Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The last poet (Lorenz) Once again meaning cloaked in symbols and mystery this poem reads of a...
  June 13th, 2025 11:41
• Criminals are yours (Devender Kumar) Indeed they are and we must believe that someone created them. A lovely...
  June 13th, 2025 11:37
• Satan is a spider (Pineapple_pizza018) A fun read with good moral it speaks of how problems are stealthy and...
  June 13th, 2025 11:36
• The Fence in the Boy (Tristan Robert Lange) Bloody, gruesome, horrific it delivers a picture of terror but is far...
  June 13th, 2025 11:33
• Closure (Fränz Müller) Such vivid words paint a clear picture of weakness struggling for the...
  June 13th, 2025 08:30
• Bubble Butts and Bulges (Matthew R. Callies) As the father of two I had to be on guard for foxes and wolves as well as...
  June 13th, 2025 08:27
• The belligerent (RSM0812) The poem itself is surreal and take one on a journey through the dark...
  June 13th, 2025 08:22
• I Didn’t Always Get it Right (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Shamrocker another wonderful write from the heart it speaks of love that...
  June 13th, 2025 07:59
• Stand up (Tony36) A strong poem for a powerful message. Well said Tony
  June 13th, 2025 07:28
• Wine (Jerry Reynolds) You know Jerry I have never had dandelion wine. It sounds so fine. A...
  June 13th, 2025 07:27
• robin in my garden (Jim56) Another beautiful poem of nature and the birds. Light hearted and...
  June 13th, 2025 07:25
• From Gala to Gloom (Narayan Gadagkar) A tragic story told in poetic form. Very nicely done
  June 13th, 2025 07:23
• Reflecting through (Maplespal) It was Narcissus that was infatuated with his own reflection and yet here...
  June 13th, 2025 05:02
• Envelope (Libellule) You describe well the process of writing in this poem that is well rhymed...
  June 13th, 2025 04:54
• The Celestial One (Parsa) An ode to the moon this poem is very well metered and rhymed it is most...
  June 13th, 2025 04:52
• SILENT THOUGHTS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Very nicely portrayed as a friend and a refuge this poem presents silence...
  June 13th, 2025 04:50
• CONFIDENCE (Twizzle48) Great metaphors used here and a subject that is obtuse in its certainty....
  June 13th, 2025 04:47
• *EYES THAT ASCEND TO ETERNITY* (Jaydeb Chakraborty) This seems a most spiritual poem of acknowledgement and acceptance, of...
  June 13th, 2025 04:43
• Tears; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Tears such a weak poetic word but so frequently used and here it is used...
  June 13th, 2025 04:39
• Summer (NafisaSB) A nicely rhymed poem of the seasons focusing on summer. It leaves a very...
  June 13th, 2025 04:35
• Satan\'s Secret Drug (Spencer Wilhelm) The first lines in this poem brought to mind the acne that adolescents...
  June 13th, 2025 04:32
• Reflecting on the Past (Malo J) It was the writing in this poem that captured me. The use of the...
  June 13th, 2025 04:27
• where are you (Tylove1) A poem of grief and sadness that time has not erased. Well worded
  June 13th, 2025 04:16
• War (Keeter C) This poem gives a strong feeling of impending doom and a us and them feel....
  June 13th, 2025 04:14
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 53-La menace--12May2025 (Soman Ragavan) A most extensive analysis of a poem of a most tragic event where lack of...
  June 13th, 2025 04:11
• A Cup Of Kindness. (Poetic Licence) I liked this one Tobani it is short and yet profound. It makes its point...
  June 13th, 2025 04:07
• Mademoiselle Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Crammed full of vivid images this poem tells of a passionate infatuation....
  June 13th, 2025 04:05
• keeping it a buck (Demar Desu) The rich do need the poor to harvest their food and make their toys, to...
  June 13th, 2025 03:56
• Two Shadows, One Flame (Mottakeenur Rehman) Mottakeenur this poem is studded with one splendid metaphor after another...
  June 13th, 2025 03:53
• The Gift Of Time. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy and as one grows older one finds how precious time is yet...
  June 13th, 2025 03:42
• Childish dream (JuneM) Wistful this poem looks back to what might have been but is not to be....
  June 12th, 2025 18:50
• The World We Live In (Ezekiel Olayemi) We live in a world of mind control with advertising, news, politics and...
  June 12th, 2025 16:05
• Convergences in Time (Steve Goldenfort) A most interesting poem of taking the middle road nicely said
  June 12th, 2025 16:02
• Kingdom of God (Shadowbones) I get the feel that this poem is speaking of hypocrisy. A poem of powerful...
  June 12th, 2025 15:59
• The Fire Beneath the Stones (Gray0328) Well written Gray we all have a beast upon our back from time time. Well...
  June 12th, 2025 13:15
• Ode to Poe (Fränz Müller) Well done I think the he would be proud to take a bow to this. Very well...
  June 12th, 2025 13:13
• To Write or Not to Write (JamesT3811) Very nice the dilemma of a poet and the curse as well. Loved it
  June 12th, 2025 13:10
• all I did was fall. (Wildecho14) I heard desperation in this poem of raw emotion. Well written in the...
  June 12th, 2025 10:45
• Spilt Milk (Kurt Philip Behm) So nicely rhymed this thought of putting behind the pain of yesterday and...
  June 12th, 2025 09:30
• What\'s Next? (Thomas W Case) It is on the back of flies that germs of thought come and this poem seems...
  June 12th, 2025 09:28
• More Than One (Xalvazora) A most interesting write although I\'m not sure that worshiping one god...
  June 12th, 2025 09:24
• The Long Goodbye (Parsa) A poem of farewell that seems sad and still with a sense of longing....
  June 12th, 2025 07:52
• On the Beating Heart (RSM0812) There seems to be unity in this poem of chained togetherness. Nice
  June 12th, 2025 07:50
• Let\'s go on a road trip (Tony36) The unknown is always an adventure a fun read
  June 12th, 2025 07:48
• Ballerina (Kaz) Balance is the secret of life. Good write
  June 12th, 2025 07:47
• lonely love (Jim56) Sadly it is true for many Jim. A sad poem
  June 12th, 2025 06:54
• Central fire (Maplespal) A great metaphor this poem speaks of culture and beliefs that hole it...
  June 12th, 2025 06:53
• Conversation Fights (Sahildhobalepoetry) A deep dive into the depths of human selfishness, the mother of envy,...
  June 12th, 2025 06:50
• The Lewis and Clark Aquaquest (Matthew R. Callies) Epic in scope and majestic in images this poem paints the scenery of a...
  June 12th, 2025 06:44
• Quill and Flame (Libellule) Beauty in wording in this stage driven poem Lovely
  June 12th, 2025 05:39
• it’s simple (Demar Desu) Working for life can be taken two ways and makes this poem even more...
  June 12th, 2025 05:37
• HER BROKEN HEART (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Lost love and the sadness it brings is hard to hide. This is expressed in...
  June 12th, 2025 04:20
• Fairgrounds And Moral Decisions (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read reminiscing on past times and the reason for writing rhymes....
  June 12th, 2025 04:18
• Self Suffocation (Spencer Wilhelm) The title says suffocation but the ending seems electrocution and either...
  June 12th, 2025 04:16
• They still walk among us (EvenwheniLie) This poem has a sociopolitical feel and this is personalized in the main...
  June 12th, 2025 04:11
• Love (Brianna Mann) This poem is very sensual and evocative raising thoughts of passionate...
  June 12th, 2025 04:06
• Love Is Exotic Honey (Reynaldo Casison) Very nicely worded in most romantic form and style. Careful word choice...
  June 12th, 2025 04:03
• Greggs Desciple. (Poetic Licence) A fun read of rhyme with a moral and if it were not so directly...
  June 12th, 2025 04:02
• Strawberry Moon Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A guiding light the moon a source of mystery, love, romance and a...
  June 12th, 2025 03:56
• Hollow Girl (Mary73223) The poem of a person who is on the edge of breaking and is in pain. Well...
  June 12th, 2025 03:46
• FLAWS FLAWS FLAWS (Cerry) A poem about being harder on ourselves than others and the need to be...
  June 12th, 2025 03:43
• I miss you (HollyGolightly) A most interesting appeal to a old love to return and a desire for...
  June 12th, 2025 03:40
• Will (E.J. Waling) John this one sets the footprints down the trail to the end. Most...
  June 11th, 2025 21:44
• Revolutions (Tony Grannell) Tony your poems always have that meter that give a poem a sense of a tale....
  June 11th, 2025 21:40
• The Highway Men (Shadowbones) Ruthless, and bloody this poem leaves a dark feel to it. Well constructed...
  June 11th, 2025 21:34
• The Moon on the Sky Ukrainian Folklore (Ksey_Gan) A poem of love set in beautiful images with a good flow. Nicely done
  June 11th, 2025 21:32
• Severance (draft) (DreamTiger) Well worded and with rhyme. Nicely done
  June 11th, 2025 17:29
• The Bramble and the Oak (Haleyalexis) I loved the format of this poem and its flow. The rhyme scheme was perfect...
  June 11th, 2025 16:01
• I possess an unusual knack for making women bristle (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A most interesting read of a bachelor without luck in love. Well written.
  June 11th, 2025 14:43
• rot in that same spot (Reta) Loved the last line that put a twist on this whole poem. A most ...
  June 11th, 2025 14:37
• Fruit Fly (Libellule) A fun read that is easily identified with. A great read
  June 11th, 2025 13:46
• Today I made a good decision (Demar Desu) What a great thought expressed in few words
  June 11th, 2025 12:18
• One Breath (Kurt Philip Behm) Another of your great poems that employs opposites to evoke deep thought....
  June 11th, 2025 12:17
• Lives (Fränz Müller) What a beautiful poem! Words of deterioration and rot in a metaphor of...
  June 11th, 2025 11:21
• Of Rain, and Tea, and Secrets, Eh?! (Cheeky Missy) Chic your food has warmed me up to hunger and having learned I eat first...
  June 11th, 2025 11:18
• Crow\'s Descent (Gray0328) The poem in verse tells a great myth you have created with a moral. Well...
  June 11th, 2025 11:14
• My preciousss….. (Muse of Calliope) A great poem of technology and how we become addicted to it and what...
  June 11th, 2025 11:11
• unexpected (Mya) The unexpected in many ways startles and sometimes frightens. A wonderful...
  June 11th, 2025 09:37
• Morning walk at the Mall (RSM0812) A most interesting poem of thoughts cast as an angel took you away. A most...
  June 11th, 2025 09:35
• Dysphoria (Z7 Softens) A haunting picture of time and its changes and how we can never go home...
  June 11th, 2025 09:33
• Red Herring (Emery Walker) A picture penned of a world that was and what is to come. Nicely...
  June 11th, 2025 09:30
• Finding Peace (JBentley) Very nice it brings back memories of youth spent in the high Uinta...
  June 11th, 2025 09:26
• Sunrise or Sunset? (Lionessence) A wonderful write and question. To me there is no beginning or end only a...
  June 11th, 2025 08:24
• It\'s Killing Me (Anthony Hanible) I hear a plea for help in this poem of anguish and depression that is...
  June 11th, 2025 08:09
• Night sky (Tony36) A wonderful poem Tony of our place in the cosmos. We are a part of it and...
  June 11th, 2025 08:06
• Rises (Damaso) It is the nostalgia brought by the steam off of the mate that triggered...
  June 11th, 2025 08:04
• somedays (Jim56) A fun and true statement and I guess we are in it just for the ride....
  June 11th, 2025 06:46
• Modern Music Is Rubbish (Tom Dylan) The old hate change and I imagine a caveman beating on a log drum hating...
  June 11th, 2025 06:44
• Story my night (Maplespal) Enticing, inviting, with such a home and safe feel. It makes one feel a...
  June 11th, 2025 06:37
• Remember These Two? (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) The end to one story is the beginning to the next. Well written with only...
  June 11th, 2025 06:33
• The Daffodil Wars (Mottakeenur Rehman) A magnificent portrayal of nature in all its color and splendor. Written...
  June 11th, 2025 06:31
• Will Your Heart Answer? (Salvia.S) A great philosophical question. It depends on whether you believe love is...
  June 11th, 2025 06:27
• nine years too long (Spencer Wilhelm) Clever, very clever with the color choice and their symbolic meaning...
  June 11th, 2025 05:32
• Loves Exotic blush (Reynaldo Casison) Romantic, sensual and metaphorical as well. Nicely presented in great...
  June 11th, 2025 05:29
• Drowning (Brianna Mann) Teen years can be the hardest as one worms their way through existential...
  June 11th, 2025 05:27
• IN DREAM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A most compelling poem of beauty. Well worded and inked
  June 11th, 2025 05:23
• Neighbor Reveals Why Police Recently Surrounded This Abandoned Home (Matthew R. Callies) A haunting and grizzly tale in this poem that sends shivers more than any...
  June 11th, 2025 05:21
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 51-DérivesColonisatrices--11May2025 (Soman Ragavan) Will await your English translation of this piece in that my French is...
  June 11th, 2025 05:16
• What Really Happened to Chino XL? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Funny how many rumors get started and amplified as exaggeration takes over...
  June 11th, 2025 05:12
• They didn\'t eat cake.... (Orchidee) I\'ll be waiting too Orchi. Maybe there will be a raspberry or blueberry...
  June 11th, 2025 05:09