Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Birth Blessings (Orchidee) Nature in all its beauty all creations and universal splendor well done...
  July 9th, 2024 10:31
• On sale (2781) This one rings with its depth in echoes of truth and lies. Lie\'s echoes...
  July 9th, 2024 09:07
• The Beauty Of Nature. (Goldfinch60) Yes it is true as attentive as one can be there are always new things to...
  July 9th, 2024 08:36
• Raw and Cold (Thomas W Case) Great images in this poem that cuts deep in its rawness.
  July 7th, 2024 17:04
• Broken Mirror (Teddy.15) A reflection? A splendid story told in such entrancing form. It seems to...
  July 7th, 2024 17:00
• UK OK? (Doggerel Dave) Politics like the weather changes constantly and is unpredictable full of...
  July 7th, 2024 16:53
• Seek First... (Orchidee) Well done Orchi first is always good.
  July 7th, 2024 15:21
• Leaves (Sorenbarrett) Thanks so much Orchi it\'s appreciated
  July 7th, 2024 15:18
• A Day Of Music. (Goldfinch60) The music of joy in this write Gold so glad that the universe is still...
  July 7th, 2024 11:38
• Forget Me Not (Teddy.15) The innocence of a child and the honesty to say what things are in their...
  July 7th, 2024 11:34
• The Fig Tree and the Bird (Parisab) Well balanced and centered taking what is clean and pure gives strength...
  July 7th, 2024 11:29
• Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60) You have got it Andy but sometimes their hands move with a pen and lies...
  July 5th, 2024 09:14
• Leading Light (Orchidee) Here some gratitude is expressed even though it is with some expectation...
  July 5th, 2024 09:10
• Dark things (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Orchi.
  July 5th, 2024 09:08
• Full Disclosure (Parisab) Nihilists, anarchists, gang or inmate matters not. Good write
  July 5th, 2024 08:25
• Into the Dark (Thomas W Case) Well if sex and chocolate won\'t save you now there is no hope. Good write...
  July 4th, 2024 14:59
• The Backbone of a Poem (Teddy.15) I agree a poem is the emotion it evokes and whether it is sad or happy it...
  July 4th, 2024 14:52
• Scary! (Orchidee) Some people have just too much time on their hands. I once met a woman who...
  July 4th, 2024 08:52
• Stars In My Life. (Goldfinch60) So true Andy and those memories often grow with time becoming even...
  July 4th, 2024 07:24
• Mango Madness (Doggerel Dave) Loved this one Dave, it reminded me of a mango tree I have in the back...
  July 4th, 2024 07:20
• Thomas\' Tale (Orchidee) Now I said the same thing and am still waiting to see. It kind of helps...
  July 3rd, 2024 11:34
• Winter’s Meadow (Teddy.15) A most beautiful sentiment and sense of temporary loss which is hoped will...
  July 3rd, 2024 11:30
• Who’s Responsible? (Doggerel Dave) The biggest question is: Why do we let them? Good write Dave like all the...
  July 3rd, 2024 06:46
• Troll (Peto) A troll indeed from the description. Vivid images in this poem. It evokes...
  July 2nd, 2024 16:07
• Prosperous Prayer (Orchidee) Good write Orchi. Why is it that people only pray when they want...
  July 2nd, 2024 12:47
• The invisible prison (Neilton) Abuse of any type is abhorrent whether to people or animals. A good write...
  July 2nd, 2024 12:42
• How? (Thomas W Case) Most people are basically narcissistic, self centered, oblivious to what...
  July 2nd, 2024 07:05
• Missive For Mercy (Orchidee) Yea I have plenty of sins but already know them so don\'t need to be told...
  July 1st, 2024 12:04
• Give with one hand (2781) It\'s all a hustle and always has been. The winner is the one that dies...
  July 1st, 2024 08:14
• the cycle ride (NafisaSB) An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
  July 1st, 2024 08:09
• 3rd Time Down (Thomas W Case) Do both Thomas. The idiot box tells me everything I should not write about...
  June 30th, 2024 16:26
• Teacher, Soldier, Athlete (Orchidee) I am no good at multi tasking. Good write Orchi
  June 30th, 2024 14:16
• Unrealistic Inclusion (Dan Williams) Love the contradictory wording that gives a sense of comedy to the...
  June 30th, 2024 12:54
• On The Great Stage Is A Poetess And An Angel (Teddy.15) At first given your last poem I thought of a humming bird then came the...
  June 30th, 2024 12:50
• Caged Hummingbird (Teddy.15) \"I wish for the day empathy opens my cage and lets me fly away?\" Ah...
  June 30th, 2024 12:44
• Guess the Fruit (Thomas W Case) What no forbidden fruit? At least Kumquats. Fun write Thomas
  June 30th, 2024 07:33
• Living forever (2781) I identify with this write. \"Enjoying life at a leisurely...
  June 29th, 2024 13:54
• The Summer of ‘49 (Cassie58) The image of snap shots plays out in the snap shot lines of this poem....
  June 29th, 2024 05:32
• Faith confronts the wayward (Orchidee) I need a lot of healing because I do a lot of erring. Good write Orchi
  June 28th, 2024 06:03
• Extraordinary Vision (Teddy.15) \"I could hear the birds having a bath in the sweetness of their own...
  June 28th, 2024 04:55
• Secrets of Slumberbash (Teddy.15) Dreams are most intriguing whether natural or metaphoric. Yes I emote in...
  June 27th, 2024 15:39
• Richness In Life. (Goldfinch60) So true indeed whether money, relationships or anything else. A thought to...
  June 27th, 2024 08:32
• Always With Me (Orchidee) Do you suffer from PTSD? Good write Orchi
  June 27th, 2024 08:28
• I Want to be your Lumberjack (Thomas W Case) A strong manly poem of wanting to return to nature. I feel you.
  June 27th, 2024 05:19
• God\'s Power in Judgement (Orchidee) I just think that when there is a tornado, hurricane, volcano, landslide,...
  June 26th, 2024 08:43
• Aggh! the heat! (Orchidee) Don\'t over heat on those over 18 poems Orchi keep cool. Good write Orchi
  June 25th, 2024 11:08
• Rural life (NafisaSB) The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I...
  June 25th, 2024 09:04
• Most high (2781) An enigma a paradox yes in many ways so. Hard for many to understand...
  June 25th, 2024 08:05
• Time Is Like A River. (Goldfinch60) You follow in the steps of Heraclitus my friend but I imagine following...
  June 25th, 2024 05:50
• Empath (Bloomingcereus) It is one who is near sighted as to emotions unable to see the close inner...
  June 25th, 2024 05:45
• Humble Pie (BlessedbyGod) A truly great message Orchi that I wish more would hear. A human write I...
  June 24th, 2024 09:48
• Back from The Future (Teddy.15) Old friendships revived such a joy a wonderful write friend showing...
  June 24th, 2024 09:38
• Dreams Worth Gold (Teddy.15) Dreams can be so kind. Such a feeling of loss and still a feeling of joy...
  June 24th, 2024 09:35
• Reigns (2781) Don\'t build on a flood plain unless you are building on high pilings....
  June 24th, 2024 07:20
• Passover Psalmings (Orchidee) Mercy, kindness, truth not a bad lot. Good write Orchi
  June 23rd, 2024 21:24
• Pain, Like Pie (Thomas W Case) Great write Thomas
  June 23rd, 2024 21:18
• Belief (Doggerel Dave) It\'s gotten to the point that I don\'t believe even half of what I see...
  June 22nd, 2024 21:26
• Onwards with Omnipresence (Orchidee) Good opening I can always use my heart being lifted. Good one Orchi
  June 22nd, 2024 17:34
• Tasting As Good. (Goldfinch60) My mother used to bake cookies and set them on brown paper to cool. My...
  June 22nd, 2024 06:10
• Life for Living (Orchidee) \"Bringing salvation to each one Who believes in you through your...
  June 21st, 2024 11:01
• Singing Clouds. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful picture painted here and the even more beautiful thought that...
  June 21st, 2024 06:00
• Reflecting in The Shower (Teddy.15) Love the positive and negative aspects of this reflection. And in the word...
  June 21st, 2024 05:51
• From Farm To Table belated Juneteenth (MLHnow) How hard to understand others even when we listen. It seems that to really...
  June 21st, 2024 05:46
• Here Comes Lucky (Thomas W Case) A fun read my friend hope you got a roof over head.
  June 20th, 2024 13:37
• Pretension (2781) If it doesn\'t ask for money it\'s your friend. Good write
  June 20th, 2024 13:33
• Secure Steps (Orchidee) The older I get the more secure need to be the steps. Good one Orchi
  June 20th, 2024 13:31
• Mantis Chat (Mutley Ravishes) Love praying mantis but then I am a bit larger than their normal prey. I...
  June 20th, 2024 13:28
• Litha Acrostic 2. (Goldfinch60) Ah a good pagan ritual that I can go along with. No increased traffic or...
  June 20th, 2024 04:18
• Jingle Bells! (Orchidee) The season man! the season! Are you trying to drive me nuts reminding me...
  June 20th, 2024 04:13
• Gratitude (Cassie58) A touching poem with a sense of tenderness. It is well penned in verse and...
  June 20th, 2024 04:05
• Redemption call (2781) Redemption to buy back. A ransom paid. The question being how was it lost,...
  June 19th, 2024 06:02
• Hilary Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Love limericks Andy and this was another good one,
  June 19th, 2024 05:18
• Fear Wears Bowling Shirts (Thomas W Case) Here here I say Thomas
  June 18th, 2024 17:07
• Nice (Alan R) I love the line that \"nice is a wrapper\" so true. There are those that...
  June 18th, 2024 17:03
• Starlink (2781) I feel the pain and can identify with promises made that sometimes come...
  June 18th, 2024 08:10
• History it is Not (Part two) (Doggerel Dave) Still going on and now Israel and Palestine. Time goes on but little...
  June 18th, 2024 08:05
• Drying Up? (Orchidee) 1,001 nights wasn\'t that an Arabian hymn? You were right Orchi about the...
  June 18th, 2024 05:36
• Tricky Ideas. (Goldfinch60) I find that a fact when I get one I have to put down everything I\'m doing...
  June 18th, 2024 04:46
• Better Life Senryu. (Goldfinch60) This view and belief keeps one eternally young. Great senryu
  June 18th, 2024 04:43
• Mind\'s Eye (Teddy.15) Facing one\'s fears and past mistakes depends on seeing them accurately...
  June 18th, 2024 04:39
• Briers and thorns (2781) Some see briars and thorns other see butter and honey it depends on who...
  June 18th, 2024 04:33
• Resilience (Cassie58) Hope is the last thing to die. A most beautiful message and poem. \"Let...
  June 17th, 2024 12:06
• Good Night, Baby (Thomas W Case) Dark and powerful words that carry an ominous tone. Unsure if it is a...
  June 17th, 2024 12:01
• Following Faithfully (Orchidee) In different beliefs this still applies and whether traditional biblical...
  June 17th, 2024 06:51
• May the Sun Die (Thomas W Case) Very nicely imaged Thomas. Beautiful
  June 16th, 2024 14:05
• Help Hymnings (Orchidee) Another nice hymn Orchi
  June 16th, 2024 14:02
• Reality becomes you. (Doggerel Dave) Indeed a truth spoken. I prefer directness to minced words but then I...
  June 16th, 2024 06:59
• Swords and spears (2781) \"Hear a little Their a little The little understand...\" A great play...
  June 16th, 2024 06:53
• Days Are Here. (Goldfinch60) Agree, counting puts the emphasis on the number not the events and if one...
  June 16th, 2024 04:39
• When the Laughter Dies (Thomas W Case) Time takes all. In the downward slide of life entropy is the winner and...
  June 16th, 2024 04:34
• Progression Pleadings (Orchidee) Once again forgiveness appears several times which is just what I need....
  June 15th, 2024 10:54
• Hmm (2781) A write I could identify with since when I looked at my listing on the net...
  June 15th, 2024 08:29
• The Talking Clock (Doggerel Dave) I needed a good chuckle this morning and this one brought it out. Set in...
  June 15th, 2024 08:25
• Another Small Tussle… (Doggerel Dave) A poetic blow? I\'ll stand on the sidelines and watch. Hope it isn\'t pay...
  June 15th, 2024 08:11
• Persevering Possibilities (Orchidee) I hope that when I sleep they do not wake me up early in the morning but...
  June 15th, 2024 08:02
• Computer Memories. (Goldfinch60) I too remember those days. I was doing punch cards and you had to be very...
  June 15th, 2024 04:49
• SOLDIERS BLEEDING (Bobby O) Loved the internal rhyme in this piece Bobby. Powerful words of rage about...
  June 14th, 2024 23:11
• River (2781) Many biblical references here (the river, tree of life, fruit, God as...
  June 14th, 2024 09:52
• And All Was Well. (Goldfinch60) I love how you are able to take a difficult moment and turn it into...
  June 14th, 2024 05:39
• Housing Crisis (Doggerel Dave) There was a time when a baby booming crowd looked back on a limited number...
  June 14th, 2024 05:36