Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Positive Praises (Orchidee) A wonderful hymn of praise and acknowledgement.
  January 1st, 2024 08:57
• Locker Room Logic (Thomas W Case) When I used to work out, so many were so infatuated with their bodies that...
  December 31st, 2023 13:01
• For a living (Alan R) I like poems that ask questions. The repetitive asking of the one question...
  December 31st, 2023 12:50
• Visit Verified (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn Orchi. Very appropriate for the season.
  December 31st, 2023 12:47
• Me? A Rugby Nut! (Goldfinch60) Yes and a world where Americans spoke proper English.
  December 31st, 2023 05:04
• Repair (2781) The national anthem of most nations. But it may go deeper as a metaphor...
  December 30th, 2023 10:34
• Water of Life (Orchidee) I wonder if people in those days had a difficult a time understanding...
  December 30th, 2023 09:18
• Through Troubled Times (Orchidee) Always trying to second guess why things happen to us. I find it best to...
  December 30th, 2023 04:27
• Truth sets you free (NafisaSB) True. It is \"a tangled web we weave when frist we practice to deceive\"...
  December 29th, 2023 05:30
• Generous Life. (Goldfinch60) Indeed my friend for many many more.
  December 29th, 2023 05:10
• A Snog is For Life Not Just for Christmas (Neville) We all tolerate the intolerable when love is involved. This brings it...
  December 28th, 2023 12:50
• Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble (Parisab) What a great way of portraying the way of the world today countering what...
  December 28th, 2023 09:10
• Echoes of the past (Chiki1601) A great way of introcucing the interweaving of intricacies in history....
  December 28th, 2023 09:08
• Mute Generation (NafisaSB) A call to be human and a great message to all of us. Well written
  December 28th, 2023 09:05
• Raise (2781) This prayer or poem, which ever you wish, is a plea for acceptance and...
  December 28th, 2023 09:04
• OUR LOVE SONG (My Boy Ryngkhlem) A great metaphor and well said in this poem of love.
  December 28th, 2023 09:02
• I was Here (The Struggler) I think we all have felt this way and maybe written a poem like this. It...
  December 28th, 2023 08:57
• Another chance (Alan R) Love all the images \"Fresh as a cirtus bleeding onto mint leaves\" so...
  December 28th, 2023 08:55
• Genuine Fakes Going Dirt Cheap (Neville) Neville this structure takes this poem a step above the subject itself....
  December 28th, 2023 08:53
• Prepared For The Worst (Billionaire Bunkers) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A frightening thought and something to keep our eyes on.
  December 28th, 2023 08:51
• Be Kind (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) \"Let darkness fear the light\" what a great ending. The message is a good...
  December 28th, 2023 08:49
• Legacy (E Naughton) The question of destiny a good start. The image of a flame does it burn...
  December 28th, 2023 08:47
• Lost for Words (Tom Dylan) Every word is right it it comes from the heart, is yours and eays what you...
  December 28th, 2023 08:45
• Bacon versus Bacon (GillyFitz) BLT\'s are my favorite sandwitch but this poem is a metafor for the...
  December 28th, 2023 08:42
• Not (Walrus) A great message set to verse. Well done
  December 28th, 2023 08:40
• Innocents Immolated (Orchidee) An echo of the killing of infants that led Moses\' mother to place him in...
  December 28th, 2023 05:00
• Breakfast Music. (Goldfinch60) Funny how classics in any genre are unknown to younger generations. It...
  December 28th, 2023 03:43
• Butterflies (Alan R) A very pensive piece that echoes wisdom in beauty of verse.
  December 27th, 2023 11:45
• Practical Points (Orchidee) One can not give what one does not have, whether in wealth or in wisdom...
  December 27th, 2023 11:42
• Dreaming On. (Goldfinch60) Imagine as John Lennon said. A wonderful message for all at this time of...
  December 27th, 2023 04:08
• Kings and Queens Die, While I Train Kittens (Thomas W Case) Finding the extraordinary in the ordinary is a gift.
  December 26th, 2023 11:35
• Get it (2781) Great words with hidden meaning and wisdom
  December 26th, 2023 09:40
• Martyr Manifest (Orchidee) A great message Orchi. That from the tragedy of one could come the...
  December 26th, 2023 05:39
• Glorious Graces (Orchidee) Orchi I have often thought that many of your hymns need a greater outlet....
  December 25th, 2023 06:03
• The Fog (Mtrotter1) Such a wonderful message of love and longing. Nicely written
  December 24th, 2023 14:28
• You Don\'t Rub the Back of My Head Anymore (Thomas W Case) Sadly this is the fate of most love or should I call it passion. I felt...
  December 24th, 2023 14:07
• The Weight We Carry (Gray0328) \"Deep inside him, he hears the hum of a boy’s dream\" a great line. All...
  December 24th, 2023 14:04
• Party Line (Gray0328) This one brought back many childhood memories when we had an old black...
  December 24th, 2023 13:47
• If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come (Gray0328) I loved your opening and great images \"Where the raccoon is but a hot tar...
  December 24th, 2023 13:42
• candle love (Reynaldo Casison) This one is so short and its imagery is so clear that like that light it...
  December 24th, 2023 06:22
• Pure Disbelief (Gray0328) The image is indelible in the mind and as all good poems are marked by...
  December 24th, 2023 06:20
• Is It The Tree Or Me? (Mtrotter1) I liked the retrograde form of this poem getting younger not older. I too...
  December 24th, 2023 06:18
• Blessings To All. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for such a bright Christmas message Gold. It rings with brightness...
  December 24th, 2023 06:16
• evergreen (Asrealastheycome) I liked the opening \"I walk a fine line between dreams and reality\" so...
  December 24th, 2023 06:14
• What He Really Wants for Christmas (Neville) That\'s what I had on my Christmas list, how did you know? Great write...
  December 24th, 2023 06:11
• The poet (Illia) A great homage to a writer. Nicely done
  December 24th, 2023 06:06
• Destined meeting (Calliope) This poem struck some chords deep inside. It reads smoothly and I loved...
  December 24th, 2023 06:05
• Windy Dreams (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Great images and metaphors. I particularly liked \"windy dreams\"
  December 24th, 2023 06:01
• The Velveteen Hills (Jaxxie) A great portrayal of the seasons, whether in weather or in life seasons...
  December 24th, 2023 06:00
• Prophecy Proclaimed (Orchidee) Great timing with this poem or hymn. On the advent of Christ\'s birth the...
  December 24th, 2023 05:57
• Family Fulfillings (Orchidee) A timely and great story Orchi. I kind of feel that Joseph didn\'t get the...
  December 23rd, 2023 13:02
• Happy Birthday Chet (Goldfinch60) Every time I hear that someone has a birthday I am reminded of how much...
  December 23rd, 2023 06:35
• Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection (Pop64) This required two readings and was worth much more. A heartfelt plea of...
  December 22nd, 2023 12:04
• Understanding Silence. (Goldfinch60) I always enjoyed the sound of silence. I think that I do understand...
  December 21st, 2023 04:34
• Scripture Sureties (Orchidee) Well done Orchi
  December 20th, 2023 09:04
• Questions of another type (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Dave I appreciate the review
  December 19th, 2023 21:54
• A Hell for Words and Lines that Wander (Thomas W Case) What a great metaphor. I hope that you didn\'t step on this one. Bugs have...
  December 19th, 2023 07:25
• A Babe\'s Birth (Orchidee) Timely and well said Orchi
  December 19th, 2023 07:21
• Life\'s Exam. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold a great analogy and metaphor
  December 19th, 2023 07:18
• I Need To Visit France (Thomas W Case) Some dreams can be unfulfilled and frustrating.
  December 14th, 2023 12:29
• The Cats Played. (Goldfinch60) I love your poems on music, they remind me of how much I love music.
  December 14th, 2023 12:24
• Grindavíkurbær (Eugene S.) I could feel the angst in this piece. Anxiety is high now days. Good
  December 14th, 2023 12:21
• Caught Out Cryptically (Orchidee) Good write Orchi. Just kidding. Oh no I didn\'t mean it wasn\'t a good...
  December 14th, 2023 12:14
• Mary Celeste. (Goldfinch60) I remember this story. Puzzling and ghost like. Enjoyed the story.
  December 6th, 2023 07:02
• SERBIA: CHANEL 22 ON BOARD (Natalie Gladmir) A pleasant trip whether in reality or in the poem itself. A most...
  December 6th, 2023 06:57
• Wisdom of old (1) (Doggerel Dave) I didn’t think anyone retired anymore. I did but keep working so what...
  December 3rd, 2023 07:50
• Advent Anticipation (Orchidee) A timely write for this time of the year well done Orchi
  December 3rd, 2023 07:43
• Like a Butterfly Melting (Thomas W Case) The obsession of love is well expressed here. Nice images.
  November 26th, 2023 15:43
• the devils love (Joshi) A well written and composed, powerful poem with references to many archaic...
  November 25th, 2023 09:29
• N-tropy (Arqios) English a funny non phonetic language. N-joyed it
  November 25th, 2023 08:54
• pitcher plant (Arqios) Wise and it seems almost Taoist and a little Zen
  November 25th, 2023 08:53
• Exodus Explainings (Orchidee) Always liked the story of Moses. Good write Orchi
  November 25th, 2023 08:17
• Computing Starts. (Goldfinch60) I too remember before computers and when I was in college I was doing...
  November 25th, 2023 08:15
• Love Of A Woman. (Goldfinch60) So true and such a wise write in so few words Gold
  November 21st, 2023 12:38
• I am Wondering (Cedrick) So well done.
  November 21st, 2023 12:36
• Fever (Doggerel Dave) So glad that there will be an encore. A scary story indeed but adressed...
  November 21st, 2023 12:32
• Creaks (2781) So well worded and written.It gives pause and brings on many thoughts. Age...
  November 21st, 2023 12:27
• New And Old (Orchidee) A great message that interestingly enough I had incorporated a piece of in...
  November 14th, 2023 12:13
• Fallen (Teddy.15) A poem so full of sorrow and missing someone. It touches the heart
  November 14th, 2023 12:10
• One Day More. (Goldfinch60) Each day is special and so is this poem
  November 14th, 2023 12:08
• Guilt of Longing (Firefall) A strong poem with a sense of loss.
  October 26th, 2023 11:12
• Painter of the Sky (Rhmn_7) A beautiful picture painted in words. Very nice
  October 26th, 2023 11:09
• Simple Seeking (Orchidee) Good write Orchi
  October 26th, 2023 11:05
• Sheep In Uniform (Teddy.15) At first I thought that you were referring to so many different episodes...
  October 17th, 2023 08:51
• No one (Sorenbarrett) Thanks for the read Teddy your comments always humble me.
  October 17th, 2023 08:43
• Wishful Thinking (Pop64) A great message that is long overdue in happening. In wars and battles it...
  October 17th, 2023 07:25
• Blue (Novaa) Blue a two edged sword. The color or the sky and sea my favorite of all...
  October 17th, 2023 07:20
• Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird (Thomas W Case) You might want to check out my poem \"Mockingbird\"
  October 17th, 2023 05:21
• Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird (Thomas W Case) I like mockingbirds and have watched them from mating, egg laying, raising...
  October 17th, 2023 05:19
• Significant, We (L. B. Mek) \"Crimson skies when I cry\" A wonderful line. \"As our...
  October 16th, 2023 05:19
• Digging Up Roads. (Goldfinch60) This seems to be a common experience. In Florida they always wait until...
  October 16th, 2023 04:30
• Digits (2781) If he does I hope that he knows what he\'s doing. It seems that all past...
  October 15th, 2023 09:53
• Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon. (Teddy.15) Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help...
  October 15th, 2023 06:58
• ANOTHER FACE 🎭 (ChrisLyn🕊) Fake friends have always been a problem but it seems that they are more...
  October 14th, 2023 04:43
• That Day In 1066. (Goldfinch60) Well I have to say I\'m glad I wasn\'t there, I hate showers of arrows. I...
  October 14th, 2023 04:36
• Make Haste To Hastings! (Orchidee) Happy birthday Hastings. I\'m glad I\'m not that old. Don\'t like fighting...
  October 14th, 2023 04:26
• Bombarded (L. B. Mek) I have often questioned is it just more visible with media in every place...
  October 13th, 2023 07:48
• Memories Of Brubeck. (Goldfinch60) This was a flash from my past, growing up with this sound. A lovely...
  October 13th, 2023 05:18
• Proverb Pieces 2 (Orchidee) True your name is what you are and training your children to follow with...
  October 12th, 2023 05:44
•   It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15) An upbeat thought and sense of freedom to wonder where ever we like even...
  October 12th, 2023 05:03