Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Under the Corn Moon Spell (Tristan Robert Lange) Harrowing, haunting, hair raising a poem of darkness with things that go...
  September 9th, 2025 06:24
• Maintenance time & Simply fun (Maplespal) Both lovely in their own way these poems send a message of managing one\'s...
  September 9th, 2025 06:07
• Weathered Face (Shahla Latifi) Lovely a tribute to a man, husband, father. For some reason the image of...
  September 9th, 2025 06:03
• the old home (Arqios) A poem where nostalgia leaks from old pipes and shadowy ghosts reside in...
  September 9th, 2025 05:59
• tears (Jim56) Nicely worded Jim the duality of tears.
  September 9th, 2025 05:01
• Hope (Iam1ItchyLizzard) A touching homage to a mother past. Lovely
  September 9th, 2025 04:28
• Desire (2781) Tis far better to give hope than answers. Hope people will follow answers...
  September 9th, 2025 04:26
• And With Slicken Eyes I Say, Mother I Plead (Asaan Abbott) An arrow to the heart. When mother does not arrive then who else will....
  September 9th, 2025 04:24
• Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan) Admirable independence is a strength. So hard to walk one\'s own path...
  September 9th, 2025 04:21
• NO MORE PAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Graphic and nicely worded this poem presents the process of death in stark...
  September 9th, 2025 04:18
• Pigeons at the Table 🐦 (Malcolm Gladwin) Full of incongruities, dualities, the illogical and random plays...
  September 9th, 2025 04:16
• Automation (Keeter C) The irony is what is satire today is reality tomorrow. As with all other...
  September 9th, 2025 04:11
• Ink-Stained Hands (Alison) The messy process and evolution of a person in this poem. Well done
  September 9th, 2025 04:07
• I am the Storm (Amirose2015) I like the format and wording of this poem that breaks down the components...
  September 9th, 2025 04:05
• Out (Fränz Müller) A metaphor that chills the bones. It to me speaks of alienation. Nicely...
  September 9th, 2025 04:03
• troubled poetess (The breaktime monologue) This poem brims with anger and rage. Highly emotional it speaks out at...
  September 9th, 2025 04:00
• Hello Dad. (Goldfinch60) A true homage to your father with whom you share the attribute of love for...
  September 9th, 2025 03:54
• like a bird with painted wings (MR.apocalypse) Now this one is quite thought provoking. Well done
  September 8th, 2025 20:28
• The homeless (Shadowbones) This speaks of how the world is at present. Nicely done
  September 8th, 2025 20:14
• On Mimes (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A most lovely senryu that is far deeper than the surface. A fave
  September 8th, 2025 19:03
• A cup of coffee (Nicole Pritchard) Good advice in poetic form that flows well and with good rhyme. Nicely
  September 8th, 2025 19:01
• Welcome me …. (Iam1ItchyLizzard) Vacillation such a common occurrence in life. Not being ready or sure well...
  September 8th, 2025 16:46
• Smiling Like Trouble (A Boy With Roses) This poem is full of various symbols and allegories Nicely done I like the...
  September 8th, 2025 15:27
• In memory (Lorenz) A good write with more symbols than a drum set. Nicely written.
  September 8th, 2025 14:04
• The Storm (Jenny.g) Sensual, erotic, sexual pulsing with desire and passion. Nicely written
  September 8th, 2025 12:51
• Not Invisible. (G.Cabús) A beautiful write about us as social animals. We may not crave attention...
  September 8th, 2025 12:49
• Morning Beautiful (Aa Harvey) I have not heard it but it seems a beautiful concept and reminds me of a...
  September 8th, 2025 12:26
• The Captain Who Sinks in Silence (Cruel Summer) The metaphor is a strong one that conveys the feeling well. Nicely put...
  September 8th, 2025 11:51
• The Universe and the Mountain (RSM0812) I love the line (where midnight takes a shallow nap) This piece it floats...
  September 8th, 2025 11:48
• Nobody is mine (Priya Tomar) Sad. When nobody wants you, you must fall back upon wanting oneself and so...
  September 8th, 2025 11:46
• How do I explain? (Meera Mere) Most lovely, tender and sweet its words fall like a summer rain. A...
  September 8th, 2025 11:12
• A Tryant\'s Folly (YannickM) More metaphor than mosquitos in a swamp this poem buzzes with carnage....
  September 8th, 2025 11:10
• Dancing Under Borrowed Stars (Gray0328) In the transe of a dance, the beam of a dream where music and humanity mix...
  September 8th, 2025 11:06
• Kill Your Demons (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) No place more real than amongst heathens, no place more comfortable than...
  September 8th, 2025 11:03
• Flowers in a valley (Pineapple_pizza018) A great metaphor in this poem and very nicely written
  September 8th, 2025 09:16
• Why Are You Nice (A.N.) A poem that dives deep into the emotion of pity and feeling bad for...
  September 8th, 2025 09:14
• Twin Curse (Kurt Philip Behm) The aftermath of addiction and the disaster left behind. Nicely written...
  September 8th, 2025 09:08
• Stay Glowed Up (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) A poem that is inspirational to keep people going. Nicely written and...
  September 8th, 2025 09:06
• The Night You Said You Missed Me (Louiray) A most lovely write of the unsureness of love and the trepidation that...
  September 8th, 2025 07:57
• Vision (Keeter C) Eyes mirror of the soul show what lurks beneath if one can gain entrance...
  September 8th, 2025 07:55
• The Usurper\'s Call (Tristan Robert Lange) Hanging humility on the loose nail of pretense often results in one\'s...
  September 8th, 2025 07:51
• The Perfect Wife (Teddy.15) You are on the same track as I my friend in todays poem. A fun read that...
  September 8th, 2025 07:49
• The Elated Confessant (My First Holy Confession) (Tony Grannell) Ah the rapture of forgiveness and the purging of the soul on Monday\'s...
  September 8th, 2025 06:48
• Do you remember? (Maplespal) This poem evokes thoughts of how we all see things different and how even...
  September 8th, 2025 06:37
• best friend (Jim56) Another great poem about man\'s best friend. Loved it Jim
  September 8th, 2025 05:10
• The Hunter (Anthony Hanible) One generally finds what one is looking for. A short poem with a powerful...
  September 8th, 2025 05:09
• Fogtown Fables (Awam) A fun play on words where a story is told in nouns instead of adjective...
  September 8th, 2025 05:08
• 𝔗𝔦𝔱𝔩𝔢𝔡 \"𝔄𝔴𝔞𝔶\" 𝔖𝔱𝔬𝔯𝔶 𝔗𝔦𝔪𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) This poem speaks to me on a deeper level of someone that has worries that...
  September 8th, 2025 05:05
• ABANDONED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Captured by the multiple levels of the first stanza I have to say you have...
  September 8th, 2025 05:01
• Brisket Friend (Matthew R. Callies) Love brisket and loved the allegory as well. Nicely drawn out in all its...
  September 8th, 2025 04:58
• DA DUM DA (Acheel) Now that was quite creative and clever a poem in meter with no words. In...
  September 8th, 2025 04:56
• Child, ONE CHILD (Arqios) Complexity put in simplicity. Feelings of duality where there is no...
  September 8th, 2025 04:53
• Dawns Moon. (Goldfinch60) I too love a beautiful moon and the moon light. Nicely penned Gold
  September 8th, 2025 04:46
• 3/27/25 (Wren) I hear the song Gethsemane from Jesus Christ Superstar in this poem. I...
  September 8th, 2025 04:44
• Dusk (Nami) I love the way that you let the unsaid tell the story the allegories and...
  September 8th, 2025 04:39
• Untitled (Fränz Müller) Love the metaphor and image created in this poem that leaves both a...
  September 8th, 2025 04:33
• Almost (Meera Mere) A sad reflection of never quite measuring up to expectations. Nicely done.
  September 7th, 2025 20:37
• Ha...ha...ha... gotcha! (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A interesting poem of reflections and ponderings. Well done
  September 7th, 2025 19:40
• Out they go (Hzugman) Now there is a poem that might be an old person\'s favorite. Reminds me of...
  September 7th, 2025 19:37
• stay (Lunarchloedip) A poem of a love that is strong and special. Nicely written
  September 7th, 2025 17:00
• A Piece of Paper (NinjaGirl) A series of consequences that remind me of childhood and many such actions...
  September 7th, 2025 16:56
• Smile (Amethyste) Such a cute and lovely read it speaks such an innocent and childlike type...
  September 7th, 2025 16:54
• When the Empath Stops Pleasing Everyone. (Friendship) A wonderful poem of using ones perceived deficits as strengths turning...
  September 7th, 2025 15:46
• Lost Paradise (RSM0812) I love the veiled biblical metaphors incorporated in this poem. Well...
  September 7th, 2025 15:40
• A collection of ‘Love is…’ Poetry - Sand (Aa Harvey) Motivational and inspirational asking for devotion and patience. Nicely...
  September 7th, 2025 14:18
• Book Re Written (Lisa C. Crump) A poem of resolution, determination and bravery that result in pride and...
  September 7th, 2025 14:17
• Strife (Keeter C) Great wording and well imaged, a poem of warning that man is now able to...
  September 7th, 2025 14:14
• God Was There (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A beautiful poem of faith and devotion to God. Strong and nicely said.
  September 7th, 2025 14:10
• Witness to pain (Nicole Pritchard) A beautiful poem of a pledge to help and stand by another through dark and...
  September 7th, 2025 12:21
• Don\'t Look Down (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) The duality of life and push and pull of all things. Lovely
  September 7th, 2025 11:27
• The Boogie Woogie Lovers (Tony Grannell) Tony a poem with atmosphere and wording to suit. A fave
  September 7th, 2025 11:26
• UPCOMING (Acheel) And a great fragment it is. Very poetic. Loved it a fave
  September 7th, 2025 11:21
• The Tangerine Sky (Thomas W Case) A good description set in this metaphor. Lovely
  September 7th, 2025 11:08
• The Journey (Malcolm Gladwin) A poem of love and universality through eternity. Nicely done
  September 7th, 2025 11:07
• On the Farm (Igor Vykhovanets) This collection of poems seems a whole book beginning and ending with...
  September 7th, 2025 08:24
• Watch (2781) A most interesting write with many religious connotations. Nicely worded...
  September 7th, 2025 08:19
• Questions for you (1) & You\'re Mine (Maplespal) A most interesting concept that is so commonly voiced. It is meant as an...
  September 7th, 2025 08:17
• Original Sin (Tristan Robert Lange) A most interesting write of how individuals interpretations distort and...
  September 7th, 2025 08:14
• Vadim Zaitsev. The Dawn Queen. (Cellinic) Passion hypnotic, seduced by desire in a poem nicely written. Well done
  September 7th, 2025 07:05
• Grrrrrrrrr (Jenny.g) A fun read that starts out so soft and sweet and ends so powerfully. Good...
  September 7th, 2025 07:03
• eternally (Kevin Michael Bloor) A most beautiful poem of a love that was always there through the turning...
  September 7th, 2025 05:58
• The king (Starlight) I would have to say that this would be an ideal monarch should one ever...
  September 7th, 2025 05:27
• we all have a heart (Jim56) Sweet and lovely this poem speaks love to all. Nicely done Jim
  September 7th, 2025 05:25
• “south of the equator” (Arqios) Cryptic your poems have grown and matured or was I blind before. This last...
  September 7th, 2025 05:24
• Ligature of Language (Awam) Well worded this sends its message well in metaphor and allegory. Loved it...
  September 7th, 2025 05:20
• MADMEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem speaking of the power of the words used by poet, historian, madman....
  September 7th, 2025 05:19
• On life (NafisaSB) This poem encompasses several thoughts but to each the onion comes back to...
  September 7th, 2025 05:06
• 𝔓𝔞𝔦𝔫𝔱𝔦𝔫𝔤𝔰 𝔬𝔣 𝔓𝔦𝔠𝔱𝔲𝔯𝔢𝔰 🥂 (Keyara S Trotman) A poem well written of the experiencing of extasy and the flight that goes...
  September 7th, 2025 05:03
• Cohens v. Virginia (Matthew R. Callies) Well crafted this poem portrays well the matter in good rhyme and meter....
  September 7th, 2025 05:01
• Breathe (Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice) So simple yet so useful and meaningful the advice given is golden in this...
  September 7th, 2025 04:57
• Catatonia (Rebellion_in_sanity) A bit of Friedrich Nietzsche here. Years ago I wrote an essay tongue in...
  September 7th, 2025 04:48
• This also has to stop (Orchidee) Genius in madness to tell the entry to a joke and not finish it is the...
  September 7th, 2025 04:42
• Painting Music (Goldfinch60) At a deep level the senses are interchangeable one blending into another...
  September 7th, 2025 04:39
• Fear of Word Blindness (Neville) There is an image here that is so Zen as I meditated on this I see silence...
  September 7th, 2025 04:35
• My friend once sighed (Amy Michelle Mosier) This poem nicely reflects not only on attention to small common details...
  September 7th, 2025 04:18
• Un Reve de Misère (Fränz Müller) A wonderful poem full of great images and wording nice rhyme as well and a...
  September 6th, 2025 20:23
• i miss our coffee dates (Jon Nakapalau) Memories are the glue as time passes. Such an interesting presentation of...
  September 6th, 2025 19:00
• The weight of burden (Nicole Pritchard) A beautiful message of how others can be what is needed to pull us out of...
  September 6th, 2025 18:16
• THE GREAT DYING / THE PESTILENCE (Saša Milivojev) Nicely done a poem dark and with little hope for the old but with some...
  September 6th, 2025 17:48
• Stage (Keeter C) If one could not think about the future it would be another type of bliss...
  September 6th, 2025 17:15