Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Uteruses Stretch (Gray0328)
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well...
July 27th, 2024 20:12 - Passage (Eugene S.)
This bears resemblance to something epic. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 20:10 - A Smile (MendedFences27)
A smile is always welcome and can change one\'s attitude from gray to...
July 27th, 2024 20:09 - Stranger become lover (Blossompayal)
Cute and romantic. It seems a proclamation of love. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 20:07 - NIGHT SKY (Qurrathul Ain)
Well painted in words this piece poses a question that provokes a bit of...
July 27th, 2024 20:05 - ~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme) (Thad Wilk)
Unsightly I say. I wouldn\'t let a small thing like that upset the night....
July 27th, 2024 20:02 - Feminine Rage (Aneenaelzabinod)
Too bad that there is a need for feminine rage. Well written it expresses...
July 27th, 2024 19:58 - A girl I used to know (Charlotte3)
A declaration of strength nicely written giving credit to God.
July 27th, 2024 19:56 - The line (Alan R)
Most interesting. how to define the line. Nicely written.
July 27th, 2024 19:54 - sensitive (Sixthwrites)
Very nicely organized this write ends where it starts and covers the...
July 27th, 2024 19:51 - Fire pit (Tony36)
Been there done that. Sounds familiar.
July 27th, 2024 19:46 - another day (Jim56)
And so is the cycle of life. They seem to melt one into the next. Yet each...
July 27th, 2024 06:40 - Destiny of Lovers (EmaHarlan)
Great imagery throughout this piece. Nicely written it paints a picture in...
July 27th, 2024 06:38 - 3 x part of a story - \"That Night\'s Dream\" (Maplespal)
Hard hitting and powerful. These evoke emotion of the human story and are...
July 27th, 2024 06:36 - An Extraordinary Writer (Prasun Goswami)
Many words of tribute like a prayer to honor another valued for courage...
July 27th, 2024 06:31 - Everyone Dies Twice (JaxolotlPoems)
A message nicely stated in poetic form. Well done
July 27th, 2024 06:27 - Where Peace Lies (Mya)
Wonderful imagery in a peaceful poem where I feel release so nicely...
July 27th, 2024 06:24 - Truth And Trouble (Cancelled) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great message sent in verse and nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 06:23 - Ceremony (2781)
\"If USA could find four hundred and fifty, they could call elite..
How...
July 27th, 2024 06:21 - Outsiders (Neville)
Neville this metaphoric poem resonates out of my past into my present....
July 27th, 2024 06:17 - Paper Bag (Olive Anderson)
Personification at its best in the first person with great imagery. Nicely...
July 27th, 2024 06:14 - Cosmic Luv (A.H. Browning)
A most fun read but upon reflection it becomes an allegory and applicable...
July 27th, 2024 06:11 - SIT AT HOME (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
War is a terrible thing that touches all. It cares not for innocence but...
July 27th, 2024 06:07 - Misconception (Sassy Lou)
Some very nice lines here. A plea for understanding evoking feelings of...
July 27th, 2024 06:05 - Hello, My Brother Gemini (ADarkerMind)
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader....
July 27th, 2024 06:02 - Utopia (David A Liebermann)
It is true that only us can determine our happiness nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 06:00 - Underestimating Eugene (Dan Williams)
Quite the story turned into an allegory. Great write Dan.
July 27th, 2024 05:57 - And You\'re a Madman (Bibekanand \'Agyat\')
Several thought provoking ideas here cloaked in metaphor and ready to be...
July 27th, 2024 05:52 - Taste Bud Duel (Doggerel Dave)
A fun read Dave yes some spirits I stay away from. (Just personal taste)...
July 27th, 2024 05:50 - Tranquil Evening (Dev Parth)
A beautiful image in a wonderful Haiku
July 27th, 2024 05:47 - Paradox of All (FallingAwake2)
A painted picture in words of a philosophical view. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 05:45 - *The tree* (Antra.sharma_)
A great metaphor here. Not strange that there was a tree of life and a...
July 27th, 2024 05:43 - Roll the Tape (Tristan Robert Lange)
There\'s a roll to this piece. It has rhythm and rhyme nicely done
July 27th, 2024 05:41 - The Day Of The Lord (Mark The Phenomenon)
Some great lines in this piece with metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 05:39 - INCIDENCE (Bobby O)
Bobby this weaving of concepts with consequences makes a tapestry of word...
July 27th, 2024 05:37 - Earth\'s Most Wanted (Mutley Ravishes)
I liked the way that the idea of false beliefs was personified and spoke...
July 27th, 2024 05:33 - Under a sky of celadon - (Amy Michelle Mosier)
An image filled vision here full of vivid visual pictures. Lovely
July 27th, 2024 05:31 - Another Beautiful Day. (Goldfinch60)
A pastoral painting projecting peace which is what this world needs. A...
July 27th, 2024 05:10 - I\'ll Be Home (Thomas W Case)
Beautiful images and metaphors in this poem that is loaded with great...
July 27th, 2024 05:06 - There Was Ample Pain (Satishverma)
It gives one pause and causes one to ponder. Mind boggling.
July 26th, 2024 20:54 - A Divine Reflection (Rrodriguez)
Nice rhyme and flow to this poem. Well done.
July 26th, 2024 20:52 - Maybe It\'s Not For Me (13LaurenD)
A great deal of existential questioning in this poem. It is not how much...
July 26th, 2024 20:49 - the (Jon Nakapalau)
A great message in this one word per line poem. Loved it.
July 26th, 2024 20:46 - Never laugh in your face (Anabasova)
Clear and to the point a statement of taking your back. Well done
July 26th, 2024 20:45 - SOMEONE\'S WORDS (Mompu)
This contains the essence of what I call poetry. If it evokes feeling it...
July 26th, 2024 20:43 - To the Bride and Groom (Teddy.15)
A Haiku well done.
July 26th, 2024 20:37 - neither cleanliness nor godliness do I abide (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Many such comic remembered now lost in the dust of the past. Thanks for...
July 26th, 2024 20:36 - Meister (Introverted Sage)
Entertaining read
July 26th, 2024 20:33 - At the Bottom (Thoughtless)
seductively sensuous.
July 26th, 2024 20:31 - God my saviour (Sifiso ngoma)
Very nice
July 26th, 2024 20:30 - Where are you my love (Gloria Denise)
This poem leaves me with feelings of abandonment which is always...
July 26th, 2024 12:58 - Meadows (MendedFences27)
This poem brought on feelings of the past and the cycle of life as it goes...
July 26th, 2024 12:55 - Beauty in the Sky (Annemarie)
Nicely said. Love clouds and the images they make as well as their...
July 26th, 2024 12:51 - The squirrel (Michael William Reid)
Well described I have been amongst many of these wily creatures....
July 26th, 2024 12:49 - Salubrious Retreat (Gray0328)
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very...
July 26th, 2024 12:46 - The Road Not Taken! (Antra.sharma_)
Hope there is not too much Frost on that road. It makes for slippery...
July 26th, 2024 12:43 - My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case)
I think I know him he sounds just like a guy I know. I don\'t like him...
July 26th, 2024 12:40 - Full Circle (Kurt Philip Behm)
Vague enough to keep the mind working, vivid enough to understand, in...
July 26th, 2024 12:36 - ~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal (Thad Wilk)
Have tried that pill sometimes it works and sometimes not its all a matter...
July 26th, 2024 12:33 - The righteous side (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Been there done that. This touches deeper than a ice pic to the heart and...
July 26th, 2024 12:31 - falling (Sixthwrites)
There you created an image of the soft serve ice cream tipping and falling...
July 26th, 2024 12:29 - inspired by a painting. (Maplespal)
A painting in words about a painting in paint. Meta I say. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:27 - Parent\'s Fighting (Tony36)
Sad but too common to say it is not normal. This one strikes close to the...
July 26th, 2024 12:25 - The Little Girl (The Night Owl)
Time teaches many lessons although not all of them are pleasant. Very nice
July 26th, 2024 12:23 - Poem for Bharat (Desdichado)
Every country has its problems. The US full of laziness, arrogance, and...
July 26th, 2024 12:21 - Tin Cups And Shacks (Garth Rakumakoe)
Well put I have tried all and would have to agree. The tin cup with a...
July 26th, 2024 12:05 - A Tinnitus Ear (Saleh Ben Saleh)
A most interesting image here or should I say hear. Well written
July 26th, 2024 06:10 - Day One (Yourz Truly 2.0)
A collage of images as the mind makes its way along past and familiar...
July 26th, 2024 06:08 - Shadows (MendedFences27)
A questioning of one\'s mental state is always a good sign. Those that...
July 26th, 2024 06:06 - A Mother\'s Devotion (NDOU ROLIVHUWA)
A most beautiful tribute to a mother. No purer love that that of a mother.
July 26th, 2024 06:03 - Portrait (MA-Q)
Duality in all things. Very oriental I loved this perspective and have...
July 26th, 2024 06:01 - to know (DeadRose)
A statement of position and status a definition and stance. Well done
July 26th, 2024 05:58 - …. my darling (Gloria Denise)
July 26th, 2024 05:56 - …. my darling (Gloria Denise)
A pledge of love that seems most likely romantic but could be to a child...
July 26th, 2024 05:56 - The Deep Dark Hole (The Struggler)
A wonderful metaphor and a powerful write. Nicely done
July 26th, 2024 05:54 - Soul Wars (John Prophet)
A most interesting choice of format one word at a time as if machinegun...
July 26th, 2024 05:52 - I am An Eagle (Mark The Phenomenon)
Beware of poachers looking for feathers. Great write and positive
July 26th, 2024 05:50 - Stuck On Repeat (Jojojoking)
Yes even that repeating message on hold keeps going on and on. They say...
July 26th, 2024 05:48 - Sky Dream (Rrodriguez)
A beautiful thought and image. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 05:46 - Meaning of Life (James Michael)
Close to a record for the shortest poem but with meaning as well. You are...
July 26th, 2024 05:44 - Family Secrets (Garth Rakumakoe)
Those \"taboo fingers\" are always tucked away in \"cold stone\" not to be...
July 26th, 2024 05:43 - A Beautiful Day (Bibekanand \'Agyat\')
A beautiful attitude and message all in one set with a marvelous image. It...
July 26th, 2024 05:41 - Lanterns (Framed Mirror)
A not only beautifully imaged write but metaphorically deep in meaning....
July 26th, 2024 05:39 - DIAMOND (Qurrathul Ain)
A gem of a poem. It sparkles and shines as a metaphor. Beautifully mined...
July 26th, 2024 05:35 - The Death Of Coolio (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Remember him and it seems by this tribute you do as well. Well written.
July 26th, 2024 05:33 - Laphroaig. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds so inviting I think I\'ll make a stop by just to say hello. Lovely...
July 26th, 2024 05:31 - Love Delivered (Cocamedo)
A most beautiful lullaby poem. Well done
July 26th, 2024 05:27 - In Our Hours (Orchidee)
Nicely written and a nice hope for those with religious belief. Well done...
July 26th, 2024 05:26 - SWEET SIN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
In symbols clear a picture is painted here. Sexual liberation has happened...
July 26th, 2024 05:23 - Dancing Flames (Dev Parth)
A wonderful use of imagery to paint a picture in words and metaphor. Fire...
July 26th, 2024 05:19 - Happy Birthday To You (Mya)
Sweet, cute and endearing are terms that come to mind with the feel of...
July 26th, 2024 05:10 - By Invitation Only (Neville)
Anthropomorphism at its best. A most picturesque ride through a scenic...
July 26th, 2024 05:08 - bird of prey (Jim56)
This paints a familiar picture from younger days and feels very peaceful....
July 26th, 2024 05:04 - But What Of Love? (Teddy.15)
When it comes to love I feel that all are lost. In its pendulum swing love...
July 26th, 2024 04:44 - my day today (Maplespal)
Poems come and go through one\'s head and here is represented the day\'s...
July 25th, 2024 06:28 - If You Are A Human Being (Satishverma)
Here religious belief is a metaphor for love and relationships. Many great...
July 25th, 2024 06:26 - Blissful Reverie (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful images painted in words of praise. Well done
July 25th, 2024 06:24 - For you (Gloria Denise)
We all want to be special to someone we want to be valued, cared for,...
July 25th, 2024 06:22 - The Truth And The False (Bibekanand \'Agyat\')
Duality defined and a wonderful piece put into such few words. Brilliant
July 25th, 2024 06:20 - The Lutenist (MendedFences27)
Magnificent, set in a classical form it carries on with the last lines...
July 25th, 2024 06:19
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