Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Warm cosy jacket (Amethyste) Wearing one\'s love is a very romantic thought. Nicely done
  September 1st, 2025 16:59
• Whispers in the Rain (Aurora1) A sense of sadness pervades this poem. Well written
  September 1st, 2025 13:25
• Loyalty\'s promise (Natalie Heisey) A broken world indeed and nicely written
  September 1st, 2025 13:21
• NO CO-STAR... (Cerry) A novel approach where all the world is a stage or at least that is what...
  September 1st, 2025 13:18
• Scratching the Surface of a Woman\'s Smile (Teddy.15) That explains it all. Good girls like bad boys and good boys like bad...
  September 1st, 2025 12:55
• The Keeper of The Flame (KnightOfCups) A light house can be a person as well and seems so in this metaphor of a...
  September 1st, 2025 11:45
• A secret in love (Sonal monhyung) Considering a relationship serious enough to think about and delay until...
  September 1st, 2025 11:43
• The River Knows the Way (GeekSusie) One needs to judge one\'s strength to swim against the current and to...
  September 1st, 2025 11:37
• Christmas eve (Arial) Time moves on and the first signs of year end and the winter of Christmas...
  September 1st, 2025 11:35
• Three For Monday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Three good writes I identify with the first that just seems to be part of...
  September 1st, 2025 11:32
• what else is there to say? (NinjaGirl) In a tear drop shape this poem speaks of pain that they did not cause....
  September 1st, 2025 11:26
• Drawbridge (Fränz Müller) With a ship as a metaphor this poem sails over human experience. Nicely...
  September 1st, 2025 11:24
• But I Call it BS (Anthony Hanible) Well said and in so few words.
  September 1st, 2025 09:59
• It hit hard (Maplespal) A sad poem with feelings of loss, loneliness and longing. A mournful poem...
  September 1st, 2025 09:58
• OF DEEP STATE AND WORSHIPERS OF SATAN - LORDS OF THE WORLD (Saša Milivojev) The poem speaks of death, destruction, enslavement, and feels like war. It...
  September 1st, 2025 09:02
• A Kiss (RSM0812) Romantic and nicely rhymed this poem calls out for another. Nicely done
  September 1st, 2025 08:54
• A Little Life (Lorna) A peaceful and very lovely picture painted in these few lines of verse....
  September 1st, 2025 08:52
• love is special (Jim56) Indeed so true Jim. A lovely poem about an emotional yet so common...
  September 1st, 2025 08:51
• My Heavenly Father (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Nice flow and rhyme in this poem of faith and belief Shamrocker. Very well...
  September 1st, 2025 08:49
• Unknown (Tristan Robert Lange) It seems that the United States, Brittan and France have tombs of the...
  September 1st, 2025 08:48
• Fear of Falling (Neville) Indeed seasons come and go and so do our seasons. Although some seem sad...
  September 1st, 2025 08:43
• Review (Jerry Reynolds) I have stood in that field Jerry and feel as though it was not too long...
  September 1st, 2025 08:40
• HARD MAN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem that reflects choices we have to make that determine our future....
  September 1st, 2025 04:44
• Barren Thorns (Malcolm Gladwin) This poem gracefully tells its story in great meter and rhyme. The...
  September 1st, 2025 04:43
• Always (Aa Harvey) A poem of dreams, belief and a charmed life. Nicely written
  September 1st, 2025 04:40
• I Feel Terrible For My Nan (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Health such an unpredictable and fragile thing hear today gone tomorrow. A...
  September 1st, 2025 04:38
• 7/23/25 (Wren) Very nicely written this poem has some great images and poses a very...
  September 1st, 2025 04:37
• A gloomy morning (Sami Mulaj) A most interesting depiction that had never occured to me. Nicely put
  September 1st, 2025 04:34
• The Universal Root (Gray0328) A tuber that has bridged the international gap and continues to entice and...
  September 1st, 2025 04:33
• mythic greenhouse / hinge of words (Arqios) There is no greater mythology as a whole that that of the Greeks and here...
  September 1st, 2025 04:29
• Oh go on......! (Orchidee) Is it really alliteration if only two consecutive words start with the...
  September 1st, 2025 04:14
• And The Sun Rises. (Goldfinch60) And may there be many more sun raises for you Gold.
  September 1st, 2025 04:10
• Ode to Tobin (Thomas W Case) Some have that itch forever blown by the wind like a tumbleweed. Good...
  September 1st, 2025 04:08
• Hit the Road (Reverend) A poem of realization and in that recognition the knowledge to keep moving...
  August 31st, 2025 21:06
• THE SON OF THE UAE (Saša Milivojev) A beautiful tribute in most poetic form. Nicely done
  August 31st, 2025 19:51
• A not so Grand dad (Kevin Hulme) Quite the descriptive and artistically worded image that in rhyme depicts...
  August 31st, 2025 19:46
• oh the woes of moving on (Maria rk.) A poem of sad recognition and acceptance of the now and moving on. Nicely...
  August 31st, 2025 19:40
• What could’ve been? (Keeter C) A beautiful poem of what might have been and of art. Most lovely with a...
  August 31st, 2025 18:02
• To the Light (Tony Grannell) Well Tony you have done it again with a poem whose rhyme scheme is quite...
  August 31st, 2025 17:58
• Waterdrops (Amethyste) So descriptive and nicely imaged it speaks in colors and textures. Lovely
  August 31st, 2025 15:32
• The Man (NinjaGirl) A metaphor? Taking advantage of someone unsuspecting whether as a vampire...
  August 31st, 2025 15:30
• Dream suicide (Bird In Red) A poem of death and the wish for it. It is a dark write with a sad outcome...
  August 31st, 2025 15:08
• When to Listen Lightly (Neville) Wow now! This could be seen as a little kinky Neville. A romantic and most...
  August 31st, 2025 14:26
• An Unwanted Alteration In My Life (Arshia) This seemed a journal entry nicely rhymed of the state of things today....
  August 31st, 2025 12:42
• Hell On Retainer (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) The first one was such fun I just have to give a fave the second one made...
  August 31st, 2025 12:40
• what could possibly happen? (Dn) Here lies an existential battle and turmoil with a dilema of whether to...
  August 31st, 2025 11:06
• God\'s Mercy (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer) There must always be hope, if not life ends. Very nice
  August 31st, 2025 11:04
• The lover wave (Lorenz) So many metaphors of the inner self in this poem Lovez. A lovely write...
  August 31st, 2025 11:02
• So, Ahem, I Have...House Cats (Cheeky Missy) I have had house cats in the past, several over the years each with its...
  August 31st, 2025 10:58
• Enough (Sunita) A great build to a relationship. A very good write.
  August 31st, 2025 10:57
• What Actually Holds Sway (Tristan Robert Lange) The pendulum of freedom swings in the history of mankind from too free, if...
  August 31st, 2025 08:06
• the poet and the craftsman (Gray0328) Gray if I read this right I hear that there are two makers the inner poet...
  August 31st, 2025 08:00
• Who are you; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) What a beautiful message. Yes too many are steered into directions they do...
  August 31st, 2025 07:56
• Forsaken (Aa Harvey) A plea for honesty that leads to certainty and trust upon which a...
  August 31st, 2025 06:16
• Analysis-Vol 142-Slakker-57-Part 3 (last part) (Soman Ragavan) The feeling of frustration of being controlled comes through. Whether an...
  August 31st, 2025 06:12
• My circle (David A Liebermann) This seems like a poem of preparation where the four elements are involved...
  August 31st, 2025 04:58
• lifes challenge (Jim56) Oh yes Jim we all have them and will until the last breath is taken....
  August 31st, 2025 04:55
• \"Have a good life\" (HarrisHan2k) We often use words as a mask or shield to hide behind. Here this comes out...
  August 31st, 2025 04:54
• THE BLUE HOUR (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) There is a feel a nostalgic image of this time that seems imprinted in the...
  August 31st, 2025 04:51
• Tomorrow..., oh Tomorrow, (Iam1ItchyLizzard) A great message for none of us know when we may die and we should take...
  August 31st, 2025 04:49
• Prayer of Thanksgiving and Awe (Samuel) A poetic prayer of gratitude very nicely expressed. Nicely done
  August 31st, 2025 04:47
• Born Within (G.Cabús) Centering oneself either physically by ones breathing or emotionally by...
  August 31st, 2025 04:45
• They are after her (Devender Kumar) Others viewed through the need of our own eyes. In this case all look at...
  August 31st, 2025 04:43
• Woe Is Me (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A false and fake world where we put on different faces for different...
  August 31st, 2025 04:39
• An empty Mug (RSM0812) This seems a cynical view on love and life seen as an empty mug. I too...
  August 31st, 2025 04:37
• Flowers (Reverend) Welcome to MPS. This poem reminds me of the piece by REN (Hi Ren) part...
  August 31st, 2025 04:35
• A Stormy Brain (Anthony Hanible) The world itself is spinning is it any wonder that the brain is in...
  August 31st, 2025 04:30
• Choose (NafisaSB) I like the idea of choice for life is always a choice that often we blame...
  August 31st, 2025 04:28
• THE REJOICING SONG (Saša Milivojev) A most melodic, soft and sensual poem of gratitude that has many great...
  August 31st, 2025 04:21
• rose cycle (haiku set) (Arqios) A fave for the creativity on this one Cryptic. Using a series of haikus to...
  August 31st, 2025 04:18
• Swarms Around Me. (Goldfinch60) Coincidence, or popularity of the model a fun read Andy
  August 31st, 2025 04:13
• When voices align (Poetic Dan) Voices in one\'s head or talking to oneself are not necessarily bad or...
  August 31st, 2025 04:11
• She was a Flower (NinjaGirl) Creative a dual perspective and a sad story. Nicely done
  August 30th, 2025 19:49
• your a man..., (Iam1ItchyLizzard) A great message and should apply to all not just women, children,...
  August 30th, 2025 18:36
• Fragments (Amethyste)
  August 30th, 2025 15:36
• Fragments (Amethyste) A beautiful expression of feelings of leaving something behind.
  August 30th, 2025 15:36
• rain. (Amirose2015) A most beautiful write of nature and its renewal. Great imagery
  August 30th, 2025 15:31
• Layla (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) To me the diamonds in the eyes are the stars in the skies this is a view...
  August 30th, 2025 15:28
• Be Present (Bella Shepard) Dear Bella this is so Taoist and Buddhist it is such great advice that is...
  August 30th, 2025 15:25
• The river of life (Sami Mulaj) A wonderful metaphor and so nicely imaged and written. A fave
  August 30th, 2025 12:59
• A Throbbing Train (Ray Moonee) Intent is everything in spoken words and though we think we know it is...
  August 30th, 2025 12:58
• Time standing Still (RSM0812) This one I love and is a fave. It combines two well known proverbs into...
  August 30th, 2025 11:41
• The Marching Poseur (Kurt Philip Behm) Pride comes before destruction and a haughty spirit before a fall...
  August 30th, 2025 11:40
• Sensitive (Insanely Hilarious) Every weakness can be a strength just as every strength can be a weakness....
  August 30th, 2025 11:36
• Shells (Gray0328) Beautiful Gray history in a pile just as bones are and fossils a memory of...
  August 30th, 2025 11:34
• Of Fall, Fatigue, and Feeling like Piglet (Cheeky Missy) Another set of fun reads that asks the question and answers it. Be glad of...
  August 30th, 2025 11:32
• I Crave You (Louiray) Very nice and although it sounds personal it could well be said for all...
  August 30th, 2025 11:28
• Today Is The Future (Israel McCorkle) Clever and with a little mental manipulation time itself goes away. Nicely...
  August 30th, 2025 11:27
• Father\'s day (2781) A fun play on words that all makes sense if one sits and thinks it...
  August 30th, 2025 11:25
• The Moonbeam Man (Classicmister) In its innocence it would appeal to most any child. Wonderful rhyme and...
  August 30th, 2025 11:23
• Her (Raye) So glad it is light hearted. Move on is the word. Nicely written
  August 30th, 2025 11:18
• The Pain (Anthony Hanible) I feel you the pills are worse than the pain. Prefer my pain plain. Even...
  August 30th, 2025 10:41
• Fusion - Nooooo! (Orchidee) I know what you mean Orchi I have contributed to a few with threads of...
  August 30th, 2025 10:34
• Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange) A most interesting change with time. Culture changes and with it laws and...
  August 30th, 2025 08:03
• CAN I? (Saswati das) Here is the need for someone to be a pillar of strength a foundation to...
  August 30th, 2025 06:32
• Celestial Sanctuary (Poetic Dan) I love the last lines of this poem that hold the secret to harmony (listen...
  August 30th, 2025 06:30
• pleasing piece (Kevin Michael Bloor) Indeed the feeling comes through and the rhyme is pleasing to the ear....
  August 30th, 2025 06:27
• the dam is breached (Arqios) Never understood gaslighting a new word for what I call manipulation and...
  August 30th, 2025 06:25
• watching dolphins (Jim56) Dolphins are incredible creatures that I see from time to time. They are...
  August 30th, 2025 04:52
• By His Hand (Samuel) A poem of belief and of faith and hope. An assertion to the rest of the...
  August 30th, 2025 04:50