Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Academia (Alan R) Well written this poem of protest against a society that has different...
  August 9th, 2024 06:06
• sincerity (Jim56) Truly good advise in this short but nicely worded poem. Well done
  August 9th, 2024 06:03
• 11th poem for - “T.N.D” - Trinkets (Maplespal) Well rhymed this poem of parting. It is unclear if this is metaphoric of...
  August 9th, 2024 06:02
• Blankets (Xqw) A most wonderful write that I wished I had thought of. The blanket...
  August 9th, 2024 06:00
• The Little Street (Young Fella) I loved the format of this poem where a single word is used to evoke...
  August 9th, 2024 05:57
• You\'re Just Too Good To Be True (Teddy.15) Lust, what a wonderful feeling. I covet lust and the feeling one has with...
  August 9th, 2024 05:52
• Word Wholeness (Orchidee) Here is a nondenominational hymn that might be said to be applicable to...
  August 9th, 2024 05:48
• Try (2781) A cover by Bob Dylan Jokerman comes through. Love music too, it brightens...
  August 9th, 2024 05:44
• The Beast Within (Cocamedo) This could be taken metaphorically as an internal struggle to overcome and...
  August 9th, 2024 05:41
• Be Still..... (Saxon Crow) Comforting words so well expressed in this poem. Nicely done
  August 9th, 2024 05:38
• Don\'t Be Afraid (The Great Tribulation) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Strong beliefs expressed in this piece. There are many diverse beliefs in...
  August 9th, 2024 05:37
• ADA AMEH (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I commend your efforts to commemorate people, causes and this poem is just...
  August 9th, 2024 05:35
• Amelia (Dan Williams) Masterfully worded this write in verse conveys love and care and the...
  August 9th, 2024 05:31
• Maybe To Be Continued (Neville) Hope this is not a personal message. It carries with it a sense of tense...
  August 9th, 2024 05:27
• Heaven Is Where Dreams Come True. (Goldfinch60) Dreams and heaven the only place that this happens so well expressed in...
  August 9th, 2024 05:21
• Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire (Mutley Ravishes) The imagination of children is limitless and here is expressed some of it....
  August 9th, 2024 05:19
• For Love (Hanible) A bold pledge put in very few words. Nicely stated.
  August 9th, 2024 05:17
• In Spirit (Cassie58) A wonderful write with great rhyme. Loved the playfulness in this piece as...
  August 9th, 2024 05:16
• Wilma! (2781) A most fun read with some play on words in this poem. Loved it
  August 9th, 2024 05:13
• Ms.M (Jewelwrites55) This poem had a nice flow and rhyme. Fun to read.
  August 8th, 2024 20:17
• Me & You (Blossompayal) Romantic. Passionate well done.
  August 8th, 2024 20:14
• Waltzing Down Love Street (Thomas W Case) From the serious to the fantasy from sad to happy nicely done Thomas
  August 8th, 2024 19:19
• Ghost (13LaurenD) Stay positive and keep at it. Nice work
  August 8th, 2024 16:53
• The sea of dreams (Sami mulaj) Dreams do blend various memories and thoughts. A most interesting write
  August 8th, 2024 16:17
• Such Rights Not Recognised (ADarkerMind) Fun words fill this poem with fantasy? Maybe deep metaphor? They are...
  August 8th, 2024 13:24
• i say i believe (Sheta) A great desire and prayer to help to love better. Nicely said in verse
  August 8th, 2024 13:17
• `*` In Our Garden Of Love `*` (Thad Wilk) Sweet and charming this declaration of love is filled with flowers and...
  August 8th, 2024 13:16
• Haunted past (Nicole Pritchard) An apology for past actions where one did not have the ability to act as...
  August 8th, 2024 13:14
• Sinking ships in my mirage oceans (Arial) A message of reaching one\'s limit sent and received. Powerful
  August 8th, 2024 12:19
• In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart (Teddy.15) I feel this in that many of my friends that I grew up with are now gone....
  August 8th, 2024 12:08
• Questions I Often Ask Myself (Gray0328) Beautifully penned images that float off the page. Nicely done
  August 8th, 2024 10:56
• Olympic Games (An Acrostic) (AuburnScribbler) Clever and fun to read celebrating the current Olympics
  August 8th, 2024 10:53
• () A most fun read everything is for sale
  August 8th, 2024 10:49
• Beyond the mourning of bereavement no stilled tears (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Sad write with further tones of darkness but ends on a sense of...
  August 8th, 2024 08:24
• Victory Is Mines (Scarlette Patricia Howard) Character gives strength to free will Nicely written
  August 8th, 2024 08:08
• Old School Vs Youngblood (Saleh Ben Saleh) Which is better the energy and enthusiasm of youth or wisdom and treachery...
  August 8th, 2024 08:07
• MY CASTLE (Qurrathul Ain) Beautiful in wording this poem shines
  August 8th, 2024 08:03
• Roll in Roll out (Tony36) Loved the roll of this poem its rhythm echoes the waves
  August 8th, 2024 08:01
• Betrayal by you (Natalie Heisey) I can feel the anger in this write. It breaths and beats until the final...
  August 8th, 2024 07:19
• Steaming (Tom Dylan) I like Dave am that man remembering when such trains were for the common...
  August 8th, 2024 07:15
• Urbanization (Thepoetman1234) I see this as well but it begs the question, what is the cause. Some say...
  August 8th, 2024 07:13
• Taking A Break (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Nothing is permanent, freedom or lack there of. A fun read
  August 8th, 2024 07:11
• The Service (Thoughtless) WWA, reality show, family gathering, or funeral. A fun read
  August 8th, 2024 07:09
• first love (Jim56) Some call it first love I call it passion. Never the less you are so right...
  August 8th, 2024 07:08
• What Makes us Superior?  (Maplespal) Indeed point of view does determine what we call superior. It is all in a...
  August 8th, 2024 07:06
• Axiomatic Sliver (Beatrix M) Very metaphoric this write. its comments on sexuality and purity buried...
  August 8th, 2024 07:03
• BEAUTIFUL TRAP (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Clear in its message this poem full of metaphor and imagery sends a...
  August 8th, 2024 06:58
• We Don\'t Need Kings and Queens (Rebellion_in_sanity) A call for revolution, anarchy? Democracy too has its weakness in tyranny...
  August 8th, 2024 06:56
• the rain (Anna_x_life) Bitter sweet this poem but a great sense of unity with nature and full of...
  August 8th, 2024 06:53
• Comforting Concerns (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi I can use all the comforting that can be spared...
  August 8th, 2024 06:50
• Garden of Edone (Mutley Ravishes) Knowledge only creates a greater hunger. A fun read
  August 8th, 2024 06:48
• As Sure As God Made Little Green Apples (Neville) Indeed there is Neville. Those with a purpose and those without at any...
  August 8th, 2024 06:46
• God’s Gifts (Cocamedo) A strong belief and faith in oneself is a great message in this poem....
  August 8th, 2024 06:44
• When I See You Again (Skaar) Seldom is repetition of phrases effective in my view but this is one of...
  August 8th, 2024 06:42
• The quiet (RSM0812) A most beautifully worded poem that paints a picture in metaphor\'s...
  August 8th, 2024 06:38
• As I Sit Here. (Goldfinch60) So true friend, each moment is a new start and since you always start on a...
  August 8th, 2024 05:27
• Squeaks (Dan Williams) Maybe it is only recently that we have seen ourselves as sheep. Awakening...
  August 8th, 2024 05:22
• Harmony Lost, Hope Restored (Rrodriguez) An epic poem about creation and redemption from the fall. Nicely written
  August 7th, 2024 20:45
• The sword (2781) A most interesting write thought provoking.
  August 7th, 2024 18:22
• Inclusive (Tristan Robert Lange) On the surface it seems so clear cut, prejudice is wrong but it is not so...
  August 7th, 2024 18:20
• Ignite me (Yourz Truly 2.0) Gratitude for good fortune in love. Very nice.
  August 7th, 2024 17:35
• ME N YOU (Magzzbaby) Sad a poem of loss. Hoping things work out. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 16:56
• The final whistle (Sami mulaj) Our sense of aggrandizement leaves us feeling like the train won\'t leave...
  August 7th, 2024 15:40
• America at a critical political crossroads..., (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Curious as to why most poets are from the left, is it that people from the...
  August 7th, 2024 14:19
• Beauty of Water (DLewis88) Very Taoist deep and profound a wonderful write.
  August 7th, 2024 14:13
• My Very Own Lemon Meringue (ADarkerMind) Incongruous combinations puzzle the mind and numb the brain bringing a...
  August 7th, 2024 13:46
• The Truth (Sheryffat) Reassuring and a good message. Nicely written
  August 7th, 2024 13:44
• Chapbook (Kenny O\'Donnell) Nicely symbolic the poem dances like the item put in the bin. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 13:42
• Someday (I\'ll Tell You How You Won Over Me) (Petrichor of Love) Beautiful lines romantic in nature and soothing to the ear. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 12:07
• The Splender of Two Natures (Gray0328) I take this as a metaphor with in a metaphor. Symbolic god now a fading...
  August 7th, 2024 11:44
• Memory Fades (Thomas W Case) Was this directed at a woman? Seems like or maybe just my prejudiced view...
  August 7th, 2024 11:42
• Funeral (M.E.M.) A passage in life that all must take. Nicely worded
  August 7th, 2024 11:41
• Interesting Times (John Prophet) Change the only constant. Nicely worded.
  August 7th, 2024 11:39
• No Gain without Pain - a Runners tale (Raidoc) Energized this poem. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 10:11
• ~~> Pin Head (Thad Wilk) Is this about a UTI? It feels like it. Not a pleasant experience. Unlike...
  August 7th, 2024 10:09
• I AM A WOMAN (Kwrites) A great write about the paradoxes and inconsistencies of life as a woman...
  August 7th, 2024 10:07
• Relationships (Saleh Ben Saleh) Great rhyme in a poem of great flow and meaning
  August 7th, 2024 10:05
• Blue Song at Night (MendedFences27) Quite the story, I just don\'t think I could stomach a chocolate martini
  August 7th, 2024 10:04
• Lost at sea (Poetic Dan) Not sure how this would piss anyone off. I love the last line
  August 7th, 2024 09:59
• Heavy (Xqw) Heavy is the tone of this poem. Well written and keeping the reader on the...
  August 7th, 2024 09:28
• A bee sips from a dewdrop (Jerry Reynolds) A gentle and poetic line. Loved the imagery in this poem
  August 7th, 2024 09:25
• Heaven (The Indignant Poetess) Heartening and upbeat. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 08:58
• The Silence (Thoughtless) A touching story of overcoming difficulties and enduring love. Nicely...
  August 7th, 2024 08:51
• Abode of God (Rebellion_in_sanity) A very nice write and yes dignity is where God resides. Very nice
  August 7th, 2024 08:48
• Blood & sweat (Natalie Heisey) A battle cry or war cry this sounds out loud and clear. Nicely done
  August 7th, 2024 08:46
• Trapped (Tony36) All of us influenced by peer pressure. It is difficult to stand up against...
  August 7th, 2024 08:44
• daddies gift (Jim56) A dog is man\'s best friend. Good write
  August 7th, 2024 06:39
• The Light (13LaurenD) Perseverance and determination is the key to victory. Stated in many ways...
  August 7th, 2024 06:38
• Prolific (Tom Dylan) Good advice. The more you write the more practice you will get and the...
  August 7th, 2024 06:32
• A Very Grand Finale (Teddy.15) Dying with a smile is the only way to go. Then to die while performing two...
  August 7th, 2024 06:30
• The Poetess and the Pussy (Teddy.15) Fun is what I can say about this write. Yes I agree you have not lived...
  August 7th, 2024 05:16
• Two Sides of the Same Coin (Mystery\'s Creation) Many pearls here. Great line after great line. They say wisdom comes with...
  August 7th, 2024 04:46
• 10th poem for - “T.N.D” - How I Feel (Maplespal) Sad and moving a poem of loss and missing the one that is lost. Feelings...
  August 7th, 2024 04:37
• PAINFUL REST (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) This is particularly powerful and sad in its tragedy. This not only pulls...
  August 7th, 2024 04:35
• Why? (Marmar) Why implies understanding and some things are not to be understood but...
  August 7th, 2024 04:32
• Wholesome Worship (Orchidee) I love the music part and have gone to church in the past just for that....
  August 7th, 2024 04:30
• I Think I Like You But .. (Neville) Sometimes we ask for more than we want to know, or should I say ignorance...
  August 7th, 2024 04:29
• The Porch Light is On (Cocamedo) A wonderful metaphor and the use of vivid images some of which are...
  August 7th, 2024 04:14
• Magic Potion (Mutley Ravishes) Clever the use of drugs as an entry to \"implanted beliefs\" Here the two...
  August 7th, 2024 04:12
• The Echoes of Valor ([email protected]) Horrors of war not just glories here. Loved the line \"Bent and broken, we...
  August 7th, 2024 04:05