Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Just a world (Alan R) A fine description of the world we live in, or at least most of us. There...
  April 14th, 2024 02:43
• Modern poet (Sorenbarrett) Thanks so much for the review and comment it is appreciated
  April 14th, 2024 02:41
• The Shadows Were Back. (Goldfinch60) I remember those years they were my teen years as well and the music was...
  April 14th, 2024 02:26
• A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody (Doggerel Dave) I guess I need to get out some of my old poems and rework them. A merry...
  April 14th, 2024 02:21
• This Morning (Bella Shepard) A most poignant and sad poem Bella. There are so many senseless tragedies...
  April 13th, 2024 16:07
• Argh! Pain (Orchidee) When I was younger I had a puffer fish in my aquarium, didn\'t last long...
  April 13th, 2024 10:22
• My Darling London (Teddy.15) It is strange how locations of birth, childhood, and places where one...
  April 13th, 2024 04:55
• Custer. (Goldfinch60) I can imagine several other images less holy that he could have painted...
  April 13th, 2024 03:23
• The Womb\'s Lullaby (Thomas W Case) The rhythm reflected in the rhythm of the poem itself. Yes I have felt it...
  April 12th, 2024 14:17
• Saving Safety (Orchidee) When I was young and even more poor than now I banked at Zion\'s bank. I...
  April 12th, 2024 14:09
• A Poet’s Death or Encore? (Teddy.15) Such a grand love, inspiring and in this there is no shame. In the...
  April 12th, 2024 14:03
• Weak To Strong (Goldfinch60) A message that many need to hear. I do believe in giving up on a method...
  April 12th, 2024 04:19
• Olive Oil (Orchidee) I haven\'t seen an olive tree since California. I do love olive oil...
  April 12th, 2024 04:15
• Observer Of A Gentle Soul (Teddy.15) Such a message of what we all go through in many different ways of...
  April 11th, 2024 06:45
• Unitarians. (Goldfinch60) I too feel that religion is more of a problem than a gift. Even the symbol...
  April 11th, 2024 04:36
• Dead End Eyes (Thomas W Case) I have seen eyes like that before. Dead end eyes often lead to a dead end...
  April 11th, 2024 04:27
• Counting Cost of the Cross (Orchidee) So as not to lose my soul I have it chained to my ankle. I do tend to...
  April 10th, 2024 12:09
• See (2781) Sacraments always bothered me somehow. It seems cannibalistic, excuse the...
  April 10th, 2024 12:04
• Tangerine Dreams (Teddy.15) Such imagery in vivid color and setting. I too remember the Beatles, one...
  April 10th, 2024 05:45
• Cheltenham Croquet. (Goldfinch60) A long anticipated celebration and enjoyment as well as tribute to a...
  April 10th, 2024 04:01
• Narcissist (Thomas W Case) A vivid description of a narcissistic person. Difficult to live with I\'m...
  April 9th, 2024 20:06
• Waste places (2781) Not much of a religious guy anymore but I hear the message and yea there...
  April 9th, 2024 07:27
• Senryu 3 (Teddy.15) A sad truth and a well written piece Teddy.
  April 9th, 2024 07:05
• My World. (Goldfinch60) An element of poetry often forgotten the twist at the end that makes sense...
  April 9th, 2024 03:36
• I\'ve Been Touched By An Angel Today. (Teddy.15) Some beautiful lines: \"I had been struck fiercely by a bolt of...
  April 8th, 2024 15:44
• O Abundant Spirit (Orchidee) I made a friend of death too Orchi but he told me he does no favors even...
  April 8th, 2024 15:27
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) So many of us have dreamed of flight and gliding over land and sea....
  April 8th, 2024 04:36
• Dreams of the Fishes (Thomas W Case) Sleeping with the fish always had a different meaning for me. In this case...
  April 7th, 2024 23:47
• Sustenance (Bella Shepard) Wouldn\'t it be nice to be obese on wisdom? Great write Bella
  April 7th, 2024 19:47
• In Harmony Together. (Goldfinch60) Green the symbol of new life. A great metaphor Andy. Clear with youth and...
  April 7th, 2024 04:06
• Red (Anthony “Tappy” Paull) Loved it. Basic addressing a primary color. I have written a couple of...
  April 6th, 2024 14:21
• Cycle (John Prophet) Loved the format of this poem with its one word lines and the flow that it...
  April 6th, 2024 14:18
• Noir Nightmares (Katdream) Noir is indeed the feel of this poem. It is dark in its shadows and paints...
  April 6th, 2024 14:15
• April Trials (Bella Shepard) When it comes to politics you could never offend me Bella since I see the...
  April 6th, 2024 13:42
• Rejoicing Repertoire (Orchidee) It\'s that slow to anger part that I worry about along with casting the...
  April 6th, 2024 11:01
• Nightingale and I (Teddy.15) Never give up on oneself is a battle cry that should be held by all of us....
  April 6th, 2024 10:56
• War (2781) War hurts the poor fought over gold sometimes religion, or land we\'re...
  April 6th, 2024 07:50
• The Village Ghost (Goldfinch60) I enjoyed this tale Gold and brought a smile to me with the end line....
  April 6th, 2024 04:42
• Reflection of the Soul (Thomas W Case) They say that eyes are the mirror of the soul and so this poem reads. So...
  April 5th, 2024 19:55
• Dear Little One (𓆩Mase𓆪) A great message of reassurance and guidance. Well said.
  April 5th, 2024 19:53
• A Perfect Madness (Teddy.15) I love the picture and the poem but having worked with the insane for many...
  April 5th, 2024 17:09
• Wholesome Wordings (Orchidee) Many tell me I should be afraid and fear but I\'ve got too much other...
  April 5th, 2024 10:44
• The Lord is my God. (2781) So many thoughts common to many yet a beautiful wish. \"But who is my...
  April 5th, 2024 09:20
• So All Is Fine. (Goldfinch60) Words that reminded me of my father who when asked how he was, always used...
  April 5th, 2024 04:56
• Leopard Can\'t Change its Spots (Teddy.15) Dreams, such an interesting topic. Some say their meanings are important,...
  April 4th, 2024 13:03
• Persevere (Bella Shepard) A great take on Descartes quote turned to another view and the play on...
  April 4th, 2024 08:15
• Victory Verified (Orchidee) With this thought in mind there is no need for Botox. One of my favorite...
  April 4th, 2024 08:09
• Going To Galilee (Orchidee) A most famous story well told in clear description. Nicely written Orchi
  April 3rd, 2024 05:45
• Enlightened (Teddy.15) Beautifully stated in poetic style a feeling of relief. Lifted from the...
  April 3rd, 2024 05:41
• The New Season. (Goldfinch60) Something historical always gives a little more weight to something. I...
  April 3rd, 2024 05:32
• A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say….. (Doggerel Dave) A great message. When one reaches a certain age years and count are no...
  April 2nd, 2024 18:44
• Whose Will To Do? (Orchidee) Very timely Orchi and well written as well.
  March 26th, 2024 11:30
• Please Achieve Peace. (Goldfinch60) Peace such a lovely thought but like most other good thoughts almost...
  March 26th, 2024 11:27
• Hard Head Soft Behind (Bragee) A wistful write merging the past with the present.
  March 26th, 2024 11:15
• Love Letter (Teddy.15) Very clever wording and idea in general/ Loved it.
  March 26th, 2024 11:11
• Faithful Family (Orchidee) Now this is a bit different it speaks of Jesus\' brothers and sisters but...
  March 19th, 2024 10:19
• A Very Modern Tale (Teddy.15) A great twist on an old tale. Funny how time changes things. \"Romeo, my...
  March 19th, 2024 10:14
• The Proper Task (Thomas W Case) The metaphors are great in this poem. Nicely done
  March 19th, 2024 09:58
• Vuitton Clerihew (Doggerel Dave) It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.
  March 18th, 2024 16:29
• Guide And Guard (Orchidee) Trust is a big word for someone you can\'t see and or hear. Someone that...
  March 18th, 2024 09:42
• Six (Thomas W Case) Very nice it speaks to those few days where poems just roll out.
  March 16th, 2024 23:16
• Pedestal (Teddy.15) Love as a word in English is such a complex word. It can mean so many...
  March 15th, 2024 04:40
• Everlasting Exhortation (Orchidee) My parents used to tell me the same thing. Our commandments obey and they...
  March 14th, 2024 11:36
• Guiness Is Good For You. (Goldfinch60) Didn\'t know that. Not sure it\'s available where I\'m at. I love a beer...
  March 14th, 2024 05:04
• Shanties Getting Better. (Goldfinch60) Why is it that such pub stories are so nostalgic and warm in their nature....
  March 14th, 2024 05:00
• Humbly Hoping (Orchidee) Yes indeed Orchi \"in spirit poor\" it seems that most church goers and...
  March 14th, 2024 04:56
• Tariffs (2781) This in its literal sense I experience myself with constant costs. This...
  March 13th, 2024 05:58
• That Sorceriffic Ass (Thomas W Case) A definite statement that can be taken various ways. Nicely done
  March 12th, 2024 15:29
• Beautiful people (Alan R) The goodness of some people is a blessing to see. When that goodness comes...
  March 12th, 2024 11:22
• Confession. (Doggerel Dave) Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual...
  March 12th, 2024 07:53
• Shadow and Light (Saxon Crow) A most interesting write. \"But magic is real Where we are not And...
  March 12th, 2024 05:44
• Mercy Missive (Orchidee) Well done Orchi
  March 12th, 2024 03:03
• One for Hunter (Thomas W Case) The first person helps this wonderful write present itself in a vivid and...
  March 12th, 2024 02:42
• Egg yolk on a comet tail (Teddy.15) A beautiful thought but I believe the the stars above are nothing more...
  March 11th, 2024 15:13
• Fossilised? (Orchidee) Now those human footprints in rock are explained. Good write Orchi.
  March 8th, 2024 04:30
• Joy, Love, Sadness and Hate. (Goldfinch60) This is why I do not watch the news anymore. The imbalance is such that it...
  March 8th, 2024 04:26
• Dancing with Doubt (Cloie) An existential journey that at one time or another we all take. Nicely...
  March 7th, 2024 12:05
• Deceitful Desires (Orchidee) Lust is a big problem not only morally but practically. It never ends...
  March 7th, 2024 09:13
• The Great Journey Home (Teddy.15) Now Teddy this could be the last goodbye from one departing or just the...
  March 7th, 2024 09:00
• The George. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful story that rings with nostalgia and fondness. Very nice Gold.
  March 7th, 2024 05:50
• Confident Comfortings (Orchidee) Confusing how many names he has. Last time you said his name is always the...
  March 6th, 2024 16:58
• Death In Verona (Teddy.15) I know that this is an ancient tale going back before Matteo Bandello\'s...
  March 6th, 2024 16:48
• Exposé (Doggerel Dave) I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good...
  March 6th, 2024 06:32
• A CRITICAL MEASURE (Bobby O) This holds a great deal within it. A deeply human experience that anyone...
  March 6th, 2024 05:19
• Looking Forward. (Goldfinch60) Gratitude for the past and hopeful anticipation of the future are keys to...
  March 6th, 2024 05:10
• False Spring (Firefall) The analogy was a good one and was unexpected despite the title. Nicely...
  March 5th, 2024 15:14
• Presence Providence (Orchidee) My name is the same too is that special? Good write Orchi.
  March 5th, 2024 05:10
• Algebra of Love (Teddy.15) A thought profound set in a poem. Yes is it because opposites attract? Is...
  March 5th, 2024 05:06
• Veil of Sorrow (Cloie) Focusing on the bad and painful only enhances it. This world is a balance...
  March 5th, 2024 04:05
• Walking The River Of Time. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful metaphor for the changes in life that come unplanned and need...
  March 5th, 2024 03:33
• Grieving Heart (Teddy.15) The metaphor is a clear sign indeed but in the winds and rain (tears) of...
  March 4th, 2024 04:47
• Must you.....? (Orchidee) Made me chuckle Orchi I hope you have a good hair day.
  March 4th, 2024 04:42
• Peace On Earth Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) So well said Andy a well organized piece full of wisdom that I too wish...
  March 4th, 2024 02:18
• Echoes of Lavender (Cassie58) Beautiful images that take me to another plane. Lovely feelings go with...
  March 3rd, 2024 21:45
• Unbounded (Teddy.15) Beautiful thoughts in beautiful words. Wistful in nature almost surreal.
  March 3rd, 2024 21:41
• Among Poets (Rhmn_7) A great question put in verse. I can only speak for myself. I write for...
  March 3rd, 2024 08:11
• I\'ll Sacrifice (Cloie) There are no bonds stronger than the love between mother and child....
  March 3rd, 2024 08:04
• Listening Lord (Orchidee) Now you are reviewing my bible knowledge. This one seems a bit more...
  March 3rd, 2024 05:43
• Glimmers in the Dark (Cloie) A great contrast is shown here. Light could be knowledge and dark...
  March 2nd, 2024 11:20
• Eruption (Teddy.15) Love is not only at the top but also at the bottom. It is the underlying...
  March 2nd, 2024 09:23