Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- My Main Mission (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
That\'s a rap. Or should I say that\'s a wrap. I can feel the disdain and...
July 20th, 2024 10:37 - `*` On This Starry Night `*` (Thad Wilk)
July 20th, 2024 10:35 - `*` On This Starry Night `*` (Thad Wilk)
A proclamation of love to someone special with images of nature and a...
July 20th, 2024 10:35 - Whatever You Want. (Goldfinch60)
A beat through time it seems that some groups remain in our memories and...
July 20th, 2024 06:33 - Stones (Cassie58)
How interesting the symbolism of this poem the metaphor seems to apply to...
July 20th, 2024 06:29 - I React (Bella Shepard)
A wonderful message that applies to all but more than anything applies to...
July 20th, 2024 06:23 - Train tracks (Tony36)
This reminds me of my youth when we used to hop on box cars. Nostalgic...
July 20th, 2024 06:19 - Drying Up? (Orchidee)
Good write My friend hope the weather stays the way you like it. Have a...
July 20th, 2024 06:17 - So Tired of It (Dan Williams)
Some great lines here “stun with bones of Now feudal hopes““” Now...
July 20th, 2024 06:13 - So I Can Finally Become Me (Teddy.15)
A beautiful message to both a potential love and the love for oneself set...
July 20th, 2024 06:06 - The Great Moon and The Baubab (Teddy.15)
The fragrance of this poem hangs in the air like perfume. The essence of...
July 19th, 2024 05:48 - If Your Face Doesn’t Fit (Cassie58)
A wonderful flow to this poem of the darkness of the human situation. So...
July 19th, 2024 05:44 - Finite (Shetonya Latryce)
A self image well stated in unequivocal terms. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:42 - baby bat (Bloodbat_Workshop)
There is a metaphor here and rhyme as well. Not too much darkness though....
July 19th, 2024 05:41 - Smoking Guns (Satishverma)
Enigmatic in its metaphor it shines with depth as two mirrors juxtaposed....
July 19th, 2024 05:37 - UNSAID (Qurrathul Ain)
Loved the analogies and the varying images were well done. A poem far...
July 19th, 2024 05:35 - Fragile (Jal)
This poem has a inner beauty to it that shines through and can be felt by...
July 19th, 2024 05:33 - Trump for president (EvenwheniLie)
These two choices, is this the best that America has. We are in trouble.
July 19th, 2024 05:28 - On a Wet Journey (AlmosTheOneWhoDreams)
A snapshot of life and in a sense a metaphor as well. Nicely written
July 19th, 2024 05:26 - Limitation (Mutley Ravishes)
This was a fun read with a surprise ending. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:23 - Dear Miss. Jennifer Jones (Neville)
I loved the flow and format of this poem Neville. A great write that came...
July 19th, 2024 05:22 - Heavenly Help (Orchidee)
We are always in need of a helping hand and the belief that there is a...
July 19th, 2024 05:19 - Neck Kisses (Mark The Phenomenon)
July 19th, 2024 05:17 - Neck Kisses (Mark The Phenomenon)
Sensual, seductive, sexual all in a flowing rhyme. Nicely done.
July 19th, 2024 05:17 - Is anybody out there? (2781)
A fun write merging todays politics with religious belief. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:15 - ADDICTION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
An addiction can be to anything and even what we think of as noble can...
July 19th, 2024 05:12 - As I\'m Life (Bibekanand \'Agyat\')
Great wording and a philosophical presentation that is deep. Nicely done
July 19th, 2024 05:10 - country living (Jim56)
A great message with rhyme and one that I echo. Great imagery.
July 19th, 2024 05:08 - So I Can Finally Become Me (Teddy.15)
A longing we all have until we find one or someone we think is one until...
July 19th, 2024 04:56 - Sitting Ducks. (Goldfinch60)
This reminded me of the other day when I saw a bunch of vultures sitting...
July 19th, 2024 04:53 - I wish my Fears would Migrate (Thomas W Case)
\"Fear is like the shadow of a bat, larger than life\" what a great line....
July 19th, 2024 04:49 - The gospel according to Paul (2781)
Loved the story in this. Yes I\'m a softy for ballads or stories. A most...
July 18th, 2024 05:51 - Three Poppies (Neville)
Great metaphor Neville. The poem by John McCrae and Flanders Fields comes...
July 18th, 2024 05:43 - 68,000 or thereabouts (Orchidee)
A badge of pride indeed. Someone out their is stealing your hymns for...
July 18th, 2024 05:37 - Eternal Flame (Dev Parth)
A continual rhyme falls like waves in this poem of romance, passion and...
July 18th, 2024 05:33 - THE BRIDE\'S DILEMMA (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
It appears that it is an issue of honesty. Honesty is the basis of...
July 18th, 2024 05:30 - Quien viene a mi sueño? (Falcon_mn)
My Spanish only passable I still get the message from this poem well...
July 18th, 2024 05:26 - We Sit in Jail (Maplespal)
Wow! A type of ballad in verse. The story was good as was the rhyme. The...
July 18th, 2024 05:22 - Void Space Of Unfilled Cracks. (EmaHarlan)
The emotion come through in this poem. The repetitive refrain \"We can...
July 18th, 2024 05:19 - rhytthm of the rain (Jim56)
Always loved the rain but like tears enough is enough whether joy or...
July 18th, 2024 05:14 - Interlude (Cassie58)
I love this poem it takes me back to the edge of the sea. The place of the...
July 18th, 2024 04:33 - Turing. (Goldfinch60)
A great question and one that occurs regularly. Many people surprise me as...
July 18th, 2024 04:27 - Declaration (Thomas W Case)
July 17th, 2024 20:30 - Declaration (Thomas W Case)
Live in the moment for the moment and be the moment. A great message and...
July 17th, 2024 20:30 - For Some Reason, But I\'ll Take It (ForeverJesus7)
We love who we love regardless of appearance and where love goes no one...
July 17th, 2024 10:51 - Welcome to Miami (Neville)
Mistakes sometimes work out. A great story that leads to this ending....
July 17th, 2024 10:48 - 21 (Anahiii)
Cheers and best wishes to one who is looking for something more.
July 17th, 2024 10:44 - LUST (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Lust, passion different than love have been the ruin of many and the...
July 17th, 2024 10:32 - A Storm Passed (Maplespal)
A story that could be a metaphor as well. Great imagery in this write.
July 17th, 2024 10:30 - Snippets of Love (Niyati Nandan)
A fun and great write about love and who knows what it is indeed. Some say...
July 17th, 2024 10:28 - natures view (Jim56)
Always am intrigued by nature and her beauty. This uses a good deal of...
July 17th, 2024 10:23 - Wink and Grin (DesertWords)
Great use of rhyme to convey a rhythm to this piece. It sends a most...
July 17th, 2024 10:20 - Eternal Love (Tony36)
True love never dies unfortunately passion does. The older we grow the...
July 17th, 2024 10:18 - Branded (Markashley1961)
Graphic in its imagery it broadcasts such a message. Nicely written.
July 17th, 2024 10:15 - Wandering Mind (Mark The Phenomenon)
Graphically written this speaks to me. \"and the emptiness grows like a...
July 17th, 2024 10:13 - This is what I like (Hzugman)
It is this type of wish that promotes health for the person that holds it...
July 17th, 2024 10:10 - ~> Tiny Todd My Diddle Wad (children\'s story) (Thad Wilk)
Cute and so childlike it brings the child out and puts a child\'s smile on
July 17th, 2024 10:07 - Silver Searching (Orchidee)
Silver or sheep, prodigal son returned it is by repetition that we learn....
July 17th, 2024 09:48 - My Gentle Soul Can Surely Rest (Teddy.15)
Somewhere over the rainbow we will all find rest in a colored land where...
July 17th, 2024 06:56 - The Right People. (Goldfinch60)
So right Gold a good message and the best way to measure. Nicely said.
July 17th, 2024 05:12 - Godspeed Came in Last (Dan Williams)
Ah the paradoxes of life. Yes memory can be a blessing and a curse. Loved...
July 17th, 2024 05:07 - Proverb Pieces 5 (Orchidee)
yes indeed pride goes before the fall. I\'ve heard this many times from my...
July 16th, 2024 18:17 - Infinite (Bella Shepard)
How true Bella. We do think we know so much and in fact we do no nothing....
July 16th, 2024 18:10 - Hope (2781)
If you had been born long ago you would be writing proverbs for the old...
July 16th, 2024 08:58 - If I was A Mirror (Teddy.15)
Beneath all there is the beauty that one has. Some need to look deep while...
July 16th, 2024 08:53 - ()
After reading this poem, that I thank you for sharing, I too know...
July 16th, 2024 05:27 - ()
I hear the message and feel that it is already too late, there is no going...
July 16th, 2024 05:23 - ()
A statement of assertion and defiance to proceed without fear and live...
July 16th, 2024 05:21 - Train of Thought (Dan Williams)
A great metaphor here the continues the reader\'s train of thought to the...
July 16th, 2024 05:12 - O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave)
Dave don\'t know how I missed this one I thought I had read all of yours...
July 15th, 2024 18:53 - Walking in Woodland (Cassie58)
Stunning images of nature\'s beauty and the bonds we feel to it. This...
July 15th, 2024 15:40 - Walking in Woodland (Cassie58)
Stunning images of nature\'s beauty and the bonds we feel to it. This...
July 15th, 2024 15:40 - A Gentleman’s Secret (Teddy.15)
This poem says a lot about human nature. Who do we know, how much do we...
July 15th, 2024 11:29 - Spain Won. (Goldfinch60)
Now that\'s the way to do it Andy. Caught me by surprise on this one. And...
July 15th, 2024 06:02 - Wicked (Christina8)
Loved the rhyme to this one it flowed so nicely. So glad to hear from you...
July 14th, 2024 20:47 - No Regrets (Teddy.15)
A great message said so poetically. I think we would all be better off if...
July 14th, 2024 13:48 - Emmaus Experience (Orchidee)
I had forgotten this word and now you have revived that memory. A good...
July 14th, 2024 13:41 - What\'s up doc (2781)
Hitler or Mao is the choice
both have such a charming voice
Right or...
July 14th, 2024 13:37 - Moonlight (Bella Shepard)
I too like the night especially on a moonlit night. Great imagery and a...
July 14th, 2024 13:32 - Though Lovely Is Her Memory (Cassie58)
A most beautiful set of images in anthropomorphism and metaphor simply...
July 14th, 2024 13:28 - a moment (Maplespal)
In determinism events are set just as with rhyme the choices are limited...
July 14th, 2024 06:59 - The Visitor (my Raven ) (Teddy.15)
\"dreamer\'s quilt\" a beautiful image and the overall image of a raven as...
July 14th, 2024 05:45 - Bag Lady. (Goldfinch60)
I tried hard to see you but the image is small and I am left with the same...
July 14th, 2024 05:38 - Promises Prophesied (Orchidee)
Agrarian vegetarian always need more land. It did seem peaceful though...
July 13th, 2024 13:34 - A Small Place Above His Left Ear (Thomas W Case)
He ws right about the left ear in that that side controls the verbal and...
July 13th, 2024 06:34 - Resolve (Cassie58)
Spectacular imagery in metaphor and a poem with a message. Very nicely...
July 13th, 2024 05:55 - Sheep Story (Orchidee)
Always liked this parable but always felt that it was a poor decision and...
July 13th, 2024 05:50 - On The Very Edge of Passion (Teddy.15)
I think you captured this one with the title, picture and words. As is so...
July 13th, 2024 05:44 - Prophetic (2781)
Right on target talk about forced choice. Every time I think of the U.S....
July 13th, 2024 05:40 - Come With Me. (Goldfinch60)
A most wonderful world indeed. And from that road there are many that...
July 12th, 2024 05:56 - I Fell in Love with a Dream (Thomas W Case)
I think that this dream is more common than believed. Many of us have had...
July 12th, 2024 05:53 - When Two Roads Diverge (Teddy.15)
Choices, there is the illusion. Maybe it doesn\'t matter which road is...
July 11th, 2024 13:12 - How Long? (Orchidee)
Age is a relative thing and I have relatives that are older than me, but...
July 11th, 2024 13:05 - Quartet For The End Of Time. (Goldfinch60)
A most interesting choice Gold. My choices are often mood driven and are...
July 11th, 2024 07:10 - The Remberer (Dan Williams)
This is the message of today\'s era and this generation. Sadly it is a...
July 11th, 2024 07:05 - My Love (Thomas W Case)
So true Thomas I echo the feelings. Well done
July 10th, 2024 20:10 - Rose Garden (Teddy.15)
I can not only feel this but feel I have lived it. It is you last stanza...
July 10th, 2024 12:34 - Pursuing Peace (Orchidee)
Now there is a hymn I can go for. Yes peace is what I look for and if I...
July 10th, 2024 12:29 - Tax time (2781)
Are you talking about me? Most of this fits.
July 10th, 2024 12:21 - My Love (Thomas W Case)
True as well as nicely said with great images.
July 10th, 2024 05:59
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