Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• HYPNOTIC FRAME (Acheel) Beautiful wording and images that presents observations and philosophy in...
  November 8th, 2025 20:40
• The Weather Conditions for Today (Teddy.15) Teddy this is a splendid metaphor that works so well. Dementia may come...
  November 8th, 2025 20:35
• True to my soul (Amethyste) A powerful statement. I believe we all do. I feel that everyone does the...
  November 8th, 2025 17:30
• emotionally manipulated by the melody (Luke Bensing) Pieces connected the whole greater than the sum of the parts a gestalt...
  November 8th, 2025 16:54
• Thunder (Arial) A poem that seems to say that if it was not meant to be it is not meant to...
  November 8th, 2025 15:51
• Ballade of Yggdrasil (Matthew R. Callies) This poem sounded very Nordic. With one grand mother from Norway and...
  November 8th, 2025 15:03
• Tempered Life (RSM0812) I get it. Time tempers all things. Unfortunately we do not always value...
  November 8th, 2025 14:59
• a time i was afraid - personal narrative writing essay (Vividvoid14) This was a great short story with a fixed purpose and message that came...
  November 8th, 2025 13:07
• Untitled {9} (Niko Papadatos) Pain changes our point of view and narrows our vision. A good write where...
  November 8th, 2025 13:00
• Fired Three Times (Gray0328) This poem is raw as if scrubbed raw. A cleansing of all. Nicely written...
  November 8th, 2025 12:58
• The Child That Death Forgot (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Sirens came through strong in that I had just read another poem today...
  November 8th, 2025 12:57
• Despair island (Lorenz) A siren\'s trade in this poem. Very satisfying since I always loved sirens...
  November 8th, 2025 12:52
• Compensation (Devender Kumar) Ah such a poignant poem. The right of the many outweigh the right of the...
  November 8th, 2025 10:44
• Fake smile (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Suicide may end the drunkenness but to awake with a hangover and to what?...
  November 8th, 2025 08:33
• They (Tristan Robert Lange) Machinery rusts and breaks down. A wrench in the works always works...
  November 8th, 2025 08:30
• Little Mo (Paul Bell) Maybe not the staff but surely the shaft that one will surely not see the...
  November 8th, 2025 08:26
• A little announcement (Cloie) Heard the message but hope this does not mean you are leaving
  November 8th, 2025 06:24
• dignity and pride (Jim56) A wonderful write and I would have to agree but in some the flame needs to...
  November 8th, 2025 06:22
• a sandwich part.2 (Applecherry) A metaphor for a relationship here where it takes two slices of bread and...
  November 8th, 2025 06:18
• after-image (Arqios) Between shadow and person, reflection and real, what was and is there is a...
  November 8th, 2025 06:15
• Hour 8 (FallingAwake2) A journal note serves as a poem, let your thoughts roam and soon you will...
  November 8th, 2025 06:08
• The Sand Spirits (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) I have been to the desert and walked through it and this poem paints its...
  November 8th, 2025 04:55
• It\'s no poem...just telling that It\'s good to be back on the platform again! (Nayak) Glad your back
  November 8th, 2025 04:51
• BRICK WALL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) So true indeed. Poetic words of wisdom. incarcerated in an institution of...
  November 8th, 2025 04:01
• It\'s Getting Dark (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A uni-rhyme poem that in four lines sets an image in the mind and brings...
  November 8th, 2025 03:59
• A question of Karma (FrasMac) Now you know that I love word play and this one is a good one. It is more...
  November 8th, 2025 03:56
• Ghost of love (OA Poetry) This poem has such a familiar feel to it. It seems that I have read it...
  November 8th, 2025 03:54
• 𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝒯𝒽ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) Others may act as though they own your life but only each person owns...
  November 8th, 2025 03:52
• Home (Meagan Adelle) A most interesting approach taking the negative to prove the positive. All...
  November 8th, 2025 03:48
• The Life Element (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) A great haiku who\'s image stands out in my mind. Nicely done
  November 8th, 2025 03:45
• I try (StephenJames) The multiple usage of the word try emphasizes it and strengthens it in the...
  November 8th, 2025 03:44
• Grace Given (Orchidee) This poem such a familiar story that it made me think that it was Sunday...
  November 8th, 2025 03:42
• Birth And Death. (Goldfinch60) A lovely metaphor Andy all with the thought that we are reabsorbed into...
  November 8th, 2025 03:40
• Mother (Andrew Deaton) A beautiful tribute and acknowledgement of the special love between a...
  November 7th, 2025 20:24
• answer (Elizabeth Ross 4) There is tension expressed in this poem that is on the point of bursting....
  November 7th, 2025 19:46
• QUESTIONS (David Welch) Questions after questions follow each other in this poem it seems self...
  November 7th, 2025 19:33
• Glory to thermodynamics... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) The free flow of thought roll onward in this poem. Well done
  November 7th, 2025 19:30
• Sunny days (Amethyste) Great metaphor nicely placed in this poem.
  November 7th, 2025 16:05
• Such is Life (Jjudaharts) A good senryu nicely done.
  November 7th, 2025 16:04
• Karma\'s lessons (Nicole Pritchard) A poem of encouragement and gratitude. Nicely written
  November 7th, 2025 16:03
• Karma\'s lessons (Nicole Pritchard) A poem of encouragement and gratitude. Nicely written
  November 7th, 2025 16:03
• The Cuckoo (Tkatie118) This poem is ominous and dark but alluring as it sucks you in to a pretty...
  November 7th, 2025 16:01
• After Dinner Mints (Amandatoriii) This poem does a dance between shyness and attraction. A lovely write
  November 7th, 2025 15:14
• I am With You (William Hromada) A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
  November 7th, 2025 15:12
• love is meant to shine (Erica Masindi) A most interesting write well constructed and structured
  November 7th, 2025 13:14
• Universal Rose (RSM0812) Such good meter and flow in this poem is wonderful. Loved the lines: How...
  November 7th, 2025 13:13
• The Art of Disappearing (Gray0328) Gray I have had young children and can identify this is so cute it...
  November 7th, 2025 13:00
• You tell me I am no good (Poetaldo) We all have faults and need to accept them or change them. Short but...
  November 7th, 2025 11:54
• Halved (Maplespal) So true how few the memories before we could speak. Memories have language...
  November 7th, 2025 11:52
• Bespoken (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) I does seem that the best poems are those that use metaphor or words in...
  November 7th, 2025 11:48
• honeybee (Lunarchloedip) A strong argument for the sanctity of life and against suicide. Well...
  November 7th, 2025 11:45
• Genocide of feelings (Anas Merchant) Heavily metaphoric this poem shows good rhyme and flows well. It is...
  November 7th, 2025 11:43
• The Meaning We Make - inspired by Victor Frankl (Jane Walker) A very nicely worded poem of an existential type it finds hope and purpose...
  November 7th, 2025 10:15
• SENSITIVITY / SENSIBILIDAD (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A poem full of love and color it is full of energy and vibrant in nature....
  November 7th, 2025 10:12
• England\'s Falling (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It seems that this is an international disease and not just restricted to...
  November 7th, 2025 08:43
• Demons Lie (Jerry Reynolds) As a child I used to play with large balls of mercury and it does seem...
  November 7th, 2025 08:41
• collection of words (Luke Bensing) It is hard to put some things into words there are just not the proper...
  November 7th, 2025 08:38
• ......... 𝒮ℴ 𝒾𝓉 𝒾𝓈......... 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝒲ℯ𝒷𝓈𝒾𝓉ℯ ℛ𝓊𝓃𝓈 ℐ𝓃𝓉ℴ 𝒜𝓃 ℰ𝓇𝓇ℴ𝓇 (Keyara S Trotman) A poem of just because I suppose. A most interesting approach.
  November 7th, 2025 08:37
• The Lord\'s Despair (Tristan Robert Lange) A blessing for bounty, a curse for those we hate, a prayer to begin and...
  November 7th, 2025 08:36
• wordsworth dream (Jim56) I loved this fanciful dream and how nature and poetry merge in it with a...
  November 7th, 2025 05:52
• HARSH REALITY (Drniran) A depiction so vivid the metaphor is forgotten. A lovely write
  November 7th, 2025 05:50
• a moment turning (Arqios) Age, memory, the more pages read the harder to retain all the details and...
  November 7th, 2025 05:48
• I\'m Listening (Paul Bell)
  November 7th, 2025 05:43
• I\'m Listening (Paul Bell) A fun read Paul it is funny were minds wander and especially when...
  November 7th, 2025 05:43
• Blood From Memory (OA Poetry) Vivid and relatable this poem cuts deep. Love the imagery of petals that...
  November 7th, 2025 05:39
• Corporate criminals🔫 (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Those that kill with ink and those that kill with bullets not much...
  November 7th, 2025 03:48
• Thousand chaos in one. (Funmiwrites) A poem with so many mixed emotions and contradictions. It seems like life...
  November 7th, 2025 03:45
• LEST WE FORGET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Sad and haunting a poem of loss and emptiness in hearts where need...
  November 7th, 2025 03:43
• Comforting Cheer (Orchidee) A lovely theme to this one Orchi. To comfort someone that is in need is a...
  November 7th, 2025 03:40
• All The Fours. (Goldfinch60) Good for you Andy I believe that true love is sharing not possessing and...
  November 7th, 2025 03:38
• The Earth Element (Ethan Mikel St.Amour) A great haiku with beautiful images of nature or in metaphor could be a...
  November 7th, 2025 03:35
• Love that I yearn for (Starlight) Each line a separate thought about love, a new approach and a different...
  November 7th, 2025 03:33
• Love Does Exist (Meera Mere) The fading of love over time is a question of whether it was ever love or...
  November 6th, 2025 20:49
• An Apple Core (Emery Walker) This sounds like a metaphor of, if not abuse, abandoned promises and...
  November 6th, 2025 20:48
• Look at myself (Shadowbones) A poem of emotions that have been controlled for too long now coming out....
  November 6th, 2025 20:45
• hulks solution to the trolley problem (Jon Nakapalau) Short, powerful, direct, to the point.
  November 6th, 2025 20:43
• joy and grief (Lunarchloedip) Joy can be found where ever you look for it. A most upbeat and positive...
  November 6th, 2025 20:42
• April (Amethyste) I suppose that they do. They certainly bloom that time of year and this...
  November 6th, 2025 20:40
• A Caterpillar (OA Poetry) Quite the debut with a poem that sounds like it talks about and ex. Full...
  November 6th, 2025 20:39
• Pick up your oar, sweet - (Amy Michelle Mosier) A poem of a challenge to go onward maybe even despite the cost. Well...
  November 6th, 2025 17:38
• Deliciously Absent / Deliciosamente ausente (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Loved it A search for what is not there and desired. Nicely done
  November 6th, 2025 17:19
• What now (Maplespal) Tears often a manipulation can be annoying. It makes it difficult to tell...
  November 6th, 2025 17:15
• No one noticed. (Starfire) A most interesting format of broken lines like broken earth, broken...
  November 6th, 2025 17:11
• His sand\'s of time (Aa Harvey) When we see someone being self destructive when or do we intervene and at...
  November 6th, 2025 17:06
• Busyness (Jjudaharts) I would have to agree that there is too much commotion, confusion, noise....
  November 6th, 2025 17:02
• 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 𝒮𝓉ℴ𝓇𝓎 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Shakes are wonderful and so it the poem that melts into a love poem
  November 6th, 2025 15:32
• Fall Breeze (Jerry Reynolds) I have seen them before and they are mesmerizing. A wonderful poem of...
  November 6th, 2025 15:28
• Untitled {8} (Niko Papadatos) Existential is the word for this poem an eternal quest that covers much...
  November 6th, 2025 14:02
• 1 View (NinjaGirl) One has to believe in oneself and support oneself in this life. A lovely...
  November 6th, 2025 14:00
• I Am Here Now (Amandatoriii) A poem that feels intimate and yet distant. It holds trepidation yet is...
  November 6th, 2025 13:59
• Matrix (Lorenz) Here the cow jumped over the moon but never said where she landed. The dog...
  November 6th, 2025 13:57
• Guilt Is a Scorpion (Ria_1005) Clever the use of symbols in this poem nicely done
  November 6th, 2025 11:42
• The Alchemy of the Lens (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) This poem takes the aspects of alchemy and of the spiritual and melds them...
  November 6th, 2025 11:40
• collection of words (Luke Bensing) This is philosophical and thought provoking. Nice
  November 6th, 2025 10:17
• writing freely (Applecherry) It is funny how there are expectations in relationships and how one wants...
  November 6th, 2025 10:15
• Walking Into Yesterday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Mind provoking everyone thinks of speeding ourselves up beyond the speed...
  November 6th, 2025 10:09
• Mission Impossible (Tristan Robert Lange) Are we not indeed parasites on this earth that we suck dry of its...
  November 6th, 2025 10:06
• Smiling into the Wind (Lea Gagliardo) A picture painted in words of a poetess at work and a mind on other
  November 6th, 2025 08:57
• Mouse Squeaks (E.J. Waling) Here I see a string of free flowing thought like a current through a wire...
  November 6th, 2025 08:55
• ADVANCEMENT (Drniran) A fun read that has an uplifting ending. Nicely done
  November 6th, 2025 08:26