Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Purely by chance (CuriousWanderer)
Makes one wonder. If not the the chance that your mother met your father...
February 18th, 2025 08:35 - Stand Up (Tony36)
A wonderful call to people to open their hearts and live a different life
February 18th, 2025 08:32 - Those That Sleep (Whats write for me)
A nice flow to this carries the reader on to the end. A beautiful write it...
February 18th, 2025 08:29 - QUEEN OF HER DYNASTY (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A most beautiful write of aspirations and dreams
February 18th, 2025 07:19 - New Age Deception (Doomsday) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It doesn\'t take an inverted card to tell that or the cast of a chicken...
February 18th, 2025 07:18 - LA NOCHE ES MIA (Falcon_mn)
Simlimente bonita y mas genio. Excuse my Spanish it is a humble third...
February 18th, 2025 07:14 - I Have Never Been to New York, But I Remember It Anyway (A B)
Genius writing in this piece that pulls at the heart strings of any true...
February 18th, 2025 07:10 - In my dreams I’m a master (EvenwheniLie)
In meditation all things are possible and vision is enhanced. A lovely...
February 18th, 2025 06:59 - Empty Heart (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
A plea for kindness and peace for understanding and love. Nicely written
February 18th, 2025 06:57 - Gotcha! Once respectable haute cuisine thief Sue She..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Life as it is today. Poem of metaphor and reality and who can tell the...
February 18th, 2025 06:21 - It\'s getting clearer and I don\'t care if it goes all away (Yassin Tamam)
Pondering and the mind wandering are part of processing and understanding...
February 18th, 2025 06:16 - Cosmic mate (Serra)
A nice metaphor between love and the cosmos and how stars in their...
February 18th, 2025 06:10 - Nation’s Truth (AaliyahC.)
A dark view of the present but then how can one not see the night after...
February 18th, 2025 06:03 - A poem of solitude ([email protected])
We are all alone in fact and so it is in this isolation that we can find...
February 18th, 2025 06:00 - How Sweet She Sways (Reynaldo Casison)
Very poetic in its lines and sweet in nature. It paints love in the pink...
February 18th, 2025 05:58 - Staying Alone (Anthony Hanible)
There is a feel of the ghostly here and the last line is haunting. Nicely...
February 18th, 2025 05:50 - Let the mind feel at ease (Funmiwrites)
It is a proven fact that breaks make for a productive effort the question...
February 18th, 2025 05:48 - ROMANTIC WARRIOR (Nephilim56)
Chasing a dream is a long journey that is like trying to catch a cloud in...
February 18th, 2025 05:45 - Hate Breeds Hate (Mohammad younus koul)
Another beautiful write about something that despite how old it is has not...
February 18th, 2025 05:42 - childhood days (Jim56)
Fond past memories spawned by reminders. Lovely Jim
February 18th, 2025 05:37 - I May Bloom Again (Paul Gerard Reed)
The promise is enhanced in a wistful way with the repeated verse. A most...
February 18th, 2025 05:36 - The Essence Of You (Bloomingdale)
Beauty in words is poetry and here it flows. Very nice
February 18th, 2025 05:33 - Electric Shock (Mutley Ravishes)
The cure for stagnation is entropy. A downhill slope with nothing at the...
February 18th, 2025 05:31 - Playing With Words (Neville)
How titillating, word play, like foreplay excites with expectations,...
February 18th, 2025 05:24 - I Am Metaphor (Teddy.15)
Metaphor but also true we are all things some closer in space than others...
February 18th, 2025 05:16 - 22 Today! (Orchidee)
And here I thought that the big bang was a party popper at your first...
February 18th, 2025 05:11 - Two People In One (Poetic Licence)
Anyone who has lived with a borderline personality, a bipolar disorder,...
February 18th, 2025 05:09 - Fear (Framed Mirror)
Sometimes it is the simple that is difficult and the clear that can not be...
February 18th, 2025 05:03 - sheen of young love (Arqios)
Privacy a word of the past. Whether lovers of others or freedom lovers we...
February 18th, 2025 04:56 - A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab)
Full of metaphor layer upon layer. I chose it because of the similarity it...
February 18th, 2025 04:46 - Be the pilot of your own schemes (Emile Dubois)
A powerful call to arms. A battle cry against dependency in following the...
February 18th, 2025 04:38 - Sun On Our Lives Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Gold you know how to turn a grey day into a sunny one. Once again you have...
February 18th, 2025 04:26 - A Poem about a Beloved Friend after Eduard Uspensky (Ksey_Gan)
Friend or foe is often hard to discern. Most interesting.
February 17th, 2025 19:57 - Echoes of Eden (Emile Dubois)
Bread crumbs seldom are sufficient to sustain a hungry soul. A most...
February 17th, 2025 19:54 - The questions (Sheta)
Comfort with oneself is the cornerstone of one\'s personal foundation. It...
February 17th, 2025 19:50 - Feminism, but can I keep my bra? (NinjaGirl)
Love the metaphor here that there are differences and that they are to be...
February 17th, 2025 19:44 - Such A Beautiful Place (Teddy.15)
Vision and hearing our two primary senses equate well. I know people who...
February 17th, 2025 16:39 - My Revenge (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
Sad, double sad. One hurt on top of another and then the pain from...
February 17th, 2025 15:08 - So, Yeah, I Think Who Covered That (Cheeky Missy)
Beautiful! Simply beautiful Chic
February 17th, 2025 15:05 - The Love (Anthony Hanible)
A very nice poem of unity in soul and love. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 13:49 - Hope (13LaurenD)
A poem of encouragement that speaks with power about the ability of the...
February 17th, 2025 13:45 - Confused and dying (EvenwheniLie)
Very well rhymed internally with great flow an very nice write
February 17th, 2025 13:42 - Distance (Mik)
Yes I feel the noise and the beat of the words and internal rhyme make...
February 17th, 2025 13:40 - My Forlorn Mind (Arshia)
Most interestingly worded to cause doubt and uncertainty it reads well and...
February 17th, 2025 13:34 - (Don\'t) Leave me! (Melancholia)
A feel of loss in this poem and a reaching out. Very nicely expressed in...
February 17th, 2025 13:28 - With A Gentle Dust Of Cinnamon (ADarkerMind)
Of your poems this is one of my favorites, it is dark as usual but carries...
February 17th, 2025 13:26 - My dreams (RSM0812)
Many live their dreams as their reality. A wonderful write
February 17th, 2025 11:14 - Love me Father (Poetaldo)
Service to others a work of love. Nicely written
February 17th, 2025 11:13 - Tyrant\'s Creed (Mohammad younus koul)
Another great write and the last line is a fave. Brilliant!
February 17th, 2025 11:09 - Mom (Serra)
There is nothing more secure than a mother\'s love. Short and very nice...
February 17th, 2025 10:10 - If in fact. (Davidbrailsford)
Such a common view that so many have yet so narcissistic in view. If we...
February 17th, 2025 09:23 - Within The Wind (Kurt Philip Behm)
Much longer than most of your works this one has such depth and...
February 17th, 2025 09:21 - If I was a tree (CuriousWanderer)
Great reflections and aspirations. Such nice desires and contemplation of...
February 17th, 2025 09:18 - Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times) (Neville)
Isn\'t that what poetry is know for? Creating new words, how many did...
February 17th, 2025 09:15 - Nobody Knows (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A great message to send to people that stay unknown to others. Very nice
February 17th, 2025 09:09 - BBQ (Tony36)
You are making me hungry a fun read Tony
February 17th, 2025 09:07 - Sixes (Tristan Robert Lange)
What a strong poem that speaks with biblical power but in contradiction...
February 17th, 2025 09:03 - A season of change (Funmiwrites)
Quite the love letter this poem reads hard and has power. Loved it
February 17th, 2025 08:19 - Watching leaves fall (Maplespal)
From the song \"surfin\' bird\" by the Rivintons this became the theme for...
February 17th, 2025 08:15 - Trump the devil (2781)
All good stories require a villain, for God there must be a devil and so...
February 17th, 2025 08:09 - Shadow (Cassie58)
Here in a personal story one feels the curiosity, shock at discovery and...
February 17th, 2025 08:05 - Data Plots (Whats write for me)
Indeed too bad that we don\'t have them for our every day activities and...
February 17th, 2025 08:00 - Sloth Superpower (Gray0328)
Interesting animals and a possible metaphor. Nicely done Gray
February 17th, 2025 06:00 - hedgehog buddy (Jim56)
Cute and so much a part of nature this poem could well be in a children\'s...
February 17th, 2025 05:59 - Eternal Secret (Haleyalexis)
Pain and anguish so aptly expressed where the past is an anchor that pulls...
February 17th, 2025 05:34 - GRAPE (Laddukavi)
This poem and its worded meter give the sense of munching. Nice
February 17th, 2025 05:32 - MidNight Haikus (Reynaldo Casison)
Very nicely written these three Haiku. They give a splendid pictures to...
February 17th, 2025 05:31 - One for the Ladies (Mutley Ravishes)
A frightening thought for those who have undergone menses and now like...
February 17th, 2025 05:29 - A silent conversation (Vishakha)
This poem grows more cryptic the more it is read and after three readings...
February 17th, 2025 05:19 - The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence)
Strong feelings something that America has not had in a long time. Wait...
February 17th, 2025 05:10 - Winter Soldiers And NPCs (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I echo the last line of this poem. When we are too connected we are forced...
February 17th, 2025 05:00 - Madness (Tkatie118)
The pacing and beat to this poem as well as other things remind me of Ren...
February 17th, 2025 04:57 - BOXING BOOTH (Nephilim56)
In the literal memory loss and Parkinson\'s disease in the metaphorical...
February 17th, 2025 04:50 - Poor and Needy (Orchidee)
Love this one Orchi. In each of our minds aren\'t we all needy? I know I...
February 17th, 2025 04:46 - ‘til all my breath is You (Arqios)
Funny how we like our poisons. Be it drugs, cholesterol, sugar,...
February 17th, 2025 04:41 - No1 from MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
There may be nothing for dinner but there is plenty in this short helping...
February 17th, 2025 04:36 - Beautiful Morning (Doggerel Dave)
Lived in Oklahoma once for a few years and you haven\'t missed much. As...
February 17th, 2025 04:25 - Walking In The Store. (Goldfinch60)
Ah Gold I found that my vision was fading some time back and it can lead...
February 17th, 2025 04:17 - Love Confessional (Parisab)
To love something you must know it and to know it is to live it. A poem of...
February 17th, 2025 04:13 - Who is more civilized (EvenwheniLie)
With the rhyme and internal rhym as well as the meter it again sound so...
February 16th, 2025 19:00 - the clover (Sheta)
A poem of love lost and a broken heart. Nicely written
February 16th, 2025 18:58 - The Love I wasn\'t looking for (Ugly)
Caught by the heart and then the loss that has transformed happiness into...
February 16th, 2025 18:56 - In the midst of death Montmartre lament (Emile Dubois)
So true that we hold onto past garbage that would be better ejected but...
February 16th, 2025 17:37 - Tears (CuriousWanderer)
A poem that shows that emoting is not a bad thing. Nicely worded with a...
February 16th, 2025 17:34 - The Sledgehammer - in Trumps own words (Raidoc)
A political poem on a hotly contested topic. Interesting and brave to say...
February 16th, 2025 17:32 - Ruined mind (Shadowbones)
I hear the pain in this poem that seems tragic and dark. Nice wording
February 16th, 2025 17:30 - Aging (MendedFences27)
I remember my grandfather stopped reading the obituaries and when I asked...
February 16th, 2025 17:29 - Love poems. (Hey!)
I can hear the anguish in this poem and the pain of separated lovers. Well...
February 16th, 2025 17:27 - Don’t cry for me Africa (Poetaldo)
A heart felt poem for people on the African continent. Nicely done
February 16th, 2025 17:24 - Do or Dare (RSM0812)
A provocative write and the question remains how far do we go on a dare?...
February 16th, 2025 14:22 - I never meant to (Nikola)
Gratitude expressed and in any relationship both carry the burden. A very...
February 16th, 2025 14:21 - A nice prescription of sleep (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Wounds anesthetized whether by drug or anything else seldom heal as well....
February 16th, 2025 14:19 - Deep In The Heart (Anthony Hanible)
Although metaphor many are dependent enough on love to do these things and...
February 16th, 2025 14:17 - Last Moment (A.H. Browning)
A great write about loss. Poignant and heart felt. Yes I agree the...
February 16th, 2025 14:15 - Losers (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great word usage in this poem a bit of humor that unfortunately is...
February 16th, 2025 14:11 - Imagining the Impossible (Teddy.15)
To true to laugh at. This is a wonderful write wrapping up a whole book...
February 16th, 2025 14:08 - To Fight Another Day ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
A tribute to those who have fought and died. Lovely
February 16th, 2025 14:06 - Micro poem (Thoughtless)
This has a George Carlin type of word play to it. Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:05 - The Road (MendedFences27)
This is a fine poem but may not have gotten all the attention it should...
February 16th, 2025 14:04 - The Caterpillar (R. Gordon Zyne)
Once again your metaphor is delightfully pictured in images each of which...
February 16th, 2025 09:10
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