Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Perfect World (RSM0812) A poem of hope for a more perfect world nicely said
  May 20th, 2025 09:04
• A scifaiku (Thoughtless) Short but I think I get the message. Fun read
  May 20th, 2025 09:02
• Stuck; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) I hear the dilemma in this poem of being oneself and what others want. One...
  May 20th, 2025 09:01
• Victor Buono\'s Death (Randyjohnson71) A great tribute to a star that died many years ago although I remember him...
  May 20th, 2025 08:06
• Explosion (E.J. Waling) Indeed technology the differentiation between man and animal now may be...
  May 20th, 2025 08:04
• forged through fire (Gray0328) What a great metaphor taken to its limit also forged and tempered under...
  May 20th, 2025 08:01
• Through My Kitchen Window (Michelle Buckley) If one listens to the words of this poem they become ever more true. That...
  May 20th, 2025 07:59
• Moving (Canticle) Each move a new birth and growth. A lovely poem of change. Nicely done
  May 20th, 2025 07:57
• Aqsaqtuk\'s Icy Song (Matthew R. Callies) You weave culture, nature and emotion into the fabric of modern day and in...
  May 20th, 2025 06:32
• Screaming All Alone (Anthony Hanible) Such feeling of tension in this poem like a tire overfilled it expands and...
  May 20th, 2025 06:28
• life can be hard (Jim56) A great poem of the uncertainty of life and learning to go with the flow....
  May 20th, 2025 06:27
• JOB WITH THE INDIANS PART I (Swarovski20) The feeling of impersonality of the computer age. Cold as the dried ink on...
  May 20th, 2025 06:25
• The Moon is a Reality (Salvia.S) What a beautiful thought and yet such a poignant question in a world full...
  May 20th, 2025 06:21
• Where the pigs eat (Samuel) A fave for the emotion shown in this raw and dark poem of anger and hate....
  May 20th, 2025 04:26
• The Garden and the Girl (The Soft Witness) A most lovely story and metaphor a type of fable as well nicely written...
  May 20th, 2025 04:22
• CURSED MOON (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Very nicely written this poem speaks of death in a most intimate manner...
  May 20th, 2025 04:16
• Lusting For Love (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The meat market is open 24/7 and although some call it heaven I\'d say it...
  May 20th, 2025 04:14
• Broken Dreams. (Poetic Licence) Wisdom in verse feels prophetic in some way but poetic in every way. Loved...
  May 20th, 2025 04:09
• This can\'t go on! (Orchidee) Another fun read Orchi where too much thinking leads to confusion and it...
  May 20th, 2025 04:06
• Thredbo (Winter 2025) (Arqios) Wonderful images cast in this poem of the seasons. I too headed into...
  May 20th, 2025 04:03
• The Silent Combustion (Mottakeenur Rehman) Mottakeenur This is a real gem well crafted in meter and rhyme as well as...
  May 20th, 2025 03:54
• Meeting You. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful declaration of love Andy may it always be with you
  May 20th, 2025 03:37
• Initial Revelation (Matthew R. Callies) Fun read in an Acrostic well done in style
  May 19th, 2025 20:33
• Cobra Chemistry 2 (Mutley Ravishes) Charming and a fun thought provoking piece. Lovely
  May 19th, 2025 19:35
• Excellent marksmen/women set his/her sites... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Scams and rip offs fill the world now days. Aggravating and upsetting....
  May 19th, 2025 16:41
• SHAMAN\'S ❤️ (Natalie Heisey) Such lovely flow in this poem with great rhyme with a good tale of a...
  May 19th, 2025 15:47
• My Impatience (Tayama) A most wonderful poem of faith and protection by a higher power. Very nice
  May 19th, 2025 15:44
• Transcendence (Muse of Calliope) What a lovely and most poetic set of verse. A fave
  May 19th, 2025 14:51
• Damaged (Maplespal) A most wonderful metaphor constructed in this poem that works so well.
  May 19th, 2025 13:07
• An ounce of ...... (Hzugman) I love poetic license it unties the bonds of tied up lines.
  May 19th, 2025 12:45
• Panther Recaged (Libellule) A most lovely metaphor in this poem of freedom and self imposed...
  May 19th, 2025 12:40
• Madly in Love (Violet_Writes) A poem of love\'s obsession and abuse suffered. Well written
  May 19th, 2025 12:38
• Lies (BlessedbyGod) A very nice write of faith and belief and doing what one believes to be...
  May 19th, 2025 12:35
• When The Lights Go Down (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Loved this one Kurt it felt so true.
  May 19th, 2025 12:33
• in love with me (NinjaGirl) Such a home like feel and at the same time a solitary warmth. A most...
  May 19th, 2025 12:31
• 11:56 PM (Magzzbaby) Living for the moment in this poem and acceptance of one for whom one is....
  May 19th, 2025 11:16
• 451 Degrees Fahrenheit (Gray0328) Some great lines in this poem. (soft prayers pressed into ink, to carve...
  May 19th, 2025 11:13
• Everything Left_ (RefugeInRain) Acceptance is the final step and the most important. A lovely write of...
  May 19th, 2025 11:09
• DIVERGENT (Isu) A most interesting view that love is a mirage. Loved the write
  May 19th, 2025 11:06
• Showgirl (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A poem of pain and with a dark ending. Nicely written with good flow. Well...
  May 19th, 2025 10:23
• Night into Day (Ella-1427) A most wonderful metaphor in this poem. A lovely write and a fave
  May 19th, 2025 10:03
• In the name of humanity (Orchidee) I don\'t know Orchi I have been called far less than human. Another fun...
  May 19th, 2025 10:02
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 34-Transportation-27April2025 (Soman Ragavan) Your analysis provides something that is missing on this site This is a...
  May 19th, 2025 09:58
• Collapse (Alan R) Indeed we are all out thoughts and we reach out for more. Well written
  May 19th, 2025 09:16
• Dad and his Movies (Thomas W Case) I liked the realness of this poem and how identifiable it is. Yes we all...
  May 19th, 2025 09:13
• My Person (Akshadha_Joshi1310) A plea for unity and a declaration of love. Nicely written.
  May 19th, 2025 08:38
• Under Pressure (Tom Dylan) Writers block so identifiable to anyone that writes. A fun read that also...
  May 19th, 2025 08:37
• SNG1 (Damaso) So true most attacks do begin within. A lovely write.
  May 19th, 2025 08:34
• Bug (Lorenz) Now this is a poem of some I have know and of me at times. A very nicely...
  May 19th, 2025 08:32
• society (Corian Baek) What a great message sent in poetic form. Well expressed and a fave
  May 19th, 2025 07:44
• Liberty, Faith And Honour (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Indeed we live in a world of deception from sales to government, from scam...
  May 19th, 2025 07:41
• Masquerade (S.E. Miller) The poem speaks of different views, some mirages (masquerades) and how...
  May 19th, 2025 07:39
• Zach… (The ScarletBard) A heart rending poem of loss and pain. It is indeed the hardest thing a...
  May 19th, 2025 07:35
• we are soup (Demar Desu) I love this one Demar it adds a bit of humor to a serious topic. Well...
  May 19th, 2025 06:45
• You Lied to Live (Samuel) A fave for its rawness and powerful statement screaming out of the dark....
  May 19th, 2025 06:44
• Leningrad Song after Vlad Visotskky (Ksey_Gan) A sad time in history full of suffering and pain and when things finally...
  May 19th, 2025 06:39
• seasons (Jim56) Nice rhyme in this poem of the seasons Jim. Very nice
  May 19th, 2025 06:37
• A few rocks in Africa’s shoe (EvenwheniLie) A strong message is sent in this poem. I loved the internal rhyme in this...
  May 19th, 2025 06:36
• Listen; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Such a powerful message in a world too busy for us to listen. Loved the...
  May 19th, 2025 06:34
• THAT NOSTALGIC FEELING (@merci) Such a common theme but so cleverly imaged and worded that it deserves a...
  May 19th, 2025 05:02
• Hearts that break (RSM0812) Such a classic ring to this poem that is filled with surprising and...
  May 19th, 2025 05:00
• JUDGEMENT DAY (Saša Milivojev) Mounting intensity in this poem carry the reader onward. It builds to its...
  May 19th, 2025 04:55
• Moonlight (Reynaldo Casison) So short yet so sweet a lovely poetic statement.
  May 19th, 2025 04:52
• DELIVERED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Mysteries in a letter well written in great rhyme and good meter with a...
  May 19th, 2025 04:51
• Intoxication of Literature (Mottakeenur Rehman) I love metaphor and for this I love religious myth. So much told in so...
  May 19th, 2025 04:47
• When thoughts collide (Jeremy Leach) Clever and so true the rhyme of this poem gives it a sense of unity and...
  May 19th, 2025 04:40
• Kindness and Compassion (2). (Poetic Licence) So true kindness and compassion sent only for appearance sake is not what...
  May 19th, 2025 04:37
• Silent Night (MKS) Dark as the night this poem has many messages, secrets held in its lines....
  May 19th, 2025 04:26
• My Sanity (Shahla Latifi) Uncertainty is water in a sponge soon filling all parts. I feel this in...
  May 19th, 2025 04:23
• Death\'s Last Wish (Meera Mere) We all need mothers, have mothers, some good some not so much so. Some are...
  May 19th, 2025 04:18
• Ode to my wrists. (R43) A poem of crying pain. Although many prefer cut flowers to decorate their...
  May 19th, 2025 04:11
• ~ Anxious Poetics ~ (Pandy) Full of gustatory, tactile and visual images laden with great analogies...
  May 19th, 2025 04:08
• Boundaries (HollyGolightly) I could hear the march in this poem\'s meter. A meaningful message...
  May 19th, 2025 04:05
• No Love (DLewis88) I hear a yearning and a hunger for love in this poem. If one is hungry one...
  May 19th, 2025 04:01
• The Eternal Fountain (Rrodriguez) I can only imagine it in Spanish for the original is generally even better...
  May 19th, 2025 03:57
• Sven\'s Uninvited Guest (Arqios) This poem carries with it a sense of an existential voyage beyond the...
  May 19th, 2025 03:51
• Flowing Around Your Life. (Goldfinch60) I have known many of their forms from breeze to gale and hurricane only...
  May 19th, 2025 03:40
• Life Is A Puzzle (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Having faith in something is very important and it is heard in this poem....
  May 18th, 2025 19:38
• Perspective (Keeter C) Clever wording and rhyme spit truth if there is such a thing in this poem....
  May 18th, 2025 18:42
• Miss Me (Ladywithaquill) A longing for love and contact. Nicely written
  May 18th, 2025 18:15
• Fake People (Santajah Douglass) There is a good deal of anger and hatred in this poem. Deception despised.
  May 18th, 2025 18:14
• Mother’s Secret (Sami Mulaj) Embers burn under the disguise of ashes in life as well as fire. Very...
  May 18th, 2025 18:11
• After party (Alan R) A most interesting characterization of love. Very nicely written
  May 18th, 2025 18:09
• Black jaguar (Kaz) The world of the jaguar is dark and shadowy it is the blue eyes that stand...
  May 18th, 2025 18:07
• Sophie (Amethyste) In this piece it is shown that things are not always what they appear to...
  May 18th, 2025 18:05
• A Troopship 1914 (Kevin Hulme) Beautifully crafted with good rhyme and meter this poem is a tribute to...
  May 18th, 2025 15:45
• Forever (Tayama) Heart warming that melts the snow and ice all around. A most beautiful...
  May 18th, 2025 15:43
• The cost of pain is change (NinjaGirl) A plea for something more comes through in this piece. How to be happy...
  May 18th, 2025 15:41
• In This Magic ...(+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Possessions mean little when life is at its end we all take nothing with...
  May 18th, 2025 13:40
• perfect love drives out fear (Gray0328) A very nice poem on love itself and its most supportive qualities that ask...
  May 18th, 2025 13:37
• Ballad by Teffyy (Ksey_Gan) The question is: whether this is a metaphor. A fun read.
  May 18th, 2025 13:32
• salem (Corian Baek) I love the whole second stanza it is very powerful. Very nicely written.
  May 18th, 2025 13:24
• DayBreak (in dreams i wake) (Muse of Calliope) This is always an intriguing issue of whether we are dreaming or awake a...
  May 18th, 2025 13:18
• Melancholy Colored Blue (Analogaddict) Very nice worded well speaking of letting go when needed. One needs to...
  May 18th, 2025 09:39
• Behold a Rose (RSM0812) A most lovely romantic poem with great images and metaphor so well written
  May 18th, 2025 09:10
• Retro (Lorenz) Metaphor on top of metaphor it melts into surrealism and ends in enigma. A...
  May 18th, 2025 09:07
• recursion (Eugene S.) A most interesting poem of nature rain sky and earth. Thought provoking.
  May 18th, 2025 08:14
• Underverse (E.J. Waling) A poem typical to your style short lines. In this world we begin to wonder...
  May 18th, 2025 08:11
• Acceptable & Holes (Maplespal) A sense of something missing is the theme of this poem it leaves holes as...
  May 18th, 2025 08:09
• Just a note (Tony36) The best of wishes for a quick and successful operation and a most speedy...
  May 18th, 2025 07:32