Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• EAR (Drniran) This poem contains a most interesting answer response pattern and seems to...
  November 26th, 2025 04:58
• A Sinful Love (The Velvet) Spoken of as if a drug it holds the same addiction. Nicely written...
  November 26th, 2025 04:56
• Pistol pop (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem has the ring of gangster rap to it. It seems to be talking about...
  November 26th, 2025 04:53
• Whatever New Thing (Vipassana) What an interesting vision it would be to see our part in the cycle of...
  November 26th, 2025 04:51
• Fearing God (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) This makes sense in regard to the author\'s note but upon first read it...
  November 26th, 2025 04:49
• Everyday grinding (Funmiwrites) I get the gist and feel. Nicely done
  November 26th, 2025 04:45
• Gentle Spirit (RSM0812) A beautiful sonnet of love. Very nicely written with great images, meter...
  November 26th, 2025 04:42
• You have to break the cycle first. (Caitlyn Nicholson) Welcome to MPS. Here is a poem of cycles. Cycles are made so as to keep a...
  November 26th, 2025 04:40
• The Living And The Lifeless (Orchidee) This one a hymn and poem of proclamation it rings out in rhyme. Very...
  November 26th, 2025 04:28
• separation song (Devender Kumar) A sad senryu that is most interesting because of the juxtaposition of the...
  November 26th, 2025 04:25
• Six O\'clock Each Morning. (Goldfinch60) A good read my friend that sounds fresh and bright. A lovely way to start...
  November 26th, 2025 04:23
• Indigo Days (Ssandell) We never know what we have until we loose it. Nicely written this poem...
  November 25th, 2025 19:51
• THE MEMORY OF GLENORE (David Welch) Another good old west tale told in poetic narrative style. Filled with...
  November 25th, 2025 19:49
• Reasoning (Ja'Quan Shepard) A poem with a rap meter to the rhyme. Nicely done
  November 25th, 2025 19:44
• In Anguished Adoration (Spencer Wilhelm) Although this may be taken as a son talking to their literal father it...
  November 25th, 2025 17:09
• Think In Shapes (Pete the poet) Geometry in poetry Euclid would be proud. A most unique poem that combines...
  November 25th, 2025 17:07
• A Magnificent Day (Teddy.15) Teddy I love this one. It is not only descriptive and full of nature but...
  November 25th, 2025 17:04
• The Well (John Lee) Such a great metaphor here and followed through so poetically it rings...
  November 25th, 2025 17:01
• Words undone (Jaryyn) What an existential poem of a journey taken. A lovely write
  November 25th, 2025 15:47
• Such with curriculum (Shenielyn pacaldo) An ode to teaching and education in general. Well written
  November 25th, 2025 15:42
• The madman\'s journey (Lorenz) Well said Lorenz. Madness is denoted by those that call themselves sane...
  November 25th, 2025 14:50
• Mac n cheese sounds (Ms.divine) A most sexual, sensual, erotic poem
  November 25th, 2025 14:38
• Happy Birthday, Melissa (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A beautiful birthday wish in verse and rhyme nicely done
  November 25th, 2025 13:21
• Sweet cherry (Funmiwrites) Passion in a seductive, sensual, erotic, sexual set of verse.
  November 25th, 2025 13:20
• Memory (Markashley1961) memories bring nostalgia and different memories bring pain better not to...
  November 25th, 2025 13:18
• Make A Choice (Tkatie118) A journey through space and time a life lived and a dream dreamed. Well...
  November 25th, 2025 13:16
• the last lines of life (Devender Kumar) A great senryu here Kumar well done
  November 25th, 2025 13:11
• The Milkman\'s Passing (Gray0328) Very poetic the lines of this poem Gray. Your writing has definitely grown...
  November 25th, 2025 13:10
• Pass The Turkey You S.O.B. (Kurt Philip Behm) Time have gotten rougher and people more ugly in their responses. Another...
  November 25th, 2025 11:36
• Amply funneling kickstarting politesse undergirds zyzygy (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) This poem takes one through many thoughts and it starts off with being...
  November 25th, 2025 11:35
• Untitled {20} (Niko Papadatos) There is a feel of being so small in this write with the fronds being...
  November 25th, 2025 11:33
• Sometimes by Tamara Nesterovich (Ksey_Gan) A wait can turn the grey to bright and beautiful. Nicely written
  November 25th, 2025 11:31
• 𝔉𝔦𝔯𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔖𝔢𝔢 𝔗𝔥𝔞𝔱 𝔗𝔥𝔦𝔰 𝔦𝔰 𝔍𝔲𝔰𝔱 𝔐𝔶 𝔏𝔦𝔣𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) here I hear a poem of demur, caution, fear of discovery and the hiding of...
  November 25th, 2025 11:30
• LOST (Freedom4) The introjection of her being me in the past raises questions of who is...
  November 25th, 2025 11:25
• Villanelle for a Plastic Oracle (Matthew R. Callies) I remember as a child having one and it seemed that the answers were never...
  November 25th, 2025 10:22
• some certain uncertainty (Corian Baek) A great poem of sensitivity and trying to grow stronger. The way I know to...
  November 25th, 2025 10:18
• Young love is silly (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) The essence of this poem seems to be to protect children from unprotected...
  November 25th, 2025 09:00
• Saint Expertise (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan this poem seems to have been written with ease like a gentle...
  November 25th, 2025 08:56
• i heard a robin sing (Jim56) Another lovely poem of nature Jim. Nicely written
  November 25th, 2025 08:52
• SIGNALS / Señales (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos this is a great poem describing that feeling of sliding away that...
  November 25th, 2025 08:50
• Watching stupidity (Maplespal) The message is clear in this poem of changes that have taken place and how...
  November 25th, 2025 08:48
• Your Reflection (Jjudaharts) Indeed a truth set forth in two lines. Well said
  November 25th, 2025 08:44
• If I Were a Book (William Hromada) This poem reads more refined that its predecessor with greater smoothness...
  November 25th, 2025 08:44
• river’s ardent flame (Arqios)
  November 25th, 2025 08:42
• river’s ardent flame (Arqios) A beautiful picture my friend with deep and running meaning of memories...
  November 25th, 2025 08:42
• IT MAKES NO DIFFERENCE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Oh those nights of regret. Who has not had one or more. Well expressed in...
  November 25th, 2025 04:24
• Echoes of Almost (Eira_) I love the use of another language\'s word for one not available it the...
  November 25th, 2025 04:22
• a new Earth (Vipassana) Yes a world of contradictions and impossibilities where incompatibility is...
  November 25th, 2025 04:19
• Elder (The Velvet) Many are despised by their own people for various reasons. Some because of...
  November 25th, 2025 04:17
• Home (\"Carter Wills\") Nostalgic this poem is inviting and warm. There is a feeling of...
  November 25th, 2025 04:12
• Gods great work! (Andrew Deaton) There is a clear pledge of love in this poem and a declaration of...
  November 25th, 2025 04:10
• The Temporary And The Eternal (Orchidee) I like this one Orchi it has a ring to it declaring freedom for a people....
  November 25th, 2025 04:05
• True Civilisation (Rebellion_in_sanity) Ah we hide behind definitions but our morals are self evident. The life we...
  November 25th, 2025 04:02
• My Faithful Life. (Goldfinch60) A lovely poem Andy of a life lucky enough to had three goes at it and to...
  November 25th, 2025 04:00
• Get off the Bus (Thomas W Case) To go there directly seems to be to choose death as a shortcut. Hopefully...
  November 25th, 2025 03:55
• TURNING TRICKS (David Welch) Dark and bleak is reality hid behind a cloud of fantasy. We all live in an...
  November 24th, 2025 20:05
• Suicide Note (Coracaodacripta) A good read with the logic that if someone does think about it long enough...
  November 24th, 2025 20:00
• MUNDOS SECRETOS / SECRET WORDS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Another beautiful poem Poetic secrets in words that fade with time. Nicely...
  November 24th, 2025 17:49
• Cling to Faith (𓆩Mase𓆪) A poem of faith words of belief, a poetic advice given. Well done
  November 24th, 2025 17:45
• Ultimate Crossover of Cosmic Horror and Villainy (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) A fantasy tail in surreal terms. Well done
  November 24th, 2025 16:21
• You got mail 📬 (Ms.divine) Funny how we only act certain ways at certain times of the year and even...
  November 24th, 2025 16:19
• Petrarch Sonnet 90 (Ksey_Gan) Nicely worded and set in symbol this poem seems classic in form and well...
  November 24th, 2025 16:17
• Tears (Lyra Silvertongue) There is a fallacy in the belief that strong people never cry this could...
  November 24th, 2025 16:16
• you already have everything (Gray0328) So many look for happiness outside themselves and seldom find it. It lies...
  November 24th, 2025 16:12
• Death came down (Jaryyn) A great acrostic nicely done
  November 24th, 2025 16:09
• Her Innocence (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) A poem of guilt and shame. It seems a sad poem to me. Well written leaving...
  November 24th, 2025 16:08
• The Rest of the Story (Matthew R. Callies) I remember his broadcasts well when I was younger and used to like to...
  November 24th, 2025 16:06
• Penélope (The Velvet) Sometimes we wish dreams to be true. Such a disappointment when we find...
  November 24th, 2025 16:03
• Lucifer Resents Love (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I could guess who the three are but no spoilers here. Good write
  November 24th, 2025 16:01
• Poetic Timeshare (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Yes seems so true that so few write and the seeing of things differently....
  November 24th, 2025 16:00
• Untitled {19} (Niko Papadatos) A poem hard to argue against. It seems true and that is what people are...
  November 24th, 2025 15:57
• Your Window (স্বাধীন) Stuck in time, random thoughts pass, distracted by a vision. Lovely
  November 24th, 2025 15:56
• Eurydice (Lorenz) The classic Greek story of rescuing from the underworld and what a great...
  November 24th, 2025 15:54
• If I Were a Book (William Hromada) A great analogy with so many points made. We all are our own book a diary...
  November 24th, 2025 15:48
• Urania (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A good start to a new novela. We will wait and see.
  November 24th, 2025 15:45
• 𝒜𝒹𝓋𝒾𝓈ℯ 𝓂ℯ 𝒩ℴ𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) We are many and all are one. A good thought and wonderful poem
  November 24th, 2025 15:43
• WHISPERS / SUSURROS (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A sweet and tender love poem, whether in English of Spanish it remains the...
  November 24th, 2025 15:41
• The Burning Lye (Tristan Robert Lange) Whether lye or lie this works out the same. We used to use lye soap and it...
  November 24th, 2025 15:38
• The Storm (Katie B.) A most beautiful picture painted in poetic words. Nature in its majesty...
  November 24th, 2025 07:52
• country living (Jim56) Very nicely done Jim. I love the country and nature as well and I can see...
  November 24th, 2025 07:49
• The reason I am here is because of you (Poetaldo) A conversation with one\'s creator in poetic form as a prayer. Lovely
  November 24th, 2025 07:11
• Stalker Story: Verdict Unsafe (Tkatie118) Dramatic and traumatic this poem is gritty and dark. Well told.
  November 24th, 2025 06:24
• Double, Double please (Maplespal) A fun short where bitter meets sweet whether in a pastry bite or sugar in...
  November 24th, 2025 06:16
• Brenda (Paul Bell) Quite a tale of a tail. Someone I knew died that way a shemale with a tail...
  November 24th, 2025 05:53
• self-deprecation (Arqios) Wow!!! The butcher\'s knife plunges deep in this poetic metaphor. A poetic...
  November 24th, 2025 05:20
• LOOKING FOR A ROOM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I love dark humor and being blind he must have seen nothing but black, so...
  November 24th, 2025 04:25
• Poseidon (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) A great name for the poem and wonderful depiction of the oceans rage. The...
  November 24th, 2025 04:22
• Story of the self. (Vipassana) From dog to cat to rat being all things a mind provoking poem that poses...
  November 24th, 2025 04:18
• Of equal minds (EvenwheniLie) Loved this write with its cleverly woven meaning in metaphor. The conflict...
  November 24th, 2025 04:16
• We come (Ja'Quan Shepard) This seems a rap in that it has a great beat to it. Not sure about...
  November 24th, 2025 04:13
• Ancient cloth (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) Now I\'m not sure whether this qualifies as a haiku or senryu whether...
  November 24th, 2025 04:11
• Seek And Find (Orchidee) Another great hymn Orchi this one in timely fashion speaks of Thanks...
  November 24th, 2025 04:01
• Everly Brothers And Friends. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a real good time Andy with music from my time of childhood and...
  November 24th, 2025 03:55
• LIMERICK 146  (Michael Edwards) I\'ll bet that stung a bit. They used to call that castration making a...
  November 24th, 2025 03:51
• Quietude (Jjudaharts) Some forget or overlook the importance of quietude here in this short...
  November 24th, 2025 03:48
• An unforgettable taste (Kayla Jackson) A wonderful write where the taste of the past is like savoring wine, the...
  November 24th, 2025 03:47
• does love exist (Applecherry) A most quizzical poem. Love does not leave passion does. Love is one sided...
  November 23rd, 2025 20:42
• Lines (Angelo) The process of learning when young and how it is seen. Nicely done
  November 23rd, 2025 20:39
• WITH YOU OR AWAY (Drniran) A difficult situation either way best to stay away. Well done
  November 23rd, 2025 20:37
• funny little thing (NinjaGirl) A poem of desires unmet and love not felt. Questions that go unanswered...
  November 23rd, 2025 19:01