Comments on community poems by sylviasearcher
- Delightful Disconnect (Lorna)
I have images of kate bush doing ballet in the moors!
It\'s such a wild...
July 31st, 2018 07:30 - What Breezes Bring (Lorna)
That is a really beautiful poem.
July 31st, 2018 05:04 - Short and sweet (Poetic Dan)
But when you long for dreaming and dread the waking for its painful...
July 31st, 2018 02:47 - Changing existence (Poetic Dan)
Thank you for sharing that. The theme really resinates with the book I...
July 27th, 2018 03:26 - Descent Into Hell (Markashley1961)
I have just discovered your poems and am awe struck at how powerful and...
July 26th, 2018 08:33 - Dante\'s Lament (Markashley1961)
What an amazing write. I really connected to the waves of emotion.
July 26th, 2018 08:31 - epitaph (Dusk arising)
What a beautiful epitaph
July 26th, 2018 08:29 - Isolation (Poetic Dan)
Not many people like u2s but it reminded me if the song get out if your...
July 26th, 2018 08:10 - without a sound (Dusk arising)
What a beautiful poem of an unspeakable unfathomable longing and knowing...
July 25th, 2018 01:00 - A lullaby (Poetic Dan)
Was this for one of your children?
If so we were simultaneously...
July 24th, 2018 02:37 - It went like this (Poetic Dan)
Hey this really resonated with the theme of a book I\'m slowly...
July 23rd, 2018 06:31 - Where (CarefulWhereYouStand)
You painted vivid pictures with your words
July 18th, 2018 00:56 - Thyself (Trueblue)
Thanks
July 13th, 2018 01:20 - \"If I have not love...\" (DesertWords)
I have my own spirituality but I think the bible sums this up well
The...
July 12th, 2018 08:59 - Full of Emotion (Asrealastheycome)
I\'m really at that place today
If it ain\'t a connection I don\'t...
July 12th, 2018 08:28 - Keep nothing in (Poetic Dan)
I should make this my mantra to myself
July 11th, 2018 01:58 - Satyriasis (Quemis)
Thank you for sharing this.
I love the line lie yourself to...
July 11th, 2018 01:56 - Quite Insane (Michael J. Schaeffer)
I have never seen the dead files but I can\'t help but feel that young Amy...
July 11th, 2018 01:54 - Silent Heart (Michael J. Schaeffer)
The first part made me feel very sad.
You create a sense of empty busy.
July 10th, 2018 08:55 - One Less Reason To Cry At Night (Noah Malice)
What a beautiful sentiment.
I am restless with thoughts whirring...
July 6th, 2018 01:09 - Desire in the shadows (OldPine)
What a beautiful poem
July 5th, 2018 03:16 - Wild (Sylviasearcher)
I have not tested this but based on my vast experience of cake... I think...
July 4th, 2018 10:13 - Letting Go 2 (Masking)
I read your last few poems... It feels as though healing is happening
July 4th, 2018 05:46 - Cloud (TheNMH)
Beautiful
July 4th, 2018 05:37 - Speed. (Goldfinch60)
Wasn\'t there a story they used to teach in school about the hare and the...
July 4th, 2018 05:23 - Resistance (Poetic Dan)
Poetry is such a healing process and outlet for me.
Keep writing...
July 4th, 2018 05:22 - When the West Wind Blew (Kevin Michael Bloor)
What a beautiful hopeful poem
July 4th, 2018 05:14 - Dear John (Resa71)
How very sad. Such pain and hurt. Is this based on a true experience?
If...
July 4th, 2018 05:12 - Cakes (FineB)
Oh this has made me think what cake I could eat for breakfast!
After...
July 4th, 2018 04:38 - Troubled Waters (Scattered_flashes)
Hey, I recognise the forlorn feeling evoked in your poem.
I still...
July 4th, 2018 01:11 - The Human Condition (Aa Harvey)
Oh I really enjoyed this.
I have spent at least the last 5 years trying...
July 2nd, 2018 01:44 - The Trilogy of The Soarer (Jemini)
What a beautiful healing and hopeful poem
June 28th, 2018 01:09 - Paper Dolly (Noeyrocks)
So what do you think?
The tide subsides
As I creep in
The ocean waves...
June 27th, 2018 02:05 - Paper Dolly (Noeyrocks)
What an amazing expression of emotions. I paused before saying anger. It...
June 27th, 2018 01:29 - InSaNiTy (Olivergreenwood20)
What if you were not made?
What if you were simply free from the delusion...
June 26th, 2018 01:10 - Blue Fire Fly (Thoughts-before-dawn)
I wondered about the idea of a fire fly in particular. That it\'s light...
June 25th, 2018 06:05 - Blue Fire Fly (Thoughts-before-dawn)
Thought provoking...
June 25th, 2018 05:38 - Paranoia (Monotonous Dredge)
I actually loved it.
And it made a lot of sense.
But it\'s not good...
June 25th, 2018 04:19 - Throes of Depression (Moonflower15)
You capture it well, a numb, empty feeling that evades capture at the time...
June 25th, 2018 01:49 - Marble Soul (Olivergreenwood20)
😢
June 22nd, 2018 12:18 - Loves Confusion (Olivergreenwood20)
Such tortured sentiments.
Sadly that is about where I am at
June 22nd, 2018 12:18 - Marble Soul (Olivergreenwood20)
😢
June 22nd, 2018 12:16 - Cave of Delusions (Olivergreenwood20)
You have written so poignantly of the crushing realisation of the...
June 22nd, 2018 12:14 - In misty fog (Willyweed)
Yes I used to think these were such beautiful notions.
Indeed it is...
June 12th, 2018 09:44 - In misty fog (Willyweed)
Yes I used to think these were such beautiful notions.
Indeed it is...
June 12th, 2018 09:44 - In misty fog (Willyweed)
Yes I used to think these were such beautiful notions.
Indeed it is...
June 12th, 2018 09:43 - The Duality of WoMan (Aa Harvey)
Well written description of the complexity of self
May 11th, 2018 13:03 - Slab of Meat, Woman of My Dreams (Rrivera138)
The fathomless vastness...
Those words together cause a familiar ache...
May 11th, 2018 00:50 - I think (Aa Harvey)
Oh I think
I am right
Therefore
I am
Left
May 10th, 2018 10:34 - A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards)
Great imagery crafted here.
May 10th, 2018 01:35 - Fixing holes with good intentions (Aa Harvey)
I don\'t care,but I can\'t give up
Life is a bad day, work is a chore
I...
May 9th, 2018 06:23 - Empty Thoughts (Darkening)
I get that empty full feeling a lot...
May 9th, 2018 01:29 - Fallen angel (Aa Harvey)
A hopeful poem... No lyrics spring to mind for hopeful love ...
May 8th, 2018 02:11 - Introduction (SLR)
You have a nice style. The way the words flow in my mind reminds me of a...
May 8th, 2018 02:07 - Being Us on my own (Scattered_flashes)
Your name is a prisoner in my mouth, lest I cry out for you?
Sounds...
May 8th, 2018 02:05 - They sea me without (Aa Harvey)
And is there a raven at your door?
Great poem.
This is very sad.
I...
May 4th, 2018 07:10 - Choose life (Aa Harvey)
How about this one...
I could sing it to you all night, all night
If I...
May 3rd, 2018 06:33 - New beginning (Aa Harvey)
It\'s true sometimes how we connect more to the words of a song or poem...
May 1st, 2018 07:34 - Off to battle again (Aa Harvey)
I think I know that shadowy forest...
I enjoyed this piece.
May 1st, 2018 07:26 - Where God is Absent (Rrivera138)
I sometines wonder how it ended up like this
April 25th, 2018 02:08 - a silence in the ring (Abora)
I prefer the birds tumbling from their nests too.
April 25th, 2018 02:02 - Memories of Yesterday (Nicholas Browning)
This reads well beyond your youth...
Reminds me of a feeling I get...
April 24th, 2018 09:39 - 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11 (Aa Harvey)
So sad
April 20th, 2018 01:33 - Distant Illusions (Darkstar)
Yes I like it. It creates the image of reaching towards hope.
April 20th, 2018 01:28 - Tell (Nicholas Browning)
War
April 13th, 2018 09:06 - True story (Daveyboyz)
Meh! They are all over... the ones you need to be more worried about are...
April 13th, 2018 03:41 - Beautiful Rain\' (Last Shadow)
I love the rain and echo the sentiment you have captured here
April 13th, 2018 02:02 - Nightshade (Noah)
Can I be stardust too?
I liked this. Reminded me I\'m alive.
I think...
April 13th, 2018 02:00 - UNWINESQUE (Michael Edwards)
That was an enjoyable read!
It worked well with the weather. 😊
April 13th, 2018 01:56 - Thoughts (Lee Renard Caspian)
Today my mind is a fog again
I love that line.
April 13th, 2018 01:37 - Escape (Sylviasearcher)
Thanks all for sharing your enjoyment!
April 13th, 2018 01:28 - Escape (Sylviasearcher)
Thanks T. I am having some problem with the spacing though!
It was...
April 12th, 2018 08:21 - Transcendence (Daveyboyz)
Hmmm. Interesting experience.
Do you think there may have been innate...
April 12th, 2018 07:22 - love (Blast219)
I\'m always one for wanting to be convinced of our wildish natures!
April 12th, 2018 07:12 - Demon and The Pretender (Nicholas Browning)
This is an amazing piece of prose!
Hit me on so many levels. I need to...
April 12th, 2018 03:00 - Smugglers Cove (Adam Shirley)
Oh this is my favourite!
April 12th, 2018 01:37 - The Optimist (Adam Shirley)
But don\'t we all just love an optimist?
April 12th, 2018 01:36 - Mars (Adam Shirley)
But I am just joyous at hearing that song!
I want to jump up and...
April 12th, 2018 01:35 - Blissful Solus (Adam Shirley)
Oh solitude!
April 12th, 2018 01:32 - Tears of man (Aa Harvey)
For a moment this madness that inflicts me was no more
April 11th, 2018 08:32 - Let Me Ask You a Question (Nicholas Browning)
Yes I wondered what you were asking me.
Sometimes we search for answers...
April 11th, 2018 04:03 - it aint our summer (Dusk arising)
A lovely poem giving value to the autumn of life and love.
April 11th, 2018 03:57 - Rejoin the Dance (Sylviasearcher)
Thanks Nicholas.
That is interesting. Maybe too much...
April 11th, 2018 02:38 - Silent as your happy (The_One_That_Got_Away)
I wonder often if this kind of love exists outside of literature.
A...
April 11th, 2018 02:11 - Wish (Just-A-Dude)
I can connect with the sentiment and with that notion of healing through...
April 9th, 2018 10:08 - An Apology (Sylviasearcher)
I guess I never wanted to realise I was pathetic and flawed.... Maybe I...
April 9th, 2018 10:06 - Revolving Door (Eugene S.)
A great depiction of struggle.
April 9th, 2018 07:43 - The mile (Last Shadow)
I like your use of punctuation
April 9th, 2018 06:28 - Sorry to my unknown lover (Aa Harvey)
Such beautiful torture
April 9th, 2018 05:41 - Silver Moon (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Perhaps a keatsian quality...
I love poems that let me escape to nature
April 9th, 2018 04:55 - A Land of Dreams (Kevin Michael Bloor)
You capture your love for Llandudno beautifully.
April 9th, 2018 04:53 - New Terrain (ARCane)
I hope it brings a life with purpose 😊
April 9th, 2018 04:47 - Cats and Dogs (Daveyboyz)
I can feel your love for cats in this.
They always make me nervous!
April 9th, 2018 02:11 - New Terrain (ARCane)
I enjoyed your poem. Did you write it about yourself or someone/thing else...
April 9th, 2018 01:18 - Mental Health (FineB)
Very well written. I am so compelled by this.
Mental health is laced...
April 6th, 2018 06:48 - My Strangest Dream (Alex Arnot)
What conviction in your destiny!
April 6th, 2018 05:14 - Sin Eater (Alex Arnot)
I find the ideas of dark and light quite compelling...
It ignited my...
April 6th, 2018 05:11 - I burn brighter in madness (Mol)
Well written
April 6th, 2018 04:58 - Spyglass (Step-hen)
I hear lots of folk are born with this spy glass affliction... It\'s...
April 6th, 2018 04:45 - Neringa (Daveyboyz)
It sounds special
April 6th, 2018 03:35
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