Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Father And Son. (Goldfinch60) I feel this one Andy with four children of my own. \"He had his...
  February 24th, 2024 04:21
• Tea WithThe Tree (Bella Shepard) I too feel akin to the trees. They get little credit for forming our...
  February 23rd, 2024 16:47
• Desirous Dwelling (Orchidee) You know I went to a church once that was trying to sell its parishioners...
  February 23rd, 2024 14:42
• Breakfast Surprise (Teddy.15) Appetizing. but I thought that the dish had run away with the spoon. Did...
  February 23rd, 2024 05:01
• What Day Is It? (Goldfinch60) Clever and correct well set up, the hook in this poem was perfectly...
  February 23rd, 2024 04:08
• Maniac (Teddy.15) Seductive, alluring, haunting in a way, I hear a sirens call. Short but so...
  February 22nd, 2024 13:17
• Gassing dogs in Diego ; 4 February, 2024 (Soman Ragavan) Although literal also a metaphor. People are not as loyal as the dog. Yet...
  February 22nd, 2024 06:42
• Praise Proclaimings (Orchidee) Orchi I have always thought if there were a God his/her words would have...
  February 22nd, 2024 05:53
• Painting, Poetry, Music, Silence. (Goldfinch60) Wow! This one is philosophy at its peak with such well thought out...
  February 22nd, 2024 04:22
• In The Yesterdays Of Love Itself. (Teddy.15) I have little faith but one thing I do believe is that everything happens...
  February 21st, 2024 10:02
• Hear again (2781) Here it is indeed. Love would not be bad if it truly was, but you can\'t...
  February 21st, 2024 07:07
• Committed Calling (Orchidee) Faith that help will come is what keeps us going on. So true Orchi. Good...
  February 21st, 2024 05:06
• Kathleen Sings Again. (Goldfinch60) Such a beautiful voice. Somehow I had missed out on her. Thank you so much...
  February 21st, 2024 04:18
• And The Winner Is? (Teddy.15) How true Teddy. I write for myself alone but love to share. Of the poems...
  February 20th, 2024 06:35
• Never to return ! ; 9 February, 2024 (Soman Ragavan) From time imemorial men have broken their words. Treaties were made to be...
  February 20th, 2024 05:20
• What you think? (Orchidee) I think I\'ve been to that church. There was only one church that i have...
  February 20th, 2024 05:10
• Sparrow (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Orchi
  February 20th, 2024 05:04
• What Ghost! (Goldfinch60) Had me going for a while Andy. This one had a great build up and when the...
  February 20th, 2024 04:42
• Love Button (Thomas W Case) This was great, the picture at the top and the continued build up led me...
  February 19th, 2024 17:06
• Lippy (Doggerel Dave) I\'ve always been a fan of a guy that takes a chance. I used to fish with...
  February 19th, 2024 17:03
• Dog Lonely (Teddy.15) Loneliness comes in many forms at different times of life. I had a dog, ...
  February 19th, 2024 15:09
• Saving Strength (Orchidee) Trust, faith, belief, all elements needed in life as well as religion....
  February 19th, 2024 14:07
• What! (2781) The extremes that things can go to when a slippery slope is taken. Great...
  February 19th, 2024 11:47
• Always Respect. (Goldfinch60) It seems that many miss this lesson in their upbringing. Why do some...
  February 19th, 2024 05:08
• Identity (Doggerel Dave) So true Dave. This piece is easily relatable.
  February 18th, 2024 08:18
• long distance for now (Arqios) Time stops for no man. A sense of urgency here and almost a sense of...
  February 18th, 2024 06:43
• AND THE LINES WERE LONG (Bobby O) A great description of the process of writing a novel, song, or poem. A...
  February 18th, 2024 06:36
• Paddy McGee (Teddy.15) I always loved ballads as poems. They may be longer but the story...
  February 18th, 2024 06:32
• 21 Again - Ta-Dah! (Orchidee) Happy Birthday dear Orchi may you have many more.
  February 18th, 2024 05:22
• Discarded (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Orchi
  February 18th, 2024 05:19
• Sitting With A Harem. (Goldfinch60) I too have been in this position and it feels pretty good. Great write...
  February 18th, 2024 04:55
• Going Forth... (Orchidee) Orchi interesting that Christianity shares the idea of duality the same as...
  February 17th, 2024 11:38
• Invention (2781) Interesting how we still ascribe emotions and goodness or bad to the heart...
  February 17th, 2024 06:51
• Crafty admiration (2781) Catchy, smooth, easy and quick.
  February 17th, 2024 06:11
• Indecent Proposal (Teddy.15) Always a fan of Shakespeare and many of his lines, I have wondered how he...
  February 17th, 2024 06:09
• The Titanic. (Doggerel Dave) I to think they should have paid attention to the word they gave, in that...
  February 16th, 2024 20:34
• Deutschland (Olaf Gatermann) My German is very limited but without knowing that there was a translation...
  February 16th, 2024 18:08
• Fantasia (Teddy.15) You had me. I myself was thinking of when I was playing piano. I never...
  February 16th, 2024 15:25
• Prayer Providings (Orchidee) It is always helpful to know that someone is on your side. Good write
  February 16th, 2024 05:03
• What Matters. (Goldfinch60) Yes setting of priorities of what matters is an important issue and when...
  February 16th, 2024 03:26
• No One Else Can See Them (Teddy.15) Haunting. Yes I too at times find myself talking to such ghosts of people...
  February 15th, 2024 13:57
• Valentine\'s Verve (Alan R) A poem that not only contains beauty but wisdom
  February 15th, 2024 08:18
• Fresh Coffee? (Goldfinch60) Waste not want not I always say. Couldn\'t be worse than that high priced...
  February 15th, 2024 02:49
• The land of Anon. (Doggerel Dave) I just came from there, in fact I might still be there, I\'m not sure,...
  February 15th, 2024 02:43
• rosy cheeked (Arqios) Your poems are a privilege to review. I feel in ahh of their composition...
  February 14th, 2024 06:18
• Valentine (2781) Great use of the dichotomy of passion and love and then to end with a...
  February 14th, 2024 04:56
• Rapture of my Heart (Teddy.15) Yes I could tell this by the nature of your poems. A poem appropriate for...
  February 14th, 2024 04:05
• You know Val? (Orchidee) An aged poem of passion on love\'s special day. Like a fine wine love...
  February 14th, 2024 03:59
• Dante and I (Teddy.15) Here the image of flames spreads from love to hell and even heaven where...
  February 13th, 2024 05:41
• think of others (Arqios) Your poems always leave a great deal of room for interpretation. I...
  February 13th, 2024 05:36
• Pyracantha Battle. (Goldfinch60) I empathize in that I have been there before and fought that battle with...
  February 13th, 2024 05:05
• A Calculated Mess (Thomas W Case) Great descriptiveness that left a picture imprinted in my mind. I have...
  February 12th, 2024 15:48
• Noncence Geography (Teddy.15) We all carry with us who we are and where we came from. A beautiful...
  February 12th, 2024 11:58
• Comfort of the Spirit - Ye Olde Prayers series (20) (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn Orchi
  February 12th, 2024 08:52
• A Triolet Ahead of The Pack (Doggerel Dave) Late to the party but feeling pretty much the same way and yes three is...
  February 12th, 2024 07:27
• The \"Jabeda\" ; 11 February, 2024 (Soman Ragavan) I have always enjoyed poems that tell a story and this is one rich in...
  February 12th, 2024 07:02
• think of you (Arqios) As is common with you, your words are captivating and pregnant with...
  February 12th, 2024 06:50
• Sacrifice (2781) I like Neville began with the idea that it was a love poem but then...
  February 12th, 2024 06:25
• Snow Ghost (Bella Shepard) A great message again as an allegory and ending so well in the last...
  February 11th, 2024 15:37
• Illusion (Bella Shepard) A Haiku of wisdom and so well stated.
  February 11th, 2024 15:33
• I Wish I Were in Puerto Rico (Thomas W Case) I enjoyed this piece. It didn\'t make me wish that I was in Porto Rico but...
  February 11th, 2024 15:24
• Showtime (Teddy.15) \"As evening sun lays his head onto winter\'s frozen bed\" a magnificent...
  February 11th, 2024 07:08
• think of me (Arqios) A beautiful and melancholic poem with wistful thoughts that evoke a deep...
  February 11th, 2024 06:54
• Pursuing Peace - Ye Olde Prayers series (19) (Orchidee) This should be required in all churches. A message more Christian than...
  February 11th, 2024 05:56
• I Want To Go Back. (Goldfinch60) We all can dream but until each and every one changes what is important to...
  February 11th, 2024 05:19
• Resolve To Rest (Orchidee) I used to let my friends carry my back pack. I told them it was very...
  February 10th, 2024 11:36
• Leave Me Here To Dream (Song Lyrics) (Teddy.15) \"I’m a stream without water tears just don’t flow the river I\'ve...
  February 10th, 2024 08:58
• The Late Great Hieronymus Bosch (Neville) A homage to a great painter who was one of my favorites in my teen years....
  February 10th, 2024 06:15
• The Joy of Silence (Neville) This has a very familiar feel to it, maybe it is just life. The format...
  February 10th, 2024 06:12
• Listen, Speak, Act. (Goldfinch60) A great message Andy that we all wish that others and also ourselves would...
  February 10th, 2024 04:36
• Vincent (Thomas W Case) A very powerful write. Great imagery about people and one of my favorite...
  February 9th, 2024 18:27
• Senryu to Opera (Teddy.15) Agree always loved music. Very nice
  February 9th, 2024 13:46
• Comforting Creator - Ye Olde Prayers series (18) (Orchidee) As one of his sheep I love lamb chops does that make me a cannibal? Good...
  February 9th, 2024 10:42
• And It Rained. (Goldfinch60) A great metaphor, we all have deluges in our lives our banks will overflow...
  February 9th, 2024 05:47
• I Wish My Fears Would Migrate (Thomas W Case) Very relatable in that we all have experienced fear.
  February 8th, 2024 20:01
• Lighten Our Darkness - Ye Olde Prayers series (17) (Orchidee) There are a lot of times I could use more light but tell God not to turn...
  February 8th, 2024 15:38
• Solitude (Teddy.15) I often wonder how much of a poem is the poet. I write many that are not...
  February 8th, 2024 09:38
• House Is Home Tanka. (Goldfinch60) A thought that should be kept in our minds and hearts whether beset from...
  February 8th, 2024 04:42
• The Sleep of an Artist (Thomas W Case) Passionate creations indeed. A powerful statement forcefully said.
  February 7th, 2024 20:50
• Hope Of Help 3 (Orchidee) I often use the same title, so what. A good write Orchi I could always use...
  February 7th, 2024 09:48
• The Toilet Seat (Doggerel Dave) A limerick like poem common problem for those that live with the opposite...
  February 7th, 2024 09:39
• Butterflies are rare (Teddy.15) Not only rare but beautiful in color as they drop and raise. I find their...
  February 7th, 2024 09:17
• Labels (Doggerel Dave) I hate labels, I think that it takes all the individuality out of people,...
  February 7th, 2024 04:23
• The Friday Boys. (Goldfinch60) A call for comradery and fun is never a bad thing. It is always good to be...
  February 7th, 2024 04:06
• For O (Thomas W Case) A plea, declaration and statement well stated and powerful.
  February 6th, 2024 15:05
• The Afterlife – A Case Study (Doggerel Dave) Fun from beginning to end or rather from heaven to hell. Given the choice...
  February 6th, 2024 09:28
• Days of Wine And...... (Orchidee) Ya been turning water to wine? I think I hear a hymn in that somewhere....
  February 6th, 2024 06:06
• The One Dreams are Made of (Teddy.15) Dreams are wonderful things, the fuel of inspiration and drive that leads...
  February 6th, 2024 05:59
• The Light Of Spring. (Goldfinch60) Spring, new life, more light hours, all enhance the mood and how can new...
  February 6th, 2024 04:42
• Little Birds (Thomas W Case) \"Beneath these satin sheets, my memory flutters like little birds...
  February 5th, 2024 10:31
• My Anxiety (Christina8) Brave self revelation in this piece. The bright side of anxiety is it is...
  February 5th, 2024 10:26
• Crowned Creator (Orchidee) A hymn of not only praise but gratitude another great write Orchi
  February 5th, 2024 10:00
• Michael Jordan’s Boots (Doggerel Dave) I don\'t know who would buy them in that they are large boots to fill and...
  February 5th, 2024 06:44
• Bigger Picture (Teddy.15) It is the last line that says it so well \"how very lucky I am just to be...
  February 5th, 2024 06:39
• Understanding Love. (Goldfinch60) To understand love is a contradiction in terms. Understanding requires...
  February 5th, 2024 04:43
• poetically breathe (Arqios) It is often from emptiness that a poem emerges. That void as the pause in...
  February 4th, 2024 22:25
• The Last? (Thomas W Case) Yes I too have thought that any poem could be the last, but this would...
  February 4th, 2024 14:03
• A Hazy Strange Winter (Parisab) Poignantly melancholic and sad. As a retired psychologist I have heard...
  February 4th, 2024 14:00
• Paraclete\'s Presence - Ye Olde Prayers series (16) (Orchidee) I\'m glad you explained Paraclete, I learned a new word today. Great...
  February 4th, 2024 13:49
• Of Time and Of Love (Teddy.15) Such a great idea seeing memory as a time machine. This may be more true...
  February 4th, 2024 09:57