Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Cartography of Confusion (Rawaneigh.99) This poem has many wonderful lines and images as it wends its way through...
  September 22nd, 2025 04:35
• You still Not Getting It? (Orchidee) I wonder how many reviews that I have made that led people down the wrong...
  September 22nd, 2025 04:14
• LIMERICKS 148, 149 &150 (Michael Edwards) You have done it again Michael and entertained me for another morning...
  September 22nd, 2025 03:56
• Autumn Tanka. (Goldfinch60) A very nice picture painted here Andy. I feel the warmth of the colors.
  September 22nd, 2025 03:53
• self-loathing (Kayla Jackson) Not being a woman I will take your word for it. This write is clear and...
  September 21st, 2025 20:10
• Whispers in an Empty Room (Haleyalexis) Love for person or animal is a strong force that can be felt without...
  September 21st, 2025 19:17
• Cautionary Tale (Philip Daniel Cook) We all have such a heel and the warning of what will happen. Mistakes...
  September 21st, 2025 19:14
• Thirst (Morgue) It gives the feel of a psychic vampire sucking your energy and...
  September 21st, 2025 19:10
• Will I Ever Be Free? (C.M) Torn in thoughts this poem projects this well. Nicely written
  September 21st, 2025 17:05
• her hiccups sound like falling raindrops... (DeadRose) Now that is an association that has never occurred to me. A most...
  September 21st, 2025 17:04
• A little plant (Amethyste) I can picture this so well. It is beautiful and something I see every time...
  September 21st, 2025 15:02
• Smile (Anthony Hanible) The very best method to get at someone that hates you is to let them see...
  September 21st, 2025 14:38
• Reading Some Of Matthew 5, Keeps Me Alive (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A poem of belief and faith and a declaration for others. Nicely done
  September 21st, 2025 14:37
• THE CLICKER (David Welch) I love this one. One only needs to know where the power lies be in...
  September 21st, 2025 13:20
• HALO 92192 (S.O.S) I love this a halo, a guiding light. Well done.
  September 21st, 2025 13:13
• Poet (Teddy.15) A most positive write with which I firmly believe. Lovely my friend
  September 21st, 2025 13:03
• Yard work. (Friendship) A well rhymed and metered poem about completing a task instead of...
  September 21st, 2025 13:00
• Box of darkness.. (Natavia Hobert) A sense of being trapped and a feeling of helplessness as to how to...
  September 21st, 2025 11:06
• To Liam (Velvet.Riot) A wonderful tribute to one that passed too soon. Nicely done
  September 21st, 2025 11:05
• I gotta learn me about the IPad (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) We spend our time on the most frivolous of activities like gaming on the I...
  September 21st, 2025 11:03
• Vagabond Kings (Kurt Philip Behm) The reasoning in these two statements becomes circular if examined and...
  September 21st, 2025 10:23
• The Belt of Truth (Gray0328) A belief, a plea and a pledge in a poem. Nicely written Gray
  September 21st, 2025 10:21
• I will be Okay (Meera Mere) Indeed the perfunctory answer okay is expected and when not given others...
  September 21st, 2025 10:19
• To be a Bird... (Aradhya) A poem that focuses on the virtues of being a bird. It floats and is...
  September 21st, 2025 10:17
• Music (Krissy.V) This poem speaks of music being a stress reliever and comforter when there...
  September 21st, 2025 10:15
• The Empty Armchair (Lore) A poem that is sad and lonely but altogether too true and real. Nicely...
  September 21st, 2025 10:13
• Don\'t give love a bad name (Anabasova) Insecurities run rampant in a world where insincerity is the norm. Love is...
  September 21st, 2025 10:10
• Blessings (Keeter C) Free association leads this poem to a sociopolitical observation where all...
  September 21st, 2025 10:07
• 𝒲𝒽𝒾𝓁ℯ ℴ𝓃 𝒶 𝒸𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝓌𝒾𝓉𝒽 ℋ.ℰ.ℛ (Keyara S Trotman) This seems in some way observational turned reflective. A most thought...
  September 21st, 2025 10:05
• Dreaming Of You (Louiray) There is a great deal of longing in this poem for closeness and loving....
  September 21st, 2025 07:44
• i carried them in my pocket (Katie B.) Difficult times portrayed in this poem. (I carried the days in my pocket)...
  September 21st, 2025 07:42
• Waterfall (Alan R) Whether light is knowledge or love the wishes are reflections of desire. A...
  September 21st, 2025 07:39
• Breathless (Domilla) Missing love is a most difficult thing and this seems worded in this poem....
  September 21st, 2025 07:36
• Untitled (RSM0812) An incantation with biblical implications very nicely penned
  September 21st, 2025 07:34
• When I walk away (Maplespal) A poem of recognition a poem well penned
  September 21st, 2025 07:32
• Why I chose you,Ma? (Jyoti Verma) Beautiful words of belonging in a poem transcending worlds. Nicely penned
  September 21st, 2025 07:29
• I have Something to Tell You (William Hromada) A poetic plea for continued union and love. Nicely written
  September 21st, 2025 07:25
• The Emerald Dream (Aa Harvey) Emerald city? A reference to the land of Oz. A good read.
  September 21st, 2025 07:23
• Paywalled Proclamation (Tristan Robert Lange) Clever wording in this poem. The word play is wonderful with (profit) as...
  September 21st, 2025 07:21
• ibis (Devender Kumar) A most beautiful haiku that paints its picture of nature and its majesty
  September 21st, 2025 05:42
• love (Jim56) Beautiful Jim love lasts forever if it is indeed love all else passes away
  September 21st, 2025 05:19
• the saga in the hall (Arqios) Here Cryptic I feel there is deeper meaning pressed into that floor. We...
  September 21st, 2025 05:18
• A Rose for You (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A fair warning and full disclosure given in a poem. Loved it
  September 21st, 2025 05:12
• THE WARD (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A sad poem that paints a graphic picture of death\'s waiting room. Nicely...
  September 21st, 2025 04:04
• The Life I\'m Living On (Sneha Sebastian) Living for oneself and not for others is a key to happiness. If that...
  September 21st, 2025 04:02
• this is my gift to you, who loves the ocean more than breath. (Carpe4diem) A lovely metaphor that ties the theme of the poem to meaning and feeling....
  September 21st, 2025 03:59
• my right to melancholy  (White lily lament) There is comfort for some in sadness just as there is in silence. This...
  September 21st, 2025 03:56
• Try To.... (Orchidee) I thought those 18+ poems were if the author was over 18. Don\'t tell me...
  September 21st, 2025 03:52
• Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60) Very nice God this poem has a most wistful feel to it and it glides as it...
  September 21st, 2025 03:47
• The River That Remembers (Arquious) Welcome to MPS a fave for your first write and I do not give them easily....
  September 21st, 2025 03:45
• Sometimes, We Slip (Thomas W Case) Sometimes karma takes a rapid role in life. A fun story well told Thomas
  September 21st, 2025 03:40
• an imbrication of fallen leaves (Jon Nakapalau) A beautiful image cast in this poem of fall and its beauty.
  September 20th, 2025 20:21
• Acceptance (3) (Fred1794) Three is a magic number, the number of the trinity, the triangle of...
  September 20th, 2025 19:34
• The Grave of the Border (Sami Mulaj) A poem of darkness, death, pain and violence. A sad commentary for...
  September 20th, 2025 19:32
• At Eternity\'s Gate (Acheel) A great short with a most interesting metaphor. I have always thought of...
  September 20th, 2025 18:56
• Las Vegas & The Morning Blues (Teddy.15) Been there done that but never spend enough to regret. Quite the place...
  September 20th, 2025 18:52
• memory street (Gloria Denise) Memory street is where one\'s home is built. A warm and nostalgic feel to...
  September 20th, 2025 15:44
• I try to feel.. But I can\'t. (Natavia Hobert) When all thought and feeling is gone one is gone. A sad and existentially...
  September 20th, 2025 15:43
• Short Stories Rated 18 + (Keyara S Trotman) Strong passion displayed in this poem that lead to a physical relationship...
  September 20th, 2025 15:40
• IN ORDER TO BE SANE (David Welch) A masterful work. Not sure but it seems that the word (heard instead of...
  September 20th, 2025 15:36
• We are free to walk In this path (Poetaldo) In this poem is concern for food that is found and provided by God. Nicely...
  September 20th, 2025 14:39
• Behind Closed Doors (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A fave for the meaning of this write. A poem of faith and belief that in...
  September 20th, 2025 13:22
• Horses in the Ocean by Boris Slutski (Ksey_Gan) A most sad write of a tragedy in terms of life and death. Well told
  September 20th, 2025 13:19
• Riot (Shadowbones) Hate spreads like a flood. Before long all may drown. Well written
  September 20th, 2025 13:16
• Corruption (Scarlette Howard) A write of purpose. It speaks of control and manipulation. War, disease,...
  September 20th, 2025 13:14
• The quantum voyager (Lorenz) Although surrealistic in nature I am reversing the metaphor and see this...
  September 20th, 2025 11:10
• Jim Morrison (Eugene S.) This has biblical symbology in the being thrust into a desert, the solemn...
  September 20th, 2025 10:25
• One Step (Kurt Philip Behm) I really liked this one Kurt I guess it must be my age. A fave
  September 20th, 2025 10:19
• A knock on my door (Arial) A poem most thought provoking that drops one into a situation and plucks...
  September 20th, 2025 10:18
• Just being happy with age. (Friendship) A wonderful message at the end and peppered with a self laughter at aging....
  September 20th, 2025 09:09
• Jungle living & Worth it (Maplespal) I detect struggle and strife in these poems where it is tough fighting...
  September 20th, 2025 07:14
• Can’t move Forward (William Hromada) A poem of strife and difficulties that like swimming against the current...
  September 20th, 2025 07:11
• I kid you not dear reader... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I identify where after having money taken from a debit card I never use...
  September 20th, 2025 07:09
• lonlieness (Jim56) Now that is a sad poem. Unlike you Jim that is always so bright and...
  September 20th, 2025 06:04
• The Devil\'s Daughter (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Jobs are hard to find have to take what you can get. Poetry won\'t pay the...
  September 20th, 2025 06:03
• LIMERICKS 142, 143 & 144 (Michael Edwards) I hare told you before that I love limericks and these put a smile on my...
  September 20th, 2025 05:57
• Extended version (RSM0812) This poem in the shape of a cross speaks loudly with strong words buried...
  September 20th, 2025 05:45
• And They Call It Patriotism (Tristan Robert Lange) Alliteration begins this piece without peace. Short and to the point like...
  September 20th, 2025 05:42
• of silences (Arqios) A cosmic symphony echoes of tribute to which I add my applause and with...
  September 20th, 2025 05:38
• The Neighbor\'s Dog (Gray0328) How often we wonder about the mind of another, be it animal or human....
  September 20th, 2025 04:08
• MY LITTLE BIRD — ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) A simply lovely poem with superb pairing of images and with good flow. The...
  September 20th, 2025 04:06
• Solivagant (Ria_1005) A very nice poem of finding love. Well imaged and built in good form this...
  September 20th, 2025 04:04
• OLD GUITAR (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Art gives way to commerce in this poem that sadly depicts the values of...
  September 20th, 2025 04:02
• Polar Opposites (Katie B.) This poem vacillates between extremes from highs to lows and gives the...
  September 20th, 2025 04:00
• Stupindo (Keeter C) A poem of reflections and meditations. Well written in most poetic form
  September 20th, 2025 03:57
• meditating in the morning (MatPie) Here is meditation and reflection in a poem about all about and all...
  September 20th, 2025 03:55
• The Friends Are Gone (Los Del Bohío) (Vogelfrei) This poem is motivational and calls on people to give up the fight. A...
  September 20th, 2025 03:46
• Thread of The Tapestry (Whats write for me) Coincidence or luck are just two terms for too many variables to calculate...
  September 20th, 2025 03:42
• Mud maybe. (Luis Alberto Spinneta) (Vogelfrei) A beautiful poem that speaks of from the spirit of a body not the flesh...
  September 20th, 2025 03:38
• Rugby For Ladies. (Goldfinch60) Some women can be tough, fast and athletic and some of them I wouldn\'t...
  September 20th, 2025 03:32
• As it Bleeds (capturing my thoughts with Bob before they disappear into the aether) (Poetic Dan) A poem and story of loss and an existential search for meaning. Nicely
  September 19th, 2025 19:51
• Weird (Amethyste) The poem left the feeling of weird and one questions what is contained in...
  September 19th, 2025 19:43
• The Sky Beyond the Fog (GeekSusie) This is a lovely message clothed in most lovely poetic words with...
  September 19th, 2025 16:25
• Aura of ones name (Israel McCorkle) A wonderful poem and a marvelous name. Nicely penned
  September 19th, 2025 16:06
• Aphrodite’s Fortune (Georgia Watson) A beautiful love poem so well written.
  September 19th, 2025 15:05
• Scientific Mind (Teddy.15) A lovely short and even I do not believe in all I see. But I still love...
  September 19th, 2025 15:02
• Again and again and again (Hzugman) This goes deeper than the surface and speaks of how love is a continual...
  September 19th, 2025 13:41
• I Escaped Groundhog Day (Xalvazora) When each day seems as the last and life runs full circle it speaks of how...
  September 19th, 2025 13:39
• When the Clock Strikes 12 (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) The Cinderella story in poem and a lovely write at that. Expectations,...
  September 19th, 2025 13:36
• Memories (Priya Tomar) Lovely unlike many that are enamored by the outer shell this time it is...
  September 19th, 2025 13:34