Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Beauty In The Pain (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A poem with a message that all things have a positive side written in...
October 30th, 2024 06:02 - everybody ages (Jim56)
So true Jim I keep asking where has the time gone?
October 30th, 2024 06:00 - untitled (autumn sijo) (Arqios)
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
October 30th, 2024 05:49 - 6 poorly written poems sorry (Maplespal)
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this...
October 30th, 2024 05:05 - Hail (Neville)
Nature strikes back. Am I hypersensitive Neville or are there some hidden...
October 30th, 2024 05:00 - A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15)
Beautiful positive and encouraging. Yes keep writing Teddy!
October 30th, 2024 04:51 - Bad To Best. (Goldfinch60)
Gold I have for many years believed that everything happens for the best...
October 30th, 2024 04:48 - Corridors of Decaying Dreams (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very well written with great imagery and so seasonal as well. A spooky...
October 30th, 2024 04:41 - We Are Worthy (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Great thoughts in your write and well expressed.
October 29th, 2024 16:13 - Woodstock Summer (Gray0328)
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic...
October 29th, 2024 13:38 - The Invisible (Tristan Robert Lange)
Isolation felt more by some than others. Humans are social animals and we...
October 29th, 2024 12:18 - Reminders (Jojojoking)
A wistful poem in more than one way. It speaks to the bonds of friendship...
October 29th, 2024 12:14 - ~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Sounds familiar. Think I tried it but built up an immunity. For the hard...
October 29th, 2024 12:12 - A Wish (Kerry)
A great message with a most positive focus. Lovely
October 29th, 2024 09:05 - Sounds the knell (Lorenz)
Powerful words in a powerful poem. Some great lines as well (killer widow...
October 29th, 2024 09:03 - Starvation (Sunshine777)
An empathetic heart is heard in this poem. Hungry children pull at the...
October 29th, 2024 08:19 - Dark Hallway (Tony36)
We all look to our fears to find what lies inside. A poem deeper than at...
October 29th, 2024 08:16 - SWIMMING IN MORONIC DREAMS (Rebellion_in_sanity)
An so were named the seas and moon anciently, the moon a she the sun a he...
October 29th, 2024 08:14 - let the fireworks fly (Jim56)
Such an upbeat and fun poem of celebration. Loved it.
October 29th, 2024 05:04 - Whispers of a Wandering Soul (Arqios)
Beautifully stated is such solid verse it sounds classic and serves as a...
October 29th, 2024 05:03 - The Last Word (Tom Dylan)
I love how I was lulled into the rhyme to be hit in the face with the last...
October 29th, 2024 04:58 - Unilaterally Mine (Neville)
I think you have something there Neville. I like the taste of that.
October 29th, 2024 04:50 - An Old Fashioned Soul (Teddy.15)
What a simple world it would be if the smile was always guaranteed....
October 29th, 2024 04:09 - Croquet Again Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A fun read where I felt like I was there. Thanks for the invitation my...
October 29th, 2024 03:52 - If We (Sunshine777)
A good question as to what love really is and what most call love is...
October 28th, 2024 19:55 - Universal Suffrage for All..! (Doggerel Dave)
In the US election this would apply. Who do you vote for if your choice is...
October 28th, 2024 19:47 - The mask (Neilton)
A strong metaphor. We all wear a mask most of us wear many. To remove that...
October 28th, 2024 19:41 - Stuck (Orchidee)
Not too much water please. Nice to read you again.
October 28th, 2024 17:01 - Coldplay (Neilton)
A fun read and reminder of past conserts
October 28th, 2024 16:58 - The Womb (Thomas W Case)
This one I have been there wishing to be back in the womb pulling a...
October 28th, 2024 13:41 - Marienburg (Lorenz)
Historical and metaphorical the end of the vanquished and in some ways the...
October 28th, 2024 13:39 - Cold it is (Maplespal)
Been there done that but no more cold for me. Nicely written in verse this...
October 28th, 2024 10:01 - Wandering2 (John Prophet)
Life an endless treck of learning and experiences. Poetically said
October 28th, 2024 09:59 - Walking the beach (Tony36)
A picturesque image painted but with metaphoric meaning as well. We all...
October 28th, 2024 09:58 - Soul Ascendant (Tristan Robert Lange)
The recognition of strength in another and one\'s own weakness\' is a sign...
October 28th, 2024 09:55 - ~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ] (Thad Wilk)
A beautiful tribute to a father on a special day. Most lovely and lovingly...
October 28th, 2024 09:53 - Caro (Kerry)
A fun read I know that in Italian it means my dear in Spanish it means...
October 28th, 2024 09:50 - snowfall (Jim56)
A lovely sight welcomed by me in my childhood. Well written and rhymed
October 28th, 2024 09:41 - Another Moment Lost (Neville)
Carpe diem, those that hesitate are lost. Some opportunities come only...
October 28th, 2024 09:39 - Nothing (Tristan Robert Lange)
So true at face vallue and underneath lies a deeper meaning. It may be...
October 28th, 2024 08:42 - Oktoberfest (Arqios)
Love limericks and this one served two purposes. It made me smile and...
October 28th, 2024 08:33 - Just One Day. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy one step at a time is the only way to reach the goal very...
October 28th, 2024 05:05 - Unrepentant Ventriloquist (Dan Williams)
A story all too familiar, upon hearing it I always check my own shadow to...
October 28th, 2024 04:45 - Whispers To The Ocean (Young Fella)
Very mesmerizing and the back and forth conversation seemed to imitate the...
October 27th, 2024 16:43 - ~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry ) (Thad Wilk)
Thieves they are. Had them try to pilfer from me too. When was younger...
October 27th, 2024 15:07 - Try \"What Was I Thinking\" Eh? (Cheeky Missy)
Too much work makes Cheeky tired and sad. Thanks for sharing the everyday...
October 27th, 2024 15:04 - The Mask of Deception (Ezekiel Olayemi)
Nicely written this poem is applicable to everything from society, to...
October 27th, 2024 08:48 - TALKING ENVELOPE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A wake up call to action. Beautifully written.
October 27th, 2024 08:45 - ying and yang (Devil_dear)
A very thoughtful piece that provokes the reader to think deeper than the...
October 27th, 2024 08:43 - SINKING SHIP (Ezekiel Olayemi)
A great metaphor that is applicable in each stanza and line it applies to...
October 27th, 2024 08:41 - Be the light (Tony36)
A great message Tony
October 27th, 2024 08:20 - My Father, Scholar of the Unwritten Halls (Gray0328)
Ivory walls are not needed for knowledge they are just a right of passage...
October 27th, 2024 06:10 - That day\'s call (Maplespal)
A great set up to the story in this poem. We often blame others for our...
October 27th, 2024 06:07 - Vincent (Lorenz)
You know Vincent well he would have liked this poem. It\'s words in swirls...
October 27th, 2024 06:05 - winters night (Jim56)
In this poem the repetition feels like the continual returning of thoughts...
October 27th, 2024 05:54 - together with heavy hearts (Arqios)
This hits close to home and so is read with a bias. It captures the heart...
October 27th, 2024 05:52 - Blinking Being Partially Deaf (Kerry)
Any deficit becomes an obstacle, remember we all have them they are just...
October 27th, 2024 05:49 - THE SNAKES INTERWINE (Rebellion_in_sanity)
I love this topic so phiosophical it is ripe for poetic expression and...
October 27th, 2024 05:41 - Medlar to Blet (Neville)
There is an unexplicable element about this poem that feels like it has...
October 27th, 2024 05:31 - Home Full Of Cheer. (Goldfinch60)
Contentment comes from completion and so it seems that your day was full...
October 27th, 2024 05:19 - Voices from my Ashes (Parizaad Hafi)
The insanity of war no matter what side you are on there are no winners...
October 26th, 2024 17:54 - Osseous Oubliette (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most interesting inside view. Meditation from the inside out. Lovely
October 26th, 2024 17:49 - Assets of the Soul (Gray0328)
Beautiful words that tell of the human spirit in its daily journey Loved
October 26th, 2024 14:23 - Lose-Lose, Old News, New War (Parisab)
War devours its worshipers as well as the innocent. I think of Israel and...
October 26th, 2024 14:04 - ~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You! (Thad Wilk)
Many of us have love affairs with things that hurt us. We often take abuse...
October 26th, 2024 11:58 - Let It Be What It Be, Howsoever, I-- (Cheeky Missy)
Your manner of writing is most entertaining. A fun read
October 26th, 2024 11:55 - XENOPHOBIC PATRIOT (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Glad to see this Rebellion it takes courage to post controversial writes...
October 26th, 2024 09:22 - My eyes are crying for me (Dev Parth)
A sad write of pain and loss. Nicely composed and with some good lines it...
October 26th, 2024 09:15 - Dear mother (Lorenz)
So full of metaphor and great lines (I was born in the desire of a false...
October 26th, 2024 09:12 - Books (Tony36)
Agreed Tony they are amazing things. Writting, one of the greatest...
October 26th, 2024 09:02 - Halfway to Hanoi (Neville)
Once again you provoke the thoughts of the reader, or maybe I am just...
October 26th, 2024 09:00 - in the light (Arqios)
Cryptic this write speaks of how a lie continued out of fear can dispell...
October 26th, 2024 08:35 - angel love (Jim56)
Romance in a poem full of fanciful flight to the heights of love
October 26th, 2024 08:19 - Trust (2781)
A poem of faith upon which religious belief is built. Nicely written
October 26th, 2024 04:50 - Sixty Minute Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
Ah yes such a nice dream because once the bank did deposit a good sum in...
October 26th, 2024 04:47 - Slightly Different Views (Dan Williams)
I liked this approach. It is full of mind provoking thoughts and pushes...
October 26th, 2024 04:38 - The Sibilance Of Showers. (Goldfinch60)
Ahh Gold I have been there so many times and your words took me back to...
October 26th, 2024 04:01 - Color Captivation (Tristan Robert Lange)
Such a great start to the revelation of the autum tree. A lovely colorfull...
October 25th, 2024 14:06 - The Consolation of Boethius (Gray0328)
A beautiful poem of the persistance of the human spirit. Wonderfully...
October 25th, 2024 12:26 - My Dragon (RSM0812)
A fun and at the same time engaging very nice
October 25th, 2024 10:55 - This Time Last Year (Tom Dylan)
Sad and somewhat haunting and so well done.
October 25th, 2024 10:22 - ~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody- (Thad Wilk)
Bravo! A great Halloween poem it reminds me a little of the movie Secret...
October 25th, 2024 10:21 - I think I\'m too loud (Dev Parth)
Have been there and felt that. It yells in its silence but remains unheard...
October 25th, 2024 09:13 - Haiku 2 (Kerry)
A series of Haikus each with its own appeal. Nicely done
October 25th, 2024 09:08 - The Child (Tony36)
Sad story too often true. Life by hard knocks and pulling oneself up by...
October 25th, 2024 08:12 - in the mirror (Arqios)
Beautifully writen this poem gives beauty to what many try to hide. What...
October 25th, 2024 08:11 - Darkness\'s trap & Endless Night (Maplespal)
Some similarity to Dylan Thomas here. having had general anesthesia before...
October 25th, 2024 05:14 - good days bad days (Jim56)
Some times not knowing is the best, like a wrapped present it is a...
October 25th, 2024 05:07 - Spread Too Thin (Tom Dylan)
The set up was perfect for the fin.... Distractions occur when too many...
October 25th, 2024 05:05 - Who am I ? (Lorenz)
All things to all people. I liked the feel of this one as it seemed to...
October 25th, 2024 05:00 - Turning to Song? (Orchidee)
Wishing you well and hoping for a speedy return to your writing
October 25th, 2024 04:57 - Inaudible Sounds (Neville)
This is one I had not thought of before. Silence or the absense of sound...
October 25th, 2024 04:54 - Fake ID (Teddy.15)
Makes me nervous I got a Ph.D. but seldom wear a suit these days. Don\'t...
October 25th, 2024 04:45 - Home We Will Come Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Reminiscing of such things seems rejuvinating and envigorating. Peaceful...
October 25th, 2024 04:22 - amore tardius occidit (Thomas W Case)
Great metaphor Thomas with some vivid images that paint the picture
October 24th, 2024 15:08 - innocence (NinjaGirl)
Dark and sad but with hope. Very nicely said
October 24th, 2024 13:40 - avalanche (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most interesting read and yes the mind holds broken shards that it tries...
October 24th, 2024 13:38 - Silent Screams of the Butterfly (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most poignant poem written in great metaphor. As a psychologist I...
October 24th, 2024 13:01 - I\'m Deeply Introvert (Dev Parth)
A dark write about a dark feeling. I love the night and the shade so...
October 24th, 2024 12:19 - ~> When An Old Man Dies (Thad Wilk)
Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well...
October 24th, 2024 12:16
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