Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Splash (Maplespal) Tsunami, devastation, metaphor? very nicely penned
  June 23rd, 2025 05:17
• Move On (Laguna) So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:15
• Feeding The Squirrels (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Squirls can be greedy like humans taking more food than what they need...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:13
• LIFE OF A ZERO (Nocturnal Soul) A great message sent in metaphoric style. Nicely written
  June 23rd, 2025 05:09
• The 9 o\'clock News (Mutley Ravishes) Using an absurd threat and numbers to emphasize a more serious issue...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:07
• Giles Corey (Bigguy) Emotion in its stickiness covers this poem. It cries with oppression,...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:03
• DREAM OF SARA (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) An emotional poem of memories evoked by things around with the feeling of...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:57
• My dear (Elizabeth Ross 4) A love poem of a love lost and in metaphor possibly with death\'s...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:53
• The weight I bear (Nicole Pritchard) A recognition of shortcomings and insensitivity that has led to a rift to...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:50
• Truth and Lies (RSM0812) A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:47
• Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1). (Poetic Licence) I appreciated these and they did make me smile and chuckle. Thanks for...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:32
• cluEleSs (Arqios) At first I took this for a critique on technology that has separated us...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:29
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 60-IlApporteDesHommesBattus-1June2025-editedSR (Soman Ragavan) Followed this well until the language change then lost track. Another...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:19
• The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) Well written Andy this one was a lot of fun loved it
  June 23rd, 2025 04:14
• Dreams beyond the cage (Elizabeth Ross 4) A very nicely crafted poem in rhyme, flow and meaning. It speaks of...
  June 23rd, 2025 03:57
• Vows I Made To You (Santajah Douglass) To thine own self be true is Shakespeare\'s words and they hold true. If...
  June 22nd, 2025 21:23
• Primeval (Fränz Müller) This poem seems to set the scene for a ritual that is to follow. Great...
  June 22nd, 2025 21:19
• Her Eyes (Chandu Kanuri) The eyes the window to the soul are focused on in this poem that reads...
  June 22nd, 2025 21:17
• He was the coffee (Bryson) A good metaphor. I love my women like my coffee dark and bitter. A good...
  June 22nd, 2025 19:45
• Poetry (Doggerel Dave) Damn no lecture then. That\'s ok Dave I don\'t like lectures either and...
  June 22nd, 2025 19:42
• Artsy gypsies (Reynaldo Casison) Romantic and sensuous bursting with joyous and natures images another...
  June 22nd, 2025 19:38
• Oulu (Amethyste) And so it is that Finnish is one of the hardest languages to learn. You...
  June 22nd, 2025 16:55
• Solstice signatures (Mourgana of the Fey) And so with us all as we fade away into the twilight. Very nice
  June 22nd, 2025 16:53
• Down Stream, Up Stream (Pete the poet) A beautiful picture you paint in words makes me nostalgic for those places...
  June 22nd, 2025 16:52
• Gonifs and gossips revisited (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) People the worst type of pests. Good write
  June 22nd, 2025 16:50
• You Just Know (Thomas W Case) Signs of the time. A tough and raw write Thomas.
  June 22nd, 2025 14:02
• Wasting time in heaven (Shadowbones) Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
  June 22nd, 2025 13:59
• One Year (13LaurenD) Deceit, treachery, cheating, betrayal call it what you may its all the...
  June 22nd, 2025 13:58
• I Was Not Born a Ghost (The Eternal Cry of the Unbroken) (Mottakeenur Rehman) All seem the same be they politicians, physicians, technicians doesn\'t...
  June 22nd, 2025 13:53
• Can\'t get out! (Orchidee) Never been locked in before only out. A tough call Orchi but gave me a...
  June 22nd, 2025 13:47
• midsummer\'s night (Gray0328) Sultry, sensuous, enchanting, a wonderful world that I have been to....
  June 22nd, 2025 11:29
• Silver Hues (Kurt Philip Behm) Deeper than the surface of the mirror and in greater multitude than its...
  June 22nd, 2025 11:27
• Hawkmoth (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Day and night such contrast literally and metaphorically. Lovely
  June 22nd, 2025 10:12
• Bedroom (Shahla Latifi) A secluded refuge where one can be and do what one pleases and what...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:11
• A Crossroads for Iran (Raidoc) Ideological, political, historical, cultural developmental differences...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:09
• Erratically-tossed sequins (Amy Michelle Mosier) Abstract and metaphorical this poem can have as many interpretations as...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:06
• The Girl in the mirror (Vanna) We are our own worst critics and looking in the mirror whether real or...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:04
• Chopped Trunks (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Disregard for life and how it may all come back on us one day. A painful...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:01
• The Flash (Jerry Reynolds) Routines followed by man and beast, which man is. Very nice
  June 22nd, 2025 09:57
• Poetry is (Tony36) AI terrifying in its nonhuman form as we are seduced by a siren.
  June 22nd, 2025 09:56
• survive in front of the mirror (Lore) Reflections can be a bitch. A sad poem of realization
  June 22nd, 2025 09:53
• Thirteen treasons - I drink (Maplespal) a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in...
  June 22nd, 2025 09:49
• God Cares (Tristan Robert Lange) To the point and direct. Nicely said if only people would listen
  June 22nd, 2025 09:45
• Void (Rosey) Desperation in the suit of depression a poem crying out to a deaf world....
  June 22nd, 2025 06:50
• sometimes life is hard (Jim56) A great message sent in this poem. Seeing the world from the other side...
  June 22nd, 2025 06:48
• “This Poem Was Never Meant to Flow” (Cirawrites01) Metaphor and reality mixed in a poem of a view of the present. Sad and...
  June 22nd, 2025 06:45
• Aligning human life (Byyvette) So much better than one wave length is the whole spectrum and then one...
  June 22nd, 2025 05:29
• Paint the sky the colour dark (Lostinfantasy) Well written this piece of observed wisdom and written poetry. Loved the...
  June 22nd, 2025 05:27
• WHAT IF (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Although humorous as in most humor there is a bit of truth. I certainly...
  June 22nd, 2025 04:11
• SCARS OF TRADITION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I hear a spiritual call in this poem that is to bridge the differences in...
  June 22nd, 2025 04:07
• Celebrate to build or build to celebrate (EvenwheniLie) Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A...
  June 22nd, 2025 04:04
• joy of true love (Mandeep Saini) A lovely philosophy encapsulated in a short poem. Nicely written
  June 22nd, 2025 04:00
• Die (Adiii) A poem of regret and pain. The depression and despair shown in varying...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:57
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 59--CoupJarnac--26May2025 (Soman Ragavan) For some reason Soman this one feels very familiar to me.
  June 22nd, 2025 03:52
• The darkness (RSM0812) Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:50
• 4 blue walls (Leah Bess) A poem of strong feeling. The question unanswered and open to...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:46
• Lonely Spring (Across_world_with_u) A very sad but well written poem that has feeling in its rhyme and near...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:40
• This poem can change your Life (Sahildhobalepoetry) Gratitude is greater than greed. A lovely poem of being thankful and...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:37
• light between shadows (Arqios) I can see it plain as day. A wonderous glimpse of golden rays setting...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:34
• To Jail He Went. (Goldfinch60) Surprise endings are always great whether movies, books or poems. Only in...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:26
• I Loosen My Hold (GeekSusie) A wonderful meaning to this poem that is so well cast in rhyme. Loved it
  June 21st, 2025 21:23
• The old generatiom (Poetaldo) A poem stating your style of music and the need for consideration. Nicely...
  June 21st, 2025 17:00
• Riverbank (Kenny O\'Donnell) A great metaphor and well penned.
  June 21st, 2025 16:08
• Let\'s Stay On That Side (Teddy.15) A direct and wonderful message so well said. There should be no other...
  June 21st, 2025 16:04
• Betrayed (Chris M 352) A poem of betrayal and loss of trust. Most interesting.
  June 21st, 2025 15:16
• Horrible (Fränz Müller) A mystery that leaves a dark past to be revealed. Short and nicely penned
  June 21st, 2025 14:04
• Energy (Shadowbones) A cascading rhythm of lines that evoke differing emotions many poking fun...
  June 21st, 2025 13:27
• The Pain of Letting You In (Vanna) Now here is a poem that can be taken two ways. lovely write nicely
  June 21st, 2025 13:02
• 1964 Fairlane (Gray0328) Nostalgia in a poem, days I remember and feelings resurrected. A wonderful...
  June 21st, 2025 12:59
• The One Behind the Photo (TheInnerLens) Impressions in wet cement are hard to smooth out after dried. A sad poem...
  June 21st, 2025 12:54
• Uncle Mojarra (Damaso) A lovely character development in this poem. Loved it
  June 21st, 2025 10:54
• Heaven Conducts (Kurt Philip Behm) Salvation by music I love that thought Kurt
  June 21st, 2025 10:52
• Poem (Alis Dream world) A poem of loyalty and devotion nicely said
  June 21st, 2025 10:50
• Is This A Solution ? (Devender Kumar) A poem of peace where war is not seen as the solution. Nice
  June 21st, 2025 10:48
• A moment: Traumatized (Maplespal) Memory affected by post traumatic stress and possible amnesia. Sad and...
  June 21st, 2025 08:43
• The answering machine (Georgia Watson) Many of us have felt the frustration of getting an answering machine and...
  June 21st, 2025 08:25
• The 30th Anniversary Of Graduating From High School (Randyjohnson71) Commendable to go back. It grows more and more difficult the more time...
  June 21st, 2025 08:23
• The Answer is No (Tristan Robert Lange) Nicely done Tristan. This poem builds with each stanza reiterating each...
  June 21st, 2025 08:21
• Sleep (Tony36) Very nice Tony a poem of Morpheus and another world. Loved it
  June 21st, 2025 08:17
• robin messenger (Jim56) A lovely poem of how nature is a link between worlds. Very nicely done
  June 21st, 2025 08:15
• An Exquisite painting (that was and wasnt) (Reynaldo Casison) Romantic lines well crafted. This poem is most sensuous
  June 21st, 2025 06:43
• Light in the fog (Kaz) Great lines in this short. Most lovely
  June 21st, 2025 06:40
• Little father (Lorenz) At first this seemed such a vivid portrayal of a man well pictured but...
  June 21st, 2025 06:39
• Well-Wishing (Parsa) A wonderful wish for the best for one that one loves nicely written
  June 21st, 2025 06:34
• Summer Day (Jerry Reynolds) Ah Jerry the question is it the season of life or year? A most clever...
  June 21st, 2025 06:25
• Looking Through The Glass (Emperor) Such a great metaphor. We loose sight of our path by looking backwards...
  June 21st, 2025 04:43
• THE LONELY PATH (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) As a metaphor for life itself this poem speaks of this journey and the...
  June 21st, 2025 04:40
• CASTLE IN THE CLOUDS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Sadness frozen in this poem. No greater loss that that of a parent that...
  June 21st, 2025 04:38
• The Fisherman’s Last Tide (Mottakeenur Rehman) Mottakeenur you outdo yourself. Another most wonderful poem that pulls at...
  June 21st, 2025 04:36
• Angels (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Nicely worded this poem speaks to one\'s conscience and courage. Well done
  June 21st, 2025 04:30
• Modernize (Drone7) Clever and well said. I think that some need to download some new apps and...
  June 21st, 2025 04:29
• Be the first (NafisaSB) Loved the advise in this poem. By being first you make it your idea and...
  June 21st, 2025 04:27
• Confusion (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) I love this poem that in its simplicity speaks out of fear felt. It can be...
  June 21st, 2025 04:24
• Reunion (Spencer Wilhelm) This one definitely fits the title. For that very reason I avoid such...
  June 21st, 2025 04:21
• broken peace (Natalie Heisey) Vacillating emotional intensity between need for intimacy and fear of...
  June 21st, 2025 04:18
• I Watch (Vanna) I can feel the anger and resentment oozing from this piece. There is a...
  June 21st, 2025 04:13
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 58--NewParliamentHousesLondon--18May2025 (Soman Ragavan) Here I see a use of AI to analyze more than poetry but a human and safety...
  June 21st, 2025 04:10
• Hawaii Five-Flow (Mutley Ravishes) Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I...
  June 21st, 2025 04:06
• unyielding eyes (Arqios) Cryptic it is the meaning of this poem that gets the fave. I hold poetry...
  June 21st, 2025 04:04
• I Don`t Have To Agree. (Poetic Licence) Nataiella this poem speaks to me. Nicely stated it speaks to everybody\'s...
  June 21st, 2025 03:58