Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Karmasutra (Teddy.15) Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous....
  September 13th, 2024 04:57
• Being Alive. (Goldfinch60) I was always taught that procrastination is to be avoided and I have put...
  September 13th, 2024 04:15
• A Force To Be Wreckoned With (Mutley Ravishes) Loki the trickster god. One of my favorites.
  September 12th, 2024 19:28
• Made it (2781) A positive outlook is pervasive in this poem. Nicely done
  September 12th, 2024 19:26
• When The Sun Goes Down (Tony36) A recounting of memories of good social times and happieness associated...
  September 12th, 2024 15:59
• I PRAY (Qurrathul Ain) A beautiful message crying for harmonic union and compatability. Lovely...
  September 12th, 2024 12:35
• That day (Sami mulaj) A great metaphor for the ending of all endevors
  September 12th, 2024 05:41
• We Came Together Once (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A good question asked.This poem honors the day and shines with a call for...
  September 12th, 2024 05:39
• Ozzie Enters My Chest (Gray0328) Your words bring the feelings and transport one to the very spot. Nicely...
  September 12th, 2024 05:31
• Dreamers Quilt (Teddy.15) The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces...
  September 12th, 2024 05:29
• Life Liberation (Orchidee) Nicely written Orchi.
  September 12th, 2024 05:27
• Island Of Dreams Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful place indeed my friend and I believe it is found in one\'s own...
  September 12th, 2024 05:25
• Crumbs  (Neville) A master class on how the mundane can be made seductive and sensual, Not...
  September 12th, 2024 05:21
• Imaginary Hero (Dan Williams) We allhave some of Walter Mitty in us. The awakening from these daydreams...
  September 12th, 2024 05:09
• When Everything Glows but Me (Teddy.15) To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to...
  September 11th, 2024 18:59
• I hide my pain (lyrics) (Saleh Ben Saleh) A song of desperation and despair iswhat I hear in this poem that is...
  September 11th, 2024 07:49
• Late summer (Alan R) A great last line to this poem. \"when the fog stays undone.\"
  September 11th, 2024 07:46
• Me described by-way-of “in & out” (Maplespal) That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
  September 11th, 2024 06:13
• For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough (Neville) Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite...
  September 11th, 2024 06:09
• Screw Top. (Doggerel Dave) Not only have I been anticipating your next release but you hit upon a...
  September 11th, 2024 06:06
• Cycling Connections (Orchidee) Orchi another great hymn but somehow this one reads a bit different than...
  September 11th, 2024 06:02
• Sonnet From Calliope. (Goldfinch60) Are you sure she is not your daughter, Zeus being the father you know....
  September 11th, 2024 06:00
• The Why Begins to Show (Dan Williams) This poem is a quiet small pond that is deceptively deep. Several...
  September 11th, 2024 05:55
• Whether I Lost You or Not (Dev Parth) Very nicely expressed with great metaphor the feeling of loss and...
  September 11th, 2024 05:45
• Nature knows best and so do we (Poetic Dan) I loved the message in this poem and am a believer that nature does know...
  September 10th, 2024 13:24
• Semaphore of Life (Gray0328) So many nonverbal signs to follow in life. Nicely said
  September 10th, 2024 13:21
• Bluebottle (AuburnScribbler) A fun read that well could be a nursery rhyme and with a message too....
  September 10th, 2024 13:19
• On Bended Knee (Kurt Philip Behm) Another nicely woven poem of rhyme with finely chosen wording.
  September 10th, 2024 13:15
• ~> She\'s Ma Eye Candy! Redneck (Thad Wilk) Another fun read Thad. Set in the right vernacular and setting it was a...
  September 10th, 2024 13:13
• Down on the Corner (Tony36) Love street music. A great poem about music and how it is not justabout...
  September 10th, 2024 12:56
• daddies boy (Jim56) A wonderful tribute to a loving father
  September 10th, 2024 12:54
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) A most heartfelt commemoration of a trajic day. I too remember where I...
  September 10th, 2024 05:46
• Giant Hamsters! (Orchidee) A rose by any other name...... Orchi justdon\'t let KP catch them for...
  September 10th, 2024 05:41
• Croquet Enjoyment Tanka. (Goldfinch60) laughter with friends while doing something one enjoys is as close to...
  September 10th, 2024 05:36
• Reiterate the Beginning (Dan Williams) Reflections is a good word as this poem takes the reader through the...
  September 10th, 2024 05:32
• The lion (Neilton) Descriptive, vivid, powerful are words that come to mind. Such a metaphor...
  September 10th, 2024 05:27
• The Bird Scene: Take I (Bren Wrights) Nicely said Bren. Words well worked from a first person perspective. That...
  September 10th, 2024 05:21
• Love that Flows (River123) A poem as a profession of love. Nicely written.
  September 9th, 2024 18:33
• Potboy (AuburnScribbler) A great play on words and yes hope is the end of all. Nicely written
  September 9th, 2024 15:22
• King Solomon Winks (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again wisdom in verse. Very nicely worded.
  September 9th, 2024 15:18
• The Return of Roller Skates (Gray0328) Nostalgia for many in this poem. When I was a kid there were no colors ...
  September 9th, 2024 15:16
• Lets right (2781) By coincidence or not there were many film titles in this poem A most fun...
  September 9th, 2024 15:14
• In Nature\'s Lap (Mark The Phenomenon) Beauty is nature it is only a matter of noticing it, seeing it, and...
  September 9th, 2024 15:11
• They laugh (Tony36) Very Christian, Hindu, Budist, Taoist, very human. This happens to many I...
  September 9th, 2024 15:08
• > The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk) Unfortunately too true. A most fun read that rings true and having worked...
  September 9th, 2024 14:59
• We’re all Cannibals (Thesummergloss) The message in this poem hidden under the skin has to be opened to be...
  September 9th, 2024 06:57
• Drunk (Drone7) Very powerful image. This poem speaks with reproach to the sadness and...
  September 9th, 2024 06:53
• During Strawberry Season (Finley Oaktree) I love the imagery and the internal rhyme in this poem. It gives a...
  September 9th, 2024 06:52
• Beer Garden But No Peace! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Self medicating again? A fun read, but with a good message. Nicely
  September 9th, 2024 06:49
• 99 Red balloons (Maplespal) A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced...
  September 9th, 2024 06:48
• CARRY YOUR CROSS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A plea for understanding he heard in this poem. Nicely written.
  September 9th, 2024 06:46
• I Have Loved You (Dev Parth) This poem was beautifully written with wonderful meter and rhyme. Its...
  September 9th, 2024 06:45
• Home (Teddy.15) Teddy I feel your longing for your home. There is a feeling of loss in...
  September 9th, 2024 06:42
• My little life (Neilton) There are strong feelings of love in this poem. Carries with it a...
  September 9th, 2024 06:37
• Dreams (Charles Kick) A scent of loneliness Fills this poem. It carries with it, sadness and...
  September 9th, 2024 06:35
• Worship Worthiness (Orchidee) A very peaceful poem. Orchi This is a good one to begin the week with....
  September 9th, 2024 06:33
• The haven of love (Saleh Ben Saleh) Very beautiful images in this poem. They stimulate past memories and...
  September 9th, 2024 06:30
• Failure of Fields (Dan Williams) A poem that begins dark with many shadows, but soon shows the break of day...
  September 9th, 2024 06:28
• im done being politicaly correct (MR.apocalypse) I love the message in this poem. It is well written with good sound logic....
  September 9th, 2024 06:25
• ~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk) A poem of sadness, betrayal, and disillusion. Because one fails on one’s...
  September 9th, 2024 06:22
• Where The Wild Grass Grows (Tom Dylan) I like the contrast between the beauty of nature and the sound of humanity...
  September 9th, 2024 06:17
• Thank You Dad Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Some memories never fade. A lovely tribute Gold.
  September 9th, 2024 04:56
• I Am Not A Poet (𓆩Mase𓆪) A most interesting view. I always heard that if it sounds like a duck and...
  September 8th, 2024 20:43
• A touch (Neilton)
  September 8th, 2024 08:47
• A touch (Neilton) We all seek the light. A beautiful poem.
  September 8th, 2024 08:47
• A touch (Neilton) Light the symbol for knowledge a guiding source. Nicely done.
  September 8th, 2024 06:34
• Your calming song (Maplespal) Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely...
  September 8th, 2024 06:29
• God? (Boot) Mother Mary full of grace..... Feminism has its role. Loved the...
  September 8th, 2024 06:28
• Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Well written this tribute to the poet, In a sense it is like writting...
  September 8th, 2024 06:24
• The Last Dark Day (ADarkerMind) Enigmatic, lines evoking images and painting patterns I`ve not...
  September 8th, 2024 06:21
• Rainbow (Teddy.15) Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under,...
  September 8th, 2024 06:17
• HANDSOME (Bobby O) A wonderful tributed to a man. Nicely written with internal rhyme.
  September 8th, 2024 06:13
• Psalm Praise (Orchidee) Ok Orchi I can now say I have done my Sunday service. Nicely written my...
  September 8th, 2024 06:10
• I tried and tried (Sheta) A raw expression of the pain of loss. Impactful and stated with power.
  September 8th, 2024 06:07
• The beauty of night (Saleh Ben Saleh) I have always loved the night and its splendor. When young I remember...
  September 8th, 2024 06:05
• Feather Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A warm and endearing thought nicely put Andy.
  September 8th, 2024 05:58
• How To Grow Old (Dan Williams) When younger I thought of some day growing older. I blinked and now I am...
  September 8th, 2024 05:55
• The Pocket Watch (Tony36) A special story with special meaning about a special object. Nicely done,...
  September 7th, 2024 14:05
• Skin Game (Mutley Ravishes) A good message. Many people have difficulty with forgiveness. It is often...
  September 7th, 2024 07:43
• Fusions? (Orchidee) Orchi a good write And I too, have trouble with fusion poems. Sometimes...
  September 7th, 2024 07:41
• Grandpa Doe (David Wakeling) A great story and a great metaphor as well. Society has toppled the trees...
  September 7th, 2024 07:39
• THE QUEEN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I love the wording in this poem. Womb escape is a great image.
  September 7th, 2024 07:35
• Coloured poem (Framed Mirror) A very short poem, but conveys a powerful message. Very nicely written.
  September 7th, 2024 07:34
• The returning point (Hooli) This poem carries a very uncommon view. It is very understandable and I...
  September 7th, 2024 07:32
• You Are Light (Mark The Phenomenon) There is the harmony and peace of nature in this poem. It carries...
  September 7th, 2024 07:30
• When Dreams Reflect Eternity (Salvia.S) The most beautiful poem. It speaks of nature in a metaphor for dreams...
  September 7th, 2024 07:28
• Imperfect Perspective (Cocamedo) Most interesting poem. Well written with great metaphor and rhyme.
  September 7th, 2024 07:27
• Jazzers List. (Goldfinch60) You set the tone with the musicthe names and of course memories ot such...
  September 7th, 2024 05:09
• Crescendo (Dan Williams) This poem is full of wonderful lines and is said in a musing manner as if...
  September 7th, 2024 05:05
• Ant Hill (Thomas W Case) Unique imagry here. The ant hill fit in well
  September 6th, 2024 19:11
• And So It Is (Cassie58) It often appears that life is quite fragile. Sometimes it seems more...
  September 6th, 2024 14:15
• Rainbows and Waterfalls (MendedFences27) Waterfalls waves rainbows all beautiful in nature. Art is in the eye of...
  September 6th, 2024 14:13
• Mystery Girl (Tony36) A mystery indeed. Maybe an attractive one. A fun write
  September 6th, 2024 09:50
• My poems are... (Tom Dylan) Ahh yes and so much more. Loved the poem.
  September 6th, 2024 09:47
• On Hump Day Where Pink Signifies What? (Cheeky Missy) A biblical format, indeed. This seems quite old-school in fact and rings...
  September 6th, 2024 04:48
• I have to wait (Maplespal) This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care...
  September 6th, 2024 04:44
• cancer killer (Jim56) Sad the seeds lightened a bit in your poem very nicely done a very fun
  September 6th, 2024 04:42
• cancer killer (Jim56)
  September 6th, 2024 04:42
• Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee) Keep it up Orchi I am rooting for you. Don’t let anyone squelch your...
  September 6th, 2024 04:39
• Amaranthine love (Neilton) A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very...
  September 6th, 2024 04:35