Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- The sweet side of love (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Nicely worded this poem has several good lines.
July 30th, 2024 19:22 - Not Fair (NinjaGirl)
Well expressed what many feel. Live is not fair, that is a human concept...
July 30th, 2024 19:20 - The Mystery of a Woman (MendedFences27)
A noir style poem in black and white. Loved those old movies. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:18 - ~> READ MY LIPS! - Form Monotetra (Thad Wilk)
Cute and having pets in the past I have seen some of this. Loved the play...
July 30th, 2024 19:16 - Reacting to change (Shadowbones)
Life and universal truth enigmatic at best a most interesting write
July 30th, 2024 19:14 - Friends Forever (PaperFlowerFields)
Quite the discourse and interchange I liked the format that kept straight...
July 30th, 2024 19:11 - Walk on the Beach (Tony36)
The beach can be hypnotic and loved the reference to troubles coming and...
July 30th, 2024 08:20 - Who Do I Turn To? (Iyeah)
A very nice message with great wording. Well done
July 30th, 2024 08:17 - Conversing With Blake (Cassie58)
Great lines here
\"like ink blots on yellowed parchment
crows in...
July 30th, 2024 07:28 - Who am I? (Hzugman)
Nicely done.
July 30th, 2024 07:21 - ~> Palmer The Snake Charmer ~> ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk)
Always loved limericks and this was another good one.
July 30th, 2024 07:19 - Winter Dreams (Markashley1961)
Nicely said in vivid images producing feelings of nostalgia and a longing...
July 30th, 2024 06:44 - Songs of Melancholy (Mya)
A bunch of great similes and a message that is good to hear. Nicely said
July 30th, 2024 06:43 - AN END TO IT (Twizzle48)
Well said there is nothing to fear but fear itself. Just do it.
July 30th, 2024 06:41 - lonely people (Jim56)
We are social animals and need others around us. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 06:39 - A Genuine Fake (Tom Dylan)
It reminds me or the guy that tried to sell me my father\'s stolen watch....
July 30th, 2024 06:37 - Live (Kering.karim)
A question of going on or bailing out. Sometimes cutting ones losses is...
July 30th, 2024 06:33 - My Favourite Colour Is Blue (Teddy.15)
In the US the term yellow means cowardly, also yellow ribbons were used as...
July 30th, 2024 06:31 - Beautiful Thing, Be My Companion, and With You (Maplespal)
In a couple of your poems now you have taken this method of incorporating...
July 30th, 2024 06:28 - So what (2781)
A poem of faith and belief. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 06:23 - Wanderer\'s Dream (Dev Parth)
Beautiful imagery throughout this piece and the metaphor is well stated....
July 30th, 2024 06:21 - Books (Goldfinch60)
Gold you have addressed a modern chink in the armor of society. Books are...
July 30th, 2024 06:19 - Wild and Ready (Tristan Robert Lange)
A call to action this poem invokes paradoxical lines to emphasize why...
July 30th, 2024 06:16 - Safety Sure (Orchidee)
Another nice hymn Orchi. Always nice to feel like someone has your back.
July 30th, 2024 06:14 - The Weatherman (Dan Williams)
Ah yes the weatherman modern day fortune teller. Loved the poem and its...
July 30th, 2024 06:12 - Guilty But Free as A Bird (Neville)
Neville here master of words I bow to your ability to paint a work of art...
July 30th, 2024 06:09 - I\'m Your Starlight (Santajah Douglass)
A beautiful offer of love and companionship set in the backing of new...
July 30th, 2024 06:01 - If You Deem One Worthy Of Such Reprieve (Sydney Zane)
Written in a most classical style reminiscent of ancient Greek poetry but...
July 30th, 2024 05:58 - When the Light Came (Thomas W Case)
Great images here spoken straight out of the mouth of truth and the common...
July 30th, 2024 05:55 - My play (Manslick)
I think you dodged them well done
July 29th, 2024 18:15 - \"Everything happens for a reason\" Yeah, right. (NinjaGirl)
So that you would no longer be nine and so you could become eleven. This...
July 29th, 2024 18:10 - A Torn Heart (Mompu)
This is a common feeling amongst people and it seems that you can not find...
July 29th, 2024 18:09 - THIS IS NOT A DREAM (Gloria Denise)
The dissonance between one who cares and another who doesn\'t is a...
July 29th, 2024 18:06 - Longing (Angela)
A tale well penned with wonderful rhyme that reads smoothly and tells its...
July 29th, 2024 15:51 - Knowing vs Not Knowing (_jyotsna27)
Deeply philosophical it speaks to the unknown through the known. Well done
July 29th, 2024 15:39 - shell of this home (Anemoia)
Sad and powerful in its images and words. We all leave home at some point....
July 29th, 2024 15:37 - She Lay In Her Bed (Bella Shepard)
This may be a true story but also serves as a metaphor for the passage of...
July 29th, 2024 15:35 - White Thursday (Davmor73)
Some great lines in this poem with wonderful images and a message
July 29th, 2024 15:32 - A Quiet Transformation (Prasun Goswami)
Change the only thing that can be counted on. A good write about a...
July 29th, 2024 15:29 - You\'ll never know (Hzugman)
The best of advice and a good write.
July 29th, 2024 13:36 - Friendliness equals self sustaining positive feedback fruit loop (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Enigmatic lines and words in metaphor and humor some with meaning others...
July 29th, 2024 13:35 - She had already cried out...But no one listened (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark)
A powerful message, dark and sad as a commentary on society. Nicely
July 29th, 2024 13:32 - Are We Animals? (Mark The Phenomenon)
Interesting questions that many ask. All depends on definitions and...
July 29th, 2024 13:30 - Dreams sometimes (Amara Carys)
Dream on in beautiful and peaceful slumber. A wonderful thought and a good...
July 29th, 2024 13:26 - From Where It Came (ADarkerMind)
Enigmatic full of imagery that hides and holds the keys to meaning. A...
July 29th, 2024 13:24 - Painted Voices (Kurt Philip Behm)
This work has a very pleasing feel as the surface to a very deep meaning....
July 29th, 2024 13:21 - A Time to Walk (Paul W Conway)
A great metaphor and very nicely worded.
July 29th, 2024 13:19 - The Ghost of The Albatross (Petrichor of Love)
A great title and a brilliant tie in to the last line in the poem....
July 29th, 2024 13:18 - Capital Punishment (AuburnScribbler)
Cleverly disguised in images with ambiguous meanings this carries a...
July 29th, 2024 13:15 - Maybe that\'s why... (Antra.sharma_)
July 29th, 2024 13:12 - Maybe that\'s why... (Antra.sharma_)
A very personal account opening up oneself is the key to being a poet....
July 29th, 2024 13:12 - Let me breathe (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Wonderfully crafted this poem dips down into the well of emotion and...
July 29th, 2024 13:10 - Cauliflower Ears (Gray0328)
A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as...
July 29th, 2024 13:07 - Astral Expedition (Nethra)
A clever and wistful metaphor with a great message buried in it. Great...
July 29th, 2024 13:04 - Still I Know (MendedFences27)
Fixation on a love written nicely in verse well done
July 29th, 2024 10:18 - What is poetry? (Saleh Ben Saleh)
A very good definition and well worded in verse. Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 10:17 - ~> Bugs AND Daffy - Limericks (Thad Wilk)
A fun read but I think it was porky pig that had the pot belly.
July 29th, 2024 10:15 - First love (Blossompayal)
A wonderful description of first love and its pleasures. Nicely said
July 29th, 2024 10:12 - My old age was told, stop! (Sami mulaj)
I too felt this when I became a grandfather. If I could have had...
July 29th, 2024 10:11 - moment of bliss (Sixthwrites)
What a wonderful image and metaphor set so well and framed. Loved this...
July 29th, 2024 10:08 - I Am Unique And Alone (Mohammad younus koul)
So many search for so much. A beautiful opening of one\'s heart
July 29th, 2024 10:07 - I Am Unique And Alone (Mohammad younus koul)
So many search for so much. A beautiful opening of one\'s heart
July 29th, 2024 10:07 - Futile Rearrangement of the Surface (Mutley Ravishes)
Nothing more terrifying that the imagined. Nicely stated
July 29th, 2024 10:05 - My people (2781)
Armageddon you say? A powerful peace of death and destruction. Well...
July 29th, 2024 10:04 - Carpe Diem ! (Mya)
A great message that we all should take more to heart. Nicely worded in...
July 29th, 2024 10:01 - Peace Love Rock and Roll (Tony36)
Us hippies are growing old and rock and roll has made so many changes it...
July 29th, 2024 10:00 - a nature thankyou (Jim56)
I feel this poem it fits very well with my disposition. Loved it
July 29th, 2024 09:57 - The Silent Echoes (Kheza)
Everyone loves a fool no one loves the wise they are shunned and at times...
July 29th, 2024 09:56 - ON A RAINY AND GLOOMY RAINY DAY A LOVE DECLARATION IN FRENCH (Swarovski20)
Language does not need to be a barrier by a smile we communicate all that...
July 29th, 2024 09:53 - Let us talk (Maplespal)
Loved the rhyme but loved more the presentation of life as it is some call...
July 29th, 2024 09:51 - Between Clouds (Neville)
A poem that is beautifully kind against a cloudy setting. Nicely said...
July 29th, 2024 09:48 - Fools Gold (DREEK0)
Nicely done
July 29th, 2024 09:46 - The Last Supper (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Alister a sex magic man Anton LeVey a Satanist all the way. A great write
July 29th, 2024 09:45 - Prayers In Perils (Orchidee)
Saved from the lion pit. Scary stuff Orchi. Nicely written though.
July 29th, 2024 09:42 - Our God (EvenwheniLie)
\" sin protected by bodies are but mere sacrifices for those who wish to...
July 29th, 2024 09:39 - Distant (PaperFlowerFields)
I hear two conflicting thoughts in this piece 1. that you are to blame for...
July 29th, 2024 09:37 - Dark void (Natalie Heisey)
This poem deserves more reads. Well rhymed and thoughtfully written and...
July 29th, 2024 09:32 - What is your Someone (Gloria Denise)
Looking for that perfect person that fits one\'s needs to be desired,...
July 29th, 2024 09:28 - Waning Moon (Satishverma)
Questions that make one stop and think and then move on to the next...
July 29th, 2024 09:26 - The Bible Says Be Honest (Sunshine777)
Nature has her own rules and she is a mother too. I can hear the anger in...
July 29th, 2024 09:24 - Beauty (Angela)
A most beautiful scene well painted in words with peaceful images evoking...
July 29th, 2024 09:19 - even in the madness (Sheta)
One finds their own peace amidst any circumstance. I used to sleep lunch...
July 29th, 2024 09:16 - The Rooster in My Neighborhood (Rrodriguez)
Colorful images painted in words. I feel that I have seen this guy before....
July 29th, 2024 09:14 - Those Days (Thoughtless)
Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of...
July 29th, 2024 06:15 - video in the mail (Gary Edward Geraci)
A good story that give the feel of unity broken and new replacing the old....
July 29th, 2024 06:13 - And I\'ll Write About That Too (Teddy.15)
I too like to write from all perspectives about all things and since...
July 29th, 2024 05:29 - Second Chance. (Goldfinch60)
Inspiring and so glad you made it through not only made it but with...
July 29th, 2024 05:25 - The Whisper Tree (Dan Williams)
Anthropomorphism at its finest in an engaging story with great flow....
July 29th, 2024 05:19 - ~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable (Thad Wilk)
A most fun read and well paced for the final hook.
July 29th, 2024 05:06 - do it for me (Maplespal)
The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the...
July 28th, 2024 06:13 - SUICIDE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Finding peace for oneself at the expense of others feelings that are left...
July 28th, 2024 06:11 - dogs can be a friend (Jim56)
Have had dogs before and it seems that their love and loyalty exceeds that...
July 28th, 2024 06:07 - Unique is mom (Goli.Standbypoet)
A wonderful tribute to a most important person. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 06:05 - I Would Do it But can You Say You Will Do The Same (Santajah Douglass)
A poem reflecting the turmoil in the mind over possible rejection and loss...
July 28th, 2024 06:04 - * Why not stars?* (Antra.sharma_)
I see the moon as the main course and the stars as the seasoning. Both...
July 28th, 2024 06:01 - Scriptures (2781)
A fun read of prophesies of things to come. Nice
July 28th, 2024 06:00 - Friends With Benefits (Neville)
A proposal? At this age benefits are merger and coitus interruptus is...
July 28th, 2024 05:57 - Whispers Of The Night (Dev Parth)
Avery peaceful and calming poem that is a pleasure to read.
July 28th, 2024 05:52 - Sea Will Drag Me (Satishverma)
As always enigmatic and mind twisting words that one may place their own...
July 28th, 2024 05:45 - Evidense (Mutley Ravishes)
Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out...
July 28th, 2024 05:44
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