Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Queen Selene (Tristan Robert Lange)
Beautiful in its images this short poem salutes the queen of the night,...
September 24th, 2025 06:45 - rusted edges, burning gears (Arqios)
This poem speaks to me of the cold weight and fierce grind of society over...
September 24th, 2025 06:31 - happy love (Jim56)
Love and happiness somewhat tied and nicely unified in verse here. Well...
September 24th, 2025 04:54 - When you died (Poetaldo)
A poem where a loss is well expressed in verse. Nicely done
September 24th, 2025 04:45 - The Whispers, The Shadows (Keyara S Trotman)
A love poem where sugar heated and burnt coats and flavors the poem....
September 24th, 2025 04:44 - The Lame Bird (Ujjal Mandal)
There is something charming about this poem of threat, danger and death....
September 24th, 2025 04:40 - ONEIRIC HYMN (Acheel)
This poem seems in classic style with wording and structure that follows...
September 24th, 2025 04:35 - BACK WHERE I STARTED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I like the feel and construction of this poem of memories. The rhyme...
September 24th, 2025 04:29 - sins of the father (Queer-with-a-pen)
Raw and hard hitting it speaks with anguish and some sense of confusion...
September 24th, 2025 04:27 - THE CRACK IN YOUR DOOR... (Cerry)
A poem of unrequited love and the frustration and anger that accompanies...
September 24th, 2025 04:23 - Bournes Rush Through (Coracaodacripta)
A clever use of the word bourne as it applies so poetically to tears that...
September 24th, 2025 04:19 - Washed Away. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy I don\'t know how many have gone down the drain. Nicely done...
September 24th, 2025 04:13 - sometimes good friends can have a conversation in silence (Jon Nakapalau)
Memories bind us all. A lovely write.
September 23rd, 2025 19:23 - A WORLD OF FLUX & SPAM (David Welch)
Nicely written with the return to the beginning lines at the end. Very...
September 23rd, 2025 19:16 - Rotting Alive (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
A dark poem of loss of identity and an existential crisis. Nicely written...
September 23rd, 2025 18:19 - I post a most unusual shout out (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Another humorous depiction of the lunacy of the times and how they can be...
September 23rd, 2025 18:16 - His last recess (Lore)
A well written piece that emphasizes the potential of bullying and the...
September 23rd, 2025 18:15 - The Stillness That Sees (GeekSusie)
Body language, actions, past history often tell more than words. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 18:11 - Free to be present (Nicole Pritchard)
September 23rd, 2025 16:05 - Free to be present (Nicole Pritchard)
A great write about letting go of the past and embracing the present....
September 23rd, 2025 16:05 - Doubts (Amethyste)
Don\'t be deceived by first impressions. Good write
September 23rd, 2025 16:04 - Hate (EllieOxford513)
A poem about someone consumed with anger and hate and the effect it has on...
September 23rd, 2025 14:18 - Dry bones in the rain (Teddy Temple)
A poem that seems troubled over loss and consumed in the process. Love the...
September 23rd, 2025 14:14 - She Was Like a Shot of Espresso~ (HrishikeshManohar)
A sweet poem that has a very tender touch to it and speaks with nostalgia....
September 23rd, 2025 12:55 - The quarrel of the clouds (Sami Mulaj)
A clever line in the clouds quarreling. Nicely done.
September 23rd, 2025 12:51 - Unfortunately (Anthony Hanible)
Truth spoken in a poem. All things must die. Well written
September 23rd, 2025 12:50 - Go get it (๐ฉMase๐ช)
A poem with which I agree. Nicely written it makes its point well.
September 23rd, 2025 12:49 - Crazy boy (Iam1ItchyLizzard)
A poem for a person in pain and one that needs to come home. Very nicely...
September 23rd, 2025 12:45 - life\'s a journey. (Friendship)
Memories of Heraclitus that a man can never step in the same river twice...
September 23rd, 2025 12:38 - Wakala (Reverend)
A poem of guilt the monster. Good write about self feelings well penned.
September 23rd, 2025 10:51 - Becoming What Is (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Truth distilled in this gem of a poem. A most lovely write Kurt and a fave
September 23rd, 2025 10:47 - Lately.. (Natavia Hobert)
Feelings of abandonment, isolation, rejection fall out of this poem and it...
September 23rd, 2025 10:31 - White Car (Fรญna Elara ๐ Petra Patrice)
A thought provoking poem that leaves the reader questioning what else...
September 23rd, 2025 10:12 - Poema do lutador (Dayan puga)
A lovely inspirational write of overcoming age and its pains and keeping...
September 23rd, 2025 10:10 - Hoozah Goodboy (Matthew R. Callies)
A fun poem about man\'s best friend. Nicely written with good rhyme and...
September 23rd, 2025 09:27 - Michael McStay (Randyjohnson71)
Another nice tribute to a talented actor passed on. Well done
September 23rd, 2025 09:25 - Otherness (Boot)
Very nicely written with good rhyme. I loved the message and flow. Well...
September 23rd, 2025 07:58 - Mountain Girls (RSM0812)
It is the combination of rhyme, meter, flow and story that gets the fave...
September 23rd, 2025 07:55 - Make a Wish (Keyara S Trotman)
A poem of a desired love that did not work out. Nicely written with a...
September 23rd, 2025 07:50 - The Bereaved Mother, Assam (A Homage to Our Beloved ,The Heartthrob of Assam And The Humming King of the World ~ Zubeen Garg๐๐๐๐๐ช๐ฅ) (Mottakeenur Rehman)
So good to see you back and this poem a seeming dialog of such poetic form...
September 23rd, 2025 07:48 - since when (Gray0328)
Inviting is the feel of this poem, inviting after being closed. A charming...
September 23rd, 2025 07:37 - The Night Dancer (Paul Bell)
Haunting and eerie this poem speaks out of darkness unveiling as the...
September 23rd, 2025 07:35 - News (Mark Barron)
I get the feel from this one of words unsaid. There is a feel of...
September 23rd, 2025 07:31 - Intentional, but Flawed (Tristan Robert Lange)
Actions speak louder than words. Love what you do and do nothing that you...
September 23rd, 2025 07:27 - between the hours (Arqios)
Cryptic this poem contains depth of the past, procrastination of the...
September 23rd, 2025 07:25 - lifes way (Jim56)
A carpe diem poem that is upbeat and full of brightness. Loved it
September 23rd, 2025 07:16 - But Sleep Won\'t Come (Tom Dylan)
All those things that go through the mind after one lays down. Then there...
September 23rd, 2025 06:05 - how strange life is (Carpe4diem)
Little things can make a big difference. this poem speaks of moods that...
September 23rd, 2025 05:48 - She starves (Maplespal)
Could you be a little more clear about what you mean? Wow this one calls a...
September 23rd, 2025 05:44 - You put a light in my soul (William Hromada)
This poem speaks with a declaration of love. It holds allegories that...
September 23rd, 2025 05:42 - LOST SOUL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
There is a feel frozen drifting in this poem that give off a sad feeling....
September 23rd, 2025 04:19 - Fresh Breeze (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A light airy and bright poem of nature and emotion. Nicely done
September 23rd, 2025 04:17 - Incredibly Ordinary People (Meagan Adelle)
Thoughts of love in this poem revert to dreams and beliefs of what it will...
September 23rd, 2025 04:16 - Untitled #3 (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
This poem seems to speak of a disbelief that she can be loved by a man and...
September 23rd, 2025 04:09 - Men Like You (Morgue)
A poem that drips with resentment, it sparks with anger barely containing...
September 23rd, 2025 04:07 - The Courage to Love (G.Cabรบs)
Deep thoughts are evident in this reflection on love. Here is the...
September 23rd, 2025 04:03 - The Desire (Kayla Jackson)
The sky always stimulates the imagination and a sense of wonder. How much...
September 23rd, 2025 04:00 - before the quill falls silent (Arquious)
A wonderful poem speaking what many a poet feels that poetry meant more in...
September 23rd, 2025 03:58 - Not Going Yet. (Goldfinch60)
A poem of joy and fulfilment that is good to hear about and the gratitude...
September 23rd, 2025 03:49 - Shelter (Dan Williams)
Powerful words of emotions running fast for a deteriorating world. In this...
September 23rd, 2025 03:46 - September 21 (Poetaldo)
The day well recorded and charted. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 20:09 - Sleep before Midnight (Joan Reese)
Scents and air I am familiar with all make this poem so well known. Nicely...
September 22nd, 2025 20:08 - Passage (Frรคnz Mรผller)
A wonderful poem that progresses with style from light and color to...
September 22nd, 2025 20:05 - MUCH LESS TO FALL (David Welch)
A most interesting point of view. Society call that type of person...
September 22nd, 2025 18:42 - Save me my Lord, (๐ฉMase๐ช)
A statement of being on the side of God as opposed to man, heaven not...
September 22nd, 2025 17:27 - Beloved & Enough (Fรญna Elara ๐ Petra Patrice)
A love poem that declare what might be expected of it. Nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 17:24 - Endless loop (Nicole Pritchard)
Racing thoughts confusion and problems to resolve in this poem. Well
September 22nd, 2025 16:51 - โ๐ข๐ฏ๐ข ๐ฆ๐ฐ \"๐ฌ๐ซ๐ข\'๐ฐ ๐ด๐ฌ๐ฏ๐ก๐ฐโค๏ธโ๐ฅ (Keyara S Trotman)
Broken relationship, broken mental health both need healing. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:49 - -Inner Hope (A.N.)
A declaration of love in a poem. Nicely written in letter form. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 16:47 - Angry (Amethyste)
Anger has a home with no windows. A poem with so few lines but most
September 22nd, 2025 15:32 - Find Me Again (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
A poem of passion that speaks sensuously and looks for resolution. Nicely...
September 22nd, 2025 14:28 - write (Lunarchloedip)
A poem that rages and runs down the page looking for resolution. Nicely...
September 22nd, 2025 14:26 - There is no love here (Aa Harvey)
A poem of desire and possession that runs the gamut through its course....
September 22nd, 2025 13:01 - Devilishly Dreadful: Unholy Loopholes (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poetic story pairing the natural good but weak follower with the strong...
September 22nd, 2025 12:13 - Read me before you forget (Lore)
Loneliness is so common in today\'s society. People pretend to care but it...
September 22nd, 2025 11:23 - Summer Equinox (Gray0328)
Very lovely lines and images fill this poem. A fave
September 22nd, 2025 11:19 - Majesty\'s Light (Kurt Philip Behm)
A poem the reads so smoothly from beginning to end. Very nice Kurt
September 22nd, 2025 11:16 - The making of a sociopath (EvenwheniLie)
The poem speaks of religious doubts and lack of proof. Nicely written.
September 22nd, 2025 11:13 - The scripture (Lorenz)
A poem that speaks as holy writ a proclamation and warning. It is a call...
September 22nd, 2025 10:34 - What would it be no siblings to talk too! (Friendship)
A poem of sad remorse and regret over loss and present isolation. This...
September 22nd, 2025 10:30 - Atheism (RSM0812)
I loved the meter and flow of this poem nicely written
September 22nd, 2025 10:25 - Mr. K (Louiray)
A poem of strong infatuation where everything is good. A lovely write
September 22nd, 2025 10:23 - Demon In The Bottle (Part.4) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A good write on the effects of too much drinking. Nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 09:51 - If I donโt see you again (Amandatoriii)
A poem of recognized error in choice far too late and a sense of darkness...
September 22nd, 2025 09:49 - Shakespearean Whims (Matthew R. Callies)
Quite the vocabulary used in this poem well worded, rhymed and arranged....
September 22nd, 2025 09:44 - I lay here wondering... (Natavia Hobert)
Thoughts in a continual chain come through in this poem where one thought...
September 22nd, 2025 08:25 - What To Do Now? (Emery Walker)
A poem of unrequited love that is more common than one would believe. Sad...
September 22nd, 2025 08:23 - For All who Are Lost (GenXer Sharon ๐๐)
You continue to intersperse rhyme in your poetry even in free verse and I...
September 22nd, 2025 08:20 - Happy two thousand twenty fifth birthday Autumn - September twenty second (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
I have always wondered why we don\'t have any other starting point for...
September 22nd, 2025 07:01 - I am thinking (Maplespal)
Wonderful rhyme in this poem carries the reader onward through line after...
September 22nd, 2025 06:57 - what i want (Carpe4diem)
A poem that leaves feelings of soft melancholy tenderly displaying so many...
September 22nd, 2025 06:54 - undertow (Arqios)
I\'m sorry Cryptic I can\'t help but project my past work into this poem....
September 22nd, 2025 06:51 - kindness (Jim56)
Another wonderful message set to rhyme. Loved it Jim
September 22nd, 2025 04:59 - Donโt let her leave (William Hromada)
This poem a prayer and plea to God to keep someone and allow them to ever...
September 22nd, 2025 04:58 - Burning (Ajax (he/xe))
This poem shows an ambivalence toward the fire with it giving a sense of...
September 22nd, 2025 04:56 - SECRET ROOMS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Arrogance well painted in this poem with great rhyme and flow it carries...
September 22nd, 2025 04:52 - Just Before the Light Turns Green (Arquious)
A great descriptive poem with wonderful imagery nicely done
September 22nd, 2025 04:51 - The Versions Of Me That Didnโt Make It (Meagan Adelle)
These reflections voiced in this write evidence a sense of growth and...
September 22nd, 2025 04:49 - Haiku #1 (MatPie)
I got this senryu it is the tarot card of the hanged man inverted that one...
September 22nd, 2025 04:46 - How do I know Iโve fallen (A.N.)
A poem of questions with great analogies and similes. Very nicely written...
September 22nd, 2025 04:38
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