Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Victimized (Maplespal) A powerful poem that speaks out strongly against control held over others...
  September 11th, 2025 06:09
• between shelves (Arqios) I love the last two lines of this they speak so much in metaphor. Lovely
  September 11th, 2025 06:06
• dear no one in particular (Cody James) I can hear anger in this poem and with some good lines as well. Nicely
  September 11th, 2025 06:01
• sometimes (Jim56) There are ups and downs in most roads as there are bends. Nicely written
  September 11th, 2025 05:57
• Stuck Between Floors (Gray0328) This poem\'s vagueness adds to the anxiety implied in it. We all remember...
  September 11th, 2025 04:27
• Come down (2781) Vague enough to apply to many things yet specific enough to provoke...
  September 11th, 2025 04:08
• New Age Rage (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Clever rhyming and an occult subject combined with devils and guns makes...
  September 11th, 2025 04:06
• Cowboy Love (Matthew R. Callies) A poem of love imagined, found and lost now just remembered. A sad poem of...
  September 11th, 2025 04:04
• Hey, dude! (Kevin Michael Bloor) A fun read for a guy that has a few years on you. Age is relative and I...
  September 11th, 2025 04:00
• Late Night Cries (Anthony Hanible) Pain of the past awakens when the mind relaxes. nicely done
  September 11th, 2025 03:56
• OLD PHOTOGRAPHS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of photographs but about time and memories left behind. Some stored...
  September 11th, 2025 03:55
• OH I MISS (SocialArchitect) A most wonderful tribute to those lost but not forgotten poignant for a...
  September 11th, 2025 03:52
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) A most somber, well written tribute to an event that we all wished we did...
  September 11th, 2025 03:45
• Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60) Indeed nature is beautiful and this poem paints a charming picture as...
  September 11th, 2025 03:41
• Love is God then the both of you (The breaktime monologue) A poem that focuses on the what binds people together and and holds them....
  September 10th, 2025 20:44
• Polly (Randyjohnson71) Another beautiful tribute to a lost actress that gave many pleasure by her...
  September 10th, 2025 20:41
• Je Suis Désolé, I\'m Drunk Again (A Boy With Roses) Mind bending incongruities in this poem. A fun read
  September 10th, 2025 20:39
• Creation (Keeter C) A great entry door to higher conceptualization where there are no parts...
  September 10th, 2025 18:40
• GIVE the LOST a BREAK (Kering.karim) Tough times come through in this poem. A lovely write
  September 10th, 2025 16:48
• Wanting some crisp air (Nicole Pritchard) Invigorating is the feeling I get. A season where nature goes dormant and...
  September 10th, 2025 16:45
• Scrapbooks (Amethyste) The scrapbook. A fun read and one that inspires some thought and...
  September 10th, 2025 15:35
• Scattered thoughts (Calliope) The meaning of life transferred to another. Pain in loss. Well said
  September 10th, 2025 15:10
• Love vs. lust (Catherine Houston) Beautifully said wisdom in words.
  September 10th, 2025 15:09
• My own writing (NinjaGirl) Sanguine and heart felt. Although powerful sad. Ink will do.
  September 10th, 2025 15:08
• The Last Night With You (Lore) Immensely powerful this poem cries out to all that don\'t listen. A tragic...
  September 10th, 2025 13:29
• Metapoetics (Acheel) Such lines that fall like ripe fruit in most classic form it speaks Nobel...
  September 10th, 2025 13:25
• Remembering the Towers and the Ashes (Gray0328) Very nice and timely Gray a wonderful write for the times when memory...
  September 10th, 2025 13:21
• Lord of Our World (Abdullah123) Graphically imaged well worded and nicely organized this poem flows onward...
  September 10th, 2025 13:19
• Don’t Say It (Berniece) Wow! what lines and metaphors they fall one after another in brilliant...
  September 10th, 2025 13:13
• my pen (Lunarchloedip) The penned conflict between what the brutality of nature asks and the...
  September 10th, 2025 13:08
• Harvest maiden (Georgia Watson) A good metaphorical read and Demeter needs to know that her daughter...
  September 10th, 2025 11:16
• Mine mean Lothario days left me in a confused daze... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Full of fun word play this poem speaks of life. A good read
  September 10th, 2025 11:13
• You Asked Me Everyday (Meera Mere) A poem of feared loss and the inability to express it. Nicely done
  September 10th, 2025 11:11
• Land of Mind (Ray Moonee) I love poems that pose a question and leave one to ponder. This is one and...
  September 10th, 2025 11:09
• The Padrting by Мikhail Matusovsky (Ksey_Gan) Sad words for parting in a poem set of longing. Nicely worded
  September 10th, 2025 11:07
• Image DuJour (Kurt Philip Behm) Wise words in poetic metaphor with rhyme what more could one ask for?
  September 10th, 2025 11:06
• Gut Lords (Awam) Creative and powerful it speaks of a war of waste a lovely write and a
  September 10th, 2025 11:04
• The Choice and Chances of Change. (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) Poetic question versed well. Make what changes you can and the rest will...
  September 10th, 2025 11:02
• Water (Devender Kumar) Water has many properties none of which pay attention to gender class or...
  September 10th, 2025 11:00
• Sublime urban tragedy (Lorenz) Well worded Lorenz this has the feel of fusion of modern and gothic in a...
  September 10th, 2025 09:14
• Six (Thomas W Case) The reality of foreshadowing and the truth that vanquishes myth. Prolific...
  September 10th, 2025 09:04
• Why Are You Sorry (A.N.) Meta in its nature but mico in its examination it speaks of pity that no...
  September 10th, 2025 08:22
• The (Matthew R. Callies) Etymological a poem of grammar full of meaning and lessons for the poet or...
  September 10th, 2025 08:20
• A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Sightless (Aa Harvey) A wonderful poem of love and the desire for it. Nicely penned
  September 10th, 2025 08:17
• Siblings (Haiku) (Priya Tomar) What a wonderful senryu is woven in this relationship between half...
  September 10th, 2025 08:16
• Meta-verse (2781) Love the rhyme and flow and the message is a most inspiring one. A...
  September 10th, 2025 08:14
• Armageddon (Igor Vykhovanets) Another fine array of poems from God to dog backwards and forwards so many...
  September 10th, 2025 08:12
• Looking For A True Friend (Anthony Hanible)
  September 10th, 2025 08:09
• Looking For A True Friend (Anthony Hanible) Truth to reflect about (pun intended) A fine write
  September 10th, 2025 08:09
• the shapeshifter (Cody James) Beautifully crafted this poem shows good rhyme and meter flowing forward...
  September 10th, 2025 07:17
• Of Mongol Blood an\' Kublai Khan (Tony Grannell) Another masterpiece reminiscent of Kipling\'s work. Filled with colloquial...
  September 10th, 2025 07:13
• Eyes Closed (RSM0812) A most interesting write where the rich get rich because they know the...
  September 10th, 2025 07:04
• Journey to My Last Page (Teddy.15) A lovely write of a poetic journey that mirrors the journey of life...
  September 10th, 2025 06:29
• bully (Jim56) My father told me of his brother that ran home one day chased by bullies....
  September 10th, 2025 05:53
• Summer of Dreams (Lorna) That nostalgic desire that we all have felt wishing to return to the past....
  September 10th, 2025 05:49
• Towards me (Maplespal) The feeling that it is better to voice and vent feelings than to keep them...
  September 10th, 2025 05:48
• Suicide Note (Anandh K) Dark and tragic it speaks of the basic human need to be recognized,...
  September 10th, 2025 05:44
• the river carries her (Arqios) I don\'t know what it is about the wording of this piece but it brings to...
  September 10th, 2025 05:39
• Midnight (MatPie) Like a substance induced intoxication this poem joins fragments as it...
  September 10th, 2025 04:17
• Dream Clouds Boone Self-Meditation (Keyara S Trotman) Nicely set in the first introductory piece it becomes acrostic at the end....
  September 10th, 2025 04:14
• Coming Back To Poetry (Tom Dylan) Great metaphor and the killer was the word play at the end. Well said.
  September 10th, 2025 04:11
• DEAFENING SILENCE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) The short lines give this a rocking hypnotic feel and it sends its message...
  September 10th, 2025 04:10
• Once Upon A Word (Malcolm Gladwin) Now this is a poem with good rhyme and meter that speaks its message in...
  September 10th, 2025 04:07
• a kiss from death (MR.apocalypse) A most traumatic event cast in a rather serene and peace wording of the...
  September 10th, 2025 04:05
• I Don’t Break There Anymore (Melanie Rodriguez) Pain over loss that the reoccurrence of such pain on attempts to regain...
  September 10th, 2025 04:01
• My Best Friend (God’s Will) There is a longing in this piece that is nostalgic for a time when the...
  September 10th, 2025 03:58
• As The Train Sings (Emery Walker) A great metaphor in a real setting the two merge in meaning as one...
  September 10th, 2025 03:55
• S(WORDS) (NinjaGirl) Clever word play in the title. The poem follows suit each line with an...
  September 10th, 2025 03:51
• Repaired Day. (Goldfinch60) Good advice Gold don\'t eat left overs so to speak. Nicely done
  September 10th, 2025 03:48
• HISTORY (Isa) Such a thoughtful write full of great lines. History is written by the...
  September 9th, 2025 20:31
• For Mary Shelley (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A poem of darkness and writing. Short but conveys its message
  September 9th, 2025 19:34
• The Monster (13LaurenD) A poem of resentment and anger. Very emotionally powerful. Nicely done.
  September 9th, 2025 19:33
• Target (Haiku) (Fränz Müller) This is a wonderful senryu that I just love a fave
  September 9th, 2025 19:03
• When I was a baby (Sami Mulaj) The many children the reason for the empty bottle. Very well imaged I...
  September 9th, 2025 18:32
• \"Good night, my Fraud\" (Velvet.Riot) Problems at every turn. Sometimes it is better to just say good night. A...
  September 9th, 2025 18:30
• Sun and moon (Amethyste)
  September 9th, 2025 16:31
• Sun and moon (Amethyste) A poem, a creation story. Lovely
  September 9th, 2025 16:31
• we are (Lunarchloedip) When two differences grow on each other. A fun and novel write that shows...
  September 9th, 2025 16:06
• Be Mine (Anthony Hanible) A proposal in poetic form. A fun light hearted read
  September 9th, 2025 16:04
• Through your lenses (Sriya Rai) Heart felt and soft it calls out a caring spirit and a sense of caring....
  September 9th, 2025 13:38
• Breadcrumbing: A tale of deceit (Nicole Pritchard) A self reflecting poem of the occurrences in a relationship and the...
  September 9th, 2025 13:19
• Two Soul (JAINESH.D) Most rivers start as rivulets running down hillsides to form creeks and I...
  September 9th, 2025 13:16
• The Empty Room (Lore) Two points of view maybe only one if the other is not watching. A sad and...
  September 9th, 2025 13:13
• Explosive Inspiration (Teddy.15) Good one Teddy no I never assume that and that\'s the problem they are...
  September 9th, 2025 13:05
• How is it....? (Orchidee) Yea Orchi I think they made that a human rights violation. Fun read my...
  September 9th, 2025 13:03
• A delightful pinch (Arial) A most interesting write that provokes thought. Well done
  September 9th, 2025 10:45
• The Herd of Springboks (Gray0328) So well imaged and in poetic form this poem races along with them taking...
  September 9th, 2025 10:29
• \'Free Bird\' (Kurt Philip Behm) Loved the rhyme, message and hard hitting consecutive bits of truth a fave...
  September 9th, 2025 10:27
• An unwashed rag (Poet\'s Dream) I have felt that but unlike the rag I have not become more flexible only...
  September 9th, 2025 10:25
• Brisk temperatures at dawn and dusk herald incipient early Autumn... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A story of beauty where one lives. mother nature in all her grandeur. A...
  September 9th, 2025 10:23
• Thar She Blows (Tony Grannell) Another fave my friend. Close to heart the style that I like and so much...
  September 9th, 2025 10:21
• Valiant Thor (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A poem that prompts questions and then what seems absurd becomes a...
  September 9th, 2025 09:21
• The Broken Mirror (Rebellion_in_sanity) I could feel this one Rebellion it is painted well in images and metaphor...
  September 9th, 2025 09:19
• He is a Star ⭐️ (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A sense of tribute to one that has focus and confidence in what they do....
  September 9th, 2025 08:43
• 99.999% (Matthew R. Callies) A poem of odds and to be grateful for what we have. Nicely done
  September 9th, 2025 08:01
• John Brown\'s 55th Birthday (Randyjohnson71) Sad and tragic a tribute to a lost soul. Nicely done
  September 9th, 2025 07:59
• STORY TIME (For the Babies) (Keyara S Trotman) Thoughts that enter in and disturb the flow of a peaceful embrace. A most...
  September 9th, 2025 07:10
• Metamorphosis of Evil (Igor Vykhovanets) Another series of poems that speak of the undesirable and (evil) giving...
  September 9th, 2025 07:08
• Take the Good with the Bad (A.N.) A great metaphor it speaks to timeliness and how some things come too...
  September 9th, 2025 07:03
• Floating Strem (RSM0812) This poem is eerie and somewhat dark yet feels peaceful and serene. A...
  September 9th, 2025 06:26