Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Springs Song (RSM0812) This is a beautiful portrayal of spring so nicely worded it paints the...
  July 17th, 2025 07:50
• Cleansing (Jadedaphrodite) Storms nature\'s cleansing force. A beautiful poem of nature set in poetic...
  July 17th, 2025 07:48
• Fly (Friendship) Bee of wasp or whatever I don\'t like uninvited pests inside. A metaphor...
  July 17th, 2025 07:05
• The Morning Lark (Tony Grannell) Tony this brings back memories of childhood, times carefree, Clean air,...
  July 17th, 2025 05:43
• I\'m hers (Maplespal)
  July 17th, 2025 05:36
• I\'m hers (Maplespal) This could easily be a song. Nicely written
  July 17th, 2025 05:36
• hedgehog in my garden (Jim56) Another nature observation Jim. Love your view of nature and her
  July 17th, 2025 04:51
• All baked, All better (Tkatie118) A most interesting metaphor here. Conformity to authoritative expectations...
  July 17th, 2025 04:49
• The Clock\'s Whisper (Gray0328) This poem contains elements of routine daily life that to some become...
  July 17th, 2025 04:46
• SUSIE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A sensuous poem that breaths natural in a free form of nature itself....
  July 17th, 2025 04:43
• Monarch of Morning (Priya Tomar) Metaphor flows from sun to moon in this poem nicely done
  July 17th, 2025 04:41
• WHY DON\'T WE JUST... (REBELLIOUS SOUL) Good questions asked in this poem. The answers are probably things that we...
  July 17th, 2025 04:38
• The Puzzle With Lost Pieces: The angle of reflection is unknown (Cirawrites01) The deck has been shuffled, sifting is the answer, a needle is never found...
  July 17th, 2025 04:35
• AnalysisByBlackboxAI-Volume 20-CoconutTrees-1Feb2025 (Soman Ragavan) This analysis contained a good deal of information on coconuts. Having a...
  July 17th, 2025 04:32
• The Silver Rose (Santajah Douglass) A young love poem that burst with passion and oozes with desire. Nicely...
  July 17th, 2025 04:21
• Waves on the shore. (Baker) A poem on change and so true it is. Change is the only constant and so it...
  July 17th, 2025 04:17
• Results (Keeter C) This one requires thought. The more I see the more I perceive the more I...
  July 17th, 2025 04:15
• G (Emery Walker) Dramatic or not the thought is stated and drama is not always a bad thing....
  July 17th, 2025 04:13
• I’m Drunk (Yael Olalde-Garcia) Am I mistaken or do I hear a tinge of resentment, a touch of irritation, a...
  July 17th, 2025 04:09
• Knocked out (EvenwheniLie) Never give up. Fighting from the canvas and in dreamland is a good...
  July 17th, 2025 04:05
• It\'s Hot But by how much Hot (Kevin Hulme) Now there are several very creative cliches there that took a good deal of...
  July 17th, 2025 04:02
• 2 Madame Ranevskaya\'s Reverie (Arqios) This one smells of nostalgia and has the taste melancholy. Very good word...
  July 17th, 2025 03:58
• Introspection (Teddy.15) Ah Teddy this one can be taken many ways and is deeper than surface value....
  July 17th, 2025 03:54
• Alchemy Of The Answers (ElizabethMoroz) I loved the format of dropping statement after statement as if shuffling...
  July 17th, 2025 03:52
• Behind Closed Doors (Part.2) - Jordan\'s Sacrifice (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Values shown in actions taken. A questioning poem around what people find...
  July 17th, 2025 03:38
• Respect. (Goldfinch60) Yes Andy the world changes and not always for the best. A world of social...
  July 17th, 2025 03:34
• When I flew too close to the sun. (Georgia Watson) A poem of reaching for what is not there. A most lovely write
  July 16th, 2025 18:14
• She Turns Her Body Into A Question (Gaias Soothing Haven) Exotically erotic seductively sensuous. Nature in metaphor. Lovely
  July 16th, 2025 17:43
• Girlhood (Malo J) A poem of pain and suffering. A long history of hurt that never had any...
  July 16th, 2025 17:42
• The happy devil smiles (NEPIEGE) The duality of man and the masks we wear in this poem. Most lovely
  July 16th, 2025 16:26
• Friends (Amethyste) A wonderful write about the human need for affiliation and friendship. A...
  July 16th, 2025 16:23
• Forever, maybe? (Ladywithaquill) The early concerns of a relationship set to rest with time. Very nice
  July 16th, 2025 15:19
• Primal Titans (Jadedaphrodite) A wonderful write of the prehistoric. Lovely
  July 16th, 2025 15:17
• The Valley of Ten Thousand Smokes - 3 (MendedFences27) These are great poetic puzzles that are beyond my reach at the moment but...
  July 16th, 2025 15:14
• Sky High (Mark The Phenomenon) Nature\'s images mixed with the errotic, the sensual, sexual and romantic....
  July 16th, 2025 15:09
• I am free (Chitrangada) A poem of personal change and that we are all responsible for our own...
  July 16th, 2025 14:54
• Spiraling out of Control (Thomas W Case) That does seem to be the most common answer to most questions now days....
  July 16th, 2025 11:15
• I wanna talk to Jesus (Sunflowersinrain) A fun thought that makes me what kind of jokes he would tell. Would he be...
  July 16th, 2025 11:12
• AnalysisByHIX Chat AI-Volume 2 - To Salvia S India--27Jan2025 (Soman Ragavan) A most interesting analysis of a poem on the change in relationships in...
  July 16th, 2025 11:08
• His Soul (Sad girl) Short and to the point this poem speaks to that need for physical...
  July 16th, 2025 11:01
• “What is it in particular that frightens you about Death?” (M.E.M.) That is a common concern that we will be forgotten is that not why we have...
  July 16th, 2025 11:00
• Chasing Rainbows (Teddy.15) We all chase rainbows of one type or another sometimes finding leprechauns...
  July 16th, 2025 10:54
• they came in silence (Gray0328) A powerful poem of fear and nightmares now real. Where freedom lies on the...
  July 16th, 2025 08:46
• The Robbery (Anthony Hanible) Wow! deeply dark. The use of short lines like broken thought tell the...
  July 16th, 2025 08:42
• An Odd Twist on Xmas In July (Cheeky Missy) Flowers, food and travel what more could a person ask for? Lovely
  July 16th, 2025 08:40
• The Taj Mahal (Tony Grannell) A fitting tribute to a magnificent wonder. A temple, a tomb for mortal...
  July 16th, 2025 07:58
• The Paradox of Living (Tristan Robert Lange) Good title for this poem Tristan. So true it is we often have one or the...
  July 16th, 2025 07:46
• The Rainbow Chase (Kurt Philip Behm) And so it is with any effort not attempted or prevented. Poems left in the...
  July 16th, 2025 07:43
• Lost time! (Friendship) Frustration comes to mind in this poem of promises not kept. There seems a...
  July 16th, 2025 07:18
• rain once more (Jim56) Sadness for one joy for another, the dismal becomes life giving. A...
  July 16th, 2025 07:13
• Dance (Tony36) Beautiful Tony all of life is a dance we share with others and yes...
  July 16th, 2025 07:11
• Transformation (MatPie) This poem speaks as if from another world. It holds power in a breath. A...
  July 16th, 2025 07:10
• Oh Wind (RSM0812) This poem could well be a blessing said over food. I just await the amen....
  July 16th, 2025 07:07
• grocery aisle poetry (Arqios) Cryptic I know that this poem goes with another but I can\'t help but feel...
  July 16th, 2025 07:05
• I miss... (Sree) Loss unaccepted in this poem that calls out for one now lost. Nicely...
  July 16th, 2025 07:02
• A Broken Brain / Insane / God\'s Game (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A good deal of truth here. A thought provoking poem science vs I deamonds...
  July 16th, 2025 07:00
• Limerence (Parsa) A beautiful poem with such a soft and drifting tone. It speaks to the soul...
  July 16th, 2025 06:58
• The Quiet Place (DLewis88)
  July 16th, 2025 06:56
• The Quiet Place (DLewis88) A beautiful poem that casts its mood of aa soft and gentle world. The line...
  July 16th, 2025 06:56
• Echoes of an Unseen Soul (Jainesh.D) This poem is dream like and surrecal in a most cryptic way. The author...
  July 16th, 2025 05:23
• To the fire (Maplespal) Don\'t get burned in this relationship I would say. A most interesting
  July 16th, 2025 05:19
• Untitled (Kaz) This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the...
  July 16th, 2025 05:14
• Unmasked (REBELLIOUS SOUL) Feelings of deception in this poem that seem to carry anger as well....
  July 16th, 2025 05:09
• AS HOURS CHIME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Dreamlike indeed it drifts and floats in its poetic words
  July 16th, 2025 04:04
• The Intricate Mysteries Of Being (ElizabethMoroz) It swirls in cerebral ink. It floats on an intellectual sea. Well worded...
  July 16th, 2025 04:03
• A Silent Soul (Priya Tomar) Some places inequality is more evident than in others. A poem of...
  July 16th, 2025 03:55
• Ode To An Olive. (Goldfinch60) If I were an olive I would find this poem quite seductive. As it is Gold...
  July 16th, 2025 03:45
• Dinner Date (Bragee) Sexual, bold, direct and to the point it speaks desire.
  July 16th, 2025 03:41
• Cruel fate nixed our sites set for buying a hoagie (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Another sad story in poetic form. Nicely done
  July 15th, 2025 21:14
• Puzzle Piece (DLewis88) A tough puzzle DLewis and the first thing that came to mind was nature....
  July 15th, 2025 19:30
• what the bloodshed forgave (Yael Olalde-Garcia) To feel more but to be human less than desired. A surreal poem. Nicely
  July 15th, 2025 19:24
• After the war (Leny) A wonderful write with the idea that we all make our own peace. Nicely
  July 15th, 2025 18:15
• trust ! (Friendship) The title says it all, trust yourself and your dreams. There are immediate...
  July 15th, 2025 18:13
• butterflies in his chest (NEPIEGE) A poem of misconceptions and insecurity. Well done
  July 15th, 2025 18:08
• What do You Think of when you Think about Death? (M.E.M.) This poems explores the change from life to death. The poem expands on the...
  July 15th, 2025 16:48
• As Lonely As Freedom (A Boy With Roses) It is the last line of this poem that drives the nail home. The question...
  July 15th, 2025 16:16
• Beyond these walls (Betty Miller) Sad and tragic events of abuse and abandonment can contribute to...
  July 15th, 2025 16:13
• Butterfly (Amethyste) A metaphor that speaks to love fliers
  July 15th, 2025 13:57
• The Reality - of Learning Disability. (Jan bach) A poem that takes on the conventional approach to abuse and neglect with a...
  July 15th, 2025 13:10
• Stars inside my Eyes (Framed Mirror) Poetic is the word for this poem a fave.
  July 15th, 2025 12:58
• Bleed Within, Not Around (Eira Solen) A great message in this poem introducing the counter culture idea of...
  July 15th, 2025 12:52
• Woman Hits by Andrey Voznesensky (Ksey_Gan) A most interesting poem that I took seriously to begin with. It evolved...
  July 15th, 2025 12:47
• Locked Away (Kurt Philip Behm) A great write that any Professor would appreciate. Nice Kurt
  July 15th, 2025 12:34
• Raven on the Road (Teddy.15) Visual items from the past can bring so many memories good and bad....
  July 15th, 2025 10:55
• Inked Prayers (Gray0328) Have no tattoos but this poem speaks volumes of verse etched on skin. A...
  July 15th, 2025 10:52
• I Coulda Been a Poet (Tony Grannell) Been there, done that. A read that made me think of all those things I can...
  July 15th, 2025 10:29
• A FLAME YOU TRIED TO DIM (REBELLIOUS SOUL) A poem of asking for recognition and equality. Nicely done
  July 15th, 2025 10:11
• What I know (Juwaireeyah) To give oneself to another is a dangerous thing. a write of courage and...
  July 15th, 2025 10:06
• Meat (Aman 12) Brilliant! Past guilt I felt from this write. In my old age I have learned...
  July 15th, 2025 09:45
• The human sanatorium (Vasile Serban) A beautiful poem and the last stanza particularly caught my heart. A fave
  July 15th, 2025 09:41
• Shine (Damaso) Cryptic is the word that comes to mind. Metaphor falls out of these lines....
  July 15th, 2025 09:38
• A thought: Of my mom (Maplespal) Beautiful memories and a feeling conveyed. Lovely
  July 15th, 2025 09:34
• 15/07/2025 (Starlight) Beautiful! A fave
  July 15th, 2025 08:50
• Color Blind? (Tristan Robert Lange) One hundred percent behind you and this poem and its meaning. This poem...
  July 15th, 2025 08:41
• Things That Don\'t - But Do and Is. (Cirawrites01) Brilliant! Amazing! A poetic touching of a nerve to the soul. This poem is...
  July 15th, 2025 08:36
• Some only see the outside (Tony36) Deep wisdom in this short poem. Loved it and its message gets a fave from...
  July 15th, 2025 07:38
• AnalysisByDeepSeek AI-Volume 1-WaterSecurityMauritius-19Feb2025 (Soman Ragavan) When in want it is hard to see others waste what we need. A good review of...
  July 15th, 2025 07:37
• The Tigress and the Eclipse (RSM0812) The first stanza although cryptic is my favorite it sets the ground for...
  July 15th, 2025 07:34
• THE LEFT PATH (Saswati das) Moment to moment is the feel that I get from this poem. A strong message
  July 15th, 2025 07:10
• Morning Dew (Priya Tomar) Masked in metaphor, dipped in rhyme a most magnificent poem sublime. Very...
  July 15th, 2025 06:24