Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• If I was a boy (Domilla) A beautiful romantic take on what a man should say to a woman but that...
  December 3rd, 2024 11:31
• Sight Seeing With Melllan part 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I grew up in the cold and snow so I know what that’s about. I tuned back...
  December 3rd, 2024 10:35
• Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws (Tristan Robert Lange) A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it....
  December 3rd, 2024 10:32
• ~> MONKEY BUSINESS! (Thad Wilk) I’ve known some people that look like that. Nowadays, you have to be...
  December 3rd, 2024 10:29
• You\'re Own Path (Tony36) Another good message. It is more and more difficult nowadays for us to be...
  December 3rd, 2024 10:27
• Insulting KP Again? (Orchidee) Be careful. Orchi she is becoming more famous than you. Another fun read....
  December 3rd, 2024 10:25
• Poetry of Motion (Nethra) Beautiful images flow through this poem. Wonderful choice of wording....
  December 3rd, 2024 08:07
• 2 poems again brain dump (Maplespal) Poems that grow darker. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow beautiful...
  December 3rd, 2024 07:48
• When Love Takes Its Final Bow (Teddy.15) Pride is like a virus that takes over one’s body. It has little use, but...
  December 3rd, 2024 07:46
• happy song (Jim56) Jim, this is a beautiful thought. I have done it many times. It truly...
  December 3rd, 2024 07:43
• Christmas May Pass Them By (Poetic Licence) You have hit on the head the very issue of Christmas. It should be a time...
  December 3rd, 2024 06:02
• tango of us (Arqios) A great metaphor. Through my years of life, I have mastered several...
  December 3rd, 2024 05:56
• Maternal Love (Cassie58) Cassie, this poem presents strong contrast between an infant in arms and...
  December 3rd, 2024 04:59
• Shanty (Neville) Salty indeed. A poem of ship set sale and a sailors tail. As salty and...
  December 3rd, 2024 04:55
• Precious Days Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet, Andy. Words of advice to look for the good in...
  December 3rd, 2024 04:51
• Abdominal Abominable (Mutley Ravishes) A fun read. I surrendered years ago. I held up the white flag to food and...
  December 2nd, 2024 20:26
• Cryogenic Catharsis (Tristan Robert Lange) Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did...
  December 2nd, 2024 20:24
• ~> OMG, I Needed A Job Fast! (Thad Wilk) Humor is the cure all for all that ails ya. Lovely
  December 2nd, 2024 12:28
• Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans) (Poetic Licence) Many memories of the past. I remember them all and many more thanks for...
  December 2nd, 2024 09:45
• From here: direction 1 (Maplespal) Sexual, sensual, errotic and romantic it calls out for physical touch
  December 2nd, 2024 09:42
• The book (Lorenz) This poem carries with it the feel of mystery, magic, the occult a type of...
  December 2nd, 2024 09:40
• A Hippie\'s Soul (Tony36) I heartly agree with you Tony
  December 2nd, 2024 09:29
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) A most peaceful state is formed by this poem. It flowes with the stream...
  December 2nd, 2024 09:28
• Xmas and other stuff (Orchidee) Blame the Romans for stealing a few days to put into July for Julius of...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:40
• feels like paradise (Jim56) Sweet and romantic this poem reads well and has a longing feeling to it....
  December 2nd, 2024 06:36
• LIMERICK 131 (Michael Edwards) Another fun seasonal read. I have already told you I like limericks and...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:35
• Variety is the Spice……. (Doggerel Dave) Everywhere now is becoming multicultureal and I have found that people are...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:33
• All a Glow (Teddy.15) Ah just what I needed a fun read in the middle of a season of rush, push...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:23
• A Hand Full of Ashes (Neville) Haunting and gets better with each read. It reads with melancholy and...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:21
• where I could no longer go home (Arqios) Marvelously worded this poem rolls like waves on the sea. The beauty of...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:12
• Let\'s Just Say She\'s Having a Bit Too Much Fun, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy) The one thing that I do like about the season and that is food. A most...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:08
• To The Gym. (Goldfinch60) I do that all the time about a lot of different things. It wears me out...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:58
• Time Resigns (Dan Williams) Here I hear the frustration and hopelessness of a situation. This is a...
  December 2nd, 2024 05:56
• You Can`t Get Me! (Mutley Ravishes) It sounds like you discovered what I did. I thought that my secret was...
  December 1st, 2024 19:57
• White Rain (Gray0328) Most beautifully worded this poem drips with wonderful images and lines.
  December 1st, 2024 19:55
• ~> Another Day At The Vets! (Thad Wilk) Now that was a very flexible vet and a very creative well written poem...
  December 1st, 2024 19:53
• Ledger In Blood (Kurt Philip Behm) Hard hitting and raw this poem is graphic and on point.
  December 1st, 2024 19:51
• A soul\'s journey (Lorenz) A sureal poem with many classical mythical elements. This poem paints a...
  December 1st, 2024 19:49
• Poor Eddie Van Patten (Thomas W Case) A single trauma often provokes reactions too late. A sad poem but with a...
  December 1st, 2024 12:05
• I Should Have (Cassie58) I hear Leonard Cohen in this poem. Brilliant lyrics to a song. Wonderful...
  December 1st, 2024 09:23
• From here (Maplespal) Sexy and erotic, romantic, and sensual. Where else can we go from here? A...
  December 1st, 2024 09:20
• Never Give Up (Tony36) Perseverance, they say is the key to success. In a sense it is also the...
  December 1st, 2024 09:18
• Hourglass (Tristan Robert Lange) The paradox of time to me is that the more miserable one is the slower it...
  December 1st, 2024 09:16
• lonely christmas (Jim56) Filled with sadness and a sense of grief this poem speaks of a season that...
  December 1st, 2024 09:12
• Too Sweet for Your Sweet Tooth (Rebellion_in_sanity) In this marvelous poem of yours, the first stanza took me to a personal...
  December 1st, 2024 09:09
• She Says Goodbye (Poetic Licence) Saying goodbye as often a very difficult thing to do. We form attachments...
  December 1st, 2024 05:47
• a.c.r.o.n.y.m.s. (Arqios) Cryptic this poem sends a hidden message. So often in poetry messages are...
  December 1st, 2024 05:40
• Return Readiness (Orchidee) I am familiar with this passage. And it should be taken to heart in regard...
  December 1st, 2024 05:37
• LIMERICK 130 (Michael Edwards) I love Limmerick and this is a good one. I feel like I have been in that...
  December 1st, 2024 05:34
• A World That’s Still (Mark The Phenomenon) Like the continual beat of a hammer the rhyme at the end of each line,...
  December 1st, 2024 05:33
• Rescue (Teddy.15) So often we need to look in a mirror to recognize that those feelings or...
  December 1st, 2024 05:28
• The wedding (2781) A fun read that emphasizes the differences in cultures and customs. We...
  December 1st, 2024 05:26
• Signs of Things to Come (Neville) If I didn’t know that it was biological, I would think that it was being...
  December 1st, 2024 05:01
• I Now Say The Word. (Goldfinch60) I know what you mean, Andy. I avoid saying that word except on the day...
  December 1st, 2024 04:57
• There, Are Ye Satisfied? (Cheeky Missy) What a delicious first poem it got my saliva flowing and made me hungry...
  November 30th, 2024 14:47
• assisted dying (Jim56) I am a supporter of euthanasia, but only if one is honest and shares it...
  November 30th, 2024 12:50
• Progress (Maplespal) We all need a way to de-escalate and diffuse ourselves from the world we...
  November 30th, 2024 12:48
• Home so sweet (Lorenz) We all have or would like to have such a place a place of safety, peace,...
  November 30th, 2024 12:45
• Music Time Machine. (Goldfinch60) Feeling survive, whereas we people do not. Nicely worded, Andy.
  November 30th, 2024 12:41
• Still Art For Art’s Sake (Neville) The makings of an artist. Whether paint or print the color comes through....
  November 30th, 2024 12:40
• Her (Tony36) Beautifully written a story of too many young women and older women as...
  November 30th, 2024 12:38
• Flood (Cassie58) You have painted a picture of nature in all of its turmoil and beauty....
  November 30th, 2024 10:22
• within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope) (Tristan Robert Lange) I like the form of this poem, but even more I liked some of the internal...
  November 30th, 2024 10:18
• Silent Scars (Rebellion_in_sanity) Such a great metaphor for this particular issue. This wonderful poem...
  November 30th, 2024 10:15
• Boy and Bonnet (Arqios) That’s very heartwarming and I’m sure all mothers feel the same. A...
  November 30th, 2024 10:12
• Footy (Doggerel Dave) Haven’t seen that game lately, Dave I guess I’m getting too old. The...
  November 30th, 2024 10:09
• But I Absolutely Love Lemoncello Cheesecake (Teddy.15) It sounds delicious and you are raising my appetite at this early hour of...
  November 30th, 2024 04:13
• Amiable Andrew (Orchidee) Orchi I feel back in Sunday school again. Nice to hear you’re back to...
  November 30th, 2024 04:09
• Sunlit Waltz (Gray0328)
  November 29th, 2024 16:21
• Sunlit Waltz (Gray0328) Beauty is there for those that wish to see it. In this poem it is...
  November 29th, 2024 16:21
• ~> Disinterred - free verse - (Thad Wilk) I think you just did. I hear the spirit speak and see the writing on the...
  November 29th, 2024 16:19
• Strolling Down Christmas Lanes (Tristan Robert Lange) Christmas was to celebrate peace, closeness to others, charity and instead...
  November 29th, 2024 16:17
• What’s in the box; torture (EvenwheniLie) A dark poem with beautiful internal rhymes. This poem screams out for...
  November 29th, 2024 12:12
• Flashback (Maplespal) Post traumatic stress disorder is a terrible thing. It takes one out of...
  November 29th, 2024 12:09
• Red and dreams girl (Lorenz) Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of...
  November 29th, 2024 12:07
• I want to dance with you (Tony36) A beautiful love poem that expresses a desire for closeness and touch as...
  November 29th, 2024 10:58
• Angel (senryu) (Teddy.15) May those wings carry you wherever your heart desires. A beautiful poem...
  November 29th, 2024 10:56
• winter’s embrace (Arqios) I can feel it Cryptic I can see it and that’s all that’s needed for it...
  November 29th, 2024 06:03
• Bake Day Beth (Cassie58) I have often wondered about the kitchen chaos and why every pan bowl needs...
  November 29th, 2024 06:02
• weathers getting colder (Jim56) I have seen the homeless I have talked to them. I feel for them and often...
  November 29th, 2024 06:01
• And So It Was In Early May (Kevin Hulme) This poem takes a classical form and reads well into a relationship that...
  November 29th, 2024 04:57
• morning mourning dove (Mya) Beautiful, mournful and full of the wistfulness very nicely written
  November 29th, 2024 04:54
• A Mother\'s Betrayal (Rebellion_in_sanity) Most interesting analogies that makes sense and call out for peace not war...
  November 29th, 2024 04:52
• Hanging On by My Fingertips. (Poetic Licence) When relationships fade away, it is disturbing. This poem speaks to this,...
  November 29th, 2024 04:49
• Here (Doggerel Dave) Dave, you hit upon a sore spot. I don’t believe there is any certainty...
  November 29th, 2024 04:46
• Your Most Un-Favourite Saying (Orchidee) This is an interesting subject, indeed. My least favorite saying is when...
  November 29th, 2024 04:44
• Solitude (Ishwar Chandra) The title of this poem caught my attention. I too enjoy solitude live much...
  November 29th, 2024 04:41
• Tale of the Heike parody (Rin) As I read this poem, I thought I understood it until I got to the last...
  November 29th, 2024 04:35
• My way (2781) Indeed, so true many state that he is unjust unfair but we don’t...
  November 29th, 2024 04:33
• Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville) Oh Neville how many discarded love poems I have written. This speaks right...
  November 29th, 2024 04:32
• Buddha Says (Goldfinch60) A most lovely poem from a beloved leader. Nevertheless, my wife says that...
  November 29th, 2024 04:30
• Gossip (NafisaSB) Very good advice to all. Once you open your mouth, you open it to all the...
  November 29th, 2024 04:28
• A Crow Recollects (Mutley Ravishes) Morbidly, funny darkly, tasteful, pun intended. A great right short to the...
  November 29th, 2024 04:18
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) Bobby, this is a beautiful poem of gratitude and is Confucius said...
  November 29th, 2024 04:16
• Because I Love you (Mark The Phenomenon) A pledge of love Embossed in violence. Anger to defend love nicely
  November 28th, 2024 16:57
• My sister (Rin) We all have our own ways of showing our love, and sometimes others do not...
  November 28th, 2024 16:55
• Ayahuasca spirit (Lorenz) Mystical magical And wondrous
  November 28th, 2024 16:54
• Confused hands (Maplespal) I have been there. As I have been reading your poems I have noticed their...
  November 28th, 2024 16:50
• christmas robin (Jim56) Jim, I love your nature poems, especially about the birds. I too love...
  November 28th, 2024 16:48
• Barefoot in the Snow (Rho1975) Haunting and cold this is a dark poem that conveys its message through...
  November 28th, 2024 16:43