Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• gone fishin\' (Queer-with-a-pen) Here the vivid imagery melts into the metaphor and becomes one as past...
  July 25th, 2024 06:12
• Price of life (Dan Williams) A tangle of words covering shining truth. Loved the line \"the price of...
  July 25th, 2024 06:08
• Kindness. (Doggerel Dave) A gym can do that to you. Used to work out all the time but too many moves...
  July 25th, 2024 06:05
• Unoriginal (2781) A most fun read with a great punch line or hook. Well done
  July 25th, 2024 05:59
• Fighting With My Writing (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) We all fight with our writing from time to time. Hopefully it will help us...
  July 25th, 2024 05:58
• We Are Not Surprised (User) Wow what a downer. Everyone has to excel at something even if it is the...
  July 25th, 2024 05:56
• Riopy Is Here. (Goldfinch60) Thank you friend for introducing me to yet another new musician. Good...
  July 25th, 2024 05:52
• Way Of The Word (Orchidee) Another good write Orchi
  July 25th, 2024 05:50
• The Light Within (Elikel96) In the beginning was the word. The word is powerful and the creator of all...
  July 25th, 2024 05:48
• Thanks for Coming But .. (Neville) Well written and it pretty much says it all. \"Parting is such sweet...
  July 25th, 2024 05:44
• ALL MY LIFE (Qurrathul Ain) Here\'s to you finding it and keeping it. Good write.
  July 25th, 2024 05:40
• We\'re Over That\'s It We\'re Done (Santajah Douglass) I guess that pretty much says it. I guess it\'s final then? Good write...
  July 25th, 2024 05:39
• No More (Dev Parth) I love the message left in the last few lines that ending can be the...
  July 25th, 2024 05:36
• The Seat by the Fire (Tom Dylan) We all need our own space and even though a bar may be packed you can...
  July 25th, 2024 05:33
• we all need someone (Jim56) Indeed we all do being social animals some of us more than others. Nicely...
  July 25th, 2024 05:31
• EMOTION AT WAR (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Seductively sensual with vivid imagery well done
  July 25th, 2024 05:30
• Writer\'s Right (Goli.Standbypoet) Love plays on words. For a while I thought you were going to establish a...
  July 25th, 2024 05:28
• The Pirate (Thomas W Case) A great story with wonderful imagery and some very good lines. Always...
  July 25th, 2024 05:19
• Summer Rain (Markashley1961) Whether just poetic description with stunning imagery or metaphoric of the...
  July 24th, 2024 07:35
• The Truck Bed and Summer (Thoughtless) A nostalgic memory of youth gone by and images of a fond past remembrance...
  July 24th, 2024 07:11
• Friend (Tony36) Friendly, caring and what everyone needs to hear considerate. Nicely done
  July 24th, 2024 07:09
• a breath of rain (NinjaGirl) Images and more images, metaphoric blended with vivid description make for...
  July 24th, 2024 07:07
• Whispers of Learning (Gray0328) Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
  July 24th, 2024 07:05
• One Quarter Of A Half (ADarkerMind) Each line provocative and enigmatic I think I could spend a quarter to a...
  July 24th, 2024 07:03
• ~> The Game Of Love ( Shakespearean Sonnet ) (Thad Wilk) A good write in a format that I have difficulty with. Never had much luck...
  July 24th, 2024 06:57
• to be loved (Sophiaaa) A clever presentation of yourself through year by year markers of things...
  July 24th, 2024 06:54
• surrealist realism (Yassin Tamam) A sense of loss, existential and societal all at once in this piece.
  July 24th, 2024 06:51
• Equality (Satishverma) The depth of this poem is beyond my vision but its beauty shines in...
  July 24th, 2024 06:48
• Generational (2781) Grist for the mill. Good write
  July 24th, 2024 06:46
• *Friendly with the enemy* (Weep little lion girl) This could be metaphoric and if so a deep poem indeed. If not metaphoric...
  July 24th, 2024 06:42
• Storm (Bindeshkumarjha) A most interesting metaphor put in poetic form. I hope that the storm has...
  July 24th, 2024 06:40
• Brick by boring brick (Gloria Denise) Tragic and sad but a lesson to be taught. Well expressed where I hear the...
  July 24th, 2024 06:38
• IT\'S YOUR LIFE (BHAVASRI) A good write with rhyme about a good message.
  July 24th, 2024 06:34
• Something Unnamed (Dan Williams) Deep thought in this observation as it seems that images are constantly...
  July 24th, 2024 06:33
• Light Bites (Neville) Oh what a tangled web we weave.... Reminded me of my grandfather that...
  July 24th, 2024 06:30
• Another Day Arrives. (Goldfinch60) The little things are what matter. And yes I\'m sure that tomorrow will be...
  July 24th, 2024 06:26
• Proverb Pieces 6 (Orchidee) A wonderful write and good counsel as well.
  July 24th, 2024 06:21
• CHIMAMANDA\'S DAUGHTER (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A great tribute put into words.
  July 24th, 2024 06:19
• There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15) I am slow to come to realizations but it became apparent in this poem that...
  July 24th, 2024 06:18
• Just Forever (Mya) Deep thought put into clever words. Well done
  July 24th, 2024 06:12
• SUDDENLY WE SEE (Bobby O) A vote for Pamela Harris? Women have their advantages XX is the primary...
  July 24th, 2024 06:10
• washing day (Jim56) Been there done that. There needs to be another line about it starting to...
  July 24th, 2024 06:06
• If today? (Maplespal) I don\'t know the answer to this one but we wouldn\'t know. A question to...
  July 24th, 2024 06:04
• Where is it? (2781) Hope no one plants any bombs there. Good write my friend
  July 24th, 2024 05:44
• Thoughts 11 (MendedFences27) \"Equality’s flaw is, we desire it only with those above us.\" Great ...
  July 23rd, 2024 17:57
• Happiness is a choice (NDOU ROLIVHUWA) A true message indeed. Happiness is our choice and ours alone. Nicely done
  July 23rd, 2024 06:25
• The Habiscus (Rrodriguez) Love this flower and have many. Planted a hedge of over 700. The poem...
  July 23rd, 2024 06:23
• The Last Day (MendedFences27) The power of dependency shines in this poem. Love a powerful element that...
  July 23rd, 2024 06:21
• Anatomy of Agony (Tristan Robert Lange) Dark images fill this piece with foreboding and a sense of finality.
  July 23rd, 2024 06:18
• Strike 3 (Kurt Philip Behm) A great line that inspires ricocheting thought that continues to echo...
  July 23rd, 2024 06:15
• Sun Was Cooling (Satishverma) Here the metaphors are astounding only to be overshadowed by the imagery....
  July 23rd, 2024 06:12
• All by my own (how i like it) (Weep little lion girl) Sad, a need for reassurance and safety. When the opinion of others means...
  July 23rd, 2024 06:09
• A Walk with the Hourglass (Framed Mirror) Fragments, shards of images scattered, pieced together by the reader into...
  July 23rd, 2024 06:07
• i just wanna (Sheta) A cute plea for comfort and reassurance nicely done
  July 23rd, 2024 06:05
• Whispers Of Dawn (Dev Parth) A great metaphor as well set in good AB rhyme. Great imagery as well....
  July 23rd, 2024 06:04
• Seed Sprouting (Orchidee) Another wonderful parable that applies to more than one thing. Nicely done...
  July 23rd, 2024 06:01
• Hurt. (Goldfinch60) A cover from Nine Inch Nails that put a whole new twist on the song....
  July 23rd, 2024 05:59
• False Promises and Little White Lies (Neville) A great write Neville. I knew a man once who on his word alone with no...
  July 23rd, 2024 05:55
• Where is it? (2781) Good question it surely has little peace.
  July 23rd, 2024 05:51
• Poet\'s True Worth (Teddy.15) So true Teddy it is the first measure I use in my definition of art. One...
  July 23rd, 2024 05:48
• is it really there (Jim56) A common question nicely put to verse. The flow is smooth and it seems to...
  July 23rd, 2024 05:46
• THE MAN I LOVE (BHAVASRI) Sweet and in a most interesting verse pattern. Nicely done
  July 23rd, 2024 05:44
• The Coo Of The Dusk Dove (Garth Rakumakoe) The metaphor in this piece is very nice and the wording is well chosen. It...
  July 23rd, 2024 05:43
• poor puppy (Maplespal) A sad story told in verse that all comes back to the same place death and...
  July 23rd, 2024 05:40
• A Loss Like This (Dan Williams) Here great metaphors combine in a single image of loss, sadness and pain....
  July 23rd, 2024 05:10
• Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard) Another great write my friend with great rhyme, warmth and old joy. Loved...
  July 22nd, 2024 14:51
• My Giant (Teddy.15) Something always with us that we can not loose. A comforting thought and a...
  July 22nd, 2024 12:52
• Carnegie Of Lasses (Jerry Reynolds) Visions of times past warm summer nights and the glow of fireflies. Thank...
  July 22nd, 2024 06:51
• Darkness (Anonymous_1226) Well developed. This one\'s hook hits hard in the last line. Well written.
  July 22nd, 2024 06:16
• Work (Olive Anderson) Grim and haunting this piece presents the reality of aging, isolation,...
  July 22nd, 2024 06:13
• The Great Marriage (Gray0328) Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may...
  July 22nd, 2024 06:07
• Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case) Full of brilliant images this one draws pity from distant points. Nicely...
  July 22nd, 2024 06:01
• A Prostitutes Heart (Dan Williams) Powerful words ended with a very powerful last line. Wonderfully written.
  July 22nd, 2024 05:58
• Apathy. (Goldfinch60) And a powerful weapon it is. Nicely said Andy
  July 22nd, 2024 05:56
• Witness Of The Word (Orchidee) Another fine write Orchi.
  July 22nd, 2024 05:54
• A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15) A most mournful poem that strikes to the heart. Have felt this way and...
  July 22nd, 2024 05:49
• Living Like Ghosts (Neville) Ah this metaphor could be applied to many different things. How many poets...
  July 22nd, 2024 05:24
• Awkward (and queer) (Weep little lion girl) This touches close to home because many including me remember in our teen...
  July 22nd, 2024 05:13
• CrowdStrike (Doggerel Dave) Dave this goes hard. For a man that has problems with metaphors this one...
  July 21st, 2024 13:17
• Do I (2781) So true it is all about you. A great message. Loved it.
  July 21st, 2024 13:11
• Scatterbrained (Jerry Reynolds) Truth in print a rare occasion. Well done
  July 21st, 2024 13:08
• Lost In Thoughts (Satishverma) This poem had a personal feel to it as if being spoken directly too. Very...
  July 21st, 2024 07:45
• A Sudden Touch Of Wood (ADarkerMind) Beautiful and intriguing images presented with most interesting and...
  July 21st, 2024 07:40
• Last Minuteness (Zhangyuyouyu) One minute at a time things come and go. So all things must pass and so...
  July 21st, 2024 07:35
• Sunshine Splendour (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I hear you a believer in nature and the natural way. Nicely said.
  July 21st, 2024 07:29
• THE APPLE TREE (Qurrathul Ain) A wonderful parable sad but true and in fact too true. Here the pairing of...
  July 21st, 2024 06:51
• Glory Be! (Orchidee) Glory be he\'s not picked me, I\'m pretty weak in most everything My wife...
  July 21st, 2024 06:44
• The Age Of Innocence. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful image, profound message in wonderful words. If only.
  July 21st, 2024 06:36
• I Will Rise (Thomas W Case) A great metaphor for an important message stated with wonderful imagery....
  July 21st, 2024 06:33
• Summoning of a Gentle Spirit (Teddy.15) A great use of diametrically opposed to create a unified message. A...
  July 20th, 2024 11:35
• The Emptiness (Young Fella) Sad and a sense of loss in this piece. There seems to be a sense of...
  July 20th, 2024 11:14
• MIDNIGHT DARKNESS (Qurrathul Ain) Very poetic imagery here with a nice tinge of rhyme mixed it. Lovely
  July 20th, 2024 11:12
• Polite Enquiry: (Doggerel Dave) Now Dave here is one from you close to cryptic and symbolism but short....
  July 20th, 2024 11:10
• () This poem runs so smoothly off the tongue and has a classic flavor to it...
  July 20th, 2024 11:07
• NIGERIA 🇳🇬 (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Well written and moving this is a powerful piece.
  July 20th, 2024 11:03
• A time lapse (Falcon_mn) This tells a story that somehow seems familiar as if I had been there. The...
  July 20th, 2024 11:01
• Fall (Tony36) A picture of fall that I used to know before moving to a warmer clime. It...
  July 20th, 2024 10:57
• How? Without You? (Maplespal) There is a deep sense of loss in this poem with a strong desire for...
  July 20th, 2024 10:54
• Who To Call (M.M.) We all had no choice of being who we are. Parents had the coice to bring...
  July 20th, 2024 10:45
• Demons Lie (Jerry Reynolds) A most unique rhyming scheme that works well with this short piece. It...
  July 20th, 2024 10:39