Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- What I Want (13LaurenD)
Stand up for what is right and all will be right well written.
August 15th, 2024 09:58 - Dummy (Thoughtless)
All those words apply. Cleverly written and nicely said.
August 15th, 2024 09:55 - Disability Problems (DD.)
Clever and well stated. Nicely done.
August 15th, 2024 09:53 - Misunderstood (Cassie58)
A wonderful write about the punishment of ignorance and good intentions...
August 15th, 2024 09:52 - ()
Beautifully written with so many of nature\'s images. Very nice
August 15th, 2024 05:46 - HABITS THAT BUILD (Bobby O)
Bobby this speaks truth practice makes perfect and establishing habits...
August 15th, 2024 05:43 - The Old Witch Babysits (Gray0328)
Mythical and enthralling it holds the feel of legend and old hobbit tales...
August 15th, 2024 05:29 - cruel and kind (Jim56)
The mystery of life and the future. Well expressed in this poem.
August 15th, 2024 05:27 - Heavy Steps (Maplespal)
A sad write of parting with a lifetime companion. Well expressed
August 15th, 2024 05:26 - HOME GOING (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Sad and haunting the trials and tribulations. A good write
August 15th, 2024 05:24 - Return Rapture (Orchidee)
Great write Orchi but as ror me. After they plant me in the ground I...
August 15th, 2024 05:22 - Lemon Meringue Pie (Saxon Crow)
A fun read to start the day. Hope I don\'t have any of those dreams or if...
August 15th, 2024 05:18 - Growth (Doggerel Dave)
Truth in a nutshell. Population growth is necessary for economic growth....
August 15th, 2024 05:14 - After (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Thoughts that many have and when the last person to know you is gone who...
August 15th, 2024 05:10 - Are You the Thought Are You the Feel? (Hollow Enigma)
Nicely written this poem takes one on a journey.
August 15th, 2024 05:07 - The Sea (Cocamedo)
The need to take care of the ecosystem is something neglected by most....
August 15th, 2024 05:04 - Dreams (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
Open your eyes to the wonders of the universe. Lovely
August 15th, 2024 05:01 - No Delivery From Amazon (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That\'s the down side of not buying at the store, never know of when it\'s...
August 15th, 2024 05:01 - More Heritage Down the Pan & Fuck Ann Summers (Neville)
You have me at a disadvantage being on the other side of the pond. I never...
August 15th, 2024 04:59 - Canal Cyanide. (Goldfinch60)
Is this a metaphor Gold of pollution overall and the lack of respect for...
August 15th, 2024 04:51 - Sun Ray (Mutley Ravishes)
That is what the pharmaceutical companies have been putting out for years....
August 15th, 2024 04:48 - free (Sheta)
I feel the stare. Got your eye on me what are you watching for? Fun read
August 15th, 2024 04:46 - Stealing ideas (EvenwheniLie)
We all borrow, steal, pinch, plagiarize, copy, cover, things we have heard...
August 15th, 2024 04:44 - In The Line Of Fire (Teddy.15)
A little humor is the fuel needed to start the morning. Funny how these...
August 15th, 2024 04:36 - Solitude (Dayena)
This piece has many biblical words and familiar wordings. It reads well...
August 15th, 2024 04:29 - Gargoyle of Dreams (Dan Williams)
The sad story of the folly of youth and the jadedness of age. Time takes...
August 15th, 2024 03:48 - Olympics (2781)
Loved the word play on this one a most fun read
August 15th, 2024 03:44 - Evoking The Cologne (Cassie58)
Memories reinforced by physical items seem stronger. Sadness in this poem...
August 14th, 2024 19:24 - mis understood (NinjaGirl)
A clever play on words. Nice
August 14th, 2024 18:31 - Don\'t harvest the low hanging fruit (Hzugman)
Cleverly worded and true. A great write.
August 14th, 2024 18:30 - Politics over nature (EvenwheniLie)
Hypocrisy is the rule as is waste and laziness. Sad but true. Good write
August 14th, 2024 18:29 - lost forever (Fire_fly)
Romantic and sweet. Nicely written
August 14th, 2024 18:27 - Let This Be Surrender (M.M.)
Anger rage that poetry won\'t fix. Loved the last stanza. Well written.
August 14th, 2024 15:25 - What More Could You Want? (Thomas W Case)
Great story and some great lines \"accidentally got married\" loved it.
August 14th, 2024 15:23 - My years (Sami mulaj)
A great metaphor of age and time with wonderful images throughout. Nicely...
August 14th, 2024 13:26 - The Planet (Tristan Robert Lange)
Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has...
August 14th, 2024 13:07 - Alone at a Cliff Cottage (Xiaobai Yulan)
A most beautiful image overall with painted dashes and speckles of...
August 14th, 2024 13:05 - Working it Out (Thoughtless)
Opposites attract they say. Difference is good to a point no catsup on...
August 14th, 2024 12:05 - Temporary love (Natalie Heisey)
A strong message. Love a misunderstood word too general to apply in all...
August 14th, 2024 11:31 - Walking (MendedFences27)
A very different style and format to this poem. It fits well and reads...
August 14th, 2024 11:29 - A Taste of Home (Gray0328)
Interesting and unusual it smells like home. Nicely said
August 14th, 2024 11:27 - DO YOU DRIFT BACK? (Iampranjalprabhakar)
Nicely written a plea for returning love that has burnt out. Very nicely...
August 14th, 2024 11:26 - I Don\'t Know What To Do (13LaurenD)
A sad write of relationships that are not certain or maybe certain to...
August 14th, 2024 11:24 - Je Ne Sais Quoi (Kurt Philip Behm)
Indeed they do. Poetry in rhythm and tone it goes far beyond words...
August 14th, 2024 10:45 - A stranger in foreign lands (Saleh Ben Saleh)
A most interesting write and good read.
August 14th, 2024 10:43 - Fourteen Sticks of Celery (ADarkerMind)
Vivid images painted in this poem. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 10:41 - ~. Why Is My Bowl Empty Bro? (Thad Wilk)
A fun read but a reminder that when you own something you are responsible...
August 14th, 2024 10:39 - beneath the surface (Amogelang Mooketsi)
A most beautiful write and emotional expression of existential search....
August 14th, 2024 09:48 - Floating (JoyJoy)
Beautiful and worded so well. I hope so too.
August 14th, 2024 09:06 - Meditation (Tony36)
Very nice I often use breathing as a technique for relaxation and to clear...
August 14th, 2024 09:05 - nothing worth seeing? (Xqw)
A sad commentary on the state of the world. Well written and in good style
August 14th, 2024 09:04 - tell your family i said hi (Carpe4diem)
Sad and horrific a dark read. Well expressed the emotion bleeds.
August 14th, 2024 09:02 - Birth of another tortured artist (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Good advice said so well. Therapeutic to those that will listen just like...
August 14th, 2024 08:58 - GREEN MEANS GROW (Kelvin Kofi Apenteng Bamfo)
A time to be molded and grow it is true. Be careful the shape that you...
August 14th, 2024 06:43 - Overwhelmed (Hanible)
A poem of distress and agitation. Nicely expressed.
August 14th, 2024 06:40 - we never know (Jim56)
Change is the only constant. A fun read Jim
August 14th, 2024 06:39 - Power of Love (Job Welime)
Young expectations expressed in this poem a pledge to love. The youth...
August 14th, 2024 06:38 - Sleepless (Maplespal)
The bureaucracy of death. Incredible that even in death there is no peace....
August 14th, 2024 06:35 - The 1990s were my 1960s. (Tom Dylan)
Memories, flashes from the past nicely expressed in this piece
August 14th, 2024 06:32 - I know (Dn)
Stark and cold is a kiss of steel that can not feel. Hard and harsh is its...
August 14th, 2024 06:31 - Bitter Sweet Springs (Neville)
This strikes at the heart of (progress?) or should I say growth. So nicely...
August 14th, 2024 06:27 - Spiritually Awake (Rj1way)
A nice message sent taken with good cheer. Nicely done.
August 14th, 2024 06:22 - Sex and the over Seventies (Saxon Crow)
I\'m glad that this not more explicit or it might be judged illicit. A...
August 14th, 2024 06:20 - The markets (2781)
This reads like a biblical verse. I feel premonitions of doom here. Well I...
August 14th, 2024 06:17 - Distractions (Cocamedo)
Either the devil on the shoulder or my mother in my ear. Could be the...
August 14th, 2024 06:14 - Pop Culture Reference Rhymes (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Ah pop culture, nicely rhymed. And yes a little social commentary and...
August 14th, 2024 06:13 - Water Well-Springs (Orchidee)
A hymn of praise. God knows we all need a little of that. Good write Orchi
August 14th, 2024 06:10 - AT THE BEAUTIFUL GATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A powerful write. Nicely done
August 14th, 2024 06:08 - It\'s Me Vs. Me (Dev Parth)
True words spoken in this well rhymed poem. Nicely said.
August 14th, 2024 06:04 - My Nevada (Teddy.15)
A beautiful expression of love lost and soul at the same time. An...
August 14th, 2024 06:01 - Winter, I hate you (Dn)
I could feel this one coming just like spring at the end of winter. A fun...
August 14th, 2024 05:53 - The Flamboyant Tree (Rrodriguez)
Nature sings and speaks in a language that only the truly interested can...
August 14th, 2024 05:51 - Slipping slowly, passing by (Iddycol)
A poem of adversity but also reassurance nicely written in verse. Well
August 14th, 2024 05:49 - CATCHING A JAZZ BUG (Bobby O)
A most beautiful description of what jazz is and why it is so seductive...
August 14th, 2024 05:06 - The Joy Of Old Age. (Goldfinch60)
May time bless you the rest of your days Gold. It is so wonderful when one...
August 14th, 2024 04:58 - Complacency Dares (Dan Williams)
Brilliant!! A masterpiece. The rhyme and meter in this pulls me on as time...
August 14th, 2024 04:55 - THIS DAY A WINDMILL (Bobby O)
I loved the complex but most satisfying rhyme in this piece The metaphor...
August 14th, 2024 04:44 - Energy (John Prophet)
I felt the energy in this powerful piece. It pulsates with reverberations...
August 13th, 2024 20:29 - Anchor Buried In Clouds (Satishverma)
Anger and violence is felt in this poem. Powerful write.
August 13th, 2024 20:27 - paroxysm (Anemoia)
Anger is heard in this poem. It seems on the edge and ready for violence....
August 13th, 2024 20:25 - What is the cost of a broken heart? (Anabasova)
The cost of a broken heart is an instalment plan of increasing interest...
August 13th, 2024 19:31 - My Dad (Angela)
A beautiful farewell and tribute. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:44 - How I write poems (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
That seems to be the process succinctly put in a very brief manner. Lovely
August 13th, 2024 17:21 - Memories in waves (Kenny O\'Donnell)
How assumptions color our perceptions and we end up questioning ourselves...
August 13th, 2024 17:17 - LIFE OF LIE (Kwrites)
Questioning oneself in doubt. Short but well written. Nicely done
August 13th, 2024 17:15 - Words & Silence (Young Fella)
As times change so do expectations and feelings. Space seems more valued...
August 13th, 2024 17:13 - True North (Kurt Philip Behm)
Beautiful and not critically polemic but complimentary. And well deserved.
August 13th, 2024 15:31 - Have Faith (DLewis88)
A beautiful poem loved it
August 13th, 2024 15:22 - Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case)
A colorful past with a black and white view. A colorful write with a black...
August 13th, 2024 15:18 - A 19\'s Poem (Wh)
A message nicely sent and in poetic terms. Well done.
August 13th, 2024 13:50 - pain (Sheta)
A true and most wonderful message. Great lines my favorite is the last...
August 13th, 2024 13:49 - Best wishes (Sami mulaj)
If only more people felt this way the words would be uttered more...
August 13th, 2024 13:47 - Rough times (Hey!)
Betrayal is an ugly animal that devours trust and bites whoever it can....
August 13th, 2024 12:10 - The Lizard in the Coffee Pot (Gray0328)
A fun write and a metaphor at the same time. We all seek warmth whether...
August 13th, 2024 10:53 - Broken Broom (AuburnScribbler)
A wonderful metaphor and tribute to a valued item. I remember my...
August 13th, 2024 10:48 - ~> Halloween Demon BAT! (Thad Wilk)
Sounds like Shylock\'s bargain of a pound of flesh. Too pricy a cost for...
August 13th, 2024 10:18 - Moving On (MendedFences27)
A sad write. Laments about how things would be if we were different are...
August 13th, 2024 10:11 - The Silent Giant (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Mountains majesty stands out in this magnificently worded wonder of beauty
August 13th, 2024 08:43 - It\'s Your Life (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Choices are the basis of life or at least the illusion of choices. This...
August 13th, 2024 08:39 - At the Beach (Tony36)
Calm and easy to digest this poem promotes relaxation. Nice to hear and...
August 13th, 2024 08:37
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