Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Camera Roll (Sophin) A great metaphor. Nicely penned.
  August 13th, 2024 05:09
• I won\'t let you touch me (Weep little lion girl) A gentle work that although clear sends its message in a sensitive form....
  August 13th, 2024 05:07
• A Flower Without Soil (Thomas W Case) A message sent in metaphor and clear words that speaks to all of us in one...
  August 13th, 2024 05:06
• Wayfair (Coracaodacripta) Exquisite imagery that often turns metaphoric. A beautiful write with a...
  August 13th, 2024 05:03
• What Of Love? (Teddy.15) Now Teddy this one is a jewel that shines. It reads so perfectly with such...
  August 13th, 2024 04:59
• Unrest (Boot) The sound of a battle lost. Very nice
  August 12th, 2024 20:44
• His Daily Ritual (J.Edse) Sacrifice a sign of worth and value. Nicely said.
  August 12th, 2024 20:42
• I\'m Coming Back (13LaurenD) A poem of perseverance nicely stated. Well said.
  August 12th, 2024 19:43
• Full Solitude (DLewis88) A rhyme pattern that I chose to use in tomorrows poem. A great message and...
  August 12th, 2024 17:39
• The Monster. (Wanderingpoet) Words of what once was love now have taken control. Nicely written.
  August 12th, 2024 17:02
• Layers (MattColombo) Turning negatives into positive in good form. Nicely done
  August 12th, 2024 16:59
• Happy (Alan R) A positive take on what could be negative. Nicely written
  August 12th, 2024 16:57
• Firefly Date Night (Bella Shepard) Most beautiful with stunning images and a wonderful lead in to the closing...
  August 12th, 2024 15:30
• I die for you (Sami mulaj) A beautiful sentiment clothed in poetic beauty. Lovely!
  August 12th, 2024 15:25
• The Matrix (Thepoetman1234) A poem of protest well stated and hopefully headed but yet what is the...
  August 12th, 2024 15:24
• These days (BlessedbyGod) Nicely written in verse this message speaks what many feel. Nicely done.
  August 12th, 2024 15:22
• Geoffrey’s Email (based on “Bernard’s Letter” by Dylan Moran) (AuburnScribbler) A great (cover?) poem as I take it (tongue in cheek) where the tongue is...
  August 12th, 2024 15:20
• texts from deadrose [part one] (DeadRose) A mystery or code as time goes misunderstood. A most interesting read.
  August 12th, 2024 14:56
• It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole (ADarkerMind) Full of enigmatic metaphors it reads as the apocalypses great imagery here
  August 12th, 2024 14:55
• Chokehold (Saidgodis) A poem of distress and anguish. It cries out in pain.
  August 12th, 2024 14:52
• The Unseen Struggle (Gray0328) Well worded with some great lines it does speak to the heart. Loved it
  August 12th, 2024 14:50
• Poets (Anabasova) I liked this poem it talks of the difference between a poet and the rest...
  August 12th, 2024 14:48
• A moment (Xqw) I think you have captured the essence of poetry in this. Lovely
  August 12th, 2024 14:47
• Counting (Eugene S.) A fun rhyme that tells a story. Nicely worded and with good rhythm as...
  August 12th, 2024 14:44
• Lo and Behold! (MendedFences27) A sad but all to true story for many. Nicely done
  August 12th, 2024 14:43
• ~> Stupid Cupid! - form Monotetra (Thad Wilk) The Jaded Cupid. Loved it
  August 12th, 2024 14:41
• Out of guilt (Saleh Ben Saleh) This one reads so well and caries its message all the way to the end....
  August 12th, 2024 14:34
• Tail Of The Dragon (Kurt Philip Behm) Another jewel. Wise and poetic two for one in this write.
  August 12th, 2024 14:32
• Quite Potty. (Doggerel Dave) It seems that this experience is quite common. Did it years ago with an...
  August 12th, 2024 14:30
• If You Submit (Mark The Phenomenon) A wonderful portrayal of union and cooperation in a relationship. Nicely...
  August 12th, 2024 08:53
• BROKEN GLASS (Nephilim56) A dark write of freedom? Well democracy? Maybe? Loved the poem
  August 12th, 2024 08:51
• A Time to Remember or Not (Paul W Conway) A wonderful write using anthropomorphism and great images loved it
  August 12th, 2024 08:50
• I Can\'t Find No Help (Hanible) A cry of despair heard in this poem. How true Baker act is not the answer....
  August 12th, 2024 08:48
• Reunion? (Thoughtless) Pieces and bits put together yes reunion. Nicely said
  August 12th, 2024 07:24
• I write (Tony36) A common malady amongst poets. Nicely said.
  August 12th, 2024 07:22
• A Special Breed (Tom Dylan) Dogs man\'s best friend so sad that their lives are so short. Loved the...
  August 12th, 2024 06:16
• The chosen ones (EvenwheniLie) Well worded a message sent Bars
  August 12th, 2024 06:14
• a robin sang to me (Jim56) I love nature and find in it peace, harmony and beauty. I hear all of that...
  August 12th, 2024 06:12
• vent poem (Lei) Terrible feelings that one may not be accepted by one\'s family for being...
  August 12th, 2024 06:11
• Justice (Davmor73) Filled with vivid imagery this poetic metaphor reads like a prophesy.
  August 12th, 2024 06:09
• 13th poem for: “T.N.D” - Quiet morning (Maplespal) Sad and dark a poem of loss and death. Nicely rhymed and in good meter it...
  August 12th, 2024 06:06
• Dim light (Fanita530) Some great lines accompanied by great rhyme and rhythm in this poem of...
  August 12th, 2024 06:03
• SWEET CELL (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Nicely written.
  August 12th, 2024 06:00
• Look (2781) A most comforting thought put to rhyme. Nicely done.
  August 12th, 2024 05:58
• Castles Made of Sand (Cocamedo) Best intentions do not guaranteed desired results. Sand castles are hard...
  August 12th, 2024 05:57
• Healthful Humility (Orchidee) Another great hymn Orchi. humility is quite healthful. Loved it.
  August 12th, 2024 05:53
• Housing Wreck. (Goldfinch60) A fun read Gold. The danger of building a house on a foundation of sand...
  August 12th, 2024 05:51
• I Sold All My Jay-Z Albums (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I hear you. Nicely written. A fun read.
  August 12th, 2024 05:48
• america (Sheta) A very clever write. It starts out with well written lines that lead the...
  August 12th, 2024 05:47
• Fragments of Us (Dev Parth) This one was wonderfully worded with a timing that let it roll off the...
  August 12th, 2024 05:45
• Spirit2 (John Prophet) There seemed to be a running drum beat in this poem as each word followed...
  August 12th, 2024 05:42
• Atonemental (Mutley Ravishes) Enigmatic lines that lead one to reread and puzzle over this poem. Nicely...
  August 12th, 2024 05:40
• The Object and Outcome of Dreaming Alone (Neville) Ah the differences in males and females. So nicely expressed in short...
  August 12th, 2024 04:37
• Dawn Comes (Dan Williams) I was intrigued by the rhyme scheme that allows you to draw out the...
  August 12th, 2024 04:30
• sorry i\'ve been gone for a while ( the girl i once loved) (Lei) Fragile as a bomb. A most interesting line. They do shatter you know. Most...
  August 11th, 2024 20:06
• Sapphires & Desires (Mya) Vivid images and metaphor are used in this poem. Nicely done.
  August 11th, 2024 20:04
• Serial killer in hiding (EvenwheniLie) I hear venom in this poem. Anger and disgust are expressed. Powerful
  August 11th, 2024 20:02
• Sitting (Xqw) It seems sad with the mention of tears. Although not mentioned I see gray....
  August 11th, 2024 20:01
• Secure (Alan R) Emotional it shouts at the reader. Very well done.
  August 11th, 2024 19:57
• The river of life (Sami mulaj) Beautifully descriptive vivid images painted in words . Nicely done
  August 11th, 2024 19:56
• doctor’s chair (Anemoia) Sad, powerful, disturbing, hurtful. haunting all come to mind. Very well...
  August 11th, 2024 19:55
• Saturday Night (Young Fella) Beautiful images painted in this poem. Lovely
  August 11th, 2024 15:39
• THE EGG (R. Gordon Zyne) A most interesting metaphor in this poem. I would hope that we are all...
  August 11th, 2024 14:42
• Good Deeds (Saleh Ben Saleh) A most interesting write or statement of where one stands regarding...
  August 11th, 2024 14:00
• The fires (Kenny O\'Donnell) A good metaphor for this write, Nicely written.
  August 11th, 2024 13:57
• For some enchanted evenings... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A fun read about a sad situation. No good solution to this political mess....
  August 11th, 2024 13:56
• How Many, Before? (MendedFences27) A write of questions about dissolution of a relationship. Well written and...
  August 11th, 2024 12:48
• Tomb of Obscurity (Tristan Robert Lange) Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
  August 11th, 2024 12:44
• Sitting near the Ancient Woods (Petrichor of Love) Nice nature images pervade this poem. Nicely done
  August 11th, 2024 12:42
• Present Perfect (Kurt Philip Behm) Fun, nicely worded with the feel of a poking fun. Loved it.
  August 11th, 2024 12:38
• Bear. (Beatrixx89) It reels like he uses testosterone for cologne a nice write.
  August 11th, 2024 12:35
• Parents (Sonal monhyung) A most beautiful tribute to parents Lovely
  August 11th, 2024 11:05
• Hurt People Hurt People (Hanible) Tit for tat they say step on someone\'s toes and a punch in the nose We...
  August 11th, 2024 09:58
• ~> Snow White, Glock And Creepy! (Thad Wilk) Thought you were going to do a poem on cocaine with a name like Snow...
  August 11th, 2024 09:43
• Illusions? (Thoughtless) This poem is why I frustrate people when I say that I know nothing, and...
  August 11th, 2024 09:39
• Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love. (Cassie58) Joan Baez and her song Diamonds and Rust has always been a favorite of...
  August 11th, 2024 09:36
• She (2781) Quite a tribute and well put in words. Nicely done
  August 11th, 2024 09:31
• SOMEONE HAS TO DO IT (Bobby O) So agreed that even small acts of kindness can and do make a difference. A...
  August 11th, 2024 09:30
• Hmm. (I am Danea) We all are alone despite how many relationships we have. A fear of death...
  August 11th, 2024 09:26
• Journey & Fun (Blossompayal) Quite a journey here explained. Ended well and all\'s well that ends well
  August 11th, 2024 07:26
• () Now this one says it better than I have ever heard it said before. Poetic...
  August 11th, 2024 07:23
• Run Red Run (Tony36) A great take off of this well known child\'s tale that is easily pictured...
  August 11th, 2024 07:17
• barley field (Jim56) As I read this I remember Sting\'s \"Fields of gold\" a beautiful poem and...
  August 11th, 2024 07:13
• Somewhere Between (ADarkerMind) Now here is a piece with metaphoric quicksand so attractive that it shines...
  August 11th, 2024 07:11
• The Role of Adversity (Gray0328) So well worded it flows like a river to the sea. It\'s meaning so well...
  August 11th, 2024 07:06
• Sister to sister (Glasswing) Touching and sweet this is a wonderful praise to sisterhood.
  August 11th, 2024 07:04
• TAKEN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Commemoration nicely written. Cheers!
  August 11th, 2024 07:02
• The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15) I\'ve been there myself. Nothing worse than being distracted from trying...
  August 11th, 2024 07:00
• Abomination And Desolation (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Disaster around the corner. Indeed it always has been in one way or...
  August 11th, 2024 06:57
• Comparing Uncertain Potentialities (Neville) A profound thought deeply rooted in faith and belief but so well stated...
  August 11th, 2024 06:53
• 12th poem for: “T.N.D” - Please Stay (Maplespal) A plea for continued union in verse. The message is clearly sent and I...
  August 11th, 2024 06:50
• Actually, Who I Am and What I Am Doing (Dev Parth) One sets one\'s own path and creates one\'s own destiny stated in this...
  August 11th, 2024 06:48
• Evening of city (Zaheennishat) Identity and the lack there of is described here in feelings of alienation...
  August 11th, 2024 06:46
• i\'ll be there (Sheta) A reassuring poem of someone having your back. Nicely penned
  August 11th, 2024 06:44
• Seasons And Times (Orchidee) This time Orchi you have picked one of my favorite scriptures. Nicely done...
  August 11th, 2024 06:42
• Spiritually Watched (Scarlette Patricia Howard) A most interesting proclamation of faith. Nicely worded
  August 11th, 2024 06:40
• Forget Me Not (Cassie58) A most sweet and hauntingly innocent poem of love and loss through the...
  August 11th, 2024 05:05
• Mist And Foghorns. (Goldfinch60) A lovely setting for this poem in the mist and I can hear the ships horns....
  August 11th, 2024 04:59
• After the Ending (Dan Williams) Life and poems full of paradoxes and this poem has a few. Very nice to...
  August 11th, 2024 04:55
• Message In A Bottle (HolesInMyJeans) A very nice rhyme scheme in this poem of asking for reassurance. Very...
  August 11th, 2024 04:48