Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• slam your head into the basement concrete floor (Anemoia) What a creative manner of animating the inanimate to tell a human tale....
  August 4th, 2024 05:58
• Proceeding To Praise (Orchidee) Recognition, praise and gratitude what else could a supreme deity desire....
  August 4th, 2024 05:56
• If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill (Teddy.15) A wonderful turning of lemons into lemonade. Such a fun read, playful and...
  August 4th, 2024 05:54
• Immaterial Things Such as These (Neville) Neville loved the format of this poem it seemed a zipper that was closed....
  August 4th, 2024 05:50
• Order Out Of Chaos (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Much of the cynicism I hold is voiced in this poem and that too I think is...
  August 4th, 2024 05:45
• Unwound (Tristan Robert Lange) Disjointed thought link in chains as they pass through our minds. Here...
  August 4th, 2024 05:43
• Thank You Wolfgang. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful way to start the day. Amazing how a man so many years ago...
  August 4th, 2024 05:37
• A hug (NafisaSB) True statements here holding someone close promotes union and a sense of...
  August 4th, 2024 05:35
• Neck Kisses (Mark The Phenomenon) Sensual, sexual, romantic, a sex manual in a poem.
  August 4th, 2024 05:33
• Over Your Shoulder (Dan Williams) Is that finger pointing at me? You are creating paranoia in me Dan. A very...
  August 4th, 2024 04:57
• End (RefugeInRain) In chasing our tail we often find it is part of us, but it takes going in...
  August 3rd, 2024 21:00
• Unholy Night (Thomas W Case) Bad dreams, too much to drink, or wrong drugs often lead to this feeling...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:56
• Denouement - 1920 (Cole) A very unique style to this poem kept my attention and the wording was...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:54
• longing (Fire_fly) A nice thought with a very pleasant feel to it
  August 3rd, 2024 18:52
• shadow ii (Eugene S.) Thought provoking in its ambiguity yet holds the attention with its...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:51
• Queen Tore Flesh From Bone (Beatrix M) I once found myself in an obsidian field and gathered several shards. A...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:50
• A Strange Woman\'s Lips (Thoughtless) Confusing to all involved. Incredible is the word. Meaning not credible. A...
  August 3rd, 2024 18:47
• To My Childhood Best Friend (Aneenaelzabinod) Dependability is worth a great deal. Here it is expressed in this poem....
  August 3rd, 2024 18:43
• Empty Seats (Mya) Interesting and a fun read. Thanks for sharing
  August 3rd, 2024 18:41
• To My Sister: 姐姐 (Olive Anderson) Sweet, cute, endearing all fit this poem. Nicely written.
  August 3rd, 2024 13:40
• Reinventing Time (Kurt Philip Behm) Thought provoking lines put in verse that flows like honey.
  August 3rd, 2024 13:39
• Eye cannot envision not wearing glasses (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Quite and emotional ride in this story form the eyes of a child memory....
  August 3rd, 2024 13:37
• War and Desire (Anandh K) The ravages of war are a gruesome and tragic consequence of man and his...
  August 3rd, 2024 13:33
• Music To Lift the Spirits (Gray0328) This was music to the ears. I love music of all types but particularly the...
  August 3rd, 2024 11:44
• Pause (Annemarie) A mantra in poetry. Nicely written and beautiful to read
  August 3rd, 2024 10:36
• Play (Alan R) Nicely written in verse a message sent. Very good
  August 3rd, 2024 10:34
• A Battle With You (Iyeah) Clever and well stated. A good read.
  August 3rd, 2024 10:33
• Nightly Theatre (Teddy.15) Even good dreams can give muscle contractions. A lovely dream that seems...
  August 3rd, 2024 09:06
• SOULMATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A nice pledge of love to a chosen one seen as a soulmate
  August 3rd, 2024 08:58
• The hummingbird made me wonder (Saleh Ben Saleh) Beautiful little creatures I see different ones and sometimes they come...
  August 3rd, 2024 08:56
• To the Skies (Anabella151) Beautiful in a literal sense but the metaphor is greater still.
  August 3rd, 2024 08:54
• In the Clouds (MendedFences27) Beautiful images in this write. Love the clouds and sometimes find myself...
  August 3rd, 2024 08:53
• Twisted (2781) Sad when any group of people single out another group for any reason
  August 3rd, 2024 08:50
• Coffee (Tony36) I take it you are a coffee lover. Are you a coffee coinsure?
  August 3rd, 2024 08:49
• The 30th Anniversary of Papaw\'s Death (Randyjohnson71) A sad tribute to a loved one. Nicely done
  August 3rd, 2024 08:47
• thank mum (Jim56) A wonderful tribute to a person that we all have and to whom we owe a debt...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:28
• I\'m Selfish (13LaurenD) Determination, anger, resentment and resolve fill this poem. Nicely
  August 3rd, 2024 06:26
• Memories We Shared (Tkatie118) A great pairing of the concept of time passing rapidly in conjunction with...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:20
• 6th poem for - “That Night’s Dream” - Last Breath (Maplespal) Very romantic in nature this poem gives a pledge of love to the last line.
  August 3rd, 2024 06:17
• The True Endgame (Young Fella) Loss can be earth shaking. Nicely written
  August 3rd, 2024 06:16
• LOVED (Shallom_M) This carries the foreboding thought that drenching himself in her smile...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:13
• Mulberry Paints (Framed Mirror) Classical in nature this poem carries its message to the grave for many....
  August 3rd, 2024 06:11
• Trusting Times - Part 2 (Orchidee) A soothing poem Orchi anjd the music was soothing as well. Nicely chosen
  August 3rd, 2024 06:07
• Attic (B-LAH-que) Intriguing and written in metaphor that required more readings. A great...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:05
• Breathing In Music. (Goldfinch60) Love the image of breathing music. Like air there is the pure and the...
  August 3rd, 2024 06:01
• Escape From Earth (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Fantasy occupies the mind much of the time. Love Sci-fi
  August 3rd, 2024 05:58
• One Without Frills Would Be Fine (Neville) And so it is with all the humble. Not particularly Christian but the...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:57
• Anymore (Birddie Jane) Powerfully written. Anyone that has had a relationship can find small bits...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:53
• Over Your Shoulder (Dan Williams) Love questioning poems that work their way toward an end. Nicely written.
  August 3rd, 2024 05:47
• Fractured (Tristan Robert Lange) Words are powerful and create images so vivid that they may as well be...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:45
• Tangled Up In You (Cocamedo) This piece is so nicely written with cute and fun memories that I feel...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:44
• A mother\'s grief (Juliette72) Powerful words put in a credible write that I initially took for a real...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:41
• beauty (Sheta) A truth most men don\'t discover until too late. Yes there is that side...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:37
• It Was Not Your Refusal (Satishverma) Again being spoken to through short stanzas of wisdom.
  August 3rd, 2024 05:36
• The House of my Mind (Thoughtless) The metaphor works well and is well employed. Great wording here.
  August 3rd, 2024 05:34
• my mind rebels at stagnation (DeadRose) Great wording in this poem. A topic common to many. Some create their own...
  August 3rd, 2024 05:33
• Thief of Love (Sami mulaj) Prometheus was the thief of fire but I heard there were several thieves ...
  August 2nd, 2024 20:32
• Celine, My Love (Mark The Phenomenon) Romantic and nicely written.
  August 2nd, 2024 20:29
• Paper Matter (RefugeInRain) Nice flow and rhyme to this poem. Liked it a lot.
  August 2nd, 2024 18:28
• Silhouette (Alan R) Short and concise it reads very poetically and causes some reflection....
  August 2nd, 2024 16:25
• Let them Wonder - in Kamala\'s own words (Raidoc) Clever and well put together with many facts and details included. Nicely...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:24
• Summer 24 (Annemarie) A beautiful dream and wish. Nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 16:21
• TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE. (Akhilausman) Beautiful in its wording and thought nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 16:17
• Searching (Mya) A great write to the life time objective of Einstein, and Hawking. Well...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:12
• A Proposal of Questions (Petrichor of Love) Romantic and so well worded in a classical style it reads so smoothly.
  August 2nd, 2024 16:10
• Holden and Harlow (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Short and hopefully so. Nicely said
  August 2nd, 2024 16:08
• The Death of the Albatross (Saleh Ben Saleh) People are a destructive species and we leave a great deal of trash. A...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:07
• Paradise Lost (Kurt Philip Behm) Loved this poem with a famous name. It takes Milton a little further down...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:05
• Forgiveness On Layaway (Gray0328) Wonderfully worded this poem has some great images and the meaning is...
  August 2nd, 2024 16:02
• Fading Into The Night (Rebellion_in_sanity) Haunting and at the same time soothing. This strange combination left a...
  August 2nd, 2024 15:57
• Here\'s another way to look at things (Hzugman) Great lines all adding up to an important message. Nicely done
  August 2nd, 2024 15:55
• `* Heroin *` (Thad Wilk) Loved the way this unfolded and the rhyme was nicely done to add great...
  August 2nd, 2024 15:54
• A Love Song (MendedFences27) I love unexpected endings. A nice write.
  August 2nd, 2024 15:53
• Beauty Of Love (Blossompayal) A nice pledge of love to another nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 09:12
• (I can stay here) For a while. (Weep little lion girl) Here is a beautiful expression for a need for space and some great lines...
  August 2nd, 2024 09:10
• Watery Waters (Young Fella) Beautiful images and voiced value of another. Nicely written
  August 2nd, 2024 09:05
• Happy Birthday, Mom - Part XII (Randyjohnson71) A wonderful tribute to your mother nicely written.
  August 2nd, 2024 09:03
• Devoid of Truth (Iqra Khan) Several great lines here \"I wonder over her fate, Over concept of love...
  August 2nd, 2024 09:01
• Music (Tony36) Here here so says string theory in the vibration of its strings....
  August 2nd, 2024 08:58
• there for you (Jim56) A wonderful pledge of commitment in verse nicely done.
  August 2nd, 2024 05:53
• The Scars (Net) Metaphoric and vivid images as well in this piece. Nice and short as well.
  August 2nd, 2024 05:52
• 4th & 5th poems – “That Night’s Dream” – Lingering, and You Remain (Maplespal) Loss and reliving it through remembered images associated with the lost is...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:51
• Lake of Tears (Anabella151) Being ignored is one of the hardest things to endure. I hear the anguish...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:48
• Dark Arts (Framed Mirror) Messages in words to be heard sifted and sorted setting gossip aside....
  August 2nd, 2024 05:47
• WAR WITHIN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Sometimes the diametrically opposed are close to the same. A nice write...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:45
• A Pin Drop Moment (Teddy.15) I\'ll be all day thinking of this metaphor. Yes down, down, down finally...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:43
• Trusting Times - Part 1 (Orchidee) Nicely written again I can use the mercy.
  August 2nd, 2024 05:40
• Just Like Some Well Read Woman (Neville) The possibility for many meanings here. Today a well read woman is torn...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:31
• Cut Flowers (Thomas W Case) True words it is in death that new life comes and what is new ages. It is...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:23
• I blame you (Birddie Jane) Trapped is a good word. Each decision we make in this life traps us into a...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:21
• Pathway to More Pieces (Cocamedo) Particularly love the first stanza that applies to more than love. Neatly...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:16
• if i was a boy (Sheta) Cute we all have moments thinking how things would be different. Nicely...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:14
• Tonight the sky is stunning (MA-Q) Stunning images in this poem of death and life. The balance is evident and...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:13
• Athalia (Rosita De Rose) Beautiful!
  August 2nd, 2024 05:09
• Fire Game (Satishverma) Look outside oneself and you will find. Look inside oneself for wisdom
  August 2nd, 2024 05:08
• Liberate (RefugeInRain) Standing one\'s ground strongly stated in this poem. It is a statement of...
  August 2nd, 2024 05:06
• The Student? (Dan Williams) Here and gone even illusions can be missed. Loved the last line \"While...
  August 2nd, 2024 04:35
• Bad Day Survival. (Goldfinch60) One step at a time until looking back over our shoulder we can see the...
  August 2nd, 2024 04:29
• With Wings of Freedom (Rrodriguez) A nicely state call for freedom. Well done
  August 1st, 2024 19:25
• Why me?? (Hey!) A most fun read. Nicely stated,
  August 1st, 2024 19:23