Comments on community poems by hzugman
- developmental linguistics (Willowthewisp)
Hi willow. Nice poem. Please write more.
February 6th, 2023 18:13 - Corpus Aurum (Itsme rachel)
Very nice, Rachel.
February 3rd, 2023 15:39 - FEBRUARY 2nd IS GROUNDHOG DAY (Natalie Gladmir)
Very nice write, Natalie
February 2nd, 2023 09:57 - The Great Chinese Famine (Ok Waleed)
It\'s been the way of the world since the beginning of history. It\'s...
January 31st, 2023 10:49 - ELEGY FOR ANN (Jarcher54)
Thank you for the wonderful journey J54. Who\'s to say what\'s real and...
January 28th, 2023 21:38 - Drowned (Lillian)
Very nice poem Lillian and congratulations on hanging in there and winning...
January 17th, 2023 12:29 - my darling (Kinsey Peterson)
Very nice, Joan
January 13th, 2023 11:36 - Gift of the Sea (Micahh)
Nice work M.
January 5th, 2023 12:06 - Forest of Ashes (Thinkerbell)
Very nicely done Tinkerbell.
January 1st, 2023 12:02 - Carol Community - Carol Series (18) (Orchidee)
Love it, O!
January 1st, 2023 11:46 - View from an airplane window (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Well done SZK. Reminds me of the last time I was in an airplane some two...
December 30th, 2022 13:21 - Without Mom (Geeky Greek)
Well spoken G. G. I lost a wonderful wife almost two years ago and feel...
December 20th, 2022 18:17 - Cat as trophy (Sorenbarrett)
A delightful tale and at least they were boxers thankfully.
December 11th, 2022 20:12 - You Can\'t Nap In Cairo (Cressida Cane)
Never been to Cairo. Now I guess I sorta have. Nice write, C. C.
December 10th, 2022 10:25 - Stray Dogs (Paul Bell)
Very nice job, Paul.
December 6th, 2022 12:25 - Let Deep Sleep Soon Peep (Mvvenkataraman)
Extremely well put from one who struggles with the sleep issue. At 83 and...
December 6th, 2022 10:14 - Christ Is Preeminent in Creation - Series (1) (Orchidee)
November 14th, 2022 13:26 - Christ Is Preeminent in Creation - Series (1) (Orchidee)
Well done again., O
November 14th, 2022 08:59 - Sea Story (Orchidee)
Nicely done (again), O
November 12th, 2022 11:41 - Intelligence? (Hzugman)
Thank you for the comment, O
November 12th, 2022 11:40 - To Tyro Poets in Need of Advice: (Doggerel Dave)
Good advice D D and I might add to just write from your heart and let...
November 11th, 2022 08:30 - That old feeling (Hzugman)
Thanx D D for the comment. Guilty as charged. Still, if the shoe fits.
November 11th, 2022 08:28 - Big Foot (Orchidee)
Shock the neighbors and take the imaginary dog on an imaginary walk but...
November 10th, 2022 12:21 - That old feeling (Hzugman)
Thank you and after you sir.
November 10th, 2022 12:17 - Presence Perceived (Orchidee)
Very nicely done.
November 9th, 2022 15:01 - Across the pond (Hzugman)
Thanx, O. Basically my true story. Lucky me.
November 9th, 2022 14:57 - Play fair (Hzugman)
Thanx, O. I, too, am a so so amateur singer. I\'ve given over 3,000...
November 8th, 2022 08:42 - Something new (Hzugman)
November 6th, 2022 10:19 - Love and fear (Hzugman)
Thanx CB. I\'m constantly re-learning stuff that I thought I already...
November 2nd, 2022 10:19 - Not Enough (Doggerel Dave)
Like it. Peace achieved must be followed by peace maintained.
November 2nd, 2022 09:28 - with you (Arqios)
Nice one CD.
November 2nd, 2022 09:26 - The Barrel (Ryan Robson-Bluer)
Good job. Very descriptive.
November 2nd, 2022 09:24 - Face it (Hzugman)
Hi L. B.
I appreciate the time and thought that your put into your...
October 31st, 2022 08:14 - Bury Worry, Carry Merry, To Help, Hurry (Mvvenkataraman)
These kind thoughts are echoes back to the sender. Is there perhaps a...
October 28th, 2022 10:38 - Why get angry? (Hzugman)
Couldn\'t agree more. Thanks for the comment.
October 28th, 2022 10:35 - My journey (Hzugman)
Thanx, O.
October 25th, 2022 12:31 - J\"a\"nu\"a\"ry to December (Hzugman)
That\'s po\"r\"k. And yes.
October 16th, 2022 12:08 - Haste To Hastings (Orchidee)
1066. Seems like only yesterday.
October 14th, 2022 12:20 - On and on (Darknessandlight)
Know that you are worthy and deserving of happiness. Next time you pass a...
September 27th, 2022 09:40 - Are you lonely (Hzugman)
Thank you DAL. I\'m trying to expand my poems from love, romance and...
September 27th, 2022 09:32 - reciprocity (Sonnie)
Well done, Sonnie. Stick to it. There are plenty of us that feel the...
September 20th, 2022 12:15 - The liar\'s enigma (Hzugman)
Thanx, Jarcher54.
September 7th, 2022 10:29 - A Fragment (Jarcher54)
Very nicely done, Jarcher
September 7th, 2022 10:17 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
Hey, D. D. Thanx for the mouse tale (or is it tail - always get those two...
August 31st, 2022 12:25 - Breaking news (Hzugman)
Thanx, Little Talks
August 30th, 2022 09:43 - My Mother- My Heart (LittleTalks)
Well done. Nice round the world tour.
August 27th, 2022 23:52 - Andy’s New Car (Doggerel Dave)
Love the last line D.D.
August 22nd, 2022 21:47 - We\'re Here..... (Doggerel Dave)
Peace of mind is a very rare and precious commodity.
August 10th, 2022 19:35 - Calculated risk (Hzugman)
August 10th, 2022 19:33 - I wrote a poem that no one reads (Tallisman)
Very nice progression. Love to hear that song.
August 8th, 2022 15:16 - I wrote a poem that no one reads (Tallisman)
August 8th, 2022 15:15 - Hot or Wot? (Doggerel Dave)
Love the last minute substitution while leaving the original in.
August 7th, 2022 19:52 - Im Worthless (and that’s on me) (A__pott)
Cogent and profound. It\'s a very trite and worn out thought but...
August 2nd, 2022 09:57 - Searching for a question…(Acrostic) (Tallisman)
Neat poem and neat acrostic. Didn\'t spot it.
July 27th, 2022 15:26 - FINAL BREATH (Raven333)
Very moving Raven. Good flow of ideas.
July 27th, 2022 10:26 - Why, write? (L. B. Mek)
Well done. My theory is just start writing and the ideas will follow. ...
July 21st, 2022 08:51 - Fibbing mathematically (Hzugman)
Thank you, Paul
July 20th, 2022 09:42 - Happy Birthday big shot (Hzugman)
Thanx Raven333.
July 17th, 2022 22:19 - I\'ve heard sweet talk before (Hzugman)
Thanx, L. B.
July 15th, 2022 08:08 - It\'s really easy (Hzugman)
Thanx, Judy.
July 11th, 2022 16:42 - Heaven knows (JudyStella)
Short and sweet but yet complete. Nice one Judy.
July 5th, 2022 10:37 - Superstar (Hzugman)
I\'ve been trying to keep that a secret but I guess the cat is out of the...
July 5th, 2022 10:34 - Not gonna turn out well… (Tallisman)
Hey Tallisman. Nice short story in poem form. The moral (at least as i...
July 4th, 2022 05:15 - It\'ll be a bit longer than you think (Hzugman)
I like writing funny stuff. Sometimes it works and sometimes it works and...
July 4th, 2022 04:54 - iii. (Verona)
Very well done, Verona and props to you for the explanation.
July 1st, 2022 14:31 - Happiness and Calmness are Holiness (Mvvenkataraman)
Very nicely put.
July 1st, 2022 11:54 - I Am Becoming My Dad. (Goldfinch60)
Astute observation and wonderful description.
June 30th, 2022 08:56 - Turn the TV Off (Saxon Crow)
We definitely over consume and are over consumed by our electronic world.
June 29th, 2022 18:01 - The Withered Rose (JudyStella)
A beautifully written poem about a totally disgusting practice of true...
June 29th, 2022 12:23 - The Tale of Mr Frumpadiddle and Sister Ann (Saxon Crow)
The \"Frump\" got out frumped
June 27th, 2022 16:24 - Getting It Off. (Paul Bell)
Draws a nice picture although I might have titled it Undress Rehearsal
June 27th, 2022 16:16 - desire (Arqios)
Nice beat to it.
June 27th, 2022 16:12 - Listen Up! (Hzugman)
Thanx, Eugene.
June 26th, 2022 15:21 - Foundation of a Question for the President I (Eugene S.)
Ain\'t it the truth!
June 26th, 2022 15:20 - Single Sigma Empath Aquiescence (Eugene S.)
One for the road?
June 24th, 2022 14:42 - Yet Another poor soul (JudyStella)
Truly from the heart Judy. Thanx.
June 23rd, 2022 12:49 - Grumblings of a young old man! (Saxon Crow)
Saxon Your poem is very descriptive and I like that style. I\'ve got 35...
June 23rd, 2022 12:46 - A little thought (JudyStella)
Nicely put, Judy. I missed the fact that it was a (nearly) haiku until I...
June 22nd, 2022 13:54 - i lurv u (Arqios)
Your poem draws a vivid picture. I like it.
June 21st, 2022 09:02 - Mother (JudyStella)
Very nice poem, Judy. I know that your mom is very proud of you.
June 9th, 2022 09:33 - about dreams (Languale)
Very nice languale. I particularly like the final line. You have a gift.
June 2nd, 2022 08:19 - Mask (Me.winston)
Very clever poem, me.winston. I really like it.
May 14th, 2022 12:24 - Towards Home (Cassia DeSousa)
Short and sweet and to the point. Bravo.
May 11th, 2022 15:07 - The Last Goodbye (Paul Bell)
I am blessed to never have had to deal with domestic violence in 57 years...
May 10th, 2022 09:30 - Mother\'s Day 2022 (Randyjohnson71)
You have told her with this poem.
May 8th, 2022 17:33 - Dust Devil (Jerry Reynolds)
Nice image that you have created. I\'m a newbie here around your age and...
May 8th, 2022 17:24 - scrolling (Andromeda)
In writing this poem and opening up your heart you already have done...
May 8th, 2022 17:17 - WATER (Huriye)
Nice way to deliver an important message and first line letter string is...
May 8th, 2022 17:14 - I meditate (Hzugman)
Thank you Destiny
May 7th, 2022 21:54 - Chelsea\'s Playing Away (Paul Bell)
Paul, you must have one Hell of a memory or else a first class...
May 7th, 2022 08:38 - Inner Child Healing (DestinysPerspectives)
I am sorry to learn of your difficult past. To make a possible better...
May 6th, 2022 13:05 - the blah blah blahs before victory (Dahlia)
Like yours too, Dahlia
May 5th, 2022 15:22
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