Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

Under a crying tree (Maplespal) Metaphoric and melancholicly sad. A great use of metaphor here. Nicely
October 19th, 2024 07:42
goodbye liam (Jim56) A Eulogy well written and nicely done.
October 19th, 2024 07:39
The Poet (Tony36) This one reads at a gallop and like a rider on the horse one can feel each...
October 19th, 2024 07:37
in whispers hush (Arqios) A sonnet of love indeed that spells the intricate web of love and how once...
October 19th, 2024 07:04
My Love (RSM0812) Beautiful words in a setting of solid rhyme make a gem that any woman...
October 19th, 2024 06:33
Short Changed on A Long Greek Island (Neville) At least no STD\'s or guilt, Loved the set up in the first stanza...
October 19th, 2024 05:20
The third trench (2781) What a metaphor here. Well set up and worked out it portrays the present...
October 19th, 2024 05:17
Welcoming Light. (Goldfinch60) That\'s kind of like putting the curve in the road sign after the curve...
October 19th, 2024 05:11
Diplomacy (NafisaSB) I agree diplomats are a part of government which I find a necessary evil...
October 19th, 2024 05:05
Scales A-Glint (Mark The Phenomenon) A most interesting pairing of the spiritual and the sea. It seems so calm...
October 18th, 2024 15:22
Numero (Steve Goldenfort) Numerology some say is a predictor, we all have a bit of superstition in...
October 18th, 2024 15:17
Where Does The Love Go? (Teddy.15) Darkness comes and memory fades but like an old tattoo still remains....
October 18th, 2024 15:15
I Have Turned Around Now, Twice (ADarkerMind) Another dark poem from the prince of darkness. One line after another of...
October 18th, 2024 15:09
Worry (Thomas W Case) A poem full of aggition, anxiety and powerlessness. When the idle is set...
October 18th, 2024 15:05
Traces Of Then (Kurt Philip Behm) Full of contradictions the shadow fades to darkness as the mind begs to...
October 18th, 2024 11:05
~> I Fucking Hate Loving You (Thad Wilk) \"Where my girl are you sleeping tonight\" remnicent of an old Leadbelly...
October 18th, 2024 10:59
Hide and Seek (Meera Mere) Tragic, devastating, sad, haunting, yet all too common and it leaves...
October 18th, 2024 08:33
in the shadows (Arqios) Not only a song, poem but a hymn. A battle cry if you would. I hear it...
October 18th, 2024 07:01
The darkness creeps (Maplespal) Dark indeed this poem has a feel of being taken over in oblivion and a...
October 18th, 2024 06:59
THE UMBRELLA (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Wise words cast in metaphoric images of understanding. Lovely
October 18th, 2024 05:25
my best friend (Jim56) The images you have created bring back memories I have of cats I have had...
October 18th, 2024 05:22
Fortress (Lorenz) Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if...
October 18th, 2024 05:21
Deep Secrets (Neville) Errotic and sensual with great lines \"More perfect than an orchid...
October 18th, 2024 05:18
Knowingly Full Of Love. (Goldfinch60) Appreciation for the small things and the moment itself fills your poetry...
October 18th, 2024 05:13
Under the Hunter\'s Moon (Tristan Robert Lange) It is that Halloween season and this one fits right in. Dark and...
October 18th, 2024 05:12
She rests her wings (Maplespal) A metaphor cast in realistic nature. It starts so soft and ends so...
October 17th, 2024 17:38
The Powerful Expression (Mark The Phenomenon) Deep thoughts provoking deep thinking well done
October 17th, 2024 15:54
El Greco (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed it is.
October 17th, 2024 13:50
Born to be Cool (Teddy.15) A fun read and true. When you hit seventy you don\'t care about picures...
October 17th, 2024 13:46
The Rider (Peet) A picture of the old west painted in images and romatic views nicely done
October 17th, 2024 11:59
A Dod Named Tension (Gray0328) Tension was a good name and serves as a good metaphor. Reminds me of an...
October 17th, 2024 11:46
Where I Find My Peace (Dev Parth) Peaceful and calm a good write. Looking for piece is all of our quest
October 17th, 2024 11:42
~> Best Stay Inside This Halloween! - form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk) A great Halloween write reminds me of the stories we used to tell when we...
October 17th, 2024 11:38
STATE OF MISERY (Qurrathul Ain) We choose what misery we want to carry with us. When things go to far put...
October 17th, 2024 09:17
Echoes Across the Somber Sea (Tristan Robert Lange) Lovely Tristan it calls to the poet and all that love poetry
October 17th, 2024 09:08
Oils down (2781) Money runs the world\'s machine and oil greases its gears. Nicely written
October 17th, 2024 09:06
Peace (Tony36) Peace Tony a great message that the world needs to hear
October 17th, 2024 07:57
Fascinating colors (NafisaSB) Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and...
October 17th, 2024 06:48
Emancipation (NafisaSB) Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a...
October 17th, 2024 06:37
\"U\" AND \"I\" (NafisaSB) Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of...
October 17th, 2024 06:15
THE LION (IKENNA EZEA) (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I love the culture presented in this write and the honor of that
October 17th, 2024 06:12
world love (Jim56) A great message Jim that I wish more people would read and take to heart....
October 17th, 2024 06:10
I Spy With My Little Eye…… (Doggerel Dave) Dave I like you both what am I to do? The best for me is to stay out of...
October 17th, 2024 06:07
What No Internet! (Goldfinch60) Disaster at the door disguised as an angel. I\'ve met that same imposter...
October 17th, 2024 06:04
in memory’s wake (Arqios) Melancholic and haunting a reflection that glimers in the bottom of a dark...
October 17th, 2024 05:59
The Repatriation of Shards (Neville) Ahh the remnants of past glory now covered in dust, to be what we once...
October 17th, 2024 05:52
Fine dining (Domilla) Here you have painted in metaphor and careful word choice a picture of...
October 17th, 2024 05:45
Skywalker (Mutley Ravishes) A great metaphor, with amazing images woven into a short but powerful poem
October 17th, 2024 05:37
Spiraling Down part two (Dan Williams) A most powerful write full of indignation and anger. I have been there in...
October 17th, 2024 05:10
Flicker (Mark The Phenomenon) A great poem for the season. Dark and with good rhyme
October 16th, 2024 17:33
Soul Dance (Teddy.15) Remember when my small children danced naked in the rain. I\'m afraid if I...
October 16th, 2024 15:46
Entry Pass (Kurt Philip Behm) Nicely said and annotated
October 16th, 2024 10:57
A Fear of Thought (Vishnu Kumar K) Wisdom in a rhyme well said
October 16th, 2024 10:56
SUPERNATURAL EXPERIENCE OR…….? (Swarovski20) More common than most believe and without explanation
October 16th, 2024 10:51
Vixit (Lorenz) Thought I recognized the form and style. Too bright for Dostoevsky, too...
October 16th, 2024 10:47
Make the Static Go Away (Thomas W Case) That only comes with death Thomas. A bunch of great images in this poem a...
October 16th, 2024 10:43
Life (Tony36) Tony you and I are on the same page today, my poem an echo of yours
October 16th, 2024 10:40
~> A Shotgun Weddin\' - Redneck - (Thad Wilk) Reminds me of my ancestors came through Virginia to North Carolina to...
October 16th, 2024 10:39
SLAVE MASTER OF SLAVES (Rebellion_in_sanity) I guess we are all in the same boat setting the course and beating the...
October 16th, 2024 10:35
IN THE DEPTHS OF WINTER (Qurrathul Ain) Nicely written this poem expresses what many feel. But remember that a...
October 16th, 2024 10:31
Sleep – Where and How to Find it (Doggerel Dave) Well Dave I have to admit that I too have slept in chairs some comfy some...
October 16th, 2024 10:28
kestrel flight (Jim56) Another wonderful poem of birds. I too love to watdh the birds and listen...
October 16th, 2024 10:23
Pain’s interlude (Domilla) Another good message that people need to hear. More people need to read...
October 16th, 2024 10:21
A Poetic Cryptolalia (Domilla) One must depend on oneself first and love oneself first before one can...
October 16th, 2024 10:19
in public view (Arqios) A lesson too often learned by too many people. Pain is a negative...
October 16th, 2024 08:02
Good Writes (Orchidee) Orchi I echo Bobby\'s sentiment there is not right or wrong for the reader...
October 16th, 2024 05:31
My memoir (Sonal monhyung) The feeling of loss can be worse than never having. If you never have...
October 16th, 2024 05:25
A HEART ALIVE (Bobby O) Maintanence, an oil change, and tune up all help extend the milage. A...
October 16th, 2024 05:20
Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) A most wonderful message Gold and one that I wish that more people would...
October 16th, 2024 05:14
I won\'t say the words (Maplespal) Haunting and sad
October 15th, 2024 19:57
Super Cat Speaks (Mutley Ravishes) Having had cats I can picture that. A fun read
October 15th, 2024 19:56
Bottom Of The Waters (Mark The Phenomenon) Supernatural, it speaks to the dark side.
October 15th, 2024 19:55
Candlestick Removed (Tristan Robert Lange) This must have taken a bit of work. good write
October 15th, 2024 19:53
SPINNING CONCLUSION (Bobby O) We can only hope Bobby. Fun read
October 15th, 2024 19:50
A STROLL WITH FATE (Rebellion_in_sanity) To those that believe in God it is hard to understand why prayers are not...
October 15th, 2024 14:24
The Child (Peet) A powerful message of youth and the last line the most powerful
October 15th, 2024 14:15
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks ) (Thad Wilk) Always loved limericks and this is a good one. I think I would have had...
October 15th, 2024 09:00
ATLAS (Qurrathul Ain) Funny how we do that and how we wonder if by touching that place on a map...
October 15th, 2024 08:58
Music (Tony36) Indeed it does from the heart beat of mother in the womb to the beating of...
October 15th, 2024 08:56
tide watch (Jim56) Lovely Jim peaceful and rhymic in the eternal cycle nicely done
October 15th, 2024 08:54
Hurricane (Whytalkjustwrite) A great picture painted in this poem. I have been through a few and know...
October 15th, 2024 08:52
Walking In Old Age Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful picture here Gold and nicely painted in a sonnet. Loved it
October 15th, 2024 08:50
White aurora (Alan R) A most beautiful image painted in all of its glory so nicely done
October 15th, 2024 08:47
Forest Fire (RSM0812) Beautifully written and on a subject dear to heart. Love your work
October 15th, 2024 05:23
A walk (RSM0812) Beautifully worded and with such good flow it holds a romantic feel and...
October 15th, 2024 05:21
Angel Tears (RSM0812) Love this poem with its classical feel and absolutely marvelous rhyme...
October 15th, 2024 05:17
ginkgo (Arqios) Used to decrease aspects of dimentia seems a clue to the title\'s tie to...
October 15th, 2024 05:12
The Invisible Bars (Gray0328) That\'s marketing for you. Plenty of that now days
October 14th, 2024 17:50
Aristotle To Aquinas (Kurt Philip Behm) A philisophical statement that is excludedfrom debate by definition. If...
October 14th, 2024 17:48
Wickedness (Mark The Phenomenon) Philisophical, it raises questions and causes thought. Nicely written
October 14th, 2024 17:45
The Hunters (Tristan Robert Lange) Read the book and see the similarities. A most interesting rhyme scheme. A...
October 14th, 2024 17:42
TODAY (Qurrathul Ain) Sometimes weather seems to be in synchrony with our mood.
October 14th, 2024 17:37
\" IT \" (Thad Wilk) Fast food? They say revenge is a dish best served cold. A fun read.
October 14th, 2024 17:34
Mirror (Tony36) I wonder what the image in the mirror thinks. A reflective thought.
October 14th, 2024 07:46
lovebird love (Jim56) Another great bird poem and metaphor you might say.
October 14th, 2024 05:13
LONE WOLF ON THE PROWL (Rebellion_in_sanity) A metaphor cast in a dark skin covered in creepy raiment. Great for the...
October 14th, 2024 05:11
a rude remorse (Arqios) Now Cryptic this one requires thought. I like to think of my ink well as a...
October 14th, 2024 05:07
Orchi And Goldie At Hastings Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Did you have to pay to get in to see the battle? Wonder what it would have...
October 14th, 2024 04:54
Remembering Fyodor (Kurt Philip Behm) Statements of truth written nicely
October 13th, 2024 19:15
Fractured Resolve (Siva Pranav) Ahh the foibles of mankind. Good write.
October 13th, 2024 19:07

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