Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- ~> It\'s Not Easy, -Sonnet- (Thad Wilk)
A well worded and pleading poem of love. Very nicely done
January 18th, 2025 11:21 - riverbeds (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed....
January 18th, 2025 11:20 - Field of Flowers (Tony36)
A great metaphor and poem Tony nicely done
January 18th, 2025 11:15 - Commitment Call (Orchidee)
Very nice Orchi a great hymn
January 18th, 2025 11:14 - Flight Benefits (Demar Desu)
Capitalism based on greed is a profit first operation and there is no...
January 18th, 2025 07:58 - everyone has love (Jim56)
Lovely and true even in detail. Love is different in each and everyone. We...
January 18th, 2025 07:55 - bicnic py the sea (Arqios)
Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing
January 18th, 2025 07:53 - At The Risk of Reaching Out (Neville)
A truism spoken poetically in so few words. Lovely Neville
January 18th, 2025 05:31 - Mozart Yet Again. (Goldfinch60)
Music is such a strong emotional force a universal language. Lovely Andy
January 18th, 2025 04:41 - Dust (Doggerel Dave)
Dust like a fine patina creates an ambience of age and destinction. lol A...
January 18th, 2025 04:39 - Gland Goes On A Rant (Mutley Ravishes)
Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem...
January 18th, 2025 04:34 - pain (NinjaGirl)
Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain...
January 17th, 2025 19:21 - Thought 3 (Maplespal)
Very nice. Man, woman, child even animals wild we are all living...
January 17th, 2025 17:30 - When All Else Fails (Gray0328)
It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but...
January 17th, 2025 13:04 - Wisdom Within Water (Salvia.S)
Change and adaptability should not be under rated. Very nicely written
January 17th, 2025 12:57 - ~> Chameleons (Thad Wilk)
Yellow is the principle color they take. Although some turn green with...
January 17th, 2025 12:55 - Passion\'s Paradox (Tristan Robert Lange)
This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to...
January 17th, 2025 12:53 - Old rucksack (Lorenz)
This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys...
January 17th, 2025 12:47 - Bobby O. (Bellaperf)
Fills me with sadness and will miss him terribly but his words will linger...
January 17th, 2025 12:42 - Morning Stillness (RSM0812)
Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night....
January 17th, 2025 12:37 - Still ill (Tom Dylan)
I feel the illness in this poem it strikes hard and there seems no escape....
January 17th, 2025 12:34 - The Abandoned McDonald\'s (Tony36)
A great metaphor in this poem Tony it seems to me to lament the passing of...
January 17th, 2025 12:28 - CTRL + ALT + DLT (Arqios)
So many directions. My first take was anesthesia after an operation that...
January 17th, 2025 12:26 - There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?! (Cheeky Missy)
Work stories are about all I miss of the office or work site. They grow in...
January 17th, 2025 10:58 - Time\'s Sweetest Tales (Salvia.S)
This poem holds a sweetness to it and reads well. Nicely crafted
January 17th, 2025 05:59 - pet friends (Jim56)
Animals are more sincere than people. A wonderful write about the...
January 17th, 2025 05:38 - damn you networks (Demar Desu)
What good is a Safari if you can not see the animals? Have had this happen...
January 17th, 2025 05:36 - A Rose Without Thorns (senryu) (Teddy.15)
This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and...
January 17th, 2025 05:28 - At the Very End of Darkness (Neville)
This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes...
January 17th, 2025 05:22 - Healthy Body. (Goldfinch60)
Truer words never spoken Gold a person that eats well, exercises, sleeps,...
January 17th, 2025 05:15 - Spazzm\'d (Mutley Ravishes)
A few lines that pack a punch. Lovely
January 16th, 2025 21:22 - I Just Want to Swim (Thomas W Case)
A series of thoughts here all tied together. Nicely woven the setting of...
January 16th, 2025 17:14 - Plentiful Providings (Orchidee)
Generous indeed he has multiplied your seed giving you KP. A fine write...
January 16th, 2025 14:05 - Highgate Cemetery (Cassie58)
Bring together history, and different cultures and faiths all in a single...
January 16th, 2025 14:02 - Rosy Lea (Teddy.15)
Clever use of words in this Teddy. A most fun read
January 16th, 2025 13:58 - Kisses To Die For! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
A fun read and it makes the mind run wild with who might show up to this...
January 16th, 2025 11:47 - The House at Demon\'s Alley (Tristan Robert Lange)
This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they...
January 16th, 2025 10:15 - You (Tony36)
Very nice Tony many words of wisdom here
January 16th, 2025 08:12 - new day (Jim56)
A wonderful write Jim and yes each day is a new start and we choose what...
January 16th, 2025 08:09 - Aliens are coming! (Demar Desu)
Another fun read. Makes one think and wonder are we not all aliens?
January 16th, 2025 07:28 - forgotten soul (NinjaGirl)
Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain...
January 16th, 2025 05:57 - Flushed (Neville)
Deeply sensual in literal and metaphorical ways double entendre give even...
January 16th, 2025 04:31 - time’s no friend (Arqios)
You have accomplished the near impossible describing the intangible in...
January 16th, 2025 04:27 - Start The Day. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice bringing yesterday into today is not helpful. Yes true again...
January 16th, 2025 04:22 - Hell (Dan Williams)
Open heart surgery of the emotional type. Great imagry in this poem
January 16th, 2025 04:18 - The sunflower (NafisaSB)
A single voice can cause a major change. The power of one is often...
January 16th, 2025 04:13 - Silence (John Prophet)
A poem of limits the ends of the spectrum. Framed in zero and infinity...
January 16th, 2025 04:10 - Hormoans (Mutley Ravishes)
Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone...
January 16th, 2025 04:08 - Do You Believe in Magic? (Gray0328)
There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last...
January 15th, 2025 13:54 - Beauty of Living (Demar Desu)
This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear...
January 15th, 2025 13:48 - Lovers Fate (RSM0812)
A very warm and sensual poem that is heartwarming through its...
January 15th, 2025 13:44 - Healing Help (Orchidee)
Now this is a different style of hymn Orchi. Most interesting very nice
January 15th, 2025 10:49 - ~. > I Am An Anteater! (Thad Wilk)
Now I have to say I have seen a lot of critters but an anteater I have...
January 15th, 2025 10:47 - Bitter Sweet (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and...
January 15th, 2025 10:45 - Lady warrior (Tony36)
A poem of a female warrior. There are many and not on the battlefield of...
January 15th, 2025 10:41 - To my kind: It\'s time (Maplespal)
A haunting write and a different point of view presented in this poem....
January 15th, 2025 10:34 - PAIN (Nephilim56)
Poor self esteem can lead to feelings of being looked down on and feeling...
January 15th, 2025 10:30 - The Sound of Rain (Tristan Robert Lange)
Death\'s sorrow reflected in this poem full of images of it but no mention...
January 15th, 2025 10:25 - issues (Jim56)
Ruminating on issues is a big problem for most people. I always say if...
January 15th, 2025 10:21 - spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie (Arqios)
What were once face to face social ties now facebook connections. People...
January 15th, 2025 10:16 - Right On Time (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end....
January 15th, 2025 04:15 - Death In The Night. (Goldfinch60)
There are too many of them out there looking for money to suck or...
January 15th, 2025 04:06 - Purgatory (Dan Williams)
Thought provoking. \"only paper mâché morals.\" a great line. A most...
January 15th, 2025 04:02 - I\'m Sorry (DLewis88)
Dark. The pressures felt from others are felt in this poem and the...
January 14th, 2025 20:04 - The Birds of November (Thomas W Case)
Time such a relative thing. A powerful write that leads to reflection
January 14th, 2025 20:02 - Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh! (Cheeky Missy)
Used to live next to a family that owned a hotdog factory. They would...
January 14th, 2025 17:29 - The Clowns of the Evening News (Gray0328)
Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social...
January 14th, 2025 13:34 - the Unfathomable (NinjaGirl)
Metaphors here as well as a direct hint at past pain still present. Sad...
January 14th, 2025 13:30 - ~`` But, I Am A Tiger! - Tiger Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Tigers are not my choice of a wrestling partner. A fun read my firend
January 14th, 2025 11:24 - Broadsword My Friend, My Gentlemen (ADarkerMind)
Cryptic as always but powerfull lines. nicely written
January 14th, 2025 11:20 - The right (RSM0812)
This poem reads well with great rhyme and flow as well as a thought...
January 14th, 2025 09:15 - We are (Maplespal)
A great thought and a philisophical poem as well. Nicely worded
January 14th, 2025 09:14 - robin melody (Jim56)
A lovely poem with such good flow and rhyme. It was a short as a robin...
January 14th, 2025 09:12 - The power of words (Tony36)
Wise words Tony yes words shadow lingers longer than the sun and cuts...
January 14th, 2025 09:11 - Poetry Called (Tom Dylan)
So glad you did that, poetry is a most wonderful guest. Very nicely
January 14th, 2025 09:09 - Closed Open in Bloom (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most sensual and errotic poem about flowers. The metaphor is strong and...
January 14th, 2025 09:07 - Help! There’s a dragon in my stew! (Arqios)
As a child used to look at the soup and imagine things now I eat it to...
January 14th, 2025 04:14 - $1.86 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun...
January 14th, 2025 04:10 - New Moon Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Another wondrful sonnet to your credit Andy well done
January 14th, 2025 04:03 - red (NinjaGirl)
Seeing red an old cliche is something that can happen in times of extreem...
January 14th, 2025 03:57 - Worm (RSM0812)
You have a most interesting way of pairing opposite dualities in each...
January 13th, 2025 19:42 - Blue Star (Mutley Ravishes)
Now this was a short one that sent its message in just a few words. It can...
January 13th, 2025 19:39 - Truth and lies (RSM0812)
Unique wording in this poem kept me guessing. A fun read
January 13th, 2025 19:35 - You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You? (Cheeky Missy)
Too cold and hungry a most sad condition and to have fun despite this is a...
January 13th, 2025 17:28 - The evening angel (Lorenz)
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this...
January 13th, 2025 17:24 - Get Out of Dodge (Gray0328)
Gray this is deeper than the story. There is a time to leave and give up...
January 13th, 2025 15:44 - Visions of the Soothsayer (Matthew R. Callies)
You have woven into this poem deep wisdom and advice that in the telling...
January 13th, 2025 12:40 - Influenced by Woodkid (Maplespal)
A most beautiful poem of where one can be taken with the magic of music....
January 13th, 2025 12:26 - `~> Christmas Day, Far Away -Acrostic form- (Thad Wilk)
For many Christmas is not a time of cheer but of sorrow war has always...
January 13th, 2025 10:19 - Life in America (Demar Desu)
A most amusing piece this Senryu displays both sides
January 13th, 2025 10:17 - Lasting (Cassie58)
A sad poem that has that haunting feeling. Very nicely written in very few...
January 13th, 2025 10:15 - crested (Tristan Robert Lange)
When you got to go you got to go. A fun piece my friend
January 13th, 2025 10:13 - Fallen Angel (Tony36)
Makes one wonder what an angel could do that would result in that sever a...
January 13th, 2025 08:10 - all the same (Jim56)
A great message Jim said so nicely in this poem.
January 13th, 2025 06:53 - Angels Watching Over You (Poetic Licence)
A most beautiful wish for betterment and wellness of a ailing friend....
January 13th, 2025 06:49 - SUMMER HAZE (Nephilim56)
Haunting in feel aswell as longing. It reads with an unfinished ending and...
January 13th, 2025 04:51 - January Snow (Tom Dylan)
A picture of winter painted in words that I remember from my younger years...
January 13th, 2025 04:48 - Hopeful Help (Orchidee)
Orchi another wonderful poem that again focuses on gratitude and...
January 13th, 2025 04:46 - once there was a boy (Arqios)
Cryptic This is a beautiful write that details that right of passage to...
January 13th, 2025 04:42 - Our Book Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
with most books I can see how many more pages I have to read so I know...
January 13th, 2025 04:25
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