Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- no excuses (NinjaGirl)
A simple true statement that should be obvious. Nice to cut straight to...
August 1st, 2024 19:21 - I\'m Selfish, I suppose. (Thoughtless)
An expression of worth and most interestingly said.
August 1st, 2024 18:25 - Memories (Sami mulaj)
Beautifully worded and with intriguing thoughts. nicely done
August 1st, 2024 18:23 - living extraordinarily (Lunarchloedip)
A most interesting write. Keep writing.
August 1st, 2024 16:12 - Alabaster Porcelain On A Ghost (Beatrix M)
Haunting words of darkness.
August 1st, 2024 16:10 - Liquid Courage (The Indignant Poetess)
I can feel the anger in this piece. It is well written.
August 1st, 2024 14:36 - The Albatross (Petrichor of Love)
It has the sound of the classic era and reads well with good rhyme. nicely...
August 1st, 2024 13:42 - Fading (Kenny O\'Donnell)
Well rhymed and with good flow this poem reads easy and has a very...
August 1st, 2024 13:37 - I Drink You In (PreciousGurl)
Romantic and easy to read. Well done
August 1st, 2024 12:03 - Consequence of Love (Teddy.15)
We sacrifice ourselves for what we love and that is one of the meanings of...
August 1st, 2024 10:56 - Hot Off the Press (MendedFences27)
Thank you for giving me the news of the day and now I feel I won\'t have...
August 1st, 2024 10:50 - Field of Ashes (John Lee)
Well written and very poetic in its imagery. There are several great lines...
August 1st, 2024 10:46 - The Jailer Within (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another wonderful set of wisdom\'s sayings so well written in such a short...
August 1st, 2024 10:42 - `*~ Each Day My Love - form Trijan Refrain (Thad Wilk)
Romantic pledge full of great images very nicely written in verse.
August 1st, 2024 09:28 - Soul is in the Ocean (Annemarie)
A great metaphor with wonderful images. Nicely done.
August 1st, 2024 09:26 - True Poets should be Proud (Saleh Ben Saleh)
A wonderful and inspired message here. How many times some catch the...
August 1st, 2024 07:48 - Dance of Ambiguity (Gray0328)
A enlightened view of sexuality and in fact any differences that we hold...
August 1st, 2024 07:44 - Mystery Tunnel (Tony36)
We all face that tunnel every day and at every choice sometimes we take it...
August 1st, 2024 07:41 - Middle feast (2781)
Taking this from a different view I see man as bringing on his own defeat....
August 1st, 2024 07:40 - On Hearing the Sea Gulls (Tom Dylan)
Nostalgic in its feeling and yet upbeat. Wonderful memories of the past...
August 1st, 2024 07:38 - people write poetry (Jim56)
So true poetry is a great way to organize thoughts, learn to express...
August 1st, 2024 05:56 - MY ADDICTION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Addictions can be dangerous. A most interesting write.
August 1st, 2024 05:54 - I\'m Watching (Maplespal)
Kind of creepy and I was waiting for the punch line of it being an animal...
August 1st, 2024 05:53 - Condemned To A Life of Tragedy (M.M.)
Jaded is the word. And yes I too am such. It is hard not to be in a world...
August 1st, 2024 05:51 - Just Me, Half a Love Song and An Idiopathic Itch (Neville)
This seemed indeed a love song Neville. But then I think of all poems as a...
August 1st, 2024 05:46 - CONFESSION (Akhilausman)
Pain is evident in this write and it spills over into each line with the...
August 1st, 2024 05:42 - A FUNNY FAREWELL (Angela)
Things do not make us. A great write with a message that people need to...
August 1st, 2024 05:39 - Parking Lot Thoughts (Cocamedo)
Sweet and cute this poem makes use of great imagery to create its mood....
August 1st, 2024 05:37 - Out Loud (Introverted Sage)
A story replete with imagery. Very nice
August 1st, 2024 05:35 - DREAM (Akhilausman)
A feeling of loss in this poem that resounds with fear. Learning to swim...
August 1st, 2024 05:32 - Morning\'s Embrace (Dev Parth)
So bright and fresh it gives hope and puts a smile on the day. Wonderful
August 1st, 2024 05:30 - Substrate2 (John Prophet)
I get the feel of a poetic 0 1 poetic code a binomial system of rapid...
August 1st, 2024 05:28 - An hour before a vintage midnight! (Framed Mirror)
The bud of a flower can be beautiful in its youth but needs to bloom to...
August 1st, 2024 05:25 - Chained Love (Satishverma)
many messages sent in discreet stanzas some of questions. Each deserves...
August 1st, 2024 05:23 - I admire the sway of the Caribbean Sea (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful imagery in this descriptive piece. I have been there and it...
August 1st, 2024 05:21 - Hoisted Into The Open (Sydney Zane)
Most intriguing in its wording and rhyme. It feels mystical in its nature.
August 1st, 2024 05:19 - lifelight (Sheta)
Full of images, visual, auditory, and tactile it sparkles with life. Very...
August 1st, 2024 05:17 - Distance (Sami mulaj)
Be that homeland geographical, emotional, interpersonal they are all...
August 1st, 2024 05:15 - Waves (Shadowbones)
Love the rapid short format of this poem. It speaks as it runs.
August 1st, 2024 05:13 - A trout tale.... (Orchidee)
You keep this up you are going to have to post that picture. A fun read my...
August 1st, 2024 04:47 - Songs Of My Youth (Goldfinch60)
Familiar songs, familiar times. A most fun read Gold. Thanks for the...
August 1st, 2024 04:44 - Four Children (Dan Williams)
To have that insight when that young is remarkable. Nicely composed it...
August 1st, 2024 04:40 - ~> It Was, A Female Fly (Thad Wilk)
Most fun to read. The length was right, the timing was good and the...
August 1st, 2024 04:33 - Present wedded bliss ain\'t no touchstone... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A farmer\'s almanac for planting or sowing wild oats. Most interesting
August 1st, 2024 04:28 - The Machine Returns (Tristan Robert Lange)
The Machine, the man, big brother yes I feel the angst and dread circling...
July 31st, 2024 16:37 - As a mortal man of threescore and five years... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
And so a Trump card is played as another Bides his time. A most...
July 31st, 2024 16:34 - A Life Frequently I Envision. (I.J.)
Questions never answered because they were never asked. The unknown works...
July 31st, 2024 16:29 - JAZZ IS LIFE (live) (Bobby O)
You mentioned several well know names that I love. I love jaz, not all...
July 31st, 2024 16:26 - Jim and Charity’s Wedding 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A serial full of love and intrigue. I\'ll check in for the next episode.
July 31st, 2024 16:23 - WE ARE ONE (Magzzbaby)
Poignant, deep and a sense of self awareness and understanding. I hear no...
July 31st, 2024 16:19 - Perfect Integration (Cassie58)
A beautiful Haiku. My favorite Haikus are about nature and this is one.
July 31st, 2024 16:05 - Sound Bites 7-30-2024 (Kurt Philip Behm)
A full series of great shorts that each ignite thoughtfulness and...
July 31st, 2024 12:09 - Returning the Key (Gray0328)
Intriguing and well rhymed this poem has an old flavor to it but a modern...
July 31st, 2024 12:05 - unjust injustice (NinjaGirl)
The saddest of injustices is that against the innocent and few are more...
July 31st, 2024 12:03 - In the Hush of Summer\'s Fading Light (Mr. Poetic 243)
Well written rhyme and the flow of this pome pulls one onward. A fun...
July 31st, 2024 12:01 - Sorrow (MendedFences27)
Just like when all the wood is burned all that is left is ashes. Sad...
July 31st, 2024 11:59 - While The Good Shepherds Grieve (ADarkerMind)
A delicious display of images like pieces from a puzzle
July 31st, 2024 11:57 - It\'s a Date (Thoughtless)
A fun read. Nicely written.
July 31st, 2024 11:56 - Journal Entry 03 (The Great Kateri)
Wonderful thought and message. Short and to the point.
July 31st, 2024 11:54 - A letter home (Kenny O\'Donnell)
A message that could apply for any war. Nicely written.
July 31st, 2024 11:53 - ~> A Troglodyte Named Zog! (Thad Wilk)
Try try again and so technology got its start. Fun read
July 31st, 2024 11:51 - Grey (Char777)
Sad and gray in its confusion clouds of melancholy nicely written
July 31st, 2024 11:49 - Ballad of The Lost (SacredSoul)
Nicely written it leaves a mournful feeling. well done
July 31st, 2024 11:47 - Position In Life (Mark The Phenomenon)
Good advice nicely done
July 31st, 2024 11:45 - Swinging Bridge (Tony36)
I\'ve walked that bridge before. A nice write with great imagery
July 31st, 2024 11:44 - Roses and Tulips (Rosita De Rose)
A poem displaying resolution nicely done
July 31st, 2024 11:42 - homeless (Jim56)
True indeed a poem that needs attention and has to be sead and read.
July 31st, 2024 06:32 - An Arguments End, Together, and Stay Within Me (Maplespal)
A most interesting compilation. Nicely stated.
July 31st, 2024 06:29 - How to (2781)
A call to God and for people to seek him
July 31st, 2024 06:25 - The Southport Tragedy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Government devils and those who put them there. A good write.
July 31st, 2024 06:23 - NATURE OR NURTURE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Well said, understood although in symbols it speaks loudly.
July 31st, 2024 06:22 - What I Know (Iyeah)
An opening of the soul to one that one feels secure with. A very nice...
July 31st, 2024 06:19 - Presence Prosperity (Orchidee)
Another great hymn marching forth with the aid of the Lord whether before...
July 31st, 2024 06:17 - Rubicon Prophecy (Beatrix M)
Sounds like I have met this person before. Some people just stand out. A...
July 31st, 2024 06:15 - A Battle With Irony (Teddy.15)
Sounds like a great vacation but not from the neighbors. No matter how far...
July 31st, 2024 06:11 - Veil of Words (EmotionsOnwhitepaper)
A story of longing for closeness and confusion over words not said. A most...
July 31st, 2024 06:06 - My Words, My Love, My Promise (Cocamedo)
A loving pledge put to rhyme and very nicely done.
July 31st, 2024 06:03 - In the Furnace (Mutley Ravishes)
Existence is the key
when you face eternity
Short and to the point with...
July 31st, 2024 06:01 - Pink Bruises (Satishverma)
Thought provoking and is sticks in the brain like an arrow.
July 31st, 2024 05:59 - xavina (Sheta)
Fantastic fantasy in this poem short but well worded and written.
July 31st, 2024 05:58 - Just a Few Thoughts on Getting Even (Neville)
I\'ve culled a lot of things in my life even poems but never thought about...
July 31st, 2024 05:37 - Heat Exhaustion. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing better than a cold beer on a hot day. Cools and relaxes. Have on...
July 31st, 2024 05:25 - Crossing The Ocean, Reaching Beyond (Young Fella)
I sense metaphor here. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 20:06 - Yours truly embarks on wild goose chase after elusive pot of gold (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Some great lines in this poem. Nicely written.
July 30th, 2024 20:00 - Walks (Miss_Dreamer)
\"only one more step and I can finally stop walking\" A line to think...
July 30th, 2024 19:58 - Keep on swinging (Hzugman)
A great motivational statement in this piece. Nicely said.
July 30th, 2024 19:55 - It\'s In Me (13LaurenD)
A good deal of self reflection in this piece. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:54 - soak (Sixthwrites)
Symbolism runs through this piece coloring its story. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:52 - Cocoa Mist (Emptypot)
Vivid images that at times float and at others lay on the floor. Nicely...
July 30th, 2024 19:50 - Killing The Albatross (Petrichor of Love)
A story filled with imagery nicely written.
July 30th, 2024 19:48 - I waana scream my heart out (Shanzah)
In need of reassurance to balance the insecurity and uncertainty. Nicely...
July 30th, 2024 19:46 - Chester (PreciousGurl)
Sad and inspiring empathy for the puppy. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:43 - Haunting Words (Kurt Philip Behm)
\"His memories
a warden
in a prison
alone\"
A wonderful line in a poem...
July 30th, 2024 19:41 - The Biggest Lie (Gray0328)
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and...
July 30th, 2024 19:36 - Don\'t even like Oranges (Thoughtless)
Good format for the subject. Short and a bit enigmatic. nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:34 - Why do I miss you? (The Great Kateri)
A young view of love with expectations, hopes, and dreams. Nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:32 - knight (DeadRose)
Self reflective and a sense of openness that exposes the internal nicely...
July 30th, 2024 19:30 - I Remember (DREEK0)
Questions about questions in a world without answers. Philosophical in...
July 30th, 2024 19:28 - Blue Atonement (Sydney Zane)
Highly metaphoric with many vivid images
July 30th, 2024 19:26 - Poets are like stars (Sami mulaj)
\"can the universe be touched?\"
A great line and gives one pause. Loved...
July 30th, 2024 19:23
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