Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Awake Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Continued positivity for self and enough to spread around and hand out to...
November 5th, 2024 04:59 - The Way it All Ends (Neville)
At first thought it metaphoric of a passionate meeting between two people...
November 5th, 2024 04:56 - disadvantage (NinjaGirl)
That is what poetry is all about revealing oneself in words unabashed....
November 4th, 2024 17:05 - Beyond the Past (Aloo Denish Obiero)
Cleverly worded this poem tells of not being stuck in the past but using...
November 4th, 2024 13:14 - I Ever Thought I Would Be (Mark The Phenomenon)
A most wonderful declaration of love
November 4th, 2024 11:48 - I would return (Lorenz)
Simply beautiful a wonderful and fanciful poem of a dreamy type
November 4th, 2024 11:46 - Renegade Honey Bee (Gray0328)
Story of my past life and in metaphor this as well. Unfortunately such a...
November 4th, 2024 10:52 - ~> Breaking News Article! ( \"True\" Cover Story?! ) (Thad Wilk)
Made me smile reminds me of the National Enquirer the only true source of...
November 4th, 2024 10:49 - Meet Meara (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A great roll of the tongue story with its rhyme it flows like honey. Slow...
November 4th, 2024 09:05 - Poetry ocean (Tony36)
And so it is that drop upon drop the sea was formed. A great analogy that...
November 4th, 2024 09:03 - Severed Bridges (TSA ) (Arqios)
Such diverted traffic wanders lost amongst the side roads. A most...
November 4th, 2024 09:01 - wrecking ball (Jim56)
Got to watch out for those things like a cliff on a walk, a shark in a...
November 4th, 2024 08:57 - Off to work (Maplespal)
The ritual of daily living put to verse. I feel that I have been there....
November 4th, 2024 08:55 - To Me Poetry (Tom Dylan)
Indeed I agree it is another way of seeing the world around us that brings...
November 4th, 2024 04:40 - Maybe It’s Time to Share Father C’s Secrets (Neville)
Now Neville the ambiguous C unfairly led me down the wrong path to a back...
November 4th, 2024 04:38 - Non-Event Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange)
This was a great approach to get a bigger picture as the distance is...
November 4th, 2024 04:29 - end (NinjaGirl)
Twilight or night both are brothers. A most intriguing write
November 4th, 2024 04:26 - Indigo Night (Thomas W Case)
A poem of gratitude, passion and aspiration. Succinctly stated Lovely
November 4th, 2024 04:24 - 2Pac (Sunshine777)
Are you speaking of the rapper? Who else I\'m sure. A tribute nicely...
November 4th, 2024 04:22 - Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul. (Goldfinch60)
A most positive message to begin the day. Good advice and since it is for...
November 4th, 2024 04:18 - The Friendship I Hold, the Love I Hide (Ladywithaquill)
A declaration of passion felt for another and the desire for it to proceed...
November 3rd, 2024 19:21 - Time of Day or Night (Orchidee)
Write them down when they occur to me no matter the time of day or night....
November 3rd, 2024 13:50 - ~> Christmas Day, Far Away - form Acrostic - (Thad Wilk)
Wow! This represents a good deal of work to make the Acrostic and rhyme...
November 3rd, 2024 09:31 - Radio garden (Lorenz)
Music can take you to places never seen or dreamed of. A most lovely mood...
November 3rd, 2024 09:29 - Hippie Vibe (Tony36)
A taste of the past 60\'s when love was the thing and so was space
November 3rd, 2024 09:25 - “Just, until” & “A drop waiting” (Maplespal)
A plea for company and I like even more the reworked second poem it holds...
November 3rd, 2024 09:23 - loves is a nature (Jim56)
Another wonderful message of reassurance for any that they can fall back...
November 3rd, 2024 09:21 - Flannel Embrace (Gray0328)
A beautifully worded tribute to cold weather and the joy some find with
November 3rd, 2024 09:20 - A Bridge Once Too Far (Arqios)
Not so cryptic this read sets a course through past devestation to new...
November 3rd, 2024 07:33 - Heavily Enlightened (Neville)
My grandfather used to read the obituaries when I asked why he said to see...
November 3rd, 2024 04:17 - Fancy Dress (Doggerel Dave)
A little humor always settles the stomach in the morning. This one was a...
November 3rd, 2024 04:14 - Thank you Again Wolfgang. (Goldfinch60)
Motzart a most logical choice start at the top. Good write Andy
November 3rd, 2024 03:50 - Terzenelle of Turmoil (Tristan Robert Lange)
I think that all of us at one time or another have felt this way. The poem...
November 3rd, 2024 03:46 - Invisible Sword (Dan Williams)
Something invisible hidden here but it is hidden too well for my old...
November 3rd, 2024 03:39 - In Mother’s Lap (Dr Sudheer Babu)
Beautiful is this poem and so is the love of a mother
November 2nd, 2024 19:50 - Creation Speaks (John Prophet)
Eternal change in all things until the end of entropy. Nicely said John
November 2nd, 2024 17:34 - Broken by the Arrow of Time (Thoughtless)
A melencholy feel to this poem a sense of missing and a longing for...
November 2nd, 2024 15:10 - Blemished (Neville)
At first glance I thought that the l on lord was a capital and it took me...
November 2nd, 2024 12:12 - ~> Since You\'ve Been Gone (Thad Wilk)
A wonderful write of a western type that I truely enjoyed. The puns and...
November 2nd, 2024 10:27 - Misunderstanding (Gray0328)
Accuizations that are ment to upset are best left alone. A good write of...
November 2nd, 2024 10:25 - Yes, Dear? (Cheeky Missy)
The flood gate opened and I have to say the second was my favorite but all...
November 2nd, 2024 10:22 - lifes journey (Jim56)
So true it is. Life full of twists and turn and more than anything else a...
November 2nd, 2024 10:16 - Waiting for snow (Maplespal)
I loved the personification of the snowflake and the metaphor of people...
November 2nd, 2024 10:14 - Old world (Lorenz)
Wonderfully worded this poem portrays for me a world rusting and aging...
November 2nd, 2024 10:09 - All Hallows’ Eve (lullaby) (Arqios)
Ah Cryptic you have captured the feel of sleep and that peaceful hour....
November 2nd, 2024 08:39 - Snack Attack (Tony36)
It happens. Fun write.
November 2nd, 2024 08:11 - Two Times Four Plus One (Teddy.15)
I look everywhere I can to find the joys of madness but yea, that would...
November 2nd, 2024 05:22 - Swing From Paris Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely write about times of joy brought by a group of musicians. Music...
November 2nd, 2024 05:18 - ~> We Must Be Doing Something Right (Thad Wilk)
Sweet and romantic it holds a charm for the one loved
November 1st, 2024 15:34 - Time to Live (Arqios)
As I read this I see the rising and falling of each breath and I think of...
November 1st, 2024 15:32 - If Only Things Had Been Different (Neville)
Highly identifiable the what if. I think everyone has, at one time or...
November 1st, 2024 04:02 - Get Yer Diction Right for Starters…. (Doggerel Dave)
Dave I remember well that song in that my parents played it frequently. Do...
November 1st, 2024 03:59 - Aftermath (Teddy.15)
Some say humor for me more like reality. In my neighborhood all the kids...
November 1st, 2024 03:55 - Samhain Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful! I have no other word.
November 1st, 2024 03:48 - Vagabond Wind (Thomas W Case)
I can hear the wail of the desert wind whistling through this poem Thomas....
November 1st, 2024 03:44 - Trubba Man (Dan Williams)
It took me a while to get the neologism then it all made sense. Just a bit...
November 1st, 2024 03:41 - Horrors! (Orchidee)
It is Halloween so I\'ll give you that one Orchi but even after tonight...
October 31st, 2024 12:26 - Sometimes it\'s Different (Raj Singh(Bcom. Commerce) Roll Number :- 2446054, KIIT)
I think I have had several of those days. Very relateable.
October 31st, 2024 12:23 - This is ... fun. (Kerry)
We are all wearing many hats which is confusing. Expectation weigh on us...
October 31st, 2024 11:18 - ~> If Love Was A Planet (Thad Wilk)
The chain of love is strong and passion is revealed in this poem. Very...
October 31st, 2024 09:45 - Reach iut (Tony36)
The needs are many. Too few are those that care. Thanks for raising...
October 31st, 2024 09:43 - Strange (2781)
A feeling shared by many and you are right it may be too late. Good write.
October 31st, 2024 09:40 - Exclusion (Tristan Robert Lange)
If it is a physical restriction that is still you if it is what others...
October 31st, 2024 09:35 - The Write Crowd (Tom Dylan)
I too do my writing alone and it is a therapy that I wouldn\'t have with a...
October 31st, 2024 07:28 - Renejaded (Mutley Ravishes)
I too a drone with the fate of after populating expulsion. No work no...
October 31st, 2024 06:30 - WHAT A COUNTRY! (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
What a great senryu with such deep meaning
October 31st, 2024 06:24 - break up (Jim56)
A very positive approach and lovely write
October 31st, 2024 06:11 - Flight (Lorenz)
(Death has this sticky sweetnes) a great line that conveys its meaning...
October 31st, 2024 06:10 - heavenly bodice (Arqios)
A poem that speaks to the soul. Each and every line a treasure. The last...
October 31st, 2024 06:07 - A drop\'s view (Maplespal)
This to me held a strong metaphor of how the sea in this life separates...
October 31st, 2024 05:00 - Looking Beyond Spring (Neville)
Neville I had to read this over a couple of times to get the sense of...
October 31st, 2024 04:51 - With The Absolute Very Best Of Love (Teddy.15)
A great metaphor and each heart could use a periodic cleaning. The imagery...
October 31st, 2024 04:38 - Conduits (John Prophet)
This poem gave a sense of conectedness in a universe of relationships very...
October 31st, 2024 04:35 - Beyond Words (Aloo Denish Obiero)
Very nice this poem speaks wisdom in very few words. It seems Budistic or...
October 31st, 2024 04:27 - Flame that Flickers (Rin the Magnificent)
A poem that feels old and of another time. There is a sense of foreboding...
October 31st, 2024 04:23 - MY HOKEY POKEY PLAN (Bobby O)
Bobby is it the dirty old man in me or did you leave a lot of metaphorical...
October 31st, 2024 04:20 - Halloween Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A most fun read Gold and very appropriate for the day
October 31st, 2024 04:07 - Invented Confusion (Dan Williams)
Some very mind provoking lines with deep meaning. (Sincerity, handcuffed...
October 31st, 2024 04:04 - this is a poem (MR.apocalypse)
Let me think about that.... loved the rhyme and the paradoxical twist of...
October 31st, 2024 03:54 - Works (2781)
A call to all to follow their belief. Nice write
October 30th, 2024 12:15 - Self Obsessed (Sunshine777)
October 30th, 2024 11:22 - Self Obsessed (Sunshine777)
There are things worth more than money. A great write
October 30th, 2024 11:22 - THE SIN OF JEALOUSY (Qurrathul Ain)
A most interesting story with great images. Nicely written
October 30th, 2024 11:18 - The south (Lorenz)
An exotic setting with vivid images covers a metaphor that supports the...
October 30th, 2024 07:53 - Teddy Bear (Tony36)
Comfort in childhood we have to ask what are our adult Teddy bears? A...
October 30th, 2024 07:50 - Beauty In The Pain (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A poem with a message that all things have a positive side written in...
October 30th, 2024 06:02 - everybody ages (Jim56)
So true Jim I keep asking where has the time gone?
October 30th, 2024 06:00 - untitled (autumn sijo) (Arqios)
To one never having been there it feels as if I were. Very picturesque
October 30th, 2024 05:49 - 6 poorly written poems sorry (Maplespal)
I can feel the pain in these and the sense of loss. Expression of this...
October 30th, 2024 05:05 - Hail (Neville)
Nature strikes back. Am I hypersensitive Neville or are there some hidden...
October 30th, 2024 05:00 - A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15)
Beautiful positive and encouraging. Yes keep writing Teddy!
October 30th, 2024 04:51 - Bad To Best. (Goldfinch60)
Gold I have for many years believed that everything happens for the best...
October 30th, 2024 04:48 - Corridors of Decaying Dreams (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very well written with great imagery and so seasonal as well. A spooky...
October 30th, 2024 04:41 - We Are Worthy (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Great thoughts in your write and well expressed.
October 29th, 2024 16:13 - Woodstock Summer (Gray0328)
I remember those days. My favorite lines were the last two. A nostalgic...
October 29th, 2024 13:38 - The Invisible (Tristan Robert Lange)
Isolation felt more by some than others. Humans are social animals and we...
October 29th, 2024 12:18 - Reminders (Jojojoking)
A wistful poem in more than one way. It speaks to the bonds of friendship...
October 29th, 2024 12:14 - ~> Fukitol Is The Real Deal! - Shakespearean Sonnet - (Thad Wilk)
Sounds familiar. Think I tried it but built up an immunity. For the hard...
October 29th, 2024 12:12 - A Wish (Kerry)
A great message with a most positive focus. Lovely
October 29th, 2024 09:05 - Sounds the knell (Lorenz)
Powerful words in a powerful poem. Some great lines as well (killer widow...
October 29th, 2024 09:03
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