Comments on community poems by hzugman
- This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
Hey, D. D. Thanx for the mouse tale (or is it tail - always get those two...
August 31st, 2022 12:25 - Breaking news (Hzugman)
Thanx, Little Talks
August 30th, 2022 09:43 - My Mother- My Heart (LittleTalks)
Well done. Nice round the world tour.
August 27th, 2022 23:52 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
Love the last line D.D.
August 22nd, 2022 21:47 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Peace of mind is a very rare and precious commodity.
August 10th, 2022 19:35 - Calculated risk (Hzugman)
August 10th, 2022 19:33 - I wrote a poem that no one reads (Tallisman)
Very nice progression. Love to hear that song.
August 8th, 2022 15:16 - I wrote a poem that no one reads (Tallisman)
August 8th, 2022 15:15 - Hot or Wot? (Doggerel Dave)
Love the last minute substitution while leaving the original in.
August 7th, 2022 19:52 - Im Worthless (and that’s on me) (A__pott)
Cogent and profound. It\'s a very trite and worn out thought but...
August 2nd, 2022 09:57 - Searching for a question…(Acrostic) (Tallisman)
Neat poem and neat acrostic. Didn\'t spot it.
July 27th, 2022 15:26 - FINAL BREATH (Raven333)
Very moving Raven. Good flow of ideas.
July 27th, 2022 10:26 - Why, write? (L. B. Mek)
Well done. My theory is just start writing and the ideas will follow. ...
July 21st, 2022 08:51 - Fibbing mathematically (Hzugman)
Thank you, Paul
July 20th, 2022 09:42 - Happy Birthday big shot (Hzugman)
Thanx Raven333.
July 17th, 2022 22:19 - I\'ve heard sweet talk before (Hzugman)
Thanx, L. B.
July 15th, 2022 08:08 - It\'s really easy (Hzugman)
Thanx, Judy.
July 11th, 2022 16:42 - Heaven knows (JudyStella)
Short and sweet but yet complete. Nice one Judy.
July 5th, 2022 10:37 - Superstar (Hzugman)
I\'ve been trying to keep that a secret but I guess the cat is out of the...
July 5th, 2022 10:34 - Not gonna turn out well… (Tallisman)
Hey Tallisman. Nice short story in poem form. The moral (at least as i...
July 4th, 2022 05:15 - It\'ll be a bit longer than you think (Hzugman)
I like writing funny stuff. Sometimes it works and sometimes it works and...
July 4th, 2022 04:54 - iii. (Verona)
Very well done, Verona and props to you for the explanation.
July 1st, 2022 14:31 - Happiness and Calmness are Holiness (Mvvenkataraman)
Very nicely put.
July 1st, 2022 11:54 - I Am Becoming My Dad. (Goldfinch60)
Astute observation and wonderful description.
June 30th, 2022 08:56 - Turn the TV Off (Saxon Crow)
We definitely over consume and are over consumed by our electronic world.
June 29th, 2022 18:01 - The Withered Rose (JudyStella)
A beautifully written poem about a totally disgusting practice of true...
June 29th, 2022 12:23 - The Tale of Mr Frumpadiddle and Sister Ann (Saxon Crow)
The \"Frump\" got out frumped
June 27th, 2022 16:24 - Getting It Off. (Paul Bell)
Draws a nice picture although I might have titled it Undress Rehearsal
June 27th, 2022 16:16 - desire (Arqios)
Nice beat to it.
June 27th, 2022 16:12 - Listen Up! (Hzugman)
Thanx, Eugene.
June 26th, 2022 15:21 - Foundation of a Question for the President I (Eugene S.)
Ain\'t it the truth!
June 26th, 2022 15:20 - Single Sigma Empath Aquiescence (Eugene S.)
One for the road?
June 24th, 2022 14:42 - Yet Another poor soul (JudyStella)
Truly from the heart Judy. Thanx.
June 23rd, 2022 12:49 - Grumblings of a young old man! (Saxon Crow)
Saxon Your poem is very descriptive and I like that style. I\'ve got 35...
June 23rd, 2022 12:46 - A little thought (JudyStella)
Nicely put, Judy. I missed the fact that it was a (nearly) haiku until I...
June 22nd, 2022 13:54 - i lurv u (Arqios)
Your poem draws a vivid picture. I like it.
June 21st, 2022 09:02 - Mother (JudyStella)
Very nice poem, Judy. I know that your mom is very proud of you.
June 9th, 2022 09:33 - about dreams (Languale)
Very nice languale. I particularly like the final line. You have a gift.
June 2nd, 2022 08:19 - Mask (Me.winston)
Very clever poem, me.winston. I really like it.
May 14th, 2022 12:24 - Towards Home (Cassia DeSousa)
Short and sweet and to the point. Bravo.
May 11th, 2022 15:07 - The Last Goodbye (Paul Bell)
I am blessed to never have had to deal with domestic violence in 57 years...
May 10th, 2022 09:30 - Mother\'s Day 2022 (Randyjohnson71)
You have told her with this poem.
May 8th, 2022 17:33 - Dust Devil (Jerry Reynolds)
Nice image that you have created. I\'m a newbie here around your age and...
May 8th, 2022 17:24 - scrolling (Andromeda)
In writing this poem and opening up your heart you already have done...
May 8th, 2022 17:17 - WATER (Huriye)
Nice way to deliver an important message and first line letter string is...
May 8th, 2022 17:14 - I meditate (Hzugman)
Thank you Destiny
May 7th, 2022 21:54 - Chelsea\'s Playing Away (Paul Bell)
Paul, you must have one Hell of a memory or else a first class...
May 7th, 2022 08:38 - Inner Child Healing (DestinysPerspectives)
I am sorry to learn of your difficult past. To make a possible better...
May 6th, 2022 13:05 - the blah blah blahs before victory (Dahlia)
Like yours too, Dahlia
May 5th, 2022 15:22
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