Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Painfully Passing the Time (Gloria Denise)
Distraction is a marvelous way to keep one\'s mind off of the undesirable....
August 7th, 2024 04:02 - Haiku (Hans__)
This one requires more than one reading and leads to more than one...
August 7th, 2024 04:00 - sweet on you (Queer-with-a-pen)
I loved the opening stanza. Philosophical it used the paradox to set the...
August 7th, 2024 03:58 - Analysing Myself (Satishverma)
I again came to read lines of wisdom in the foolish. Beautiful thoughts...
August 7th, 2024 03:54 - The truth about War (Saleh Ben Saleh)
A poem with a message that deserves more readers. Just as in life itself...
August 7th, 2024 03:47 - New Life Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful images and yes I too would love to soar but I\'m afraid that the...
August 7th, 2024 03:43 - Me, Mary And Nature. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful and fulfilling write Gold. Nice way to start a day.
August 7th, 2024 03:38 - Always Never (Dan Williams)
This is a very powerful write that slowly takes hold of the reader, then...
August 7th, 2024 03:33 - We rise again (Natalie Heisey)
A call to fight onward. Animating and a pleasure to read. Very nice.
August 6th, 2024 17:02 - Cranial decay (Shadowbones)
Thought provoking read. Not black and white but then I have dissolving...
August 6th, 2024 17:00 - Hidden Chaos (Young Fella)
Wonderfully worded and neatly metered this poem shows a contrast between...
August 6th, 2024 16:14 - Sadness (Angela)
Personified death in this poem becomes a known entity and the read is a...
August 6th, 2024 14:52 - Sound Bites: 8-6-2024 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Indeed they are short but polished sound bites. Each in its own way a...
August 6th, 2024 14:49 - dandelion seeds. (DeadRose)
Loved the wording of this piece it catches the imagination and rolls off...
August 6th, 2024 14:44 - Ponder (L.R.A)
A great message in this write. Nicely written.
August 6th, 2024 13:12 - PISCES WOMAN (Magzzbaby)
Astrological this poem is a great description of those aspects. As a fish...
August 6th, 2024 13:10 - Dance! (Thoughtless)
Intriguing write that gives the brain something to think about.
August 6th, 2024 11:37 - Sandy Conversation (Blossompayal)
Nicely written a romantic write well done.
August 6th, 2024 11:36 - Do not (Sami mulaj)
Nicely written a beautiful and peaceful thought.
August 6th, 2024 11:33 - Blackcurrant Squash (AuburnScribbler)
A delicious write. Nicely done.
August 6th, 2024 11:32 - Is There Anything More Beautiful Than the Bow of a Ship touching a New World (Gray0328)
Beautiful imagery in this poem. Vivid and identifiable.
August 6th, 2024 11:27 - All people are Gifted (Saleh Ben Saleh)
There is always someone better. Humility is the best rout. It is the most...
August 6th, 2024 11:24 - Blue Song in Evening (MendedFences27)
Quite the story. nicely done.
August 6th, 2024 11:17 - Results (Sydney Zane)
Appreciated the rhyme in this poem. Good going.
August 6th, 2024 11:13 - Come Back (Shallom_M)
Loss never believed, sometimes even after it occurs is not believed. We...
August 6th, 2024 11:11 - ~> Martians Landed Twice In Australia! (Thad Wilk)
A fun read that left me smiling. Loved it
August 6th, 2024 09:05 - Prisoner Of My Own Thoughts (Mark The Phenomenon)
Guilt and regret two difficult obstacles to overcome. Well expressed here.
August 6th, 2024 09:03 - Little Red Riding Hood (Tony36)
A nursery rhyme revisited is it to be continued with the wolf?
August 6th, 2024 08:10 - angel flight (Jim56)
Christmas in August I\'m not ready. A fun and uplifting read.
August 6th, 2024 05:44 - 9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced (Maplespal)
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35 - Gypsy (Garth Rakumakoe)
Creative thought in this write. A fun read but with a deeper meaning that...
August 6th, 2024 05:33 - Forever living (2781)
Liked the playfulness of the rhyme in this piece. It carried me on to the...
August 6th, 2024 05:31 - morning moment (Markashley1961)
Beautiful and peaceful imaged fill this poem causing a feeling of...
August 6th, 2024 05:26 - A Very Sweet Dream of Home (Teddy.15)
Simply changing how we think about things can make all the difference in...
August 6th, 2024 05:25 - THE LIFE OF LIKE (Poetrybyaqsa)
A great message to redirect out thoughts away from what we don\'t have to...
August 6th, 2024 05:22 - FATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A most satisfying view of oneself in the spectrum of time. Nicely said.
August 6th, 2024 05:19 - Love Song (Tristan Robert Lange)
A couple of beautiful themes in this poem: love, unity, peace, joy,...
August 6th, 2024 05:18 - Letting Go of The Light (Neville)
A wonderful tribute to Dylan Thomas here Neville,. Unlike he though this...
August 6th, 2024 05:15 - On My Way To Star (Dev Parth)
A very nice write that takes one out of this world and in to the space of...
August 6th, 2024 05:13 - I. (Goldfinch60)
All will have an anthology of your works my friend. And may this not be...
August 6th, 2024 05:10 - “Good Morning Heartache. Sit Down” (HolesInMyJeans)
A noble sacrifice. Well worded in the build up and finished well in one...
August 6th, 2024 05:07 - In the Dust (Cocamedo)
A great message. There is no past and no future only the present and I...
August 6th, 2024 05:03 - Mom\'s hands (NafisaSB)
A lovely tribute to mother. Nicely done
August 6th, 2024 05:00 - Beauty Of Truth (Satishverma)
\"Let me unlock the
known. Knowing too much
was curse of...
August 6th, 2024 04:58 - Can You Wash Me? (Dan Williams)
This poem reeks with pain. This I believe is one of my favorite of yours....
August 6th, 2024 04:44 - Inheritance (MA-Q)
Dark, this poem reincarnates the dead and keeps the living at bay. Nicely...
August 5th, 2024 21:26 - i (Jon Nakapalau)
Interesting how a single detail can be the focus of an entire thought or...
August 5th, 2024 21:23 - God, How I Miss You (Thomas W Case)
Melancholy nostalgia in this beautiful poem of loss. Loved it
August 5th, 2024 21:21 - Blood Bitch (A Boy With Roses)
Multi colored this poem is multifaceted. I weave in and out of...
August 5th, 2024 16:24 - Hot Water (Anabella151)
All things have their positives and negatives. It is a matter of which...
August 5th, 2024 16:20 - Secrets of the sea. (CMarsh4)
Fish tales (tails) Brings memories fishing out at sea and hooking a...
August 5th, 2024 16:18 - A Saucer Full Of Cabriolet (ADarkerMind)
Enigmatic this one requires several readings and a key to unlock its...
August 5th, 2024 16:16 - Blue Song at Noon (MendedFences27)
I personally like the blues, well not all blues, but some. A most...
August 5th, 2024 16:13 - the poem (Sheta)
The desire to be more than we are stated in such a cute and sweet manner.
August 5th, 2024 13:26 - Goodbye (RL Randall)
Haunting and chilling it threatens a sudden end and asks questions about...
August 5th, 2024 12:51 - Empathetic Inspiration (ᴷᵉᶻᵉˣˣᵉ)
Change different cultures and times. Change the one thing that is...
August 5th, 2024 12:49 - A Rose in The Midnight (Petrichor of Love)
This poem is reminiscent of Bram Stoker and vampiric love. It bleeds with...
August 5th, 2024 12:47 - The beast within (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Duality of man or at least undesirable aspects of each man. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 12:44 - ~`` Knees - Parody of Trees (Thad Wilk)
A great rhythm and rhyme reminiscent of \"I think I shall never see a poem...
August 5th, 2024 12:42 - Broken Dreams (Sami mulaj)
A most interesting comparison wet in a poem. Mind provoking. Nicely done.
August 5th, 2024 12:40 - The Scorpion And The Frog (Young Fella)
A wonderful portrayal of a classic fable and parallel story of a man and...
August 5th, 2024 12:38 - Ambrosia for Us (Thoughtless)
Beautiful and (possibly?) metaphoric.
August 5th, 2024 09:04 - The Return of Lochinvar (A Knight-Mare) (Paul W Conway)
A fun and metaphoric ballad and tale combining the best of both worlds....
August 5th, 2024 09:03 - Heart speaks (Natalie Heisey)
Nicely written with a most positive attitude.
August 5th, 2024 08:59 - Physical & Mental Scars (Mark The Phenomenon)
Painful memories can be seen as positive in that worse could have...
August 5th, 2024 08:57 - How Much (Tony36)
I am a cynic but this is darker than I. I prefer to think that I will...
August 5th, 2024 07:52 - Poetry of the Undesired (Gaurav Gurung)
Plight of the poor, underprivileged, those with deficits represented here...
August 5th, 2024 07:49 - If tomorrow starts without me (Shallom_M)
Do we make a difference? A great question that this poem poses. Nicely...
August 5th, 2024 07:46 - world wish (Jim56)
A beautiful dream but unless you are a bee not likely in the near future....
August 5th, 2024 07:44 - The Champion of Coney Island (Gray0328)
A vivid scene with imagery galore but I sense something deeper rumbling in...
August 5th, 2024 07:42 - 8th poem for - “T.N.D” - Roots (Maplespal)
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32 - Where I End and You Begin (Beano)
Thought provoking and nicely done.
\"Morning, and its forceful...
August 5th, 2024 07:27 - All Along the Watchtower (Neville)
Memories of the past, so I won\'t mention him but what of Jimi Hendrix it...
August 5th, 2024 07:25 - Comforting Consolings (Orchidee)
Another wonderful hymn that I could have sung yesterday. Well done Orchi
August 5th, 2024 07:21 - THE CELEBRANTS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A nice tribute. Well done
August 5th, 2024 07:19 - Polarisation (2781)
Politics always an amusing fight between left and right. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 07:18 - Angry At The Symbolism (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A fun read for film viewers and symbolism well we will see. Nicely done...
August 5th, 2024 07:17 - Phew (Boot)
A bit of humor is great to start the day Thanks for the smile.
August 5th, 2024 07:15 - nights like these (Queer-with-a-pen)
Sad indeed. painful and tragic it has a haunting quality to it. Well...
August 5th, 2024 07:13 - CARVING (Bobby O)
A deep and powerful write that courageously spews forth its message in...
August 5th, 2024 07:08 - One Petal (Cocamedo)
Full of memories that bring nostalgia to anyone that has had a lengthy...
August 5th, 2024 07:03 - Nocturn (Rebellion_in_sanity)
I feel the night in this poem that has so many great images and lines....
August 5th, 2024 06:58 - Crying For Freedom (Dev Parth)
A well worked poem with great power
so well rhymed and metered it flows...
August 5th, 2024 06:56 - NO SENSE GUESSING (Bobby O)
Variability is part of life. Loved the first line \" Sometimes becomes...
August 5th, 2024 05:45 - Natures Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60)
And may it be so Andy. A calm and peaceful read to start the day. Lovely
August 5th, 2024 05:38 - By Destiny Caught (Dan Williams)
This poem reads so well in its rhythm and rhyme but more so each stanza...
August 5th, 2024 05:32 - Moonwhite Heart (Satishverma)
Unexpected questions shake reality and leave the reader pondering deeper...
August 4th, 2024 20:35 - Urayoan, Towering Mountain (Rrodriguez)
Scenic, vivid imagery that takes one on a trip. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:33 - But I wasn’t Enough (Gloria Denise)
Painful to read. A darker write. Sad.
August 4th, 2024 20:23 - not so empty thoughts (Emptythoughts)
Honesty is the best policy it makes life a lot easier. Nicely written.
August 4th, 2024 20:18 - Will of learning faith (DREEK0)
A nice read about faith in oneself. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:17 - Observer (NinjaGirl)
The dichotomy of who we are and how we see ourselves made clear in the...
August 4th, 2024 18:36 - Celebrate (Cocamedo)
Wise words and a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
August 4th, 2024 17:35 - Fake (Alan R)
This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers...
August 4th, 2024 17:33 - Supernova (Mya)
A fun read that is warm in many ways. Nice
August 4th, 2024 17:29 - Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15)
Teddy you have a knack to make someone feel good with your comments and...
August 4th, 2024 16:05 - The bridge of love (Sami mulaj)
August 4th, 2024 15:56 - The bridge of love (Sami mulaj)
Clever write and probably wise as well. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 15:56 - ~> My drunk Parrot Pete - true tale (Thad Wilk)
My friend had a Doberman that would only drink beer. It was the most...
August 4th, 2024 15:55 - Corona (MendedFences27)
Cheers to that. Nice write
August 4th, 2024 15:52
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