Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• What Makes You Different (William Hromada) That continual image of one enamored by in the brain catching at every...
  September 29th, 2025 06:49
• Feed me (Maplespal) A sensual and erotic poem that only needs a spark to combust. Nicely done
  September 29th, 2025 06:47
• The Answer Machine (Paul Bell) So unique yet so familiar it strikes both chords at once. The social...
  September 29th, 2025 06:45
• parallel universe in truth (Arqios) Such a poem Cryptic. Like the dirt road it looks nothing special on the...
  September 29th, 2025 06:42
• Die in the Summertime (White lily lament) Some dark images cast in this poem of rotten roots, lungs eaten away,...
  September 29th, 2025 04:09
• Timeless touch (Kaz) What a splendid image time a butterfly on velvet wings. Loved it
  September 29th, 2025 04:05
• Kitchen Flowers (Georgia Watson) This poem seems to have more than one meaning even as a metaphor. Death is...
  September 29th, 2025 04:04
• scars tale (Arquious) In a literal sense this poem paints a picture but metaphorically a far...
  September 29th, 2025 04:00
• Last Night I Had a Dream (A.N.) A most interesting poem of opposite expectations and the contrary nature...
  September 29th, 2025 03:57
• Perpetual Imperfections (Sassy Lou) A poetic assertion of being made up of choice. A strong statement and as...
  September 29th, 2025 03:54
• The Word Of The Day PT.2 (Anthony Hanible) This poem reads like the ticking of a clock. The meter is such that it...
  September 29th, 2025 03:50
• THE UNWELCOME STRANGER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Sad, lonely and desolate are words that come to mind with this poem....
  September 29th, 2025 03:49
• Destructo Mode (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Some days that type of mood sets in and it seems that what ever one does...
  September 29th, 2025 03:46
• When will you............? (Orchidee) Dogs the smartest animal on the planet have convinced us that they are out...
  September 29th, 2025 03:44
• Is There A Fix Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A very positive view that motivates one to keep trying. Very nice Gold yes...
  September 29th, 2025 03:39
• Looking Back (R_Poems) This does indeed feel like a definition of regret. Well written
  September 28th, 2025 19:35
• I carry my tear everywhere (Sami Mulaj) Fear is not easily given up. A most interesting write,
  September 28th, 2025 19:31
• QUARTETS ON LIFE (David Welch) Carpe diem to the max. Do or die, When the going gets tough the tough get...
  September 28th, 2025 18:37
• The Only Way Out Is Through (BoxMyHeart) Perseverance and stick too it. Nicely written
  September 28th, 2025 18:35
• Ah, Michelangelo Buonarroti by Valery Zverev (Ksey_Gan) Reflections of a historical figure most famous. Nicely written
  September 28th, 2025 18:32
• Fetch the Inspectors (Fränz Müller) Catching the perpetrators does nothing for the victim. A most interesting...
  September 28th, 2025 18:29
• Ashes (Natavia Hobert) It\'s not so bad that it\'s on fire but I hate when those around fan the...
  September 28th, 2025 16:31
• Awww, no invite! (Orchidee) Why Orchi you are made for fusion poems just as salt and pepper are made...
  September 28th, 2025 14:34
• Through the Darkest Nights (Lore) A tale of trouble and strife and despite the odds with strength she keeps...
  September 28th, 2025 14:32
• The Word Of The Day (Anthony Hanible) Lying unlocks Pandora\'s box. A great short.
  September 28th, 2025 11:22
• Downstream Upstream (Pete the poet) Common belief is one does not sail upstream without considerable effort or...
  September 28th, 2025 11:21
• Destiny Forks (Kurt Philip Behm) Right of course, the left handed way only leads to dismay. Good write Kurt
  September 28th, 2025 11:17
• Trees (Shadowbones) A reflective metaphor where one can\'t see the forest for the trees or...
  September 28th, 2025 11:16
• Girls get prettier post breakups (HarrisHan2k) Clever and a very nice write that works so well.
  September 28th, 2025 09:49
• A thought on time (Maplespal) I have to say if this is a leftover give me seconds. Brilliant wording in...
  September 28th, 2025 09:47
• Waiting Patiently (William Hromada) A wonderful poem of reflection peace and calm where most meditative...
  September 28th, 2025 09:45
• 𝔈𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔠𝔢𝔡 𝔟𝔶 𝔱𝔥𝔦𝔰 \"𝔒𝔫𝔢\" 𝔍𝔢𝔰𝔲𝔰~ 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔇𝔦𝔰𝔤𝔲𝔦𝔰𝔢𝔡 (Keyara S Trotman) Another poem open to interpretation religious or not. A good read
  September 28th, 2025 09:42
• Angels Among Us (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A wonderful write. As I see it we are all fallen angels some fallen...
  September 28th, 2025 09:40
• Honeytrap (Paul Bell) Intriguing and entrancing it spins its tale sensuously and erotically...
  September 28th, 2025 09:39
• The Beautiful Fall (RSM0812) A beautiful sonnet well written and with great meaning. Loved it
  September 28th, 2025 09:34
• The Multiverse in Truth (Tristan Robert Lange) The truth can be too hard to hear and know, at such times it is better...
  September 28th, 2025 09:33
• My Mother. (Friendship) A poem of tribute to a mother deemed principle in promoting your strengths...
  September 28th, 2025 09:28
• The Slow Burn (Gray0328) Some look for ease and rest in an afterlife, if there is such a place I...
  September 28th, 2025 06:10
• age (Jim56) Nostalgic, this poem takes one on memory\'s journey through the past. A...
  September 28th, 2025 06:06
• A Parable of Dawn and Day (Abdullah123) Beautiful words and images unveil a metaphor of life\'s journey but also...
  September 28th, 2025 06:05
• Path of a Pilgrim (Kevin Michael Bloor) A belief shines like a guiding light and shows the way on one\'s journey....
  September 28th, 2025 06:02
• Can anything come out of my Nation? (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Valid questions raised in this poem as I in a developed nation would raise...
  September 28th, 2025 04:58
• This is important...to you (Aa Harvey) In this poem there is the intermingling of the terms love and passion. I...
  September 28th, 2025 04:12
• Digital ID For All (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Not sure of the details but the implications are dire. As populations and...
  September 28th, 2025 04:08
• LOCKED AWAY IN A BOX (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Symbolic and metaphoric it is sensuous and erotic and speaks of sexual...
  September 28th, 2025 04:04
• To Walk Whole (G.Cabús) Nicely written this poem is existential and philosophical in nature...
  September 28th, 2025 04:01
• Analysis-ChatGPT-Volume 145-CoupDeJarnacBook-28Aug2025 (Soman Ragavan) Analysis of crimes of colonization in Mauritius by the English and French....
  September 28th, 2025 03:58
• what are we moving towards? (Håkan Renström) There is a feel of damned if you do and damned if you don\'t in this...
  September 28th, 2025 03:53
• Lip Gloss (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This poem is clever in its wording and rhyme and for that a fave
  September 28th, 2025 03:49
• Existence in Four Lines (Fränz Müller) Contrasts make for such good poetry. A lovely piece
  September 28th, 2025 03:47
• graduated cylinder (Arqios) Cryptic this poem is not as clear as that vial but shows a couple of...
  September 28th, 2025 03:41
• Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60) I too have found that to be true and that is one of the glories of...
  September 28th, 2025 03:27
• The last bite (Sami Mulaj) People desire the new and untouched that ages and falls into the unwanted...
  September 27th, 2025 19:35
• Eternal Fire (Lore) Very nice wording and lines. A wonderful poem
  September 27th, 2025 19:31
• Eternal Fire (Lore) Light is equated with the truth or knowledge. Nicely written
  September 27th, 2025 17:49
• Without Repair (Rawaneigh.99) Deep reflections in this poem. It seems quite thought provoking. Nicely...
  September 27th, 2025 17:14
• Haunted by the truth (Anabasova) Commitment seems to be at issue here. A lovely write here.
  September 27th, 2025 17:11
• Where did you go? (Tayama) Control comes if you send her away but is lost if she left. We all hurt...
  September 27th, 2025 17:08
• Wishes (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Never liked envy and how old can one get if a horse they last about 20 to...
  September 27th, 2025 17:04
• Funny cover letter accompanied with equally outlandish résumé (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Computer start computer end. Remember Windows 95 actually started with...
  September 27th, 2025 16:22
• LIFE IN BLACK (David Welch) Very nice living in the moment. Good write
  September 27th, 2025 16:18
• Poem (Amethyste) One in the same, same in one. Nicely written
  September 27th, 2025 16:15
• Acceptance (Not_defined) The future holds promise and hope even if nothing else dose. A lovely
  September 27th, 2025 15:02
• Nomad (God’s Will) Home is where ever you are. A thoughtful write. Well done.
  September 27th, 2025 13:58
• Grey (Eckardcb) Gray is the healthiest place extremes promote rigidity doubt is the fuel...
  September 27th, 2025 13:57
• Cruz (Reverend) A life marred due to expectations but all can be corrected. Nicely done
  September 27th, 2025 13:52
• Reality (Keeter C) A poem that vibes with concern about technology and particularly AI well...
  September 27th, 2025 13:11
• The orphaned pages (Paper) This is true for most books and poems and also for people as a metaphor....
  September 27th, 2025 13:06
• Spiral Struggles (Jaiden_noviqon) I like this presentation with the web. The metaphor works well. Loved it
  September 27th, 2025 13:04
• The Yoke and I (GeekSusie) There are several reflections in this poem. Nicely written
  September 27th, 2025 12:52
• Grief, My Houseguest (Cha) A poem of invitation and even more a feeling that one knows the future and...
  September 27th, 2025 12:50
• Let The Dogs Out (Kurt Philip Behm) Nicely said Kurt a plea for others to join the crowd. Well done my friend
  September 27th, 2025 10:51
• To Oksana by Nikolay Aseev (Ksey_Gan) Consumed with another that one feels they can not live without. Well done
  September 27th, 2025 10:49
• Rhyming (Maplespal) It\'s a bit like pig Latin you just have to think a bit before you put it...
  September 27th, 2025 10:13
• Relearning is harder than learning (Hzugman) Yes indeed the hardest things I have to learn are those that I have to...
  September 27th, 2025 10:11
• My tears (Natavia Hobert) Sad nothing more painful than a dry cry. It\'s like the dry heaves it...
  September 27th, 2025 10:10
• A fatal mistake - or con-fusion? (Orchidee) Sometimes puns just come out like burps unintended. I too have a hard time...
  September 27th, 2025 10:09
• I\'m just finished. (Friendship) I feel the exhaustion in this poem of being fed up and disappointed over...
  September 27th, 2025 08:00
• Truth Hurts (William Hromada) Well written and it rings with truth itself. All in good rhyme as well....
  September 27th, 2025 07:56
• Pearls Before Swine (Samer Amin) A fun story told but with moral and well done indeed. Loved it.
  September 27th, 2025 07:55
• Act (NafisaSB) A motivational poem that is meant to inspire people to take action and not...
  September 27th, 2025 07:38
• A Mime\'s Mockery (Tristan Robert Lange) In a world that has gown noisier and words have grown less used, where all...
  September 27th, 2025 07:03
• photo memory (Jim56) Beautiful words Jim memories are pictures in the mind that may fade like...
  September 27th, 2025 07:00
• Untitled (RSM0812) Indeed we are all born to die it is a matter or when and how. A strong,...
  September 27th, 2025 06:57
• The Children Of Tomorrow (Abdullah123) Beautiful words mark a sad and tragic cycle. So nicely worded a fave
  September 27th, 2025 06:08
• ℌ𝔞𝔯𝔪𝔬𝔫𝔦𝔠 (Keyara S Trotman) I do believe and have experienced that laughter is good medicine for...
  September 27th, 2025 05:30
• residue map (Arqios) Here in metaphor or allegory a great lesson. Markers need to be left. So...
  September 27th, 2025 05:27
• Flashback (_Doc_) Attraction and enchantment found in this poem. Nice use of imagery and...
  September 27th, 2025 04:53
• Burnt Pancakes (N. Christine) So accustomed to life in an age of technology our thoughts of the past...
  September 27th, 2025 04:51
• FIRST STEPS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Advice from age and words in one\'s passing to guide the young. Very...
  September 27th, 2025 04:48
• A New Discovery (Anas Merchant) A poem of attraction it has some very good lines (There is a gathering of...
  September 27th, 2025 04:46
• Mayflies (Thoughtless) This write starts on erotic and quickly erupts into sexual. Its sensual...
  September 27th, 2025 04:42
• Vintrice Johnson Biography (2025 Update) (Vintrice C. Johnson) A homage to one admired. Nicely written
  September 27th, 2025 04:39
• The Mask (RaysThroughDarkness) A great poem of contentment showing that one is happy the way that they...
  September 27th, 2025 04:31
• The Pretty Pea (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) And so it is with words as well. Some of the sweet poetry I heard as a...
  September 27th, 2025 04:20
• Alchemy of writing (Poetic Dan) Nicely written Dan, I too have felt this and live it as well.
  September 27th, 2025 04:17
• STABLE BOY (David Welch) A good old western like I used to watch on TV as a kid. It has the plot,...
  September 27th, 2025 04:14
• I Need To Write (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Congratulations on your most prolific work. Keep up the writing.
  September 27th, 2025 04:10
• Kathleen (Goldfinch60) A beautiful tribute to a beautiful voice. Nicely done Andy
  September 27th, 2025 04:08
• Worth (Keeter C) My thoughts exactly and a frightening one as well. Very nicely written
  September 26th, 2025 19:08