of a loved one passed on. Yet in the...
  December 21st, 2025 05:59
• μ / μ（ミュー） (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Arrogance prevents our seeing our importance and size in the vastness of...
  December 21st, 2025 05:56
• The Almost Lover (Lyric Rune) Love wishes the loved well even if it is not what the lover wishes for but...
  December 21st, 2025 04:41
• Born Anew (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This poem uses the term born in a religious manner that then would make...
  December 21st, 2025 04:37
• THE SAME GRAVE LAID (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Deeply poignant and applicable to all ages it reflects a dark truth that...
  December 21st, 2025 04:35
• In praise of the capacitive stylus (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) People seem to need to invent things to feel important and even if it is a...
  December 21st, 2025 04:32
• Winter Solstice in Central Washington (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A graphic carefully painted vivid image of a cold desolate and dark...
  December 21st, 2025 04:29
• Where meadows and shores mourn (Narayan Gadagkar) A powerful write that reflects mans still primitive nature not have yet...
  December 21st, 2025 04:21
• Untitled {27} (Niko Papadatos) A powerful poem of nature in philosophical concepts like the immovable...
  December 21st, 2025 04:16
• An advertisement. (Devender Kumar) A lovely and insightful poem about a society that is capitalistic and...
  December 21st, 2025 04:11
• Mild Mary (Orchidee) A concept so old and tradition born that we think nothing of it and find...
  December 21st, 2025 04:06
• A DOG FOR CHRISTMAS (Michael Edwards) You made me laugh Michael and that gains a fave for a poem that not only I...
  December 21st, 2025 03:59
• Enjoy The Light. (Goldfinch60) Here in this hemisphere the days have grown longer and now will start to...
  December 21st, 2025 03:56
• Homeless (Katie B.) A poem of charity extended and the knowledge that one can not fix the...
  December 21st, 2025 03:53
• Christmas (NafisaSB) Enjoy the holiday Nafisa thinking of others less fortunate shows a heart...
  December 21st, 2025 03:49
• Dead road (Amethyste) A sensuous scene, a sexual act, a return to normal and a walk away. It...
  December 20th, 2025 18:26
• An Anonymous Painting   (Classicmister) A wonderful poem of a view forth hand form artist eye to canvas to eye of...
  December 20th, 2025 18:22
• mastering life (Jjudaharts) Quite the task. Each time I catch a little but it soon escapes and I am...
  December 20th, 2025 16:41
• Ode to dad (Allie561) A write about a father that is seen as inconsistent in words and deeds. A...
  December 20th, 2025 15:40
• Two Views of the Wind (Soheil khodaparasti) A lovely write of opposites and the question of which side you are on. As...
  December 20th, 2025 15:34
• She visited (Maplespal) Whether lover, child, grandchild this poem tells its tale of how a smile...
  December 20th, 2025 15:31
• Sacrifice of love:The Best Christmas Gift (Princess Osariemen Aihie) The gift of giving from those that have to those that don\'t a wonderful...
  December 20th, 2025 13:57
• Love on the Wing (Notapoet) A fun read that seems somehow halloween like with the cat, and moon....
  December 20th, 2025 13:28
• Acquiescent adoption of voluntary nonestablishmentarian mindset... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Cyber poetry with a virus a trojan and hackers. Well done
  December 20th, 2025 12:23
• Hope (Zhangyuyouyu) A poem of vision and its impairment by the dark. Then comes the light of...
  December 20th, 2025 12:19
• Artamsàr\'s Spell (Anas Merchant) A dark poem of a siren and seductress. Well written.
  December 20th, 2025 12:17
• The Immortal Loaf (Matthew R. Callies) Baked once a year this fruitcake should have a bit of brandy to carry us...
  December 20th, 2025 10:34
• Canid Pro Forma (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed they are Kurt and so we now know why dogs are man\'s best friend....
  December 20th, 2025 10:23
• 𝒪𝓃ℯ 𝒯ℴ 𝒪𝓃ℯ 𝒯𝓌ℴ (Keyara S Trotman) A private write shared only with the reader. A lovely write
  December 20th, 2025 09:34
• myp (Ishmael mafereka) Love the twist at the end where the love becomes the I phone. So true it...
  December 20th, 2025 09:32
• Found Footage (Tristan Robert Lange) Whether such footage is personal memory or that of others frames of memory...
  December 20th, 2025 09:29
• Softness Was Never Safe (Rawaneigh.99) I take this to represent the caution we all have with the growth of a new...
  December 20th, 2025 07:07
• BLINDFOLDED (Fikrioshin) A deep write that lies beneath the surface and the mask. We are blind...
  December 20th, 2025 07:03
• As an Artist. (Friendship) Lovely! He who creates is a god. To make something out of scattered pieces...
  December 20th, 2025 07:01
• A Tokugawa Retainer Reflects (Mutley Ravishes) The enlightenment of the footnote was most helpful. A poem that\'s meaning...
  December 20th, 2025 06:57
• scottish mouse (Jim56) Now that was cute and fanciful Jim so innocent and childlike that I would...
  December 20th, 2025 06:55
• a poem that builds itself (Arqios) Brick by brick some with a master plan others built as they go. A...
  December 20th, 2025 05:15
• Passwords (Gray0328) A lovely poem Gray that echoes the past and memories of pillars in our...
  December 20th, 2025 05:11
• EIGHT LINES IN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) There is despair and regret in this piece. It calls out to prepare for...
  December 20th, 2025 05:07
• God, Please (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This poem deals with temptations that like sugar rot the teeth. Heath...
  December 20th, 2025 05:04
• Judge Ye Not (Katie B.) Good write Katie yes I agree we are often our most judgmental judges and...
  December 20th, 2025 04:22
• Annunciation Awakening (Orchidee) One of the most beautiful stories of this time of year so nicely told in...
  December 20th, 2025 03:51
• Echoes In My Phone; A Timeline of Texts Never Sent (Lyric Rune) This poem runs the gambit of relationship issues and ends with the...
  December 20th, 2025 03:48
• FOR THE LOVE OF YES (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A saying that I seldom hear. It is emphatic and strong in its enunciation...
  December 20th, 2025 03:44
• Precious Duo! (Andrew Deaton) The expression of love from a father to daughters heard in this poem. i...
  December 20th, 2025 03:42
• Maneater (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) This poem brings to mind a song from the past that I can not quite place...
  December 20th, 2025 03:40
• my imaginary kafka quotes #27 (Jon Nakapalau) So short but says so much in a most poetic manner. I loved it a fave
  December 20th, 2025 03:39
• Untitled {27} (Niko Papadatos) Sometimes words can not be found and seem to burst forth in other ways. A...
  December 20th, 2025 03:38
• Shards (Lyric Rune) Welcome to MPS A most interesting poem with metaphor telling a story of a...
  December 20th, 2025 03:36
• Lost In Words. (Goldfinch60) A topic I have mused on this past week as well and noticed how time flies...
  December 20th, 2025 03:28
• Orspasm (Mutley Ravishes) A poem of biological, social, emotional, natural forces well put in...
  December 19th, 2025 19:52
• Too The Knife I Pulled Out Of My Back (Anthony Hanible) I take this dramatic poem as a warning and a statement. Well written and a...
  December 19th, 2025 19:26
• Essence of Desire (Notapoet) I love the drama in this poem it is a drama of passion that can be felt in...
  December 19th, 2025 19:25
• The song of heart (Amethyste) As hard as it gets life is to be lived to the full. A great write
  December 19th, 2025 17:36
• Star Trek/Terminator (E.J. Waling) A dichotomy and evenly spaced good vs evil. It speaks of opposites and how...
  December 19th, 2025 16:23
• ℒ𝒶𝓈𝓉 ℒ𝒶𝓈𝓉𝓁𝓎 (Keyara S Trotman) Love is the topic and it comes through clear. Well done Keyara
  December 19th, 2025 16:21
• I’m afraid of forgetting him (Lore) Such an interesting thought in that memories do fade and dim with time....
  December 19th, 2025 16:19
• AMONG FEATHERS / ENTRE PLUMAS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A spiritually directed poem that speaks of angles and being good. Nicely...
  December 19th, 2025 16:18
• Christmas Havoc🎄😭😭 (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A poem of contrast where a peaceful season is marred with violence. Sad...
  December 19th, 2025 16:14
• First Christmas alone (William Hromada) Very nicely written a seasonal poem that speaks of classic images. Well...
  December 19th, 2025 16:12
• Ocean fame (Masking) Too near to see to far to not fear a distant second fall out. A most...
  December 19th, 2025 16:11
• My Mind (Job Welime) Sounds like a truce rather than peace. A lovely write
  December 19th, 2025 16:09
• A Skosh (Gray0328) I love unique words and skosh is one of them. A gun read Gray
  December 19th, 2025 16:06
• my shoe house (Spiderlily) A most interesting character this lily tucker cute and a fun read
  December 19th, 2025 16:04
• Snowflakes (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A lovely comparison of the snowflake to a tiny dancer. Very well written...
  December 19th, 2025 16:02
• Where Winter Dares a Kiss (Matthew R. Callies) A seasonal poem full of mystery and good cheer. Well done
  December 19th, 2025 16:00
• Mass media bah humbug Holiday season blitzkrieg yakkity yak... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Quite the journey in this poem well done
  December 19th, 2025 15:58
• The child king (Lorenz) This write seems like the little price graduated to king after Lewis...
  December 19th, 2025 14:51
• Wear a Glove (Tristan Robert Lange) Satire on something that needs that and a bit more as well. Nicely said...
  December 19th, 2025 10:09
• I can see (Maplespal) A poem of being. A declaration of existence and with it hope and the...
  December 19th, 2025 08:37
• Forgiveness (Moco) This poem is eerie and haunting with the conversation of a third party...
  December 19th, 2025 08:08
• An Insidious Illness (Katie B.) Raw, exposed, an open wound that when it heals bursts open again to drain....
  December 19th, 2025 08:05
• Oh, pistachio shells, (Friendship) The items creative and inventive while the poem in detail and wonderful...
  December 19th, 2025 07:59
• The Womb We Wounded (Dhiman Shah) A beautiful poem showing regard for our planet and nature in general. The...
  December 19th, 2025 07:02
• poetry mouse (Jim56) A fun read Jim fanciful but maybe not so much so. Loved it
  December 19th, 2025 06:52
• LUNATIC 0 (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) We live on the earth and reality but our thoughts on the moon or dreams a...
  December 19th, 2025 05:53
• travel companions (Arqios) Indeed we do carry memories, momentos of the past and its occupants with...
  December 19th, 2025 05:18
• Familiarity (Zhangyuyouyu) Here I hear the needed reassurance of company to feel calm and able to...
  December 19th, 2025 04:45
• WITHOUT CARE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem sets the scene well with painted images of solitude and almost...
  December 19th, 2025 04:43
• Haze (Alan R) I see this poem as highly existential as a search for identity and...
  December 19th, 2025 04:40
• Twins! (Andrew Deaton) A father\'s blessing poetically set. There is little that can equal the...
  December 19th, 2025 04:37
• Black Moon Lilith (Vipassana) This poem capitalizes off dark desires of power, subjugation, control that...
  December 19th, 2025 04:34
• Pure Poetry (Brynlee) The use of a person\'s attributes as elements of poetic expression is a...
  December 19th, 2025 04:24
• Judas Judged - OT/NT Series 17 (Orchidee) A sad thought. I wonder how many used to visit his grave. If one thinks...
  December 19th, 2025 04:21
• Apathy. (Goldfinch60) It is true Andy that total disregard to something can be the strongest...
  December 19th, 2025 04:14
• Bathing in Silence (Jjudaharts) And the question is what is behind that door. A most interesting write
  December 18th, 2025 19:39
• Ghost House (Mutley Ravishes) The issue of how not to think and dwell on past traumas. Well done
  December 18th, 2025 19:38
• Apparently a Ghost (Pete the poet) This sounds very much what many spiritualists believe. A most interesting...
  December 18th, 2025 19:36
• Quiet success (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Quiet and loud such a nice way to speak of this difference. A lovely
  December 18th, 2025 17:42
• Stars (Amethyste) How relatable sometimes what we wish to touch is often too far. A lovely...
  December 18th, 2025 17:39
• stagnancy (Lunarchloedip) Sometimes our wishes are stronger than reality. A lovely poem of love and...
  December 18th, 2025 15:09
• SONNET OF DEPICTION ([email protected]) Such classic lines so well matched with myth and the ephemeral nature of...
  December 18th, 2025 13:33
• Homesick (Eckardcb) There are things that bring back memories and give nostalgia for the past...
  December 18th, 2025 13:08
• Untitled {26} (Niko Papadatos) An encouraging poem telling one to expect problems but to bounce back and...
  December 18th, 2025 13:05
• Celebration of Life (Soheil khodaparasti) Age affects all and time passes without notice. Well written
  December 18th, 2025 12:02
• As i lay. (Andrew Deaton) I\'ve heard of being dragged out of this life kicking and screaming but...
  December 18th, 2025 11:58
• The Night the Dark Was Given a Map (Matthew R. Callies) What a lovely Christmas poem so well written with clever wording and...
  December 18th, 2025 10:56
• Untitled (RSM0812) This poem points out the continuation of everything in everything else...
  December 18th, 2025 10:49
• BLUE TIME / TIEMPO AZUL (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of...
  December 18th, 2025 10:02
• Soundbites - 12/18/2025 (Kurt Philip Behm) These are gems Kurt and a fave from me on each
  December 18th, 2025 09:49